我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
# H5 }$ S5 }& H4 O$ w* n! u是十多年前的作品了——
4 W! V- Q" [5 p+ @Summer's Coming
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  {$ e- w5 L3 r. G! W3 R1 l& z, DFaster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
1 [0 B5 S% I) m$ p1 B1 Q% s' F* I5 Q: Q* iFrom the colorful nature
To my life and dream.

Following the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
3 s8 S2 }1 @/ O% N  [' ^- s) ]Go to the wild rain
9 e6 @/ L5 b9 }2 KWashing my heart and soul.

Good-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
+ A$ e5 ^* O) |% H& ^I can prepare nothing;
# ~* r: [6 E7 k- w1 k( K7 rMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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* T$ O: m' p) a, J0 k一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了