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茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）

, B  \4 V# }8 H- x: S　　　　　One day I always remember

　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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+ l* m9 p$ }; L7 l6 U4 Hexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to

) o1 h6 H- d  `% j6 X. c( gput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,

every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid

; [4 H- P7 O! c: q was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely

trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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+ L$ }& c' B) a! Z4 vthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my

deaest daughter.
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- i0 K( I% S1 `6 l; p5 ^* vAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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% ?5 r) P! U; I1 o# {% w# g never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.

: Q0 ^: S3 z' h8 W1 y( s+ \5 A: V[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！