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I just wrote a poem( Z+ c% m4 K1 S* i8 a
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
, X1 i1 c# z$ t# I& SHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem4 L. E6 Y% J% {4 V
Thanks a lot!!!' q' c3 `4 _9 r
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1 t) X" B" ?) [Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 7 d. q! l! n$ |8 S, _- K$ l
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us + {- H9 G1 e0 w$ ~
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
0 o9 ?0 F7 I. S& C$ \ Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
$ G% A" w4 e7 ]0 V( c4 | Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind % T1 O/ M' f: G1 G2 A" P: h1 E$ j
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 6 y: M- a% @( U! O& {* r; v( J
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday # `- |1 n7 O: f- ^ i! G# ?; }
somehow I realized you were still in my heart 1 g h$ d, e; {4 B C' G- W
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness. s, h# U( }; X; S
somehow I lost myself inside again
& e. F0 ` g1 F" dNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
* A% ]% R8 L8 g somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
* d6 {# e9 o' b2 FFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
3 E% f" P; V4 n; ]Basically, I almost finish this poem& X ?8 n- ? w0 l. W0 O% ^1 ]
I am 一个人de精彩; ?, q6 r. M0 U8 J R" Y
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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# W; ^0 f4 n. E# M' [! E' f' \! yIronically? Isn't it? |
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
