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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
( m$ K& V. i! a- A) y1 C6 aThanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 9 x1 _: B5 F2 i! d
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us . t( P* J) x% `2 H. n6 _+ D- a( I
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
; K4 k/ k% J0 t' p; d" e Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me ) G# A1 t# Q' G" ^& s: K) Z
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
/ v* w# d$ v1 D( c3 g Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
+ b. U; P' s0 _+ B5 {0 u) }However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
5 Y8 Q' ~! ?3 ~/ p3 c% q( N somehow I realized you were still in my heart
! c/ v+ Q0 p) u3 ~ somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
) d# a3 V% i0 v# s( q. L( i0 w somehow I lost myself inside again
3 e5 m% o. ]( _& P1 NNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog # B& L9 t6 _, X6 @- o
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
1 ?$ P1 e5 H) p+ A) R xFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
U9 g1 I" y& bBasically, I almost finish this poem
+ l9 y" r8 A% F7 U$ n5 R I am 一个人de精彩
# D% K6 Y$ v% D, A I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.- n* z' A. r& e: s+ z$ `, k% i/ m
But........
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