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I just wrote a poem
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Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
9 x! f9 s& Y' _) ^9 x( c$ H! L Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
2 l# Q a$ p7 } Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world % L2 P" Y+ ?7 m' g# u) ]8 E
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
9 s; a. P# |9 X& i Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
5 k' |4 P" ~+ I Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
% x& |% T/ L: B, U" kHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 3 @2 H1 Q5 L* X, |6 B8 d# p
somehow I realized you were still in my heart 7 b* |. p1 q' n& Q
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness% q- p7 z. b& S \0 ^
somehow I lost myself inside again
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somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
5 e2 l4 t* Z8 y; V" n0 s t' pFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
% u' G d" h4 l `* G. t5 m& PBasically, I almost finish this poem
4 D; o8 T7 [5 g. f2 J4 @+ u; V I am 一个人de精彩
. M9 N* c# ~# Q/ X I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.# D, H6 }4 x3 O9 g4 p7 F- M4 X
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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