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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem0 g8 d7 G: I+ s; i
Thanks a lot!!!$ x* [' h$ F5 f/ ~5 q
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
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Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world 4 C& l, R* I) @6 u1 m( ^0 \+ N
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me ! v- V. L* ?) G8 {3 @, ?1 V
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
0 e5 u7 L. U; I Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
# i" x; y t8 l% Q- s9 NHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
0 h& k9 O. p: v) n* A2 W8 g somehow I realized you were still in my heart
: [. l. u+ q. M, _2 e4 ^0 ^; B2 e/ \2 z somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness C! d5 S" ?/ _
somehow I lost myself inside again
3 F" P+ |1 L4 o3 mNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
; E" K$ d$ [# ]* m9 H somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
' g4 y8 A2 x* J$ T! G. c1 kFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................2 _- o! z2 C, N' q6 O4 g
Basically, I almost finish this poem$ l7 X3 v$ ^4 H: U( m( s; H- b3 X
I am 一个人de精彩
9 }, {- r# P1 D, Z I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
