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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
H3 y6 ^0 ~) GThanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 3 T3 L( g: O8 C+ S4 z' b
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us * h& L& H; J- G; O6 @5 Y) t
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world 4 D! C9 V5 R2 E7 p0 Z+ [/ D$ P
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me ' x/ c6 Q0 ^. v; w
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind ; U( a9 y5 x; v# s# s0 h
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
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! { Z. B& @, v somehow I realized you were still in my heart : j6 k# N3 ?- ?5 j, y4 d B
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness' v) C, z8 t+ R6 F5 a# ~ p0 X: I
somehow I lost myself inside again 0 a l+ C8 S8 j4 b" X
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
+ j( `' J1 v C+ @/ q# Z somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion4 \( j, v' m9 i. [9 v
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you....................................... I3 n" ]6 ?5 B+ b. M
Basically, I almost finish this poem
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I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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