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I just wrote a poem! [, h0 S3 B& V b9 F9 P
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
& ?1 j( N. x+ S, b7 n1 i) JHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
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& S# S9 y+ y) P) Y( s) t nFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
5 Z- ~" n. L& I* V# u Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 7 n2 R3 L8 [9 F% I% k9 K
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world + o2 c7 j2 K2 n! V# _! E `
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
& {# J" }4 K8 l Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind ! N5 X, }4 X* m( B+ a
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
; k" i! Z& t! p6 v/ Q4 l$ PHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
( x$ H' V9 N% H4 Q8 q somehow I realized you were still in my heart
# w8 l0 ~9 x6 h: L! {3 l% ?& {% V. F3 ? somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness3 J" Q8 S' J. a+ M
somehow I lost myself inside again
5 {4 e( M2 {; u$ R2 c& ^' x5 W, O( G8 zNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 9 K8 W- ?2 Z8 v$ H& q. {# T
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
; p: E: l1 J* j9 x+ W" X: l' wFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
! a$ [# y: {( w9 Q1 `Basically, I almost finish this poem( Y: ^7 l, v+ P
I am 一个人de精彩. f0 N$ X- ~1 S. W8 ^5 E, y# h0 [
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.2 C7 D G& Z9 V/ M" d' H
But........ * O" @. v7 e! P5 ^4 @9 ?- O
Ironically? Isn't it? |
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