SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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5 ]' J( P3 F* h: Y7 B5 m8 s) zAutomatic transmission
Silver
, Z$ s! w" j4 k9 M3 LRemote starter and heat blocker
, V+ _2 K- H' H3 o" o, X: n# E* d0 XTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
ABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
. L) K6 g6 V8 i6 N9 U) TCentral control locks,doors,windows
' ]+ U  z) `7 u0 k  kPower locks
' Y$ P" @3 C! {- }$ {' ePower mirrors
+ g1 {' H/ W0 }4 l1 E' p* {Power doors
Power windows
2 C. q. o1 I' M3 [/ jChild safety locks
, g. n& m* G: a) T) v7 tRear window defroster
; F% e2 U9 w: A: M. t" o7 Z& M, NBluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
( m6 e7 F3 ?$ B# L2 m) GAirbag: driver
! f& u, |: j" S) M$ }; O- H# UAirbag: passenger
Airbag: side
( i& O1 }8 v. |3 mAlarm
Fog lights

**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
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Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
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兰君子

SALE A CAR
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+ T7 D# J5 f; Y/ V: R' P+ J1 |Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

  C' J% [: n1 c2 o. YIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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2 s, l+ j+ [; ?2 YBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
: G- k/ S3 o, T0 f1 Z: p" p这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

2 {+ z! r( o$ f7 L& L5 yFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

8 }; p* d& O' p& ^. OSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
7 O4 K5 w' V' O  _" Y8 N9 WYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

( N$ F: W3 v' A5 p( I& nThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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