SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
' @' F) V( H# b/ b1 OAutomatic transmission
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+ e# ~- V5 A  ^" b  ~Remote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
5 _1 F  \# w8 PFour additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
6 \& U' _9 O. ^) j( Y7 i0 dABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
. @6 ~" k* V' HCentral control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
Power mirrors
: }8 ~% x& m3 s5 o+ L: RPower doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
( O$ U& c7 V! i  uRear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
' S& ~+ q; A6 M6 t, IAirbag: driver
0 S4 g, M3 G4 }4 q  z0 wAirbag: passenger
Airbag: side
! n; O: n) c% r$ L1 {, mAlarm
Fog lights

! P! V: E" T2 v**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
& c  S# s) E! H) ?  U2 WIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

% Q7 ^- [. X3 z% Q# r! r' cPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
9 |2 A; x+ X/ G; H+ p9 K. |! V8 KPick up on March 18-22.
9 p" L' x5 U2 l0 v3 ZCash only please :)
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兰君子

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' ~! Y" z& m* g* y3 uDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

9 X8 u% y, \; `" gIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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8 `! C: {$ L) s* |IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
$ L+ X* K' {- G6 |" H1 WSALE A CAR
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9 b  {# k. p. D1 U; g9 v# p) @Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

) J) L  R& a# d+ u4 W这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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( H' r/ l) g# z- Z: mBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

" ]: {2 R, B6 E9 E9 o哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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# K9 i' @6 t/ |0 Z# m6 ZDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

5 P) E( [$ |: {' bFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
/ ^1 W* {7 a8 b% |7 Q% c* }Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
9 y6 S$ t& c! @: {/ e) p- @You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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- g& |/ S( c+ ?2 U- O/ H4 Z$ qLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

7 j+ S6 h, o6 n0 k$ _  ?: m"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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. y4 n4 Q4 R) m) j$ ~5 ~+ r- b# }& WThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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3 i" _" r; N# n1 @, CSorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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