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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you ) R) C2 ~$ f- P
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
9 b m- ]8 e& @; f6 g) S Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
+ ~0 S8 P8 J- t$ l' ^/ t8 b Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
, N! U3 I! |( V& w) i0 K% {# ~ Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind 0 a! i, q8 A) g4 f' Z. O
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
+ M: G' a1 k* j7 _However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday % I H, D" }1 z0 a
somehow I realized you were still in my heart " s5 N6 a" ^' g+ v
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
% N' Y3 c' Z: M5 Q: G somehow I lost myself inside again
% K1 T* Z. `: L. I! ~& \- x& e/ eNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 6 B# S- m, ^- e% I$ d
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
0 T+ G1 L% ]0 T- nFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
& F+ @! A* U9 Q1 |2 M# L" b/ sBasically, I almost finish this poem
( u, \8 C3 ^) W% }' a I am 一个人de精彩' ^. W, U/ ]* I
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.6 a& a: g. L9 }3 r% C' B7 Y& Y& K& N
But........ " m z0 A1 C6 R( G* h- r
Ironically? Isn't it? |
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