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I just wrote a poem1 D) p( \0 ~4 }, ~3 f" ~
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
3 N6 R/ S( J/ M8 KHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
( D% r0 Q- J+ i. ]$ M9 nThanks a lot!!!5 z5 Y3 c$ K1 x' V
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
0 `$ C1 A. l& z8 Q0 S Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 3 P/ p6 X! O8 x* I
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
; Y* s# D _# c5 u- @# N Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
/ L4 |8 W. |0 j9 l Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
, a4 a+ t) a) P) ^! l Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
- c2 t4 c9 \& i" pHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
% h6 A4 d, D+ m2 ~, b1 \+ C somehow I realized you were still in my heart
. @$ `3 q3 E. ]" y( o somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
8 |& q3 V( d- z( S; R$ {9 [ somehow I lost myself inside again
9 E/ G+ q4 b" V$ \- |+ W0 m1 }/ ^: sNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog . T9 I3 w* n& L' y# j; q
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
4 o) z, y9 R' x* H' u8 z9 CFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................5 l5 o6 c+ G+ B J8 J
Basically, I almost finish this poem
, Y( ]7 G7 W( s! P5 J8 D I am 一个人de精彩
7 i5 q' @% l1 G/ J I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
