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I just wrote a poem$ R; l k% h2 s# e+ K3 F( o
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.# {3 M3 C; `$ T6 R0 v2 Y; e1 L
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem+ Y3 `$ f! S5 b; q9 @
Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
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Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world ( J; a* L/ g9 B! U# B" \: u/ b+ {
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me ( W0 Z G8 W3 D8 F" U" h
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind + D7 l. Q( A; {9 ?4 T/ v
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 8 J) Z; P. e- Y8 O; x
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday - G- x0 o' l2 M6 \- {
somehow I realized you were still in my heart ) c1 C- v# N& P0 \- |9 D
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness: m+ Z3 n8 k% v M+ n
somehow I lost myself inside again
4 f" I# o: C: n) DNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
+ C7 d+ \1 q, s3 x. S5 ^ somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion+ i$ I3 w0 n1 V1 f
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
6 Z( j; Z- Z* H. @5 V/ kBasically, I almost finish this poem
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5 y4 l) m0 F- \; N I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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