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I just wrote a poem
; s; h5 x3 W* R/ MBesides, I'd like to put it in my blog.% r: a$ C/ p$ v) V3 o$ w2 }8 L
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
# _; |4 o) l2 J7 FThanks a lot!!!( m' ~% @5 w5 o+ _
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
5 |! H R3 |3 W: s. J( I2 i/ O* ~ Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
2 [3 V/ Q8 A* w& l Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
4 |# e$ `; O: }7 x5 o Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me ! ?& _, D" U, B2 b
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind . ~/ v/ \8 R) T' H
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
2 `& a1 d" T% M8 ^( Y* Q9 d$ RHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
! Z8 l3 Y4 }: z0 G! h6 [ e/ } somehow I realized you were still in my heart ( z s7 T9 ^/ @. F
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness8 K7 M }+ R) F. e9 f* P
somehow I lost myself inside again
3 d) {$ @- ?: P8 d m5 ^2 DNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 3 J% k: q: ` `4 F7 n
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion* C, O2 M0 ^' e% d% V
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................9 U( s$ q/ E, p: e- u1 p
Basically, I almost finish this poem" H. d. {7 v4 f# N
I am 一个人de精彩8 p2 [4 R- s" v) \
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.2 W8 b" S5 c Q' g" |
But........ " q9 M, n3 g$ n! m9 ~! K! x# a+ e8 k
Ironically? Isn't it? |
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