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I just wrote a poem" M$ G9 I+ |* u3 I5 N
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog./ f/ i$ R2 U- `8 P
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem0 X& ~7 X7 g0 \+ b0 [! U+ }. m
Thanks a lot!!!; D( X6 `" b; i- ^. j Q* k1 W: ]. b
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 4 B; }2 @, o9 e7 D) F5 {5 X
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
& E8 s; A; o& [5 c. y1 P Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
% D! y8 F! l0 e6 n. m& z j Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
# Q$ |) d- f( r) ^, C Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
( T( ~; L z. f4 k Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 3 j' w9 U4 ~& B7 B+ t
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday ' j6 e2 h1 J, [ O
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
9 z( R! g7 K+ F% Q: k$ L somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
- x6 ~) `2 ?6 G/ S* |# H; s somehow I lost myself inside again ( U% {+ e9 y- r8 m
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog % A, A2 g7 z. x8 X
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion! @" s2 L) T7 a
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
9 |" Z' F. z; l# h0 t% e& U9 ^Basically, I almost finish this poem
5 I6 f8 @& b- ^1 T. s4 W( U5 Q I am 一个人de精彩
: b1 z- K8 w8 K I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
1 n3 u3 B, k! k! Z# i4 b$ B$ n! tBut........
y6 @4 z; C" w9 }! g @9 y/ n8 yIronically? Isn't it? |
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