SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
/ f% h5 r* ]: T3 X* DAutomatic transmission
Silver
Remote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
. s( O- O  `- a6 ^Four additional tires with rims
. v3 z( F2 D1 ~( b6 w0 KAir Conditioning
/ Q; u$ G- x& v: H8 D$ P/ F8 PABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
/ c  j* O3 v  X- I( k& YInformation system
, q, B) p* P: C; T3 e4 a" u7 B, ?7 eCentral control locks,doors,windows
2 e8 ~6 |9 S" M. T9 ?9 w! S* M% S: r& DPower locks
Power mirrors
Power doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
, M7 f0 i& ^  x5 G# G# t4 V3 X  c1 _+ cRear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
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Airbag: driver
# O8 y  p" T4 L  y) l# pAirbag: passenger
Airbag: side
8 I0 y; Y- O' _Alarm
/ H/ d" `3 {7 K! G- p% w/ d2 W. v6 ]Fog lights
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, f3 K" O# r  z4 \# W7 q**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
( n$ }# j; d* ~0 X4 }  wIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

, A. u, r$ G% P4 D9 CPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
0 I. c. p9 n. gPick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)
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兰君子

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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

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IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

* p  Z3 B/ u. h5 c这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
- p6 M. ?& q, z. [这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

! g; K5 e6 r( `哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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4 N4 a, h1 ^: r% EDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
% C. T5 |9 Q/ ?/ `Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
; C: V9 p, G  _You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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  o  t0 T$ S# `, e4 ALast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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# I( t* H* _$ b* i& a3 QThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.

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