SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

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& \" t+ c4 [3 _( iAutomatic transmission
Silver
Remote starter and heat blocker
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Four additional tires with rims
6 V9 x) H0 _# }Air Conditioning
( Z+ ~/ l( w; j$ s, D2 w; ~ABS Operation
8 g$ n4 b' s5 o/ {( rTire pressure monitor system
! C, \! R( x( D) V. l+ |Information system
Central control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
/ x- d; g- {' ^$ t4 c' FPower mirrors
% ^0 i: R, N4 X6 k) Q* rPower doors
Power windows
" y! I- v; D: S1 c' _/ g+ RChild safety locks
. Q! R0 v* n" I) K, cRear window defroster
) F& d4 \2 U7 `" k0 pBluetooth hands-free operation
7 j* [3 i, x/ m8 _/ VRadio
Airbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
! ]& r/ _3 ~  Q+ V2 C1 Q4 HAirbag: side
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Fog lights

' k0 \! ~: \6 ?4 c; E8 G# O**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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5 k" Z8 b" a0 \8 M; q" Z# aPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
( Z$ E  E4 N( |; C* e6 v& W2 @Cash only please :)

兰君子

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SALE A CAR
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. ~  r' E5 N1 U- Z- MDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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, a9 q) X2 a/ j- d9 jIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
( S" G4 i* g4 n0 g! U IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

; p( A3 X7 M: F& E" [1 t这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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) \; k1 p% _5 B8 l" |8 `By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

  Y! i( ^9 |" |4 |9 c7 u哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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0 H( R) l; |1 O+ Y! Q/ VDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

8 T( a  Z* w$ Z) mFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
6 y: G4 u& w. `6 f% S) ZThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
6 E) h4 f3 X4 d0 K/ G, rYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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- u. Z* n' o+ x) v$ Q2 KLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

  J8 f5 W! [3 d4 J  u& a# [0 p"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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* r. J( h: ]" \Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.