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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
6 C9 X- w- P( i+ W' y( ?' I1 o bThanks a lot!!!: p0 l3 b9 ^2 P( G+ i9 }
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
& R) L2 U2 I) Y1 T# |" z- q Somehow I'd found something wrong with us ! Y; @" N! \' h j
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world : F4 j- h' a5 f$ E+ Z( D
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 0 G5 M ]" r: H; l3 a9 V
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
+ Z2 _' h7 o" N6 F& S Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
$ \8 A( C. h8 qHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
9 k7 h0 ` U+ D# t O* H somehow I realized you were still in my heart 7 H$ i* e5 r! e5 p
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
# j, W2 C: |, i* z: w( x. M somehow I lost myself inside again % h9 v7 ^" i' V( ?9 a2 \4 {
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog |* x9 t! x$ ^2 E. k
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion! T% w$ g! k0 \8 x) q/ Q9 b& g
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
1 j5 f! Q& [5 b8 b# h. lBasically, I almost finish this poem7 j/ B- ^0 e" [" i2 P
I am 一个人de精彩5 r/ b9 P/ K6 Q7 ^/ ^* y: V$ k
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.8 D1 u, l0 a: l: F
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
