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I just wrote a poem
: i0 B6 }" b; O1 }: B1 U. PBesides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
7 F& v: ]8 D9 N/ W9 UHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem+ v7 Z9 G& S0 M$ s
Thanks a lot!!!' C- z# H/ a8 I0 b; L
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" U3 }' t$ \! j. n5 \5 M3 K& S: n* zFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
1 |0 _) |1 i- i, v U O& m+ q0 D1 r Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 4 H3 c. @ y+ k- t0 {! V
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world # b! Z3 ?0 z& Z) @
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
. b' _( T/ L d6 e- m" i Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
8 u% M3 H, }- M$ j Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
! i% s! ^% P/ DHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
2 Z/ U9 q0 _+ M8 R) F" v; {! x somehow I realized you were still in my heart 5 t$ o) d$ {# w+ V% b* _, y$ c2 b5 \
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
$ S% ]* i; Z9 T" [* R somehow I lost myself inside again
( j- W" \" c5 d: v( n; jNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
3 W0 P0 j0 k% W X: ?; c/ N+ Q4 n somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion; r0 Z! G0 D+ w; C! j
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................) l7 @0 M N- x7 m" f. h
Basically, I almost finish this poem
- U3 ~; ~7 m2 X# z4 u1 G& G I am 一个人de精彩
$ V$ `* O2 W# w& k8 [* J I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.) j& z0 u+ u3 O+ I( u5 B
But........
- B3 a5 n/ ]. W" B* g4 mIronically? Isn't it? |
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发表于 2008-1-17 21:16
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
