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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem l1 K6 R0 o- |& [& j# V. b
Thanks a lot!!!
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; K* k% l4 q. R; I& pFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you / i8 H6 n" d1 S
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
! F" C9 u9 a+ e+ R( ^2 m* u3 f2 i Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
/ O) A* q, M) A d6 \. Z3 \ Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
1 N7 @* }8 R7 I' B( G) J7 ^ Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
2 N R! ~/ b( w Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness ( q2 Q0 F3 i( ~) A+ s
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
' H$ S; s' n9 \6 l/ K; Q9 A somehow I realized you were still in my heart
4 Q" J! J- T+ a! T, D2 |1 E somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness' ~% `4 c% Y$ u9 b+ n, E
somehow I lost myself inside again & N( y6 o* h ~2 ?- P5 @
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 9 R2 T# Q8 l1 y
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion" q$ W d! `0 i3 L# C$ X! ]
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
, A: A: k) ?" ^" X* {. b$ IBasically, I almost finish this poem
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I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42