SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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Automatic transmission
0 P$ p' t+ _; A9 lSilver
5 F5 K; A# h0 B5 v0 FRemote starter and heat blocker
" M0 @$ _6 h% ^Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
. o" w2 k& D* `Air Conditioning
/ \; I# X2 H$ b9 e, Z& ^0 T/ _ABS Operation
9 G: [5 B( r7 Q* MTire pressure monitor system
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Central control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
Power mirrors
Power doors
Power windows
3 I$ A- `; |+ S) I8 L4 \Child safety locks
6 t. j1 y# Z5 p8 p6 e$ X0 ARear window defroster
/ J3 }1 f. q. S; _Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
5 t7 x* w' M1 R# _$ ~" dAirbag: driver
( L2 Q+ t9 q- U  Q; W" \8 O, qAirbag: passenger
+ x) e+ w  R3 gAirbag: side
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Fog lights

1 H2 a  y. f% I$ k  F7 P**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
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$ i+ ]" x8 \; S1 o- pCash only please :)

兰君子

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1 K: a2 ]3 H7 e5 q$ c  r5 x2 J8 IDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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" C& G) }( l3 o  ~0 z: b4 _5 JIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
; f: e+ L; A$ a  d IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

7 s- P- Q! v& B* J这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
$ M% f% ^9 S" U: j3 N5 o# i2 L0 {这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

' c3 [7 `8 b  _2 @& Z哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

9 ]2 |2 K) N1 E6 [% iSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
1 @8 R' C& X8 {You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.

: P% Z9 `+ O+ }: m1 q4 n8 |/ ~Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

$ f2 e: p+ m6 d* b- r"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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