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每当说一句汉语的时候,我总在心里想英语是怎么说的.尤其看到汉语诗歌的时候,我突然想,翻译成英语还能保留原来的意思吗?所以试着译一译.
# L, q5 J1 }# A前边发了译文以后才发现有些大小写和语法错误.一点一点地改,很乱.所以再重新发一便:3 z3 Q- C& P) h( v" t2 V
Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.: T) J, |3 p9 R" v6 A) }0 \8 X
Partial leaves fall down everywhere,squirrels are busily running.
2 z: {/ j/ F5 n4 \# u9 V) m Current I, the same as one tear ago, the same given name, and the same family name.
) `5 K' ~6 R# n9 @! F, i% l- CThe same hairstyle,the same bag,reserved laughing and talking.( K- {5 @3 E9 |' q( A- j
Seemly added something in my eyes,or lacked something.: J6 D$ D& M" t. I0 |; l
Summer went so fast that I almost forgot those sweating night:
0 o+ c& }" T! G5 DCats often played at the whole hot night outside windows to get cool 4 n: \; w5 S& ?
like us many years ago,mindless self indulgence.& v) T' p* m2 J0 |+ a: A
I often cherish the memory happened in summer and those people that make me raint even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming.
5 e2 |0 y7 ]" M P/ G( o& v( j" RThe emotion and the carma only is a dream.. [. d, j9 |8 F" K7 N8 q
That shoudn`t happen to meet each other last tenderlt night.
* d( h: g+ w9 ~. I/ w* A: E tI want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.& K# x: g: C9 d5 z6 c
I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
$ a, \) x' n: [- C% J$ ~+ rIn this lonely world whom I can step inside love to?
* R- E5 C$ {1 m2 v7 [Intoxicated then feel cold,4 z% z# y+ E5 v, d
the labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.( o/ Y! \/ `% O7 T! y2 V- B
I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
3 h* q- {' A, `1 {3 @The amorous man to whom you gave your soul?
/ y5 r+ N3 g$ q5 OWhy I am always hoodwinked!
' e% }* L% h0 {: ?. qI have told myself many times cautiously
. M7 J' ~5 N) tdon`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
- S. v: ^3 j, m2 xThe amorous women always get drunk by desolation., Y- A) G. }2 e8 [0 d
Why can`t I take it easy?
: l6 \8 ~2 r5 q. L1 R0 V) L2 AHow endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
/ g2 B7 f9 N5 PWhen the quiet night comes/ ^" c1 P' t* t; M# v
your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.. T- ~) K/ @& k! [
The greeting when you met me made my heart in touched unaccountably.
6 Q9 y( n# N8 m' U( a. BYours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul,9 Z+ x/ q" O+ d8 ~. U
light the dark corner in my mind.
$ r& ^ q: C+ M& C" o5 AI feel a bit of cozy." x+ |6 m4 ~3 z# S6 f7 \& f
The deep attached to you in a twinkling) a W. g% h3 Q7 ^7 ^: ~# P/ u
maybe is the most light spot in my whole life.! i7 q. N$ E: D3 d2 J
I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,% H# h! i4 T3 D# L' B! \
but accompanying with the time passed) K* U6 K6 T$ O# x
I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion,
4 A4 M6 C9 J9 i* a9 Nalways feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly.+ A" P% h8 y$ O7 ~# x2 U1 l
Without asking if you like me or if I like you$ t3 C& T/ u. ]3 W, q
only feel gracious for your existing,
3 t7 z) P* e. Z, C" w# d; Sonlt want to do something for you.
% C% N3 u2 X3 x, q5 z2 s' v4 r; nEvery time when you meet me
. Z1 P# X8 U0 b) @+ Nthe sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil, ^, o6 T* [/ X: o+ f0 V4 U0 t
but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
0 q2 F4 C& t9 k; }; W# gThat live in my heart.
4 y# v1 `1 I- @( d# O pDo you know your name can suddenly come into mu mind at anytime?
4 n( W! N& e3 T; i% v. ?, N+ OEven only your flying clothes` corner when you turn around, and your voice
1 p: P0 [9 e) Q5 Z8 d. B4 cmake me gently distraught with happy feeling.4 m3 l5 @( m. ?1 q0 c0 u8 ^7 T
The scene that met you prinkle in my heart like snow on the land5 }$ ]5 r/ ^4 v2 R- K- ~
suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.' o5 m: f/ }7 |4 J! Z
Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss, P' t+ D8 x, i2 u$ D3 T
especially on the day, the gentle sea breeze and the sweet summer.5 w2 k9 G; a8 h+ h
Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy $ O w O. r. h. m( h
only waiting for you quietly7 @, j( n7 N( l$ r- k
just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
, Q) S$ @( b$ p* C1 `* UI really want to ramble in the small rain with you
2 O) D. y; p& \ L1 ~& z9 land enjoy the rain washing together( B0 I5 D! ]$ n+ e1 S) ]; y
or rush to a film7 {8 ?0 V) Q6 Q" F* q% r
or listen to a music quietly.. r) n- s. J2 R4 s3 u2 u
Whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
# D3 P3 O" {5 l, {% R5 D1 JIf we embrace ,dance,and gaze to each other,. ~! h& D% y8 I2 B9 q% Q7 n& W
smile or gently kiss then say: I really love you".
* p& E" Y8 M0 x M6 t' U3 m* |; sThat is enough.8 ~' }# S0 U# B9 T8 k* t* x
Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago,
) L. c; u1 W C3 B/ B: s4 nfinely it deeply rooted into the earth in the season and sprout,
& Z2 B4 h' J3 Y4 f3 i8 G# g& r O, Lthe same as my missing.
) q% L( q2 m1 z4 uIt comes a little bit of verdure.
- D: y* o6 D* ?: g# f) h( RIf, If some day I can touch your hand,
o/ M s: t9 t, u% D4 nthen I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
5 W; V1 d2 Q+ j1 |Let you touch me gently and read me carefully.# t& H9 F, K+ H
I will enjoy your mild emotion through your hands with my heart and soul.0 x: [4 ^5 @. M. M! T# D& @
At the moment you reach out your hands to me ,
8 R# ~# M4 x* H9 |, Kthen I will have all care and ardor., R: ~7 ^ j5 P* P
Shall we walk arm in arm?$ u- Z. h5 [% k8 h# K
呵,太晚了,连检查都不想检查一下,有没有打字错误了. |
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