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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
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Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
4 e. {* K* @" B8 e' O3 C$ o Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me , o7 h6 a1 g- P. E$ b9 m P
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
- l) M# P. ]+ e3 p; o: R Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness # F. k- U% P# @( j0 g8 Y
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 0 N( L: h1 i( Q7 r% `" d2 ^ s4 K
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
! U: A2 y/ D9 n/ I6 l4 t& @ k somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
9 X/ U! q& ^' \ somehow I lost myself inside again
. \7 ?& y4 @/ n) }- V! E3 i1 YNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
3 H4 W( V3 Q1 L$ O somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
) t* h: [" k$ K, I4 cFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
8 ~$ C; Y2 o$ X! y6 S& u/ _Basically, I almost finish this poem+ a2 w8 k% m) q
I am 一个人de精彩' [3 M2 }: v7 ^/ d9 [! _! P- ?
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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