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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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发表于 2005-1-5 03:05 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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8 S  G3 B+ d! h" j(一) 对立观点式
9 K. _6 U, |* z3 ~1 N- |4 z& C0 E! `1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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* ]' `5 G( M5 G& n% {3 R(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
5 j% N0 N4 h( N4 ?The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… - |0 {( K% M4 ]& Y: d8 ^
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… ; o& c0 o1 G& \
A is superior in another way, this is… ; Z! b# i" [9 a+ O
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… 1 i/ Q; @. f8 }# n$ {! F
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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! s) ^8 a. z9 ~! i9 O# m2 W2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast) : `: g: m& g; J. c0 V; x% |

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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B. + b' E2 ]" ]# U8 i/ f( i
For A, A 的一个优势
, t; u1 G$ `) y! S5 _Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance, 3 {: @$ k' \' M: E- n
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
- j" ^/ L5 K5 s/ c" e* V! son the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
9 g4 [1 b$ S7 t4 omoreover, B的优点2,for example…
- J* q% j2 f4 H$ iFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2. 1 U( g+ l  i. ~$ T2 ?
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(二)单一观点式
. R( a, O/ ~5 G+ W! U/ ~1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
* t4 o8 o0 b+ h. i: s1 vAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
) }' [) ^% Q0 k2 oThere is no denying that…
( s$ u; z% T7 K! DAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that… 2 y. |9 g4 N$ y) A* r: u% g3 u& C5 y
Finally,… 7 [0 v# Z* x; u( @
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that… 4 C1 E1 L4 e) n

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2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型) , T: n8 f0 B' e# W
(本类型只agree) * f4 z) ?  o& I& l/ }' A

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+ R7 u: Q2 `# h6 j(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C. 3 n9 G. a1 K6 {, Y. J' y* _. e; w- j
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
. s& C: d& j" eWhat is also worth noticing fact is that…… # P7 g) p+ @& T% I/ P  p
A is superior in another way, this is…
& b" w8 V1 Y" U: v- G: W2 ~$ p6 |! z, lIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… 5 H4 H% i; Z, b, J9 }4 d2 h& w9 ~
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... 0 M; t# ]4 Y/ Q( d9 U$ w
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0 n/ s* y) a7 I! K8 F9 k$ p(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型 & D* @* v8 R& t7 [' R
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9 K* @: }1 _( \, Y! OThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
8 u2 I( {0 z7 v  W, _: xWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons. ' Z4 y! V: m# n; E& [
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
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C is superior in another way, this is… & F1 P' g7 W; K9 J& e. R, q4 f
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C , B: o4 V6 w7 l: \. u) ~6 q9 W
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
- o7 l5 E" ]8 K- U7 V6 _# B- U(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因. : Z2 ?$ ~) o- h- o5 E1 m. d

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陈述这个事实
  H3 M* Q0 |  r0 G3 q( j5 M( F+ FAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
/ U/ T2 |/ r5 Q4 y: ^* k. C5 l" tOne of the primary causes is that… 8 y! N" C3 K. `
XXX also results from…
! \3 x. q. a" f# O5 A… is responsible for xxx, as well.
) q8 W/ [8 z# B" |To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX " b. q$ R% k$ O5 G, B, ]

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6 q* L1 q2 F: u7 `7 p2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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. k! _& i, v) _7 u8 rThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.   ^, Y6 L4 d: t- T7 k; u1 Q5 U
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3 ~" I2 x1 z1 @% Q( X% hOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that… ! q3 W$ q# p' j3 r% k2 s
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that… 7 d# b; a% W% K. L
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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8 p* R3 L! M. Z, ^9 I/ |a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?  f% C) K/ S  [, Y

: S: j8 }% L* o( z. S再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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