我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
) M) ]: v7 m" G; DSummer's Coming

3 q6 h" Z  W7 {0 ]Faster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
: }1 G$ O6 N( a9 t" P- _" eFrom the colorful nature
To my life and dream.

Following the summer's step,
5 F8 \' T5 i1 b* [) ?; s6 ]% N6 [Let myself go ---
& F4 Q: o2 c- b. C5 zGo to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.

8 \* i8 s% B, E3 g& [& fGood-bye, my happy spring;
% p! _8 N6 F  v0 K* B! c# VGood-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
% ?, x; o0 a; l% s4 |My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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3 b! x3 r: T/ H& u7 y7 Z[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
' I7 j. |& F/ v% G9 G3 o! m% xbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
- S( k7 J1 e; {# t夏天来了