SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

# h% }  {! c2 _9 w: yVEICHLE OPTIONS:
4 c1 a, W* \& p% s- U6 A3 J6 AAutomatic transmission
Silver
# f/ L2 {; b- [. hRemote starter and heat blocker
5 `: X" C6 n7 J" P' s4 u, JTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
2 ]4 o5 Y& j9 {; FFour additional tires with rims
6 J" y: ~1 w' [- \  o6 ^Air Conditioning
ABS Operation
! o4 a! E0 _! }8 tTire pressure monitor system
) x5 d& n" v& o! X- ^Information system
Central control locks,doors,windows
& f" S' R6 Y' S/ U3 dPower locks
Power mirrors
; u7 `; Q' H6 D& u4 a1 OPower doors
& b* y" T9 [9 D5 pPower windows
Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
: J" t3 Z9 y. O6 M: ~) bBluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
6 Y4 ~! A2 ?. K( ?Airbag: driver
+ U, f( P* ]% u& O0 ?Airbag: passenger
Airbag: side
Alarm
! s8 ]7 o+ o- G. l6 \Fog lights

**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
8 X2 f. h5 ^8 B5 b5 z5 w9 @  FIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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% f: Q) I$ |) f7 {) P1 e2 hPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
; u2 V1 `; f: q4 }Cash only please :)

兰君子

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1 }' F2 m% w6 T/ @" `( mDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
( {5 U8 L8 |7 y- r$ S2 n/ u IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

. r* P3 |6 f5 L6 L+ A这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

8 F9 m; f% o+ G! x* i5 vBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

. \9 J2 D' m5 ]7 z! A; bFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

* Q1 ~& `% k% x) vSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
" o( g# u. n4 {' _- ?5 F/ k5 XYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.

7 N* o  y- V1 r, j/ G# c8 ]. H8 @Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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# f. s- `+ Y5 h! t& u7 ?; m"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.