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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
, w& r* c. N; V6 WThanks a lot!!!5 n5 E" a" F. f$ C: \
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d( V* ^: O4 zFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 2 }( I# p+ z3 g) K7 \+ F6 H
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us ) y) U I& k6 |3 V+ s1 K7 v0 y: Q
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
" g4 S. }# r' s% w. }% l8 n! X Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me ( h: I! M/ s5 R8 O& u, ?; q" n. K4 S
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
& y2 K, V* G) {/ e7 S: K! B Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
) A# Q3 y# _, i) p9 d3 y& v1 E7 ~# {5 [4 gHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday ; F( @. |6 b I; Q
somehow I realized you were still in my heart % Q, w( \. d/ W! O# p; R3 s
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
8 ^: n2 ]5 x1 B0 h' Z somehow I lost myself inside again
N: b6 \! ^# B' i) c J) c N: X/ s' ENow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 2 j7 W, w5 Y8 E! e, ^8 U/ }/ \
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion5 E$ }2 q% @* I4 ?2 c; d6 ?
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................1 P; T$ B8 ]4 E) F X
Basically, I almost finish this poem
: Z& I8 g# y6 t2 C% z% k I am 一个人de精彩
- _8 R4 A6 ?5 ?1 ~: U I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.; }. [# {! h% w! e1 C( X: c
But........ ; u1 @! Q( n& h! y. j* {1 k
Ironically? Isn't it? |
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