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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem* U% }8 n" K# j1 `9 g
Thanks a lot!!!5 K3 Y; q; n! J# n4 t3 C/ r/ K
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3 i7 D, w5 F! w+ V! RFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 5 |, P0 h1 u* ^- A. J4 Z
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 8 T1 P7 k* C+ f% H
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world ; W' O+ ~: A/ E1 q1 X) B
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me ( p4 j1 t3 m" k( u
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
- v T1 Y4 J5 W Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness + C4 d; D/ k/ w: j- A2 v8 B3 E
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday - |$ P7 c& q0 w$ P- ?
somehow I realized you were still in my heart 2 X9 K- F' p0 _1 }5 G" x
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness4 g! d5 t' X5 n+ [
somehow I lost myself inside again
+ _6 H; P+ B6 g/ c MNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog : E7 x; U& ~* @* U( M; o9 Y
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
: P* H5 s5 l. C) p: V/ K+ W! ?Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................* |' r5 [* g- { b
Basically, I almost finish this poem
9 ~8 R; |7 ^: z9 f I am 一个人de精彩. g9 \6 G& C8 Z$ R1 F9 E
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything., O4 h6 d$ ?+ }: f
But........ ) y2 [9 `# i( L6 ?2 z: g# r) m- x
Ironically? Isn't it? |
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