SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
" I! g0 ?7 G- b4 {2 B# }0 fAutomatic transmission
Silver
Remote starter and heat blocker
. M( Z2 _; p3 q" Y0 vTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
ABS Operation
2 f$ s, i8 I; p& V4 J$ xTire pressure monitor system
Information system
3 o/ [8 y+ _6 t5 B! d; SCentral control locks,doors,windows
0 L; p7 x& K* J& R: \3 cPower locks
Power mirrors
$ n9 \6 h2 N' m  GPower doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
8 W7 [9 e3 `+ a! UAirbag: driver
% `* D. O( k& n& X  }Airbag: passenger
Airbag: side
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Fog lights

1 D  W. l4 a9 @  @5 K**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
( N, U7 F& ?* A. Q3 S: I8 SIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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3 H- J! {, D' q/ {Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
* R0 K; f/ U& ?7 n) r1 I' LPick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)
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兰君子

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SALE A CAR
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6 _, r, n6 Z% |3 X1 t' a9 X: ?Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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8 N3 V4 q& F& W* D5 rIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
+ h+ H% I: F& _% J8 R9 w IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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9 A; \8 K+ e8 X. [9 M. @! |! {Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

/ v* A: S; i. m& D4 T$ v$ i& eBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

4 ^. V% N) a6 R, c哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
7 R- F: d8 U  B# x+ a- G6 p& qSALE A CAR
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6 M+ s* E7 ^3 w7 j4 G" ZDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
7 A7 }( r) W" P* FThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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7 Y9 O, s$ D% S( k: x* {' SSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.

" e0 X- j. t, d4 ~Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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- X& v1 P- L: ?. s" |* X"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

+ c3 A& u0 V8 _8 ^0 hSorry to give you "HARSH" again.