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I just wrote a poem/ H/ M' Q# x7 a% w. V' @, M, F1 y
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
' k( [5 E. L/ L% B9 [However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
5 ~8 ~: B0 R" @! K6 p$ K. \& fThanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you % F: j. z$ K0 {
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us ! l$ O7 z2 k) v0 ?! |, i
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
x) Z2 Z" _5 k Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
- M2 P1 T: S! ~/ j. i# K7 O0 S Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
0 l; C- Y3 s' R! `+ x; S Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness # @- M7 s+ a* `7 r- B
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
* e- @0 d. N' w somehow I realized you were still in my heart " @9 Q g7 p! W* s) F
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
8 a% C- ^1 s" h8 c6 n! K$ _# L somehow I lost myself inside again 6 U2 ?* W5 n) H* L+ D
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
: O. e9 n% u) }. P2 r" E somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion2 s# f. c* C+ P5 C5 d5 g) l
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................2 z' v: ]' x% h. |
Basically, I almost finish this poem* P3 R& J# d9 G( x) Y5 T+ {4 g
I am 一个人de精彩- S& K% _7 Y0 \$ |
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything. e' O; U0 @4 W: d
But........
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