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I just wrote a poem9 E- q3 C& ]0 H, t) r' A6 p- ]
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.% k1 x! Y6 u. l1 D
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem0 a$ l) g! v* U" O: q$ W
Thanks a lot!!!8 |! w7 B5 {! ^. K* L
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you ! I2 q) v5 T) r
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
. q& L4 t6 }; I! Q Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world : s& {# F: _& p: _
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me $ B& |& z/ z2 k# C
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind , i1 p( K4 O+ @5 g
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
& I, X" L+ H. F0 X1 W7 mHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday ' L5 i8 M2 n. _& _
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
6 `: Q' R$ N8 h somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
9 F; G1 B, U% h, D+ T0 e* }; A/ t somehow I lost myself inside again
( P. u& D$ `* D. C* C& O' f6 aNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog + Y8 p$ E) e* E9 {
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
U7 } M# E, m$ wFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
% p- E' H* M; z8 m" b5 pBasically, I almost finish this poem' d6 I# t# i1 u( w3 \
I am 一个人de精彩
# q: D' ]0 [+ i$ ~8 B' w2 k" H I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.1 e1 Z1 _+ R5 c, B. y5 ^8 k
But........
( T/ b! A, i2 v- J8 _Ironically? Isn't it? |
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