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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
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9 F+ k5 |4 ?# o5 |: d8 w4 K3 AFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 2 s# s, o+ ^3 C) X
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
; O3 u2 T8 t; z( t# ]% B% `4 v$ C9 X Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world ( T7 N- M* K! \; N: {% M3 D$ y
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
' ~# V. c# i8 a# Z$ V( }4 `1 z Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
9 Y8 G- _, Q4 k+ M" B Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness / K: Y7 R n+ x% A3 T
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
9 J" e! D% \' `: E: F) a somehow I realized you were still in my heart
$ X6 P( k! y0 z somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
Y) v# }1 N, w. V: d# s% ] somehow I lost myself inside again
& Q6 R, S- B2 ]# m9 TNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
3 `5 U0 Q4 A2 ?" g somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion- G- r& f" G6 l( g/ {6 Q" S+ r
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
( w4 q# d. Q- M: y+ U+ pBasically, I almost finish this poem
- A4 r( v+ a, x I am 一个人de精彩3 p, H+ D n1 Y+ Q
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.- I# a0 d k* V- E. S9 d1 g
But........
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