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I just wrote a poem& j( ~5 t3 ?) m+ F& X
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
5 b7 Z& D+ U2 ~$ `9 n- bHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem1 M% B& w% {: \1 D+ E( A+ n" S6 Q
Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you U0 N: T! k& H& C8 q4 }
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 1 v- O; ?5 u3 ]- Y2 Q% j
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
$ d; g6 n8 t; Q& X' _& j5 I Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
0 A3 g. q' L% L' b9 O Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind ) t8 A U+ {% ~1 N$ u
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
6 |2 |5 m& D# z4 Y& u6 aHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
# X% Z% H: g! D: n7 z( o somehow I realized you were still in my heart 2 a% h' r, W! `$ P! C/ C7 x
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
) ?; l. q. P: V1 q! t7 N somehow I lost myself inside again
% E# d- S; x/ i9 v- K8 S* s( BNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 8 ]) J1 j$ A' d- j! U. K
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
5 x" H7 s* u# LFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................, U) f7 S* U' o! p }/ A, u
Basically, I almost finish this poem
! T( k- U& r. t' f: c& b. ` I am 一个人de精彩5 s+ e8 E- W) J) B
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
