SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

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& o, o1 {* c, CAutomatic transmission
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Remote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
9 a! a- z: _; M: }% [$ X  DFour additional tires with rims
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. S, J* |6 q: Y, X9 j. `& d3 S1 HABS Operation
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Information system
9 }5 f1 C; m; b6 y. WCentral control locks,doors,windows
$ X8 s1 l$ c5 h! F' L+ ^* z: wPower locks
# Y; m* j) s& w8 k) ~( B: BPower mirrors
3 V7 E' A& P! [; B; \( s0 rPower doors
Power windows
2 K% F5 U+ n# S. }; N+ a0 v' hChild safety locks
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Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
Airbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
Airbag: side
Alarm
Fog lights
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**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
8 S1 I( y4 C) }7 A4 i9 IIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

" I5 u! W& t3 ePlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
3 e. f! n1 C7 A/ E7 APick up on March 18-22.
" ]1 F/ H" z. D+ BCash only please :)
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兰君子

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SALE A CAR
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1 l6 N! m; t+ L- B2 h9 v3 FDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

5 \! K; n$ P* E) W+ L' a! ^4 vIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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# X4 I2 C3 x* j2 u( z+ a9 A( dIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
7 X) m, O, z6 z$ q* k5 S IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
9 ?8 e5 P* a, `$ \& r% ESALE A CAR

  U# G7 v& w; B: o; u1 bDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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0 ]! L! p9 w  G4 kBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

8 m; z8 w: D& D- Y% x3 G  I! `8 {哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

3 r  B' R( V& Z( DDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
3 _; S5 l2 W/ B0 ?Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

; q3 E+ r9 c  f, Q$ j( X7 TSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
8 K% J9 ~! P' y1 }3 BYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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2 Y" k0 W1 H6 f7 g( P: r9 m6 `Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

  j  I7 k( [8 w* R9 \  G# |"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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+ O9 {6 S* h/ Z4 _1 _8 j8 VThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.

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