TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架


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(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
7 j& C1 r; c# @. G% U1 V; a1 ^What is also worth noticing fact is that……
7 g& i! \) d, g3 T) x8 YA is superior in another way, this is…
: E1 v9 U" ^4 y/ QIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
0 S) Y. N% H, r/ l. ~7 _From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)

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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
8 F; e0 ~0 s; y* l% Y4 H* d& tFor A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
* b! t7 w( T* A3 M0 x% Zmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式
- P. D/ u+ b0 G% L& ~1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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( h4 Y) U! S1 H9 C% e* J  S  j2 R首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
. r% w- H  T* J3 D2 O6 nAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
2 o0 s) I& V6 C8 S. Q% r* EFinally,…
2 s( |5 Z+ w; c4 o# wBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)



: f! O% [% n: g* u, n! h0 |(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
2 @# t+ u- d/ ^The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
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A is superior in another way, this is…
0 E! @( |, r/ H. g; E' FIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
( l- ~8 d% Q! L$ U2 YWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
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From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
) E) }- {& _4 W/ e8 \' N(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型
( n* O7 G+ k2 C8 ]3 t1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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  ?8 h: a# D: a! ]* V( [# RAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
6 I0 R$ ^3 m1 WOne of the primary causes is that…
0 V' N4 `  p' b5 AXXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX



2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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背景描述
There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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# w6 A' w1 i6 A( P8 L8 \: _One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
6 o7 g6 `3 C! S$ h/ I) B# {/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…

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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

朱顺顺

嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

* n" S2 x$ j3 `# {# ^" ?+ l9 p再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

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