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I just wrote a poem/ n T& B+ I( _) S1 ]1 L. Y2 R% O
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.1 y$ h7 P6 d$ p
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem# w. G! p/ Q6 V q" F' n; |
Thanks a lot!!!
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" K. L, _0 _" VFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
& q4 F7 Z5 ^# o" p; ^* @ Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 7 w! I; y: P/ o- p
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world % u3 t0 l% [5 y3 z, K
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
5 z1 k/ Q3 w' m& k( P Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind 4 X0 k5 Z9 u0 k6 w6 c
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 5 m. n& ?0 P0 U
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
8 K6 K( Z0 o$ I8 g; s4 E! s somehow I realized you were still in my heart
0 o* a6 y" J& m$ Q somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
! P! d f* @7 O; p somehow I lost myself inside again
) D: ?: i, R$ M5 D" e/ {% G5 v1 A5 F MNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
+ @) m9 G7 Z! f3 r6 @' O somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
+ J) ]. v( e0 v( N+ VFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
* G( \9 _- l$ `8 U4 VBasically, I almost finish this poem# _- O! w7 p: }, F ~) g8 r
I am 一个人de精彩 C+ p# d" E% f* `6 Y, Y/ n
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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