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I just wrote a poem" F. Z$ v, ?: p0 W3 |3 L" I- m% R
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.$ F' x& Q, Y+ N9 V( }. L0 I% Z+ R
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem! ]3 A) m- e- j% c4 @
Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
/ k9 W1 O4 i# [ Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
5 A% L) H" e3 M Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
% t1 Q3 o& `0 d; S. b! W+ j9 k( Z! c3 N Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
8 [% Z9 _$ }" m# e% J+ E- B Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind 8 J+ n6 a3 J5 H2 c' M
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness . j! ]. Q* t$ J, g1 f6 p
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
2 ?, N- j6 l' }, w- p0 H) y) Q somehow I realized you were still in my heart
t/ y3 }! J$ U- L: n somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness/ _( h( o* E) w" C: v6 F
somehow I lost myself inside again
, z/ Y- d! v5 h! f8 pNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 7 b0 D8 h) M5 n: y, {
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
B; O M: h; V+ w! L* hFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
* |; m n" p3 H* |3 o% cBasically, I almost finish this poem1 B* k8 W, m2 K- ?
I am 一个人de精彩! z) M0 Y& y h5 g2 _" l* O" M
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.5 c$ e7 K8 T1 D4 e' _+ q8 z
But........ 1 r4 [( X8 R' C4 L2 X& ]* e
Ironically? Isn't it? |
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