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I just wrote a poem) q" I' v2 w. X0 G k
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.& L. w! Q$ J, K# H Q7 g0 m9 D
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem e' ^" K$ j1 G
Thanks a lot!!!6 Z7 L) ^* N9 _; _$ D
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you * o* I+ ?) t& O1 Y7 c% p
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us ! d/ m! N, ~4 a) {: k& G
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world $ ?5 t" \. ^ m. M
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 3 ^! {0 L: | A. i) Q' B1 T) I$ r* w
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind % ` m, O8 e; G. A7 `2 t
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 0 J; W1 l. R% n3 I0 Y. b
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 1 X% |, K. k7 G2 y. r
somehow I realized you were still in my heart " ]- K5 _7 u e! S- O) `
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness: I4 L' |& E) {
somehow I lost myself inside again 3 v7 L6 x8 @' k" n' K3 C
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog $ i3 K6 U' d+ t
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion+ I- U1 I* K3 H' ]' a
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
; d- ?$ M; U6 W, y# D- O8 L$ b2 YBasically, I almost finish this poem% P# B4 h0 Z6 |& _
I am 一个人de精彩
: v$ J. G% N {3 L I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.( X1 C7 }( P3 C) }
But........
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
