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I just wrote a poem2 `$ N# K% i0 B5 B5 E
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.9 p. X+ u& q3 D0 p% e8 I
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem: Y' ^0 f7 e' {' T) M
Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you . j* _9 C' X! t7 ]% F* R
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us " H7 p; s1 L% I" A$ V
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
& o) }% r3 Q% X0 V8 |7 {2 j Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
: f. l4 `6 r' m7 N Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind ) H' k. g- C6 c( w! ?4 A
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
$ g1 N% r m1 J8 d5 O, [However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday ( H+ O' N2 Y5 l+ Y7 R& S
somehow I realized you were still in my heart ' J3 h. T* P) q" y9 j( Z
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness$ _& L( Q1 q6 [6 r: x0 B
somehow I lost myself inside again - q+ Q- O4 W: ?0 H' Q6 T
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 1 ^* e( w6 f) R H5 M# {, z
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion8 K: Z1 L% V6 D+ g3 g6 P
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................- |* P$ O' Y/ ~" |6 T/ o
Basically, I almost finish this poem
9 o0 s- J2 \2 W6 T( ~1 i4 y( N5 s I am 一个人de精彩 U4 I5 |: _2 d6 o6 c
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.0 h( J/ W' D; _: T" |: }: u/ R
But........
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
