SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
Automatic transmission
$ S, _- w" G. RSilver
% S3 J) V  }, g" H) g( a" U+ URemote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
. |" g  F2 Q7 `/ G+ c3 }Four additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
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Tire pressure monitor system
" ^0 i7 B& z7 t1 |7 t. `9 ?" KInformation system
Central control locks,doors,windows
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9 i8 [8 C6 o9 A# J) D3 |5 e2 hPower mirrors
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Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
Airbag: driver
; M" W- w9 W- ~2 g9 p. m# ZAirbag: passenger
) h. j8 H/ E, Z& A' f* GAirbag: side
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6 I$ y0 o; G* r/ mFog lights
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. U( @: @9 m; ?3 c6 n: \**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

8 \' J% g3 N# y+ l$ tPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
4 e  h) V) T# S6 s. s3 yPick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)
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兰君子

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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

+ t' c& U0 b1 t1 ~3 _这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
  F2 h# y8 n' P6 ]SALE A CAR

  j3 S( _  k* A$ t, k$ ~9 ^Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
: W! U) }7 Y3 z6 s( a2 g+ |% xThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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# }3 ]3 `: Y! P- n6 b3 Y: WLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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. o9 E( `& w6 D+ G' X"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

' n9 `& f2 s# K3 F) wThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

0 K' {7 B2 h4 h* gSorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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