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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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发表于 2005-1-5 03:05 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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TOEFL 5分 作文框架1 L) E, y: Z! B4 o) t
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; B/ L$ Z  U8 C0 H  V(一) 对立观点式
7 W. Y7 q& @/ J1 b1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型) ; v! a0 {/ M5 |/ W' O) K
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons. 3 ^0 c. P3 q8 s  E% m6 e: G# _4 d
The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… 1 M* m" e& V+ I6 I
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
( p" Q% M4 J6 w% PA is superior in another way, this is…
1 O( n! \! D2 n. l+ E& i  C% bIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… % K& B/ w" E5 }2 c' ~! ?4 y  D: Q
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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. w( j+ _# H7 P) f- w% `6 I2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast) % c0 t6 B0 A) J5 @% {

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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
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Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
# f0 [* q$ @: p+ X7 kFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is... 1 P8 x* K8 N$ I- F  P8 o* t
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
7 m- f' u% G7 y  o1 O* ~& X/ Nmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
' J( n8 f$ Y/ c2 dFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
' q8 M6 `! l9 Z# C( {/ k2 tThere is no denying that… % D& q0 R3 W0 m, j( v. A* U4 z
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that… ' g1 @3 _" l9 M' n
Finally,… 9 f- J$ ^  H8 X" T1 N
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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3 `5 [8 G2 E, ]2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
! ?5 e$ v9 Q3 I: Y* K! zThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
0 S  k& W4 W2 r8 p/ SWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
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+ r/ R0 O$ s! x7 M! W) B3 bIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… ) K! S8 H  m: p. g
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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# y6 o& W4 `/ r6 ~+ f4 v  b) {(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型 3 Y" x) l. I. i4 V0 T4 B

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8 A* T& ~0 _5 @3 P# ?# w, eThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D. ; d) u; a5 p) |* N
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
# }: ^4 N9 v3 s; nThe main reason for my propensity for C is that…… ' Z9 X, U' r4 H! g6 A  D" B
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… 2 b+ |% g8 i$ }" N$ g2 K! ~+ F- |1 q
C is superior in another way, this is… 7 D% v& [( _1 ]& D2 R& t+ A
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
( B# s1 k5 e* O9 [# h$ v! H1 q9 kFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us. 4 I+ V' H- X& M$ K4 E
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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陈述这个事实
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One of the primary causes is that… ) a  m8 v+ o3 G9 Q3 j. }$ X7 T/ o
XXX also results from… 7 I) C) J$ T* {1 P
… is responsible for xxx, as well. 1 k& G! r- h# X% m* j
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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8 B9 W; |: J  E+ {7 z& x/ A* QOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that… - E8 u* n: j! d7 n# t( A
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
- M# \3 S- T0 V; s' h! A/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that… 7 G" v) Y& K9 u

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a more subtle point which we must consider is that… " a2 l1 c9 p3 x5 ^

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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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) a& x" r7 m! w9 }% c再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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2 o# r! n, I9 R$ a* u$ b[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]
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