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I just wrote a poem2 M0 v0 t$ o& z3 e- V1 T
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
, x3 Y' w' C! p. FHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
4 ?: P! F: q& ^& I' b( mThanks a lot!!!& s- u! ~* E, Y3 L6 [5 x, Q5 y
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* r0 a1 E! ]) aFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 0 W; E( _0 w( P) a( f$ h- K
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 7 E, z; @* e. G5 {- I* N
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world 1 V3 D( c1 G: Q
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
$ k4 D. _2 ~( {- P& C# f$ D Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind ; S4 X" H9 ]5 W0 G
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
5 [' h& N4 v4 G1 nHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
/ \% A$ |! K) j' D1 O$ S- V& ~ somehow I realized you were still in my heart
( i7 X% ~1 C0 F somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness, p7 b& x) q4 M5 |9 H5 r
somehow I lost myself inside again
( v" v0 D$ I( i7 fNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
, o8 |" }# O- u% t! H# ~( A% L* L7 v somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion2 S' I- ?0 q( ^( Z ^* _
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................( J' f; W/ A6 d6 H: O$ o1 I
Basically, I almost finish this poem# v9 |) S. w, b% z
I am 一个人de精彩
7 \" J7 _2 x1 f. n! g) Y( q% w I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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$ L' G* L& Q7 g7 hIronically? Isn't it? |
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