SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
Automatic transmission
Silver
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1 |0 x, ~; [7 S3 `  z% F: DTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
# l  Y$ c- @/ J2 |$ |Four additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
ABS Operation
5 e: r. \1 h0 d. nTire pressure monitor system
" r4 O9 i0 c4 G5 cInformation system
& W8 q, s5 Z. B: g/ Y9 ~Central control locks,doors,windows
' G0 h/ z* n4 p  U2 T2 ?6 qPower locks
3 X3 h, @. q. ]8 FPower mirrors
# Z, f9 x) ]: v( ?Power doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
Airbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
Airbag: side
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& ~( f/ Z: l$ r6 H2 Q( t  VFog lights
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! k) c; T, Y$ j5 I. l7 m- ^. l0 M**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

6 O7 D0 D+ h/ u8 t1 q* WPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
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兰君子

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SALE A CAR
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+ ~. O* N, a9 p. YDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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3 N$ A- M2 u5 r, q5 ?1 n  ]Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

1 B& g' A) B+ R; q0 s6 a这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
% }6 ^/ M. D( ^& \: xThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

2 U6 s4 t& Z5 u$ n4 qSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
/ B% j! Z( I- D% S) n3 S7 w# @You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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4 N+ }& D: ]2 M- t9 Y6 K"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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