TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架


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(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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! Y2 d' A/ g. P: [' H2 R9 `(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
! ]5 [4 ~% Q; nThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...


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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)

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/ |1 V& B& z! W1 x; L# FTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
' r6 W6 N! h  G4 p4 q. iFor A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
/ _0 ]7 x8 L& a  A* M7 n* YFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
8 w9 Z3 c9 l0 S5 umoreover, B的优点2,for example…
, W+ N8 I( ~" P6 K7 K: P% {From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.



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(二)单一观点式
% W3 Q( ^. D! Y$ }* t' m) L& Z1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)


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- C! S1 t# _$ r. [5 t1 W5 A首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
3 O+ `9 S# ~4 pAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
; ]3 `1 [# P# i" A+ f4 k  c5 ~Finally,…
. m/ E. h0 a# ^, r$ ]/ ?$ e! YBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
* R2 r! y% H9 v4 h, `6 p# rWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
4 ~6 C- B: t# c3 z# ?$ PIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型

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' H! g& g' Q+ k. Z& H4 h+ }There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
: _% ?& Y) l* B3 b% i% TC is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型
" u" ^1 H+ O, W) ?4 ~# Y1 L" R: I1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.



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6 O& |) n1 k; h7 SAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
; ^4 ]* U- i; N3 B* N# ~XXX also results from…
  O: [0 j* ^' N… is responsible for xxx, as well.
6 x; A% W: W) \/ Y2 v. t( TTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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$ b- U6 L( `7 w5 b2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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背景描述
3 a, y& ~4 ?% P' ]There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.

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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
5 b4 k; b& ]. R& `( ~% j/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…

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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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# X1 i7 P! ?1 y2 DIn addition/ furthermore
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( E  r* [8 X, W# b4 ZIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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6 S" r, @* U0 p# m1 I" T# `6 F1 `[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]