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I just wrote a poem a L1 C% q3 `7 f! C6 k, D& S v
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.7 n& o, A0 Z. W5 K4 i
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
' L. B0 l; L4 i. o) o0 x! kThanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you " T( _( X6 O7 j r% f. _
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
* J& T& {$ R8 e* f% Z; g' T3 K Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world " ^4 L! X" c, V
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
$ ]0 p1 x* N* B Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
9 u6 W/ ?; f" G# F, B9 x9 x Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness $ g( W( F! j4 c
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 4 C# a# l0 i7 x/ q R
somehow I realized you were still in my heart e M/ I' S# c
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
& a. F; M! G4 Q% @. c4 W somehow I lost myself inside again " {* l" A r% t. y8 p
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
V, a6 |* d9 s% c5 y" l somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
# v! R3 y' M9 a d2 oFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................1 H+ V5 B- Q J& X* \+ g
Basically, I almost finish this poem
+ r: D$ F' s' Q$ |: u5 F# D' v I am 一个人de精彩
9 r1 |% |+ C9 z, g1 _ I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
# E! R1 ~ Q& M. G. \. I7 t: oBut........ ! [) c7 p6 f$ X/ `+ n& R: l
Ironically? Isn't it? |
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