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I just wrote a poem5 Z* ?8 J+ g3 w7 l+ w5 ]8 ]9 V! [. Y
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
! s7 R" j% {. N' b; P) h3 RHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem/ Q3 u }9 |4 W8 |. X3 Q
Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
# N9 p0 }1 R9 F Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
; |# J" k6 w& @ Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world & U7 k- z5 O# A- z" I. P
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me # A# j; Y" [- Y$ Q1 h9 h
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind % e& y/ w# C' I5 G* `, w0 b9 T
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
, L( r4 J4 a* w& RHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday * V3 R: k$ [$ O, |
somehow I realized you were still in my heart + L u' N+ { u) S* w% ~
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness: B6 u' R: \5 U2 [/ a% h# m! z
somehow I lost myself inside again . |3 y6 X# @% g# u8 b
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
) C3 s: l+ j8 q# R# }; D somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion; ?" G2 `. J1 U% M. x
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................$ j: A4 r" K" f g$ c7 t/ {
Basically, I almost finish this poem' i5 Q8 K7 b0 A* }, f
I am 一个人de精彩
8 @3 L: n: l, }1 J# _ I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.0 Q ?, T9 O/ j8 r
But........
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