SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
+ p  n3 T$ A% x) @4 fAutomatic transmission
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9 t. V" }/ u& l& hRemote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
! |8 p+ N; v. l+ S  Q& v4 |/ LAir Conditioning
ABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
) V. D" ~! S& @' Y! rCentral control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
Power mirrors
Power doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
4 O3 ~$ ]( i% K6 n; K2 p9 vRear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
& Z5 ^6 j, ^9 L4 w& f# @9 b" lAirbag: driver
7 ?+ {  Q# A  v2 g* e2 |% L6 y1 PAirbag: passenger
+ L7 Q. V, R1 M; p9 G* e" DAirbag: side
Alarm
Fog lights
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8 H0 u( m7 M( }, N**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
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兰君子

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SALE A CAR
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/ N2 N) u3 l# KDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

6 |6 [; |3 _3 h( G0 [If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

% J& ]0 A! s1 v3 XIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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4 O! r- q# Z! O) o, i  d" tDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

3 @" W* E+ w8 }/ z/ L; K2 @这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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' ]" L' I% Q% O5 j: Q& y5 DBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
8 n) s- |' y. d1 }1 O9 I这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

7 b7 ~- R+ p8 }# h: L# ]4 }' x哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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3 A4 b! t" B( L9 Q$ yDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

6 r; k! [6 D# N3 b  |6 }Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
+ n: V4 D5 P1 M8 Y  [0 h6 [+ RThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

" s+ b2 t0 ~2 `6 Y: RSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
8 l% ]9 v3 k. `, h: [0 M7 KYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.

1 _/ P* |; L6 I7 sLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

. G% t$ V9 ~8 bThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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