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I just wrote a poem; {9 o7 Y% F) U3 w$ `1 ^
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
6 R: @; q! ]) p5 M7 ^However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem" B; }7 b+ p! V$ [7 t
Thanks a lot!!!4 A, P6 [% Q: J9 `* `3 [9 r
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5 w6 y3 j% g1 ]* P( K) ~: U; cFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
1 M. q2 }6 g7 {* F- l2 b0 P2 x, s Somehow I'd found something wrong with us , j) w/ V1 o$ ~; L, |# ]- T
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
8 E; R9 m) J" q( d7 ?) _ Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 0 o8 s8 x* I5 I6 `
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind " o+ R3 z0 F1 q
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
/ }& B- ]. @( M [* K" fHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
2 w7 h! s: P+ {7 |7 @ somehow I realized you were still in my heart
# w) r) C# V- q# \6 x( e( R somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness" D- q( w6 B) e; Y5 f
somehow I lost myself inside again " d$ b6 l) P. A X- M
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
, ~7 k& p# r* \5 a# K* L somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
' \3 D' C1 k5 H( i" vFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
3 ~! t! X9 j* U4 ?! [5 O7 rBasically, I almost finish this poem; u0 ^- U6 v7 t& s
I am 一个人de精彩, H P) Y3 G$ ~ t+ \
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
+ S; I. V" p' E) r' l5 OBut........
( h: S F1 `5 r* l, ?Ironically? Isn't it? |
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