SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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8 m& E3 x: k" r- kVEICHLE OPTIONS:
3 g+ |0 N$ p: y  Y  |' |Automatic transmission
Silver
Remote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
1 z, q5 P. ?. cAir Conditioning
ABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
Central control locks,doors,windows
" V  u0 ]  y' z5 e9 uPower locks
Power mirrors
) g2 G( q+ ^" d0 Z. B  MPower doors
Power windows
; G3 x! v0 n3 C, oChild safety locks
Rear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
, C3 }! C7 l) `9 D& K% O" _( lAirbag: driver
+ [2 q) j4 X* y' |" ~$ }2 kAirbag: passenger
9 f8 ]- A0 _: O3 u2 ^' O  U. N" vAirbag: side
Alarm
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**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
* K; H# |3 O* I1 V& s) I; VIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)
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兰君子

SALE A CAR
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+ m' }* e, w- I+ WDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

" }' ]; H1 v# E  J$ NIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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+ [. c# b, x$ M/ D( ^IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

2 B- _- `2 X: E$ g6 ~Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
3 K. M, ?& @) _! t. ?这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

3 l( ^# z9 U- G% Q  L+ Z5 [$ G" WFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
" J! V. V' ?) U$ `& Q5 L. z9 ^Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
' ^# g/ Y, x% X& OYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.

* v9 y: o6 E2 U; v% tLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

5 s( v. A" C( @7 P"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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/ V* p/ }1 L( c5 M* ?There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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