SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

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Automatic transmission
Silver
Remote starter and heat blocker
6 S& T% S7 x6 d: a. D; P7 d* [Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
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6 A. |# I7 c$ H5 Q  ^+ j% [: S. qTire pressure monitor system
3 r( L6 `' b  |" _: _8 sInformation system
Central control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
Power mirrors
  o' v: X  \) PPower doors
2 v# O9 ]2 u' C8 k) SPower windows
Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
' B; h' E' g' a4 r5 y- c0 y, RBluetooth hands-free operation
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) G: c$ }, ~2 M. o" C% BAirbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
Airbag: side
Alarm
Fog lights
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, {3 q! K7 K/ Y5 p+ R* D**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
6 V+ j0 v4 a7 B- s3 _If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
: V, T, g" t5 M% _0 S4 b- rPick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)
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兰君子

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9 _3 w  `/ \( _4 o: w+ e' UDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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0 k2 e7 d' p; `% {3 I9 ]7 Z7 {, `IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

. |4 v, u" _: z2 j4 @+ f哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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% e" {4 o7 M! B. t5 wDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
: B0 M  L  K% h% s. D  HThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

8 m- h3 ?' S' O$ K- n0 fSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
3 R  }. S/ R" E6 c9 `( VYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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2 i3 o7 e2 _% f& f, LThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.

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