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I just wrote a poem( r, ~' k5 q- x5 \; w" l5 \
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
" b) z) c, t% OHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
+ x" f: B, T- O' l: Z4 \# YThanks a lot!!!
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5 H, E7 F& ~' r. s3 [5 t- WFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
9 N2 b J9 q$ ^; R6 j* @/ S Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
, B: m. e' u7 w l Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
8 K' G4 n/ _0 k6 N# }8 J1 ] Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
* @4 L8 J$ M( w) Q Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
) [; e3 Q7 Q8 j! G. v; v t' a: k Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness & a V* R9 ]$ \) `3 K
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 6 x3 \3 S1 U; S' Y0 Y/ g
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
* d7 j3 F# e* @ somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
5 N F- T( {8 ~/ j somehow I lost myself inside again % q. j, m* l. }4 T/ o
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog * G9 X. o( K" J3 S$ P
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
3 b) B; ~) T. Q" H, R0 O1 o/ D$ TFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
9 ?9 B$ |" Z3 [. L0 W1 k7 uBasically, I almost finish this poem
5 y; M* r$ v3 D- H0 D) @! t; J I am 一个人de精彩
2 e& r7 W2 K5 v) ^! K I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
" S% A3 x: ?- i7 j! e XBut........
+ y1 _& d* A. Y/ d# E5 xIronically? Isn't it? |
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