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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, / i# q2 U* I: _7 o. e0 M
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
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Savages* ]1 x9 ~+ N( _9 d. V# s
Poets/ h* i- [" ]/ P1 ?5 T
Builders of canoes,$ u2 L. W- D) O. c: [/ m
Black smiths
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9 H* D* e% ?+ _) P* r* HRisk takers," o0 q; F; s% Y( u- t5 j
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder 3 w" z9 e6 x, y# O
As I think of what could be. 8 i, P3 V; y3 }; R  S6 J; ?' i/ |
The world is so big to me
. W$ J* O; o/ sI wonder what it means to be
  V; e* {  @3 Y0 Z6 j& uI looked up at the star and smiled
- W/ w4 {, D; V5 m: F. \They flashed as they have heard all I have read. 9 ]+ b8 ?3 F7 W# p

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
' }* u# e! n1 h5 Y评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
4 s- m/ I  Z! a7 f顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,9 R4 G8 x8 @9 ^' _9 i
A poor old Guy;1 k- i8 ^8 L( a: O3 W0 h% s& y
Legs in a bonfire,; T8 C; a% L4 n7 ?! \1 e
Head in the sky6 `3 v" t4 q6 n8 S4 ]6 M( i
Lonely, with the feel of betray
$ q2 Z7 Z5 |& uHeart empty and hollow, ~, t4 s5 X  y3 `3 W
Alone I stand+ l- \$ Z5 `% {" u) R# v
I am useless to all : `$ A7 L( s- u
But I wish I were a dove 0 q& f  C5 n0 V' [$ w; T; j
Giving myself to the world, to the fire) k" {1 _( l8 J/ O3 w
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
# ^; A  A9 M# e- X, |I sent prayers to my god  ^& g, ~. t6 D/ v. J) Y
Though he does not answer
- i$ c) ]4 }. r# J  G0 C: t2 vHe bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
+ U6 k# X, e: X' T加油加油,经常写写!
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