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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem0 |% T& C/ f4 E* f
Thanks a lot!!! p; [$ `- z0 j
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you , f( A" A8 q1 P
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
) e; j; h' Z) }# W6 n Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world ' Z: m# S1 p; v" y9 c
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 3 C" p* Q1 E, S8 }2 |
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind % E. `" Q1 R1 G1 B! z
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness ; P! K. L! n% Q5 M: ^
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday ' ?, x% s T! {0 f3 r7 J5 L
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
4 g* ]- s* y' ^: g3 |7 G somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
9 y/ r7 l- X$ I6 [( R7 [ somehow I lost myself inside again
4 U0 S, X$ N$ d, F4 q3 hNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
. ~2 d5 Z' a2 I w7 S somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion6 g3 ?$ D: {( ?" N% h: V
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
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I am 一个人de精彩
5 C9 k$ O3 A. c9 N) S% p I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42