SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

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Silver
Remote starter and heat blocker
- a, G1 K# z+ u9 eTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
2 O( m% t7 f6 j* G, P" n, Y* ~Four additional tires with rims
8 Z% Z3 W  e. u8 b- iAir Conditioning
ABS Operation
) w- u0 r) C+ |- D3 [Tire pressure monitor system
. U9 t! q4 v4 O- N+ GInformation system
Central control locks,doors,windows
5 }* Y  W+ ?7 E3 ~! m: F+ q9 hPower locks
Power mirrors
Power doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
' R. ^3 H) l, v& }7 GBluetooth hands-free operation
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Airbag: driver
* L; j, E6 @9 Z5 O0 d1 jAirbag: passenger
& ?* F: J+ g' _* qAirbag: side
: ?( x" j/ A. d& BAlarm
+ }- }% F$ T: RFog lights

**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
( M. t/ F) n% Y; hIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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8 ?( Y9 T0 Q( ?6 o  s; APlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
) @$ I; b, l: S6 F6 ^Cash only please :)
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兰君子

SALE A CAR

0 Q6 A5 n' Y3 N7 @5 jDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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$ m" S- S- b5 QIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
" C0 z" ?7 @+ M. u IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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4 j+ z' z/ K3 w5 }8 ADue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
, ~8 |8 M' y9 q/ y1 c2 O4 O" |+ m* rThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
) k# ?# z0 m) i3 C4 Q. m( yYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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' }, d: ~& R# k2 o  eLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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$ _: c7 |0 [6 ?* o" E" f3 b$ v4 W"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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: f  s6 d$ D$ GSorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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