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I just wrote a poem+ {* a- m$ k) A4 `
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
' q: i" U. y4 A3 q+ HHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem L' J, U2 x) N& D- q
Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you ! f; a; J9 q$ m% _$ H0 t
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 6 g* h" s/ M$ h B" A' ]# t
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world 0 S3 J! E o. g5 V1 |" p
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me & ~2 P5 ^5 E6 _) M5 {0 ], V, c1 E" S
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
- _8 x" g/ e' Q8 k Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 3 I$ J& w% f: I1 B; u. \( a
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
/ @; _, ~4 P6 Z- v) F6 L somehow I realized you were still in my heart 4 \2 I. { U" O$ b' X
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
8 G! ]* Z) \& i7 P/ u b8 q& @' B; ~ somehow I lost myself inside again
$ Q& N4 d% c: Y$ w) ]6 o3 yNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 4 i+ q9 o, e3 s9 v0 w
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
; \/ m: L+ t2 `+ E( r8 SFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................+ h- m$ n8 K2 A4 F: E
Basically, I almost finish this poem" L0 o1 o5 r" B3 r& Z( s/ p S
I am 一个人de精彩
) P8 s; f- n) E3 d/ B4 ^ I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.5 k3 f! k W5 }" H) d! Q* c' Z
But........ 0 g ^' s Y" u/ }
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