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I just wrote a poem4 x7 ?& Q* k1 p3 ~. I: e8 _% G7 g
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
|! E3 H' V3 d1 wHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem4 D% n# F( m0 j* }
Thanks a lot!!!! g/ e8 j& W( X( f4 N& P$ A8 u
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7 ]5 S0 [6 `# X( o! rFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you % T, \0 Y# D) N4 w( E$ L4 o
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
+ `) t8 I3 @- n1 }# K Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world / J& q* @7 k4 D9 i1 c* [: t& _! d
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me + s5 h6 R. h: {
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
& v2 e. ?: [5 f: z9 v% O Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
7 }/ X3 C* A7 K4 |3 i* RHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
3 t b" s/ P- m' K( @1 b' L somehow I realized you were still in my heart
& _2 P" V1 [6 z& X* R somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
) v& i: K' x9 ^4 H. ^7 y somehow I lost myself inside again
. u( d; F: X" f( [; {Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog ( C8 x! B0 A) d3 B. T9 t+ x
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
, O. k6 M4 F6 [% W8 i; O4 N4 `/ WFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................5 j" S6 s9 q1 _! I
Basically, I almost finish this poem
8 f8 k" g* R1 a/ R I am 一个人de精彩
. N( d+ J/ b0 X I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.& S1 }/ H7 F+ U5 T. T1 D4 X" Q$ B
But........
2 ~+ D: J# U5 r9 B+ aIronically? Isn't it? |
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