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I just wrote a poem; i. R) N* d; {# @4 }: H0 B: c
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
8 J2 m5 j5 v# O3 @5 JHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
) U" Z" W- Q6 k! w8 {" RThanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you ) `, H" u$ _) }4 V
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us . v, Z0 g# T7 P! u* O: T
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world 7 I' w7 |. i2 B; J0 C* ~# L
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me ( Y& L* o, z6 R/ a0 Y
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind ) p- {# F% M! g# o* P
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
z- t0 {( U0 l, L6 m- A: j% C7 M" M- jHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday " n" R6 F: D; O2 I
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
% o1 i ~+ ^- w% G, R, ^2 P somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
4 g8 u( s+ t. k somehow I lost myself inside again
% o& E7 e3 w8 i+ G1 x! }# QNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
# x1 k/ f& }1 j; N somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion# [; r% Y( ]& u2 K' D) W- `
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................; c" [# {- o; A$ R% |# d" V' J
Basically, I almost finish this poem* V' \+ U0 F+ [. V) ]. s" z B( Z
I am 一个人de精彩1 w; V' N, z5 g* @! K3 U; x
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
