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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
: B4 n# u' c: F3 Q) w9 h. N,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry. M# d: p) `' U. I
零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
, ~4 J' W3 o _/ e! Y现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.6 T& b4 Z# Y$ y0 Z# f. ^
梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.
0 `7 H$ `8 v. F% j, V+ j眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
3 @ O, U6 d1 p I9 U* ^夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.! v! \) o0 p7 T3 m2 p7 d
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
( `- R5 W+ \! f& {1 K就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.
0 Z" f% ]& C& y0 R, |! A& z我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及
, U# J6 o" Q. B9 M% A& ?* y那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。- n& X8 z$ U3 S1 q* j* |7 z& z( Q- _
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
! [6 b' I8 n, Z$ q3 s6 F/ r昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.6 T( p. k0 u/ B& b5 W7 z1 I3 y
想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.3 |! Z9 d1 I$ k# U8 R3 I. m
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild. ' G# p! S1 Q% \2 B. s
寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?9 g0 y$ Y2 _1 w! i
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
" A. Y9 e7 l( m- `% P( a' n5 w迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.4 X" M5 Y5 }( m. _
最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
: R* f+ j7 Q; U5 d/ h, Y' y6 t多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?# I# `$ s% e! [5 P1 m0 e
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
. [/ I0 j( O4 V, j5 `* P% [多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously* Y0 L0 s: a7 B/ q0 s7 L
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig., R3 {) a m) N0 R
多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, # X: s5 S8 K7 ] f0 ^; @
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
2 D7 x2 _9 |" Y; L: o6 i( T多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
# Y: q7 ^, O2 o( D+ w$ q( N永难平息的泪" V/ ~* i% ]% v9 `3 N9 }
每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes- C7 h) \/ M/ y( \ U6 j
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.& }% K% {" M% x7 {8 n$ N
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
2 }& Y2 @1 x9 Q% C6 g. ?1 u让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,1 L9 G$ U$ n7 ~; `7 ^/ o
你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
( r) @& i0 _( C4 Z一抹微笑;& t! ?% x; i$ z) |0 J9 l/ l" s: o
一个手势;8 d! l$ D+ g0 O% R" O4 o/ N: Q! G
一片话语,$ J; r) I: T7 `7 b! j1 Z
愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、6 ]! y' F6 w; d5 l6 M. g
明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner& B4 f" a7 ]4 g3 K2 a4 L) f# {
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.! S4 \% I$ i! n
这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
. `% M n6 \( C& z+ r也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life.. R, P a H+ X% c
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
$ q5 c+ ~' l; N1 m4 s8 J/ |: x我并不以为然。
% }. q: O+ E! z: O& Y/ l2 s可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed
" V0 r- I3 w) e3 d1 e6 R w/ N; r慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .9 g. y" L! V# J) N
被一种情绪所左右,- ?6 [$ g0 M2 R
总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
" B) ~4 ], L) a1 J6 ~1 O即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
: f( N8 n* \) v7 @% t5 B也不问我是否喜欢你,
" `& n1 h. C, }/ D对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
) a/ k u/ I6 _4 s: B7 i( d, R只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
. [" w1 [# v6 I! O8 @5 O3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you
8 S, s& h4 z* S- ]9 g心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil
0 x. V6 C. ~, w! b4 x然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere 7 x, V, d+ R* B2 B. S
你的身影已化成一种氛围,
4 z$ F2 d' M$ o7 J8 t" {记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.% J" T, ~3 j; `: t: Y+ ]
你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
1 a8 J* L5 e0 f' t随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字% c% Q4 M" N% `+ w; S& R2 q
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,' H# X) l" y& k' W Z
一种声音,and your voice
0 s4 a4 ]. r* i4 N也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.! Y R- H V2 s1 J1 ?7 n4 z
掺杂著幸福的感觉。
$ v; ]# M$ N% n% g与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
% ^: O( X/ f5 p% _: {象雪花般撒落在我的心田,
- L& t. H) a5 [+ a7 r+ y! v倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.8 c, n& J2 o! _( P }6 K# c1 V/ \9 n
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。
) y1 |# D& [# k) J你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss+ X& H. r6 [$ m* T8 q! s: i# E' E
有一个能够让思念的人,
8 B+ A$ G2 g' F% r6 E) Q" W: V其实也是一种幸福。0 r$ f( O+ j. P$ c: k
尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
" F3 ]8 Z8 d* v! Z: S柔柔的海风,
: q% L% J$ _3 W甜甜的夏天。
' l+ \' N/ ^7 u- m- ~% O% G6 C5 P# M一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy % T) E1 U* b" q' ?$ K i. x, P3 b
只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.9 W4 |. H6 t) y" O" z# b; X3 ^
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
' r! K9 L2 r( r- `4 W8 N想和你有共同的情结,
* P* |. p, y0 a m, k! X# c3 k共同的心愿。
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you2 L1 N! ]4 O* A5 m' _
一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together
1 ~* `! S8 Q- Q/ G) d, W, ^或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film . c g! j" n) x1 C9 F: V: q7 ~
或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.
. w) z* j7 @) J3 Z( ^6 e『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
0 D' q% @2 r9 k# t, C) s5 `我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, 9 |7 B; i* O4 J5 F7 Y$ s8 B& ~
浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”- Q0 ]8 N7 x( f% \
或是轻轻的一吻,7 p9 [: ] Z2 z* o: G# O
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』" v e* K& P+ I. H2 [
就足够了. That is enough.
( s0 a) I. M; k& j& N这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago!
5 l [8 O E0 E5 S4 k y1 c终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
& s+ B+ r7 a- S" j9 C0 P' w萌出了芽,
P/ U6 B5 `' p9 j3 C; C一如对你的思念,the same as my missing" l1 h( J/ v. s, h
浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
`3 n! f1 v/ G1 U: |如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand! E" G/ `: S4 v% J
能够牵著你的手,
$ b* b1 V- |3 B3 ~那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.; ?% z3 G2 A" G
让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully.
+ L5 T) B8 D# t. b慢慢地细读,) ~: K6 O1 I# F4 Y
我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
! w7 [( H* t6 M6 o8 R2 H, a7 p. @在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me
) v+ ^/ J7 M& G3 S: b6 G' C我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor : {# U r% c, u7 Q7 O
就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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