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I just wrote a poem
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, c8 y: A2 u* T1 n) z8 v) v/ iHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem5 r" Q& B& o. p3 C
Thanks a lot!!!3 G: R* ]- g8 i- S
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 4 `$ J- o4 \: S9 _: k6 _- U
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 9 y ?5 [1 C6 V/ ^7 \
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world . E0 h0 e6 i2 H4 z& o) J$ `$ F' ^
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
8 h ?9 ]) p3 u! y& U# W Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
9 z1 t8 f" Q% Y! E. J Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
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, t, A4 W. v0 o6 E somehow I realized you were still in my heart
9 e+ r4 ^0 C3 k9 N# U- h: L3 z, f somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
, v% w7 ~* s2 L' k+ j+ o, ]: l somehow I lost myself inside again ; E. o' |3 q0 p3 V6 N3 |
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog " v& L, {+ N8 u1 p( i( |
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion( \8 q; j, a: R; B" s. G
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................) {: S B% x( y9 b0 j# i1 `
Basically, I almost finish this poem# x1 C7 I w: {0 e
I am 一个人de精彩6 b; s8 }- w4 D/ Z5 u$ k3 f
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.3 R7 C* s* y0 C# x
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42