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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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发表于 2005-1-5 03:05 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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TWE作文模板汇粹
! Z& m0 B2 g; V7 D(一) 对立观点式
' f# J. m9 ?  c) }, X4 |' ~/ j1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型) 1 Z  F0 ^7 [9 d* Q
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* z1 l! f1 [' c5 s4 }: M2 e  f+ u(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
& ]& U, U+ D! s8 P  H# w: T% FThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
9 X) n3 n. I2 v, Q7 D4 K  b1 RWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
4 p0 N. ?2 V0 \. I+ ]6 [3 MA is superior in another way, this is… 0 C! X8 o/ [' O( ^/ l
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… " S& Y3 ?# n" M7 T# m0 \
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... . B0 g: D. E% ~! L1 X
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast) ; _$ A. E3 B. \- X: H" `& g: k2 D

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3 A( }! @- X. ]4 q0 \+ h, iTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
% N* G: i% R+ N: F$ }For A, A 的一个优势
9 E* W! v$ ^9 }/ _' s! LWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance, . L5 q6 F* p1 Z8 o$ A) y3 ~2 l
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is... 0 d% d' w5 D5 A& G1 w
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
$ S7 n* ^( z" M/ Pmoreover, B的优点2,for example… ( n0 s! {) f9 G! i2 T, z
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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. v9 c0 Z9 {7 p7 f3 l& I$ l(二)单一观点式 * _" {% {" t, w+ B7 Z; v/ C& r
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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) I' e- N3 P2 |$ \7 x8 m% k- u0 K- i首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
: y8 X$ J7 e$ J  z3 Y+ o4 ^After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below. 7 k" t! c- c# s) ~0 O
There is no denying that…   e$ ]0 ~* p5 C* D" N. A
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
! e+ W. A8 t/ q0 d. iFinally,…
' y% p# r. M1 Z" ?$ @Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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8 k# }# A0 b# P- e: I2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
# i/ L9 u# `1 j& o(本类型只agree)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
1 f0 @0 N! e; W) C8 j; [* vThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
3 v  D% x6 m, ?- _9 H0 gWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
, @, G. i3 \0 D8 B1 V0 TA is superior in another way, this is…
: Z# n3 G: g9 K, P5 z# q( e' XIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
) G7 B9 C! v5 ~* v% QFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... 9 ]! d6 ^4 g+ x# {

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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
4 ?4 L3 M$ ^' G2 N1 rWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
6 |( F. A5 C8 V1 H4 T# ZThe main reason for my propensity for C is that…… 4 k3 W! i3 @& |$ V7 o+ D/ @
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… 9 d3 Y' _4 G: }. R
C is superior in another way, this is… / ~2 j6 h6 X  P& h8 N
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C - ~$ H0 _  F/ ?, U$ P
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us. 3 [- [" z7 k5 B: b  M& V; C
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.) * _8 _$ P/ k) G& o# I  [4 C$ S
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陈述这个事实
+ W% I" f: u# H5 h0 g6 i' {Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
3 Z7 y- I) G% YOne of the primary causes is that…   Y8 i) j+ r0 ?. L3 ~" F
XXX also results from… 6 u. Q) |. I" z% W( ~) B
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To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX , s) `9 R& Q- y8 i) m  H/ ]
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; h* G) p" q- ]4 P2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something. ! J: @6 Z+ k* m/ x3 e* S

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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that… 3 p4 H; {3 x% M
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that… , c6 w, t. y: Q6 ^" t. O# a
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that… , G5 F. q0 t& n& e- w" F5 N

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4 O% L3 I! ]7 H; r% n; LIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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* E; g8 u5 F) A5 ?; C  c$ }再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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