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I just wrote a poem
1 u3 H' c5 z6 x' HBesides, I'd like to put it in my blog.7 k5 Y; w" s, q5 F! J7 ?4 }/ I
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
! }/ P1 K# m2 Z. q( {6 [% e4 PThanks a lot!!!
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+ r! ~9 N8 \" x" z, |6 ?6 aFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you ! k* V* _$ l8 H# K" E- }
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
) l) G0 C6 V. i1 Z+ }8 d Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world ) `3 ?) E! y+ C* ]! I: v: {
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me . |: Y D2 r: u
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind 4 {1 F3 v, U4 e5 K9 N7 z4 o H6 r
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
1 s" T* o1 X! |5 Y6 I! V: [However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
( U3 M; B1 Q \6 E( }2 f9 i somehow I realized you were still in my heart $ P, H6 N0 d! s; T/ Q
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness9 o) z" @9 h* l* c4 a5 n
somehow I lost myself inside again
a# l' q. Z' K) F: wNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
# q- Q4 x! t } U$ F$ g0 i* } somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion; B/ t) b9 O: n3 k) ^9 L
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
: ~, C: b1 y+ @( M$ U& [4 BBasically, I almost finish this poem
& l( A* U2 \# d, x I am 一个人de精彩, G7 x7 j0 Q+ g6 e2 `, Z& z' q5 Q
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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发表于 2008-1-17 21:16
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
