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发表于 2015-2-28 15:35 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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5 T8 c' E' a- d( t# zVEICHLE OPTIONS:
9 @7 V7 f; d, a/ L! }; E! [Automatic transmission
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Remote starter and heat blocker
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Tire pressure monitor system" K7 {" a/ ^% M9 _, u4 v
Information system, {& w4 B+ Q$ Y$ @2 B+ R) b9 W
Central control locks,doors,windows
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Power windows
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Radio
9 C6 z0 H0 Z1 F8 L$ A% P. V* H1 MAirbag: driver ' r. B: e: y+ M  u( q  q3 E6 k* S
Airbag: passenger
9 ^0 j! f  m* u9 g* M/ e, v5 lAirbag: side
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5 N! t1 e% Z3 F* ~; l5 }0 z**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
0 w$ K# W) Z$ @/ n4 M+ J/ j' FIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
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Cash only please :)
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发表于 2015-3-1 02:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 兰君子 于 2015-3-1 02:16 编辑
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SALE A CAR
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! . 2 B; t- C5 M) o5 X
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If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.9 Z' |  g; K- `4 Q

0 R( T4 P3 R4 I5 G' Y# {IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
" `: y( r3 }5 J7 e- \* }  a; e$ w IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING # U8 H9 Y& c" e7 w6 G5 M" k0 B
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发表于 2015-3-1 11:59 | 显示全部楼层
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发表于 2015-3-1 23:30 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
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发表于 2015-3-2 09:30 | 显示全部楼层
兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:110 R8 }. \) p8 h5 |2 x( v
SALE A CAR
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! |  U0 O8 Z( l( r- e/ f4 FDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

# D& N2 ~' _+ y3 v3 b0 Y9 o/ l这就叫骚摊子的,可以跟摊主干一场
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 楼主| 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50 | 显示全部楼层
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you.", p- ]$ |' s! I; h
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By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)
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发表于 2015-3-2 11:26 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30$ p1 ~% W& w8 u" m% H. U% h& b- k; K
这就叫骚摊子的,可以跟摊主干一场

: z( i! _3 ?# ]( M& D  Y7 A- O哈哈,真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了
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发表于 2015-3-2 12:15 | 显示全部楼层
那么问题来了,现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了
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发表于 2015-3-3 11:02 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11+ |' Z0 Y. i  X1 `5 \5 I( d2 ~1 Q7 z
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8 x$ j; E2 q0 g3 t* gDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...
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Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.
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发表于 2015-3-15 09:40 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 兰君子 于 2015-3-15 10:05 编辑
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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
# A2 n7 _+ L8 P5 B# W7 hThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you. 7 u& y$ l  K$ f- F
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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# s  U! s4 k' s: r+ BLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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7 y6 |4 i. v0 ^: |6 h"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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" W- L0 T. f' r: L- ^3 C) w3 qThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.2 ]3 }7 L4 j5 \' R

& t4 I# ?  H) c. _( _" rSorry to give you "HARSH" again.0 x; e9 P& N; i
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