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I just wrote a poem
$ L5 i# v& Y0 ]2 D; }+ Y" W" [Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
; h& p s- c/ T! c4 NHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
2 h6 o) t! _! }" iThanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you @' R3 W/ D$ H* i4 h! V; k
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
1 G8 x& }% g3 L5 n% A+ J Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world & P9 P& ?+ O, |+ N. o* l; l
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 5 g8 G. `+ D: I6 y; E7 V# z! j
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind ! q" q. a" S% j6 |$ ?) k) W, R) P0 V& B
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness - T/ z3 i, S/ }7 d
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
) c3 x$ M3 @0 O" u y- D9 o somehow I realized you were still in my heart
. `! I5 @, z! f somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
8 n2 }% o) T; U% h somehow I lost myself inside again
- l3 E6 P0 E- }Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
2 u) A* `) Q. l% _ somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
$ g8 w' K- d, dFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
( J9 }# ~+ Q9 m: M4 CBasically, I almost finish this poem' c3 z# T! W1 ] F+ i6 y
I am 一个人de精彩4 X& V4 D2 L$ I% c( B% z0 J- ?
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.8 t2 @) A& |* a1 i, U i
But........
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