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I just wrote a poem' L1 n( r% H& p: ?; h
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
[4 {0 R( w8 Y2 L- q; dHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem, c1 g5 E4 ~& N: q+ v# E: g3 [5 n/ R
Thanks a lot!!!
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9 U8 ]: H# r$ |$ xFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
5 W+ P8 C4 I" a; O Somehow I'd found something wrong with us l# F1 ? V& n8 ]: k
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world 0 v+ B" }- J2 s" q# r
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 7 m* n4 J' J. p" W2 j
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
' F& ?6 A% ~1 v' Z/ g Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness # k5 {% p7 i* q
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday # f% e: ^ e; A) r; o% F2 e
somehow I realized you were still in my heart , X+ b2 ^1 M, m
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness* n4 m+ B& l/ a( R3 w
somehow I lost myself inside again
# M9 L5 |* K* o9 dNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 8 V0 g; b' c4 P' }6 T3 y0 e! _
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion$ g/ N* L# J& ~- ?0 Y% {
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
5 G4 {; H) m4 a2 X+ PBasically, I almost finish this poem5 B: P$ l' b1 g3 J( M1 e
I am 一个人de精彩$ z" k, A2 }) T5 f8 H
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.' v( U% _* F: v# E
But........
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