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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
3 ^( f: h' ?2 [4 F6 yThanks a lot!!!4 c) d! N) }+ A0 m- G9 w: T
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 6 J7 n5 h4 N' E% |5 x2 \, g% W
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
8 B8 r1 j( H/ X: T2 `/ m Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world ' @6 x* p X2 L8 M: W4 J
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
& C5 d2 R* t) [7 h: R# K: w# z Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
( s) Q8 q/ b" N Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness ( I1 ?5 G9 x' X; i! |/ |
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
5 ?$ d0 t2 S) i" l l4 b somehow I realized you were still in my heart
, K0 |; [- G) R/ d+ s somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness4 i1 d% ~: i8 g+ l
somehow I lost myself inside again
( s0 y& T6 {2 _- X# q* S/ ENow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
# B" `* M0 Z$ \ ^6 q somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
- H% E* t3 W/ {( o% LFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you....................................... ?2 Q, ^$ [$ W1 {1 ^% s
Basically, I almost finish this poem" m7 J2 W, x$ x" A. E
I am 一个人de精彩
: w: ^4 p1 o( y! w; ?- n I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.' w! N1 E. ?6 R: E
But........
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
