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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,: j; i: f* B* V2 s
,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry. & e9 O% w6 E9 }& o
零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
# E, {! G V$ U$ g8 [4 x现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.. N, t8 R; Z3 D/ l
梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.
! {2 k/ Q/ e& o- N4 U眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something. B% g }6 L) l% B: ?6 f! m2 o
夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.
# _9 `$ K, v) [8 v& L# {猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.' |" s/ Y1 ^8 U, D, \+ i- ?
就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.
. a o* f* D8 Z+ V4 I我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及
* H) o5 Z; j8 d2 Z( U2 `那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。- Z0 d4 A& Y8 r) q# y* ]' D# O% M0 l
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
& v' S8 p5 a, K! q" I6 A昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
+ `9 T6 @+ s) r, i: F/ g( Y& }想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
b' S9 X; n& r' J+ v最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
; f, g6 T0 T8 Y9 X5 c- P寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?$ g7 \+ E6 Z' p6 ~
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
O. l0 X% z1 D, O2 _; w迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
0 b+ g$ p- R; {8 o$ X' m* z最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have." K$ |9 G( G8 H# h
多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
, D' R, M6 l$ \Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
7 M+ x6 i7 d j& H+ h多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
/ B8 Z+ s- E# F' g不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.( T2 D4 G: @8 `
多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, : N0 b% T. S) `, S
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?" a6 Q7 ^% C& p; {1 x P$ L
多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
& A) d% {9 Z/ w8 S1 l. S永难平息的泪4 e; v) H# k/ d2 w
每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes+ M- k/ Q1 U5 S4 O, {$ B4 ^
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
; e9 n5 x6 w8 J# I0 m+ W( i当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
9 ~, _8 z. T; @' X7 u0 z让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
% Q) s. {1 h2 C5 m9 ^( w# o你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul " }5 R6 r# B8 d' b- L, r
一抹微笑;( x! e: E/ X! }2 {- E2 A6 a
一个手势;
( _" x$ U' o) q+ q2 b一片话语,
0 v4 r# \2 k" y- } C% \3 `愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、
( V& Y; K% }% m4 Z: D# `3 z5 ^0 C明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner, X+ ]3 U( Z3 N* l+ I& p0 ]% p
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.4 P9 o' j# D7 B, K+ N/ e
这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling4 K ?& b/ U- w: t9 t
也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..
# k7 L4 e" D) V- E {* R起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,- C* W2 |) I/ [& H6 K5 A6 i1 ~
我并不以为然。
( g" ]) H/ ]; g b4 z: P+ n可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed
, G& X" _; {9 _* r$ u; K* f5 O慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .: W' `' b/ m! W ^, c; H; C- ~
被一种情绪所左右,
0 _7 p# N" z2 r, x' L总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .+ E1 R( W) Q/ K9 q
即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you# e# B: r; f. m3 P4 S/ }0 X: J' s; K. w
也不问我是否喜欢你,% u; v* o4 u" o/ `- ~$ b1 T; N6 g
对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.' m: c }4 ~: n; [5 g+ M }
只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
5 V! k" p" b$ x; ^3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you' E j/ \/ y$ ]! O
心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil2 a7 i* K8 t6 W" F/ ~9 @ C9 U
然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere 0 \4 Y. I4 I* p1 q6 e8 ^6 C/ d
你的身影已化成一种氛围,
% ^& Y& n- c; B# `7 H# |& X记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.; ~& \/ W% A) p; X' y
你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! # a9 ]4 e( _' U0 b, a6 Q
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字0 N) B# V3 ?& a4 H
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,& K' h7 ~, c& a) D2 k7 O( D2 w
一种声音,and your voice
' x" l, T8 N$ d `" Q! J! o" o也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
/ m: U) O* {: R* S2 t2 ]8 ~8 C掺杂著幸福的感觉。" o# k* F4 @4 O" B% D. v1 H
与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
4 n/ u# J" |7 w' J象雪花般撒落在我的心田,
T7 l+ w. y! \0 Y) @ u倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
( @6 R% S# E) f9 T) V$ U纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。1 I* h/ M8 E3 K4 Y( F
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss
9 f/ d: w, [6 D& ?" V7 s/ x有一个能够让思念的人,- ~2 V! B+ u. S l+ C
其实也是一种幸福。2 k1 p: y E, e1 v4 y
尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
9 _5 g4 f8 K% V- R柔柔的海风,8 b0 p/ k& d" k) H! V4 j3 k$ c/ W
甜甜的夏天。0 x* l0 A! A' m+ Q5 I+ c
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
" m' Y! [) {! X" {! ~, C' e只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.5 |. O$ x' i$ M1 w' O; e
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.2 T1 s6 r/ |/ p
想和你有共同的情结,' s: g6 ~- ^$ j. v7 v# G8 e' _
共同的心愿。
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
5 o5 i5 A% O0 X* V, L一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together: m) S, n" X0 v/ i
或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film ! u2 y& ?: c& u4 c/ `$ c
或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.
* S9 K- ?( Y$ E『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?, |& p8 ~$ b7 B' ]! _3 P2 D( D
我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, 2 y; {. q" @- x$ F0 i
浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
/ U" _. a* i N$ @% s. w2 \, T或是轻轻的一吻,
, j R" E3 z4 r& }3 d再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』
9 e. [$ U$ v8 J; G/ J/ n/ m就足够了. That is enough.
' e" f. f& O3 G5 Q! o$ ?这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! 7 X$ @9 _0 [& n/ B7 o1 m
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.2 \ u( L5 Q, A6 t& \
萌出了芽,
( T1 ~1 H5 Y3 c9 h) E# j一如对你的思念,the same as my missing( H8 w7 I& x7 \
浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.2 Q, Y8 D! r" b1 Y6 n* f
如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand$ U( D4 u0 p8 M+ a$ S+ u" e
能够牵著你的手,2 }- u* O0 S- a
那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely./ s% z2 H+ u% O8 b
让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully.
, t2 g: W; Y- G, f8 e慢慢地细读,
/ Y/ Q% o3 c2 e. \* k- ]我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
5 w6 ?, ?" B$ {; b" G# i2 m6 O' f( e在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me j9 Z) d, k% i# R; P; {
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor
; N& H" {4 g+ T* T! k& a就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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