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I just wrote a poem+ m' M2 m* f$ I& s, H, e ~! V
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
2 v( k" S! v, x( y: z$ M- M ^/ JHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
0 |2 t+ D4 |3 g/ H* E% ~* mThanks a lot!!!) @ `2 n- t$ `3 F5 ?8 X' U( q
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3 u1 T8 [% P2 U; ^7 ~6 ]4 pFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 5 @- Z0 A; z5 ~0 |2 u
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us + c/ y2 Z6 A$ K4 K
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world ( M% l2 @# s) F# j0 M* k
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
2 o! o( b& ~" ^ ~3 P3 J1 j Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind ' c- R% z9 \8 N" f7 Z1 {5 J
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
9 Z( v$ ^2 o8 c5 p; ^- Z+ |However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday : @0 Y! n* |. R( `7 p( t1 G
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
% ]2 r/ I9 l7 {/ \ somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness/ f4 n' K& F2 ?& m. L7 |* f
somehow I lost myself inside again
, K5 Y8 _. G$ S% A, Y" [5 W) j; CNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
5 z2 Y5 C* c# i) e4 b& l) {$ E somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion V. ~5 x& `. c* S, \* {
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
" c+ Y' i1 m% j( r/ F: t$ G, J3 JBasically, I almost finish this poem
( e" }% V9 t0 q2 [ I am 一个人de精彩
% a% m. O# f4 U- Z9 m" X1 I8 ] I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
' Z4 G. p, t; i3 dBut........
4 h! Y3 x1 w# Y8 j# xIronically? Isn't it? |
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