SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
0 t, N  o; x$ u# |$ C" @8 v/ ZAutomatic transmission
6 j, x3 f% I! G$ f+ y) pSilver
2 y) Q! S2 a" jRemote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
3 f- Q2 N+ z2 {+ bFour additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
ABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
: N9 {/ [' B  O  m0 IInformation system
Central control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
Power mirrors
Power doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
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Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
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Airbag: passenger
Airbag: side
2 }" O& ?# h3 zAlarm
Fog lights
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**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
8 `" t6 i" s* C& GIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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5 R" d) B7 G. E- \* K; vPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)
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兰君子

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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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% B7 P; i% x1 Y- B3 xIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

! d! `2 L2 w1 w+ p" `6 W  w+ I( tIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
: k7 @% w) E, {( w# ~1 S1 m7 i0 R8 B IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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, |8 f) Q. q! D这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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) g8 P* S# D+ Q7 O) HBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
, M% d2 q: Z7 A0 P这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
0 v* |, V; E' S# l+ r5 hThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
9 D8 G$ ~) k- O8 d: Z# e: ]2 @You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

0 `- J7 G+ O, c7 h7 |) iThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

/ ?+ w7 n9 j1 C2 A/ WSorry to give you "HARSH" again.

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