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I just wrote a poem
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Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 5 K H6 j7 l4 A% {
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 6 Z$ o" H' {& `1 H, c
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
" t$ ?! Z7 h' H; P# { Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
$ S" Y/ _1 |( B$ N9 V% v1 {! Y Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind - e H# o' |* B
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
" \5 y; K( n$ o% @' m3 c0 G% IHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday ! h' B4 |5 s8 W0 r2 u
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
9 J+ r/ g( _6 F0 [/ j) \1 o somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness/ H) _ X' H2 i, N
somehow I lost myself inside again , r% g! h- r& A' ^0 b5 q# c9 V
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 5 y9 [5 C- h; ?) A
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion) X+ M0 d& b7 M' J% g2 m
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................, B1 H3 i, u$ O% ^ P
Basically, I almost finish this poem
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I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.& T: F4 r3 Z: H9 V: g1 f3 K
But........ 8 t& M8 a; y3 r. j( _. \" y
Ironically? Isn't it? |
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