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I just wrote a poem$ I* e- j8 K6 z
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.+ |4 L* D* r; t! x' P2 i+ Y
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem: V* s1 }: p3 V* l: G/ o" f* f
Thanks a lot!!!" g$ U% ?6 D% ^
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& j6 [; J0 p, z, }" y' I$ QFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you ! Z2 G' I: T, ^" o4 g* ^ o
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
* A3 Q5 R# J) x3 \4 o# J Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
0 ^ b6 R& y" m Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me ) _8 u8 b0 u/ J/ e
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind 1 r, v; ? o! g3 X. v3 ]* W8 H
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 7 z9 h+ M7 ?8 r5 ]: s1 x
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
$ p8 B# ?/ o0 m m4 c somehow I realized you were still in my heart
$ I& B5 O. a6 e9 n! [ somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness2 G' [ \4 y+ j {# a
somehow I lost myself inside again 4 A( E) d- f2 S: r
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
/ }! l i: S* [0 h; I$ ]% l W$ ^ somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
! V$ x: |* }% n( X. C" n" EFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
# B: y8 e' S! n/ i- ^; YBasically, I almost finish this poem3 ^* |3 g4 \( X2 r) k0 n4 f7 x/ m
I am 一个人de精彩3 n2 w9 R( X0 K6 S8 o9 h. H
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
3 q& R' k9 s9 x# @But........ ) c/ V3 Y7 {& G, R7 ]- g$ @) c! } E$ Z
Ironically? Isn't it? |
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
