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I just wrote a poem+ e& b0 `9 }6 [5 d& p. N
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog." N5 z) C1 P( P2 g
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem1 [- L6 r+ `0 u* y2 y' N/ D
Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 7 s1 e2 q- R( h3 i( R6 ~1 K
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
: W3 O# ?6 {# x+ q Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
7 ]6 p7 ^. F* y) R/ D" T Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me : B; z, e5 _% V% ^% P7 `' G
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind ) W: Y9 U% F% u) H' t/ R
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness # Z* b q; Y3 g8 w0 v+ Y
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
3 N; g) S6 H3 p) W+ G4 {3 D* p somehow I realized you were still in my heart ! U3 g2 l7 p5 E/ z9 K
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness" r" @( z- q4 t" r. ]3 x8 v
somehow I lost myself inside again 9 |. }; v* `3 b
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 9 \2 y7 j9 y3 F4 Z5 s
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
& H- l( x4 F& K6 G/ g& P/ G6 VFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................2 S5 Z7 X1 F. W9 C/ @
Basically, I almost finish this poem3 X6 x, L% L3 K* ]; @
I am 一个人de精彩! a) A" T" Y8 l, w+ w! y
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.; Y2 _6 I9 W. g9 G! M1 V/ y7 z
But........ : m; X. W- [. X0 y( ]
Ironically? Isn't it? |
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