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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
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/ s; R- K% U# Z' E: I2 Y2 b, q! YFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 4 S2 V w9 A) Y. Z7 `) F! o; s
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
; L% P% t8 ^" d& R) F9 ?5 b Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world 8 g: b% T' R9 ]! x
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 9 @/ u* r# N" z9 C
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
2 V- ]2 U4 w: X- N% K8 \7 y) f Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
+ V, f. m; z; F# c$ M0 u5 }1 ZHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
# n s/ m, u! ^$ k( |+ ` somehow I realized you were still in my heart 1 [( Q) @5 [! s* c* m* m2 T
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
" O- {4 Z9 b: i: @ somehow I lost myself inside again 6 p+ ?% Z2 W+ Q' F5 s/ U
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
6 s, M$ b- l# j4 F' {9 l: I( l somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
9 w- U9 p9 q! r( c b" F9 bFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
7 O5 x% ^6 h9 M9 X' C" T7 n' j0 qBasically, I almost finish this poem5 z- Y7 W; U! a' ?) r
I am 一个人de精彩
X( e3 E0 O3 ]" O7 A I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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