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I just wrote a poem/ ?5 t& N8 @8 T: r
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.' A, r: q* Z2 F3 n! S
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem4 Z) L. u) ~+ V; S, [4 P& g# p& ]
Thanks a lot!!!+ u. [& g# y2 B6 x# C
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3 r; ?$ n6 C- P* DFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
# Z6 @5 L5 C8 y; C Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
+ Y1 y+ X. k7 R+ ^1 J" W1 q Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world / v0 \$ s5 i& {' M2 B; E: x8 W
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me ! N) c& s' S, J3 P: C
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
% X ^# y$ H+ L' v( {) O) C Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 0 W+ b# \. I. _; @' H$ F
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
7 I* L5 l* L0 _- H* L1 @8 ~ somehow I realized you were still in my heart
- R+ q1 x9 W& }0 j( D' F somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness9 a' v9 s* D7 B0 N' @
somehow I lost myself inside again ; Q( C( G9 {+ F% w2 _6 C, I) l7 [
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
8 B+ w# T; G9 ~ somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
/ B d( S& o* O; E2 k2 I( J; s, K3 }Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................7 B0 }) }% s6 B0 Y% C
Basically, I almost finish this poem) Q# B# {% r! K- Z) b
I am 一个人de精彩2 o0 _+ C/ m |7 p5 J
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.9 K$ W0 ~2 n* G. [1 O
But........
! t2 x6 c, u3 Y, g) AIronically? Isn't it? |
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
