锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

2 @$ {  T- ?2 l8 j4 f　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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: a, m( A& a+ j/ a# g" w　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

+ j. }& w1 l+ V. s" ~5 x# F2 B: A　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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( W4 |/ c3 |3 R! ?. |* M　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

" m5 Z* R  O) J) |& Z) `" e　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

; V! H; O1 \/ A, N* p　　6. Their brain is still very young.
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. h, \4 H' e: C' g2 z8 {, l　　改进: They are still immature.
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% r% y" J6 h# ~3 s5 g! T- e) O0 A　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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$ Q" G2 }( N8 a; U/ _! {" u　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

' Z) G9 K$ q3 b9 _; P! F0 k0 H  l+ w　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

4 d2 v; v; Q7 N: W! Y( r  t　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

4 w* D' \( v! k& B" l& @6 {1 Y　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

* l) L7 r. O7 T% `1 u8 U* a9 W　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

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　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

; R  @6 n) V9 z* o; k  E! `　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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6 t4 X& D3 ^$ _! K$ s/ T) F　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

3 C+ V; r- ^4 ?0 i9 G7 `' f* f　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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2 |& W4 ^/ `. T　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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* v( _9 D) F/ O7 z8 s7 w3 U. s　　19. They cannot think clearly.
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　　改进: They cannot think straight.
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2 m4 ^- [, T0 S1 }# q　　20. Money can improve their living standard.
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　　改进: Money can improve their life.
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　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.

0 @* [/ o/ g8 X* L　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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+ y# S% [; l' m# W　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.

　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.

3 l; A, L% r, Y　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.

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　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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6 ]5 o$ @- S' k( {2 |3 S* ~　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.

　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.

6 P& R# M$ K0 c) n　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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) Z( z! L" \5 u) y# ?　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
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　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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% u# l( r& w4 o7 l- ~( x　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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　　31. I am not good at maths, but English

1 J" P4 C+ _' ^3 X! g+ h' N　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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, u0 t3 D' q) Y/ Y　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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' F6 O4 F, n) [% J, k　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?

$ k* o9 v1 J* ?" H2 K" G　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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) `$ e. Y. V# d8 O2 B　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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6 W8 u" [. {- [% n+ ?  Q　　34. I agree the latter idea.

$ q, @7 o* }3 E' b" l　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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6 N- Q7 d5 l( E* e, I　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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/ O, W* }* d. v6 p: j　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

/ Z4 D3 s' Y2 f) x  b. F# s　　38. No one knows all the things.
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　　改进: No one knows everything.
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) y! m( B* O: z2 t1 j1 p- s  `' B" |　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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0 c* e6 t6 f! L0 `0 u0 F( E3 C* W　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

: \3 y" S+ Q& h5 ]  \7 b　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply

　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

+ D: ^+ g5 ~" C) `; l　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
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　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.

( w4 V3 J4 |8 {7 C! d# @! B3 R　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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7 p, \  ]! c( R+ P: X" M3 w. [" _　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

! Y; T) p* B9 ^. V1 \% u+ Q　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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+ J/ B8 L" h: A$ C4 w* ~9 b　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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2 E' e% x' X% |( |7 l8 t　　50. I felt alone.
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　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka