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I just wrote a poem9 F) K9 O. `+ t. c: q4 j
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.6 a- S& t# z1 d3 [' e5 n) J
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem1 S3 v2 n3 s8 M7 a
Thanks a lot!!!1 a& Y# U; o' T- @: X5 p: A
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& @- m# g1 j# i- ]5 W% [Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
6 L! \! h5 J1 A1 f- z. | Somehow I'd found something wrong with us " ?7 i( ~( Y) |" m7 q% s
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
" k$ B5 b' F, ]! m7 g4 O Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 3 {0 M' J0 b- q. l4 t6 w7 A( s' P" F
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
9 N7 i. E0 j$ N, k' B; w, ^" s Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
* h) G9 N* v U0 g2 M* k6 OHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
3 O8 N8 F3 W7 c) \* k* j somehow I realized you were still in my heart
; b# K1 t0 z+ l) g somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness9 C) Q+ }2 p0 p0 \; J4 N5 v0 }+ V
somehow I lost myself inside again
% o1 i* K4 m9 f+ g$ J2 ENow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
% _- j6 a, O0 d1 j; e3 Y9 P+ Q somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion! |/ D6 K; a3 ]. w9 I
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
- F& r5 i+ o1 Y0 B+ P' L) |/ ~Basically, I almost finish this poem
* T4 m; Q- B6 }, ~& e0 F; l) y) K I am 一个人de精彩
4 b* N7 @! z2 I* u) b3 f( [ I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.# M; S _# ~9 s! B+ u! G- ^' k
But........
( K# p% F0 n5 m6 eIronically? Isn't it? |
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