我尊贵的邻居(11)

Justing

井忘川

我尊贵的邻居
9 S0 ^+ _& K/ T5 _是我们小区  几十户
; u5 ~% u- w- A% j: g: p% f) H唯一的元老
一住三十多年

; Y) N" ~5 ~; t) X" A/ ?" u邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
白发红颜  不见皱纹
# p3 u4 [1 L- }开车铲雪  挖土栽花
& o- z$ h! g' B! |6 m0 h6 ~! {+ y4 N似不识  岁月为何物
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环
邻居气宇轩昂
如同女面朱熔基
邻居的字
2 g7 R9 a! J! S- g; a则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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. d1 y4 }. s1 ~! c( n1 ?邻居酷喜中国文化
' i2 C, N  Q; L( ?. A说她属土龙
其笛声也悠扬
那是从隔壁传来的
1 B! |" v: S, b! R8 {  D/ v唯一的声响
那不知名的曲调
反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂

Justing

这首哪天有空好好翻译一下，写张贺卡送过去，顺便取取经。回帖备忘。

张玉

老人是宝啊

Justing

身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换

Justing

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- n, g- x+ o6 e9 Q6 c4 j+ Y  I) N英文版，欢迎指正：
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& i+ c2 l7 Y1 _Living here for more than thirty years,
my prestigous neighbour
is the only first owner of the unit properties
6 h. h$ O& \: {0 m' T' N4 Iin our community ---
tens of townhouse condos.
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Neighbour is more than eighty years old,
- S' H; ]* {" E& S% Kmagically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
5 T; U& h; A* }2 ~( v3 DShe has white hairs and red faces.
% o9 ~' f- S7 P! vHer light-footed movement
4 k1 Q1 p1 w6 k& ~5 Wis just like a flying swallow.
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5 U0 @4 L5 g5 E1 o' ~7 R8 KShe shovels the snow on her door lane
/ z3 M/ ~7 G3 a4 @before driving her own car;
$ w7 F8 D& `7 V. ?- q. _+ O; Ushe digs her back yard
to plant flowers ---
as if she did not know what years mean.
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& k# g* \! Q4 w6 E: }With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
3 z+ ]5 V! [0 f( y* S  ~' B. fneighbour has a dignified appearance ---
as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
Neighbour's handwriting
6 n9 w! R& o1 o0 b4 b' z, |! eis so vigorous as to be the old trees
& f& k7 Q& m# c4 t3 xinterwined by dry vines.
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; m: z; R# Y* l3 xNeighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
/ w3 d; `+ b+ ^; B7 S+ r8 K! C+ OWell, her fluting is very melodious ---
1 V7 E% a+ v: h  P+ k2 g" |2 |  Xthat is the sole sound going into my ears
from the next side of my wall;
the unknown tune is extolling
the magnificence and brilliance of the life,
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Justing

土龙，1928年，与朱熔基同年，具体到月份，邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。

Justing

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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

. K0 c6 _* A4 L! }  I2 G从音韵角度考虑，还是不换为宜。我写新诗，仿照古诗平仄的要求，比较注意语句缓（相当于平声）急（相当于仄声）的交错搭配，这是我的独到之处。
另外，翻译改动一处：
Her light-footed movement
is just like a flying swallow.
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Her light-footed movement
is just like a swallow flying.

hm86888

6# Justing


2 c) `. t/ x9 Q4 t7 c真的是太像朱镕基了！

Justing

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6# Justing
' Z; m. Q0 g& z" j# @1 \8 g真的是太像朱镕基了！
hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

2 s3 M1 E7 ]. n( [3 V我贴的就是朱熔基啊，邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。