SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

VEICHLE OPTIONS:
- A1 Y) c1 S9 R% w, a0 @- xAutomatic transmission
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& _6 r; c2 v; E3 f: aRemote starter and heat blocker
. \! C( T1 f0 S, ?# s8 JTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
' y( \2 o4 q/ S4 yFour additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
9 \, @( y* K4 |& e' s( BABS Operation
' P- Y, Q% o+ o6 KTire pressure monitor system
- K1 h- L; {3 u' q) r: Q6 CInformation system
* ^+ b' X; A8 h9 g0 ?* u  o9 U  K# }Central control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
Power mirrors
  w/ _! C* u7 _1 r$ s, L: r4 LPower doors
% R5 E! h( m" h" @) ^Power windows
6 T8 ?4 J" C9 FChild safety locks
0 O' C# b" A7 K+ PRear window defroster
) K" s; t4 s. b$ r' dBluetooth hands-free operation
- Z. ]7 Z! Y* Z) A3 v5 jRadio
Airbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
Airbag: side
+ Q+ s3 s" E& n4 l* ~- y7 MAlarm
Fog lights

7 `1 a  d6 W0 V7 p  ?**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
3 y# M' Q' N/ ^: [+ D; S3 m3 oIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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! }$ I2 [; ^2 V- T4 A, ]  APlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
* V- {. Z4 j" s$ S9 }  }& r; LPick up on March 18-22.
& r: ~2 `4 ]' T7 y! p4 |# Z, jCash only please :)
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兰君子

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' H0 k; n" K! K- c, WDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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7 ^) {5 ~# {' W% Z# |# ?If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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2 I9 a- S1 U) K# |( cIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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/ A5 }/ S0 v% A" Y$ i0 @, q3 c2 @" }Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

+ m" T8 e1 Q0 J2 e* g这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
) `- r* T8 {  Z' v4 V这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

, B7 X' x0 o, ]5 b" i. ]哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
; ]" ]3 D! W& D  X8 \$ |Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.