SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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Automatic transmission
Silver
$ f$ |' Z+ n+ P% s5 NRemote starter and heat blocker
  T& k, A/ T# v' DTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
! x! K  C# P# k( U/ IFour additional tires with rims
  C! ?) x& Q; q) y' }7 C+ UAir Conditioning
5 V: i* ]' x3 [ABS Operation
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Information system
Central control locks,doors,windows
" f9 K8 m3 A3 V. [6 i4 l" lPower locks
Power mirrors
6 ]" a) M4 A2 G* X9 a  t# x" |Power doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
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Airbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
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Alarm
Fog lights

**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
  F) q5 n5 O' ?' p# {If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)
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兰君子

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SALE A CAR
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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7 G' {. o5 G4 ^- P0 EDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

3 R+ ]7 ^$ E0 m7 J' f/ v这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
& `9 K& K( H: p这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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9 D9 M* S0 j) RDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

7 d8 S% O5 \& K9 {Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
9 r1 W, u& l" QThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
" ]. s. M8 u  }4 f& F1 t& a! y" cYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.

  T( n6 |4 G: e7 h" sLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

) H5 b1 }9 U. e"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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6 [9 I; t  G. x" EThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.