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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem& D. `# E. V6 Q+ W& ^# E* R& i9 L
Thanks a lot!!!
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' @ L6 t2 K+ A0 QFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
G V3 y1 X; I) d8 d3 ^- @" h3 D Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
; U9 u! }1 g0 { Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
. o8 e/ p2 e% v& B+ H Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me # E& _) K7 L! X: Y3 [* k" C
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind ! |4 @$ R( |. e' b. L) v
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 8 f+ x' y& N( _/ |9 ?
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 4 M, p5 k [$ u9 b* @
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
?4 C/ p/ x M; x6 G: m somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
# a. \8 V3 n# m& h/ n1 W1 U( T somehow I lost myself inside again
0 _( v& `* z5 @5 i+ e, i2 N; S9 kNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 9 }5 y4 w& |* T
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
( U" c- u1 L: f0 D, N. ]; E/ tFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................' ~+ w; s& ~0 }. [
Basically, I almost finish this poem+ x2 Y: _' z! J
I am 一个人de精彩. A, \* Z C6 z& J
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything." h5 x$ l% `# S; Q! Z& p
But........
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