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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem0 p+ t2 y# b3 C4 ^ P! l! _: F
Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
! r5 g- q( y% T( Q Somehow I'd found something wrong with us ! d. U7 m3 l; r5 c9 {$ Q
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world 7 }& p5 o3 c1 i" R0 i0 M2 B5 i
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
" U1 s( ~' q' `4 ^ Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
( l) X: i' s4 A$ B/ M s# @ Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
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somehow I realized you were still in my heart ! a$ j% m7 H. K
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness& R" h6 N6 m/ t! U6 `2 L
somehow I lost myself inside again . V: f; b$ O3 X: {7 G/ ]7 d
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
/ N h' n+ f4 {) G6 y5 V somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
$ z* P; t0 Z, i4 I/ e- q. M, l/ fFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................1 C% |! v" D* G/ T7 z/ x9 {; o* ^! a ~
Basically, I almost finish this poem1 p7 }+ c, S' n3 A* L
I am 一个人de精彩
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