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I just wrote a poem$ E- x6 L4 b: z6 s- v
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.3 y- T- l9 [ d6 T8 F1 q
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem6 G% i3 E0 h% ^) g, o
Thanks a lot!!!7 i4 @1 f9 b {+ C
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& d {7 G) r3 ?( r! _Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you & P. o" T+ \2 m9 g! m- J4 W P
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
* C# E/ u( c# R Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world 7 n8 @$ G1 J. a {: M
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
+ X0 ] d" c/ T* c, M( A( u Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind ( C V% o9 f4 w; P7 }' y* I
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
8 l6 p6 Y- ~$ h+ V8 T# V7 yHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
* X# r" X4 {' l; [ { somehow I realized you were still in my heart & f8 r. ] z. {! x1 u
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness& P3 y* M" F/ E# P: J& @! W) T
somehow I lost myself inside again
( N2 V A, w! H2 W6 dNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
, Q2 B( W4 u9 d; Q. O somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion: x5 Y4 H6 p+ q: T' A
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................0 c0 ^2 L; t5 n+ W
Basically, I almost finish this poem) e' D! T" R L9 y, x& v
I am 一个人de精彩' G6 j% J$ k8 |1 h
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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- L, C1 k( F; G/ b% \Ironically? Isn't it? |
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