SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

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Automatic transmission
Silver
: a0 q4 r* f6 mRemote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
/ f+ t* q: g: k' aFour additional tires with rims
7 p% V0 d7 Q# Q8 X  D: EAir Conditioning
ABS Operation
; c+ x. X' w; zTire pressure monitor system
Information system
3 r$ @0 R% r3 y: |4 tCentral control locks,doors,windows
) r/ j, l9 G$ y4 n# S$ R) wPower locks
Power mirrors
Power doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
2 A: [3 N! A2 ^: Q, G6 lRear window defroster
7 a* q9 z) o9 Q& W. {Bluetooth hands-free operation
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6 Y  ?7 ~% G5 f  aAirbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
# w( [7 f2 f% U6 ]% d! h' `& ?Airbag: side
( X* R/ X: e7 ?" q! |, C8 LAlarm
Fog lights
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' v, i& C" ]( m6 W+ @& s6 k**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
" a5 `2 R0 D( ?* D' |& j- NIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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" ?( B3 P, }! a. z, s8 \Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)

兰君子

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+ d5 f) a: H+ B' oDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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( O/ \& H1 r4 D7 A) g" t' ], S6 [If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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) R& d. n2 @! S' @IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
5 K, z5 v5 p7 j- c# [' X$ x: {9 s IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

# P; W* y4 Q( F# s这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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, z; |- J0 ?, p) R0 {# t& sBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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# J1 I9 ~! p6 z: S5 TDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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9 T( |  r$ ~6 T) m3 i"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

  M+ x0 [. ?$ D1 E4 u6 bThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

8 O! ?& G9 ]7 f5 `Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.