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I just wrote a poem8 k y0 n$ v8 R8 `% Z4 q
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.$ T1 L" p6 S6 V! d) J; e- S; d
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
5 \0 i) S0 i* B4 f0 q0 q7 q5 @Thanks a lot!!!. A- H% g8 X% n/ [* Q
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& I) }0 ?" W9 y/ cFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you ) v5 f9 [6 g/ t; P4 A- Y
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us ( ?! W# `! J4 s) G
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world ( t$ \1 s3 F. ~& g9 }
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me r z2 Y! [4 h2 Y( T& ?9 t. H/ ~
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
5 d% C1 P( y; ^) a% ^! N Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness ' B; e0 b+ B* A/ p {6 s9 x
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday ' n4 z# k+ f* |) p3 P# `
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
. w( i1 G- g. k0 i somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness: T4 X& n6 ^" `& k( I5 l
somehow I lost myself inside again
+ b; T7 r2 A& X# YNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
' j8 a; @7 S# \( k: m7 Y somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
/ ^$ q# }' \# A& I0 Y6 j& U$ yFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
W4 o! l$ J! `) uBasically, I almost finish this poem
: m6 l7 i) q9 b) n: [" n: I I am 一个人de精彩+ }: \, N; C. P! u% ]7 f
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
# y# V( ^4 }6 E' M! ]But........
" n( b) J2 @/ u+ ^& zIronically? Isn't it? |
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42