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I just wrote a poem5 \5 Z3 V/ y* b( o1 w* K' N1 O
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog." o" Z1 N3 e. o# ^
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem, o( _' Z( j( b @6 N- d
Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you $ `3 _5 [5 X1 H8 G, H; P1 e
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 3 O9 h; M9 X+ T! X0 N/ U
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world , _3 I0 I, ]+ T) m$ p4 i, E5 M
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
: l/ N4 }. g9 I Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind 3 r' V" z, U0 _5 L6 E
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness % P0 a4 v; ]9 Z/ ]
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
* l% z$ Q9 v; W somehow I realized you were still in my heart
, z% M- }' Q2 c! e4 ^1 ^- _' F somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness/ I- l7 M' n3 P" d4 D |
somehow I lost myself inside again ; C0 j- Y2 }: n) |2 |6 j f0 B
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog # q2 w0 ~. V5 M) M
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
1 K, K/ T) C+ q& yFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
$ o5 P* `5 n# z# A1 x4 qBasically, I almost finish this poem2 j: [" }& L. S- [- |" R
I am 一个人de精彩
% `) K* @. z& l/ c I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.' b( x4 ?) R5 ~ [8 |- u% p
But........
' \- D, J; T) A: `Ironically? Isn't it? |
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