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I just wrote a poem
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2 z3 \% o( y4 W @9 GHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you # i8 x! @7 k/ z) E
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
$ R2 y0 C8 k6 U8 v+ Y Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
4 j0 D% |7 v9 @ I3 B6 C7 u0 z Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
, g4 z3 Y0 y6 [ Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
8 \; p$ v q9 l* e2 j* ? Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 3 h" e- q* D# l0 o1 w; Q
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
# R& ^. g6 }) n3 C/ s, x! K2 A1 | somehow I realized you were still in my heart
$ n$ m9 P2 e% \ somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
4 {5 n+ C- H; s F# W0 I: h somehow I lost myself inside again & n1 o, q6 A% H1 H/ }( C- b
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog # F. b) N4 y% x6 R0 V! N0 d1 }
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion# B! ]3 Q: `! B0 u$ w# ]% f
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................6 ]% ?8 @( b: a% {% L
Basically, I almost finish this poem
: G% r% ^4 }. O& Q4 n I am 一个人de精彩
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发表于 2008-1-17 21:16
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
