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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
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/ D/ N3 B; Q) |4 s$ g; ]. vFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
; Y, D: J+ T! Y( k Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
* Q8 O0 r9 m) ~ Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
) q' T; T( {7 q' s9 z4 ^, P2 P Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
4 S& h* U g0 v, c( ? Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
: D U8 X2 U# ]* P3 m4 V Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness % @$ n+ J1 Q, e; i$ ^0 o, [5 u; r
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 4 I+ @* j, Y3 T. m
somehow I realized you were still in my heart 7 b7 z+ v: ^+ l4 u
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness2 C f' G% e, W! U2 X1 T
somehow I lost myself inside again ) G% W4 T- d3 }4 h
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog - G; l, y% j9 J
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
- Q v$ O8 u5 `4 T: fFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you...................................... D1 o7 i+ B ^7 F Y# _
Basically, I almost finish this poem. K L/ S7 t8 l
I am 一个人de精彩
, l$ \( H8 L' z; I( a I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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