SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

VEICHLE OPTIONS:
1 [8 X9 ?8 s7 Q5 h6 @  sAutomatic transmission
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& [& U* _  Z: i5 l* ?Remote starter and heat blocker
: S9 G+ T0 n, M# q: sTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
0 r% n# m8 |. O( [Four additional tires with rims
8 v1 m! @! V# @( v4 [0 SAir Conditioning
ABS Operation
% [$ k$ a( `  m) e0 `8 U) W( u# tTire pressure monitor system
; D; e4 b! [, B; l; o4 k4 a% FInformation system
2 j# ?3 k/ v' g( f. `Central control locks,doors,windows
# _) {0 m3 x: rPower locks
Power mirrors
2 U2 C: A, Q8 f$ ]3 I! y- vPower doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
% L) `- a6 F1 O! wRear window defroster
+ c5 U( |0 E6 t0 ~/ hBluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
8 r( T6 T6 J  S: ]: u: LAirbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
Airbag: side
( x" b: e% U8 n; G& L  m/ }! qAlarm
) x1 }( }8 K* F  F3 vFog lights

7 D4 b% n7 b9 u& w& X**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
8 G% _6 A% E6 v4 ~  V3 m! I) _; ^/ WIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
2 O' E8 k# E: W6 ~Cash only please :)
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兰君子

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SALE A CAR

! J5 n9 m( P5 C: _Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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7 K; R: v$ W6 m7 D) B6 [. c) aIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

, k( a6 i4 A$ @& F) G1 B+ p. _Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

- t0 b5 u! ?+ T- U- G$ h! ]* U" |4 J哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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; z, B# m# A; z9 h) EDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

3 O. `7 S7 j/ F$ ISorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

5 I5 x! V3 }+ T( Y" R"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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6 t/ H# K% J, N& C* N5 IThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

# K; \5 y) f. I( }# Z4 e5 q5 fSorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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