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I just wrote a poem; k0 C& M/ B: c4 V
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.( k4 J5 t1 l: ^1 q. U$ U
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
9 Q4 m/ P3 h3 T3 ?8 [Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you - M* m7 l5 {6 _) o
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us % D8 l3 U; v6 m1 ?$ }) T: L' s3 s
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
1 S# Z B9 R; X& w ^ Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me / q% D3 C D; a, l" j4 W
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind 1 k& A9 Z, l$ p- h' R/ } o& F% N
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
# v. c+ H$ G/ A. jHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 0 P6 L d; s3 f i+ ]) ]& H' a+ h2 D6 K
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
" P; Z9 _9 i# W. M) l somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
0 ~1 b: P; q, R" y7 Q1 K1 ? somehow I lost myself inside again 6 b: Q4 b3 c2 C
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
# U+ q& c# P0 q+ ` somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
" _% f" {2 o8 H; YFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................8 c r& ^% R: t2 e. S1 M+ y8 a
Basically, I almost finish this poem
I. ]4 j/ Y: D. f# V$ p, Y I am 一个人de精彩- Z* A$ m! ^$ h) K! @
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.6 K) W7 z6 D3 X4 f
But........
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