作文竞赛第一贴！！

茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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　　　　　One day I always remember
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　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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) n' Y0 u: z3 _& s) jexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,

every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid

was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely

- V* t2 a! M4 Y6 \% otrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since

that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard

8 K& l0 g8 K" M9 ffor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my

; J) o' [$ e. L7 K  D- X/ L" Tdeaest daughter.
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+ a/ t3 p/ H" oAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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! t0 e. O, Q5 g* l. k# I3 d6 r never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
- g$ ^) o( m6 F3 e6 B/ _+ }! ^we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！