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I just wrote a poem
# V% J: I' W; VBesides, I'd like to put it in my blog.( @9 X+ j( `% x0 f" A
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
) ? }1 ^: }3 VThanks a lot!!!
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! Q0 j; k& T( F, K( t7 lFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 7 B: i- _* L; f4 A& z
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
# z* v" T i. w8 A; l* g& P Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world ! V+ ]. \ \/ G: f! Z! A. Q3 o
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
& ^5 u# g- F& | Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
! N+ T! I+ G) r1 u& Z! u ~ Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness ! y) o9 P! ^7 K. [ ~' }9 {
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
* G% a7 n- m+ Z+ x& y4 S( X somehow I realized you were still in my heart
; J0 ~+ N, L7 m/ w N; B& C0 m somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness) G( {! e$ v2 {, |7 |; ]( W
somehow I lost myself inside again $ N! K* Y. `' k7 p [" F$ J
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
) L" W% w6 ~ M% Q somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion* D3 }! m$ v0 s2 c
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................0 j& T8 A3 T; ?6 A/ K# t
Basically, I almost finish this poem) I1 i- {. x0 F7 a& }
I am 一个人de精彩- q* X5 J. H* t0 s! \$ U# z
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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$ q2 l' L# g- D: Z5 ~Ironically? Isn't it? |
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