SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

5 ?8 \2 T; K! kVEICHLE OPTIONS:
' G9 ^0 h$ m; ?2 {Automatic transmission
Silver
; ?! i- K, K$ ]7 w3 d$ g* P6 {# dRemote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
ABS Operation
4 M$ h$ z4 B$ O/ K# F" iTire pressure monitor system
$ n# q( C# c1 r& s7 ?( t: OInformation system
. k5 y/ z6 \+ K7 @! fCentral control locks,doors,windows
; `) }2 k( g% @+ L0 F, GPower locks
$ S- H% l! E* h3 k0 q2 }0 z* iPower mirrors
Power doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
2 p# O  q/ |: {" P8 Y2 l& ?Radio
4 B5 b4 p3 J7 [" r; j( xAirbag: driver
5 ^7 S2 }1 H7 y5 M' R$ sAirbag: passenger
Airbag: side
Alarm
+ i/ a6 q1 q  s# K' ~5 o) S1 _# {Fog lights
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  V" i  N, i8 |. D# e**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

/ r: ^( h+ w2 j1 wPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
' ~0 N8 S( p8 m: x, sPick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)
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兰君子

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  x/ g3 i! A" pDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

+ }1 s- e' H& T8 ]8 j2 LIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
1 h( e0 t  P# _6 K: @ IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

8 a+ G* b: d7 D7 A6 ZDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

; m8 w# w/ a% A; w+ x3 K4 r哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

6 F* X4 u6 O: P  m" vDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

* B4 `5 p- I8 y) TFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
9 o7 c% |6 r6 C& m; O: J3 {2 @; a4 @Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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9 n9 Z4 K* X* \+ w# JSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
- O* \0 P- N$ S/ f8 h3 [$ iYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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- T- |5 A/ N9 ~Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.