SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
+ [2 H# \1 ]9 Q" W! JAutomatic transmission
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3 n1 c! l% P/ K/ I: B' w- S; J; gRemote starter and heat blocker
# `) k; h, I& H' ^$ {5 R2 F& \Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
. J; y2 r# K# O6 j  hAir Conditioning
% L+ n8 O, D8 t0 k0 aABS Operation
5 {" a& e, N6 I# ^Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
Central control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
6 [, I4 C  U2 b- V5 n* d( nPower mirrors
8 t, S* u, T3 p: O1 v4 P1 GPower doors
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Child safety locks
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Bluetooth hands-free operation
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* h* F' `1 k2 j4 q* aAirbag: driver
" d( \' b8 t9 H! R# X& [Airbag: passenger
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Alarm
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**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
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Cash only please :)
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兰君子

SALE A CAR
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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( a' L  H3 T# yDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

9 R/ U3 W0 Y& T3 p. {* W/ @6 j这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

5 d( Z  y7 z* B- ^; C哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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7 S9 e: G  N8 G3 `5 l6 @Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

( |6 I, S1 Q  o1 F, S5 C" mFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
! e& s- T. _5 ~( `Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
% t& \. N2 L0 Y9 w6 nYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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6 }; a1 p' L1 H$ y5 j5 |Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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