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I just wrote a poem, @# F6 ]9 P+ i
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
( m) M4 t8 \, [3 ^However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
7 `4 S: x( J) [6 i. qThanks a lot!!!( H1 y, l2 T1 t6 o- n
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you , b, t# f8 y/ x% x4 a6 A
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
. A: e, P3 |# N9 E9 B4 G: E Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world ) o# z3 U* Y/ k0 g/ i+ L
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
! s; Y6 A" _. T' u* Y8 U2 b Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
; ^7 o: \" f0 P( L1 O Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness " o, E) ~# J4 c/ r# `: A G
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 6 @$ O4 a ~( X! U
somehow I realized you were still in my heart 2 G: m: w! I- y' b2 f$ e; u7 C
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
/ w: G& f& P5 I" \; O somehow I lost myself inside again 9 r# z- o/ C. h7 d. a
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog + Y7 X9 I! B6 {! g& |$ w. z
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
1 |6 T, g# q+ B# JFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................, H8 a1 }, ]2 L5 q6 [$ A
Basically, I almost finish this poem
4 ~# r2 Q: R! v- V I am 一个人de精彩
1 h! L; j( I1 F9 H( J' U- T I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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