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I just wrote a poem2 f) C4 |& O, m4 M% e% N+ d* p; k1 B
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.# d; E4 ~' K) ?) `
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
4 o* [: @' D9 y% I! A4 \Thanks a lot!!!/ Z5 ^& N( T( p% W( M
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 3 V G! y) O/ q& D( g9 O0 Z8 I
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us " j7 q) Q# L" }% C; J+ p
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
2 f1 Z% |) W, _ Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me ) v- l% h8 O% h8 ]- P7 h
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind : x/ T1 B4 [8 S7 \! t( Y4 V
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 0 G$ D' p! B+ X( L! v) f$ H
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
# x8 n* O' I+ d+ E' F4 Z" Y somehow I realized you were still in my heart ; B; K* G1 {7 ^2 b
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness% ~+ ~6 H$ h$ l& w' S2 \( B" Z
somehow I lost myself inside again + T- B! Z. h/ P) G! C
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog . T$ Z; n+ q' X0 S; F! E
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
6 s# V* D: A9 {% i! Z# NFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................- R5 n2 R2 ^* B% T8 N2 G! r
Basically, I almost finish this poem
$ F7 J4 V! i4 e v; `1 \* E I am 一个人de精彩
6 h7 d& G# e( s" Z+ k I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.( a5 b* K, z. m8 K V. H
But........
) C$ f( `0 I, s$ j& ~Ironically? Isn't it? |
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
