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I just wrote a poem% h0 x3 J0 l! p" Q# V) a: \3 p: \
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
+ f9 U* j2 A2 a! b4 GHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem/ |. ?) w% }7 t. a; n: U
Thanks a lot!!!
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0 ~! Q5 z/ ?. R, kFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
( j" v% |& r) c" L! e, X3 S Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
$ y/ k* v$ g6 E' O Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world 0 K. H. u& V3 ^+ c
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 5 o" h/ k1 I9 G3 G
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind ! ^$ T: o2 w; R' ]
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 5 V8 }) U( }2 x$ R3 U
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
4 S/ h5 t8 B7 `6 q somehow I realized you were still in my heart
# B0 y, a6 k4 r) s2 ` somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness2 f. m) H3 v0 ]! \7 g
somehow I lost myself inside again
) b0 P$ B' w; cNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
/ P' Z, K# U* A; a9 K0 `" _5 e somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion7 y0 H& r, z' B. K5 s$ s
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
+ Q, u/ m! x4 h4 `& EBasically, I almost finish this poem& R) }! m4 v+ o0 D8 P
I am 一个人de精彩' @2 Z. l7 H7 @0 C4 v7 Q, v
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
