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发表于 2015-2-28 15:35 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! * [; I1 c; `, C- `; G! B
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
0 f9 e( f  B, v4 _" ?Automatic transmission; Y+ P, x/ L$ R: p6 z* g  h, m( `+ R
Silver
0 i4 R* a+ t4 q4 dRemote starter and heat blocker8 v7 B2 c  \0 q# Y4 t1 X5 r
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry( x/ z4 e8 n0 i; ]+ u- A: `+ L
Four additional tires with rims
/ t* a; V  Y# bAir Conditioning 7 T- a2 E; S" k* i+ \& B7 X* P+ B
ABS Operation
2 y" |1 j/ z7 aTire pressure monitor system% ^  v$ o* T+ \1 D
Information system8 l6 d+ Q8 X8 T: c+ m1 o
Central control locks,doors,windows
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Power mirrors
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Child safety locks* r( M3 ]- r6 c! S& F$ `+ s; x2 U
Rear window defroster - a; M& i/ l, Q' O" Z8 ^  u
Bluetooth hands-free operation
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Airbag: driver ; U5 r. w: }4 |: F0 E; w
Airbag: passenger 5 E/ c: b8 p7 `) p. N8 s
Airbag: side + [/ E# \3 q4 d: {: {. W
Alarm
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: a, E5 v; j/ B) M' h( N3 W**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
0 k4 |/ a- H. x- _5 w# {0 V, OIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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2 W. [, m& F% h2 E" aPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca! a1 o) h/ H0 D- W6 ?* j, _; Q
Pick up on March 18-22. # m& K0 k( I' P- A7 m# n
Cash only please :)
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发表于 2015-3-1 02:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 兰君子 于 2015-3-1 02:16 编辑 8 f, t! B; a* t% f

5 z. P% C7 r' T5 OSALE A CAR  M/ ~$ {( b9 B7 P6 K, s# c

& ~# p7 `$ ^. b. R: F0 o( vDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR5 m/ N- b  }# ]# v
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING 8 l) q/ A7 Z( f
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发表于 2015-3-1 11:59 | 显示全部楼层
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发表于 2015-3-1 23:30 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
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发表于 2015-3-2 09:30 | 显示全部楼层
兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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1 o1 i& a$ }5 z" w1 U4 ]% O$ jDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

- |* A4 a; u" `- h  X这就叫骚摊子的,可以跟摊主干一场
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 楼主| 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50 | 显示全部楼层
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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4 g/ C6 w' v( U$ E: Y! jBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)
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发表于 2015-3-2 11:26 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
9 n' G. l5 _+ d! A" X: J这就叫骚摊子的,可以跟摊主干一场

( a. i* B- n4 F: S哈哈,真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了
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发表于 2015-3-2 12:15 | 显示全部楼层
那么问题来了,现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了
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发表于 2015-3-3 11:02 | 显示全部楼层
兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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/ F2 W5 M" O  ZDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...
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Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.
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发表于 2015-3-15 09:40 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 兰君子 于 2015-3-15 10:05 编辑 . K% t7 \2 n8 R2 B( Y3 _
zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
9 A8 ]+ `! p" j* S! \Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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1 m! ?2 I1 |4 SSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
: }7 h* u2 X5 l; R$ N4 CYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording./ H7 y& Q9 D' \. B
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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- Z' t! R8 n% C"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time./ I! s. p0 R+ j

) {2 a! t( u1 a8 ?Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.0 n# q0 ]+ L- ^" J! I& V
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