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I just wrote a poem
9 a d8 ~1 B4 w. i# rBesides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
. x" b2 L/ P1 r9 J6 H+ G# UHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
) m0 Q& _4 H7 Z" ~* \! sThanks a lot!!!) h+ T5 N, u% P- I M
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
+ r9 @8 z9 R0 d) |8 J$ ?7 d Somehow I'd found something wrong with us # J9 \9 u7 ^1 f8 f! f1 E( }+ B- Z
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world ) Y$ F7 I5 e: c
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 1 G5 Y1 d/ C* u; ?& I3 o
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
; w1 V) a3 w2 k9 z% n, j( A Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness * ]6 ]- n2 F5 D
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
L ?: G: [; }* i5 G1 r somehow I realized you were still in my heart . {' i& }9 a ]3 U5 L! I
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
7 d0 O1 a/ |( T somehow I lost myself inside again 7 a; r b8 K: n- A$ P4 p) ]- U
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
: P8 R; b) o* R. k( t) {! k somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion3 {. G: K. ]8 ^6 Z0 R' z
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................3 C- B! n" L( m! b& }" J* s' m
Basically, I almost finish this poem
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I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
