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I just wrote a poem( t2 u, W* U- I/ v5 a% m
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.7 w+ J5 D v" V2 b0 N, m& x0 E
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
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" z/ w; E+ ` dFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
4 N9 u9 {% ]+ X$ ~ Somehow I'd found something wrong with us . H# b7 U4 M1 a& ^6 ?1 I5 p
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world - U' y+ m6 Q! ?% S4 d1 B& J
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
3 |1 L$ w& v& b2 U Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind 9 S; e3 y: S# R* n u
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 7 P" J/ i) _: M4 W3 A5 ~% v# K
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 8 v2 @3 }/ G& {8 n1 C
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
. V1 i* R5 B) J+ ^: G+ k- k7 o* a somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness7 |' s$ o" `8 S4 ~
somehow I lost myself inside again
+ I) T9 F, D+ e2 K4 Q9 @' I1 G3 ?Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 3 X+ }9 ]9 g9 S0 W0 P$ s: i
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion3 J' d' D1 b" ~$ c& r* g, }
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
4 B7 S4 c: u& W$ hBasically, I almost finish this poem
9 Y% g( [' I b2 G3 C I am 一个人de精彩: F0 \& T) A8 Z% z ~
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
9 `5 X1 y$ ^2 l ^- l9 @But........ / ` O; v* ?; T0 s, |% `. e; K5 c
Ironically? Isn't it? |
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发表于 2008-1-17 21:16
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
