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I just wrote a poem
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) k& g% V1 M2 [However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
4 i0 ]+ `5 z8 |" G% IThanks a lot!!!
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5 D6 v9 e' x1 _$ Z0 d/ |0 l" e5 tFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
- Y0 d3 i9 \) j \- P. c Somehow I'd found something wrong with us ; F' ~! K+ D0 h$ K$ W( l" w8 w
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
( @+ g5 ^+ \1 Y Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 4 i. `# x' e* X* r6 N" T
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind G$ l3 L( H$ X
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness . B. W- I- X4 x9 @/ t% J, d
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
: m+ \, _' G# w somehow I realized you were still in my heart
4 b7 V8 q5 W1 C/ y8 F4 f somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
9 f- D: y! v; l/ S9 p somehow I lost myself inside again
" v; K O' o6 K( c: [5 g$ iNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog * ]5 _' ~' ~0 u1 S6 z* l
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
2 W& s& A9 L1 s* z& n8 u, c; NFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................: i. @6 O0 V9 |2 ]& R4 {9 Z3 W
Basically, I almost finish this poem
: U2 s: b% R+ x2 \' v I am 一个人de精彩
- I- W- w* H5 w: r# r I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.6 L& i! L* h3 _: f+ `- H. s& E
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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