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I just wrote a poem: S: e6 _* H! M; O6 a
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
/ r9 I) J/ ~# ]- a) b; V, X% zHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
1 y! G: ]5 k/ Y: O% X ]0 q2 r$ ]2 QThanks a lot!!!& \: ~+ f' q" H$ m" j+ f
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7 G1 A( T0 v; W& L! XFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 9 t' `# A# F( K1 L, z- W# }+ M9 `0 z
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 2 \% f) T2 C% P
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
8 s a; T8 l) Y8 f2 L" e) o- d Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
9 I( R8 r8 t; G v$ U3 |* n- O Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind . `. U6 M0 g7 E. O- b* W2 J
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness / t% s$ k+ L$ v) q4 m8 {3 J
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday * H' N" y* D' j. L1 |/ P" O$ X
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
0 |* O$ P2 I0 n( z8 z) C4 u somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness& K8 t' a X+ \# i# q
somehow I lost myself inside again . ]5 j6 ]1 V' F; v
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
8 e! \6 }% n/ w% m8 T3 E0 z somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
; h$ t+ Y' V$ x( x. n! @+ M0 {7 mFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
8 N; E' D/ S" L8 `Basically, I almost finish this poem
) r6 X( f6 f7 _, F' {8 q7 \, Y+ ~ I am 一个人de精彩 |( z0 g8 q: J8 A% O
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.$ j$ d0 C4 \, Z9 k& ^
But........
8 j& {) ~1 n* l& H" ]* W3 VIronically? Isn't it? |
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