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发表于 2015-2-28 15:35 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! . s' b  S% O6 F, q% n
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:: w! {( c+ T# Y. y# F* r4 |
Automatic transmission
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Remote starter and heat blocker
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, R. Y+ a5 x) ~+ YFour additional tires with rims
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ABS Operation
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Power locks
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Child safety locks
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Bluetooth hands-free operation
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Airbag: passenger : c8 g: n5 G2 {, p; X5 V
Airbag: side
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4 Z2 @9 C- `. |**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**( s7 g( x3 Z+ K
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.+ _6 o3 I7 C; }" Y& K
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Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca! ^% q2 a0 n) m5 P8 f
Pick up on March 18-22. . j& K* @8 z1 n$ j- K
Cash only please :)
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发表于 2015-3-1 02:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 兰君子 于 2015-3-1 02:16 编辑
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+ t+ M6 _- n& T! j7 UDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! . ) ?$ i  o0 S$ q7 F3 \; _" `; E

0 L* a, G6 c3 `' B8 y8 NIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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$ a& Y# o& B) J8 k/ x- `IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR3 l1 ]0 I  Y4 x
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING 2 o4 Y# L: \/ Q1 L1 v4 a7 A
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发表于 2015-3-1 11:59 | 显示全部楼层
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发表于 2015-3-1 23:30 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
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发表于 2015-3-2 09:30 | 显示全部楼层
兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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* U* {/ R0 n+ p/ V  Q/ uDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

4 m! `" {+ m( d- y这就叫骚摊子的,可以跟摊主干一场
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 楼主| 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50 | 显示全部楼层
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)
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发表于 2015-3-2 11:26 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
1 r! Z0 p9 M5 I1 o. z& n; ~这就叫骚摊子的,可以跟摊主干一场

% F0 w( J2 g; x/ q+ a哈哈,真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了
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发表于 2015-3-2 12:15 | 显示全部楼层
那么问题来了,现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了
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发表于 2015-3-3 11:02 | 显示全部楼层
兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:110 o9 W3 ?/ f1 u
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

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发表于 2015-3-15 09:40 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 兰君子 于 2015-3-15 10:05 编辑 ) e/ Q% s; T5 i! ^; E2 y0 |2 s
zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:507 Z9 n& F3 y8 `" ^3 }5 M: W- D  j( k
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you. " e6 ~, O. N- d3 Z) e# J2 J6 i" M
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.' `7 p& E3 i) ]; q
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:( L3 j* k+ g  B, L+ F/ G

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There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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