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I just wrote a poem1 e0 t$ _( U4 k* f _* x
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog." g5 y& i1 j( _8 n# @) O. \
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
2 p2 K: J) i( ]2 b- H2 I$ hThanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
) ~* j* Q) }+ J Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
8 ^% `( O [# D) [# r Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world # |6 o/ d W% ^% W( A, q n
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
( Q) ?) ^" w. q( X2 ` Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
, x0 c# o# C& E7 V Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness , E9 p, K3 g- [# _- C
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 6 [ g* B6 { {+ b/ U
somehow I realized you were still in my heart ' A( V: n2 S( {
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness4 J$ m" Z8 f! R* o" {) n
somehow I lost myself inside again
" \0 |$ R7 A' t% VNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog ! m& w+ R% P2 X1 t, s
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
' u. Y, H* A- V$ hFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
7 u% d+ Y" z& M& K7 p0 xBasically, I almost finish this poem
9 |7 l9 N) n7 r0 h I am 一个人de精彩/ Z y" }; B5 a$ V0 m( j( J" h
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
9 s& r6 `1 r" Q* O" O# W7 I% sBut........ ; E+ q" B& J) v
Ironically? Isn't it? |
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