SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
/ J) [( R- g7 C3 {) G, pAutomatic transmission
Silver
Remote starter and heat blocker
( \  d1 U$ f( W* O0 k8 _/ w+ jTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
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: P& |; N, V0 |$ V- P2 k* {Information system
( }1 k9 N* x1 s" J( ]" H+ N  O) L0 ?Central control locks,doors,windows
9 z" P5 @7 T6 ?, f! F7 ^Power locks
Power mirrors
$ c5 ?8 s5 X5 G- F  `2 pPower doors
6 E, O- F, T! Y6 u0 ]8 L$ x! CPower windows
Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
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Radio
4 V3 g' n: ?, ~Airbag: driver
6 i# Y$ L' Z1 ~Airbag: passenger
/ m' n- R  j) T/ N* Q- v1 LAirbag: side
Alarm
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; `$ n% k: m0 l0 t. R**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
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兰君子

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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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! ?' z' \. x; R2 k( e8 DIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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& |3 X- J& l- V0 G( w9 RIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

9 B; q+ }6 |1 |4 j  A这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

* s3 ?" \* v4 W哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
: E, G/ ]& g/ a) [0 N8 h- ]You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

$ \5 |0 `1 M4 V( P: X"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

! R. l% y& ?" [; w) m8 \+ VThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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