SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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" \2 G2 b, R( n9 cVEICHLE OPTIONS:
Automatic transmission
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Remote starter and heat blocker
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Four additional tires with rims
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Information system
Central control locks,doors,windows
8 Y" t" B' I' [0 y& W' sPower locks
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Power doors
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Rear window defroster
9 V( z" n2 T% ^) I* g& ABluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
Airbag: driver
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Alarm
Fog lights
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0 A  T* Q1 b* {/ r  X**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)

兰君子

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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

7 t% I/ g: f1 U+ a  L& f& TIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

9 V5 {$ S4 ^0 J$ ~+ ]! Q6 pIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
  ^& k# W; k; k$ ?7 d  p: G9 d IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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; J8 G- S2 T/ `' n" l; y1 mDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

* Z& @: n& I8 T8 q这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
1 h2 l: ]+ e* L3 s, r这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

2 l2 W5 r# |: ^/ X6 P哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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2 y, f. m( J/ j; `7 B' e  WDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

- d" l8 P* z7 J$ \6 ^4 sFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

' t# ]: N* v8 n$ C  ~% k$ W: j* |Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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, ]2 c5 @2 q8 ]& b& i, x1 VLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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3 M# |7 Z' u) V- T0 m1 rSorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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