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I just wrote a poem8 p/ j& y, a+ J0 m
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
% o! O, T; D4 X& g; p7 wHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
1 ?8 ~! f9 l# e3 a9 C Somehow I'd found something wrong with us ' e( l3 e& g: w/ [* M: f5 |
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
1 [7 J! R/ D$ [; x Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me - X6 W) `" o5 e
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
+ ?8 d+ F0 g% C Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
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somehow I realized you were still in my heart
0 `: [5 n2 p d6 J3 ^ somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
! P6 U `/ R" ?/ n somehow I lost myself inside again # z; z! |" E4 s: A9 X k# Q
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
1 {# Q/ M* P' }% g) a% O somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion1 \, g$ U% L$ `# Q
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................3 n5 c. R5 `% ]: x m
Basically, I almost finish this poem; `$ B6 D# G5 Z. R6 n: I* V
I am 一个人de精彩2 f/ A: x6 m; e) w9 w
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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