锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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: t6 [  Y: v% Z! R4 E6 m1 O0 T　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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) m  O* K% t- G- X5 X　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

/ k8 [, p- |6 J5 Y: @- l　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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. f7 h0 P  u( v  G% Y% j$ ^　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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; e6 v& D* v, V2 o9 P　　6. Their brain is still very young.
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　　改进: They are still immature.

　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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. L- O% p8 l7 K& P: C　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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" d7 r0 A1 t6 P2 |# p　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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9 L+ H; T7 o% q9 i& K( r4 y* h　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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4 n* Q9 ]* @" o5 R' I8 l! P/ d　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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: c2 l9 [* Y5 B4 e1 F+ y  @( G) C　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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. z- D% s% m/ L5 n# U; k1 ]+ q　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

9 w. H+ F4 U6 l　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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( b9 T) z4 W9 u+ i" J: F　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

. V( F/ l1 c5 @& A. S6 d　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.

　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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8 O, `" w1 v% f: S! h　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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9 |% j$ A1 j) i) s3 R. \　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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) I/ c" ]4 Y0 t$ l2 m1 r　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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- r; v) h  B2 x" d0 W1 i　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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6 |" t( Z  ], G' Z2 o( i' E　　19. They cannot think clearly.
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　　改进: They cannot think straight.

3 B, n$ j2 P; K6 ~( v5 y　　20. Money can improve their living standard.
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' h, n9 A, H, M$ I" `# p　　改进: Money can improve their life.
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　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.

　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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" `- U; T/ G( v& x8 O　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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/ g6 T3 s5 u: V　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.

/ L: A5 K! l: ]　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.

　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.

# B8 I6 l+ h! o　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.

　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
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) H' O4 @: b  Q　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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! ~/ z) E4 _$ _/ p, j, s　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
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# a9 H" R) |* ?( j! ^　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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4 ^( _/ c  j! S* W5 `. B. D# h5 B　　28. What's about nonsmokers?

　　改进: What about nonsmokers?
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　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?

6 @$ I1 D% E# D7 M　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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1 Z$ c9 g* H% y# i2 i4 Q& B　　31. I am not good at maths, but English

1 E3 D/ P6 l2 k9 p　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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8 {/ a" w) b0 H, L% P　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?

　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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8 w/ Z5 F6 S' N5 U2 l; i9 D　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.
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　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

9 @$ b& l; q7 d! A( B* o, S　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

) A5 U9 u6 b: {3 V8 |　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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% F4 s+ X4 T  Z* z5 @　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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( V3 @. X4 B* }& f　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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0 u. j9 \1 e/ n; p% m+ @, o　　38. No one knows all the things.
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) U& O: R) f, m* s6 j, Z　　改进: No one knows everything.
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　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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" Q: o6 J1 R0 P7 q. b　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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6 C0 Q2 O+ r" V" z9 f) f: g　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

9 S, L/ Q9 c  ?, g! S7 k7 G$ b　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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7 r* r; U) B* k% N7 V　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

# C  C2 m( ^0 i8 p0 ]/ O　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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8 P: f9 x& Z7 {  x　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

3 e1 `6 d* F% `& D# T　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.

- B9 t# G; n" K　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

4 Y7 n. k/ I: }7 S　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
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　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.

; ]2 F: t  r8 W9 O( {　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

3 v/ A; A2 a1 K* W1 S　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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& {+ k$ @. |" d- O$ d6 h　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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0 w/ M5 S+ T1 t2 i9 ^8 z' v　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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, G- E7 ~& I; i# s) e0 X　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

5 K8 l3 H" a/ v　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

- p+ `% V3 I# I3 d) @　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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: R1 [2 f9 N, d$ _4 M+ g　　50. I felt alone.

4 o7 l3 S' X0 K# I9 P　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka