SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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; r2 ~/ `4 u' A! \0 k7 x4 gVEICHLE OPTIONS:
Automatic transmission
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Remote starter and heat blocker
2 ^9 r1 e3 a7 Q6 k& @$ dTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
6 O  n' l3 P, {- v  g5 O/ |ABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
6 [. C  u) o  G; AInformation system
Central control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
Power mirrors
Power doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
/ k1 z& K% R7 p& x% t2 yBluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
- b! I" C7 S# s8 E3 Z" W) h7 `1 \Airbag: driver
4 |1 W0 E2 p8 k) J( I' nAirbag: passenger
Airbag: side
Alarm
0 {5 t5 S; [9 V6 ?Fog lights
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% W# Z' E' d- G2 c! t  s0 v**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
4 w) P) q+ S+ r3 OIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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+ |8 p& Z2 I8 d6 _$ }7 qPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
: ^9 K* g. ]8 M. JCash only please :)
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兰君子

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SALE A CAR
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

  o0 J3 V+ [) w# N: bIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

- a2 u/ j2 w5 k+ @+ oIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
0 w/ N* n8 t8 C- c; S/ r9 G IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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  ^2 }9 [: d' ]) u# t7 q. {/ WDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

3 Y; x2 X" E% J9 u9 e0 C  Q  i' @" T) ?8 L这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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# M9 z7 E4 u% h2 c1 e) bBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
% `3 E) q* x2 q1 j这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

9 y6 ~- T6 x$ A% C' C( Z( y" n哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

; ^4 |! }- J6 m$ j; q/ p7 L( E: fDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

3 ^. j& ~! r+ U/ u) M1 c+ bFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
0 S' b; }5 T( ~7 o9 i, t( ~Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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0 C' a, b3 Y  F# R0 `0 s, NSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

7 y, ?) I) i3 s6 y  Q( Z! b4 k"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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- d7 v+ Q1 n. V( n( mSorry to give you "HARSH" again.