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I just wrote a poem9 F& a7 {1 ?& C
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
0 D9 |* g% F4 v4 K( Q9 k( G+ q/ eHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem* e, E0 z& A6 x4 `9 x
Thanks a lot!!!
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6 E5 e+ K6 X1 z6 @Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
# z4 p& i% {/ I; q Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
9 g- {; o# z2 l! C x9 A) F Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world 0 S) o' K1 o. X' @" n7 Y
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
9 v- o( c/ x) d. j$ @- m+ t Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind + v& X4 ]! L6 O# D% J3 m* ?! t$ U
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
! ?! S9 M$ e) v* I5 O' m/ E, MHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday $ [& {- t5 F: }9 K+ F, j
somehow I realized you were still in my heart 3 H2 ]# X2 Y. c" X( y/ E$ Q8 |1 ^! x
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness* I) G7 b0 q1 E6 s0 E, P; \5 G
somehow I lost myself inside again 2 h8 D# S: m7 g. X
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
9 o( t0 X/ a0 C9 R( n+ R somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
' r W3 A3 r J! c( MFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
. m) L7 B$ U* A8 Q1 c# w( Y* zBasically, I almost finish this poem
8 e, n& l9 g9 W' r7 S1 J2 H I am 一个人de精彩9 z; M- A' @% Q, L4 n6 }( S
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.4 V& f4 t; K! Z
But........ 6 B4 R+ _( D+ _2 H
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