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I just wrote a poem4 X) N& f" b! M2 v- h. y1 J
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog. ]! s- E8 m. d4 }5 h
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
7 w0 P1 H! j [- h1 mThanks a lot!!!6 C1 T2 P/ Y; @: A" O y/ H
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
. l( M6 D- R A( I. J Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
) X% S' F! Q8 @; R+ G$ w Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world / O4 D% R2 `! S# }* x/ ^
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
* \2 }% U+ I; M Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind ; c1 H2 D9 t" D8 ^9 X7 W4 g" S. [
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 9 J+ |, P( O0 S2 e
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
5 u! Q9 m* y3 [, B6 K1 U somehow I realized you were still in my heart
9 i9 u" p7 G1 |2 E( I. C- K somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
, P: i* y" ~0 ^ somehow I lost myself inside again
p1 U9 }1 p. I* KNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog : W4 S$ W& d6 S: ]0 `
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
, U0 J/ ?) ]! N+ T2 n6 yFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................) w( s: Q% m* `) b
Basically, I almost finish this poem
& J8 p- [- U7 r) w& ~/ _7 k4 Y I am 一个人de精彩
+ E3 i4 S7 ?: d I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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