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I just wrote a poem' i; W8 W9 M" d* n: Z
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
. g0 l+ r- ~& U$ f2 i" n% e! KHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem/ V9 t% O: B6 \$ d" Q3 u. D
Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
) v- S9 p! c6 i8 m I& Z0 Q Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
# @$ Z( C- j9 s. q Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
4 L* n) @5 U4 C/ w: D- ?3 ` Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me - w9 M# f/ U3 w9 K1 e0 j: g/ l
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind 7 l% M0 [& `1 ^9 X# E
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
# Z! k2 H- ~1 a- O2 DHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday ' T4 z @6 z- d
somehow I realized you were still in my heart / N q s! R" k$ s" m: z3 n
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness' Z5 S+ r- H' V9 O# g
somehow I lost myself inside again - _+ q; R6 y$ ~/ ^, a& k8 F9 k
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
, r0 ~0 | ?& h- K' z& }* j somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion, S1 ?7 q( ~; B8 O
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
6 X; M, w& W& I1 I9 S( ABasically, I almost finish this poem
, \: L' f4 w! g0 ? I am 一个人de精彩4 |6 t3 {0 q5 F; @
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.* i) P# L, k% c' u5 e, Z! {
But........ 9 k; t* h' B! [ K* l: \+ R
Ironically? Isn't it? |
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