儿子写给老妈的'控诉'信

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儿子13,正在学习写作. 恰逢范文是一封信,他挥笔就来,成就了下面的'控诉'状.
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6 [) d* v) f, x# n1 u好心的读者帮帮忙:
1)多少是他妈该改变的?
2)多少是TEENAGER该收敛的?

Hi, Mum, aka. Isabel
I have written you this message because:
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" r& K7 H2 Y- l( D$ AI reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.
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I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.

/ ~: ?5 c6 ]0 ^( }5 Y8 P- HYou should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.

I would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.

I wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.

You should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home.

I would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.

/ o9 V0 [* l. B* K6 l$ oThe last thing is that I should do less chores.
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& Y( x) j! D& d7 ~  lYour sincerely:( I didn't like writing this)
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老杨

I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.不同意，小孩子的大脑容量是巨大的。

* N0 `3 t/ e) O6 U& H; \5 o- ^/ kI should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.不作评论。
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You should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.同意。
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I would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.同意。
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I wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.每天1~2小时。

$ [% _7 I0 y3 M, A0 I* }! aYou should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home. 同意。
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I would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.不同意。
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The last thing is that I should do less chores.应该多做家务事。

- w- t, V& G- C& Z4 z* M$ tYour sincerely:( I didn't like writing this) 括号里面的话不好。