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I just wrote a poem
- q5 V) [# Q3 p% mBesides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
+ K2 e- B0 {. h0 [$ n+ u2 V/ THowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
5 N. E- I7 k; f0 Q$ z- aThanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you - J( ^2 r5 q7 i! Z- x
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 2 f* ?* Q7 @/ a1 a9 R+ `
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
W7 a. Z( F+ q" F Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me ) t6 t. A" ?6 \9 f* n( y. M
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
9 P# f* V) G/ m( n# m( p# j Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
' i5 \( k) H/ ~" B8 |- I4 M0 z! OHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
+ O0 r8 w9 h* P( X4 `5 P somehow I realized you were still in my heart ' L3 g: m7 K) p' k7 [5 K) ~
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
/ B- |6 g. l, t5 n( L somehow I lost myself inside again ! K7 P' ?* y0 ~: A; L6 _1 @: E
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
( E: b' X& x0 ]! w% e' B6 Y2 ? somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
/ P. c. C4 g o$ W$ E$ YFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................& X4 [4 }& Q* E. D% j: {
Basically, I almost finish this poem
4 y1 Q2 t* V3 J n2 @ I am 一个人de精彩- v" P4 `) N5 R# {
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.& o" C1 X' l' E7 U$ A1 {5 W! i
But........
( B$ ]/ I' O7 M: mIronically? Isn't it? |
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