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I just wrote a poem1 z. W( x2 {$ F7 O$ o/ I
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.7 y) ^/ g* _7 I$ }% p$ h) i
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem8 S/ L! {* _* E9 q/ A
Thanks a lot!!!
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$ m% b% N7 o6 F% JFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you : ]- }% ~6 U! {+ y3 [4 R1 c9 E! ?! @
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us ) }6 a6 ]( ?' |
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world % j. L5 `4 I9 \% V* ]
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
4 j, h! G' D" i, z8 i Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
1 }( W- E$ f) p G5 E, I Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness ) g) s9 Z, F/ M1 ^3 P+ J
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday ; N3 Z. y9 U& b, U
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
' V2 K3 w3 k# |0 R1 ?" S somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
, s0 d9 H% H# }* j' y2 w$ Y somehow I lost myself inside again 9 `1 v1 z, F: E1 j/ \- V
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 1 W& t: l7 H: u4 S3 q
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
- M) {1 {9 ~# h, A+ CFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
) h3 O7 m+ Z% A* A8 K0 BBasically, I almost finish this poem
& [7 V9 F' h( ^' z, [5 G. Z I am 一个人de精彩
: t* [$ j; o5 n c' ~+ @ I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.9 o; o `0 ?$ v+ o7 }, o
But........ - M# n" W% b: X# c# S0 T* ^$ X
Ironically? Isn't it? |
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