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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem7 C! h! e b: Z+ N {
Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 2 t- k2 x/ ~* W. C2 i3 G* Z
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us - u/ P v- g, M7 s/ Q
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world , T( L) j' K8 ^ l
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
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6 K2 p7 f6 M/ B* |. p7 I) M Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
& ~; p" Q4 @4 [% }2 ~2 D THowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday ; q9 S3 Y2 ^9 Q& E3 D; T. ?' U
somehow I realized you were still in my heart . A4 i( H# M7 f: o3 H1 {, d# G
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness: ?2 i. Z* B8 j; |* `1 c
somehow I lost myself inside again
& }& t4 _* Z7 e" XNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
9 j# k/ P, o" E$ [* ^1 e+ d( H. T0 t/ K somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion, V& m! B/ \+ x( s4 I0 w& W
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................9 L7 F; j# W9 m$ y5 l6 X- ^* k
Basically, I almost finish this poem
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I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.4 d8 q, f4 x9 e% s( Q
But........ 1 v+ ] H" g7 J& A( r/ c$ D7 S
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42