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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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, W/ l6 q6 p4 ?, B, P     One day I always remember
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( T# b) D& ?% T5 _3 u) X  Q  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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4 c0 F3 b! |/ J% ~, m, \exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to' _1 X$ }2 H; M: ?" U7 O2 K

( w5 ~" t# o3 C/ Y  |6 Z- o) hput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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; `# m7 U9 H- h* [; ^$ u/ `3 A; c every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely 4 }7 x$ V9 B. u) q6 y
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since 2 R2 a0 c9 {4 W, |- O" B7 b  e

0 P9 k  B% p/ w- S7 sthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing7 N/ D( w3 C& B' D* n  ~: a

( i5 i% d/ H/ Z6 q1 g( K# E on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard ) }! h! p7 B  Y! N
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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& d3 b9 c/ `& U, l# `% F6 [: u[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!, D% Y/ Z( E' v: W" e
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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