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I just wrote a poem. Y" _# s( G5 \4 {* E
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.9 }5 e# X5 K6 p) F2 K$ W9 x
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem* |' W) r' F( ?( {9 o" e$ O
Thanks a lot!!!% F6 e0 D5 t; E
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, ?6 A% Z4 B6 ^6 {7 eFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
( w2 [- {; k4 E3 S Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
- G2 ~% J5 P x. M) A! F {2 @$ G Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
/ |+ S7 a' A1 r: d Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
) e$ N* |0 \" G6 X0 ` Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind ) [. S9 n6 Y) |$ {8 r
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
4 V. N- Y4 [) X/ e9 O3 u9 OHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday . F: D. w& W7 E' e0 t @1 E6 ^
somehow I realized you were still in my heart - C9 r5 R! A6 k N3 j+ O- |7 {
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness1 p4 }9 ~3 e* s% H. s# Q' e
somehow I lost myself inside again ) s" B) ~0 x! y
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 0 g* b: y2 ~# L) F& h" V8 h
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
& P+ P& a/ Z4 h, o! u0 WFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
& e6 K7 A# k" f& f4 oBasically, I almost finish this poem
1 d9 \. d" V" G; q I am 一个人de精彩
& U) h+ l6 y. g3 I- O( F. O1 T I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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9 Y0 B5 ^: y6 M: p4 I5 s5 pIronically? Isn't it? |
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
