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I just wrote a poem( k. I$ T2 `7 ]3 A! B6 R( O
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
W( ^" q" Y7 y4 P0 e- JHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem( R) p2 t1 e) W
Thanks a lot!!!
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( c2 t1 W# n: J% C4 y7 y1 B3 dFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you }; B( ^' f$ m) _
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
4 ?% _0 o' U% s2 [# @ Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world 5 F" A/ N. k$ G: Z6 e& T4 M j
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
6 [! g3 Z& E7 a! v5 D* H, v) s! G$ M Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
7 @$ c7 C% f6 c# n: d% c Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
/ t8 ] W3 S4 k1 @6 u9 U6 `However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
6 \ t. e Z# |% c somehow I realized you were still in my heart 4 P0 ~" Z3 f: m' k) m' L
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness/ [+ l1 F* q$ ?( s/ p
somehow I lost myself inside again
: N( |; |6 j; \) Y( C# M: @) K, @# ~Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 5 k \) X" f+ e( p# W
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
: M H% t2 ~$ M9 ^Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................6 ^2 ^; `% i) t J
Basically, I almost finish this poem
& X8 V5 ~/ s# c# z _+ P7 i0 o I am 一个人de精彩
9 f" a0 j5 A3 ]* Z: {3 T+ \4 I I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.- b/ i3 W% D# ~" r& r
But........
9 ?$ p9 A' }, u4 r6 Q, oIronically? Isn't it? |
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
