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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem3 E$ W! V4 p1 n3 w1 U/ C/ w9 E
Thanks a lot!!!. a2 B7 s" f$ u; U
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- g% |* p _! K, E5 OFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
' v" c$ }, p# K& `% W9 r Somehow I'd found something wrong with us % I" m- E1 b5 C; r
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world + G/ R7 K: y8 i* t: W
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 0 d9 |6 s" Y$ Z
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind 6 r& W x9 ~! H
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
7 Q2 t; }+ @/ N+ F: W. J& K3 Y% NHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
) Z- {. R6 t& b somehow I realized you were still in my heart 6 }! a2 G8 E d: t( O2 c
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
, ~6 z2 D, U! l somehow I lost myself inside again
4 \& G, \2 h x, E) h% W& @2 B2 |* J+ ~Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog ( `( M" z, i. v/ p8 R3 [$ l' M0 v
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
. w0 x) g+ u" x/ t& u# e/ LFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
$ P. i1 }3 ]) I4 U2 R( lBasically, I almost finish this poem/ |' s! x {# A
I am 一个人de精彩+ Y8 v H+ o. q# M. E
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.( w5 x4 s' B8 E. T {0 R
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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