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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
# ^* P& O3 H9 b, H4 ]% ?# `* GI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
0 h% m: W, E4 S" k4 f  X6 ~9 B7 @& eDreamers
; d, H% @% N' w; sSavages7 {1 K% \. O5 I; o& ^
Poets+ h4 A; p" B5 l) k" b
Builders of canoes,0 V9 s6 ?/ u% U5 {
Black smiths
2 w+ p. t6 s& P8 S! iMurderers,0 q" W% X! u- r0 a+ z
Risk takers,: i: f6 k7 c3 S: y" |
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder , E. s( C/ S" w; @- g0 |
As I think of what could be.
6 A" U/ i+ V7 y) H0 u3 EThe world is so big to me
# h8 e/ F; b: I5 }( X9 zI wonder what it means to be+ w$ W- L. A6 x+ `  ~
I looked up at the star and smiled
: Z4 W" c: F% m& W, CThey flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。; D+ J& U6 s0 s3 n# S
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
; _, K7 {* r  l. `- q9 m, _: Q顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,5 D; v3 K8 y& A% B" U5 |
A poor old Guy;& P5 i: R0 b$ P# E: Y: P
Legs in a bonfire,% _& U+ h$ s9 Q, L  F0 B2 x4 z; C
Head in the sky5 H. \7 z' f$ q6 t- E3 Y
Lonely, with the feel of betray
/ c+ l' E7 Q0 z) |! eHeart empty and hollow* L+ A, S5 U! k% d  T
Alone I stand+ s8 F6 x( O% s' P/ a$ p: O; ~
I am useless to all ; \$ r% P" b* ?8 K( v) z  |
But I wish I were a dove
) L) i: h- X1 L! \' f1 EGiving myself to the world, to the fire
$ s# A; Q) b0 M+ O* g$ A2 \I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
. e- I+ ^+ a/ I# d; E" v, m( aI sent prayers to my god
( \$ x: D4 }8 ]* k( kThough he does not answer
! g; p; z. t0 q" DHe bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。$ L4 \$ W% i0 w, O2 @( G
加油加油,经常写写!
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