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I just wrote a poem& b+ ~& a7 t, G& B
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.; Z0 j# o* d4 ~* W
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
7 b+ {+ }' W" A! O3 [. X4 zThanks a lot!!!
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4 Q2 R' q. Y8 GFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 6 |) V" b. m7 r- o+ h! {
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us . g3 m$ j( t) Y
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world 6 N/ Z4 g6 N! \
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me : ?2 E3 H# \) b Z$ F# o8 n4 `" X, z
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind - f( n* g( g7 R, _) ?) x6 l# a
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness : h( p: J: D4 S7 z5 K
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
# `3 I( T. c- C; K% n& j3 j; f# K5 R somehow I realized you were still in my heart ) f. Q- ^: Z4 f$ s; Q- S0 L
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
. }+ l9 C" S' [ somehow I lost myself inside again / Z( Z) t5 H$ x# z9 D2 F1 ?
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog # |7 X+ H, t) @0 X, _) o- H
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
) Z1 [. ~* e# D! j9 ?, WFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
$ ]$ |7 m, Y. [Basically, I almost finish this poem/ a Q- N3 ~: o ?
I am 一个人de精彩% w/ l; j) q; l6 x0 _
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.6 t& }2 j4 u3 H" Q' l1 R7 o: Q
But........
$ G; w2 K8 o$ S- D/ g) q6 gIronically? Isn't it? |
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
