SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

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Automatic transmission
5 P% a1 A) X+ p4 ySilver
Remote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
, y  s  l5 V' Q% q0 H3 kFour additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
: X6 S* A. q9 H8 T( }9 _ABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
Central control locks,doors,windows
' I' \0 l3 S3 N& {) }+ L+ H* _1 n2 S: yPower locks
Power mirrors
8 |3 h$ `( f% |: r( q0 w  ^. H. }2 @Power doors
Power windows
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Rear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
7 k% J" `) c( N! nRadio
$ n2 h1 }8 L& v0 [( [& ?$ h5 bAirbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
5 x& x/ @6 @$ S. ~Airbag: side
3 k5 m# _9 F! MAlarm
Fog lights

**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

9 C/ b- c# Q, y' y3 U( pPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
+ {$ K  A4 p8 {. P# ^7 DPick up on March 18-22.
6 G0 Y" A! t  u: m* F9 Y* rCash only please :)

兰君子

SALE A CAR

$ f( F9 c& Q: n& eDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

) T$ A9 j8 A0 u/ b9 OIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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9 }7 j- ?9 p3 T, c' J6 PDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

: D* ?: }1 V: i5 q( Y4 z这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

7 k. Y7 ^$ V$ Z  W. s1 UBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

1 b- T3 s! E" VSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
5 u0 b! I0 v9 @, t) C3 OYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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0 `! G6 Q0 s% |7 y, L9 G0 bThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.

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