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I just wrote a poem
6 L1 X5 Q( C d1 i E9 xBesides, I'd like to put it in my blog.7 E1 N! b8 y6 ~3 }1 {! r K7 s+ e
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem, X4 W9 a) s# C+ X2 [4 U, C
Thanks a lot!!!9 ?0 V m4 K u! \
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you * e9 A/ K9 f% W3 N o
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
" Z/ ~! C# b7 O1 b& P5 x" a Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world ; _3 \2 z h' U" p" s/ O' {
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 5 l0 i5 m4 U$ c
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
) |& y! A$ e/ G$ b$ Y9 a6 R Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness " ~& h! S' G. L+ [' \8 X
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
& Z, \ C# v9 s somehow I realized you were still in my heart
4 Z/ K- z8 `( W% T somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness7 q @1 Y9 m. S
somehow I lost myself inside again 8 Z5 v# |! K+ d0 {! @
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog * Z! B6 U$ Y: ?" Y
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion& D% @+ ~( v+ x: i
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
/ M W) J# A& r2 `0 JBasically, I almost finish this poem0 f. u& M7 f' ]* O% L4 n. R
I am 一个人de精彩0 P" ]2 N" y5 V, @0 R: ]/ Q, U
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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* o- j9 w" k! z0 wIronically? Isn't it? |
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
