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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, $ V% \' A/ c; ]1 N% a
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
' V0 |' s. g+ _9 O# k/ ^5 LDreamers
5 S% o# p- g) ~: \+ K8 iSavages9 W+ X. G* t9 X$ U7 w! c
Poets& O( D& y8 X/ W& O# M) V1 M# a4 F
Builders of canoes,
$ e7 K( w$ T1 E) k$ p" W  uBlack smiths
" U, j( z8 D  Q! O5 `' CMurderers,$ I4 o4 k9 [' }) }1 i
Risk takers,
  k- h, E4 m4 PMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder 2 i! X# ~  j% ]: [" i9 ]
As I think of what could be. # F; [6 j- e0 U3 X# {
The world is so big to me
5 _8 G. y, B7 c; I0 v) iI wonder what it means to be$ I" g9 z8 x5 o  x& L
I looked up at the star and smiled
9 m. S8 M- w% p* T1 i* r/ {They flashed as they have heard all I have read. 1 R7 A$ Q& y& P) Y: i" N$ }3 \+ t7 P

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
! K: x& S5 d5 L# u/ x: ?评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
: @/ y' X6 v# D1 h, `顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
8 m1 d# M6 K. GA poor old Guy;9 ^4 C4 q8 A$ M5 w6 F$ u, E* w: Z+ R6 m
Legs in a bonfire,
$ p0 D: W3 a' }1 S# IHead in the sky
! t1 v) w& K% r+ z9 vLonely, with the feel of betray4 q9 H1 |2 ]3 M7 h0 @
Heart empty and hollow
2 O5 O! [- B8 P; pAlone I stand
2 u1 e9 q& N* |I am useless to all
+ T% R+ ?: A3 f% g9 q. z6 OBut I wish I were a dove 7 c" j. T# ~" G2 o( Y  X8 ]
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
. G! n6 L& ?- E5 l  UI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
% h( G' O( ~0 O# Z0 SI sent prayers to my god$ q8 p8 D$ i. ~1 c
Though he does not answer
, S! E+ |8 ?9 B5 y) E' v! fHe bless me with the gift of hope
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大型搬家
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。  b6 ?9 R: a# q& g. i  ?- n
加油加油,经常写写!
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