my son

爱上爱城 · 发表于 2013-7-3 01:42

My son is a cute boy .He is sixty years old. There is a big war of his learning when we are together .(this is a metphor ) I cant rember the cause of our fight ,now. Sometimes it was just over one saxphone practice he did or maybe just he watches TV before finish his homework and I was angry about it.I hope he can study hard.but everone like to be a lazy cat.When I saw his charming smile,I know ,I love him forever.
刚学着写，请各位帮着指点指点，谢谢

第一名 · 发表于 2013-7-3 07:31

sixty？still do homework？

beforei · 发表于 2013-7-3 07:41

Saxophone

beforei · 发表于 2013-7-3 07:42

Metaphor

beforei · 发表于 2013-7-3 07:43

Here, no 'now'. I cant rember the cause of our fight ,now.

beforei · 发表于 2013-7-3 07:46

Punctuation problem.

beforei · 发表于 2013-7-3 07:47

Anyway,nice tried

hongan · 发表于 2013-7-3 09:23

your son is a cute boy, and he is 60 years old, I'm just wondering how cute he is?

Coldhotdog · 发表于 2013-7-3 09:51

You are really commendable. Your son is already SIXTY years old, so I guess you are at least in your eighties and you are still learning English. Lifelong learning is so great!

billzhao · 发表于 2013-7-3 14:31

Age is not a problem for learning. On the contrary, your life experience helps your understanding in all aspects.

Ping_An · 发表于 2013-7-6 21:42

Haha, funny.

OwenLee · 发表于 2013-8-4 11:57

Before finishing.

smart007 · 发表于 2013-8-6 12:21

60 years. you must be an old lady

smart007 · 发表于 2013-8-6 12:22

I think you can not use cute for a person who is 60 years old

smart007 · 发表于 2013-8-6 12:27

he is 60 years. you still want him study hard? forget about it.not treat him that way

smart007 · 发表于 2013-8-6 12:33

Coldhotdog 发表于 2013-7-3 10:51 8 j! x& n$ @- \
You are really commendable. Your son is already SIXTY years old, so I guess you are at least in your ...

she is never old to learn

smart007 · 发表于 2013-8-6 12:33

Coldhotdog 发表于 2013-7-3 10:51
2 M) I" B) Z7 o, T- OYou are really commendable. Your son is already SIXTY years old, so I guess you are at least in your ...

she is never old to learn

smart007 · 发表于 2013-8-6 12:34

Coldhotdog 发表于 2013-7-3 10:51 , }+ I( \4 U% b( Z
You are really commendable. Your son is already SIXTY years old, so I guess you are at least in your ...

she is never old to learn

爱上爱城 · 发表于 2013-8-18 19:15

,l谢谢，困为大家我发现英语这个东西有点搞人。。。。。

summer_tina · 发表于 2013-8-21 21:53

您要踏踏实实的学；首先过得了自己这一关；如果你自己都知道里面可能有些拼写错误，还是姑息，照旧登上来让别人帮你看看；这就是不够严谨。至少要您自己敢拍着胸口说，认为没有任何的错误，这样的基础上，再请教别人，才能有提高啊。

学英语不背诵文章，不行。

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