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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,/ f/ ~2 T' R1 `( g9 z @
,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry. ; R) g' N1 o8 C
零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
; T/ R5 s$ G; I现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.1 W6 X5 ?' D" @. _
梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.
9 Q* p- \- p& G! o8 s眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
3 i/ A; U& d5 d8 `3 o- x. a夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.: g, C" k3 [# r& [) |5 p$ V6 e( @
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.) d+ ]( p9 |4 x0 w9 F+ M8 F
就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.
. @5 W# ~4 W! T+ [; l我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及' r- u; v4 V2 b$ ?5 V* C2 d& V& g% }
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
/ g3 y% A+ z7 x% ~5 x# q3 j; Q世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
) x; N% ~% z. b, Z6 {昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
7 t" J% z+ \4 B& U G& z9 a) h) [想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
* s5 ?* ^$ E! b最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild. % U% o( [3 c" j* N. z
寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?% _) }' j$ r( I0 W$ E3 m% K# I2 W- u
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
5 ^9 n1 D# \( z2 x6 e/ P t+ j迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction., A/ I6 q- ]1 x T' @* \
最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.- X% V7 D% B' M8 U+ P0 O" `; Q. z
多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
$ |, v4 o+ z5 u( R) cWhy I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….' h: q5 a; k5 Y. u) S0 j
多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously" j6 W& M4 N% {0 S, D! K
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
" W- [ _/ e! K! ~& e5 h7 S. \1 o多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, 0 P' w0 h% ^, @1 b5 \
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
5 _3 r9 }$ W _7 @+ C2 _/ g多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!3 O. M/ q9 v+ n7 X# H9 l9 S. {8 Q, N
永难平息的泪
7 G K' q! y6 }. ^6 D每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes: \6 k! a# p: [+ `7 z/ r
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
5 H; ?- M5 y8 v0 m当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably., Q7 v5 m& o+ |" D" a& A$ u* Q
让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
1 a) q) B! S _$ F) k6 r& j! a你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul ' o% j+ f8 ~6 Q- d! W$ e
一抹微笑;1 M1 l) o$ d; i+ g* c2 h( ^1 R& X
一个手势;
# B6 C8 W1 f* n; S一片话语,; n6 X( l/ R* R2 w4 }
愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、
: \. _) v* G: ^明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner$ C) i$ J: ]5 L7 ?/ }
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.
8 {2 O/ A& M" E+ T1 y/ S8 T这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling% ` y$ ?( \; x6 \& U: Q5 Q6 `
也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..: J% s5 |, {. y, n
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
. L, {& V9 X0 [, J我并不以为然。! J% u N" w) Y: i7 y8 ~
可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed
; Q5 h3 G$ Z. b' J# E6 `慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .
$ v4 Y# c% }+ s/ y# ?被一种情绪所左右,2 i4 N: k8 X4 e( \" m
总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .: H6 |. b& ` f) _" W
即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you3 d4 y9 x, h3 n! ~- p
也不问我是否喜欢你,
+ g4 m2 L% T( F) r1 k9 o1 m* G对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
* S6 Q* O/ O& q. M F( k& U# S只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you# B: b, c* h. `1 n2 A. r
3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you6 E+ h+ x1 k4 ^ j5 ?% }9 J
心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil8 e6 {! d8 ?5 @4 @3 T7 b1 A+ p
然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere - D( E) E) l, y4 z. @
你的身影已化成一种氛围,
% o. s7 B7 H3 ]! ?+ ?+ f, B. ]- q记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.
# v6 ~4 f7 x: O% c, R2 A6 [6 K你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! & b* {, r' F% y
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字% o. K- p- D2 ]& A0 e2 V
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,. x( L& {$ L% q; Q
一种声音,and your voice0 ?' w& X4 W# o' a: _
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.0 N! j M4 q6 J) @4 O
掺杂著幸福的感觉。* ~- Q1 N) p: m9 L, H1 k% r
与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
8 Z3 l( G5 ?" F% j" `" }象雪花般撒落在我的心田,
1 r+ v5 R/ ?0 Y' E( D( |倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you., r! S5 R; N' N/ ^7 ?. @$ ?
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。4 s& l, Y: r( I( e5 m
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss
9 y6 ?* e3 T& ], V有一个能够让思念的人,+ B) M% _' T. e( G( d: {6 o9 O" n
其实也是一种幸福。
/ a4 p* f; W0 [" ], H* v+ f尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
5 ~+ [+ F7 ]/ M5 C柔柔的海风,! I1 M1 y' }8 f: A
甜甜的夏天。7 i9 {% D! {. x. {: C( |& a) F
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
4 l) d, |7 R! M8 E) o只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.) M" X; ~3 h) _+ q# ]
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
1 |6 J' L P, e# Y4 u想和你有共同的情结,7 K' R& b% }( G$ x- K6 s3 c* `8 b m
共同的心愿。# a( F/ w- P7 t$ ]$ w
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- g; A/ n* D1 w' u) y1 b好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you- n6 \6 D2 N1 O# O( ], a
一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together) M3 D$ j; b. g7 z I
或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film
# k0 w) W- I4 R! N8 p或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.
, f Y; T* V' R$ b, w' ?* y『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?( u' A. `6 S* a1 D) }
我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
2 g x f: {& \) z" p4 {浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
3 J# Z* y. a, V& F或是轻轻的一吻,
9 J+ ^( W) c* T: h& V3 Q2 S再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』
; `2 A, k1 X1 d) f4 P: l就足够了. That is enough.
; t( @8 p U, }- b$ ]6 C这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! . Z3 d8 b( L/ ?
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
9 S1 b& @7 t" z, J# g% h萌出了芽,% s1 n9 t7 F7 y+ G! S: M: d
一如对你的思念,the same as my missing
/ ~, M8 _2 G2 I4 B$ W# m浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
, Q* X, I7 v8 |* e% c" l# r如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand
7 n& e* }( R, u3 G能够牵著你的手,$ D# i7 r: y: E
那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
) U2 T" a3 W1 W9 j! w# ?让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. 1 @( r. k/ {- ~
慢慢地细读,. ]# `' @; Z; j: r0 a
我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. 1 y2 c4 `/ P, [0 I
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me : w0 {8 w7 v, r
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor
" p: F& w8 U1 Q/ d% n& F" u i就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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