SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
0 E  `, l1 U7 S' G3 P: c; [Automatic transmission
/ Q8 `9 ?& A# d4 hSilver
/ i  l5 ?. z0 H: m4 LRemote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
- {1 y1 G* j) ?9 X* q) ^Four additional tires with rims
7 r, K! h: o9 h+ o2 XAir Conditioning
% }! _- n; ~" I, c$ j1 ]& U8 M& nABS Operation
0 }. Y+ r6 H8 H! k" wTire pressure monitor system
( F' S1 L! S9 u7 |: C2 wInformation system
% I  N' Y# [( ^7 ~' }. BCentral control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
$ k+ ^+ A% y* z5 {' RPower mirrors
' Z; e4 n* y9 h7 i+ |' I. G# GPower doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
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Airbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
; I4 X: K/ `8 e# r! ~3 `Airbag: side
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Fog lights

9 P3 B& e: v% C* ]**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
" f' u3 y% ?) a7 ^) ?, JIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
7 h( a8 h& c1 o9 ~9 tPick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)

兰君子

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6 s& j9 E7 ^" L' X* R0 eSALE A CAR

: m$ d( z6 @. p3 p; f( C* E% cDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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  Q: X+ L" n' W4 y: MIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
% G; @: h# W$ M# C+ D IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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9 K2 y! g' s8 A& vBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
9 h, A$ r# \6 W! S: q这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

" s; {3 Z5 f0 n$ N" g哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
9 P8 y. w; y9 d. ?/ O( @SALE A CAR

3 S1 L; g3 C8 d2 \; O0 z' wDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
+ m$ y; s. i/ N* j7 u- \2 G$ uThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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2 u3 N; e& v8 }6 O* z7 h& \Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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9 w1 ]8 Z7 d# ]! `- h+ @9 X# Q"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

: l, p( n; ?! K0 ^: u# `There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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