SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

VEICHLE OPTIONS:
& C: g, l6 u% g  N0 cAutomatic transmission
Silver
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Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
' l4 z4 k- z% p8 }& t4 mFour additional tires with rims
7 d. D/ h/ J7 G; QAir Conditioning
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Tire pressure monitor system
% T: l& y0 u) G) @) wInformation system
Central control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
5 m, N* @9 Q6 R% B; N5 C' V* pPower mirrors
3 h: G* G8 u# v# ~Power doors
Power windows
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Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
6 ]2 B+ M0 T1 X2 |! N# I# C! {  eAirbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
Airbag: side
Alarm
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**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

. [; @2 q/ V  a% BPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
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兰君子

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; o: W- B( H5 Q* q8 KDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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% q, t5 T" t; ^8 @; S# o1 bIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

% q, `. e3 J" }0 v7 `- eIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
$ X+ K" c4 V1 Y( v6 t" \1 x5 w IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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$ R: n, _' g; E# @, L8 q4 B# FDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

, ~8 d& Q9 l8 J: {) H: q哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

: F! Z+ Z1 r( ]  _/ wDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

( b1 Z, W! v: xFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
2 K) E0 |  ?, w3 _: L0 `$ gThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

4 f/ f! M* _! a0 @Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
; ~; I$ ^3 `" D( S7 ^- o; a$ m. v/ JYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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% ?1 v: d$ }4 B4 _8 dThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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