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I just wrote a poem/ l1 ^8 a- O! x8 K5 @4 F- O: V3 r
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
* _ \8 t2 Y( n+ O" I8 e- THowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem1 X" \7 _ {9 M; |
Thanks a lot!!!
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9 ~; p8 d, m- @1 S( ]Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
4 J- f" Y/ G3 @' Y" x/ C6 u) ]) g9 s2 Q Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 0 k$ ?2 B0 H& x9 ?' X' h5 k
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world ( |7 D4 U/ g. Q0 ^
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
H' R0 V9 e4 a% H9 m( H Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind % V/ y' R6 u7 _' j; I8 Y7 e
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
5 S& ^6 K, Z9 e B! A% S1 B: OHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday , w& d& R1 Y, g t6 Y1 _
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
8 Y9 o2 Z" G N5 O: _$ e somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness/ L& K' [" f8 H
somehow I lost myself inside again
0 `2 j% r) a% aNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog % i+ }' ?5 H( R1 A8 @# Z
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
2 F' y! Z( W1 N6 r5 ^Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
( Q S5 t4 x/ c# P0 dBasically, I almost finish this poem1 J$ u2 r1 M+ I: v5 s
I am 一个人de精彩
5 ?* T0 U. ^; w: A; K I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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