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I just wrote a poem
, I9 m# ^9 g. zBesides, I'd like to put it in my blog.3 C) E" b$ l7 s, V T X* z; N
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
$ U5 O3 ]2 O4 q% IThanks a lot!!!4 n" `$ C$ Q' T
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8 i7 _& r# [+ o# N1 GFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
8 E7 P- ?0 |; X `, D Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
6 a: T2 j* I Z( `' S: Y r# k Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world " j' `) i1 i) N' F* J$ k
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me / M0 q8 W1 K4 R k# `) R E& b
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind ; Q- [7 Z+ f: T: D( J% J
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 9 ^- x1 M& t3 ~" v0 D' r9 ^8 k
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday , v) l% J, }, o6 @, H
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
6 f" ^4 N4 z0 q somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
3 P0 `) @$ T- r somehow I lost myself inside again / |% @; ?# |( f1 ]1 \7 M, A
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
9 S% a! t$ O0 G* _) K somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion& d9 k0 w3 ^( Z, g2 Z. c5 u
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................' G- S5 l/ ^# I9 t( V X7 p
Basically, I almost finish this poem- f5 K, h! _$ Q8 d
I am 一个人de精彩- u* v' P8 D+ `+ S) c5 e% N2 d
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.& @) u7 T, G4 J) U
But........
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
