SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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0 [! Y+ p9 C: J6 ^0 C4 e% VAutomatic transmission
Silver
2 Z, j" l' @! X8 y7 \& NRemote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
  M# T8 t2 m/ @1 K' ]" O4 O$ v, k) ]Four additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
ABS Operation
# p$ L0 S# s4 l3 O  ]6 |; fTire pressure monitor system
) i% A6 ]! y% W: DInformation system
Central control locks,doors,windows
9 Y. ^) v0 E8 S( S7 L/ l( _Power locks
Power mirrors
1 i' m2 n6 a( e, a: h) j9 f/ uPower doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
. [7 S9 y/ k. ]# n2 S$ P- u! xBluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
Airbag: driver
* |) N5 Y( @& T/ k) q/ [% \, iAirbag: passenger
Airbag: side
Alarm
Fog lights

**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
, c- {1 a" V" _5 QIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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5 ^9 E  @& C* R* ]; vPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
3 }& W. o% I+ S$ w6 I& oPick up on March 18-22.
( _* |  p3 n4 x5 LCash only please :)

兰君子

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SALE A CAR
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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) P' D% n, x. T7 C0 N5 VIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

4 T7 u) R( ^/ A7 Q* J这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

- H& [3 ~1 T, ^By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
1 n& l0 j# U# E; D8 d8 C2 P5 o这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

" o" u% O: E2 u9 ?7 ~哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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  P' {8 k) z- Y6 g0 z  @* ODue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

5 K+ B: N: M3 R$ B; o: w. {Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
. K$ r' p$ T/ [* B2 g, `Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
3 Z' \+ }  y, G5 ]6 g' B: rYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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/ G+ t8 o! p. V, P6 m, `0 M"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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; E+ y0 O; k: V7 X9 X4 WThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

2 \8 P( \8 Q! h7 X0 q; e/ bSorry to give you "HARSH" again.

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