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I just wrote a poem2 F: ~/ J# j7 ^: g8 k* |* j/ K5 `( v
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.6 [ g9 a: g& C: |& P
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
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. s& P8 k3 y4 q5 m- pFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you - j! w: i9 I4 D+ X
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 3 e1 s. W6 v9 ~ K+ L* R% S0 r, c
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
2 j4 F& m A `. Z# { Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 1 U4 H! i: D" X' B$ q2 q) R
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
" q0 C: U& _6 i7 ~ Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
/ t Q5 c" b. X0 g, J! S3 L" B( O! GHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
( K0 A. }/ n- k2 m. G somehow I realized you were still in my heart ! Y' l' H7 S- J* ?' y, R
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
% \' O9 ]/ N6 e7 q somehow I lost myself inside again % g* h! u3 Z" z- c1 t9 R( T
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
6 T3 A0 m$ u, X' c somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
% b$ U! N: f9 D2 H$ P$ l" yFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................3 r( y1 _! N, k1 r* t
Basically, I almost finish this poem
2 L9 z4 K, k8 O+ [5 ]( f I am 一个人de精彩8 V% V2 @, v6 ^) h8 w
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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