SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
Automatic transmission
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6 z( C* r0 s  fRemote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
" ?6 I+ o' b: v6 tAir Conditioning
ABS Operation
" m$ X  S3 i  B: Z8 LTire pressure monitor system
) d0 a  K, K( G2 v% E! zInformation system
: T- L. x# @: T! l& aCentral control locks,doors,windows
+ X1 c: B) M! c, E; pPower locks
4 W& ~+ F$ c. X, W* OPower mirrors
Power doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
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( }4 r7 d$ [. C9 N% UAirbag: driver
7 n/ g: ~. c# }9 k, P, \6 wAirbag: passenger
Airbag: side
Alarm
Fog lights
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**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
. Q1 A. V8 ~* A. j6 U) jIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

+ w7 ]" V, F) F3 z! ]0 R  D# hPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
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Cash only please :)
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兰君子

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6 Y* j, |% X+ ^% ODue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
7 h1 i5 j( W7 h( j% l IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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- M. |3 ?( Z* }. \4 Y- dDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

+ E- {+ l; n& g. k这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
& R+ A* R7 [5 @" c+ X. y这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

3 I# P) S9 W; G. b9 ]. \; _  gFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
6 w% c7 r3 T6 q* K8 d' aYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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+ u" ]* _, ?* {1 w2 j, e: h$ }Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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" s# u. @/ f& A% VThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.

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