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I just wrote a poem3 s* v; W. L/ O& ~( k5 @
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.' V( L% K3 u0 G# t1 ~
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem& z% m. `) S& L1 N/ v5 r* k
Thanks a lot!!!
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% c3 Z9 V5 j' iFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you " m: e0 T7 S9 Y C( ^
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
7 V# J, r# j. j) [. o Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
c7 H7 O3 U. ]0 F) h* D Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me & z5 q, V9 o- R( j
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
& D/ Z' j& h1 T0 F- u e Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness % a- Q6 o5 o4 Q8 F( o5 Z
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday * m6 o' B# c7 b" h
somehow I realized you were still in my heart # J% \$ r6 k: M! h' ^
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness9 T3 V! S/ l: x6 [) T6 E. I( Q8 U
somehow I lost myself inside again 1 J4 P! o2 N( |- {9 ?
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog # y5 i1 u+ L! p5 u' `& a
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
3 a: p7 E0 y# c: V' h$ _. n5 SFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you....................................... L( v0 `: p1 S: B+ N" A$ X
Basically, I almost finish this poem h! N2 ]9 [6 f) L) A: i* B% t
I am 一个人de精彩% U: F3 m+ z: O
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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