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I just wrote a poem
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- P5 T4 m9 D; a; _However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
% |8 g5 ?4 k I, n4 d/ rThanks a lot!!!
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! m+ r5 H6 n% J9 d8 L( WFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
; i1 _7 G- P4 h; }6 t1 y' G" D+ t Somehow I'd found something wrong with us : l' D% @, y. B* p4 H
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
# f4 D0 U5 Y$ g& [ Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me % Y) }3 K, ?# ^* b: G5 Q# G
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
% p0 c- W7 r( D Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness , S' }% m0 @/ N4 b
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday # d! O8 k! x6 v6 `
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
1 s5 z3 a" i+ @: ~$ r/ y4 D! p somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
3 w% T! `4 @3 ]. ?: O somehow I lost myself inside again # ^5 r4 }( f0 j7 U9 v& ^* |9 F
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 0 F# r% {' k; R3 C7 h* e
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
" n; C$ w% x2 ~" t$ y$ WFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................; q) I0 h0 U4 ?
Basically, I almost finish this poem
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I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.- o" m/ E) j! K- e$ G
But........
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
