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I just wrote a poem. r8 Y6 F$ ^6 {( ^3 e
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.4 E1 l- ~! X) |3 \0 @" A
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem% V" [3 b. M. R9 O5 Y
Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
7 m2 `, _8 o j' u Somehow I'd found something wrong with us ; c( t) b2 F2 @- Z
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
) z4 t( d& j) P9 G# _ Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me + `+ X/ o3 d# b9 N8 \, M. Y4 T
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
2 P4 T/ E4 t! i- I1 k" ~; A Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
! Q4 G; b, T# J, \& HHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday f- E* u( r8 {+ V3 J. s
somehow I realized you were still in my heart 3 g2 P. _& c' S! U+ M3 Z
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
. \; d! V$ { }% ] somehow I lost myself inside again ' P* @6 P* t! \+ C
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
6 F! [/ f7 {. w somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion/ [ ^/ K* z( d, I: ?
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................# D. t5 a; H2 P7 n0 `6 [
Basically, I almost finish this poem+ z. ? l+ \8 I. i% `
I am 一个人de精彩* T; u7 _8 n" \3 [
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.; ]- c+ ?/ p: h' S3 Q' w }: u
But........
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
