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I just wrote a poem
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" Y( _8 i& B! l- uThanks a lot!!!( y, _- [4 U. g, e8 C7 _
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 8 m7 g+ f$ I6 \' E0 F3 r- Y
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
; I; ?1 t$ }9 Z2 y$ m- { Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world ; _9 F K2 E; b9 G
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 4 V, I2 ] z0 k
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind ) t* c3 h& H8 z
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
4 V2 S* C4 W6 R& Y3 fHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
* |; f# f& w7 Q0 a( M9 l: ^ somehow I realized you were still in my heart - x7 g( v0 H1 y4 ?: ]1 O/ d# f& u
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
. E5 I5 i- K/ w7 ^# f% A4 m somehow I lost myself inside again
+ n s9 h8 d; I7 S) C, `; UNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
% \' k5 V8 v' v7 _ @0 u somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion; {3 r A+ B/ H. _& Y1 i; h
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................% r, x2 G+ [% l& k% {. W5 i; G
Basically, I almost finish this poem
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I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
