SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
Automatic transmission
! z7 T# V) ?' R* rSilver
7 s2 k) F" b0 b3 ZRemote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
& m1 T, z% S; L' S8 P- l+ GFour additional tires with rims
) M0 n3 |  v' v; r9 m$ {9 G! |Air Conditioning
. a; i: _/ d9 T2 LABS Operation
. X% D  {# d/ U- H" u: ?7 D1 e7 Z" ]Tire pressure monitor system
  m; N6 b( K% vInformation system
4 Y0 n- a: c- `% y8 |Central control locks,doors,windows
3 ]( y; S% j; {# c4 R  NPower locks
( ?1 C1 J+ S6 J0 P9 u9 DPower mirrors
  z2 H5 n5 H% \9 q1 u" v5 w/ T: Q0 A. {Power doors
0 x3 u4 u% c, |Power windows
! U* s/ O) F, w$ w# d' v( _+ t# _# EChild safety locks
Rear window defroster
# T3 Q) S$ e2 b* w. G& _: uBluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
Airbag: driver
9 `4 K# o& I$ R. V6 R. wAirbag: passenger
Airbag: side
' U1 _/ n' z% u( N  i2 [! D1 @Alarm
7 P- s3 Z  T% b8 s  M, O+ rFog lights
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**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
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: Q" j5 p- b+ l/ c  h; pPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
! I3 X* }' _0 nPick up on March 18-22.
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兰君子

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SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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6 X$ @2 e" W, B4 K2 \7 ~+ z  v! zIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

) n$ G. C/ V. @& a! m  y* {IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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2 f2 e! c* R6 u5 i+ _7 ^) R% GBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

, I6 m4 S, I$ X哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
/ X9 h1 \6 I) i) gSALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

0 }) U/ X& z8 d" aFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
2 F8 f% @4 i: p$ k  }+ L3 q9 IThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

6 r+ X. `  H; M. HSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
3 c0 n& E" W; U5 MYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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0 N5 Y$ T; _2 ELast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

' }+ L  ?; X) ~3 y& M6 f. `There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

! z+ V( d) |' l4 [3 [Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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