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I just wrote a poem
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4 w3 J) F' g2 q) X- R5 S) n! s& f! CHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem3 L2 O+ i4 M& D) }, p$ L# ]
Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 3 v* u5 [, p% V2 T$ B5 ?. ?, U( U
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
# x' ?2 r$ ~9 q0 H4 t8 z9 C; H3 H Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
( u2 ]2 r) Z, A8 l7 w0 i: [ Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 6 g" C. \7 M: A8 l: k
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind 9 Z8 `/ W& O7 b: C$ c9 G9 z* c0 d0 O
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
! v4 M( e0 m6 X1 e( N& dHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
1 O5 @& w3 L7 C: B/ W( w3 K somehow I realized you were still in my heart
5 z1 K0 M# J. ]% R somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
0 c! V7 U* p% r1 F somehow I lost myself inside again
9 d, w4 D! k) k& E( H! s& {( ~Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
- `& C. E I& @# ?, W8 [: x9 n somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
! U+ s) Z3 j+ m0 tFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................1 Y. [% g, e9 q; x0 f; T0 R) V1 d
Basically, I almost finish this poem
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" B' i" y9 `. J$ \" P) m/ N I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything. A$ W# E2 g+ W- j7 o( H
But........
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