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I just wrote a poem
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Thanks a lot!!! k6 C2 ^' d( L* c' V; {
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5 D4 A5 I; T8 v1 n/ o4 ZFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 9 {& Z9 D X% L2 }
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 5 E# r1 L' W( ~! K; ~. J* f A
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
5 A& B' O$ p6 f7 ~ Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
! b8 g7 y4 g0 j- Z8 _8 X3 }2 d Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind 9 r3 q: Y/ {9 |0 w. T9 Y2 p/ l1 g
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness . h, w1 d; ]2 I r# }
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday / J3 |+ L0 X, Y
somehow I realized you were still in my heart , h* G% ?- x; R; e: R a0 p, j% {) \
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness7 D5 `% T# H5 u8 b6 L4 H
somehow I lost myself inside again % [) p4 W- Y- K/ v5 H
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog # N1 B5 k6 v) S K
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion+ K6 F! q L, b7 S( s y& o
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
: F, h1 w$ H* y* ]8 kBasically, I almost finish this poem
$ e" C e8 S0 U8 P& y' y I am 一个人de精彩
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