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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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发表于 2005-1-5 03:05 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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TOEFL 5分 作文框架& Y) T) h; L5 y5 t0 r

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(一) 对立观点式 3 F7 o. h9 |: H8 j5 g" S& X
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
3 |1 F) j" y5 h  FThe main reason for my propensity for A is that…… ; a- ~- z/ V, f; x" u! ?% ~+ u
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
; n3 \4 K2 Q6 x5 q! rA is superior in another way, this is…
, {7 G% y; z1 [/ {3 \5 rIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
9 e$ S/ g" W3 w3 z( Q1 o. nFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... % E; a5 h2 \. p9 h

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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast) % ]- p0 ]$ H4 b

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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
$ a+ M+ L* Y# S& [& X3 y6 ~For A, A 的一个优势
/ j% N; o8 K: _6 m4 {3 a4 a  sWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance, 9 r% H% w' Z% R, x
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
  ]9 [+ X( }; won the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
' @$ G* g% M  e5 z5 @+ Lmoreover, B的优点2,for example… 4 s3 R  M8 D! n( R% }
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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$ h$ Y7 t5 i' K' L1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型) ; K1 a7 ?% a: B& ?8 n
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9 z  Y2 x  d- Z1 y首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
/ p( b  C3 y4 e4 z  i+ s( v0 nAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below. 1 o, }% u" y1 [4 G
There is no denying that… 9 s3 [: s# Y* I# o
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that… 9 C6 f! _. D) t( y2 b2 N1 c
Finally,… - A  E: J% U$ i/ W7 z! p8 x
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that… 5 m9 e( Y; H9 {. e6 b! ]# S$ o
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1 i! M/ o4 v! Q+ ^# N2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
1 p, R' ~9 I( e(本类型只agree)
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" e' S+ O* b+ u$ `4 E: u. d(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
% A2 O& Q1 ~8 P/ g5 r5 ^The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… ( Z; L/ l* e# F2 q) i. r; p
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
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' P& @' t+ l/ y. s' g( W6 V$ `" P5 GIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… , i" s& y; }# c9 i5 e
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型 0 K, i$ A, U+ _( V0 B1 Y
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
' c4 O: a3 }; U: \# N% k( QWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons. 2 i' w0 k) y% B1 T
The main reason for my propensity for C is that…… ! o4 ]/ q' B' E$ Z- E
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… ! B! U  O2 N- E" j$ S5 u
C is superior in another way, this is… ) s0 h; t5 j2 x  u1 G% f! M$ M
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
' C( M& [! q3 cFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us. ; a. v2 x$ q# W$ }
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型 + N, J2 i/ |8 I3 D8 v1 N7 @
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows. - P3 _- L4 {2 k# H( b; S
One of the primary causes is that… 5 |5 q) X* q( p7 l  q  c$ f
XXX also results from… 4 B' r$ n5 g& x* Y
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
! v% P- d  X0 `" @0 B% c* e; ~  UTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX + C7 e4 l9 d- \' _2 s

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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something. 4 u' B; _1 P& a2 `: d/ W' W7 h% `

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; ?6 C5 R. s" |1 AThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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9 c  q& Z& b4 S' }" J  B; J9 yOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that… 7 z& j& C! t2 E# i
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
0 `9 w9 z' A0 h) U2 Q/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that… ' D$ r! k6 G1 q- K% ~: j

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a more subtle point which we must consider is that… + Q4 a, \3 U" q% J

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In addition/ furthermore
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0 z5 v: L6 y% o6 rIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?* \) ^7 P0 Z% a6 C9 I8 A
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架." U+ f7 _2 u2 l( Q% J- c

4 G; X* m' O- P* Z: k8 M( o[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]
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