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I just wrote a poem2 G9 u5 R/ t5 I# H+ b* p
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.1 t# }5 d- r# j4 }4 P& c6 s) w
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem1 |5 o- _8 [# F
Thanks a lot!!!
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- B0 Y N$ s# }Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you # s7 x) ]3 }, _. q" D2 f6 H
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
6 M0 K- v3 F+ y- s+ l* c Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world 2 T3 ~* `9 ` T5 \
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 5 |) N2 B5 E, s5 {' P
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind 9 d; h3 {# H6 P$ f
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
5 z$ \' G- h: z, h" ]5 [( \! S5 HHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
; u3 u8 c* {( J* Z somehow I realized you were still in my heart 7 b$ ]( j; I# u- o
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness; H/ D0 D! S. l( S
somehow I lost myself inside again $ N, ]& v/ _, n0 B
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
. y9 O; a6 G! g7 x; H# H( R somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
f: ]9 i$ x# }& s, x+ C5 C* a; n7 jFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
( ^, }4 p( u+ ?5 d0 B8 WBasically, I almost finish this poem8 P Z4 ^, w5 t' L
I am 一个人de精彩 b+ p7 j+ ^5 X/ A% R6 a+ i5 S
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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; K' |+ N+ A& H; [ y& f6 ]2 NIronically? Isn't it? |
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