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I just wrote a poem
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6 B* q% |. W" pHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
9 q2 { E2 m$ z6 C* OThanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you + q8 \, T8 p" o$ T! i5 v. \- f
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 9 ^9 @1 m- Z' U+ h3 T2 S
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world / U6 \" |0 K( T2 g
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
- S8 O" S+ a' `0 _ Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind # t5 Z" j1 I% p$ X3 e
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness . o# w9 I5 x" I7 C; y5 ^- m: l
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
+ W/ P1 f$ Q- W7 F9 ] somehow I realized you were still in my heart 0 r) }+ q; ?$ l: O
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness0 \/ O! S$ b# y
somehow I lost myself inside again
2 G) ^, U$ p6 c4 P ]( `Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog / R- j }3 T' b T" t! |
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
+ Y' b Y. j1 V2 @! Z' uFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
3 [9 X* M! g! l2 h1 j) SBasically, I almost finish this poem9 T! y" D1 N: G
I am 一个人de精彩
4 R* N" N; u) b& J3 R I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.9 O9 h# d) \, o! k5 i% T/ P: P
But........ & f! X1 U) ?6 L2 Z' y+ Y
Ironically? Isn't it? |
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