SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
9 g; L) w& D  ?/ C. \
VEICHLE OPTIONS:
Automatic transmission
% c/ P# @- B7 v% bSilver
Remote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
" Z- C; l8 r6 i& n; [9 T! RAir Conditioning
ABS Operation
- S" p. W9 `+ X! jTire pressure monitor system
Information system
% a% H. ]1 U( ~3 e7 l5 cCentral control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
Power mirrors
Power doors
Power windows
4 ]1 i! K& T* E2 I! pChild safety locks
Rear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
! t+ f5 O+ k1 n/ t4 BAirbag: driver
  Q$ B* `8 p2 V1 _7 o3 QAirbag: passenger
Airbag: side
$ m/ B: @' I8 @; N6 `# F& vAlarm
Fog lights

  Q# @; p+ z9 d. B8 p**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
- Q3 R, f8 T; |( a3 BIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
5 T) [* b5 i9 s9 Y8 P
Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
# N5 v. Z5 G$ F. ZPick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)

兰君子

SALE A CAR

+ z. w" p8 W4 X; h8 FDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

! ]; i& H5 ^9 z% p" h3 `If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
5 i$ A- r& w$ o: H$ k1 f
IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
) c  _6 n$ h9 t. C) t; f IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
+ \0 u6 V+ x7 Z) Z+ Y  r

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
8 X, A0 k1 Z8 g+ c
/ i: x5 b6 ^) N: D" E" U0 ]Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

% i; Z$ x$ B8 H  p) kBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

0 Y* j5 @9 R2 ?" V哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
1 T- \5 @& V1 r3 c. p( USALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
9 O) [2 D2 A; {" Y' X, @Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
# b/ k2 x$ J5 g
+ v' `& Q: d3 @7 J& K* b5 f3 B! KLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

9 o- Y2 Z+ B! mThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
8 t- T8 K. g2 C% d' v
. o5 d1 g4 P. `" w+ kSorry to give you "HARSH" again.
% P1 _' g  F) k6 i
! ]! Y" j4 s. U2 X