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每当说一句汉语的时候,我总在心里想英语是怎么说的.尤其看到汉语诗歌的时候,我突然想,翻译成英语还能保留原来的意思吗?所以试着译一译.
) k. f+ U) w' D h$ f! a3 z前边发了译文以后才发现有些大小写和语法错误.一点一点地改,很乱.所以再重新发一便:# H0 z* ~1 K( Y/ U" E3 V! u
Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
% r8 j( s5 S% \$ _Partial leaves fall down everywhere,squirrels are busily running.
4 Q+ }/ {. p. Y# C- I Current I, the same as one tear ago, the same given name, and the same family name.
* e' l+ G: L) c; {The same hairstyle,the same bag,reserved laughing and talking.
) j+ q$ s- d" y7 G6 i; D" S+ pSeemly added something in my eyes,or lacked something.
2 h7 M% d0 U" \% o% YSummer went so fast that I almost forgot those sweating night:
1 J X% j6 K( ]Cats often played at the whole hot night outside windows to get cool
+ v* {" J; E7 t8 Q9 mlike us many years ago,mindless self indulgence.5 K% q/ \4 O4 ~$ ]7 t$ j
I often cherish the memory happened in summer and those people that make me raint even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming.6 w' e+ O+ S: T& t' Y
The emotion and the carma only is a dream.5 Y0 R8 h3 q. K' O; U3 Y! h- o
That shoudn`t happen to meet each other last tenderlt night.$ F: @0 q# ~, ~6 S% \
I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
+ ?3 k1 s" m( ]1 C/ Y8 ]I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
5 s4 l" M( E* W; ?; [9 MIn this lonely world whom I can step inside love to?
$ c6 A. o3 K, y3 A- P- ^Intoxicated then feel cold,
8 C& z$ f9 `8 L7 `3 B0 W% Tthe labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
' Q$ G- U; `! \6 D) y! |I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
: }2 f5 S a! `7 F7 @The amorous man to whom you gave your soul?
$ j8 |* A+ ^+ A i QWhy I am always hoodwinked!
; J8 ]% z8 c3 i5 h7 z$ CI have told myself many times cautiously 0 W0 ]9 H1 b- h' _8 ?" W* [! g
don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
- E4 e# F! S0 sThe amorous women always get drunk by desolation.
/ @2 S& d6 a7 ~* v/ FWhy can`t I take it easy?# @# p( c7 o: J0 J
How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!; V) y" Z; s; M5 C6 A
When the quiet night comes
* K5 T" q. f1 F3 g8 K- ^" p( Lyour figure usually appears in front of my eyes.! Q, j. p" R8 g5 Q' [7 g
The greeting when you met me made my heart in touched unaccountably.
7 N8 u7 m. U6 F8 N& X GYours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul,: j9 [( P; t2 f: C, j& f
light the dark corner in my mind.
; f) A7 T# D0 z- u- I1 O( \ @I feel a bit of cozy.6 p6 A' M% U, E- r6 m; u; d1 L
The deep attached to you in a twinkling
- ~1 s" R* ?, C0 q# M Bmaybe is the most light spot in my whole life.% M! k) ^( Z4 n- w8 x3 g& h. V' L% I* ?
I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
# ], ~4 @! k2 B% Q! c9 H4 bbut accompanying with the time passed
( g0 E( X5 T1 T7 b9 \! iI am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion,
+ G5 D; |3 l1 A3 v6 Nalways feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly.- h. g/ z# _, l
Without asking if you like me or if I like you
. u! Y; Y0 n. C+ s) `' Vonly feel gracious for your existing,
' ~/ U, u) s1 b3 m% Y' k/ conlt want to do something for you.
) \1 @: x7 Q) z/ u @7 \: u- X" \Every time when you meet me
_7 \" B( \ P; c' @$ K/ ~" jthe sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil, T: B4 f7 D; M: B8 B) k
but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere9 k9 t5 T8 h+ L# k+ ~" n! A' m
That live in my heart.
# M5 \# r7 e1 lDo you know your name can suddenly come into mu mind at anytime?
) m" N8 @5 A! O( f( ?Even only your flying clothes` corner when you turn around, and your voice: I5 t2 t' z" P4 {+ b' a3 X
make me gently distraught with happy feeling.7 _9 z2 s! }, p: J0 A! d
The scene that met you prinkle in my heart like snow on the land
+ L( K! N! L, O! t$ r9 J/ g" ksuddenly flurry that all are the love to you.9 l/ }; V5 Q6 B& y9 D
Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss,! M2 P) o8 N& S
especially on the day, the gentle sea breeze and the sweet summer.; {' v* N& ~) n: b
Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy 9 g; _0 l+ E6 t+ o& `6 d+ X
only waiting for you quietly. X3 ^5 _9 ?# C$ ^) [
just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do. z3 U$ k! z' Q1 ]% g
I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
* c) P" U+ g1 c7 y' g) kand enjoy the rain washing together
, e9 Z# }6 Q3 [# | H; ]+ P( ?% hor rush to a film
* q* I/ s% j" V. |4 I for listen to a music quietly./ g) q$ S. O% w6 v- y
Whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?! o, E% c8 x2 l- |
If we embrace ,dance,and gaze to each other,% ?; `9 A+ x1 O
smile or gently kiss then say: I really love you".1 c3 q% \2 Z# b! s+ Z9 T2 a
That is enough.% C" [' Z( k; V; A& }& a
Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago,
; I; ^; C0 I! h8 Kfinely it deeply rooted into the earth in the season and sprout,9 `' P" l. ~# x. y+ R3 M; u. P9 I
the same as my missing.
. _& [8 l$ W$ yIt comes a little bit of verdure.
; v+ R' h1 z! r9 y" Y6 x9 W% _: IIf, If some day I can touch your hand,
+ \, `9 x: A ?8 d% J7 j/ ythen I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
! y1 W+ B% i5 ^ M0 dLet you touch me gently and read me carefully.
( |5 R5 a% l, e# U6 D6 w8 ^I will enjoy your mild emotion through your hands with my heart and soul.! U( H- s8 h8 ^. X/ [# t5 B
At the moment you reach out your hands to me ,
1 D- N9 x2 u& x% othen I will have all care and ardor.
' A/ y: A# B0 A- X7 a9 @Shall we walk arm in arm? o2 I) {7 S) S8 G1 K9 P( Q
呵,太晚了,连检查都不想检查一下,有没有打字错误了. |
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