SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
* e7 B0 J9 I6 a" \' NAutomatic transmission
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) v- {3 v, \7 v- JRemote starter and heat blocker
3 _% _& C4 u) S% JTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
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Information system
Central control locks,doors,windows
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2 k  W8 z1 D* O4 H" m$ oPower mirrors
Power doors
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Child safety locks
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4 l% r9 |! H- [* |6 VBluetooth hands-free operation
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Airbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
  c, P7 O' Y9 |$ w& eAirbag: side
Alarm
Fog lights

$ ?1 ^5 E% M  ~, c7 A# G7 b( [; l**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
2 K; s8 C1 c  e/ [- @, BIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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/ }* w1 Y" S9 R: X1 pPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)

兰君子

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1 r: `- g9 a: t8 n6 Y; ?" ?Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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6 ~3 Y2 }5 x3 W& Q/ R! h& Q3 w" YIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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; P) C2 M9 K3 X/ i* PDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
' q6 k! L; J2 @5 Q这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

9 A+ u0 \8 |" s, Z哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

& H& x) U! h! F+ eFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
0 V, r+ A* y+ N; B5 gThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
! |. A9 X7 t  M) ?4 B7 A( ?You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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. q3 J) B1 c( J7 T) s6 K4 E/ fLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

3 u  k) v! L6 J1 j"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

  A2 a% m# y  T# j# e7 _There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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7 [, f8 U$ F4 N  ^Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.

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