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I just wrote a poem1 O& b! g+ b0 T* z1 u
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.+ y; x4 l5 n% |1 ~' p, f5 N
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem' ]. U( m& P" I
Thanks a lot!!!2 ~; P4 }' x% h# |4 \! v' m" ~
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" `4 n- F5 ~, K7 A3 oFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you + H, G7 e- O4 a
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
2 Q. A' j# j7 x0 r6 } Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
5 K6 e; \ L$ c4 s Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me + d% Q M' r' r! @/ I
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind . H) E1 I4 m w2 {2 R# L6 g
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
( g0 ?" `9 c, L8 C5 {However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday : x- {; J7 L$ o3 M) ^
somehow I realized you were still in my heart ; }, P! u4 ]- S4 j
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness) O* C1 ?8 f* o. N8 n4 {5 M
somehow I lost myself inside again
- ~/ y \/ e w% TNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
/ C4 ~/ ~9 v8 E8 I p somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
' `% n) x7 K: j; _, pFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
( O! F4 v& \. G, P, L# jBasically, I almost finish this poem; f) }8 e7 q( j; [5 e
I am 一个人de精彩. \2 t3 ?+ j( D$ z
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.; d8 y) x2 {4 F1 r/ H
But........
8 x5 a8 M- k' V+ l% FIronically? Isn't it? |
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