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I just wrote a poem1 F2 w6 j0 W1 J3 i) h
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
7 K4 z& R9 c( A2 }( }* z1 KHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
- V( Y2 O$ a# }/ V X' ~Thanks a lot!!!
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+ V, ^4 z7 x1 S9 h7 j) vFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you ! e a/ t; a+ h8 h2 h7 [2 V
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
1 \* ^. g( S0 t3 d; Q Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
Q: B# h$ k0 l3 n8 @2 x" l Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
, q/ [9 F3 [1 x1 E3 U. H/ C Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind 4 W |) j, q0 S4 l5 H3 A, m3 c4 K. f
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 6 N0 E; G1 t9 H7 X
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday : |7 h. y# m3 f& ]! ^
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
: q' ~6 s7 w2 U9 G; C k0 H& A somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
% \8 O1 o# I# b. D1 F: f6 i somehow I lost myself inside again
0 ^- Q% \, R* M$ _7 \. S+ Q6 n* PNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
2 t# z- ^3 z& w v: x! j7 Y# e somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
2 @; ]3 Y# I) ]% l7 H* zFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
$ F! b4 O- n; k1 G8 R( \7 Q* PBasically, I almost finish this poem! i; \# ?9 }% @( D
I am 一个人de精彩5 a" i( o2 m) s I
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.: n2 Q3 c ~8 u
But........
! |1 e& o. [, v2 O3 O9 LIronically? Isn't it? |
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
