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I just wrote a poem
: U' ~% A/ P3 p6 eBesides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
. o( E7 q. z7 R+ KHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
3 A% M J) P( d" [! zThanks a lot!!!- ]+ D; C# N$ ^4 X
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, r: K7 F l3 v- t5 LFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
9 j! h# l2 m+ | Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 1 Q1 m8 T$ Y# l6 s& q$ a
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world : f) F8 a, f: l' {5 P8 y
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
8 R$ q$ l* x8 K# X8 e& v% U Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
0 W( W- V) i+ w4 @( Z8 n$ d Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness * h6 W; E7 J) N/ w
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
9 Z) ? r/ ^0 L) v somehow I realized you were still in my heart + T0 m, |. I! H- ?# W
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
: l) B& v7 T3 W+ V; g8 d somehow I lost myself inside again
4 J% u+ H) T) K( N5 ANow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
# J& d; {0 _3 k) [( Q somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion7 W4 r- D, `. w' S$ f3 }* J& |
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................- g3 k% x3 D& ^0 y4 p
Basically, I almost finish this poem
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I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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