SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

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6 V7 ]) [% ^6 Y9 q2 ^$ {( N8 b& eAutomatic transmission
Silver
Remote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
; ]$ Y7 ~9 F/ A* ~& g1 J( h, v! A, JFour additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
0 M: }: D- G/ H# mABS Operation
! h4 o& @$ {) [# A0 QTire pressure monitor system
Information system
Central control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
Power mirrors
Power doors
7 k% [! p- `: q( M0 O8 oPower windows
Child safety locks
( Y7 {/ O0 o1 S4 }2 y$ |' DRear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
& `, Z! ]; E- L1 b6 bAirbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
Airbag: side
Alarm
/ T6 b+ r& p! Q% \8 CFog lights

**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
& ]# \- G8 b! j, jPick up on March 18-22.
$ Q! D& @2 Q1 ]. V9 o; l/ K& rCash only please :)

兰君子

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SALE A CAR
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: U; w. L, ^8 D4 J% }% a1 X0 j8 LDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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% }* k- x7 p% z) L" _5 WIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

% B* u2 U2 U: ~  O( n' eBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
& O3 N- [$ w& W& u这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

0 u+ y* q# Y6 ^- W- W2 B哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

$ a% r+ B- s& |) C  t! {& y8 e4 L" MFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
, P3 \" ~1 i! U6 s" T6 LThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
7 w  W6 ^5 Q# Y6 A2 R6 zYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.

, J2 {6 h0 f# }- KLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

0 X( Q9 l0 q" @" \"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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3 e) {. n5 u* q% R/ L+ D1 yThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

5 x! M2 d# [6 X6 G" G5 gSorry to give you "HARSH" again.

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