SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

VEICHLE OPTIONS:
Automatic transmission
Silver
Remote starter and heat blocker
4 x: j* t# K3 G( iTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
1 B* P* m3 ]& Q) lAir Conditioning
$ D3 o5 D; ?0 A/ rABS Operation
  T* H$ K* |" _3 sTire pressure monitor system
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Central control locks,doors,windows
% B2 h9 w, U6 w4 A; rPower locks
Power mirrors
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Power windows
Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
1 u6 l- _1 \1 f( p; g: o$ f8 NAirbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
Airbag: side
Alarm
Fog lights
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**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
% x$ i8 w3 k* i1 x9 g( HPick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)

兰君子

SALE A CAR

  Q, N' {$ f8 V7 S* c* O* R. r& _Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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/ r. k) V& f$ e3 i$ L6 R3 UIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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$ q3 h9 O; m+ M5 j8 mDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

  O; w( ^; _* i* M# ~0 G这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

( Z0 m# y2 c* aBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
3 B2 K5 [5 h/ v& ^0 V. v这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

- U. \+ `9 a! A% {% w哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

$ S" @+ I/ g/ _$ LFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

' g, x8 b4 V' x. I. b! E! s" SSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
: C9 G7 S; S  L3 b9 [- x( bYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

7 B, x5 o9 ^7 d( D"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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# e  [" i' f% k2 Y# U1 n- kThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.