SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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9 @7 V7 f; d, a/ L! }; E! [Automatic transmission
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Remote starter and heat blocker
( s; [5 D0 x0 D' c) u& D0 fTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
& y, n( ~0 T& z) z2 e, eFour additional tires with rims
' `, O: O5 x* v) a' fAir Conditioning
ABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
Central control locks,doors,windows
( C7 T; K" r) X' {( xPower locks
; ?5 R9 b. o( o6 x$ s9 UPower mirrors
Power doors
Power windows
6 y* \. W% ^& o: L9 b0 ?Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
9 C6 z0 H0 Z1 F8 L$ A% P. V* H1 MAirbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
9 ^0 j! f  m* u9 g* M/ e, v5 lAirbag: side
# q8 Z1 K# K& ?" t2 oAlarm
. N* k( g: B% |0 w3 eFog lights
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5 N! t1 e% Z3 F* ~; l5 }0 z**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
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Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
6 W2 v, O  I$ wPick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)
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兰君子

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SALE A CAR
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

0 R( T4 P3 R4 I5 G' Y# {IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
" `: y( r3 }5 J7 e- \* }  a; e$ w IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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! |  U0 O8 Z( l( r- e/ f4 FDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

# D& N2 ~' _+ y3 v3 b0 Y9 o/ l这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

: z( i! _3 ?# ]( M& D  Y7 A- O哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

8 x$ j; E2 q0 g3 t* gDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
# A2 n7 _+ L8 P5 B# W7 hThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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# s  U! s4 k' s: r+ BLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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7 y6 |4 i. v0 ^: |6 h"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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" W- L0 T. f' r: L- ^3 C) w3 qThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

& t4 I# ?  H) c. _( _" rSorry to give you "HARSH" again.