SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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) W' L) a# J7 uAutomatic transmission
Silver
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Four additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
4 Z3 i! P% T. Q" k" X( U. H& cABS Operation
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Information system
* {" p& s5 }7 g0 h7 ]" SCentral control locks,doors,windows
- w6 _1 _3 R4 L7 J! KPower locks
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Power doors
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9 p6 Q( Q, s% X6 a. S2 _Rear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
: ]; h- d2 a+ f/ TAirbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
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Fog lights
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**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
9 Q; U9 K8 y7 bPick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)

兰君子

SALE A CAR

, I+ R! V- r! a$ T- \: c6 pDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
8 {) E# P6 f0 k2 E; \/ D* T IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

4 ~" V- j( A& C1 J2 Q8 n这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
: S, r3 p/ L3 Y: `% \( t( F这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
; d! E2 u7 W, a& ^% w, zThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

2 Q. k- g0 {4 dSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
- b, g7 m, k$ l3 u, T% ~) CYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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# o* _5 l, \: \) b1 {/ kLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

# _- a* h- S. w4 d# g  w"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

5 l8 P& e/ A3 B! @There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

! L! V0 w8 k( oSorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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