SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
- ^7 `6 v, Z8 d1 W2 xAutomatic transmission
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Remote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
! b5 a( \1 n5 ?7 k, M; I1 U" _Four additional tires with rims
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ABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
0 T* g# l7 ]' a$ P. \- ^" o- DCentral control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
Power mirrors
Power doors
7 E. I6 h8 U) ?* UPower windows
Child safety locks
" N' D9 Q: T5 u9 H# _" h$ o/ \) FRear window defroster
7 \' L4 J4 w; E4 i$ ~! b% fBluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
7 ]# W+ b( V# E- E6 x% aAirbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
1 H; R  ~4 s) M7 UAirbag: side
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7 ]7 l8 y  L* H# O3 PFog lights
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**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
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Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
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兰君子

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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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* s+ @8 p! f; ^: `* S  E$ D7 d+ LIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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/ S; m% a0 t/ ~" j: YIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

# d) A7 |# f7 a. PBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
$ z2 [2 A0 T' A! D这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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- I( n; x0 |) U( I0 }0 ?Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

; R2 I; J8 K! F* t, e3 gFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
: O5 {  ~7 M: Z' c, D* lThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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7 F+ e  Z& p# PLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

0 {- c* i2 b2 D! O& E! IThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.