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I just wrote a poem
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7 g, I i, d f0 e4 G7 kHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem, \4 }9 m* {! X$ Y
Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
6 Q8 C( Q- @9 \- _+ M Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
# i7 D6 }$ W& R1 E# j: z) j K6 ` Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world ! ~& ^5 k+ X/ H$ q
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
& q5 X' A I4 F Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind & f2 U0 {; H. L/ G& z
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness $ Z" m/ N; R# \2 t- U
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
; ]- q3 G* o/ q, ` somehow I realized you were still in my heart
% V9 b8 P% Z7 m8 p [ somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
: k- V$ v# u4 ? somehow I lost myself inside again ' C, x. q8 O* F) o/ g! u6 a7 C
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog : C }8 g- H) d! l6 w4 G1 e# i8 ~
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion1 [9 A4 H0 J! Y
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
6 L" b6 o4 N: `% M5 k( B+ o2 nBasically, I almost finish this poem
! P3 ~2 U# V6 X I am 一个人de精彩
P$ ?6 q$ G8 O7 g, U) h5 t' y I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.( {8 q. m d4 k8 @& @
But........
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