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I just wrote a poem
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: ]7 }" q* T# cHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem* c( o8 l; A* s W0 G
Thanks a lot!!!6 S8 Q$ r- g, U. E1 [
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4 B1 ?4 B" ^" ZFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you - a6 I8 {0 m8 e3 x' }: I& C4 e1 c
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 4 f3 k/ ?9 k& @7 q3 l1 h* n5 l
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
5 B* g6 D$ L$ ^% J Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 3 h- ]( l; ^+ S! I! m1 X0 q
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind * @, I# i& a7 n4 q1 B: `8 D
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 3 R- G# K; i. ] c6 T) n
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 5 U; I/ C* B3 o% T" W
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
9 G$ U% O L8 N( G) x. J8 v somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
) k$ W4 ?8 y8 J- T9 a( }% H somehow I lost myself inside again " w/ \- I& D: B0 n
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 0 ^& M5 u" p( d3 a
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion1 W' E& Z, q; y% d+ I
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
+ `5 a! j7 K1 w$ A" }( Q- `Basically, I almost finish this poem* ?2 C, [2 |/ r' S; Z* G
I am 一个人de精彩
6 ?9 C$ @! W5 T. x I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.: v: H9 l( S- \% m7 {
But........
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
