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I just wrote a poem' S5 ~/ b+ Q# W
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
3 D+ g" R. K8 o1 pHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
. q& o( s! q" G. \( @% {Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you + ~1 | E4 F Y% X, U* N& y
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
& D# d, Z5 L% S Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world 4 p& u: K5 U9 o7 R8 d( |8 V
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
; Q: F l# Y- H9 D8 u: w& ~) M Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind & `, Z: D2 o' ~( R( W- \) v
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness . H. v) O4 e) {
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
8 s5 L* i9 B5 @, R5 s somehow I realized you were still in my heart
9 n0 o; b+ g' h: Q/ D) U+ \ somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness# _: b- y2 q. Y A+ T4 U
somehow I lost myself inside again 9 I0 p9 d' B, p( \
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
: j- v0 A! _% ] somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
. s i9 T& G4 xFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
5 x, ?( k( Q+ @6 r% N- @' d" IBasically, I almost finish this poem
# `& c. T& H$ U9 b6 g I am 一个人de精彩3 Z; Q/ _( _% \5 l& k9 j' |
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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$ S# R# x$ k) cIronically? Isn't it? |
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