SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

VEICHLE OPTIONS:
5 m. ^- `) b$ A$ Q$ ~Automatic transmission
Silver
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Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
5 A; p2 L5 W) {5 i9 RAir Conditioning
ABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
8 o1 e9 T9 B' e8 o- f, p. CInformation system
5 O8 Y$ i0 ]7 j# U! f1 h. GCentral control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
$ V2 V$ t5 c' P7 MPower mirrors
5 l4 f! J3 w5 v/ M  \0 o5 q- [Power doors
8 Q$ w4 f* o& Y& E2 GPower windows
Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
8 ^# Z! D& w7 A1 [Bluetooth hands-free operation
2 x* C3 u& E+ {% m8 |Radio
Airbag: driver
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6 }! j2 i/ {$ V% {Airbag: side
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3 r1 q3 T0 R/ x+ V: KFog lights

5 T5 Z/ Q& _( w: K2 M' K**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
$ b3 H1 u% N: lCash only please :)

兰君子

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" Q, _% v$ m3 w1 f) PDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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3 ~# z6 y9 g( c+ B& h' @If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
* C  ~3 q! }* G3 F IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

4 a8 ^. N- U8 o+ sBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
7 m, G) T# {% R, P. T这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

; J5 @  D- N3 B& p) cFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
) Y. ~& s3 r* ?% B% bThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

, b+ L% i% s9 J5 ~, g/ BSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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7 P) F( J( {, H0 y. lLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

* C6 a& K  i+ J4 ?$ a* c"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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