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发表于 2015-2-28 15:35 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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Remote starter and heat blocker
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Air Conditioning
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Information system
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Power mirrors
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Rear window defroster ( T# r* v7 T# i- S- l* n; ~, }* i! {
Bluetooth hands-free operation
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Airbag: driver + w$ V+ a0 S" I$ |2 Q# n
Airbag: passenger
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Fog lights $ B( b/ ^, s8 ]1 Y$ E% i# }
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**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**8 m( V2 A( o* y6 d
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.6 n5 Q% _. c" b+ N% Q
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Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
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8 d" G: T/ n- o% p+ ^5 hCash only please :)
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发表于 2015-3-1 02:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 兰君子 于 2015-3-1 02:16 编辑
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. d! q/ z. B3 b% g0 ]Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! . 4 A2 q* u. G' Q

- J3 a6 x! f) N$ WIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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发表于 2015-3-1 11:59 | 显示全部楼层
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发表于 2015-3-1 23:30 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
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发表于 2015-3-2 09:30 | 显示全部楼层
兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11' H  H, R8 t% c* z# S
SALE A CAR
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; h# a% h7 g  ~7 w( ]4 XDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...
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这就叫骚摊子的,可以跟摊主干一场
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 楼主| 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50 | 显示全部楼层
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)
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发表于 2015-3-2 11:26 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30& I$ k3 T& E5 e) \, J2 A* E# I
这就叫骚摊子的,可以跟摊主干一场
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哈哈,真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了
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发表于 2015-3-2 12:15 | 显示全部楼层
那么问题来了,现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了
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发表于 2015-3-3 11:02 | 显示全部楼层
兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:110 E6 v6 P8 b$ a: K) y6 i9 ^/ W$ ^$ n
SALE A CAR
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0 f, z' D5 M8 Z4 r! rDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

* @' h' _( |& KFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.
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发表于 2015-3-15 09:40 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 兰君子 于 2015-3-15 10:05 编辑   }  X5 U9 H3 c; E0 U2 H
zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
: _6 B8 j, q2 yThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...
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Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you. - W- A0 a% y& ~% \- F: U
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.+ Q& z& H6 }8 f6 @' q
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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+ a3 n# @( W& x8 }* @1 VSorry to give you "HARSH" again.5 s& F: Z! }: l# i

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