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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
6 g- y5 A% x# k! ]% IThanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
! S- H9 z% n9 W' X$ s5 m Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
! [2 q6 ]3 b3 \- f Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
; [2 ?" t" |3 Q- ]2 y6 ] Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
3 [+ k7 d0 o* Z; u9 G5 B9 w Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind 2 w- j1 X" O1 X: A* P" y
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
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somehow I realized you were still in my heart
" X( i0 }1 x6 A* o; k9 n somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness0 s( B: D% `3 H
somehow I lost myself inside again ; G; F4 X( N* ]
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
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Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................% E8 t- c0 V, T! z- K
Basically, I almost finish this poem
, ?8 Q2 C2 Z1 S$ }- Z- k% x I am 一个人de精彩
/ N9 {# o2 W1 ~; c& t I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.2 `7 F) O5 n" l O i
But........
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