SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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* s% n& G* ~! |% _) a* o+ \Automatic transmission
Silver
Remote starter and heat blocker
. w, N2 V- _, M" \9 YTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
+ u, I6 l8 e5 x& U4 bFour additional tires with rims
# y, ^0 Y  J1 O. `1 }Air Conditioning
ABS Operation
, t8 O5 F! U0 S* j8 OTire pressure monitor system
Information system
; ?/ V% Y3 E/ E. f! kCentral control locks,doors,windows
: H8 U7 T  X: ]: V8 W0 ^7 RPower locks
Power mirrors
2 H8 h( t. U3 y  S5 w4 p5 ~6 I2 mPower doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
8 q: {2 C, z2 Q9 {  ?7 ?Rear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
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Airbag: driver
6 ?; \' N8 t. }, d1 lAirbag: passenger
Airbag: side
Alarm
Fog lights

**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

& d, t9 w; D  U4 h# gPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
9 X5 U) N6 t: ~$ a% S1 Z- hPick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)
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兰君子

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SALE A CAR

; I2 `$ V1 R% h$ ]9 J) B+ FDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

! o% f+ y- K4 @# x8 S3 C& L( N2 G+ R: h+ q这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
0 f$ @) b6 a$ ]2 u这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

4 a9 _9 }4 U5 q( Z8 e8 J哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
  q+ O5 t5 F( r' ]SALE A CAR

1 e' m% n* o: I2 k, Y, b! fDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

+ }8 w% G; Y- R4 Q5 }/ j, `Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

+ k' r+ Z9 _/ |9 Q6 nSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.

; a- L4 L( g# v4 u8 ^Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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  I! j# G: @/ LThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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