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I just wrote a poem8 g0 ]2 T2 j ~) Z+ B7 @
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
5 a: t: R5 E) j* M7 G7 o+ c7 XHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem: E" C$ V5 V( c* l* ~
Thanks a lot!!!
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7 G: B; z. d+ H( f1 Q2 ^Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 7 u7 P) f v/ K: F0 p# A
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 2 z7 N* }1 O+ t B" {) Q
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world / \4 q2 R' Y) f% J$ y+ I
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
; k3 T9 o4 s Q, P Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
: x3 P2 O2 f/ A/ x: E6 e1 b6 Y Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
! N) J1 e2 u8 T3 \/ cHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
# |7 v+ i) {6 U3 O somehow I realized you were still in my heart
, B0 c0 n$ K- G( {& `! B somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
3 u W. X$ Q8 g* X5 S6 g4 _8 u5 I somehow I lost myself inside again 3 ~ a' H& ^7 o3 C
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog - J9 Z C% @8 m a( a
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
4 a ^0 T( _0 j2 P4 D- J) X+ _Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................9 }1 r- I+ m7 H+ Y+ S
Basically, I almost finish this poem
9 S2 D+ l" `5 \1 ~ I am 一个人de精彩
9 H' [( ]+ K% W6 l I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.; k- p0 K$ G# h
But........
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
