SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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1 O: A; |( V, CVEICHLE OPTIONS:
3 J" \: D+ Q) Z+ L! XAutomatic transmission
4 \% ^" U. F2 G8 WSilver
Remote starter and heat blocker
; j9 ?# \5 P% [% w4 rTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
7 G% k) p' e. X; QFour additional tires with rims
, [4 U, w- x# NAir Conditioning
) i% h" @6 @- v. v# p: KABS Operation
$ g: z4 X% ^; P3 \$ ZTire pressure monitor system
# F7 c2 [$ j* S) s2 M  V) vInformation system
Central control locks,doors,windows
) l# A; X5 k9 `/ J5 C2 iPower locks
% g7 Y9 i0 `' z" j9 FPower mirrors
Power doors
0 f: e* v4 K: \, UPower windows
Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
+ ?; f1 r; |+ g7 e. g4 Q5 @  r3 vBluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
Airbag: driver
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Airbag: side
Alarm
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/ s: q! k, w% P2 u**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

% f1 i8 [1 g+ WPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)
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兰君子

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SALE A CAR

6 d% K! {- B1 P0 P' MDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
: |& G( W9 y: q6 S1 C IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

+ @  h5 }$ n1 b+ y8 K- T6 C哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
$ X9 |( T. H+ Y0 Q: S, L) v" i& lThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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4 f0 }3 r/ M, }& r9 p9 NSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
7 E0 O* Q( \- lYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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+ X2 H5 s2 w# X$ {! b7 t' y( YLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

4 H0 Z5 ]2 U0 E4 \" ~5 W" g"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.

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