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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
" H; c M& p8 [) H,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
. D/ s3 g. u) l7 ^$ ^% A% ~零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running . , `& r5 I. {, o# B, D0 b; b7 B
现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.
1 t2 I0 O3 g& r, B3 G梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.1 o7 y' n, B f7 J1 @- G. s
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
, w" s/ Y, F8 } K; i夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.
& s5 D; S0 o2 u( v6 h猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.+ X$ f2 T8 K. Z: z0 B
就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.
. ~, U3 q+ `" H7 M我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及
) E8 W: Z x* n( y$ H$ t; U9 _" m那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
8 a( `; J. [# d8 c' Z" u6 T- k3 l世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
: R' S& } |) Y, Q昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
: }1 r# y4 V$ |- T想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.3 X) p S& z4 v2 r: o
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild. ) w% ^* G7 U9 j `; ^# C+ a
寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?
. W- N( s/ ]( g( f, N醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
" H o: b3 l* D) [5 H迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.3 T- }* u/ i- L: M
最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.! }, V6 j0 ]9 k' x( n+ ]
多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
8 V1 v2 |8 u. n0 A8 @Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
- ?) v0 a0 g# ^ o多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
. ^; L2 o* q$ m7 g4 H6 t不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.1 @2 Z7 P2 F; ]" q% _
多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, 1 Q/ S) i y/ h& g/ L( K8 O7 e
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?4 W, H h, N+ q) r
多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
4 ]9 i9 g' s- a7 S4 ]* z$ s永难平息的泪
; Y/ u: D3 C7 `# \' q# T" P* ]7 N每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes
! B3 w% S2 I( L6 ]( Q~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
- u" N5 M T' X/ k$ j+ k当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
# N7 d$ ~0 o$ {7 o, o让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
" r6 O% ?- a2 E# u8 P, L: ?# V你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul 4 \, a, M8 Q% Z8 E
一抹微笑;
% o% I) ^' q& Z& X+ J9 S一个手势;
' ~1 S0 f. a% U; L0 [2 f3 n一片话语,
- O. I; j; c$ k1 E+ ]愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、
( J# a- G# D1 `& u% j, X% K明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner0 D" F* n; h9 R/ C E& L# E
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.; T$ d. e7 d0 M2 A" m* @8 i" Z
这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
! u" M! T' q' {" z也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..
3 E/ o. E% f* E* `) k/ }起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
0 f( h4 p2 e# g @我并不以为然。
1 }7 Q& m5 x) f3 P+ G可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed
: E: c' v7 @: e% [. }( ]慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .
) o0 \) ]5 S! O4 \% i9 P8 k% @被一种情绪所左右,
* M; S, a8 k% i& k总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
% Q3 e) z! z' }! O4 L8 g B即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
6 w( t6 _7 t! d1 I) L也不问我是否喜欢你,
9 q+ ^* C! a+ B9 |7 s对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing. ^% w8 Z& |- G
只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
! a# U9 a" b: P9 q, D7 P1 L; K4 V3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you# p% C% j4 p0 q. U% A( F- a$ k9 n
心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil0 k$ K3 @8 [9 p8 J! i" A6 f j& u
然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere : z/ m5 S) e0 i3 H
你的身影已化成一种氛围,) S$ B2 A; ]; D7 b. C) Y3 z' \/ v
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.
+ R6 t& m# I4 u# F5 l你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
; y* J M% O. r$ b b" ?随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字
% L# j6 M i- ]7 O6 I6 a3 k5 G# Q; H哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,
1 R6 P3 K5 Q$ t一种声音,and your voice6 z% W% ]& P5 |; Q
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.! S1 _3 g8 F9 c3 n$ T5 u7 Y
掺杂著幸福的感觉。 M- q- p' e& R7 r2 q
与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
1 o# N$ m6 F( k5 r象雪花般撒落在我的心田,0 m% b8 h9 f- ` c& f+ i
倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
, g7 m9 D1 s% _1 w+ O# ]/ c7 ]纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。4 H( i% c* B& E* T& u1 L
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss
+ Y2 f. e1 y* A* i4 `, _" @有一个能够让思念的人,) {! q. J+ b3 \% s, T1 B
其实也是一种幸福。. s" _' w8 |4 J; G8 s
尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer. ! H, Y( P/ |+ W: x
柔柔的海风,
. W. C! L# }5 N, \甜甜的夏天。
; t$ @: E7 x+ A- ]5 k% y一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy - W, ~" o# J, K8 Q- A4 ]" F
只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.
: j* n$ f8 J/ M4 u! t" H仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.. B3 A5 {: g. b4 q5 k# |+ b8 Z
想和你有共同的情结,
2 B( O2 T( i4 B6 X( F( W共同的心愿。
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you% _0 f" w4 i5 B9 I) R, i1 q; a: o
一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together
7 z' S' @! F: A+ V+ z& U4 s7 e或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film 7 k0 ~, p2 s& N
或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.
; b. W2 }0 S/ Z3 l/ X u* q1 ]) X『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?' l. b: [6 O0 G; q( J
我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
, y3 R2 H W$ N4 B9 Y! p浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
' i# a) P1 K% b或是轻轻的一吻,
8 F) \- l& T1 F) I! D d再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』1 D$ ?. m( O. v- e
就足够了. That is enough., O6 k2 _8 @, k+ `. u+ c @
这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! * d& a+ C1 x4 o! w; ]% m, ^& ~
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
* x3 N# u1 m" c: Y5 p8 b萌出了芽,
6 F$ i4 @. W! X o& p, J一如对你的思念,the same as my missing
8 }4 o& B) u1 h7 e, I; ~& B( k浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
$ m, E' H1 @& v! E; g如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand+ Z- J2 `9 ~4 t, i, l
能够牵著你的手,( E& A) K+ z! h3 Q9 Y
那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
. W; S! U7 H3 s让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. , `% p ?2 v0 d1 E
慢慢地细读,
9 p) `+ J5 T. {% K( j; F- ~我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. * y o# g. x( d
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me
{; O2 y1 }- H# \9 l我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor ! g! R! h! ~+ B: v' q7 _4 s0 \0 _
就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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