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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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+ \0 [$ s* y: b0 ?" Y  D1 }(一) 对立观点式 " Z8 i# W7 N  ^) y. L$ h7 f- y
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
$ e  _# |2 V) g0 ]7 E: I( N6 tThe main reason for my propensity for A is that…… / q* |/ Z4 p) Q
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… : E+ Y+ F3 s- f9 K$ Y$ y5 p
A is superior in another way, this is…
8 V9 o, q$ m; l+ H; s3 IIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
  d5 ?" y5 ]- ?% nFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... ) \" g2 }& N8 z+ G; F7 w

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/ B: }- O! k3 B2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast) 0 z# b& q. ]# p, x9 ^
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B. ; j; z7 i8 f6 T
For A, A 的一个优势 5 M3 E3 A/ r4 d3 P& F2 Z
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance, % ^3 s0 o: u. M. X" _
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is... + A3 ~$ c9 f" Z5 ^
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is… & Z7 B+ f4 V, I) _; s7 ?  x  p
moreover, B的优点2,for example…   v2 }" b0 C9 n& D
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式
0 C3 Q. t; W, ]2 C: V! d, Z  D1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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6 d, V; a' J( W" j8 |/ y1 M1 I首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
- q8 v  Q& s7 O0 G. G3 v. }After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
# I6 y8 M; v, H- K7 zThere is no denying that…
5 [! i0 x  c% p2 O/ oAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that… # v. G1 f/ g" }1 ]
Finally,… " T- E- q' t( X1 x9 L% t
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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& d  e+ T( M' ?: y* J* v2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)   e& |) S/ {2 d: o  ^. k3 ^% p
(本类型只agree)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
+ {# v) p. |2 W' r" j; l- K7 jThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
( K* M! L3 l: T! Y, |$ @8 IWhat is also worth noticing fact is that…… - Y* {6 H9 s( t5 U
A is superior in another way, this is…
8 C' v% l* _( ]- }" `2 pIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… 9 w! e! M8 M, C7 Y6 p4 a% |
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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9 f  x, v  J- aThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
& i% R2 m! k: J1 ?; B$ sWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons. ; b+ s4 ^$ ^) i6 V' W9 ^
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
/ L  A  g) g6 k9 v- ^What is also worth noticing fact is that…… + u$ P! x3 W4 L
C is superior in another way, this is…
+ W0 I% P0 _; {4 Y& x- `* aFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C ; K$ U" C! v; X& a
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
1 S" q1 v. _8 A8 `(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.) ! [5 J% G$ R" M& m
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(四)原因解释型 . z0 F7 R2 c/ J( z7 S" U0 b
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因. 5 C$ x' x6 Y5 j$ e' o' J5 m7 {

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陈述这个事实
3 A- @, F% a+ TAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows. , i# L0 m  F7 {/ [  O
One of the primary causes is that… / W; @. m& N# X/ r0 L$ Z" r
XXX also results from… & [9 P+ r- e- y& O& G
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
$ R2 ~' k7 \# M: m3 tTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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背景描述
; W! @/ X2 r1 [6 A; |There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there. $ l8 U2 s2 t' @& C7 U* R3 A9 P3 N' `
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
' u4 ^- Z* u7 Y4 ]. G+ l. b/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that… 5 N' }% B+ D9 H# D, {- I% w
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that… 4 t# I) v) @% U; ?/ N/ e8 h8 H
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) X0 d  @1 u: g% O$ {a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?6 t; U9 l/ C4 q7 _" }" O7 X, u; n

% s7 B1 \! Z% l再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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: A& b4 F: G5 f8 ~/ j5 S, v[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]
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