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I just wrote a poem
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Thanks a lot!!!; [: r/ {* K& C3 G2 T
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
% o8 H" r0 y& j* D3 N Somehow I'd found something wrong with us / f, B" x0 m4 F4 u
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
* r- Y+ m% ~% l& C! K8 |/ k Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
$ _; g! p! u) o/ O7 I! P) u( e Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
! m- h4 J7 [! p1 x1 I5 W* O3 T; O8 O Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness $ t/ o1 {9 Q8 d7 [, {+ A7 K+ S% O1 e
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday ! c c& ]- |& q2 d* h* m. D
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
5 c$ K' k' g, @7 K' S$ K: }& R somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness: I* |6 K2 j; \& }* `
somehow I lost myself inside again
; v+ B, `. i$ Y; c- ]0 I2 LNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
( |4 N# l+ x! F* O4 j. { somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion D6 G/ t2 Z7 R8 ?! X* L* C2 ?2 s
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................' T( k, @$ w' o1 R' v7 i
Basically, I almost finish this poem
1 X: y" [: a- y& ~( [6 N3 i. q3 T I am 一个人de精彩
' Y7 l. O0 S, g6 X+ e7 E I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.* u) G }/ f2 p2 p/ E! _* R, b. t+ H
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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