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I just wrote a poem
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* |5 d# G, A& X; mHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem1 Z# [6 l, K3 e: J
Thanks a lot!!!9 W2 d% K) i+ W, ]9 B9 n
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you ; F3 ], A& Y8 Y6 H8 |! l9 V
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
& M& A4 G# J6 b& L Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
# h( C. k: k# \/ o0 R Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
8 J S# M* x: o Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind . d0 z/ t, C7 a% N/ c1 L! H+ n
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness $ i% C# u8 y7 u- Q6 M1 | m/ f
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
: c! y8 a7 _/ |0 X6 y somehow I realized you were still in my heart ' w/ O0 n/ z0 a. `3 G$ U, x
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
2 E: h7 W# M! `2 U/ {7 E5 h somehow I lost myself inside again
0 i4 j! Y' }4 a" pNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
/ h$ G. P( ]) x: e3 w somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion" ^1 t+ ?' C( l' D1 t6 W) @
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................& @ L+ E5 S% e' B5 O/ S0 J0 o
Basically, I almost finish this poem& w8 P+ {+ O+ C [
I am 一个人de精彩: Z" a, a$ H% P6 ?
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.& g$ M- p8 N$ D7 B2 F8 {. q
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
