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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you % D/ s y; x' O0 y3 s8 y
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 7 }) `- ]' I0 L' _( C6 Z9 z
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world 3 e+ m& q: d% e4 B- B
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 8 J& a1 K9 @' u% e' X" ?' J
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind ; \ r5 @0 E' R4 k% N4 [% g
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness # t( ^$ f! P( ]) p
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
6 n: r8 q* ]) L8 H2 L somehow I realized you were still in my heart / e- G S2 G8 W, f
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness! n' W( Y9 R, H3 ~' A" y" f
somehow I lost myself inside again
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somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
* l1 v! r; ~. `5 l/ zFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................* ^. W9 p4 F% i0 d* C
Basically, I almost finish this poem
9 o: O& i$ B! m; z8 O6 b; @. B I am 一个人de精彩
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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