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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
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0 x5 j8 A8 J$ n+ F5 ~3 ?2 `+ yFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
5 a( A* ?: b0 c/ w- Y Somehow I'd found something wrong with us . [0 @$ j& R( G4 P
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
5 P0 o+ o" O, N% s Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
5 ^5 @: Z0 B2 ^ Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind , ]& r7 t2 ~& p2 r9 h F9 }2 ^
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 0 F; j5 F: s9 p. M! q$ l
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
8 [2 `0 R- B% M% Q# m somehow I realized you were still in my heart $ \! p! X3 c4 ~' x" e
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
+ k; c, n: w; C& \3 [& ] somehow I lost myself inside again & y6 S4 I3 H! L, Q* A
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
9 `: W$ F2 m( e/ s& W: J1 r somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion' O( g5 O3 q% B0 A6 o0 @1 I
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................2 R) |: d; E6 a8 v" h
Basically, I almost finish this poem
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I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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