SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
: h" m  E3 v  X$ E" z  U9 A6 TAutomatic transmission
Silver
Remote starter and heat blocker
5 L0 y9 c) ?# bTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
. a8 _2 K' k. ]! E! b6 r( [7 vFour additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
+ u1 C  \7 o2 U0 _: S/ \8 C2 tABS Operation
- U) y) i( S  [3 B! U1 ~Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
. @: B$ a4 K* }4 \, V: iCentral control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
  |' p- o, O; W+ B: x: }! TPower mirrors
$ L9 t1 G0 K2 p: OPower doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
Airbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
Airbag: side
Alarm
Fog lights

**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
: ]5 O) u8 T5 o! `5 PIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

: |$ @" Y1 f5 Q$ z- u' Y$ f& z: S3 CPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
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* i1 n9 q1 x+ u. d$ N2 BCash only please :)

兰君子

SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

5 C( X$ k. L  x. {3 U! QDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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& u5 ^) p0 V" w# P' L6 SBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
. M7 z% v$ X* ~' j这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

( O# g* x' q( b# uSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
3 o$ h3 B3 B9 {) s  l' b- }: wYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.

* k4 z; x. c0 X. l, JLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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- E8 F8 [# ~! q" [. F7 D& _"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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& u1 S6 b  A! c9 \/ v9 |& @" j4 _, ?There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

" R) t8 E* A( m/ S/ L- j4 v& `Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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