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I just wrote a poem1 g C, F, I$ `7 O6 }1 n" L- e; X
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
- I9 s- Y+ v; O2 F4 XHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
, I) _, g5 c5 W0 jThanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you ! p5 x5 S* {. U& c' ?$ y/ J9 o
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us ' Q, k2 n" a. k! I8 O& N
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
, \4 j& D6 i _' T& o, P! w Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 5 I( B5 [2 [* F$ z2 Z; L- [
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind & w5 R& A, `7 w" L
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 7 C7 ]. V9 v$ x4 a! s/ `' N: B- V, Z, X
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday " w& n- U9 b- O1 A: s
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
9 K2 r' T' @* F! [+ w$ y somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
$ `# K9 B; I6 G9 V" g9 P6 l2 i& n somehow I lost myself inside again
( r1 \/ s: }# A; p0 c# c- Z" nNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog ! Q* k/ e( e" d2 Z1 `* l
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
; W# X; {2 p- q# S4 MFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................( l& d! e0 c# \) u& z3 i; l
Basically, I almost finish this poem
( A) n: g; O5 B. w$ i3 _) p. g% R I am 一个人de精彩
y6 W: [: h. F/ h I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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