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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember
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- G" k/ L) A* d4 v9 H* A& g  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was' U6 M1 p2 u9 o, H- t9 P0 j

) b: z, r3 v1 x7 j! v) V! wexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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  g1 w# h3 v2 G7 ~0 Q7 _put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse," J0 I. L0 Y, _, j3 W* ~+ v4 a

/ y6 ]3 T7 o: D+ x every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid8 D/ i* v/ P7 K7 Y+ Q- a
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely ' P. l, k* x$ y9 D
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard ) F* j' x7 Z! |8 k% r/ l4 C

) x1 {( m8 ]6 C+ i! ]1 ~for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my / U: m( T' B' M$ j
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deaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will7 Z; u5 r* j0 C

/ V) z9 q! x. s, m never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.: O7 z) o  Z0 x4 X% |5 P( ^% |. r
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
: a( W0 ]1 F3 U0 g# y' j- r' M5 {we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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