SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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0 J- d, ~- J' w7 F8 W; g9 U: vAutomatic transmission
$ c; K8 e( R! T) `; tSilver
% ^8 z- m- d$ o% k0 N/ j; eRemote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
0 |5 J% t' `" g; n' e7 bFour additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
ABS Operation
' S! p' {, S# X. H$ |. [$ ATire pressure monitor system
! j4 x: c3 A/ i% K% TInformation system
Central control locks,doors,windows
) ?* {! c2 }' u8 P* D8 @6 N2 q- @: jPower locks
" Y9 `8 }) E: n9 L& S! @0 _Power mirrors
Power doors
Power windows
- Y, n  `6 r& K6 F( x& [8 v2 S$ ?Child safety locks
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Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
0 L8 \5 n$ d0 C/ bAirbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
3 {- r( ?# v4 f9 S; HAirbag: side
* G' B! ~5 ?3 s/ Y6 x" hAlarm
Fog lights

( ]8 `# i6 c+ {$ M2 u$ I2 a**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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- ?+ V3 x% H. R$ ^* p0 _Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)
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兰君子

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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
% n* T5 H# v3 \' a IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
8 I, A( o: ^( s9 N, R' E这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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" [; Z/ M2 \: ?* c" t+ WDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

7 y& d( m. {/ b5 TFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
. s( q+ \# ?6 D1 xThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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& c0 e( o% L% HSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.

  Y5 y1 A6 q; A# u! Y! MLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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! X7 T& s0 I  @2 U"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.