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I just wrote a poem
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7 ?3 K$ C/ E0 k. oHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
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( h C3 t' S3 o9 h Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world 2 ]9 ~* R& Y/ G, c D* G
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 5 m z8 F9 @ `- v; k! ]
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind E$ l; r; X2 Q
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 7 f* P' }' R9 J( {( o2 h
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday " h# y+ g6 X; ~' a) |# U9 W. `! @
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
/ @$ {* {7 m# H+ e5 b4 H/ [; F somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
4 c& y, V }' _ somehow I lost myself inside again " H5 s, Y1 s, i. j7 Y- T/ p% _' q: x
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog # @$ k2 x+ a" ~! m, j" B% @4 {
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion6 Y- ]6 ?/ ~. w+ a8 X: ~" z
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
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I am 一个人de精彩3 k, p6 Q9 \" V: W6 W( z
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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