SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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Automatic transmission
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. Y3 P& e) i# f) G( \$ |+ H: ^. URemote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
" T/ b0 f8 @" f. e! J: ^; YFour additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
ABS Operation
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Information system
Central control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
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6 |: v$ b5 [" X0 g- tPower doors
* {) s# }6 y1 h/ B/ g& Z' zPower windows
Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
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4 o) V9 K+ ?; T5 E& \# W" Q5 ?Airbag: driver
: z- n4 q7 O8 C3 D! ]Airbag: passenger
9 G1 P5 @1 {, f) q% Z' I1 \Airbag: side
; E5 n9 v, Y8 _! oAlarm
Fog lights
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/ y5 w. t( L, H**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
0 b7 ]( j5 i& E$ H" U3 HIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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% H. m8 l" {7 X* V" t& C: kPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
& U4 h6 `+ J- P/ GPick up on March 18-22.
9 X! J: K7 j! \Cash only please :)

兰君子

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SALE A CAR

. h" I1 ^1 f' o6 ZDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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% B" u  A" s3 C; H& r( g! D3 AIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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, W- D, ]9 n, c* V! G/ Q) l2 `IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

3 b* X" p, F# |2 R2 |By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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. C0 i; E! ^7 BDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

) {$ l* D& E/ u5 O* `Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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; b5 u; F$ W3 q" m# TThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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" q: n5 D2 B$ [. aSorry to give you "HARSH" again.