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I just wrote a poem
; ]0 B& U! I) n0 BBesides, I'd like to put it in my blog.. ]+ _' {& Y( K4 v
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
1 M' ?5 l* q7 B+ b. i eThanks a lot!!!
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2 d; b. u* b" D1 J1 @* V& CFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you , d J3 B; Q: |, ?5 u
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us % c C& X+ W3 g1 @) j
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world ! _$ f# N% \/ C* ]! p6 ]
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me & H* y6 r3 R6 ^# `2 h1 `/ X+ D
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind 9 ]5 Y# t, |: {) M2 J( h
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness ( O9 Z& ~, E* s( }( L2 R2 o
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 7 i4 Q4 u7 U T( s2 O% P
somehow I realized you were still in my heart + D) @ S3 b1 [; L& E$ R
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness3 H& s9 L( h* i) W
somehow I lost myself inside again 4 T+ P1 ~, \$ L+ w1 [9 S
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
/ s7 J# w' W, V( K6 @5 | somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
1 y8 l! z7 y& OFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
+ ~" C. e( Q( d/ V! w: VBasically, I almost finish this poem
1 [* Y& C( D, O( U8 g I am 一个人de精彩1 V5 M4 g: j. f
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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$ m! [" \/ `9 ^0 YIronically? Isn't it? |
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