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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
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% l, u7 a8 L) @) s; S3 kFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you ; j4 h+ H8 C O* R
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
l4 a; D7 P0 S" e1 e4 e Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world ; _4 ^3 E {" W( D
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 1 K+ C6 X4 J! u5 {6 o2 T1 B8 S0 A3 q
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind % s$ Y9 Y2 B9 ?& `4 b
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness " D: m, S6 x" s- C5 U- c
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday % e! @) Q+ Q7 d5 p1 _" v
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
$ v+ w L& L1 Q. b( O _0 U! v somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
# s( J+ ]% M- t5 L somehow I lost myself inside again 1 s# L6 |" i6 X, B$ ^: Z4 T- o1 W% U
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
, T+ d, ~* o+ u' C" Q3 @9 D4 p4 \. c somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion9 r8 f0 f& G1 P
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................* _" g0 V& P3 b( u
Basically, I almost finish this poem
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I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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