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I just wrote a poem
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Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you . J* g7 W- g8 x0 [& G8 N7 D
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
! w2 m% ^$ w2 u6 B0 f Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
+ S# {5 C$ [; M2 O- s$ K% [3 } Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me . |" I' L; F; [% c- e, X5 H
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
5 f5 [4 G( V# A% L Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness ' J3 O! T3 [+ M
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
& x, T$ K f+ e' Y% S/ H3 S somehow I realized you were still in my heart
: S7 N; _; G# d, B8 \* x somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
5 ]; l. p6 i- K6 B! T+ s" w2 o somehow I lost myself inside again 6 ~4 N; Q. T" p1 b# q: T% H6 A
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
% O: N1 Y: p j somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
2 j" _% x6 N* H! F; s# m2 f8 ~Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................% O: K& y/ s3 U+ \1 k8 o9 J
Basically, I almost finish this poem# u3 s9 k5 S3 O1 C
I am 一个人de精彩
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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