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I just wrote a poem
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: C. v3 H, h, _0 L3 a1 UHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem. k8 R# Q( M5 K# a
Thanks a lot!!!/ ^# r& W# c$ V6 n
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
7 m+ Y& P' q- `4 o. Q3 x% b Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
6 D5 V* Y8 y; u' f# O8 V1 D! z- } Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world ( s0 x7 o: g1 Y4 E# _; h6 l ?; \
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
( q* v" i; ^; } X" d7 X+ l4 K! R' P Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
$ b3 B; u Z! Z. \6 D9 O Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
$ A8 W2 N' b& ^. I: R4 _However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday , w( w/ Q0 F: A. Z7 j& R3 `
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
, J1 r; |4 T/ H7 K! Z somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
2 T2 f& f( b) e* G9 I7 s" k; |) q6 L2 l somehow I lost myself inside again
% |. A- i; e+ P. z! k0 @ J% @2 BNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
- c+ t5 z- k! k6 ]4 P7 P somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
- c! e v! I* l# vFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................" A) G' }$ i# N
Basically, I almost finish this poem3 y; T0 v: \4 `3 h+ H( u3 [
I am 一个人de精彩
+ B& o" N5 b& [( H2 O I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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