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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,* X, @8 C0 J4 o$ w( q$ g
,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
d. n1 F7 U' A9 Z1 ?5 \7 m. a6 E零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
3 Q! T3 Z( I) b现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.7 G8 ?" l0 ~1 y: l. g5 {
梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.) b) v0 F1 B. q0 b
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.0 H$ H `* e# X4 w& Y
夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.
" [+ e) z. q( @/ T8 B5 E' P! T8 k猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.) D; _/ w% U @; ?
就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.
- p$ v* m5 S0 Z Y& u5 G# `! r我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及! _' q! @" [! [1 x
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。 G( h( U' l" N4 l
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.- {/ J" y/ n9 v; C2 f* R" p
昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
9 k$ b! ^2 Z1 w$ ?想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.( c" K1 D/ E7 s8 l0 ^
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild. * G- G l5 a. @; _/ [
寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?6 T/ n7 f: `) M2 ~" ~! `1 j
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
* z9 C M& p3 r" d( T- V迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.7 M0 ], g: l% e9 l: U
最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have., p7 g7 W% n7 [- ]8 Z
多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
/ R: L, t. M6 q; {- x; j- GWhy I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
% M9 Q9 j2 s0 ^; @6 D多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously/ `0 b0 V! D+ U3 S2 O, N
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
- S* X$ v* {* _7 L1 {- _& F( g3 e多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation,
$ u/ e- f$ K5 ]- w0 q4 M为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
/ L( d3 G( C N i; o( B多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
/ e+ N; i7 Z n* Q3 w永难平息的泪
# A, @6 Q' `. c6 e' G每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes1 v c$ f- |! q7 J
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.: @$ K; W$ r, d
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.4 B: ]5 G1 e% D$ v. ]3 y+ e w
让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,( b! [$ k* g$ c7 R
你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
" n% @! K9 _3 X0 f1 ]$ y一抹微笑;
$ G! h+ c. t2 u; B) V一个手势;! X. |0 Y/ }- U9 |
一片话语,7 b+ X1 r+ d( t' x8 O8 K# {: c/ }
愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、
5 D1 F9 \4 A% A- f明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner
, a, Y/ V& W, O8 T8 C心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.! a; ]" U: ~( T" T" m2 X
这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
9 a9 u, C& w+ H也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..; ^! l# `1 w3 d5 ?
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
8 E, I7 Y' I* _我并不以为然。
5 q5 x2 h1 N: X4 Z! ?可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed " P+ ^. m4 I% `) V
慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion ./ K8 j, T- d. t, ~; J% g
被一种情绪所左右,
4 _2 E* A& |+ \& p& U! L总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .) H! r) ?9 D( T& z
即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
4 G1 q; u* _ r( Y6 @4 }也不问我是否喜欢你,
e) `' r# u$ y, E1 q对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
, `, p5 K8 ?8 n只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
% D- e+ N" L h! c6 N/ `; v3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you+ @ D4 v& y- \/ C
心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil
6 \8 E0 V* l( f; q1 P, Z! y! f然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere 0 j- k6 { n# e. c0 V
你的身影已化成一种氛围,8 N8 j; z" R; v2 @% I
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.
0 C# T9 } \! i" Z0 [' w! F你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! 0 e* E- t% q6 H9 _2 ]
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字+ M' M4 W4 y4 F& x
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,
: h* U/ f* n& E一种声音,and your voice( {5 E0 W! Q8 N, w
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
7 C& \) P- C# {) ]% R掺杂著幸福的感觉。
* E k1 i- q' p; t# C与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
& c9 x2 d3 @3 b' |象雪花般撒落在我的心田,
; y9 J2 B% w* z倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
% c6 w! E2 B; Z8 R1 ]0 \) X纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。# D* B" B) Y4 X* I! e
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss- O) Z- q- A8 u1 t5 B3 ~& D3 H
有一个能够让思念的人,/ x$ N* R" I6 h) b
其实也是一种幸福。
4 K& {& w. G. L/ S! N# v o1 l. k尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
8 U4 l5 [% y, E柔柔的海风," l' p# c; P7 [0 K4 f& R. `
甜甜的夏天。3 C% g* @, A" e
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
( s0 Q" M8 P% n4 {* T5 q只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.
T0 h) b( I; }' ~! z仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.5 K1 o$ x3 a+ b1 Q. Z
想和你有共同的情结,
5 J0 q3 d6 C# ]+ `* W' C共同的心愿。5 }( L8 I& ]! i* W0 m: [5 `
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
3 B" y, z# ^6 z% y一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together
) a; C8 v" p: h+ H1 @( `$ d或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film
$ K; C! W$ c, `, Z; g+ ~或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.0 K$ l3 y1 i S3 v# T: q+ n
『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
0 B: L0 {1 Q+ q& h我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
% k7 K6 z7 Z/ v. [ ]/ J, Z- N/ _浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
- @5 ?2 D& T' L# D3 ~2 ^9 d8 X或是轻轻的一吻,2 f3 k3 ~0 y% r! a/ L5 X7 m& h
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』, I$ y$ i& R! Q* M' f( O5 _8 X7 ^
就足够了. That is enough.
2 x0 \# |' E& {7 d这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! * G' y0 S/ l; C1 |
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.6 h# X0 c F' v# y% E7 j
萌出了芽,2 v9 v/ R" h% u
一如对你的思念,the same as my missing
2 _; R4 V4 h b$ a l浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
& R& Z6 |1 g- j# I. G- z# J如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand9 Z) C: L$ g% k6 F) G5 _6 c; _
能够牵著你的手,! O p& H( u. a* `& K
那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.6 c0 P4 z+ i# f! w' x
让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. : n. x8 V6 K/ [
慢慢地细读,
: S! f3 q4 c; ^$ U我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
! O3 n5 I8 Z" W& k H$ B6 Y5 {在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me
! f% b) \: B$ j p1 o4 X9 v' ?( l我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor 6 K% D7 A0 y7 N+ j6 N0 g8 ~
就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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