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I just wrote a poem% r6 X4 p! s- k
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
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Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you , J8 A; c/ g! V# I' P5 \7 E
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us - N; p) W; N* `7 J" i4 G G
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
7 g4 N& ` O u5 i: A. j Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me + o+ `( ^9 _& s3 g9 B. U
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
5 L" \ K- n$ l2 w u8 S4 ~ Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness - _' n9 S/ B2 g: |2 x- x7 g O4 i% G
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday : R3 {- n0 }4 ]4 d# ~* p
somehow I realized you were still in my heart # d1 I% }- q% p' C
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness, }* i; i d. o2 u% D
somehow I lost myself inside again 9 T$ B- W: I# H
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
! Q3 R! l/ ~0 b3 {/ P somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion4 M# r# r4 q4 @% [ ?
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................2 `$ S- E) F$ U( f0 a
Basically, I almost finish this poem7 W% U" X5 }4 ~; N# }, Y
I am 一个人de精彩# m& l% H0 i9 R
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
