SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

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) h* C3 k9 t0 ?" O: }Automatic transmission
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4 k1 I' V" ^) k1 tRemote starter and heat blocker
7 G3 L# z/ v9 {% q. xTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
3 Y5 a# b* W& C8 M' m/ ZFour additional tires with rims
' X+ Q4 q0 W  }; D5 rAir Conditioning
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Tire pressure monitor system
  J; t, ^& r. M# K, S6 p+ RInformation system
0 Z$ y  F, q& E& ?& `6 K8 JCentral control locks,doors,windows
9 |  R7 d4 H* g, F8 qPower locks
Power mirrors
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Power windows
Child safety locks
( B  @  x6 |) I9 q9 Y% kRear window defroster
( T# Q' `& F9 d1 N6 r& fBluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
- m& y  V! d7 e7 w( ]$ `" bAirbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
$ A6 g: i& U" {9 l8 J4 ]Airbag: side
  V& s& `% }  y) T. HAlarm
Fog lights
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) E! C9 E/ R+ S2 E9 s4 ]+ I% d**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
1 U# R4 D2 @; K8 z5 s1 RIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
; \8 ~; \, Z2 B7 z0 X- D7 cPick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)
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兰君子

SALE A CAR
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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. h2 N2 K2 }( o$ Y5 s- _: }0 L; z) LDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

  P( d* `- X/ S8 r这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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2 I' F  d! s. x' b9 f$ kBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
9 j8 C5 v: p* c8 V# B# {3 B这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

3 I0 s: r; ^) C, W- y& ]Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
8 D* d( [6 ?) _) Z6 D! o2 k0 VThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

. d: |/ `0 y0 w0 XSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
. w& z, Q# ?( I% N7 G/ vYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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* ]4 I* J% Y) i+ P9 v2 ~6 TLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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0 x/ L+ {, D6 ?+ v$ @, NThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

) C3 ?) N) d0 _9 c  F7 y' O, V5 SSorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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