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I just wrote a poem
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Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 4 I. Z, Z# |! S) e$ J* d( \
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
8 J% o$ a) @5 b" P1 A Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world T) w; b3 P/ n! G" o6 J0 g7 \1 ?! z
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
# B I3 j2 H' ^* Q$ N) y Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind 9 f& `% G* x( I, R* {8 b3 U
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness * a$ u8 i, L& J t2 l9 Q
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 8 l" s( T2 n* e2 }1 a
somehow I realized you were still in my heart ' l m9 `: B$ w$ N# y. Y; q0 `7 @ t
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness! x2 X$ B* g" u% e
somehow I lost myself inside again
+ y" @9 \% z7 [- S- ZNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
$ L. H1 t) [ G3 F5 w somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
; T# U$ F6 Z2 W' l% E5 z. ]Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
4 Z# a- h; `7 ?$ r1 gBasically, I almost finish this poem V7 b8 l5 R% { }) x5 W4 Z
I am 一个人de精彩
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