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I just wrote a poem; q! p. R2 \! I! |$ K) B/ N" A
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.6 y1 U: |% }# J0 Y
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem# D$ \, O7 P$ \: G2 j( I- }7 n
Thanks a lot!!!. b" F1 W) }% p1 L
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; o1 d" N& f; f7 PFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
- f+ G/ R: B) G2 _1 e, { [3 } Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
% E; P8 G9 f, l! u0 X Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
% |" [& C8 C Z Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me & o& U, {, y( V9 F" {, L5 I
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind + ~9 d: a3 V, n+ O/ e
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness # ?! A8 j2 }7 G Y$ ] T! j3 }4 `
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday - m/ M7 h! Z, m2 A# @
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
3 b% j/ b7 U7 z$ W: b5 a$ a$ {0 G somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
$ i! _# `6 [1 R# F& ?! ^- _ somehow I lost myself inside again
4 a0 s1 Z* r8 UNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 8 _8 Y2 n; t) T6 Y* ?+ ]( Y
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion% e" I6 Y$ a3 w3 E5 B( Z3 R
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................$ G, |$ ~3 @2 h
Basically, I almost finish this poem
/ m" h& h) X- X( R0 H% m, { I am 一个人de精彩
9 @1 g: C- D3 E4 V8 U I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
1 T/ M9 w0 D& ~1 v" x! @: OBut........
/ X7 }; I* x" n. x3 RIronically? Isn't it? |
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