SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
Automatic transmission
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( |4 x* B, K5 S. z. u4 f1 _7 }Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
8 v1 z5 N. Q# VFour additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
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Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
+ d& A! V! w# Z/ L) a/ R6 z; mCentral control locks,doors,windows
3 I3 t+ N+ M7 [3 kPower locks
% w4 `; i* ?: |7 @+ yPower mirrors
Power doors
# B0 U. Z6 t" FPower windows
Child safety locks
8 D. s( H3 L$ u" d) ]) lRear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
9 d. ]: B8 j1 S+ C$ J- Z$ dRadio
0 p  Z+ s9 i( _. M+ y! W7 c2 ^Airbag: driver
  j# h1 Q3 I2 N8 w: }2 B; u) SAirbag: passenger
Airbag: side
Alarm
Fog lights

**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)

兰君子

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# q8 M, j1 D2 x! ]7 }# NDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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7 j" ~) r' b, T0 V8 p3 ]' TIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

  H& x1 r9 I: oIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
& H) t& _6 N% b7 Y6 r IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

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zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
  E% [$ m& P. r; W$ I& c, E这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

$ P# e3 G! o5 E; O哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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2 b; R4 u& Y+ L2 fFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
) r5 L. r9 }+ N7 jThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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# L7 C+ \( g* J( U: p/ J5 iSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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  k; `$ n" m$ B0 iLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

1 R' c# ^, f1 ?2 {$ X* Y9 D"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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