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I just wrote a poem
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- k6 ?8 z# r8 d5 F/ nHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
( f& F6 d3 [( g G9 MThanks a lot!!!3 m4 Q8 x" C/ u: }0 Y# ^" I
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$ M9 Q# ~% k$ m' N- WFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
. d6 v$ o+ X. g Z2 L: b4 Q Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
$ V5 ~# ]! u: Y- n0 _( n4 f' w8 P Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world ) _$ b* h: K) |( f1 A1 e
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 4 m" y6 K- Q( t; {0 u$ v2 ~
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
1 R4 w# h( A# B, @8 Z) i- B Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
- y* v& D/ _( QHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday ' j* ^$ {5 P6 }
somehow I realized you were still in my heart 3 X( |* s1 M. V$ v, y4 t
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
4 }9 ?4 C, W$ m. a4 f somehow I lost myself inside again
& u" H7 j6 O3 @6 zNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
" V j( B* ?( F8 f9 a# G somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion" B) T3 o4 z9 y. g7 a
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................) _* m. M- e& D0 S6 ?% w& _
Basically, I almost finish this poem2 ]. R( j5 O, n6 b9 K3 o
I am 一个人de精彩& V' G1 z u O
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.9 V6 w7 B* q0 d* h$ ?. c1 _
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
