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I just wrote a poem& \. q3 u# }0 J. Y u% w
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
! G9 p0 C# e/ @0 B' T" YHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem0 ]1 `& T2 M+ s9 ^0 i5 |
Thanks a lot!!!3 M# _( X# a* R+ h' F, S8 _
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6 D E& l& c. \" d. ZFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you % t4 a9 q6 X! P1 D! d9 r
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us , W( u# }0 L+ l( }
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
9 c5 d0 G; n5 y Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
6 p6 p3 R2 r9 N8 G6 ~ Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind 3 R2 W" v6 @7 Y' N3 O
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
Q; |* b7 T; {* YHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
, J( e) S% `' j$ P% \ somehow I realized you were still in my heart
( c h( ?4 Q2 e9 d! W- b somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness( i$ e2 {4 ~5 K- D. i. p: u7 a
somehow I lost myself inside again & l% J: b% H+ X
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
# N1 E* Q: L6 \ somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion" c+ d$ ?* N! W/ F& t0 e0 b
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
2 T M2 [/ y3 @8 _5 M. CBasically, I almost finish this poem
* e# |+ H8 ^ w' U3 \ I am 一个人de精彩2 f B$ K9 @' P* _1 | c( G$ d8 e
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
* h" O% Q( S& K5 E4 ]1 SBut........ - A6 Y6 g3 I: |/ z& u7 t e* V
Ironically? Isn't it? |
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