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I just wrote a poem0 \/ X2 Y4 E' N. g, z& C4 q
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.1 w0 s9 W. B% R' c
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem# ^" O" C) }* ?. r
Thanks a lot!!!
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0 w0 w# o1 A' h2 x; U0 aFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
! N2 }+ l. A7 k( Q3 K8 D$ i+ r' H Somehow I'd found something wrong with us , c5 r: M9 G; m3 [9 ]
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world ; p- M- G z1 x* [( C- I, K0 B$ y
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
% \. A# Q: d+ @' Q- l; [6 g Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind # b- d: u0 l6 p, e p
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
! X. B9 a! E3 ^) D n2 FHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
7 q0 i g& v# L0 q! o% B+ h J somehow I realized you were still in my heart
* S" q$ w7 b. M( M6 m% v somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
. _& R" q0 Q9 R7 ` }. B4 `; f somehow I lost myself inside again 8 v1 g5 A K/ ^- H
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog & q! f1 W* \( c" u6 l4 b0 M
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion3 H! A2 B3 P7 _: K! Q. s
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you....................................../ ^9 Z' P$ u: p7 W. y
Basically, I almost finish this poem
j6 o5 [# \4 J2 Z I am 一个人de精彩* E& m( H \7 F B- ^
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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