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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember: N4 U) q  x% v$ y. u
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to, m7 x: X& d+ c( P2 W9 Y( {
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid5 b+ C% t! [' a3 g
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since 7 J1 z2 U) X, J
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing* `: |$ N% T5 u1 Y

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: V# p& D1 ?1 h# \/ ~for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will9 j( o  I" |/ p5 e4 u
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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8 H6 v3 g/ [* I" @' `[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
6 G! V2 O" D9 t" Fwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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