SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

VEICHLE OPTIONS:
1 A6 U9 E3 [6 Z+ XAutomatic transmission
Silver
6 z0 K. M! `: d! l& V& GRemote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
# r* o: d1 ^" x  Q/ DFour additional tires with rims
8 ]7 ^* h- R& D+ t5 `+ ]( v; }Air Conditioning
6 v, q+ Q: U! x4 O" TABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
Central control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
Power mirrors
Power doors
, P# C- l" B! {( k. X# b# UPower windows
Child safety locks
0 N4 B$ U+ i" Y& e, mRear window defroster
& U8 R2 w1 u$ e% `Bluetooth hands-free operation
/ n4 E- o9 b$ |; w2 r9 tRadio
Airbag: driver
9 c8 I* F" x7 R1 ^" pAirbag: passenger
. t, ^0 |/ u8 A2 QAirbag: side
! y) }/ ^! G0 I- P/ L* D3 TAlarm
) m. W* X# K8 {Fog lights
8 @# M  V6 d0 J- ^4 r2 x
**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
7 c0 J, [) k! D  ^+ SIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
2 o" `" K9 X+ E6 I
$ g* K6 c$ {& D* v: [Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
, p4 A5 B& U0 ^* e( sPick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)
- J5 Y' p* H5 f, E2 E9 C: X& @5 ?

兰君子

! N: {1 o3 ^7 ~) d
SALE A CAR
- Q0 G. }, e" i6 l$ v6 a
Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
5 I; ]3 x* j& [  A3 m- w( P5 z% z' A
IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
1 t6 t7 j, O3 h

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

( n1 o4 Y0 G9 U$ x9 N6 B+ ]这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

. a1 |- H  |; u0 s+ U! mBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
8 H' \9 X# F( }+ ?0 d2 T' |7 V* s这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

! V2 I+ t! L3 ]0 y哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
! z: ~; ^/ B. j/ ?, wSALE A CAR
7 F3 z' t/ Q" E5 v, Q6 N
Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
& D$ ^9 }/ n* D! d! K9 [% hThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

4 p, D3 S* W2 ^; `+ p
Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
( Y7 w8 l/ x0 c  G, F5 o2 z
# y/ v$ {" X; n3 U& T$ U- ~2 q! xLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

3 c3 @$ ]$ H1 K7 S% P/ {6 M2 y) ~# AThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.