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I just wrote a poem- J! F; g# l. o' R1 P, N' H" T$ }
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
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: r* [5 `" z- {: Q3 @Thanks a lot!!!
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* J" b2 `8 y& d& wFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you : J0 y) C# W4 I7 z' z
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us " k9 v0 U& O/ A, d3 K Y4 D
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world 5 I7 j5 V$ q5 D( v
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
" K, D% \ X) S Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind 3 q4 x9 G6 i4 I4 r! ?6 w1 Q5 R
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness - C5 Y9 p/ d" A# C8 U
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
, \- {# y) [) q* s3 v) w somehow I realized you were still in my heart
& v V# I! ~# u4 [: d$ h4 U% [ somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness5 |7 }- k) h# n- z& i
somehow I lost myself inside again & ~7 O, d' h3 R$ q7 I. ^
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
# s0 T& s9 i% h5 Q somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
2 ~2 L9 R7 b2 bFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
1 t" _7 j3 _3 a0 C2 X ?: CBasically, I almost finish this poem
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I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.4 z9 {) ]' L/ Y/ s
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