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I just wrote a poem$ i. z" K: o8 [* e9 [
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
% P, C8 \# f0 YHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem% c, i% i- c6 u
Thanks a lot!!!
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0 s2 B! H3 ^* Z9 ?2 T. |& H: I$ ]Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
3 c- q9 H# ] b. y3 N: B2 Y Somehow I'd found something wrong with us + U; g' r( b& P
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
) S2 F7 j" ]! M: f9 q3 h& P& E* ~9 Q) T Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
?# w U5 K0 ` Y; S, ? Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind 0 n1 O# o$ q l0 U; {
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
" F7 V1 b& @! k0 @ R% ~6 }4 hHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
Z/ r/ l- S7 o2 n1 t$ J0 e3 s somehow I realized you were still in my heart 0 a4 q" v3 E. L" W* F. H
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
, C) e' v; [ A* e somehow I lost myself inside again
1 I8 \: h7 v, [1 bNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 6 F# t: T5 y: ?$ ~1 t) W/ u
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
6 x9 H2 M9 O- x1 G% ]Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
! Q" {! J* L X0 A' f0 HBasically, I almost finish this poem. ^ ]$ k* f2 k3 s) l% O
I am 一个人de精彩3 u! g* m. \$ i8 w! @" P( v: ^
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.7 K) s1 F o3 _! g/ A, w* X1 ~9 K# V
But........
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