TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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- z5 {, G' e" z1 E8 t1 W(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
- |( s7 s, D4 x5 A4 W: K: PThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
2 \. D- d3 [7 }What is also worth noticing fact is that……
( j  I, Q/ m9 X: O  fA is superior in another way, this is…
! F4 ?% l, ^# ~8 O' IIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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( P; B1 t1 {& t0 _, n( y0 \/ U& g* S( [2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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% B; g( `. S9 U$ kTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
- e$ ]/ R* j' |4 ~& m# c# bFor A, A 的一个优势
# F+ K' c% e* c& G' hWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
% B- u4 a& O+ r' i8 ?Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
% y/ w# B2 I* ^( I$ G5 b4 t: Mon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
& d. \- N. \. e" q( [From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.



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4 L+ {- B/ ~( |  r+ N: E(二)单一观点式
+ m1 z( S( t. Q. i% G6 i1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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4 G* Q$ _4 j" H8 [7 ^首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
4 H. f4 T2 ]8 ?- j5 AAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
5 E  m& u. n9 Q; mThere is no denying that…
1 ]* x. J: m4 z+ u6 b  B$ LAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
9 P$ }/ e' M% N) {" P: {Finally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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" m3 N. o" G- Q% _5 l２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)

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& a1 [' f7 T. d: l(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
( j* m% P% G9 F  A; yWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
7 X: w  e1 X' l9 ~- I6 z; m& RA is superior in another way, this is…
, ~- V. I& f8 SIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型

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9 Z% W" d& v- n5 ?0 l- EThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
/ B- P& x- f7 o2 o; ^The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
& _3 J. Y- y4 e0 |9 WWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
. V" n+ }  m) ^- H* @( W# [From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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+ S. w1 {" J) ^# c8 w# K1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.


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陈述这个事实
! W0 E' S: t7 ?# h* YAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
" R) z% N/ _7 r7 V" A8 lOne of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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4 e2 X+ }- H- L% q$ g* T% ]1 {There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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5 v4 o$ h1 E9 s* r- QOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
# E5 A5 o) w2 a- p' k/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
6 m& k& R9 g+ \- G1 ~) `/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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- ]( y/ B1 T7 h6 Y, S/ r1 R  |a more subtle point which we must consider is that…

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/ ~: t; v- X9 _2 D; f9 VIn addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

( c- b1 x2 V- A# }) G, F再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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# B$ l0 c. J; R" |[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]