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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
1 ?% E' c5 M( U9 t Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 6 w7 }6 Q+ H9 F( ]
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world 3 ], G% S- V6 a0 q5 l
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me , P( {9 L# V" u" ^$ p2 @
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
# Q. C. z- H, g. s& K! ^ Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
: c3 M4 k+ D5 y! k% X" ]However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
& V* N+ ~+ \( X+ C+ ^ somehow I realized you were still in my heart
3 Z; N' m1 M" g4 o" x, ] somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
( z' M4 H5 e+ w9 }9 j somehow I lost myself inside again
6 A' m) a+ ?3 ?+ lNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog * S+ U+ Q o, \* ^/ [* a
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
0 h, { B2 p8 D3 w; ~Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................5 v5 I; J5 f/ q& X; b
Basically, I almost finish this poem" L$ V0 t4 G- p+ F! _
I am 一个人de精彩
( ?; e1 ]3 U( @% E* H6 c0 F3 y I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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