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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
; O q8 x7 O/ }+ t$ MThanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
) f- |" p/ A3 L& V Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
2 v% ^6 u9 z/ }9 X: U Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
, S. B: u1 f7 H Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me ! I; h2 _' }- E* s7 n
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind ; X! u$ p" V' q; y" a
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 6 f; O0 Y6 [* H( k) G* q1 R5 K! t
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday * o% Q' Q' W- j7 O# L- d
somehow I realized you were still in my heart 5 C( o: j g- w
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
: [# Q2 ?; c5 |8 B# r- J somehow I lost myself inside again
+ Z0 `* m+ [) f2 ?; R7 |0 ANow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
1 [' S7 c2 t: A! z somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
! y7 g5 n; X5 v% ~7 DFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
* D: C2 d: g3 u5 o3 O/ J6 k- VBasically, I almost finish this poem4 f; y% T4 i+ d8 M4 i- [
I am 一个人de精彩. w( K; D% X) S
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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