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I just wrote a poem/ z7 G" l" F) j' p3 ]! s& z( R
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
9 V2 R$ \7 T- L5 K/ ^: N3 DHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem9 c4 r7 x" i) M `& J
Thanks a lot!!!" `2 P/ @# h4 l G6 M* `7 b/ v
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you % t# g& o" M& M8 z: M4 a% z1 l
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
) B- h; M. e. X& Z8 R2 o6 r$ @ Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world " |. N, o( J0 z- G2 O' I" n6 l% J
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
0 K% J# R: K" I Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind 4 d5 o% }4 d( [- u: F" P4 N5 j B
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 4 Q$ k) h, W9 p: f6 v1 F
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
1 E& }1 ^- y$ Y: p somehow I realized you were still in my heart
/ Z" h5 a/ N( n somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
6 j5 v$ i/ k7 t: b6 o+ r2 M" O somehow I lost myself inside again
! W( D4 O' D7 i8 T- ZNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
6 ?- x1 p# u( t1 v somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion c6 d* Y9 j2 {, J [2 [
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
3 h" e1 w* T; Q9 o0 s! ~1 K$ HBasically, I almost finish this poem
, _+ g& f+ N, I' F/ j, O! q I am 一个人de精彩/ @' j2 G% H4 u7 j \. ?
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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