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I just wrote a poem* Y) Y$ ^3 {3 X2 d, l# v, ]# O [
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
0 `; D, o0 m% }# {However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
) x r' I2 c% RThanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
" p4 k4 I2 a& I# ~% b Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
& p; \% N1 h. J4 U" v' c Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
& S" X0 {# q( i" U; F8 R- p Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
1 T n1 D" b$ P* R* K6 s Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
' b5 b) L" G, V* f5 X" l Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
R( n. X& e: JHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
, t& v( _" |. ^5 U somehow I realized you were still in my heart
- {; L. i7 g0 P somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
8 l8 b, N2 J2 L$ o; r, h/ `3 H somehow I lost myself inside again
, z7 ^4 n( b8 w: `8 hNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
* f y( e& b) |6 h somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
$ [" @$ I/ T4 o( N' {, }% G7 qFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................# Z' t+ x& A/ S4 t" ^+ w. a) \
Basically, I almost finish this poem
$ X* ?5 H K n2 U& k+ u2 g8 Z I am 一个人de精彩
$ I: f6 a. t, p& h' q I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.7 F" m+ @8 ^( { F2 L" D/ X; m
But........ 4 @ E' T: q7 h' M3 @: j1 A- s
Ironically? Isn't it? |
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