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I just wrote a poem7 N+ K7 h# t, E' O
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.4 \7 T7 K( u: w$ o; ]0 w/ k; `
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
' q" ~' z A) I! X' p Somehow I'd found something wrong with us & @; F& w+ n6 x/ Y
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
, e& M; ^. Y4 C, X& x Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
. ?+ K5 N9 I( p( Y2 f$ x. N Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
9 l. J( {: x3 ?6 K' N. ^; x Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
4 M' ^& c9 d' Q, E7 z; CHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday ) Z- P: t2 Y1 y3 p9 Q J5 d" _
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
# n) w+ o( v8 U somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness% O9 g/ G. E+ S
somehow I lost myself inside again
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somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion& e9 c. N/ e0 h: b
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
( l# }" d* U' V+ f+ k# LBasically, I almost finish this poem) k M! x1 _- g7 m7 ^) x' ]) `+ V
I am 一个人de精彩
9 ~) y% L3 g' f } I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything. W, v8 P) ^* l) w+ d) K
But........
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