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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
0 r# G8 V- I+ Y& iThanks a lot!!!: _% m- q$ l2 b. z: s/ z
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( o$ S* U1 ^' D8 W& D3 K# AFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 4 X% S) O7 ^# z& [
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 4 W/ E( O$ w9 L3 ~. x
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
* c5 J$ E& u9 @" O, T2 c! b5 z S4 p Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me ! J+ s4 _* D9 D- ~; `3 J& m
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
! M% F. Z' H. O+ g Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
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somehow I realized you were still in my heart
# n" P4 F1 e7 m3 M E9 Z' l' l somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness/ h; [, i1 u- r0 h) x. [# H& ~
somehow I lost myself inside again 7 ?3 N+ R3 T6 V7 [$ O
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog & S7 R' \8 ~. o( o. p
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
' g! p. ]8 K: l8 X! T/ m' I" gFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
2 ]9 ?' f# r, XBasically, I almost finish this poem3 D) o/ ?- d- @. B
I am 一个人de精彩
8 E( D R# _) {2 Z3 M I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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