锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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( R/ t) J: _3 o- r* @" t　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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# F$ x9 j9 A' S- e! h　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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% q! B. {$ I6 C0 l5 C# i　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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3 [/ w; w3 t: \3 q5 J" D# Y　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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7 P4 `& p& [  g0 |6 c7 L: ]: a9 Q3 p　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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' Z4 l  I% |" M0 J" L　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

　　6. Their brain is still very young.

　　改进: They are still immature.

$ ^7 t9 k! o: Z4 x, z) N2 F　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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% B4 D1 h& w8 v8 I! D2 c" f6 y$ I9 P　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

5 q3 s, {3 o0 g; Z　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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2 D1 F3 F0 B: m　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

3 ?2 E/ G$ p5 r　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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4 z. s, T1 E+ e: s* o7 d9 r. L　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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+ e- y& e8 D7 V( m　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

! h+ z4 i) s: C- ?& Z　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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7 S( P! k' @$ }( p( h$ C　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

$ `2 r2 i! T6 r' H* X- q6 _　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.

　　19. They cannot think clearly.

' ^* ]/ r. N0 Z5 r0 b- h, `3 O/ h& U　　改进: They cannot think straight.

　　20. Money can improve their living standard.

' ^2 {+ S- i: {* B8 c　　改进: Money can improve their life.

2 R# P- H& w! o* z8 J　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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4 c! @! D; W+ e6 Z9 x- _$ D　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.

　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.

8 t! U  O0 S+ X+ g  s, H$ o' S6 k8 K　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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; n/ c9 p& c3 x" c3 b2 S　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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' a6 f( p! L7 l7 T　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.

0 e6 U! O5 V; V　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

3 t! u% M/ q: T9 J0 I/ Q) b　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

5 g! E6 L7 c% C3 s" d　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
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　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

- i- }& }' Z. |0 q　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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9 j& w( w. s6 ?+ c. Z# h' I　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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/ h3 z$ b' @' K9 b　　31. I am not good at maths, but English

; ]6 l9 q" |# l2 P　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

( ^3 M6 O% f3 K  O$ ~9 f: o+ |　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?

　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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6 e" ~7 u) t& g& N0 p. }! u5 r+ h　　34. I agree the latter idea.

　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.
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7 t& b  i& y/ i. j5 Q$ s2 x8 d4 A1 ?　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

' B! o4 L$ w# U6 ~0 b6 X　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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/ v  A+ f9 U  W, ~0 ^3 t" |　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

* R$ ?* p: C' ^2 t　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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! r+ d. r9 J5 E( B2 C: i4 V7 G　　38. No one knows all the things.
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　　改进: No one knows everything.

　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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: y! H& T9 r2 v, o* ?- X* B　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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: R  ^" H  N. j0 p$ R4 ^　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

  m4 B- O0 O. _8 q　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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0 ~( |' I+ l! y/ D　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

　　改进: They will develop bad habits.

" M0 P& x2 d4 y) ]　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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# \9 w0 F5 V3 \+ @5 H7 K1 y/ G: S6 l　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

: \6 X$ l: T3 t2 |' V: i- p　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.

& X3 I" o# a! p; a+ O$ C　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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) G" U# J( _0 P4 O! x- \' F& p　　50. I felt alone.

　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.

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sindowa

随便

平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka