SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
1 \, Z0 p$ n5 t6 t5 l0 oAutomatic transmission
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Remote starter and heat blocker
1 f0 H! C5 o: O8 z% l# {Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
1 G/ }' W( L$ aFour additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
ABS Operation
* ~  [7 p/ ]( R; h# BTire pressure monitor system
9 W8 F4 [: J# ~# ?Information system
, r4 F& m  i: YCentral control locks,doors,windows
2 M* k* p6 L" F% _& }Power locks
Power mirrors
* d% H* U/ Z1 |$ QPower doors
- S4 }* S, ?' n1 nPower windows
: x. R: m8 S( U9 G3 _" HChild safety locks
6 o  g4 X% J0 @Rear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
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- D/ u6 T; p, N  WAirbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
$ m, i( D; w8 x. o6 tAirbag: side
Alarm
Fog lights

**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
7 p9 ]% x8 X5 Q+ }If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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# t& R6 r6 d, Q7 QPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
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兰君子

SALE A CAR
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% `! T% H% i. j. ?$ VDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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7 d" w7 R0 I3 l5 H/ h+ P/ K  f" c6 _. zIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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$ f4 Q2 r( {  J; v: X  [9 }- IIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
9 v9 O8 a9 |) U& I8 l( K IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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! e; ~6 _6 F2 HBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

9 J1 j6 H, k, G9 G4 ?Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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3 H! c- M' j2 v( w5 K& L- z' ^Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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2 p& @* X* w% y8 o1 k2 d& J7 v! bLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

' m, i" ~7 R! B1 i2 N( G3 R"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.