TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架

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TWE作文模板汇粹
7 B- v6 Q5 \: F7 M% |; g; j(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)

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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
- D5 p7 o  Y9 ZThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
/ `1 ?6 f' o: t. O2 i- _- hWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
  i  ?8 i7 R, a3 EA is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
: _& E% |2 \9 W4 k- f+ Z* AFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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( \7 U- _9 \9 cTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
/ S7 F5 B$ z6 T5 B' W3 ^5 p; XFor A, A 的一个优势
$ e/ k5 S# \% M! {3 YWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
6 L6 i* F# ^9 {+ O, BFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
7 o: w' C) z2 v- k, A! y3 Fmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.

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: H7 _7 |! Y$ k. z6 S) l. H. u(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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6 b; E- t9 h) E  s$ |首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
( H4 `! S8 f0 ~! I2 U. _  WAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
9 }. k0 C5 z3 O2 A- YAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
5 }9 J3 x6 H% S' yFinally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…


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9 g! q9 D- A# D3 T２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)



(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
+ s% o7 s$ q- S) G) GThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
" l/ w/ \" I* BA is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
9 G/ }+ c' D2 ^4 ZFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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$ y9 ^% w- U# d) s! J( I, Q2 z- s(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型

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$ T7 m. J) h5 d" W' `There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
  h3 v! O( \2 e9 IThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
- M; L/ o# w" S' C9 HWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
( k/ u& o7 P2 g/ XFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
) |: R& }: Y% Q8 \: l0 Y$ i(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型
  s( [) d* r' D1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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# Y6 F: ~5 ^1 b7 g4 i: e陈述这个事实
5 y7 y9 L1 \, k1 X1 H1 p, zAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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/ p# M, f; Q/ U5 ?" ~2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.

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) w  g) F8 A; O; `7 UThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.

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- K0 U. q  v6 R- E9 @  o9 o8 WOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/ n4 X$ V9 }: D5 `" s3 f/ O" A/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…



a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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: E7 P! k9 D% y( P+ {In addition/ furthermore
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3 D/ }  ]1 Y6 d6 {6 _) q4 Y- r9 BIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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" i9 g! q. P0 V3 ]' A& g3 q( M& E再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

7 P' `7 H, q/ N[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]