TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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1 G1 N( d9 B& U% g' T5 e/ w(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)

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7 K" u8 E1 O6 j+ j4 G(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
7 [& D5 y3 P/ O& lA is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
3 j9 ]) @9 |5 W* X: u  Q  QFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)

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# A+ K! w: k3 T4 b+ m9 ~* kTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
4 D9 w, g, T' H% ]8 ~5 ~For A, A 的一个优势
/ ~# u& a- ]7 C( rWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
# l8 P  |8 i4 WFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
7 r$ M2 ~! {5 h% h7 S: |7 _- ^) A; Bon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
* Z: W6 z8 Q" f  \% K- y- Wmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
, k9 v' S1 {. P/ f) S* GFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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0 E7 ]0 a2 T+ K: k' m: y(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
! B( y# \3 T) T+ xAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
0 O5 P, r7 W0 ^3 M+ J* ?Finally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…



２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)



1 `; {5 w" @5 x1 Q  y(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
: B/ v$ k! P( P' t/ A) PWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
0 J  H) M! E* p$ {5 z- qFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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  v% s2 G/ o# H8 x(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型


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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
9 B& J7 z- m! uFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
3 r4 i' g# G) _6 _% gFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
9 Q: ]: I, O% L(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型
  C  F, R) X7 Z% ?  P1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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陈述这个事实
% p5 |9 v. d8 C( A( ~: B* G  aAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
9 K( J7 j# s. @1 J% {. i* ]XXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
6 e7 v* B' x) cTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX



" \& ?0 B1 M. n% g2 ]2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.



背景描述
4 p) i, Q- X: z: g0 xThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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1 [& p5 i) }( F. n+ B, B0 T' [One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
; L2 F7 p/ r, D1 g& K/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
5 W8 l, ]' _2 s1 b1 ?/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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$ P& O4 H- f9 ~5 X4 Qa more subtle point which we must consider is that…

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In addition/ furthermore

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, P  o3 }$ R3 `' CIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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  ]# D9 G$ j. X3 h& `[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]