SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

VEICHLE OPTIONS:
Automatic transmission
Silver
3 [1 m# a) v( p$ l) I% JRemote starter and heat blocker
1 _. J( ~7 `8 ZTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
- _! T( ~9 d9 uFour additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
ABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
Central control locks,doors,windows
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4 O. ]6 P' R- \; E8 j& O" c" nPower mirrors
* B* k% w5 o* ^0 J+ x9 k1 oPower doors
Power windows
( a; r- ~( m1 n) i6 k, Y$ |( g" ]3 MChild safety locks
Rear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
2 Y+ T) E; |8 E# vRadio
Airbag: driver
( O8 c. n0 W/ E& d6 P, n6 GAirbag: passenger
* l( l/ o) B+ G" M" b" t" ~" mAirbag: side
Alarm
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- M+ `2 \! Z. c9 }**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
; H* m/ w: T% O/ ^) k1 o& K, z/ ?If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
  `1 M4 O& a; O3 E, X2 [% uPick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)

兰君子

SALE A CAR

$ d* Z1 {: Q) ?7 [' ZDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
  }5 ?5 }. u% a6 c- x8 z% ? IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

$ e+ I) X+ f% D* V& _这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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# o7 e3 }( H2 \! |By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
9 M! n. h1 h  ~. K& D! e这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

5 P1 a' x: f2 }+ P+ H: p哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
# f) F  ^0 s9 k2 E- kSALE A CAR
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

$ i- Q3 }* ]/ v/ x$ r2 _Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

8 }; q% |. |  E2 E6 HSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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6 M7 R( x/ I# ^' @Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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7 u& Z8 h: R, @There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

* B1 n+ A# g- L: C3 V: {8 ~' |Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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