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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
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Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world : {5 ?" j* f3 J- h; o {
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 4 O) [" [# {7 V6 t' q1 {, b# ~
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind 4 H4 A) t- R* M% s, K7 e
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
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somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness0 D3 R# |0 K @; z2 r
somehow I lost myself inside again 4 _1 a* b* ^# t& F0 g5 q
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 5 A! P6 c( O1 U* f% o1 j
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion( F1 P, U4 c+ |
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................: @4 x- E W6 l6 n( d# c* U4 c2 u. J
Basically, I almost finish this poem
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I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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发表于 2008-1-17 21:16
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
