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I just wrote a poem, H, ^5 Z& g' T5 x. X
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
9 ]; M! w U% rHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
2 ]' _- W) j, o X0 w, QThanks a lot!!!9 b- P1 T8 J3 j5 F/ Q( G6 R" l
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3 w! H" R' E; o( X! A+ ^ aFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 8 `& b& m6 Y8 B" Y% a
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
, t: z8 P- M2 D& F5 \0 V- L: Z( D/ l$ Z Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world 3 Z0 U7 h6 m w3 {
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
. y; G- b/ s' P7 W8 d Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind # p: L3 i" S- P" |
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness & [6 f; B1 w/ E7 C; ~
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
8 S+ P: x. N" @- p" R* g somehow I realized you were still in my heart + B. h' m4 Z9 F+ ~* _( X$ {- R8 B8 O
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness5 x2 B/ C, s5 j# l/ U4 o
somehow I lost myself inside again
% b4 B1 l3 F/ N8 vNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog " H! v1 n$ Y9 A2 X. s5 f9 P
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion; \+ p, e% {1 u5 T. o7 \
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
3 s" Q. D. T& L2 h! Q" NBasically, I almost finish this poem0 G4 o; \& `' J# A5 [
I am 一个人de精彩
* G1 f C" U! \# F* b+ F V; M I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.& H& y! w- E) N. k$ N
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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