SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

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) D4 p# x; V/ P) n) A% l* m& KAutomatic transmission
Silver
5 B8 X7 Z6 x* zRemote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
0 F) a) O, o/ b" Q  U4 mAir Conditioning
8 P2 K1 i$ L$ M- aABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
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! {! I9 P4 b% b2 X, H* R2 UCentral control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
# ?+ M2 y/ O8 r7 z; `: lPower mirrors
. i& y& B. k) W. |Power doors
) B. r: ~, ^6 P, B9 n) tPower windows
( n  Q$ G' k) w1 \3 a' sChild safety locks
5 p/ c9 X# Q& }/ E  u* M4 nRear window defroster
1 V# l0 k4 J9 _1 \Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
6 J+ ~- }, D8 N3 ~1 M9 yAirbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
Airbag: side
Alarm
( l3 M5 a6 s4 }4 UFog lights
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! U) n. j* b3 b& Z**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

( u" Y6 \5 \0 B6 x3 y+ D5 r' YPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)

兰君子

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SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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; a5 a6 k: O6 F. u6 h) s6 ZIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

+ N( D5 ~+ Z; {IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
: h8 V- D  L1 }- Q3 t IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

7 h6 J. w3 r) X4 UBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

$ q2 g+ ^/ M: C3 r/ c哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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8 L) H/ I* P, KDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
2 p! A9 i$ B$ G, R7 }% M# _Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

- {: [( a8 }7 c6 _2 [0 ~! LSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
# e% N$ j) n# iYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.

6 h4 Y3 f6 j% q4 U, sLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

1 q1 d( s$ }4 d" w$ aSorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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