SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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5 B5 U" p3 D: Q, ^0 hVEICHLE OPTIONS:
! K# `8 ^( o+ ?7 P, m! L0 }) oAutomatic transmission
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! }7 L9 g3 X- @# C/ A% ORemote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
$ s2 t$ w1 b! V. RABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
4 Z3 O& d% ^3 g1 UCentral control locks,doors,windows
, S. \/ O% w) u) uPower locks
6 o! M  Z. z9 ePower mirrors
1 l' Y* q6 u6 D3 b1 O- @: HPower doors
0 i" m& R7 _7 L+ Q% YPower windows
Child safety locks
3 F3 S$ U& Z# r, D. ]Rear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
Airbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
Airbag: side
) D' Q( A& m5 o) C0 {1 C& qAlarm
  i  i8 y$ _# d3 T0 m: BFog lights

**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
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Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
1 Z# O: S% g- a' iPick up on March 18-22.
6 V# u7 o9 E  l* XCash only please :)

兰君子

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SALE A CAR
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

7 b7 D- k; S! S( \7 {5 xDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

/ A) m5 B+ G: t/ _哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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2 B% @/ V" X- UDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
% E: @9 U6 n3 JThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
$ x- n( \3 c. _% kYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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+ J6 Q6 I7 ~5 o) YLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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+ D- l+ U3 p7 g3 _* q% V; f  b"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

, ?) u# H7 h- Y' X, bSorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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