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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem1 K* h K/ `3 @
Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you - w7 c, a4 l2 g1 D& {1 Y
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 4 p) d. b: v# E+ W6 o
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
4 J+ i" F( I$ k' x, o z( o Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me , t' W$ q6 N6 n# z+ y/ I
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
, j0 h2 ~6 m( t" J4 R Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
0 t$ R5 \( Y" N5 L! W. S4 BHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday " L( c4 A4 E# o x/ | Q
somehow I realized you were still in my heart ! t4 J" u( T8 N7 O1 r) _
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
! Z0 L* x$ v: Z0 N somehow I lost myself inside again
! F) G5 R) i5 t4 y; E, n8 V$ L, P9 LNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog ( @7 ^& O# H1 Z1 f- D
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion8 c- C" ?6 k7 {, x# q
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................6 Q( Y( g. C4 ?# W! J& `! }
Basically, I almost finish this poem& h a; I7 W8 @4 a. p4 q8 y# _* @* v2 ?& g
I am 一个人de精彩6 V+ f4 K1 I+ u t8 _% R
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.4 l6 o8 n% g" F3 x0 |/ r6 @" n; M
But........
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