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I just wrote a poem, F% r2 Y: u# K' H0 j% W: H
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.5 s2 Z$ C8 A7 n" S, U, v4 B
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem8 u) D- f: U$ n$ W: z/ p( [5 }
Thanks a lot!!!
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J. {0 f: P' VFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
D2 Q* Z2 ]( K: |, r7 V$ v1 x6 ? Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
' y( l8 j/ k$ C% A Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
7 \# K. J* u5 p/ t- E& g, e. N Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
2 V. h/ o/ O) z* X Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
1 {0 m# a: @* R/ N9 |. O Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 2 \( j. \6 y2 N! A2 t4 z
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 0 j! M- R: `% }2 s
somehow I realized you were still in my heart ( |. B9 _# d- i9 x
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
q2 |/ j; \# P F5 r somehow I lost myself inside again
' a4 _6 N0 w- z& D2 M' FNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog , f8 U4 ~* f& M' R- a/ \ K, g
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
& T$ ~5 \* K" BFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................0 {7 I5 _; R# ?! s
Basically, I almost finish this poem# N/ d6 I; P6 s1 c5 \
I am 一个人de精彩
. N: V$ e* t# _4 i$ F3 | I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.( g3 s3 x2 t; W2 f* p- ]) n
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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