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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem4 `9 V) v1 q0 Y/ p/ d1 F
Thanks a lot!!!! L, @4 @$ t% T1 r) o/ ^. F
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 7 a4 M$ @, k- X
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
5 ^+ h5 ^1 I: F! J) a) D Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world - W0 q) C) a2 u2 @
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me & K9 n+ U4 `& |4 s, Y- W
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
% n1 Y2 x$ J& l1 W Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness r5 l# o" }( A6 }1 F
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday % }* z0 t# l7 ^# \6 m
somehow I realized you were still in my heart . }3 I& i- i# s- I4 L8 Z
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness6 a7 b9 x( ^! J
somehow I lost myself inside again 2 h- [) h+ i' g4 t4 V$ R, Y% P+ y
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
0 A! d! h8 W* R" Q# \% q3 O somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion2 [+ h( V; B% l4 @, E$ _+ B* y" H
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you....................................../ H4 _4 T1 o6 N, O
Basically, I almost finish this poem
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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