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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
/ I, v0 P% z" |( D1 z* l0 n Somehow I'd found something wrong with us # L% N L2 w5 H% s8 \8 T
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
! D# Z+ C( q" y8 T- z Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me + F8 { Y& x+ U
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind 0 F( t3 [% x1 V W
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 3 h+ ~1 ?( c F! v% |" f" T
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday * Z4 a! i; w. a# x3 m
somehow I realized you were still in my heart - f0 W8 Q. P. \9 `. T4 R
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness6 i* v* h5 C4 M6 y5 q# v6 l
somehow I lost myself inside again
6 x" H- E6 l* `! J! {0 ^Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog $ g/ h) l4 ?2 _/ Q F( ~
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
! I7 Z0 |7 z6 {$ Z) P) K+ xFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
4 X! I6 W$ S% m- ?Basically, I almost finish this poem
8 y" Z% L! K6 V2 u8 x' | o I am 一个人de精彩
2 r+ i% M' w# r6 [9 ^( K7 B I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.# P7 f. W" r4 f
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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