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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,. W. k' W ~! k5 w3 d
,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry. 3 c2 b2 k* @7 y
零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running . ( [4 P) H: J7 h+ f, A) Q6 j; }
现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.% b9 u2 v" S: v1 I4 S" J
梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.' ^8 i8 Q- ]- A* Q% ~
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.: I k6 N, ]' @( G: s
夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.
7 Y M6 ~: U: ~9 ^9 f猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
! r6 m* @1 C5 d就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.
% v/ Z% \3 n. g% N我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及. h7 w8 H. M' T3 j- o
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。7 W! v, i- |& v; A V- \/ V
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
: d2 z9 U8 `' e8 ~昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
* h2 M4 R2 L5 G. n想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
`8 F+ R, `1 A5 \4 J最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild. + v$ b+ G. e3 g; H L2 _0 O' O
寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?
4 O* X6 _4 Z y( C3 f u: Q4 V$ Q醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
/ j9 F: E4 [/ a) q迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
B# b% `7 R0 Z8 t最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
% o' y! r p0 k) _ P7 T* p多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?9 ]" T6 O, k3 B3 m8 z
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
# ?) s2 ]7 v8 ^5 f" a" k7 q) P多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
; K s9 V+ u3 b4 X: ~1 b不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
2 }: a: R0 ^ \. b多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation,
# F+ n+ i1 q7 G) R为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
K. C: [& o( F* I; I6 Z多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
' p* @% w! C: `6 [0 [& T0 i永难平息的泪
" l; X: [" H# L0 Q) t每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes3 i: @# ? |" I1 ]* a. n0 b% a
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
4 I# r4 n) f9 T% H当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.5 Y h& p: s' @
让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,0 L6 F9 K1 m* G) l2 M
你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
/ s1 g+ s; |! e) A9 `4 T一抹微笑;# m4 ~% S9 n0 U) C9 p8 s& |. d- x2 K( f
一个手势;
3 Z2 k5 [, b5 U' M3 C* a( o" V7 K- V一片话语,
! j# {6 `' X( h. d- Z2 ^2 [愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、$ ^ H/ D' ?% }+ O
明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner
/ V, W3 L8 _& H, u6 J9 i1 `9 k% g心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.5 V& K. q, C; _+ J4 f
这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling3 g# e1 i! g& ]2 Y# C
也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..
6 P, D I7 L8 W& u8 ]. E起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
" x% t* B' O) i2 a( T我并不以为然。: m; C6 f' j" c
可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed + D3 a& N+ ]2 |0 E- u( S1 c$ Y
慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .) |$ |2 e7 c" p6 M4 b( ^
被一种情绪所左右,' g9 U/ W. W! G
总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
* O$ t0 I, n9 J: j* X K3 R1 N# r即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
, P3 t" Z" V+ D/ D+ v7 b' F也不问我是否喜欢你,
6 f b. E* ~5 z) b0 D K对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
) {5 H+ `& I, D& Y, e% F只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
, Z% a. H# ]4 U+ R2 U3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you2 v. b% P8 U7 m7 d% B% ^( g( C
心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil$ ]6 f7 U+ }5 d/ n+ _4 r2 m
然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
+ V) T% F0 c6 B0 I+ L8 W你的身影已化成一种氛围,4 ^' D" |. I& z. q$ e+ B3 a4 ~3 J
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.3 V' H0 S6 w$ d
你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! " a5 n* K: S; j+ y
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字
0 v0 u% B6 ^( c( t. r: G" W# h哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,. q; M9 E# @& f {1 C
一种声音,and your voice) A5 ^& ?5 e+ q
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
, {; F% d* m: ?5 [/ Y! w. t) t+ T掺杂著幸福的感觉。
1 w; c2 {9 [" R+ F% t, m与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
5 ?5 R9 Q, F$ x( b8 W象雪花般撒落在我的心田,
4 O, T8 K3 n; x) e9 s# k9 Y. @$ d倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
2 P) E& x7 m, S% n* j7 l# r- `2 y纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。* L0 e. p( b6 D2 p
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss
$ b! u. a; F- y7 ]! W: {有一个能够让思念的人,3 r9 e; N% |$ w: V- q, {
其实也是一种幸福。
5 S& ^. `9 r6 {/ B. a% h尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer. / O. _; T+ ]9 F, l% u
柔柔的海风,( _- a2 i8 `( q) I+ c# h0 Y
甜甜的夏天。
0 Q/ `! I3 ^8 @* k2 Q8 d6 Z8 V一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy ; g# M9 Z; T, s8 r9 b' Q
只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.0 Q }$ e3 b5 e7 K0 i. O! j# V
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
# C, t2 w1 P' O+ W6 Y想和你有共同的情结,
# M2 g9 p! t% I- ^3 Z7 F, e共同的心愿。: P% j+ @4 w. j! c: @9 I5 P
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you; T+ T$ z% e5 u: h/ C, f
一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together
) B0 D8 _. {& [3 h或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film + t( }- F6 @0 c& p
或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.
: G" T! J1 g1 U$ p『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
; k# t# C2 r8 C4 ?4 P8 |0 ]我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, ( J- G* I7 a" Y, ?, R m6 K
浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
, ?; q4 c% a9 ~" Y/ _或是轻轻的一吻,
" u- T" Y# \6 a3 V* G5 T& m8 i再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』. ~, p+ Y7 G" Z3 m n1 S* N" A
就足够了. That is enough.% I0 r9 N0 C' F8 I. o0 g' f
这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! 6 d& A3 Q7 z' L2 F. p ]8 _6 ?( a, W) O
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.9 E+ {& W- c: F3 J
萌出了芽," ?/ F" v- } x2 S" C+ Q0 A0 b
一如对你的思念,the same as my missing; F9 \+ O0 ]& t. o
浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
6 i B1 b+ U( b! H. B/ A4 q6 e0 i如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand; }3 q- |; k1 y6 z
能够牵著你的手,& A/ }* o) H, ^; x) Z- L
那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
8 K7 D# Q* i2 ~& o9 Q' R/ m, p( |让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. ( o4 P) t& h- g* a
慢慢地细读,
: X. I# ]% Y! ~7 L# x8 _% G我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
: K. M5 b- ~4 R* M5 u# k" C在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me
9 ^% |3 D& ] {* [) K* w; Q5 f. ~我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor 2 P# i8 _3 ~5 G' e. }$ R& l0 s
就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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