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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you ; ~* v9 ?, x( n' m
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
* }0 w8 h% m; \! \7 ^$ `5 N$ K' U) X Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world 5 N6 B( T8 l9 i$ T( [
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 7 ^0 F/ `0 [2 l% ?) D. u
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
$ [, Z. h2 z. d/ t/ r- \& y7 G Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
6 x6 a& m( P( [* d- b* x& R1 ]However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
% u8 C0 w7 [. X% k4 d somehow I realized you were still in my heart
% j( h3 e: @: D9 u somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness2 a8 v% y% ^6 c, D1 }
somehow I lost myself inside again
F6 L" [$ T3 W; b4 N6 \3 D; R N: Y: ]Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog % I+ W# K, Z8 `/ r( P
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion. g% H9 W; R6 @4 k. @3 J
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you....................................... @& I- P1 V- e% }+ e7 j4 v* f
Basically, I almost finish this poem2 ]2 T! c e/ E3 A5 H H
I am 一个人de精彩: o. s/ H. i2 h0 J# E, c
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
