SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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6 `9 B6 ?7 w  }Automatic transmission
Silver
Remote starter and heat blocker
2 B; [4 P* C# J8 ?6 VTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
5 b  ^9 V$ h6 n  I- kAir Conditioning
ABS Operation
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Information system
Central control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
9 C7 @$ R; B. fPower mirrors
" V1 m( i- ^% e1 IPower doors
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Child safety locks
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Bluetooth hands-free operation
5 `: N4 r# S; U6 dRadio
" H# ^- T; R6 A* m0 P7 ^Airbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
6 O# Y& Q/ j, S7 S4 \0 z# pAirbag: side
Alarm
4 F, z0 D- N7 ~Fog lights
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**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
6 }3 \7 K' N. N' V- u  D4 J! ^If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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, F7 [" F7 ?7 i+ i1 WPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
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兰君子

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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

: L% Z( U; y4 R- \. aIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

% p2 |: U2 a+ L1 c  R& u这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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) }' t% ^8 ]% {" k2 l" MBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
2 Z. q0 q3 v1 o# @/ E. s% M2 ^这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

3 l5 }; M1 z$ g& g哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
/ e0 F3 q5 r; n& T* K6 UYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

# @" X5 h/ {* B/ R5 u+ c, w- D- f( Z"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

0 I( B. R) G8 G# U) Q( jThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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7 d3 j6 R8 x& L. b2 G! N, O* Y3 XSorry to give you "HARSH" again.