我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
6 s# U/ Y* _4 _9 y$ c8 P是十多年前的作品了——
% P" O' z5 C4 q- m( jSummer's Coming
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Faster, hotter and sweater,
* e1 R5 Q8 v1 LSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
* L) y1 e. ~* Z7 W% YTo my life and dream.

5 W$ |% A9 T$ {6 Z4 {* sFollowing the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
; p# k/ t2 d2 s0 J+ b) lGo to the wild rain
! {4 U+ {# C' {  j: B/ T. c  lWashing my heart and soul.
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+ E2 Q6 s" ]3 v8 l- R  qGood-bye, my happy spring;
8 S* c3 D2 A8 m  n( p# uGood-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
, j  N; V, M, w( n7 DIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

7 e( X5 C: |) ]* z* F5 K6 F0 h[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
, s9 V6 L2 k3 V6 e% z. }4 A. n: `but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
$ E, B. [9 x' `9 u8 Y2 d; F$ j夏天来了