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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)) c9 `2 ]  }- i/ L( O( a4 M3 ?

# O% I* T& V( j% K     One day I always remember8 Q5 m. G5 R. {
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was$ f% Y6 j5 O# a" @$ C3 `4 A

+ y3 [' l% I  g' c) B& W& uexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my" H! t! S# z  a$ W+ \
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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! o' q. A: o# E7 m" I every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid" N# {% _- B. d1 p  [( {5 y5 T
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely , Z6 [$ x4 [4 x" j, s, [# x

* L! X4 [2 t2 j8 G8 Ctrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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" _. A9 N7 U0 O8 e& \that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing. }1 N5 ?: `, q! Y& V) {4 A0 b5 _
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard . n5 g- ~' _2 i, V9 h; O
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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. o# b" _( n$ f, l  ?5 B% I; P3 Jdeaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will* b4 n" Q) }* {9 Q3 F7 ?$ z- {

# n# {* @0 K9 }. b never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
. |4 p% w" Z6 u: c& Q% Twe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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