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I just wrote a poem5 L7 R$ L8 {6 f! a, _) W' m
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.! ?2 h! H0 J$ E" v: X
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
" l- b9 E9 s' hThanks a lot!!!
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! Q: ^( {6 x0 l @0 c: }. [5 kFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you ! C1 N- T, J2 d: B2 G; H2 ^) j
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
! A0 B8 u& X1 Y+ w, v Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world , o# k4 P! F& R8 A$ I& Y
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
7 ?. Z7 _9 }9 P. h1 W0 I% F Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind V: q- M- _0 }2 L' ~& f
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
) y- a: E1 ]; |% q* U3 LHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday ) J* a- l) W7 p9 F* N. `
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
. K3 V0 D/ U) a) g somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness6 F! \% B0 j8 `" k6 E1 _+ |
somehow I lost myself inside again
% j* {) _7 _) u* h- UNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
' ]% q: Z* w) j somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion9 u, s9 g5 |6 n0 p& X
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you....................................../ m- ]9 F9 L4 m. O+ g( k
Basically, I almost finish this poem" D9 U+ N) @+ r0 K4 ^4 Z
I am 一个人de精彩
- X8 Q, w2 F$ Z* I I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.* w9 X9 _# \& h) k* {6 j# K
But........ 6 ~) U7 A9 a& ]5 K7 W8 E/ x
Ironically? Isn't it? |
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