作文竞赛第一贴！！

茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）

　　　　　One day I always remember
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, D6 a4 t- q2 S2 O2 b　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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" ~( o6 a- O: U! _3 l, |0 nexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to

7 A( o9 _) U% _. lput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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' l$ i- m! A6 Q' J/ O, P! r little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,

every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid

was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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2 {) l5 ]7 Y. R# G on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard

for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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  Q8 o4 r# I6 @) G3 v3 L+ Xdeaest daughter.

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, b# B$ t  d  iAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will

+ W3 Y" s; E3 C! L, j6 [ never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.

" q% `* O' v+ q" z[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！