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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
, e$ e, g; R x& N; {8 J3 r oThanks a lot!!!0 J% Y! H3 Z% v# {: W/ K
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
. T' _& ^% j! H$ \ o6 f Somehow I'd found something wrong with us + ^( C* E; Q4 f/ O
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world # b% T6 r+ ?( F1 h5 K) Z
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
$ b) \# {9 B- P+ T1 k1 ^ Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
6 ? m9 ?( f$ c! {% Y- h Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
, `4 H' Q/ c' c0 OHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday " _* s+ h4 L1 ^4 P( B k
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
6 ?9 h& B+ M4 E2 M somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
# n! E5 D a# Q, D somehow I lost myself inside again
( ?% H3 w" u9 o: nNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
+ ^8 f) Q+ _* o& P9 t: o somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
1 X5 y3 J3 b W* b" b/ ]6 D' Y* SFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
6 F7 Z& m9 E3 _" |+ w, f6 UBasically, I almost finish this poem, I$ q7 M2 E$ J( `* J0 f7 s8 ^
I am 一个人de精彩, s; P' C- |9 a3 @
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
