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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem/ P3 _7 |! @0 O' V" |
Thanks a lot!!!% m2 n6 ~. R, e% \. n
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 2 ?# x/ R" X$ C3 ~% \5 B
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 2 E7 p' E( L4 v
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world " L, N; G1 I; X! o
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
3 K" ?% p# f8 N: W2 J Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
5 V- d6 d9 q6 J, }. O7 M Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
2 l, w2 f% c9 S+ w# c; C* SHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday # A: H( y! _) E7 b6 p2 F. t* _
somehow I realized you were still in my heart ) g/ @$ |! O2 c
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
& F# R" O8 [7 v [2 k somehow I lost myself inside again
. e- b6 p ~: I& N k0 W8 p! yNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog / K( B- B0 u/ c$ g6 |- F
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
! |0 Q J0 e. E0 J8 d3 U4 SFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
( o: i* n. o* [/ v8 i$ l) nBasically, I almost finish this poem
) I" W' d/ j7 X I am 一个人de精彩% c8 e0 [' m9 N, n1 z6 a- v5 v. e
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.$ s5 \1 L$ G; q2 H
But........
/ e8 I, K$ d4 T6 h9 {, j5 M( dIronically? Isn't it? |
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