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I just wrote a poem
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4 @( N! I1 }: j- s& U% IHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
5 m( w' E; D2 f! _" g) TThanks a lot!!!# Z! |1 K6 [ ^! F* \! W+ q7 W
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4 F% \. R# X; a' B6 i g+ k( \# h- tFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
2 V# o/ o2 {+ `0 [9 [0 a! u Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
8 D3 Q+ h$ @8 c) B' G! k, ] Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
3 [9 r& U& }& \0 p0 U1 }" m1 g7 Y( d Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
& ~3 G7 D' p4 }) `6 n" b5 z Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
0 D9 a; c, n, T. t7 F( M$ @% L Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
* }4 a5 N$ P8 E# XHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
1 v+ L. A8 d. Q5 ?7 |$ \ somehow I realized you were still in my heart " q, g, U2 c& R" Q
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
# k+ m/ N% v' B+ B% Y, v- { somehow I lost myself inside again : p, [, S' u& V, o/ }
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
! T; m7 e7 s/ n# S( O somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion1 s' X$ K, i3 t! j
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................8 t, z$ H9 L/ H, I' V" H2 c
Basically, I almost finish this poem. L( \; J4 V; V/ m/ A
I am 一个人de精彩! E6 ^2 D. R3 A6 U+ v, i- ]
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42