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I just wrote a poem4 u: j2 b: m& I. J; M" W
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.1 h7 _4 n' d3 \) ~1 @+ ?- e1 S
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
! |* J6 y9 |# f- e" nThanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you & s W2 O! `1 e6 ^4 t6 o4 L/ W
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
; o8 I4 W( I- z3 ^ Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
3 P+ k5 e% h6 ^2 C# e Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
/ Y& b9 f- h% E, ^& `; Q* A( v3 l Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
! R) {: x% o% o2 G* D) b Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
) _% o% n+ G, O8 S, ~However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday ; R; Y3 t3 O k& P2 N
somehow I realized you were still in my heart ! k& I2 A' W5 k% a
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
0 i7 s; h5 R4 l. A3 w6 X somehow I lost myself inside again / P+ a- }+ v- B7 H. E: S
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
" w0 A \ ~( D* z0 Q9 B somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
' l4 i8 K6 o) Y- I0 DFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................: A/ j. ~, Y* `$ W
Basically, I almost finish this poem4 K' g4 z8 C: u: C% _ l& `
I am 一个人de精彩
4 e& Z) Y( o: \7 ]$ \ X* I' \$ X I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.* d V6 N. H+ t4 W. [8 y4 P
But........
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
