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I just wrote a poem3 ^9 Z0 b4 a' C( s
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.$ Y( w0 A) j& S9 c4 r) ?, O5 @
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem8 ]4 j8 H/ H* Q4 H( ?1 G/ F1 f+ d; q
Thanks a lot!!!/ r) C% e/ K# u+ A# _
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
" I7 t P4 C+ q Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 6 @5 e) u# h: S" l7 r5 y
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
$ ?" R" c7 k* C6 d Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
& h$ E0 j+ [, r7 u' i& g2 M Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
8 H; k+ r3 D3 o) h8 ] Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 3 g" ~ t0 K @
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 8 p b8 s6 ^3 g) N
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
$ z/ s5 o! p2 N7 S& U somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
6 e; t. F) e& L$ P _ somehow I lost myself inside again
8 v0 j" f% M {* b" X! b, xNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog , E5 ^) M! l, E f) _
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion( n) e5 a% { j5 Y1 g: x1 ?- l
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................& n+ s, Z5 l' z" Y
Basically, I almost finish this poem Z4 U1 R" x4 h! [* A @0 F. I
I am 一个人de精彩) @& a# Q/ @6 E
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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