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发表于 2015-2-28 15:35 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! 7 m; @" o1 k8 W6 `5 {2 X# R1 H

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Automatic transmission* W) F5 C/ F- X( L
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Remote starter and heat blocker
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Four additional tires with rims; c! |. `: }3 k2 P/ u7 l
Air Conditioning
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6 A. |# I7 c$ H5 Q  ^+ j% [: S. qTire pressure monitor system
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Central control locks,doors,windows+ Q. b" l! D6 e6 K9 e8 |" J
Power locks 1 Q. g" m+ G. b& {
Power mirrors
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Child safety locks: X; {0 Y6 x5 N0 _
Rear window defroster
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Airbag: passenger - I+ N& x. r2 \+ z
Airbag: side 6 O" H4 t) C5 B  B9 ~3 y
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Fog lights
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, {3 q! K7 K/ Y5 p+ R* D**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
6 V+ j0 v4 a7 B- s3 _If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.9 u# c; S' }6 K' d
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Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
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Cash only please :)
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发表于 2015-3-1 02:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 兰君子 于 2015-3-1 02:16 编辑
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9 _3 w  `/ \( _4 o: w+ e' UDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! . 8 p2 i2 g1 o: W, W+ Z5 u
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If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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0 k2 e7 d' p; `% {3 I9 ]7 Z7 {, `IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR9 ?4 f) l, S! H& w
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING $ b! i: O9 {; w" F% K
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发表于 2015-3-1 11:59 | 显示全部楼层
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发表于 2015-3-1 23:30 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
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发表于 2015-3-2 09:30 | 显示全部楼层
兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...
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这就叫骚摊子的,可以跟摊主干一场
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 楼主| 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50 | 显示全部楼层
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."5 |0 @4 ^5 _0 a% g! x
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By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)
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发表于 2015-3-2 11:26 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30# p6 l) h' B! i& N6 x' z2 i5 _/ Q
这就叫骚摊子的,可以跟摊主干一场

. |4 v, u" _: z2 j4 @+ f哈哈,真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了
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发表于 2015-3-2 12:15 | 显示全部楼层
那么问题来了,现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了
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发表于 2015-3-3 11:02 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
2 d% P  d8 W2 GSALE A CAR
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% e" {4 o7 M! B. t5 wDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...
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Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.
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发表于 2015-3-15 09:40 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 兰君子 于 2015-3-15 10:05 编辑 ( w4 T& X! H& c" U
zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
: B0 M  L  K% h% s. D  HThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...
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8 m- h3 ?' S' O$ K- n0 fSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
3 R  }. S/ R" E6 c9 `( VYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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2 i3 o7 e2 _% f& f, LThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.! g, U& @) R  K$ b: Z7 |
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Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.5 C9 O$ {8 w! I1 `- C* Y0 @

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