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I just wrote a poem# S; n6 b( K6 y( t8 M9 T
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.3 v2 M6 B% b- {/ _
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
* p( F% H+ I, k( [8 {Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
7 ]; K7 I4 L2 y2 d Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
$ p% p# w3 B, R Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world , w* g& f. J0 f$ Y% A
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 6 z5 e5 ]2 I: u7 ~# X1 G( Z$ q
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
8 S9 A# O" S* i$ t. y: M: {( _ Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness . k7 u7 G& ]0 x$ h4 `# O
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 5 n) R; n0 s, J
somehow I realized you were still in my heart : H9 c |! ~2 m, {5 j9 n
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness/ Y& _8 O# }. V6 s* ^9 I
somehow I lost myself inside again
- u5 o6 ]% U' F& \Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog + Q0 N8 r& K( |' c8 u4 D0 o
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion! V' p3 B# W, A: u1 T: A, \( y
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
. A0 ~/ e( P* Z1 `3 e- L: m/ S% lBasically, I almost finish this poem
0 }5 |9 R, g% d) } I am 一个人de精彩
# Z+ T* w5 U& O& A" T! q+ j: h/ g I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.- v( n* l+ T3 Q/ ]
But........
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