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I just wrote a poem; }1 ^& `8 v! Q1 E9 `
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
( R# W$ [! q0 yHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem+ [! m8 g: u& d7 k" I D* W
Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you t1 J- A) \7 J2 W; s7 N
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
3 [& v z9 q5 f( s$ Y Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
. m5 R$ |7 n6 M& F8 \% c# |- E2 O5 H Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
, @7 K! ~' x+ p+ c& K Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind r# z+ X! c/ G2 g' ]% h4 e
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness ( b) B Q) V. X+ Z5 @/ a
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 2 @6 L& B0 H, H3 c f
somehow I realized you were still in my heart + z) B* F% x, L j) N* L, w
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness2 _! q* t/ T; e1 S% g
somehow I lost myself inside again
0 h# j5 }- ]9 L" S7 J$ GNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog , v2 N1 v1 V" E! o4 g2 W
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
# ~7 \. G3 z B% p$ W; |' ], _9 hFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
7 a$ ^* Q* O A, ]( VBasically, I almost finish this poem
7 }3 k7 [6 M! k5 ~1 E5 q/ N I am 一个人de精彩
6 J0 p- V. O: l7 \8 }( B I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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