SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

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Automatic transmission
Silver
Remote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
+ [" W8 Y- L' k; U: ~1 e/ ]' FAir Conditioning
ABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
Central control locks,doors,windows
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Power mirrors
Power doors
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Child safety locks
; @4 g9 ^# X" ]2 n' o/ u1 CRear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
+ w- V& s9 r! \; }Airbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
Airbag: side
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Fog lights
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**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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/ l! J7 ~0 q7 O# M( a2 J$ u- ?5 APlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
, ^* j% y# o! ~$ N2 qPick up on March 18-22.
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兰君子

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SALE A CAR
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. t; i6 ^$ T' X( u% @  \& ]/ R. `Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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) e! f9 T' G2 ^; l$ ]+ O- |If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

, Z  F2 q) Z  X6 ^IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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3 e. w- ~" U$ J3 ]; fDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

3 i! p/ U, b5 \# m* }; ?这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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, t  w. |$ `( ?By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
) }8 }2 ?; s5 H1 N; a这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

( _+ _4 Q6 E. x* T8 G  eDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
! V# u  e) l( O$ P2 j- v" P2 aThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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6 t- @- b3 v8 KSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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6 f% p4 r! H$ F3 [6 LSorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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