SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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Automatic transmission
Silver
) `- _2 E9 T( x. d& `2 fRemote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
ABS Operation
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' w1 l0 n, E) ~& H: B1 g, b% }7 zInformation system
4 I1 y& F  m8 I+ N4 B7 DCentral control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
) C9 E; u1 j2 _. P$ ]7 R1 FPower mirrors
Power doors
Power windows
. d5 |" ~# ^) W$ K  QChild safety locks
Rear window defroster
$ V$ h  b) `& m0 _' u( fBluetooth hands-free operation
/ g* Z, I& h7 q# X5 Y+ m7 T$ DRadio
Airbag: driver
/ @' ]& |$ \, CAirbag: passenger
' b2 {0 }7 M* y( b1 k( a/ kAirbag: side
$ B5 H. Y& d+ J  `4 t: G0 KAlarm
/ l7 A! ]% @, J& E( O" d) qFog lights
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**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
1 z* D+ e+ @# U, I1 l' M* M* FIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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( p* n3 Q+ `) j  h) OPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
; E! e( D6 A, k: mPick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)
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兰君子

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SALE A CAR

6 _* E! `) c$ ]: {* b1 L. MDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

% d( l$ y7 Q7 i* m这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

1 _5 h, h) q, {! ^# I+ S  {# RBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
5 H7 g/ K3 d. `: }8 Q这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
' j. r; \7 ?8 wThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

7 l4 A3 B/ H. R/ o4 RSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.

* Z5 @0 [8 E0 s9 N" E' V: ^1 SLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

% O3 w4 T3 ?# R  n5 k4 N, B$ X/ KThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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