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I just wrote a poem2 \, s- y$ S4 B( j
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
, H9 P8 ]3 g B; jHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem3 t0 x' G; C! W/ G
Thanks a lot!!!* ?: @, w" B& \. C: y# [2 j. g ~- b
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) f: R3 _7 S# }5 G" fFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you $ w6 {; [/ r, X/ R0 A2 D
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us " r( K) e& m0 u7 \' u
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world * Q- M F% Z0 T( Q7 n0 O( v
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me : U! p" b% W. I& a- P2 b4 S }5 ~ A
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
" L0 o. {$ l- ]7 `, Q+ x t- ^+ c) | Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
$ [1 T0 B. T- a* _) ^5 }However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
2 x- Y8 o4 C, q8 o% I% w, R2 O ~ somehow I realized you were still in my heart : h) F$ P1 B% A2 Y1 `
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness5 _8 Z' _/ S# C
somehow I lost myself inside again
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7 B1 V6 B0 r6 ?% S somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
) I s& Z/ E9 i Q) l K5 A! UFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
. ? G" M1 @8 D' U. n# B4 }Basically, I almost finish this poem
9 s# ]- d) b/ T8 R5 k# }) K5 x1 \5 x, [9 P I am 一个人de精彩1 }7 M) ], [" p$ e) g& x! w8 [
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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