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I just wrote a poem- o, B8 s5 E. R% C# {" A
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
) F# k8 s1 k. o/ fHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem! u: [6 t, z: e7 w; r; `
Thanks a lot!!!
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8 R' ]8 K* ]9 d, e8 a ^) mFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you ; a- S' t ]" g T$ l
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
& m. l, U5 a2 y9 \" N. P Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
# ?4 D) r: N, P( o' h6 ? Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me : e5 L" T. u) n7 d; I) n8 h
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
! y- B; L9 u( _ Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness + ^3 K+ X! B; C" o# |( I- Y/ E5 g
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday $ t1 Z: D% _8 O) k. M! f$ a
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
) x3 p! n |- C7 E3 W: n7 p# n( K& a somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
' [/ e2 x. [5 v- n) f somehow I lost myself inside again & t* l/ T- N4 Y5 r
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
/ k0 h' J1 `* r& L6 ^- K somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
& `! n/ m# ^0 f: J! YFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................% \- A- E( X$ q9 X
Basically, I almost finish this poem4 Y7 F0 w) c9 x0 H1 f
I am 一个人de精彩
" t( T* V$ Y8 Y1 K/ w, g5 J I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.3 K7 ^( }; V2 Y. ^; ?$ ~% h# n
But........
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