SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
: z# r/ t, X( }4 A% TAutomatic transmission
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7 q: u. q, \2 w7 Y% F3 h% B% RRemote starter and heat blocker
/ y8 g+ B: u, [, b; I$ pTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
/ }1 v9 R' R) H; M1 ?* N( C- DFour additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
3 @/ Q1 G6 A/ gABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
Central control locks,doors,windows
$ M. O" F" M1 Q" x5 {2 iPower locks
/ k# g% S, @+ T, `) G* f; |Power mirrors
Power doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
2 h7 L' a% ?6 m; E$ ^% X- `7 k# qRear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
Airbag: driver
% }2 D  P; p6 c* D( N9 l! R, wAirbag: passenger
Airbag: side
$ x5 u$ M; U2 T. i& }. PAlarm
! k1 d) p3 x; x0 ]6 U% O' ?" ^Fog lights
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3 Y2 v9 f- K) j% A6 n**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
) z& z0 j- i# o6 [' r1 {If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

5 P: F$ P: A( O1 }( C! |Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)
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兰君子

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SALE A CAR
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% h! v4 s3 c" S6 DDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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" h0 e: q3 \  C# v- qIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

. B  c/ ~( A* v( G' u$ _- HIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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# B9 b8 ?  \5 }0 C$ gDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

( X8 X0 b" J( h) K5 A! M7 cBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

. l) I9 K. ^* X. [# U3 VSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
$ j) A- d# D, \+ w, H( HYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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' ]* H  D& ]* l8 F+ X2 \: gLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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6 D8 K; m! n6 ^# m  k+ o; E& d! i! U"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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7 e' g/ ~& C9 N% e. H( X$ T  nThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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