SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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' b* F$ w# y) X7 p% x/ }Automatic transmission
Silver
Remote starter and heat blocker
2 L& `) K$ D1 v# t( y/ dTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
( Y5 `) R9 T3 E4 k( Z0 t; P2 M+ ?Four additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
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Tire pressure monitor system
' R6 f2 E) p) P5 v% k1 U) OInformation system
- r; w  R/ c- o# m) C( vCentral control locks,doors,windows
- x$ o; `" O7 d7 h7 r; `Power locks
% z+ b5 o& @9 @' FPower mirrors
: e. b0 G0 _# C* V* X! NPower doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
4 }5 E3 ?% d! bRear window defroster
9 s, N" H# n% n# d) O( e# XBluetooth hands-free operation
6 t$ F: D% U4 h5 w/ qRadio
Airbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
3 ^4 y7 M3 ?# L& v9 BAirbag: side
Alarm
4 K/ u* Z# s& _Fog lights
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: |1 P: R* W* G3 g1 ~**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
; h6 z8 s0 l2 ~- kIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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& `2 n0 X/ F0 O7 t. \8 l/ [Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)
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兰君子

SALE A CAR
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& k* |1 h$ |/ [Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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4 n/ @1 z; g2 EIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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% U) z, ^& ^  M1 ^IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
  v- d& z! j3 x1 B IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

8 m, u, n% f1 g7 w" JBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
4 k8 J/ p4 }4 b这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
) y. z0 B! J+ b, v7 E4 `SALE A CAR
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2 d+ o1 E% V3 ZDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
: G4 m2 b& l5 ]/ D, W7 tThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.

: {+ f6 Q4 X8 A' z) ?3 Z1 o0 zLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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