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I just wrote a poem0 S+ r( G# S: N. G6 D. e9 i
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.7 x6 }/ c3 U; E; y7 A- W
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem, _+ n; E# ^- r0 h
Thanks a lot!!!+ e% U4 _7 M5 K+ N" Q) D
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you * c& d) j, p% |
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
( G/ R @5 ]/ L, n" H$ ?% N' L* I Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world - W6 Z& }0 B% R: \9 h$ J
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me & i+ A+ Z7 d& B, l9 I5 N
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
; g9 j: {" W7 ?' Z3 N. V( X7 k Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness * x/ D9 m1 `( e* I
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 1 j5 v6 j8 h3 d2 Z
somehow I realized you were still in my heart 9 L9 ~- l+ x* {6 m5 o1 Y
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
@0 K- e1 V/ k5 Y; D* L$ B somehow I lost myself inside again
8 _2 v8 [: I. r1 \Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 5 f2 a8 L. C0 d: u! a4 ~
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
$ R. @1 d8 ?- mFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
! Q9 R4 G- }# P' zBasically, I almost finish this poem
) p' B$ S. s& V7 a2 Q I am 一个人de精彩
5 ]$ @! N0 W- L' a9 v I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
/ ^& i. V! B% ]( h; P8 M8 fBut........ : o; J- x" i1 O: W2 b) Y
Ironically? Isn't it? |
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