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I just wrote a poem
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6 M2 y- n5 t( A) t+ J, S. n. |However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
" Y& F' B) u5 ~( |, O6 Q: mThanks a lot!!!4 y5 n6 W6 A/ |% O! G
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! }7 o* d+ O, ?( gFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
2 |1 M6 }' o+ @* R7 H3 F! r Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
; M; S) w6 T' M: u5 n* O* O Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world 0 ?: T1 z3 _) Q, W* i
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me + Q0 K5 K" U, k; R7 r v+ C7 j
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
5 r1 r# V u6 c Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
4 A) M2 Z% g0 l/ oHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
! o2 E, @4 }8 _$ @" `5 p3 W somehow I realized you were still in my heart
" S8 }; L! a5 Q, V somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness' ]) V. z# ~) D. x( ~
somehow I lost myself inside again 1 {2 m6 g: m" i+ _& g- _9 W
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
- H7 N7 ?5 ] a$ i somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion2 b _/ z7 v# k& a4 ~2 M3 u/ d! m
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
: t& V5 ^0 V3 U& h: g, A; KBasically, I almost finish this poem% {) ^2 `4 H, V x# G
I am 一个人de精彩4 K- L% z7 V8 }0 L( x: D6 Q+ C e
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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