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I just wrote a poem
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Thanks a lot!!!
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* |; E4 R& M8 ~+ TFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
$ \) D/ d% [' k! n/ j+ U0 c+ ~ Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 3 E7 S3 A: V9 y$ Y7 `5 [
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
/ r% n7 E* p2 v% g Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 8 W8 U# L: p( m$ U( q; c; \
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind ( S' Z0 _$ S! u
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness ; j% a; ]6 p) F4 U4 E1 T' z; U0 U
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday & x: q; F' X, \; F# u" r7 J, _
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
0 d' Y! ^! |; H1 f( X @3 r' K somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness' w9 J; l$ x* M8 M* |2 e& p% A5 \
somehow I lost myself inside again 6 \. R( m7 D$ z( m0 K1 A( q
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 0 Z+ _" e* K* G
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion# C+ x$ y0 A9 _2 g( B
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
* C/ Q$ v1 @' H" j0 Z: T; \5 H3 _: ABasically, I almost finish this poem
+ K( _+ q8 R3 q( y# r6 z I am 一个人de精彩
# X& }/ Q+ @: [( i I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.- n; W" |2 @7 r
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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