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发表于 2005-1-5 03:05 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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(一) 对立观点式
0 E# ~2 z+ K" j* @3 ^6 @/ k% F, e2 X1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型) 5 S* ]" l( y! C. P+ E6 }

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6 t- P" L" l! D8 ^3 J(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons. 3 i+ [' Q' O" s. l# J
The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… % m% s; x, t5 x2 n1 J. e' D; ^
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… 8 r9 F. E- }- F
A is superior in another way, this is…
7 V# S4 e2 q' z* OIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… % r1 E0 K  z. t" E  E2 k% O$ b/ |* ]
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... 9 |5 L) B2 _+ Y: c3 L
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3 P, _, {/ V+ u8 M0 d( p/ w2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
$ Z9 G9 r& U4 E) eFor A, A 的一个优势
5 e3 x+ e4 |4 w3 yWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
0 d/ s4 P  u- V; {. l; HFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
6 l7 {7 h% r8 `4 aon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is… 4 }+ L/ y! ^, L, i
moreover, B的优点2,for example… * [/ q7 |/ w/ f$ ?
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式 0 A( M- @( D$ z4 T* ^
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型) $ T( @' V- Q9 u* N3 B

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- M# A, Z7 n) `) V8 }: ~7 I首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
) ~4 |" Q: A5 `7 _+ K. x7 n) IAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
* d8 n4 M! Y- b" a6 cThere is no denying that… 0 d6 u7 o$ u  r# N8 H( s  G8 A
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that… ! p# v, @( ?8 E: T
Finally,…
# Q& ^0 ?& Y: {& VBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that… % t- L. B3 q( V# g& n, c1 y- e, O  A
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2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型) - C1 `2 h5 A% G( S
(本类型只agree)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C. , {, T/ `& q8 G4 [0 C& c
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
% Z2 |" o6 H. q7 U' o( ?What is also worth noticing fact is that……
, [% [& x. o4 `  ?' @A is superior in another way, this is…   R# H1 K2 F2 ?9 U
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
1 D3 o( F' E6 [% n( J$ pFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... / N8 }, ~. m6 f0 s' K

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( o$ O3 w( n1 S! v7 e+ x(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D. . W, A3 S6 Z; u- p' g  S4 a( x( D
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
2 y6 Z) F# P' q$ c5 @The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
* E. x  d! D! i$ y+ C2 uWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
: j' f. W3 k* r( L7 _! N& gC is superior in another way, this is… / M. O8 h! F+ t& L5 [- F
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C , k3 i- u: x8 l8 s/ G* d) }$ \
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
% H5 D* N# ^) h3 H3 B(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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+ G/ ]0 T6 k( G4 _  ?(四)原因解释型
; H4 h$ a4 v% d# ?! ^1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因. 5 R& `8 p/ T/ P1 t: V0 S! s- J1 |. m* I
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0 j0 V! l) F" h- U, V% \, \$ ?/ D2 k  V( V陈述这个事实
8 j' f- \$ m! @2 P9 x& j9 hAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows. - a5 X9 r$ C6 d; c2 `
One of the primary causes is that… ' T6 o% l+ s7 W# i, X; o# b
XXX also results from…
' p/ ?2 ~" s; X4 ?% m: u… is responsible for xxx, as well. $ v4 u) l+ Q  \
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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3 ], p& _7 g) ?+ P0 s5 A- a/ }& x2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there. 0 P$ U% _. G% ?" S2 A5 W0 O
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
( J2 W" O+ Q% l* }$ O/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that… * N, E9 z2 O0 v; C$ f  C
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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. r; \: ~; a( k# M) [; DIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?" h9 N0 U4 G3 x9 E
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.2 l5 K7 u" z& S

& l: }3 r' {# S9 |5 k[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]
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