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I just wrote a poem
3 d* V4 T, N7 z- uBesides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
$ x0 B2 T( O5 X j3 Z' jHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
1 V3 J' R' r& O6 }6 [ Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
# {8 V5 e- n- L8 Y* T# f, v/ q0 J Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
3 ?9 H+ v/ N; x6 P. g Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me $ i$ K5 b# v" f# R. @: [+ R A. A
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind 3 a. A/ z& ~3 m3 v
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness s& W) d5 R4 H$ U
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
8 d/ }* Z0 u5 [& B1 h( @ somehow I realized you were still in my heart 6 ~! g4 e- q; m, P; ~
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
7 ^' V; e" w9 l4 D, D R/ T: j1 Z somehow I lost myself inside again
7 M: o9 R, i [* B8 KNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog / z8 C; s2 l* f6 E, p
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
5 q f- }. r6 E/ d0 qFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
9 a& N. w' T4 Q! a) M* OBasically, I almost finish this poem
- ^3 U9 e Z+ ^1 }2 C. y: t I am 一个人de精彩
% I5 ?; i1 E4 v& ~7 N/ M! P2 @% Y) p I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.% ?& C( \; y. h+ r
But........
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