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I just wrote a poem1 z5 s1 k, s* R& X/ U
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.. x/ C5 n; {, A m
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem$ y! K4 J+ i+ }% H
Thanks a lot!!!1 H0 b) L4 i7 }
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, ]5 m$ b; i s8 z3 OFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
) p# _4 w5 w2 w' ?& O/ l Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
) N/ p7 [# o) h; O$ E Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world 4 \8 W& {8 S5 q. h/ m" N
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
" A1 s: E* `7 c2 a3 K Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind - y4 O9 o* D5 D: P- x
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness % ]/ @. k& Y! T9 W7 h7 T3 R! E
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
8 z7 P% U9 z C k: [, z somehow I realized you were still in my heart 6 o/ G8 e) g7 w1 k. y5 K- j* h
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness9 o6 h' K9 H, J7 f7 C
somehow I lost myself inside again
, d+ ]# C8 {6 V& B( WNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog / q8 B5 [( [$ Z" i
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion4 W! `8 K$ I6 U, p/ \
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
7 t. b" \9 S, ~2 m) J6 g# F) DBasically, I almost finish this poem+ |+ x0 @1 D" e5 t1 [' K
I am 一个人de精彩
2 I4 r' {) l+ g; ` I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.; o2 M4 ? I" c
But........
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