SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

VEICHLE OPTIONS:
, p; B% f% c! `$ ~9 b7 l- h& OAutomatic transmission
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Remote starter and heat blocker
# i' _* }1 l+ x) _, JTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
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Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
Central control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
Power mirrors
4 [" O$ [* n! J" MPower doors
' w0 W0 ~1 |3 o$ `0 zPower windows
7 _/ j) K+ F/ GChild safety locks
Rear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
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$ m/ j2 X. o9 k8 d9 v% P1 q% XAirbag: driver
* N& g4 o, K" L- C( K) pAirbag: passenger
Airbag: side
" @1 f* v% X6 j# @* a9 mAlarm
Fog lights
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**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

" n6 K2 w, c( k0 F( fPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)

兰君子

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) w" A2 A' i- e8 m$ [0 J$ M) N1 D- nDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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/ t9 K) F7 K* L( RIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

8 }7 `5 x8 f4 k7 a$ J6 Z6 J) G6 f% zDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

5 V$ i+ ~! r0 A+ \2 {' ?, Q9 X这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
0 u5 _  Q+ }5 a0 s' L这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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9 e0 K3 E7 \( u( E- d9 kDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

( C+ {! K3 p, U7 W3 r/ c. dFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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, }' P2 p8 y( p/ i" n4 _Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.

& c; e# G& l$ x3 O" ]Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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" K9 f% E  A( _/ ?0 R' gThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.