我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming
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Faster, hotter and sweater,
0 k' D2 j$ ?' f2 F& ~Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
To my life and dream.
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  [6 Q% T4 a) Z* U8 yFollowing the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
: _( h- m: K: q% E: RGo to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.
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Good-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
! V- c5 z, |/ P7 U8 q7 e5 oMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
: W! w* ^" J" n. u+ L, m+ ]+ _: J2 oIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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简约

thank you, i can see it now.
7 E# X& o! Z3 K2 ^8 Y- Z3 \1 b* d& qbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
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