SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
2 b9 i! z7 U- t  [" s' ^! Y% w( BAutomatic transmission
Silver
0 M4 x% @/ V' @" S( }; s  }9 NRemote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
5 `6 F2 J1 c8 aFour additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
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/ [: G  l6 S& L( hTire pressure monitor system
1 [( t# Q% d  J5 W/ W4 t8 l8 w( n$ gInformation system
0 ~1 C) t/ g8 U8 `: Y- L3 GCentral control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
Power mirrors
Power doors
0 G- w& C3 O. t3 h6 uPower windows
Child safety locks
- H& D$ g7 N) o0 ERear window defroster
8 F: _8 ?' y) c" g: T6 kBluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
$ V- e2 j4 X8 _1 A7 CAirbag: driver
* g& _2 G& W/ e! W  e  e% C9 X2 ^Airbag: passenger
+ a: h' z, R- zAirbag: side
Alarm
, X5 l" W$ `/ `Fog lights
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( H  P" o/ G0 l**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
6 K5 a, w2 s, a- ^If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

4 B3 V+ y, E+ D* ?( v$ ePlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
9 V- U$ t0 v/ H" B* a% G! \Pick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)

兰君子

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SALE A CAR
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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+ ^* E* q5 G% ~" G# OIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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* d/ F5 ?! R/ e7 cIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

" I2 {1 n4 Q4 M" ]9 NBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
& b: U' m* T8 U2 w9 c这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

4 \; O+ e( o) C哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

( }& E9 [3 R7 YDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

1 y9 q( [- A+ {9 IFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
0 X) d3 e3 r9 q1 M% oThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
8 i& p6 k7 A) ], b/ V. IYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

5 F* X/ ~( F( [9 U7 n7 ], |There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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