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I just wrote a poem
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% d! V, y1 g# Z+ \# R* _: wHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem% p- ?7 r3 ]4 G* R+ g" _
Thanks a lot!!!1 n; C6 r9 w k7 n* H
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you % a9 e' @8 |# {0 |1 l6 x
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
- U0 k, Y! k& S( {% v Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
5 |! a3 a( r4 @' e* X6 n+ G Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
$ z v% o3 Y4 I' J5 R Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind 8 s- n; |* q% }) C
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
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somehow I realized you were still in my heart , Y& d! G8 d: V
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
8 X# H, B* X; i! s4 P! F( i; s somehow I lost myself inside again
& a" K0 k: u# s2 cNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
9 n' {; S% c7 v$ q somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion$ `+ I6 a" y* Y$ }/ K9 D/ c) L/ w
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................* ? q! g* U- X8 }; x1 ^
Basically, I almost finish this poem
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I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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