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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember+ d3 d- X* t+ A4 g7 g* Z

* K0 S8 I) J8 A: a  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to6 K6 T% M1 X+ F, L
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my  O$ k2 R* B% y. F

  p* p' G" v( m5 g+ S5 o4 }* x little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,! J6 T7 @: G% j9 H( i' u; P; Y2 E
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely 2 Q+ Y# E$ e) {. _

( l- b+ @6 O( L- Jtrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since 9 F5 q3 O0 G2 j8 }+ [$ y1 |
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing' W1 Z- _2 t5 w& X0 F! A
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard ( L6 m7 r' L( z/ t$ ~

# `8 c3 {' a& \% Z% xfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.  e% w) P+ M1 s# E5 n
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!2 |7 l( b+ {3 m* Q8 p* |
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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