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I just wrote a poem5 j0 J4 o W; K+ B2 J# U9 t
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.: j/ _# ~# S9 t4 K' t4 O/ z
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
' D4 ~& y; }* kThanks a lot!!!
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4 Q/ g: @! J( W' t( A6 H4 G# S" kFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
6 u* `0 g4 \7 l9 r4 O6 M0 |3 ^ Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
. C' K. i+ `. P Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world ; @1 n a8 ]/ |# w" `2 `
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
; v9 G4 V5 `. @$ m+ r Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind . F3 k7 S' y% d# W
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness H4 e, b: t$ G
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 9 m' I& N! J1 P" n% e) @0 R0 P
somehow I realized you were still in my heart 8 ]& D2 \ \+ O* a
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
' i. O- [% y- s9 b somehow I lost myself inside again : A1 A+ K5 \3 j( k- `
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog ! n, y+ Q- C7 a# ~/ a# ^
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
2 G2 a" J: B {Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
9 d! M0 E' `# B1 GBasically, I almost finish this poem! ?0 b; p7 p( `$ X% Y* z
I am 一个人de精彩' J7 x# X+ G& p- o$ R
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.# y2 G4 p$ Y9 F+ @ o5 O4 v( ?
But........ : I& r/ E$ K* C& `$ p
Ironically? Isn't it? |
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