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发表于 2015-2-28 15:35 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!   @. N. D- m/ D3 B% ~6 Y6 N

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Remote starter and heat blocker
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Air Conditioning
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Tire pressure monitor system
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Central control locks,doors,windows
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Child safety locks
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Bluetooth hands-free operation
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Airbag: driver + z! B" p( |' y/ V
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Airbag: side
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& O. G- j0 B. Y' k6 G8 y4 n- ?**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**0 l, @/ z; B5 i% t$ Y
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
5 i2 G" q( U, Y2 l: O0 |Pick up on March 18-22.
# n$ D0 u5 e9 W! tCash only please :)
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发表于 2015-3-1 02:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 兰君子 于 2015-3-1 02:16 编辑 6 u0 c! [+ t# ^8 m! s% e6 v) s
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SALE A CAR
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; b( j$ \7 s% q' _- Y, R; MDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! . 8 L6 \$ R: O& M# ~+ S# g: c
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If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.. g. M  e6 z2 Y& \/ G* F- [6 g

1 Y  O; [6 f4 A2 F4 F4 GIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR) k" [8 @$ s: `: I0 W; f1 w$ s8 Q9 S
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING ) `4 R$ |* g1 J7 X& Q) i
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发表于 2015-3-1 11:59 | 显示全部楼层
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发表于 2015-3-1 23:30 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
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发表于 2015-3-2 09:30 | 显示全部楼层
兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:119 J! D) v! h( [/ r6 I
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...
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这就叫骚摊子的,可以跟摊主干一场
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 楼主| 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50 | 显示全部楼层
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."9 @7 B8 p, M3 q1 T, p' U. \+ T

7 I6 B4 d5 M5 ?6 eBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)
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发表于 2015-3-2 11:26 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
% I- `" C0 R% v3 M, d/ g) `这就叫骚摊子的,可以跟摊主干一场

9 `  w( P5 o/ Y8 }# k- _哈哈,真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了
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发表于 2015-3-2 12:15 | 显示全部楼层
那么问题来了,现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了
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发表于 2015-3-3 11:02 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11* i% _$ }, c! u& q/ ]3 n8 [
SALE A CAR
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...
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Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.
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发表于 2015-3-15 09:40 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 兰君子 于 2015-3-15 10:05 编辑 # A7 f  D7 `7 p$ N  T0 Q- O  h1 y1 ]
zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
# l/ A- d0 V4 C5 EThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...
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+ o1 Z& g  h% u% [Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you. ) h& _& v+ S% I( U" I) x
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:9 _) k; V0 b% U, X0 ^4 L, q0 }" j

4 A) j- q+ A9 |" }9 B. B  o"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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3 @) D  [9 ]0 P9 G$ OThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.5 d- y$ k! V& J8 G. ^9 y5 |: e: b

5 J& {! k1 h$ i' R  ~  b' C$ oSorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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