SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

VEICHLE OPTIONS:
, k& A$ h$ [, q8 u9 OAutomatic transmission
Silver
Remote starter and heat blocker
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Air Conditioning
ABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
" i2 ?0 L2 o' S! R" M* lCentral control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
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Power windows
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! `, |( a( Q8 `% ?Bluetooth hands-free operation
! \3 K$ b$ F& ]5 c$ @' W9 ~Radio
, J6 H3 C- a3 s+ _& D6 X. l1 |8 ^6 IAirbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
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Alarm
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**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
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Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)
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兰君子

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SALE A CAR

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If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

# B8 }. n/ U0 LIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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1 E3 b$ H% C! G& Z' JDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

- @9 r! u2 _; e这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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% j& n, E- W8 o* xBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
$ g& M9 \1 \; K: e这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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& A+ r+ D" M/ k6 b. j2 XSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
# B: q( s5 p+ [' p0 M2 }. wYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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# L+ p5 |/ O* e; o0 e: R  q4 L- P, rLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

* Q/ g3 V2 Y& A"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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