SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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( I7 C, c- f6 VAutomatic transmission
Silver
Remote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
( O% r3 F; y) h" [- zFour additional tires with rims
# i" D! j; L; q) S+ d- M/ JAir Conditioning
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Tire pressure monitor system
/ c0 F  Q. J! XInformation system
2 e3 |+ D. S9 A6 U' ZCentral control locks,doors,windows
# Z; S% P( S" E2 P) A* {8 }Power locks
2 w3 c5 Z" i3 R! T. L, _Power mirrors
Power doors
3 O$ ?% h6 ^( z1 I5 h0 m& mPower windows
Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
Airbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
Airbag: side
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Fog lights
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**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
$ ^7 n4 V+ \9 h* ^Cash only please :)
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兰君子

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SALE A CAR

8 h% C9 E- L0 G3 P; ODue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

* r+ ?; v' m  z/ E$ J9 OIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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$ H2 x; M1 p& r0 W1 J6 g; w: N: pIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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5 J, a, k, e7 i! W- I4 S- xBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
( T0 B  o1 {, l& B7 |6 e这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
0 O, Q" C3 p* m5 X  e) e1 iSALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

7 `* ~. x! W4 eFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
" b/ M% E. `2 {, wYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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2 g6 }3 B+ A  ^* h8 NLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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7 u4 @7 C4 I# ?' D. Z"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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1 \5 h; a+ _1 FThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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. f2 d) o# k- B, j- K+ U- ~, iSorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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