SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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7 i- G' [; _, X# [9 BAutomatic transmission
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Remote starter and heat blocker
# _- j3 u$ J, U$ A) hTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
- [3 D8 h$ i1 C: K3 dABS Operation
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0 _$ f) z% ~7 \: s* g6 R0 p0 J! [Information system
Central control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
4 [! \" o* A/ Q! a; V8 y5 ?+ _Power mirrors
Power doors
Power windows
/ d& n0 p' S7 V- @Child safety locks
6 p% c, S% I6 \/ J8 ^3 t7 qRear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
Airbag: driver
) k8 `5 W% D* D2 Q, C" c6 gAirbag: passenger
; S; l- u; A, o* rAirbag: side
# w' h" B, [3 g$ W7 n! \& M6 BAlarm
- t6 y. n$ P4 ?  a8 O, WFog lights

1 \3 ?- I5 @! E**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
: _& \+ H; n9 _3 y3 aIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
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Cash only please :)
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兰君子

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SALE A CAR
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

. m, A  ?& K+ U/ o4 m* WIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
8 |! n8 s% q7 o* l8 |% V& M IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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& g+ [' g9 G% u& t- ^2 K0 ADue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

2 a7 p; e9 g, Y这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

) I5 c$ I. x9 i$ T5 {9 \; aBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
9 D9 }! ^) A8 Y7 E1 c) h/ k( u" _- G这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

; B+ r2 n) @. `  X哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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" U7 F, w) E/ P1 ]/ GSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
3 w. ]0 {2 k7 ?0 j/ AYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.

, D" n1 r2 u0 E5 SLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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) [5 ]' i5 d) y+ w+ f1 |' Y"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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