SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
9 \4 ]& v5 Y% HAutomatic transmission
9 }: e8 r4 B( V8 m7 ]+ WSilver
7 `/ G( Q8 J4 l7 h& w; P6 ?6 XRemote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
/ J; s' N+ W( E: T8 A* i' I( YFour additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
ABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
& z% H: ?. }( }1 f* LInformation system
Central control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
Power mirrors
Power doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
# z# Z: e' V: W1 ~Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
Airbag: driver
6 D1 V# q& p; Z- k* a5 E$ x% r& XAirbag: passenger
9 C; A5 {" |$ |5 m- N2 D+ rAirbag: side
, Y9 q6 V3 b' Z7 U: U, Y% u4 h3 H& q: gAlarm
/ X! W+ t: d0 @Fog lights
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**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

3 w) G/ {8 K8 {Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
2 |8 V0 @& n5 q: oCash only please :)
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兰君子

SALE A CAR

0 X# ]  L4 y  a5 J' CDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

6 X  X7 ~/ J8 F; q% p' FIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
# m( F# K5 z" B这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

. ?# ?2 ^! E7 J8 q$ _: A& I4 r( M哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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6 y9 f$ m- t$ Y# z* c3 h  }3 dDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
' K" Y# o/ e: g# Z0 J) H+ y* ]% iThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.

* j, w& n4 V" O* a# m' y$ K0 t! y' QLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

. Z! _, b! a5 E/ D# qThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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$ p8 |) m  h/ W: R' {& t- ~1 ISorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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