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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem p+ T$ R; n- B: m; ]1 ?+ o1 z
Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 5 w: m% j! }) p, p2 \
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
( W$ E9 P8 z! W6 \9 O1 j Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
; g V- ]% R7 V* s! x Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me # e6 n2 a. }) j1 h9 a; T
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
" o# X! {+ @0 m! ~: \" ~ Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
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somehow I realized you were still in my heart
7 b7 n7 N5 g, n& S somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness6 k# e& W7 x9 q
somehow I lost myself inside again
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% F2 y; }- c6 I/ S; T somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
6 K5 N+ o! z0 a2 Z( ~- |Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................) b4 N6 ?$ U2 N9 N" Z) m( V5 _
Basically, I almost finish this poem
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But........
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