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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem" A6 S9 ~# \" J/ K7 c1 O
Thanks a lot!!!
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% p% X0 O! r' i2 ~3 zFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
* ?5 H7 y: D5 M" k# x2 ^/ u Somehow I'd found something wrong with us + p' Q! {( a3 G1 \9 }1 {5 ~
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world - D, j# k/ {0 ~/ F x
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
& }5 { L7 E: ? Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind 5 q# f) ?+ C7 ]) x! k$ f* D
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
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somehow I realized you were still in my heart & Y! b6 `7 N. v9 R2 i
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
5 g! p0 b5 Z- ?! ^; w7 v. ?- O somehow I lost myself inside again
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somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
; ~2 E( F' x$ v/ Y( {Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
; Y. q8 H" [6 L/ L' [' T' x5 T1 P9 ^Basically, I almost finish this poem
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I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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