SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

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) \% u; u" a8 G! l& P* S! mAutomatic transmission
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5 M0 V4 g/ i4 }  `! j4 o) T3 \7 qRemote starter and heat blocker
* G, Z5 r  H5 x3 {9 KTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
ABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
Central control locks,doors,windows
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Power mirrors
6 ^- V" u& D2 y2 cPower doors
Power windows
1 T1 u" P7 Q, J" J6 i; fChild safety locks
Rear window defroster
! k$ X  S3 N. qBluetooth hands-free operation
4 K) U; w' u, X  D: c" RRadio
+ Z  l  z% a6 C& M' d- P/ AAirbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
Airbag: side
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Fog lights

; O( q0 i" ^6 f- h**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
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兰君子

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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
) B3 e% F. r1 a% H, n, T IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

) l8 }- P7 _' r* ?, E: P哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

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兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
- Z  f2 o- {5 ?& z  m1 X8 mThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

' u7 K) ]4 {6 M" ^: x. uSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
- o0 b3 ^( ]* k7 Y! @4 f4 x5 `3 ]: C0 KYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.

3 R% F  r% ?7 ULast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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0 T. b2 P* g' FThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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