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I just wrote a poem. K, }: B4 d1 ]( X
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
v# Q8 t$ k& Y% jHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
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7 h9 q+ M( r" i0 lFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 2 q2 d- x! e' p3 w. j
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us % V/ x6 v4 g0 F
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
( J" k- ^2 K3 j Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me $ {* p" N! x0 L [
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
% ?, N2 B" m: f# h Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness ; Z7 g, B2 U* d% k* e- g
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday - W) p$ b; y( G6 n p
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
5 [- D, f- w4 @5 l+ z$ Z somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
2 p3 H1 H4 q! y/ {2 x somehow I lost myself inside again
* \0 c% p$ J- oNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
/ I8 `' s! P7 C. Z l" |2 e somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion" z0 e6 D9 L- _
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................, |1 j1 I5 \9 j9 I; a
Basically, I almost finish this poem* [/ ?- D5 i9 F
I am 一个人de精彩. F; e* X2 w7 O# H8 m
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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9 k) E( Y( A! u! kIronically? Isn't it? |
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