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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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& L/ p) ~+ E- \5 I     One day I always remember
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* f& U/ l+ r' m6 V# f  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my9 ?/ L9 e9 N2 t, ^: c- \; P

; |1 H9 b3 Q6 a little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,) n8 h0 s) _. Q/ o3 [7 t" Z) |2 @
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid9 |: W& ^: m/ Q- I' J, l8 L6 H& m
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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* s2 w* s) c3 K5 Atrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since 1 T7 J: s/ J! f) K+ p
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing3 B, m/ X' Y3 C% \. m/ Q

  _. C" ?9 \, v: ^5 r' {1 R on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard ' N4 s1 g4 G: K0 `/ g
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my & Q4 H! O) i* }( w* S) b8 P) w

2 G$ Y5 U0 P/ C5 Y7 E% wdeaest daughter., `& i5 Y8 W& B9 S- y* X* ]
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& W. u$ q! D" P% H" OAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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$ G* @5 Q% I, j* h  P[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
9 u$ g# |: J9 p8 `. jwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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