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I just wrote a poem
2 C0 @2 F, L: cBesides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
- K) K& e% U+ C9 n$ u* f& OHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 8 g6 w/ L6 M7 n) Q `+ P! X
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us : Z6 w; v4 h9 a9 b
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world $ N% ~# r! g, }" w+ z
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
7 F- j/ N! h5 s, i2 F2 p! Z0 G Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind % {/ L! M8 Z: P3 h
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
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somehow I realized you were still in my heart
" O/ d4 }. f: V- c. b somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness8 B7 S1 I _! L; c
somehow I lost myself inside again : w6 N: Q" q* O% X7 a) L
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog - y; G! ?3 V B8 K' r4 y+ y a
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion- g, z; v. l$ \) `# K$ v7 |. v
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................8 U; E9 L9 ?' J! t7 p; E
Basically, I almost finish this poem
" M, c H+ n: v I am 一个人de精彩
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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