作文竞赛第一贴！！

茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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" o3 B2 q/ [$ E/ \0 P8 q　　　　　One day I always remember
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* y( C6 F6 g4 N　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was

: r+ E. X# |7 L- k$ E! Texactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to

: i$ D! R& @! H) S! D: |put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my

little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,

every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely

trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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: S3 ]4 ^$ e# h* ~6 z( Tthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard

( x' A( e( I/ C' o) Tfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my

. o% P* y3 |! Y5 O( [6 jdeaest daughter.
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5 e$ A9 L) w9 B) T/ `+ \After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will

never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.

[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

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  S+ V( Z" u2 A: p9 G! swe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！