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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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发表于 2005-1-5 03:05 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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TOEFL 5分 作文框架) `5 }: a8 E# ]4 p0 {$ F- C; h! n5 ~  z

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(一) 对立观点式   O7 x  g6 C8 ]& m+ A! O5 ^6 W% S( D
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型) # G1 q0 S& ]$ R1 h, D( G

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" L) B+ o* t9 V1 o5 E) E, O(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons. ) Z4 C1 E5 e" a) ^
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
  i' w$ D$ r) |$ k$ x2 o0 |What is also worth noticing fact is that……
: E. N5 u& L3 n, [; ]/ ^! H1 ^A is superior in another way, this is… + m- n* c/ f( v! W2 h7 G( ?  a! E5 \
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… 9 x  G. ]7 Y' ]2 h! _
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast) 7 s) z, p2 n5 k# C5 F- G! ~6 S) D# t
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- T# G0 q4 z# ]! ?To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
: B. t8 w& j) ~0 G$ {+ pFor A, A 的一个优势 & M0 Z; b0 w. `8 I# s  J
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance, , x1 }/ C7 T3 h. m. c  V
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is... " R% N4 y1 }: M# Z; h
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
( o: N; y8 ~1 d7 Z5 vmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
" b0 I# F% |6 ~4 M3 {+ x' T4 s. [From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2. 8 `0 [6 k* @' P

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8 O% @# L0 C3 q(二)单一观点式
' e7 ?$ q8 j) b1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
! R0 E+ g( D) y+ C# SAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below. ; f* F, K; G: Y. X& ~
There is no denying that…
/ ^4 I/ q3 b3 {: D# p. p5 I  n3 _Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that… * p6 Z4 ^! H) _) i  A+ I* V' ]
Finally,…
$ @& l" l& l; J2 i3 p+ rBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型) $ \( O, `/ L* k$ _
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
: J' \9 f+ W5 a1 Z  _The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… + K, }: A' i) V, X* h+ s9 ~* f# a: r
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… ( K8 l+ U% S: C4 V
A is superior in another way, this is… : g+ \0 k+ B: x5 Q
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… & X6 e2 J% y- e# o, G
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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& L( w. _5 d/ A2 q' N! R- x( `1 |) wThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D. 9 k! {6 G5 M/ M& V. Y
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
5 l4 O7 F- Y  n2 Q6 M8 rThe main reason for my propensity for C is that…… 6 X# ^6 [  M' @$ m' V% v
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… 1 {1 E* v9 @/ S: X' p+ ]4 o
C is superior in another way, this is…
  l" j" E1 g6 g7 b) W+ }- J2 o/ YFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C & x: I# ?" L- ~; x2 H/ {
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
4 s' |: V0 i& H, V(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.) ) p& l$ Y' i% m

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(四)原因解释型
$ Y1 ?. q2 e3 q3 s' Z2 W( C2 t: |# C1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因. 3 Z) d; Z5 ?; W# `5 J

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陈述这个事实
' S& @! G0 o3 z7 N; x; CAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
! j. p  G& u  `1 ROne of the primary causes is that… 3 @% n; M( t% c) ]- K- ]
XXX also results from…   y4 U# K$ N2 ]) P/ K2 i! E
… is responsible for xxx, as well. , b/ S0 ?7 b6 N* H' Q
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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& h) J4 U, @7 v) q2 V+ a0 W' z$ h2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something. , B- N& E( ~/ K" e# S$ ?
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背景描述
8 |# l$ l- c; c, q: PThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there. . j: M" j, }  u

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" `; }  F  Z+ {2 P( P' v, F8 VOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that… ' k' C/ W2 q; O; s* e5 Y. a( y
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
! I) G- W& O; P8 F: Y9 y1 L/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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( k" j+ S) R' E  j# T7 W3 |5 ja more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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7 \' c5 i3 n# {- m  _2 GIn addition/ furthermore 7 X' u0 f* \& M. T7 T) t
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* O& o, Z0 m, S2 ?In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?; L7 e0 L. t  g
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]
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