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I just wrote a poem
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: m& S* Z: V( n" N/ a' \& [However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem5 U& r( u9 g* O
Thanks a lot!!!
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4 D' e: i+ x0 `) H, F6 ]9 l+ @) o. jFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you # ^9 r8 P& k/ U2 e. p
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
7 q/ e3 {+ ?# h# O/ }' z# _! }; B Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world # N* d# K( @$ u! x5 O( o3 x0 q0 @
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 1 m2 \6 r$ n0 K! ^
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
7 ~1 X; p( l: y6 w- k5 B! }) H Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness # y& S9 W: x6 D& ?, K0 `" I: ]
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday % n, j' R) T" X( \7 `
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
5 A9 {: S" o) X1 }8 t$ _ somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
8 Y" |% z9 _7 x0 h somehow I lost myself inside again ! T F1 z4 a: O/ g
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog ; t/ F, o, H2 m: r
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
9 y" S5 z' F; X- x, g' hFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
7 t* r% t; y& ~, p: I X$ v5 HBasically, I almost finish this poem* _- K4 P: A/ v5 |: ]2 C' ]
I am 一个人de精彩
$ u3 W) g( y" z w2 a8 X% `+ s: G2 Y8 R I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything." Y- n) ~: ]3 a/ v: }$ e
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
