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I just wrote a poem5 t _; E6 l: J
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
$ S: L: z3 U! M4 G/ \' g5 S2 UHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you , ^0 e( L4 E6 q7 Q. A, L5 d
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us / T' Q2 j% I, n& v
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
: [) z0 b2 j) r2 c- E Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
9 E T* b' x# A0 T8 M% H Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind * F) A- u+ ]7 I4 {( m! G8 G& j
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness # C; k2 U9 u8 `/ a
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 1 U3 D: Z+ b* f% ^3 a+ l- H
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
, M$ _( P4 R7 n6 L) r. m somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness! a+ z$ d: U7 ]$ ]) }6 K+ L
somehow I lost myself inside again % N: [' g6 z% H+ K) P
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
. @* v* Q8 X" D6 d/ K5 ^/ O somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
+ }+ j* ]# W9 b# m% [; OFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................' N2 F# R. c3 k/ Z+ i! |. i, l
Basically, I almost finish this poem
# |3 W5 @! w/ p1 G5 b( @ I am 一个人de精彩- W4 T: J1 g& X9 o7 C
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything. d0 C5 [- ~3 }& I
But........ 1 m# J' d5 f- Q' o, E
Ironically? Isn't it? |
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