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I just wrote a poem
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- D4 X* Y0 ?. C' v2 MHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
) i0 u2 w1 T/ I6 H! MThanks a lot!!!, I4 x+ I. z& {# ?; L* E
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
3 T k9 h2 d9 A: O Somehow I'd found something wrong with us : A' L, c2 v! W8 x0 p! M; s0 o& E4 J
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
3 }7 C& a8 w& y' o) [. z- n& c Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me % a/ P: h# \9 D1 G
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
9 v( |% d& p# A, } Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
% ~" ?* C# q, L5 l, s5 q' P' y$ ~However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 3 P/ ^0 F4 N2 t% U# }; j7 z2 y9 N* {
somehow I realized you were still in my heart 8 I- p# ^7 V# W5 J, ~
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness: t( ]( S! \; n# _' Z5 t: l
somehow I lost myself inside again
0 q- ~8 v) W$ G6 }Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
5 B4 W& J$ |+ \$ c+ ` somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
. O: h% u. w5 ?1 t- o5 j3 nFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................8 E" a4 u7 S b* M! t) {
Basically, I almost finish this poem; ~" R9 `. o( Y2 {
I am 一个人de精彩1 C, m, x8 P. z% }
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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