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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem: e' X/ {6 |+ c4 |
Thanks a lot!!!- v7 W( W$ c3 v; v+ ^
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 2 }6 [3 M- p" x3 K8 a p% A
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us - F5 U* G0 Q9 J6 j( V* f
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
" l- y; f$ g2 k Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
" l- C% g; D/ ]6 ?. p Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind 1 i4 e5 G+ Q3 g! r
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
- M \ p3 [# K& a' |However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
: a3 w; A( K8 F4 O- ~/ E somehow I realized you were still in my heart * K# D: w+ e ~2 j& @) _/ ]6 m
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
% f% j1 m; V2 y j+ }- L somehow I lost myself inside again 5 t: s4 k& u \0 E/ D: [
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
- K; ]( r6 K9 p3 |+ c& w somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
" v5 |: A- c, t4 z- H( a# oFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................0 @, e/ }3 _3 ]- d& f H' N' W' ]
Basically, I almost finish this poem% H$ f4 p5 ^: l1 I/ q' `; _
I am 一个人de精彩4 v, b3 D( N# [- F
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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, X* A- a6 S* `3 L3 \ J! `2 {Ironically? Isn't it? |
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
