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I just wrote a poem
P* s9 q" i+ Y2 HBesides, I'd like to put it in my blog.! O) L4 q" [" Z/ M& x$ z# b/ p+ u
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem7 D2 s p+ Y- U8 I
Thanks a lot!!! ~" k3 e7 M! l S: `" U- w* i5 b1 i
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you ! i" a- @9 \# O* J7 q s6 L+ V
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
5 c) j2 C# v6 a8 L' I( p% e. I. j h Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world + ~4 u. w$ L6 e9 ~$ D
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
; U2 ^( {1 `2 a) R# }8 ]4 F6 H Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind 6 r# a- s% ^5 t
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
7 e, ~) f# p9 q. rHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday $ G0 T! n9 _4 g4 o( L4 ~
somehow I realized you were still in my heart 7 r+ z; [" z4 m: X' Y; U7 L* {
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness8 ~- D, G H- a8 B' A
somehow I lost myself inside again
# w% _0 O! n( YNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
( g$ V* ^# f. o8 r; j2 ^) J6 a; O somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion4 j9 o6 F9 R0 o8 ~& F. I8 z7 l
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................# a2 i! \4 m: T: ~
Basically, I almost finish this poem2 w4 ^/ `2 A, K& f) |
I am 一个人de精彩7 F1 e0 s* E: N; Z# V2 T
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.9 X6 O) O3 i4 u$ g" T
But........
2 g0 V4 g; ]) }& q+ K! v) T1 nIronically? Isn't it? |
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
