SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

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' v4 X" c+ t( z; `: B+ v1 WAutomatic transmission
Silver
# G1 P  c9 H5 D( ^. nRemote starter and heat blocker
8 r  m2 C( P1 w5 ~" ITwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
5 X. V: Y, D  dFour additional tires with rims
7 f  u5 S+ Q; v5 n1 `0 nAir Conditioning
ABS Operation
1 ]& c1 _5 y) VTire pressure monitor system
. R8 q% l; s( b, u$ a  \- h+ KInformation system
0 w$ ^8 m+ w/ s0 F+ b4 L+ aCentral control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
/ }! O; |* P4 W( k: Z4 mPower mirrors
Power doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
Airbag: driver
3 I; r3 a, I4 y+ C3 i. DAirbag: passenger
Airbag: side
( ]# ^( w8 _5 K/ e3 w" C, iAlarm
Fog lights

# v4 P$ o9 p- Z$ v**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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' q, [. n) h7 J9 L! ]& _0 ^9 n; DPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
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Cash only please :)
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兰君子

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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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9 ~4 ?9 g# v! e6 r7 [1 ZDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

* F% W- n8 r& \$ z6 k1 ^( \这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

3 P& L5 L1 k3 ~2 t* T2 K哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
5 T" f7 P$ n/ T3 C0 r  R) FSALE A CAR
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6 f" h) n, `5 k6 T( ?+ E4 fDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

. H" j$ i; a% vFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
: Y2 `4 @3 {+ O5 _You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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( J$ Y) p  L5 zThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

! T3 |6 n* I& L0 C) r# d( lSorry to give you "HARSH" again.