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I just wrote a poem6 y- l# O+ ^9 B+ _& o( z4 m
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog." @4 M8 [- K) o5 _$ x, j
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem, x9 l7 \! W' [; \: @+ r
Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
) H# r+ I# s6 m: B Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 0 M; O. K1 t ?; G9 w+ v. E
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world 6 B0 R( D2 a5 j" S+ c# g7 p6 V
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
- G0 g' {$ w3 o4 ] Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind 4 C" q* q4 l( ], Z
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 3 n& M7 j, \" y
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
9 {8 b, b1 c% A somehow I realized you were still in my heart & o$ K3 ?3 C' m
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
! A% Y) R+ j5 b. D; X# l3 _& c somehow I lost myself inside again ; d8 r9 G7 |, a I/ S
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog . d) p! s0 t s' ~4 j' ~
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion- k K( ]& \# m z9 Q. z/ j. i. n+ X
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
/ [- ^4 {7 o2 R: H$ Q, L! MBasically, I almost finish this poem
" Z5 t& _4 g9 s2 m! L I am 一个人de精彩
" {- C5 T" }1 J3 f* C I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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