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I just wrote a poem
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8 c1 \3 q: Q$ cHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
5 u3 ^" m+ Q9 u6 d) a6 J# uThanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
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Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world ) f$ B* f* G k5 b: z8 D
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me ; F0 Q+ m* }; |5 f
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind % z' V) I: V, H5 O! T
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness ! G+ ^! ~/ |+ c( u
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
1 V5 ?1 U- ?1 j3 N) i9 |3 w somehow I realized you were still in my heart 6 t+ w8 b# f6 C, n
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness" h3 J% a1 q0 V/ Q6 T) ^+ k
somehow I lost myself inside again 2 K G; U8 ^5 \$ A) U( A2 C3 q
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 4 s7 W. I# d# D6 ]1 c
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion/ w: b$ |$ X+ y& V' e
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................5 q3 U* @$ P& u/ B; `
Basically, I almost finish this poem e! w6 Z' a5 z! {
I am 一个人de精彩
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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