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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
7 _5 h! r* n! E7 O; TThanks a lot!!!
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& p* a: c+ i& r! b9 A4 iFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
$ L, M. Q; J& G* m0 x; X* O- A; e Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 2 T* n9 g V* F7 J* n, w. ?2 A9 k
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world 5 @$ {3 U" q# g/ K1 x
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
9 \5 L# Y2 i) J7 i/ h' v& P Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
. x* L. d0 w( j/ M! V" v6 h Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
" j9 h* I, \# \$ X/ }2 C5 oHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 5 D) }4 F& S: }: @/ u4 p o& b5 x
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
- H+ t' q$ F) ?4 e" j! q somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness2 @/ l8 D8 C+ f3 f5 B
somehow I lost myself inside again : }) V- g5 B; R" z& z5 K
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 4 l. u& y# \* Y% l5 D( j( P# c
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion/ t- D0 M2 x- s( `# u
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
4 G5 x0 o0 A: M, O" iBasically, I almost finish this poem
6 |. g* y" U( Z, P6 p! z' m' g I am 一个人de精彩
* A7 |( E6 p8 s: F- f. g I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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