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I just wrote a poem& s" W. d: N/ i9 ]
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.( `' K, Y- h* D0 ~# H& X3 C0 a$ R
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem' j, Y& C+ g9 Y9 R; `3 Y) W0 k
Thanks a lot!!!; q( S' U7 e+ m0 P# R
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: J; U. ^1 P) YFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
& u+ e/ d' A. P& I3 h, r Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
2 ~+ o) o0 a4 g Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
/ L1 B$ _9 i8 T8 t& C( V( S- b Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 1 |1 O/ m! @: g
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind $ M5 v. R* W4 K1 T/ N
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness ) [# A: I7 p. k# y! w
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday - d+ C# Y( Y2 w# n) V. R
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
0 t) _9 _% ~ S9 s somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
q; o/ ?" I% V1 t' ?& d6 S somehow I lost myself inside again 8 A5 [: G7 _0 _ L5 ?
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 7 g- e& K- a$ `. }; p5 s
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion# T* m* Z8 ]+ D9 T5 N- K' r5 ~8 h, _
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you....................................../ X2 A# |6 L3 Z8 v6 i. X
Basically, I almost finish this poem& e$ L, @% A4 k7 K* l
I am 一个人de精彩
9 e7 p4 ~, | r" ~* | I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
# {3 C+ P% j; Q% R6 h! hBut........
" d) c- w9 b" Q1 w v$ w( I" v+ OIronically? Isn't it? |
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