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I just wrote a poem2 V9 C2 m8 b- x
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
+ u. y# N% @( d4 ^5 u5 ]: m7 B- THowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
' _" s! a" j. N {Thanks a lot!!!3 _: o1 ~7 d$ ~9 ^3 E: T
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you / D" [- I1 S+ Y, I7 {9 I b3 c
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us . U3 j' M2 k& Q% J# V: M, d4 L
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world : X: S2 E- O$ z
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
{4 S) d+ [) u# g% @( p Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
4 S% q: b9 n) w+ H8 S0 c/ W Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
3 E2 f- k6 B' r4 D- qHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
# Y$ T- y3 B0 X* R* H$ I( t/ R somehow I realized you were still in my heart * H7 `# o! s& {
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness) M) |& f9 k# k' h1 e$ h
somehow I lost myself inside again ' K; S, F2 C& q7 @7 k( D0 ]
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
9 U* n5 v0 r& o: l3 I* _ somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
; A7 w$ T2 s# i) u7 Q3 jFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
3 C1 y+ v2 F/ L& JBasically, I almost finish this poem
. J0 n: Q, w: J6 S I am 一个人de精彩: x9 k6 q0 O" w0 G. _, i5 e
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.! F/ n, _/ c+ a
But........ 3 Z' B6 n) D% [+ `+ Y( v7 u
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