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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem p2 U9 E+ z$ ~& {+ a' ^1 t. N6 I+ X- C
Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you # Y0 G1 K3 @' g4 O7 N# A: _4 H
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
( J! @- v1 X5 ?/ F; `4 l Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world * {: S0 s: r2 J
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me ! C* F8 M& a( W' M
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
9 R+ H+ w! |) b v Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness + z! ~! Q& ^4 n% \& x
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 6 s* F/ P! h0 p
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
) A! Z% r0 w6 S, {% v' O5 D somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness0 _/ [ J d: v
somehow I lost myself inside again % _, }- q# e9 }( d' n2 k5 f" n, T
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog " V4 t; ?/ c; N7 _ b' h7 N
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion9 f/ B' L+ U( A* n3 }
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
9 W. S+ w- m1 C+ ]- n; ?Basically, I almost finish this poem
9 D6 j9 T/ H1 d: p2 i0 H I am 一个人de精彩9 A8 f6 {5 x1 K" f
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
