SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
Automatic transmission
Silver
5 z5 z5 m. h9 mRemote starter and heat blocker
  J( {. c8 i, n  N; STwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
9 U2 g5 W# y& W8 \6 ?4 Z! lFour additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
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Tire pressure monitor system
9 O, J$ I# O# M; R% bInformation system
Central control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
4 V+ ^1 G: }7 {, ^0 rPower mirrors
7 f* P  ~; a/ U/ l  pPower doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
+ V7 w; ^# t  O% X  oBluetooth hands-free operation
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0 h. ~& l8 @- s5 m: E8 I7 e+ A/ n/ vAirbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
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Alarm
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% g* }& z5 c7 z% O# h: C* x# A**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
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% \; T6 K1 I5 \4 J6 `. K, SPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
" e* b( K! h7 b$ Q, o& \! |Pick up on March 18-22.
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兰君子

SALE A CAR
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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: u1 b# S7 K1 o% |- x) ^If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

2 ]6 L2 h, d- k4 }. r  O4 bDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

2 _: v9 K: X3 l. U: b9 D哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

1 J# C; L; {2 mDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

! M  J6 Y! b6 D* X/ F$ BFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
0 O" a1 V$ P6 ?+ D; ]Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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- z% z* S; J" F( w4 Z' u* wSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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