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I just wrote a poem
7 }7 S% O/ h* z" b( HBesides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
& [3 \; ?2 P- @2 \2 N$ l# L: aHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
) H- c6 Z0 K. n- oThanks a lot!!!5 k0 {7 L7 _( a0 ~3 ^
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& M) ?1 _# t7 _0 CFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
2 _0 a; x& |; [+ u7 Z Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
9 l X3 A' D, Y1 C, Q Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
$ i1 X( {5 k- L& E0 o: m; e Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
9 @* G2 f( d- ^- @ Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind / I; S" V H8 R# W4 y: U
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 0 w: P- V$ I& W1 }! _1 s4 V) h
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday + S( O e! i/ `) O1 C
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
+ \2 H: [) C- A1 h somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness6 Y' W5 d/ N m) i* `
somehow I lost myself inside again D5 R; L) t( e
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
" e9 G- b. f8 |- Q) j. W& a5 X somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
7 q5 X1 V" X' W y6 h7 _: bFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................, b# g8 k/ b. w2 ]; \7 V6 W+ k
Basically, I almost finish this poem$ s; O' V! D" n3 W
I am 一个人de精彩$ D, ?4 _% j1 `- o* L$ a7 V
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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