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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem" ^: h+ }" A# W B. K9 q! B
Thanks a lot!!!& m) G" I4 t/ d2 U# D
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
5 ^+ |* y: Y% C3 R) u5 o" u7 f Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 7 X. F8 P6 U- y8 |
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world 2 e2 c* r" j$ C# `- V) N6 e
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
7 } h3 Y$ k5 } Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
$ l& \! I/ W7 J9 C) U Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
U/ C! \3 k `# w" rHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
- @3 m _ g& U6 q3 q" I! q! T) W& P somehow I realized you were still in my heart
K: _; k! C- D' Y& c( S+ F somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness! K. U. Q- K& O& N( h
somehow I lost myself inside again + W& T/ o+ ~8 _- @
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 4 ?8 B4 f5 \6 L" s& U1 Y$ M5 K
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion; o. \( O& d$ `. G7 C- }
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................5 ]% g) M+ i& y9 V
Basically, I almost finish this poem* A- y7 ^, K5 k) z! Q6 {
I am 一个人de精彩
/ ?8 }5 Z! i" { I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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' c7 { A9 Z2 g2 l3 I4 A7 Q: EIronically? Isn't it? |
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发表于 2008-1-17 21:16
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
