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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem) \& J% `. a, G) ]! B- e
Thanks a lot!!!
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3 O3 e$ }) N$ X5 f8 Q& xFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you . D, m8 j: [ h; ?' ^( I
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
* g" F. `& q" x5 i5 y8 s Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world 9 n n% ^# S3 F) t) V
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me ! G- z& k& ~% O G* B
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
! c. s/ A% R6 C6 k Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
% n. X" Q; t' ^8 iHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
% ?) u5 t1 i9 B% ~ somehow I realized you were still in my heart , @: ?7 y6 G9 y- J
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness$ h7 L& Z1 K9 g) m7 {7 }: q
somehow I lost myself inside again
0 s" b/ W- R; rNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 9 S7 g. a1 J* z
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
: E) R- `$ b# |2 z5 rFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................6 ~2 ]9 [( k- D2 c9 u$ x6 ?
Basically, I almost finish this poem0 w7 }6 l3 _! ~" ?0 \2 l/ h: r: j
I am 一个人de精彩
d! V8 i6 X; n I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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