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I just wrote a poem* T7 Y( ~1 @ C3 o3 o2 l
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
; Z% }! Z/ L8 R) w1 k& JHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem/ |4 I, _6 V, y/ J5 A7 b5 A
Thanks a lot!!!
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7 C) [5 U' Z3 j) t: D0 RFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you + P3 _- q7 r. e f
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
8 G8 D \9 ~5 O* C/ G) F Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world , K1 |9 u- X5 V* n, h
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
2 H# `5 d) T1 s& }- ]7 U, z6 G Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind ( T/ X& Q. D, O
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
; R. o6 p; P6 SHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
+ |: q8 _) g' H somehow I realized you were still in my heart 9 T! J2 R* Z1 C" C7 j
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness8 M. ]/ D5 u% M" D4 N' _
somehow I lost myself inside again
" b3 ?" P" P- v' I$ d8 y4 TNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 0 \8 j4 c0 n& b3 W* a
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion ]/ I/ x; V: Q! r6 F7 E
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................+ x x, Q, q( {( a2 N# y# R$ Q
Basically, I almost finish this poem
8 F% y5 D! z# ^7 O0 d I am 一个人de精彩) P7 h: r' W O8 m
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.9 [& S- N3 p- N% p
But........
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