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I just wrote a poem
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; H! p# b. }* @& a! rHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
: [ G" W( S& D7 wThanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
/ j( M" F( ^4 u& D2 B% X# B Somehow I'd found something wrong with us % o+ x4 d$ Y5 x
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
$ m5 P6 f& B! L D6 o Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me * L' \! o) U+ {
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind : W# R/ H* t/ E" \! ^; ]" {6 n- s
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 4 E7 o6 S# M5 b5 i7 `' W- G4 _. M
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
5 l. H0 V( Z' ?: e& k6 ~5 u: ? somehow I realized you were still in my heart
1 N2 o5 Z+ J4 y% b! y& C somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
( J+ m3 h5 q$ X/ n( s& K somehow I lost myself inside again
$ W9 R9 O- g' N; b# j6 l7 TNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 5 |: k* f$ [* b9 A- N
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion# R' F, D0 E* e% U2 d5 ?' r
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
4 x3 b! C( b$ g5 FBasically, I almost finish this poem* j- Z; s' j" t
I am 一个人de精彩
) [$ d1 w2 s7 c I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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