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I just wrote a poem
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0 k4 M. }0 F0 o L' Z; C* cHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
1 S1 E9 p7 }2 `) [Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
) O, D3 ^! z; z: |8 }2 ]5 J Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
# X4 |( i9 K! p; E. c: S" y3 i Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world ' `' r; R8 m& ~! s' d
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
4 y& n _, M$ t- I) c8 j/ p+ n Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind , Q8 r: e8 P( `9 c" k8 P0 }
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
$ Y- x+ Q. z0 ~, rHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 2 u* L" M7 D. c |
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
) A. Q9 Y% }' a4 K5 I somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
5 b6 c( t# Q" H6 l8 m somehow I lost myself inside again
5 [' R0 c$ l, I0 Y! R% z" INow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog / K/ ^3 _ z" p: u
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion* U1 x/ a. C% j1 ]8 _9 O
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................4 y3 p: L+ F( q& ]& a9 S" V1 I
Basically, I almost finish this poem
3 H2 j) U( ~# y3 i0 n S6 k4 O5 J I am 一个人de精彩7 W( t& |- S1 `. [
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.' |7 X( j' e+ L' t6 ^
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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