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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem# q p6 f0 k6 l# ]3 m2 m
Thanks a lot!!!2 A7 k7 x1 N) V8 i/ u& Z y
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
7 \2 |: J" E9 O7 K7 V+ W9 Y Somehow I'd found something wrong with us % Z: {0 `' u& W+ m5 w
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
2 X8 |* U8 {8 h+ T* z0 ?+ s, F Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 3 t( t( b' a4 O/ c$ E4 v! Z. c$ E
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
/ W# q( ^1 p" X& |" E Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness B$ x! I- H* ?
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday . _$ O1 ~( X2 _2 o; z
somehow I realized you were still in my heart : c& L) s. n; W! X! ?! v
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
3 N4 k3 ]# i! x somehow I lost myself inside again
+ M& Q: e: R$ ?0 ]Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 7 n2 E% q1 O+ b: Z' D. y: x
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion' a* I) x# S1 q: W- q( Z
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
8 g3 w% A0 Y, Z6 y6 y) b: C6 hBasically, I almost finish this poem+ u N3 ?( X6 b0 r) J; n" l' z
I am 一个人de精彩
7 M- Y0 b2 D! B I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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