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I just wrote a poem
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" E" Z+ U4 B6 W9 Z* kHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem3 a9 j/ \. p) N7 i4 y% B5 G' v9 ]
Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
9 `% w# ?/ o& h+ r Somehow I'd found something wrong with us ( @2 u. O) h) u
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world $ f9 {- D3 e, U0 r
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me & x; Z( u* [0 l# N( ~: d% K: Q8 D1 W
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind 2 [9 r8 C3 z( g- }/ c
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness " Z' b& y& ?- j. d0 V
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday ) c, Z' ]0 d$ p3 S6 ?9 a$ y) b- B' u
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
& ]! W7 G0 A( I& C# R5 p( ]; } somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
% F+ g* o4 t/ c" k. f1 R somehow I lost myself inside again
# S l8 ^% p3 ^! g. m9 sNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog ; y3 b* I) G3 P. T6 |
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion- _; \9 D2 M( `3 a
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
7 Q( j% e8 Z; P8 jBasically, I almost finish this poem
. ~& w$ R4 _7 S5 a r" h I am 一个人de精彩
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But........
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