锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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8 t1 U* @0 \6 Q' v" o　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

7 F5 B9 g/ ]" V' L3 x  X　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

: B" @' q6 ~( F　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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% b: t9 W5 P( y# U  n  {1 |2 {　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

; d/ d# W* Z  P8 Z　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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" q1 f6 j1 o; t8 W  ]  g! C9 ]. Y　　6. Their brain is still very young.

　　改进: They are still immature.
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* y2 R2 K" P& o9 B8 Y; m　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

7 i: u5 P! g: G, L* F$ M　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

* u. _8 @/ A/ h　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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6 H+ D4 w, i* z" P! M" u" ~　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

" x6 |: `2 B/ E　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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2 J2 c9 ^. N2 Q6 ^) F* ?0 m' T' J　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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/ a9 p+ s" \) N　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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　　19. They cannot think clearly.
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+ U5 S: A4 H  `9 }9 i/ W; E　　改进: They cannot think straight.
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3 Q& c  ]* x# e' `4 J　　20. Money can improve their living standard.
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# _0 r' Q( i* {3 p　　改进: Money can improve their life.
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　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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- l, {5 b- I/ \, B, M　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.

/ c2 L; l1 P: f1 \+ d　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.

　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.

　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.

　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.

+ @' H9 o; m' x) I! r　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

( r. x5 b  s" @0 l　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
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# u( c1 j: a! z. k  e( U　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

+ X1 P# h$ `' H# Y　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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6 Z7 T5 Z) r' p6 Q8 S2 Z　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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! ^9 i/ F" g8 ~" `* @　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

8 }& O* F% M: @' B* a* c　　31. I am not good at maths, but English

* K% M0 x: I9 P. `　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

# I6 O) l4 J7 A6 s　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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. ]1 a, x2 j% M% A8 M4 s1 \1 S　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?

# |, @/ X, F9 |2 G, a1 [6 I: k　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

　　34. I agree the latter idea.

4 }) A6 `' d$ P# c　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.
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　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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. J" _# \+ q2 G5 K1 e4 {　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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9 O7 [& L9 Y& Q' j, @( @　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

　　38. No one knows all the things.
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& E, o. b9 z% H, R3 _　　改进: No one knows everything.
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　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

* U. F7 H- Q* L/ v( ~　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

' |, ^0 @! Z2 s" n  Z/ G4 l$ c　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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6 h3 v7 `7 U) j　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

1 o: U" ^7 O3 ?$ n9 U　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.

　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

　　改进: They will develop bad habits.

　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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+ i5 K2 T' Z* ?8 z　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

& i; N: O5 z9 _, g: h" z- t" ~　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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: ]7 w& l: c0 z$ S+ _7 ?8 y　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

/ j" j" v/ i7 ~% n3 t　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

9 Q2 N! \6 J- Z" X3 u4 X　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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' R. _) L# H& g: n　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.

4 y  p. u! Z9 F1 P1 E　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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　　50. I felt alone.

' e, B+ r! y: t* Z9 ^　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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Thanks

sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka