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I just wrote a poem4 |2 v. j w( ]+ F9 P; H
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.1 O2 `2 ~# a9 L( p* d( r% ]
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem4 g" `$ f/ H! H2 K; j* M0 R+ _5 u% J
Thanks a lot!!!
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2 i |4 m# r5 E# p: e9 Q- gFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
3 Z- Z; B2 M& V' Z. \ Somehow I'd found something wrong with us - D; C- U! M n! _; h" t0 Q
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
: ~* K5 w" w. L Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
5 A. }1 O! s, X$ L y Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind % r, V3 ]3 _' v1 u1 o, O
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 3 O P) L9 D( M# |2 z# Q
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
! | N$ _+ u/ W6 T3 P. h. K+ [ somehow I realized you were still in my heart
3 F* k; ~ k: H. t9 ]0 u somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness& ^% ~- T+ C* x% ^6 p: C% F- R
somehow I lost myself inside again ' E7 s6 J+ V% v+ c
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
) H7 d) V' |- S9 v. X% b( } somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion: H% } ~) E i$ N# q8 U4 g9 `$ G
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................# L/ M# ^$ _/ q
Basically, I almost finish this poem
) x. O R8 X" n. `3 A I am 一个人de精彩
1 e# V5 ]7 E, i* {5 I3 i* P I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
7 f; C6 E+ g& E) r; n& g( X# JBut........
! ^+ E9 V& T5 J4 j, N8 TIronically? Isn't it? |
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