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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
& y! n& t9 N6 h3 B/ y8 qI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  " P, w- p% z  L( x7 k
Dreamers
3 `, Y) {) D: G: Q; OSavages; P3 i- B1 N5 H$ z
Poets- i8 n8 [! Q5 A" H6 B
Builders of canoes,' t( u% U$ }; ~( K3 Y! {
Black smiths
2 b6 q. i- |/ V- n" H/ U! m" OMurderers,
8 p+ d9 ^& V& s$ f! RRisk takers,5 u  ]/ B8 I+ `2 p& ?6 S
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
: k7 C: Q3 d3 P3 Z$ s2 uAs I think of what could be. 7 P1 H; U. R# s  n
The world is so big to me
, K, h# ^5 H) M3 a. AI wonder what it means to be) b/ M& a& `/ q( y% L0 b
I looked up at the star and smiled $ ]4 r; r+ W9 ^# G& u6 z/ ]
They flashed as they have heard all I have read. & B& r4 }" k: M1 b9 I+ k) T9 A
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。! m) z( R* G& l
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
  d" ~+ [, m6 v顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,! j8 _' ^! I: X) R% I
A poor old Guy;4 b" U* J+ B: o- W9 g* O! `& h
Legs in a bonfire,( |1 k( t' [2 W0 W0 x- b5 ^
Head in the sky
6 j# U4 q: z+ ?8 }0 ^Lonely, with the feel of betray
! p& m9 O& }$ [- ~# z5 s& DHeart empty and hollow# X& R0 B; M# h; q  O; v
Alone I stand
/ x6 M3 }. V, Q/ ^5 S) OI am useless to all : n$ i2 f6 r# L% b
But I wish I were a dove
' z8 |- m4 z4 ^9 e# Q! N1 ?Giving myself to the world, to the fire
, C! Z7 c: J& [I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind6 `/ {" |+ K, [3 R$ [4 Z9 h
I sent prayers to my god. S& d1 }% a9 m& K
Though he does not answer
% t( B, ?/ F; N- I2 j4 g0 SHe bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。# H1 x1 A( h& N" C7 h/ |
加油加油,经常写写!
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