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I just wrote a poem3 E- O' u2 j' u6 @" i9 v! O
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
3 l- B, s& h' ?/ F8 r5 GHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem i/ u4 F8 P4 z4 u- T
Thanks a lot!!!* u7 k4 D# O! n% \/ u2 F
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 7 Y6 g4 j6 k0 m9 B( O, R7 B, b0 V
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
% }* S) |. H8 Y+ q+ n% Q; g Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
( o9 M# n1 m0 k, I8 D Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
( w; x& f$ D% B+ Y6 R% g. P Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
2 f, }. E2 B6 u Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
' k$ ~: u& i5 a2 l1 vHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday + ]- \9 y6 T) K4 H
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
! F2 J9 J' X9 R: K9 j somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
3 _' X8 d" n+ r8 c somehow I lost myself inside again / y' k' G. _3 n+ O6 n
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
: e7 S( h5 \( g somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion B+ C0 d* o) X3 @4 d g' d4 c. B
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
8 G9 }# I5 q; l3 LBasically, I almost finish this poem
4 ?) k/ _8 T4 K! H' V I am 一个人de精彩
4 W, f+ z* X9 O/ \ I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
3 o' h2 a5 p; E% Y! }5 `- j1 F7 u% vBut........
# r. e% G) B; M+ C4 j# Q, }Ironically? Isn't it? |
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