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I just wrote a poem3 P5 A% M7 F+ w- U. a
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
) U2 k1 l! O# `( f- d9 ^* vHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
% x! n# w9 [5 yThanks a lot!!!- P F' P- a7 u" ^5 J% d6 a0 c
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you , b2 D7 _% a9 J" V
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us ' J' [4 X/ m% z7 _" ]
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world . k. S) y+ C- \% p6 t8 \- n; i
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
1 `, V6 W* J# M- t8 F Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
' j1 D& W `& L6 @- ^ Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
?+ H0 m/ l9 A) K/ Z- Q+ W" CHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday & x' K1 j! p+ e% T
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
, W! z$ Q' f# D: y4 ~8 U/ o somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness5 A0 d, H9 U$ {, X" T
somehow I lost myself inside again
' q. ]( J$ W/ ~7 O% gNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog ' a S; M' D: _3 P# M# f
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
! a j# R/ [6 M' d" i" wFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
# h3 ^, T; Y* W) a3 r- bBasically, I almost finish this poem
* H; O. J! z( U4 D- I I am 一个人de精彩: C8 L* w% q5 G( d; }
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
