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I just wrote a poem$ ^4 Z' X7 a; f& u* {
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.! [: x% w/ Q# ]2 Q
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
L4 s+ Z+ J6 q+ a4 k( ]Thanks a lot!!!0 J$ Z- h: f U0 b
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+ m: Z4 p; j, W, \% a5 RFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you # V5 p& p8 `4 s: K+ P
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
8 }6 F# |7 b8 u1 q* v2 c+ U Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world . Z2 M0 l8 ]$ o
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 6 c6 `5 \( p$ p3 m5 S/ \" L
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
: l5 K P4 V% M) K0 g Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 9 f# N9 ?$ x" Y: W3 c5 d) E
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
" z$ @6 I0 }0 h somehow I realized you were still in my heart
" C H0 r1 i* V/ U3 ~6 O somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
$ J6 R8 B1 Y* k7 c8 }8 _! H somehow I lost myself inside again ( R( G' `' }# s( l( Y
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog , ~8 U) ?" D6 z, [9 n6 n: t" m
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion# v, m8 _3 F- m; h; ?4 U
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
, F/ w0 k9 u% Q3 X7 F* CBasically, I almost finish this poem2 p4 r) A8 `& u7 P
I am 一个人de精彩
: [% K* o/ e4 ~% g0 x I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
