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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
& J+ w; ?0 O8 RI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  7 @: Y  e/ W. t! f7 |' t7 L
Dreamers. C/ |9 h3 j& F' `8 n2 s( V
Savages
4 ^8 S' P) D$ I( GPoets
2 m. I; c5 L9 a" \Builders of canoes,
0 G3 f) K! ~1 F/ p2 SBlack smiths
. a7 W% k) t9 ]6 W8 R7 A' mMurderers,
* M5 o$ @+ A7 G: T; a+ _6 w8 }/ TRisk takers,, J4 B. ~" t, }% i
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
) _* K+ o7 V! Y( \As I think of what could be. ( L9 b! \3 y! \2 w
The world is so big to me
; U- t2 s% Y. H, P$ Y$ h+ ^; V4 C3 @I wonder what it means to be
4 q. M" r" {- D$ Y' ~5 t7 II looked up at the star and smiled ' N& ^% P) a8 j7 h8 B" M
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.   [# H, \8 b/ l3 Y

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
) g  W/ d: F! `! B评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
8 G( u- a, G6 \  s/ c8 y+ H顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,; D0 H/ x1 \& D+ F6 S
A poor old Guy;' Q. P. A# _  P6 Y7 b3 E0 x8 o
Legs in a bonfire,5 e+ ?+ n' D; @  `) D- z! E0 i; f
Head in the sky3 |% D; n) [& |- M- R' L) \
Lonely, with the feel of betray
, E* J# \: i7 [6 D  q) kHeart empty and hollow2 L1 O2 q0 t5 V8 J4 A
Alone I stand: F3 a, i  u( F* B
I am useless to all : _1 z, V$ |; P& r+ U1 y
But I wish I were a dove
' h3 t6 m0 B+ s- N1 m3 h2 g6 a( TGiving myself to the world, to the fire! k0 x4 a$ n4 J% D5 \
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
# C+ K( n) q1 ]! [( y/ n9 uI sent prayers to my god
6 @) F! L$ B) U0 g* @. o7 }3 gThough he does not answer
3 C% y0 W0 A; f9 CHe bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
9 S/ Y+ R% [/ v/ G  ~9 N加油加油,经常写写!
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