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I just wrote a poem" R/ T9 [' n- {0 |% c) m; J: c
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog./ W: b7 ?4 k. R
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem$ N. f2 y# Y, v w
Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
# y; ?( `* E2 Y7 s; y2 n Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
; Z3 ]9 d8 m) l& \3 |0 A Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world & B; `8 r6 U3 e
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
7 o; C Y5 h' T Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind 2 U* \5 N/ _2 ]; Z( r
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
" R D" u ]" t& x JHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday ( Z4 y: \4 X( Y4 l6 P9 {. l) Y; x4 Y: k
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
: E& `( Y9 T1 N/ r: S$ k4 _# A! C somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness+ w. ]) k) U& Y4 S! g- P9 x( ?
somehow I lost myself inside again
0 {* L# R% X3 d& INow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 4 j+ m9 n0 D; L$ q
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
: p2 ?$ V; h' `! Z# u. BFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................3 i5 \1 T$ x$ D5 H8 S T
Basically, I almost finish this poem
z5 V. T( m) w: I9 R/ ~ I am 一个人de精彩6 {9 a% V l0 g T! c9 L
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything., A7 p1 s: n4 B$ s" K. S3 }! b4 i( @
But........
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