翁美女写给老杨的情书,翻译惊人 ZT

海鸥飞处

你是老杨的话，你会怎么回？翁不愧为才女，英文情书写的如此煽情，就是钟馗看了也能变小生了.不知道是哪位大仙翻译的，把英文翻译成如此水平也是不容易了。赞
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Cold here, icy cold there. You belong to neither, leaves have
5 U, Q6 {- E9 Q+ l, U$ Hwithered.Your face is pale and blue, a tearful smile. Something in your
eyes,whispers words of last good-bye. My heart sinks down, tears surge
8 A  R) |: A' S7 Pout.
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此处冷，彼处更冷。枯叶凋零，君属何人。君面惨淡忧郁，含泪而笑。君热泪盈
眶，喃喃自语，难言再见。妾心沉落，泪涌似涛。

4 Y) K6 Y/ t% ]& jHot summer. Cheerful Cocktail. You took my hand. We fled into another
8 Y5 n; e- F; U/ v3 p3 nworld. You sat by my side, long hair tied behind, cool and killing.
: ]& ]/ P6 d( N9 \" q' ISmile floating on the lemonade, soft and smooth. How I was? amazed. Your
) \  b" C+ d3 K  t3 \7 C4 Xface looked like the cover of the magazine. My head spin. Youled my
hand, danced along the crazy theme.
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. x/ ~4 S) Y% m' J5 i酷夏。仍忆鸡尾酒会。君执妾手，共享二人世界。君坐妾之侧，长发束于脑后，英
3 h3 T) W: {) `- b; w8 L姿勃发。笑容荡漾。妾讶君面尤类杂志封面。旋转，君执妾手，疯狂舞曲。

2 Q$ n# m6 _  L1 OLight vied with wine, elegance mixed with fragrance, laughing covered by
greetings, the crowed was busy at handshaking. You stood there, eyes on
me. I trembled at the sparkles, brighter than the light. A　masterpiece
% H, H2 L1 n8 L  \: i1 {from God, I felt dizzy. We were not near, yet we were together.

" J7 f  A' N7 n& h. g- f0 v灯酒相辉，芳雅相应，祝辞笑声此起彼伏，芸芸皆劳碌于握手。君站立一旁，美目
  _; V. r  X2 T8 q% n探妾。妾莹灯下颤颤而立。此必上帝之杰作，使晕眩。虽妾与君相隔甚远,然心相
近。

0 V) a6 \$ `, g4 yDays ended. You said, you would wait for me at th e Alps side. We would
ski against snowflakes dancing in the sky. I gave no answer but a
good-bye to accompany your flight. Gone was the plane, I suddenly tasted
my pain. I knew I had been silly and stupid, you were in my heart, I
1 ^3 m1 a* }5 W5 Eshouldn’t have hidden in the dark. I tried to forget your
disappointment. I made believe sometime someday, I would tell you, I
feel all the same.
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4 l! a: s! W. K* D: ?往日已去。君云君将于阿尔卑斯山畔待妾，滑雪于雪花飞舞之天空下。妾欲说还
  c8 L5 ]7 s9 o" I9 A3 E休，但嘱祝福。飞机渐逝，妾心将苦。妾深知妾之愚蠹，君已窃妾心，妾当不可漠
然
  Z0 }9 \5 I; j0 s( ~于暗中彷徨。妾尝试忘君之失，然无可善终。妾信某日某时，妾将告君妾心永驻。
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' H7 G, \- M5 O5 o! B$ P# wMy thought struggled at confessing, somehow hesitation ended in
flinching. I continued my role of a fool, clinched to my maiden pride,
5 V9 n' W8 Z7 k& h9 Myet secretly indulged in your promise of the white land -- snow
7 i; d# r+ E  r. z' B' c0 ameasuring down to us, in your arms I am lifted up. The chiming of
Christmas bell!

' P) a; O, `8 V- N& m妾于忏悔中挣扎，不时退缩，犹豫。妾愚于处子之婚，然潜纵于君之诺。白雪皑
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The bell died in the patter of rain, from hell came the laughing of
Satan at my brain. Tearful smile, swallowed by the darkness. How could I
  o9 R. b; F5 J4 l3 D! p9 Gtrace your hair to wipe your tears? My hands reached out, catching
9 R  n3 E8 o( Xnothing but a raindrop, on a leaf that had withered.
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钟声忽止于急雨，乃听撒旦之笑声。含泪微笑，黑暗相伴。妾欲寻君之发擦君之泪
- A5 @& d: s+ W7 o3 o1 V. ]' B而不可。妾伸手欲触，无他，但枯叶一雨滴耳。
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2 e2 Z8 \  }: rSnowflakes have melted into water, we are no more together.
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三思

有人问过洋人吗？这段英文咋样？

猪刀小试

刚问过俺同事，说翻译得甚好。long hair tied behind, cool and killing，但老外惟一不理解这句，他问俺80多岁的中国人都有那么长的头发吗？俺无言以对～

三思

原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-7 11:46 发表
4 T8 I9 H& C# L  R7 H: D刚问过俺同事，说翻译得甚好。long hair tied behind, cool and killing，但老外惟一不理解这句，他问俺80多岁的中国人都有那么长的头发吗？俺无言以对～

& I6 W% |5 n5 E4 c你们同事怎么能看出翻译好坏来？

jeremy

翁氏果然不凡。译者更是大材小用，即使胡适再生也不过如此。建议老杨娶(请)来当版主正合适。

猪刀小试

原帖由 三思 于 2007-5-7 11:49 发表
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6 V7 w5 w- I+ U; I4 d. \0 ?你们同事怎么能看出翻译好坏来？

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: n6 }) k* |' c: Y- x: u6 s俺直接把英文提炼，打印出来给老外，她们一见就挑大拇指～

辣椒

你又知道是人家的情书！

APPLE66

为什么要翻译成妾啊，那么别扭。
不过比奴强点。

无心呢喃

看了这篇情书，偶忍不住的想到了老杨脸上的老年斑。

bigwood

此老杨非彼老杨也！

海鸥飞处

原帖由 bigwood 于 2007-5-8 21:37 发表
此老杨非彼老杨也！

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相信地球人都知道吧~~

! b# W* r' S+ ]' B$ o. Z其实原文标题里写的是“杨振宁”，俺故意改滴~~

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原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-7 13:02 发表
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( y' B  @6 |$ Z0 C俺直接把英文提炼，打印出来给老外，她们一见就挑大拇指～

( K( G8 C3 J/ a: u是不是她们以为你写的情书呢，就算文字晦涩也不在意，挑大拇指，意思是：今天晚上没问题！

猪刀小试

原帖由 三思 于 2007-5-8 23:07 发表
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3 E/ j* N) g5 s3 H' q是不是她们以为你写的情书呢，就算文字晦涩也不在意，挑大拇指，意思是：今天晚上没问题！

) E- n# [# I9 }9 ?0 {& X我们公司有俩女的，那叫一个胖，一个人能占一条机动车道，如果俩人并排走路出门，门口的50st就该塞车了。

海鸥飞处

原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-8 23:23 发表


我们公司有俩女的，那叫一个胖，一个人能占一条机动车道，如果俩人并排走路出门，门口的50st就该塞车了。

猪兄可怜，严重慰问ing~~

听雪安妮

偶就不明白,不过就那么一个糟老头子,这女人怎么会搞得这么煽情.

听雪安妮

翻译得也让人起鸡皮疙瘩,什么君啊妾的,奴性十足.

听雪安妮

怎么着也得男的给女的写情书吧,合着芳龄女子给糟老头子写情书?
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猪刀小试

原帖由 听雪安妮 于 2007-5-9 20:10 发表
怎么着也得男的给女的写情书吧,合着芳龄女子给糟老头子写情书?
晕.

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Justing

初看标题，我还以为翁美女是嗡嗡呢