SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

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Automatic transmission
Silver
Remote starter and heat blocker
* {6 v' g2 z+ c( j6 T& n4 UTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
ABS Operation
  q$ [: R! U' \( u, x4 ?Tire pressure monitor system
; \& {) g# ~1 _6 k  ?Information system
Central control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
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; s3 P! v' m/ r+ T' f3 m, ZPower doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
5 {; A6 D0 g; C1 m) c' l5 KRear window defroster
8 d4 m4 c; C" w/ g' r- G4 R( ~2 N; nBluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
Airbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
Airbag: side
Alarm
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$ Y+ n: J& J+ S& b# Y% m4 m**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
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* d5 u+ d2 y  {7 }Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
) x0 _; `  {( s0 B6 F1 nPick up on March 18-22.
5 @: c) z, p6 Y' B2 l, gCash only please :)
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兰君子

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SALE A CAR
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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; r$ a1 U& B* U/ a$ {IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
' [  T+ A) f& K% L3 i7 Z9 m这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

) S* w% @3 N$ a/ }哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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9 w+ N! F- X, }Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
9 S% j: Y7 j$ `; VThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

, ~3 |% n& f* j1 q. aSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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: r, u- X  O6 P6 eSorry to give you "HARSH" again.