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I just wrote a poem9 J6 S3 e3 Z8 Q0 i3 q) P& I
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.3 s5 M+ X% ?/ e h- g; A- J
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 0 b$ S. m- {$ l' K* B; ~* \% b- A
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
6 G: y) ?& z6 [. n7 a, |2 P Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world " s6 v& V, Y! n$ r, F
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
% |& N6 {( F, [2 T. j: g Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind * p# @$ U& ]4 n5 _6 G6 L' Q( K: A
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
+ N) d8 z( I. H$ C) Q; ?2 DHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 8 P3 d4 f' w9 _1 l' F5 ?" W
somehow I realized you were still in my heart & j m H6 ^2 g; ?$ h+ O( O! O
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness% b( _2 l0 K4 g' Y" ^; f0 H
somehow I lost myself inside again , H0 m: I3 j# {! S! _/ C' m. Q. T
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
' Z5 l+ j3 d2 } somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion+ y8 Z, w- a: q$ l8 J% f' |8 v' U
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................4 y+ C( H8 B- X+ _+ p( {2 w( V
Basically, I almost finish this poem
( `* i1 l; o- E! O8 _& q. Q I am 一个人de精彩8 E8 q0 i# K/ n, k8 ?/ P$ L' E
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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