SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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Automatic transmission
Silver
4 W& T) P9 {* t5 }0 ARemote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
( f, W* i& _  x0 sFour additional tires with rims
- M+ S2 M- e# B; b  rAir Conditioning
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1 d8 P0 K# u0 L/ \Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
Central control locks,doors,windows
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Power mirrors
Power doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
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Radio
Airbag: driver
  R/ R+ e; i4 eAirbag: passenger
Airbag: side
Alarm
Fog lights

**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
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兰君子

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SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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: V0 Y4 p0 A' y4 DIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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. e7 Z6 z- M9 H3 S: SIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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% K" g0 q: D6 z2 NDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
, O" T8 ~1 n0 I, D$ q, K9 t这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

: U+ D" r! p1 O+ k& L" C+ r3 dDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
7 g. W- r; Z1 iThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

% ^+ h3 R# z# q* m7 y: L3 I  X6 SSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
4 ]* \8 k9 i) g2 Y* F) P( K4 @You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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, P3 c: h9 Y" o1 gLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

7 V" J$ T0 G# E) d& M1 e3 X"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

$ R2 e* W5 q. i% U6 M7 H9 I& l, USorry to give you "HARSH" again.

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