TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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TWE作文模板汇粹
(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
, f% a9 y  O0 i8 EWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
$ l. M* \- e/ v* z9 q! `9 iA is superior in another way, this is…
0 ^( A" D7 K+ v2 X1 z! ]It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
1 I! a# M: m$ i, u8 ~- `0 kFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
, K  H2 `4 ~5 |1 O% Fon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.



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& b0 \- s7 i. R0 G( o(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
( |- B! \7 X; a' a6 G2 rAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
& G2 }/ Y$ T5 v* C, k( `1 L6 Y/ mFinally,…
- p8 t$ b$ [+ [, vBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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8 b. J: f) |; O; \" _& t7 l(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
7 i( p" r. |8 v! |. I0 yFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
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: V3 W( |# [0 I, E  K. N+ aFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
/ a% Y( p4 J* T" i4 N(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)



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) M: ?7 }" h0 ?9 D, G# n1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.


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陈述这个事实
, ?0 \6 _: K' b5 kAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
4 R; }3 X" p1 I* wTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX


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' U! G6 |! s/ o! ~: u! I2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.



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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.

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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
$ G# A: X: e* G; g6 r; g/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
3 f& w5 \: d! L- L/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…

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1 k: _0 \& l) ]( m# e* wa more subtle point which we must consider is that…

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$ x: n% ?* l' Z7 `1 ^5 l4 sIn addition/ furthermore


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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

朱顺顺

嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

* g7 C% i& }, }3 h# Z2 R) \6 q[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]