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I just wrote a poem y* E+ `7 X5 @; L O* h
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
) g9 M0 }9 d- JHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
8 h* _2 U6 k. z3 {4 e, R. X+ N, A# rThanks a lot!!!( D: x$ U/ ~, H7 v! Y, E
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you ' s( g1 R0 o6 K: A, O# z- {0 P- O* b
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
6 X+ o* P+ ^' P7 y. V* O m Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
) W+ U0 _) F' a4 H/ P; T y Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me $ d, P; m, d- G( f
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind g% I, M7 p' a% m
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness ! }9 |% i" H/ ]9 S& B" X$ }
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 5 R9 Q. n) | }4 G2 }
somehow I realized you were still in my heart % f. i& H3 O/ O% V4 f
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
x/ b' [" Y+ ~# G! @6 j% {! ` somehow I lost myself inside again ; E/ f- C H! z2 l+ A# ~) @8 V1 {
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
* V' j' z$ m7 H9 _ somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
* T6 P- Q! U6 [! n9 Q8 j# NFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................: o1 z% c- I- S5 c
Basically, I almost finish this poem) v- K# |: }! _: C4 K
I am 一个人de精彩% P1 F( C, S* F6 T0 L
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.4 h# b% _2 H% {6 L% x
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
