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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
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Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
: t0 W" }5 n4 P( h Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me % ^0 t# D# w# U L2 m
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind - R7 S) }2 q0 I3 ]$ R
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness . Q$ U: t" T; P" l1 d
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday j5 `/ x, f2 ^% c: ]
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
9 d y$ X2 k$ e3 [& ~/ ~6 e0 v# i; ~ somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
: P# V2 x& q6 \ somehow I lost myself inside again 6 k2 d% a; q C
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog ! \& q* ] }, g6 e3 ~4 r+ L: c4 \
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
! n$ s, |2 E; D0 }+ ^" aFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................, \3 H4 z8 e$ V" f
Basically, I almost finish this poem; w0 W9 Z9 G* Q0 H* J: G) I
I am 一个人de精彩
- a8 A( h! G, d I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything. L: N7 `7 w3 `4 T2 Y$ x* X
But........ & R7 ?$ i0 ~0 f
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42