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I just wrote a poem: q) @3 V f5 K( g' T& B/ K, C
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
7 i% R! v6 |. D0 s1 z' E5 H" HHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 8 N. W S1 M7 |3 Q- X% u" e
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us ) D% ?! ^3 q8 Z7 F+ E' s
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world & }+ m6 b. E' S9 G6 S7 o
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
. ~( Y( J8 {1 Y- v9 j Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind 2 }& W: K1 J4 e! h- o% S
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
$ n* y# ]2 H$ H: C6 hHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday & r' \2 }( L+ J& M" j9 H
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
( f8 F' t9 a' ?5 B; x l somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness( Y9 |7 c4 n7 l, {6 m. ~
somehow I lost myself inside again - Z9 C1 ^- R2 l9 z0 Y/ E( V2 j
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 1 w1 o- V6 p! p$ K
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion6 E7 z/ a, \6 }7 L8 I: g- O3 L8 e
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................: s! }' ?! q; n8 |( F: L* T
Basically, I almost finish this poem u( f8 v- K2 Q. k ^, c
I am 一个人de精彩
1 b- R" }8 i, |$ F# ~$ W6 d I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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