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发表于 2015-2-28 15:35 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! $ c; o. ?, o( n+ {/ b# s1 j
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:8 y6 D/ M" L" Z4 j: E! r- G
Automatic transmission# B3 ~* s+ E* i! D7 i1 G9 g
Silver3 ^1 m3 t/ C4 i2 U( R
Remote starter and heat blocker2 z% B0 a% q4 n
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry/ A$ i& D% @5 d% R8 I2 o5 d
Four additional tires with rims8 b, b2 }& J2 H, F3 W# I1 x; J1 K
Air Conditioning - ~0 U( }' N. v  j" m
ABS Operation
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Information system
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Power locks
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Child safety locks
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Bluetooth hands-free operation4 L& A$ E" G: s( o
Radio
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Airbag: passenger
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Alarm & ?  O4 a; W3 n" ^; a
Fog lights # Q+ K1 S8 I$ K& d" O

6 E6 [7 b) @, d! r**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
! H6 g2 c! u; h5 V% K! yIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.: _1 L4 [3 u7 P8 i
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Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca. K! n, T8 K2 `: Z7 \$ N
Pick up on March 18-22.   p# J4 T# N* i+ Y0 p
Cash only please :)  C" [0 m" E' c  R; z7 ~
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发表于 2015-3-1 02:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 兰君子 于 2015-3-1 02:16 编辑
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SALE A CAR
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.& Y7 P  [. E9 `; s

# E( y2 b4 _$ Y3 X% G. `IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
% Q4 O. k, d  P2 k1 U IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING 1 F. f5 U$ d3 P# D
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发表于 2015-3-1 23:30 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
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发表于 2015-3-2 09:30 | 显示全部楼层
兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

5 ?5 o' @& \  p6 w这就叫骚摊子的,可以跟摊主干一场
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 楼主| 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50 | 显示全部楼层
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."! p5 [3 C2 V% U: S9 O; D! V
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By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)
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发表于 2015-3-2 11:26 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30. f6 O. \: U# |- Z. s
这就叫骚摊子的,可以跟摊主干一场

: ]) K3 K( a) d0 t4 X& v/ s4 B+ ^哈哈,真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了
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发表于 2015-3-2 12:15 | 显示全部楼层
那么问题来了,现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了
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发表于 2015-3-3 11:02 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11/ C4 D% F+ W+ x# P$ M  F9 e
SALE A CAR
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8 D9 J+ N: B# i3 h2 C8 l; ?Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

9 W% R: q- s  o) dFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.
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发表于 2015-3-15 09:40 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 兰君子 于 2015-3-15 10:05 编辑
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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
. U3 q' @0 Q1 _* L# m: {9 |  ^2 uThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...
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" f! Q3 }+ i% G) G0 C5 a1 w& XSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you. ( }2 E/ m5 q3 G: V
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.5 A7 s$ K2 E$ k
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:! n. S, y1 g% t9 }! ^
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"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.) |1 A" A7 q' P/ P5 }, U' {* {9 d

3 Z( i  M  B. G6 D4 cSorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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