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I just wrote a poem
6 c t& b; t- U5 b K6 OBesides, I'd like to put it in my blog.0 F5 U7 n: L F+ f" \0 g
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
% ^+ C- P8 r$ [6 o DThanks a lot!!!! x3 Y/ T6 j' x5 X
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you & p5 v& U% U) b8 u2 H: T8 G2 r3 r
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
( i& v7 {- h% F, I% F4 {# s) ? Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world " {& y* o+ \" h) t1 L
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me ' R# b4 q9 h" x' \" E0 r6 O7 x
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind / z- o1 c/ x4 a) D: X
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness ' G; Q1 H3 W- g) Y2 Z) k9 H: ?
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
3 D; S) d3 [( i$ q" ]; ? somehow I realized you were still in my heart
# Z: ~; F( w8 S! Y- @ somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
+ c/ @* T7 R) R0 [% i. ~! y2 W+ V somehow I lost myself inside again
( O) K5 A* L, Y: m* ?4 n1 Z3 vNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
! e; A- l+ d: a1 m1 k+ V+ o/ X# D somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion" g- K2 v1 A" Y6 g
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................7 E/ ?2 D" e) \+ b% W
Basically, I almost finish this poem9 Y0 t2 }0 P z; X5 P6 t4 D) F
I am 一个人de精彩 Y9 e. t# f1 j- F/ M( v, R5 j
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.$ b( g6 o U& H& ?
But........ 2 w+ r! _9 Q1 w0 f) f% O, k
Ironically? Isn't it? |
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