SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

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7 ]8 V. f0 _" H2 G& Z6 o2 b$ oAutomatic transmission
Silver
Remote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
8 _3 _! F. z0 K' f5 F5 a9 v3 }: jFour additional tires with rims
% ]: w7 Y1 l9 I  vAir Conditioning
ABS Operation
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8 P* m7 ?5 f. G5 @Information system
7 A0 e& Y$ E! P# d' S/ I! o; Z# I5 I9 cCentral control locks,doors,windows
5 ~$ P- A2 ~2 u9 ePower locks
# t, v8 |/ G% W7 TPower mirrors
2 e2 n# B" R+ i" D( m$ U" H% ^Power doors
Power windows
" R! _3 N$ P' n4 @: cChild safety locks
) G5 x/ L5 X/ _) E, E, B8 @9 F( R- @Rear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
7 P! S% l8 G" y# B" M& \Airbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
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Alarm
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**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
/ @5 G) y0 W$ a& ^0 K7 MIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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: _# e' a; c+ YPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)

兰君子

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SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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5 N8 T* L& k1 L. @- x  L8 uIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
7 r8 r( H5 k' ]% y. y* p; \ IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

- r$ y$ H# X! W4 s0 ]$ N' o$ sBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
4 E8 x# l+ V$ `2 Z  K" N这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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4 S" M5 p  F+ G" u1 J6 Z+ F) U7 xDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

3 w& U: L' X0 F, p& k% \! x  M! A$ |Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
# J( t/ Y. A# d' F5 F. iThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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! ~% ]2 F9 }: H& XSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

# v" `7 N* p4 M0 f# I: t3 rThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.

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