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I just wrote a poem
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0 b# \. _. c1 q8 O8 ]However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
7 Z* H: h+ E4 y+ n, DThanks a lot!!!3 J2 B/ d ~9 Z
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you ; r5 n8 Y0 o( _
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
9 D C: t" \! M, f Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
* O t% M2 Q* r8 p7 w, p2 f5 O Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
. B+ g' x# h: D( |5 [7 Z Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind . U' Q) _/ n) O( b6 l) e
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
2 j- V. L I [7 k: w+ hHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
9 T9 X7 p- H# I+ K somehow I realized you were still in my heart ' I* X' [; ?# `$ G1 W+ w: e/ Y: `' w7 v
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness) [: M1 g, N+ b |% R
somehow I lost myself inside again & W, v! x: v$ z& y- @
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
( ]& P# n7 M N& Y+ Q# t somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion8 T4 [' l9 z1 z9 A: T5 [
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
" V) s0 s" H0 _0 X- o/ QBasically, I almost finish this poem
( T' m( P) F" O& L" F2 H0 L I am 一个人de精彩
! h) ~! a' B9 y- ]' W I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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