SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

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6 G+ k+ z$ I( Y+ qAutomatic transmission
Silver
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Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
" I" S3 @6 r" L! }% O9 @: CFour additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
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- s, h0 M% u# c, T9 D9 S+ k$ hTire pressure monitor system
Information system
Central control locks,doors,windows
( D5 O4 N$ ^; r2 Y( xPower locks
" |: F. F* n7 k4 d) bPower mirrors
Power doors
8 ?3 d% L% C" lPower windows
Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
- G/ Z$ M# c2 IBluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
  E4 r7 n* u9 {4 w1 L' F$ w" U- LAirbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
Airbag: side
Alarm
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" _, g$ e( ]. d' s/ m0 ^**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
# F  Y9 V& g& L" Z- pPick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)

兰君子

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' B9 F; g; ]( E% DDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

2 f+ V* l5 s; D6 c& YIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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; [: O3 P5 b1 T- C+ j' U: O8 UDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

) f$ {5 I/ h1 W. {9 l3 x! ?6 Z$ l这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

7 {: h, W- H: zBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
" a7 Q, T6 A0 \, a: b这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

) M0 m. u: b+ [3 h7 b哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
0 S- q- @6 H% y! xThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
; x+ }+ ?( u, V" o5 J: H8 |% dYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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+ _! d- R+ f  S% A% OLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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2 Z6 Z  W" R# Q3 k5 U( b"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

% b7 p% s( D6 m3 a. @1 Z  SThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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* [0 G  Y$ ^5 q) @: H( b. USorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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