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I just wrote a poem: c* m2 ?2 V8 R% n) u+ L
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.7 \$ J; Q3 J: R' f M
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
1 w3 w" j+ A, _( d2 a9 kThanks a lot!!!
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" Z7 y8 J2 Y$ |6 H2 W: `* w& y0 P/ YFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
/ s' M; H, o! o) N3 x& `. b Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
. K; h; h* p; [* t& ` Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
0 u# ~$ L% ]" `2 F Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me : u! c9 S9 y- g. F: s
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind ) j. p' x2 y6 C$ l6 Z2 h# s
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 6 n1 ] B) A7 v" l* E
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
' Z7 K& Q" _' c W: f H! C7 a somehow I realized you were still in my heart
+ B" B6 j0 Z3 o: ^. e2 _: }$ U! O somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
" q; U( m: o) \$ d7 n somehow I lost myself inside again - C7 T. r' y3 F6 O' D+ j, z
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
+ a1 E9 B& a+ \3 X6 [& Y somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion' n1 v! r* a! b5 m8 h
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................+ H/ [0 X4 t& W6 F
Basically, I almost finish this poem5 U& `+ X% M7 Q/ m! a! j
I am 一个人de精彩
/ R3 V7 C- Z; w. F- r4 E I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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