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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,' H5 {# x& o2 ], M4 q
,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
; O8 G/ m. ~& U零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
! @, U1 E6 J6 t+ ]# @) |现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.1 c! X& z3 d. a# M( M2 Y' y# c q
梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.
: I1 m' ?3 M2 {3 n4 f7 P& k眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
9 m3 E! x, D# y, a, W3 Y; Z$ `! v+ B夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.
" X5 E9 [( `7 D4 m1 }0 s猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
8 y; ~, }7 S2 Z1 N; ]就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.1 b/ J; L2 Q7 N' p% B1 {- ^! R* c
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及- |6 O ~3 `9 H( m
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。( u9 j! {$ h; f( B6 i
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.7 z/ Q3 a Q* E! P$ x
昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
8 N7 {5 e3 g4 C+ ?6 ?! d想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.* L6 J \* C! |# x. u
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild. " P* I' L0 t0 d/ f" v; q
寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?8 }6 k+ X/ T+ L+ w$ M* H+ m! n6 `+ l
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.9 e! `$ G8 m' Z3 z
迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction." W3 e7 p k( n/ z6 H
最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.' z$ \ B. u. S0 s X$ D0 n
多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?" R- v7 u' ?8 r
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' …. P- D. z6 D: X5 V7 [/ B+ r
多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
2 i# `! b( A& @, l* F不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.( G9 [4 N8 J& Y5 ], W/ p
多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation,
2 p8 p- Q+ C! K( J为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
& x0 D3 g( s: l7 ^: p A: \; ]/ Q3 x: ?多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!, S1 j9 V+ ?* s3 f/ t/ h
永难平息的泪) k8 |; q& Y, l
每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes: l6 P$ N5 B2 {! [2 ]5 C6 F
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
/ r2 F$ o: R5 f3 N当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
8 j$ v' g) e2 @/ |让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
1 R+ s6 [% t- c2 V你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
) P$ Q+ }, |. r5 K/ z( y. c" o一抹微笑;0 A$ B! ~0 D" M" X7 [9 n
一个手势;5 o+ X) }* p6 B- J. B' N
一片话语,' g9 a( F; d1 }3 [! r
愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、1 G! G) s% a7 s2 I+ @# X
明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner z; g7 T# G" M, G& S2 d9 G3 j
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.
! m; r8 }3 ` M ?这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling5 D k8 s" n$ g
也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..0 @: E" k4 O' g
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
& _3 P) W% L$ |7 J' ?! T$ g; ^我并不以为然。
2 e: T, p6 Q6 b+ D& j' m* r6 b& Z可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed
' M: W, [0 x- @# w; t1 R慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .2 W! N, Y" T3 `3 n/ c$ p! a
被一种情绪所左右,
+ M* S& c9 z8 h- X6 z1 y总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
! k+ n7 N, W# b+ T( A即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
9 b K- e( {8 i; w3 U也不问我是否喜欢你,
, V1 h- m( o* m* e& x对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
+ x/ x6 O$ L' u- y D6 J, L+ B只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you) {! G. l9 y' o: V' v
3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you# C( c N! X4 o* b6 V
心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil/ o" j& ]; W9 T. N, x8 [
然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
4 h% n, {% f" ~7 R0 R" {* t# y7 m你的身影已化成一种氛围,
9 T: J" f' d$ K8 X4 j- U0 K记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.
* k7 s8 X$ M" ~* |- e* s5 V你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
* h( Y+ i$ W0 L/ i0 h随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字: u! u f% f6 _ O/ t7 a9 h! W
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,
% Q* d/ H0 J2 `" w4 W' t' p1 r一种声音,and your voice
8 B8 B7 m0 F/ @7 W. m6 s也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
" d9 i/ _% ^. {4 p( g$ W掺杂著幸福的感觉。9 ^, E& L* d2 m8 T8 o8 m
与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
X% w! U! Q9 Z9 U% ]! ?象雪花般撒落在我的心田,
! W y2 `5 D; F" X倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.0 f. q, \8 _) v; M7 ]6 i
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。* w8 z! C( P5 t) W" Z
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss
$ {5 l4 Y% W0 i& w/ O4 U有一个能够让思念的人,
1 Q) C) m& y% i& g9 y, H其实也是一种幸福。
7 v7 x4 ~: }6 N# a. \尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer. 6 T$ ^! M( v; f( l4 k }
柔柔的海风,
, F7 ?1 W/ L( B甜甜的夏天。' }) t( w% P. a# I" y# Y" X. B
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
4 o8 V7 f* O0 m! E, C5 C只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.
8 O4 F' Q7 b# f5 o) r- _仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.& S$ p, k' A# [: Q* q! f- w
想和你有共同的情结,% B; D% [: w2 u" v, P! K* n, @
共同的心愿。 T5 E3 Z# l) W3 b: E2 V- J
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& |8 c' @1 ~& A5 R8 i0 n好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you7 o7 K6 a; r" A T# o
一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together
1 Y5 a+ O2 m8 H$ F. _或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film
: X- Y9 ^2 r) [' P0 D. y# A或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.* _- C$ b1 b( g! V6 I
『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
" B6 S9 R% K/ T# K我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
; u g! C: B: i6 L. T2 E! n浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”- l2 A0 y' f) K+ \2 }/ z
或是轻轻的一吻,
$ [ |& r+ P$ ~! M, s3 B! |/ e再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』& f. J' I* i6 I! O, P% [
就足够了. That is enough.% [; v0 D7 i9 I! S# G) c& ` N1 _% y
这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! Q8 s5 u- E1 F5 T! P! h
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
7 N. l4 t% p# v* ^) |# @# l萌出了芽,
$ Q, J4 v) m; N- y* s, W一如对你的思念,the same as my missing6 `, c1 R3 n5 I. ]' s; C1 G
浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.7 B! ?; F, h$ s8 X
如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand7 D# ^1 ~1 ?- K w- `' {9 S% m
能够牵著你的手,
X1 r8 Z6 A4 v& W那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
2 v: {0 M8 \0 q0 A4 R让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. & b; P. V* ~4 ?2 |
慢慢地细读,4 R; l G; N3 O3 O6 i7 @
我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
w' X0 d( M' `4 N j8 [5 l在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me # Z' D( |/ G# W% E
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor 5 ?2 z- w2 q C9 R! k& `
就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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