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I just wrote a poem# @! W8 ?8 V# A
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
* { P9 Y1 U& P h' d2 Z, eHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
7 c1 b" A6 u9 `2 M9 KThanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you ) B0 M+ m+ B/ l5 R
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 4 q- D. |4 \; P; k" q# A2 e% V
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
9 e" x" j* C4 j8 P Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
- E/ J$ w, [6 }* C$ W Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
6 u5 T+ E8 o( f" i; n Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness " S* l: i) J3 s2 i7 e
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
0 a7 R* p' R9 e, z* A! P- y z somehow I realized you were still in my heart " i7 \7 I# P) w
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness5 U; v2 W# x& c
somehow I lost myself inside again 0 p M% O3 @ S; V9 I
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
' z- z7 u1 r8 |2 I/ {+ s q, } somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
5 h {# V' S' c. BFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................, D6 p6 Z0 a l8 v5 o
Basically, I almost finish this poem
3 b/ `4 E1 h) Z$ i I am 一个人de精彩
F( Z& G8 w! _! H; d+ s8 q I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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