SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

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Automatic transmission
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8 |' j# l0 k0 A1 b( B+ KRemote starter and heat blocker
! @9 Q* W' g; }$ j! jTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
8 T7 k" I  L8 x" b/ O# X3 uAir Conditioning
ABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
1 S! [1 R4 t( |& w7 jInformation system
0 @4 S" Q* I0 M0 J" l" y" qCentral control locks,doors,windows
( z9 i0 P- u( @Power locks
0 J9 ?% `" d1 b# _" O) mPower mirrors
1 `* j" n" y2 C* b$ UPower doors
+ J  y8 j# p5 `, YPower windows
1 r, }, R2 V# M, H  G# KChild safety locks
0 Q) }+ {* K  S0 C" a" _+ Q4 vRear window defroster
, a% G8 l$ S% P' }" R2 k3 RBluetooth hands-free operation
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7 {# G/ n  E6 O. B4 A) n0 t9 U7 SAirbag: driver
1 ]" P# e, S( g) PAirbag: passenger
( {  F3 R5 \6 ]' K$ J: H8 fAirbag: side
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: c3 t+ A7 V; _$ y3 I% O6 E! X7 ?4 XFog lights

  Y* t, |6 \( a( k8 [**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
0 s, }' F. T, LIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

1 A$ a3 ], H6 N9 [' o3 G/ M5 CPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)
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兰君子

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SALE A CAR

, ~" L) x2 ~3 c& y  z/ n3 q, NDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

: Y$ Q1 D! y, H! ]If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

: }) S7 \. ?- UIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
6 X2 U8 E  S. }4 S5 e" A% l4 o5 e IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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: Y5 u$ c! E# ^Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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" J9 m, h% g3 Z$ B+ TBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
5 ]! w; X+ H& F" U) `, g1 d1 w这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

. G* e& P8 D4 J# r7 sFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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1 o  @( l6 i6 s7 ]# o( `* eSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.

8 B2 }$ Q/ c. s5 q1 Z4 ]Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

9 s" x! W0 E2 `. b/ j  V"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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$ N7 r  a0 X  ]: u$ v: N! n3 |There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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# K% g/ o5 _" U4 f  D7 k0 _Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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