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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you % \4 q; F$ w2 x3 ]% s
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 8 h) g8 H& _$ ]- C4 R3 o
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
. U) G0 A3 I. O2 b" i3 N! h Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me ' F% u- m0 H/ b1 C+ r. X$ U
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind : v1 B5 W1 I" w: @1 j: u1 U0 e9 ~
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 3 b1 ~ q2 o# Y( R& K
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
: i e) k* v2 {! V" L& N$ w somehow I realized you were still in my heart
( q( j8 P4 `0 d7 u somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
# R( @: a4 @5 X# W# V somehow I lost myself inside again 2 p) W! Q& ]7 e' z f: B" o
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 8 M* Q7 W0 ^" g" F
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion6 S- P/ F/ ?2 s9 L* @
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
; w7 k$ _3 v3 dBasically, I almost finish this poem
5 B0 K+ k( Q x& R8 p I am 一个人de精彩
8 K7 z& \& U! S. k6 R* i& o2 G I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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