SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

VEICHLE OPTIONS:
. ^7 s6 {9 r8 k! d- k4 @Automatic transmission
Silver
2 d' [( ?1 P; }Remote starter and heat blocker
6 U  N" k1 E  N1 ~. fTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
7 Q8 K# y6 b1 mABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
0 R. d1 {/ `% O& V5 wCentral control locks,doors,windows
  T5 N7 \4 \% U  ?Power locks
Power mirrors
Power doors
: K  u3 a) o( aPower windows
  A9 ~. _+ |! X0 P* [7 Q1 TChild safety locks
Rear window defroster
" f: L! p/ d( e& `Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
Airbag: driver
" l% p( L; C  C! ^  x- IAirbag: passenger
Airbag: side
$ S  j) ^2 y5 o, S$ _1 l: xAlarm
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/ s3 k& }! l3 y4 z- c+ p**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
- P; M6 q! a$ a3 t' mIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
! t: l4 Q+ }% i8 E1 dPick up on March 18-22.
/ i2 E4 a6 S- D0 B1 V3 E4 ^Cash only please :)
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兰君子

SALE A CAR
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8 h/ @; `2 b) {/ D1 MDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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' ?3 [8 h5 K9 ^8 F3 e8 b6 CIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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# A! {! X+ C) {2 v& a: iIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
6 ?6 g' n1 X- s3 H6 N IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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, X; v( V' O8 K9 \. C, C# s! h8 aDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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) D% m5 @# \8 _4 yDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

, `  ?$ g; k- o% t! ~Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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4 v8 F6 M6 C+ M7 q+ qSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.

9 {+ ^* [9 [4 @1 G& mLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

3 q( K+ L3 }& O5 B"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

% V1 x3 m  B3 f) M  TThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

7 ^6 H6 g8 Q% b6 pSorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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