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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
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# d1 t) Y5 v3 G9 [. iFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 2 [) f8 A' r" L
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 4 E; r' Z0 p6 W! g; {: u; i
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
1 J* O' W: s9 w0 d Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
% q. C5 b) ~1 t, ~ Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind + N8 ?- V3 H1 R1 s* o6 R
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
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somehow I realized you were still in my heart # h) U1 k7 k7 g* {4 t! `
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness& A, Z7 [8 x: y4 L0 ]/ x
somehow I lost myself inside again , s1 a8 Z( d2 G8 R M" L
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog ^& m7 D5 I' N: k/ T5 Z0 m
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
3 ~. U" O6 f& d. a* A8 N1 Y# a( sFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................; A, {9 J+ C" b8 G X5 [3 ]
Basically, I almost finish this poem
/ ^3 J# k, S1 q I am 一个人de精彩
" O8 j4 e* x+ O2 G I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.' m: K1 v2 S% C" c* {
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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