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I just wrote a poem3 f! e/ l1 _% T; M) e% s% {5 g5 v
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog./ @5 s/ s+ K* r: f" C9 y
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem2 `8 f4 n, A+ V2 p% L1 y/ I* b
Thanks a lot!!!5 y/ o0 f- N. {" @, y) V
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7 ^ R# M! i9 ], fFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
; J1 E. W$ G- V4 n3 ?) `: X Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
7 O9 f! }4 j7 w3 f |6 w Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world 3 T8 x: J- o l. j% E' b
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me . _' Q- z( E2 y! e0 t. `9 z' q
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind . R) z l; F! R% g
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
# }2 [; p6 P9 xHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 3 I) r: }& v+ R
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
! h) L8 U' ^" C4 H8 l somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
4 f7 n3 r% {# V4 ]: v; @ somehow I lost myself inside again & N P$ ?, \! I
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 4 g7 p# \) l& b9 z. M
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
- ]* x2 J' c7 f5 Q7 oFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................* F# ]: g3 P8 W
Basically, I almost finish this poem
, s& V4 y8 u9 z! }7 I& ]1 ?2 w4 j0 J! S I am 一个人de精彩" I4 T) D! {1 I7 n, M: c
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
