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I just wrote a poem
( ~6 g I# {6 W% l ~# MBesides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
. ]* [$ P5 W% l& u/ Z6 I: ^- iHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
) m0 Q3 ~/ t% E, ~ n t/ lThanks a lot!!!
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- F7 Z2 U. A- s" @3 m. fFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
4 M6 F: W W$ X' w8 W. R, k Somehow I'd found something wrong with us ! ?4 t3 ]6 y9 t$ z+ i" b" V( Z5 L
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world ( l- x# z: z3 D. _$ @
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me ! J V/ Y3 z1 i' v9 ]7 G
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind $ ]; ?0 ?" d. L- @+ }, f
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness * L' Y2 d% z7 V5 U) Y
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
( P. C4 V1 E6 k, \5 t somehow I realized you were still in my heart
6 u, f' ^0 J& o* \+ C! b3 U somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness$ I( r9 d) t, [% K# e/ H- j
somehow I lost myself inside again
/ `, ^- x; M5 WNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
3 L6 z/ E: }, f% i3 G% y( { somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
" q) b, u. h% A0 Q/ oFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
3 p4 c2 j. _1 {0 ~2 cBasically, I almost finish this poem& o) X- c" q4 X
I am 一个人de精彩. p+ |5 w- [" Z
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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