SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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* j& A# _% M1 U$ O8 LAutomatic transmission
Silver
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0 ^+ |3 Y1 I# e( W/ q1 @/ }Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
  F/ E1 R: R! i/ m! k. yFour additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
6 G1 @0 E1 H3 V! b: z/ z) TABS Operation
3 L5 s- r- S0 h3 a1 BTire pressure monitor system
2 U. F  `8 K& D; G% e% J9 VInformation system
( T1 O6 T+ @! H; t& O. u  K$ KCentral control locks,doors,windows
) I4 o6 w$ z+ o) ?9 @Power locks
8 h! _; ~. U8 I2 kPower mirrors
Power doors
8 F1 R& u/ S/ L7 t$ b) pPower windows
, z' Q7 \! z' h, `2 FChild safety locks
8 @+ c6 D! m0 P: k3 vRear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
) J  ^7 U: c+ a# r( V! O% NRadio
Airbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
: v* B/ O  _1 _7 AAirbag: side
, \' O+ u" b# \" H( ?$ V$ aAlarm
; y2 H: m+ N  [1 [Fog lights

& i" b# U# B4 t0 d+ n, p**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

$ k& [4 [; ]6 A! pPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)

兰君子

SALE A CAR
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

$ x: u% m9 v9 v* cIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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* M  r( ]& j' Q3 }9 E3 ^$ vDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

8 v% n5 R; T7 C; O这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
4 i1 o# y9 m$ \  s这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

0 q% W8 I: T& [3 P哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
: _+ A( B% }4 G" X# Z5 y" iSALE A CAR

8 A- ~0 A7 G% q7 GDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

. I" f' h0 v* Z$ jFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.

2 O# J5 e7 W8 X: X2 S. Z! n4 nLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

1 |! n2 ~. p; ]"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

6 W% c/ J# J( Y. }+ P- v4 KSorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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