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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem) O7 c( C1 C7 m
Thanks a lot!!!9 Q4 G0 G; s& A" v7 a4 V/ J! D8 ?
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
6 _9 F. W6 T6 e8 r5 w9 u) t Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
' i7 Y8 H; b* z& c' d8 T Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world 5 b2 R8 N1 [2 A+ h: F
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
# q0 T+ a: Y4 X# S Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind 9 N% J3 A! S. u% K* i, q4 Y7 D% r H, ?
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness ! ?+ ~9 F9 E) g1 d3 E
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
& c- a/ O& X$ u7 _ p; l somehow I realized you were still in my heart $ |- ?1 K- j4 R2 a) P; Z) D
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
0 y! [8 m( V0 L( r1 U somehow I lost myself inside again % k/ B" b4 \* ?7 S5 ~
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
1 u) v9 K$ _% X! Q4 q* A& V somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
- f# a! W# ]7 b9 m- TFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
7 ?% e3 b' } Y4 e: r" X/ `Basically, I almost finish this poem
* E* ?. Q9 `( X8 F I am 一个人de精彩
+ v8 w. C* a) Q) r$ W I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.! }. G' k8 k' Z
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发表于 2008-1-17 21:16
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
