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I just wrote a poem7 t6 C0 ]0 \1 \: q
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
5 E( ?0 I h1 y8 O2 h+ E2 o. THowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem+ H! m3 S2 d; Y
Thanks a lot!!!3 d7 F' e: G) V+ Y+ l
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
1 K4 h( I" c5 Z Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
3 ^1 C4 V% V, G' f Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world 0 d8 m3 N# A4 l! t/ ]$ p1 Z
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 8 [$ a! N3 l7 S+ _( B5 q
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
; D% I6 R7 P9 E Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness [' C6 e! i2 v* e3 y6 w
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
" M( h$ t+ o2 d/ \# ] somehow I realized you were still in my heart * m* G: t2 \5 @1 M
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
# o4 w* R6 m* r2 `" m5 Y/ I3 k, V somehow I lost myself inside again 1 }. [8 ]9 k- W# d( ~( V0 j
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog : O+ p) Z. y) a2 b
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
4 A' ^5 R6 V# g t2 E4 t8 O* x% EFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
: U; q% m$ e C& v% P, B& LBasically, I almost finish this poem
3 O' g5 O1 @+ a, i( v3 I# [ I am 一个人de精彩
5 f7 J' n) S6 O I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
" P8 `! i, @* z$ j$ mBut........ 0 s- h9 C. L$ J7 \4 W
Ironically? Isn't it? |
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