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I just wrote a poem4 }' V. L- }; a3 k% a [
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.6 y, o n3 p+ o1 j/ y) j
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
1 J9 ?( g1 g$ _% _. }Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 9 f, y* Z8 }9 a1 Z8 \; j9 n& E
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us # S! W) `& p8 I: ?
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
9 A: W" i- O6 a3 X# Y9 X3 p0 Q Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
4 k6 \2 |# ]: b4 \ Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind ' p: X! S' D4 M) @. ~
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 6 E# ]/ }+ K- t$ `/ T$ |4 v
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
! g. a0 m+ N: e somehow I realized you were still in my heart
# a- [* q; }( j2 F! k& |0 D3 _, s somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
) y' V: r" l& m/ J7 I5 a( @; ] somehow I lost myself inside again
# U. Z6 S( L3 s R5 H: f- w: GNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
1 k) B+ Y$ x$ u$ r' g somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion7 [8 f1 i) v6 n, M! I; i3 y
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
% O9 ~3 b5 i/ Y$ Q6 g PBasically, I almost finish this poem1 \- i* ?1 A$ ^2 c' F; Z7 w' ]
I am 一个人de精彩
6 Z% X* C9 c+ M. j) I. L3 ] I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything. |; k3 N# {! F/ L" i
But........
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