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I just wrote a poem% q/ [% r! T& U5 g: {1 a; ~
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.4 g' k1 ^+ L' B
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
8 I. Z' O: V8 [. \' \Thanks a lot!!!4 F& k% X2 Y. Q; s
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) |9 _ g7 f3 y! g* PFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
9 p5 o0 Z+ `9 S @. h. S Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
8 K) k2 R: f% j0 f3 c" x Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world . Y: V* m. a. W4 Z7 |
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me , p! ]9 V, Z+ O% F' t2 @9 @, P
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
& _- \* f" K0 w' J! z Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 0 |: s" ~5 @0 w& [3 \. }6 o. o6 S
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
9 ?& X4 t+ @% p2 T somehow I realized you were still in my heart
6 s. h3 [" L8 J5 ~ somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness8 o4 o, @! r4 {+ b# e
somehow I lost myself inside again
% h, `" E' G0 `( t! u% gNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog & e0 T3 L# F5 O, j- v
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
3 Z" N" C- [- j5 P! k' b- LFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................- ^3 a, C+ d( P" O$ j' V
Basically, I almost finish this poem5 k- F5 A5 E/ g/ C5 ?4 a0 V
I am 一个人de精彩
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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