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I just wrote a poem
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2 Y5 M+ Y3 u, ]( E) x9 {9 {* Q& ^3 PHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
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# H& S( E" K& j- [5 K9 N% ~Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 7 e) e$ n1 i3 c9 N6 }+ A! l& v
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us ! M7 I/ g) }* m2 y8 b4 d6 Q% L+ \
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world ! o6 L: L& A2 f* f" Z
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
: e* u9 | \3 k" S Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind 1 x, c" \4 g% B
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 8 D1 J+ m9 X/ s9 M
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
+ E1 c) U$ K. ?4 h# b; n, v9 e somehow I realized you were still in my heart 9 G( G; L A6 k( Q! o7 j! [
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness$ m+ `/ P p% K& k* Y
somehow I lost myself inside again ! l- h& Q+ c8 @# e( r1 \* e
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog M( o) ^9 q- s
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion. Q7 E9 o9 V# t) K& D: {; Y
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
5 U) v/ Z5 G' e) gBasically, I almost finish this poem8 `# i& F+ J( ?
I am 一个人de精彩- _9 w9 k9 y) h& h" j
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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