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I just wrote a poem
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; O$ R8 T: s K/ tHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem# r! b3 e0 {4 L8 Y; a
Thanks a lot!!!' H+ Y' R: H8 d4 ]; F
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you . {1 n _. ^8 |
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us & `$ m+ Y3 j9 N1 y' d/ f4 V! z0 r
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
/ w) |% g# }! h; ~# [* n) ~/ R Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
; G' n' z/ F, @- J6 O: t Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
4 n( b, S2 e L& s Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
3 F, @0 U0 h% C8 y, lHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
. D+ I1 h5 }2 z2 ]' y somehow I realized you were still in my heart
3 C# l; `0 Q( Y9 d somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness- B6 [# `2 w: m" N" x
somehow I lost myself inside again 9 D% b# \4 t1 ?+ N8 O
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog % ?% a9 A" I/ M u
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
! a8 O# A+ p) X9 @0 V/ ~# b6 uFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................- `* Z2 L0 y1 R; h+ ^. R
Basically, I almost finish this poem/ p% C( f7 ]1 T2 @% w
I am 一个人de精彩
Q% U$ Y3 G. E I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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