SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
Automatic transmission
Silver
Remote starter and heat blocker
2 V9 H2 i9 s+ v4 C* S' ETwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
& Q9 ?  K9 w6 s7 L% D( G  dFour additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
ABS Operation
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Information system
Central control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
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. Y  E8 q7 b3 m% [! |Power doors
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Rear window defroster
8 z: P  r1 t0 x( k/ p5 K; Q7 UBluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
' {2 H( C# O! p" |Airbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
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9 `3 }7 t- O. @5 g# X6 cFog lights
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; y8 E. p5 q; E+ a2 _/ b**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
- I8 H+ _  [$ R) _- i" \  PIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
) W. q6 Z' u4 p9 ~Cash only please :)

兰君子

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, Y& Q$ n, k3 X7 m) c& `Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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! v! y( N2 |8 k4 A; uIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
) [2 g/ {* B+ E- t) Q, M. z7 ^ IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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9 ?' m  b  T0 ~, u: ~; eDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

) }' f; M/ t! |, ?" j$ r: ]这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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  ]& @. j7 Z5 pBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

  a6 P* v/ h6 n哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

! r+ E, e" ]+ t; N( kFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
$ ~7 o( f* C$ i1 G* D/ gThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
' f+ a& A7 ^8 Z1 ~You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

2 `7 `  @" N+ N$ q3 O' j- X0 ?! @"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

4 w# r9 Z- o9 o, Y5 y# O+ I# NSorry to give you "HARSH" again.

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