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I just wrote a poem
5 g. B, g; C! z! w+ ?Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
$ t- ?; x5 n& }' Y( s. [ `) R) g; bHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
6 }! U# O( `" e8 u, WThanks a lot!!!
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& u8 C- ?$ I1 [' j' q% b7 ]Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
& `, ^4 L7 I8 y& ]( y Somehow I'd found something wrong with us " y" u2 v9 E( T' b3 R N6 J
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world ( d7 r5 a5 t9 w6 Z9 l, l" q
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
- r) v* p' Y" R5 O+ e Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind ; J0 c% k& P" o U
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness ( K, e7 w6 R) s
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 9 E3 `7 _3 U- d' y4 P
somehow I realized you were still in my heart $ m1 [+ J) ^! M" Z4 O- f5 b a
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness6 Z& G! r; p$ K; u$ B; E# d- g; x
somehow I lost myself inside again * M r) E$ g8 u& s
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
( Z% H/ ]" x% f) N$ K; A+ C( Z) U somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
- \; Y, c0 c; u- D" {Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
* E' r: S* q; \) ~2 E$ q P0 X# NBasically, I almost finish this poem6 G6 D X9 F$ S4 U4 V
I am 一个人de精彩
6 r0 u; T! N& a. {* r3 z7 Q I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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3 P4 k4 g; ] o& J: j% rIronically? Isn't it? |
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