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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
# X4 z! P. |4 ?3 G7 z( m,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
_, c7 P. [- b! U& X' n零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
4 N" u/ N. v! n; o& _ z2 u现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.
4 C" e$ v& I" n0 f/ q; x5 s3 g梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.
+ ^9 w9 Z6 h. K1 m; t( K眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something./ n& O/ W+ g, e, f Z; c+ E1 |* I
夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night./ a( Z' g; v1 h; l, _
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.# T( v- j1 u, L
就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence. P) _7 n) @3 u* }* @/ T
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及
3 ]! n, j# }& _9 ~9 K那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。) v1 l0 x: A% y5 N" m
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
' G3 _% ~: R5 x6 k昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.+ ], b2 u! D8 i3 P7 T v8 d$ h
想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up." l9 d3 n8 o3 C" V7 d8 b" t, g
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild. ! e' [2 f8 R4 a8 F3 ?
寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?
% `" {( t4 p0 v* t6 b醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
% c0 m: u4 G+ p, {迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.+ _2 ~* G; b8 A. H- l; k* X
最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have., J6 o% E R# `1 H* u, s( e
多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?* z4 a1 G( |/ H2 m& L, b8 d/ ]
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
( L! R7 \, y' L P多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
A F0 f6 c3 ] S p. p) T- l不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.6 B! _: [- ?& N/ V, n: [$ S
多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation,
' ~. v" o( q8 e! ^) z, r为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
* r5 i) c2 a2 J8 K+ w$ b多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
! U9 l8 t; f3 d3 C永难平息的泪! \: w$ y. R$ j
每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes
; I7 ?% n, x1 v# \) k( ~~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.( v, D: B1 Q7 X6 t7 H! a, o
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
( C g, t% y8 p/ J! i# V$ a让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
( h# J7 f) O3 Q* D& w你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul ! a# G$ P9 o9 S: C0 A% k. N
一抹微笑;3 K$ T1 u/ p7 W. f9 f
一个手势;9 M' R8 a& ~2 j9 l. C4 D
一片话语,
) o0 m/ U# i7 z; `" I; p愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、+ ?) l1 y% A% K9 A+ e, y
明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner2 u: o6 N/ j- Q0 O
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.& U) y: t) i( W4 r! O% {* m
这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling: m. Y/ x( J4 X3 u9 S
也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..5 s6 [% @; j! a1 j, a! t9 g( z
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
1 j, ]5 u$ n/ l) a( S1 n我并不以为然。3 j$ {$ u- v g2 t! v
可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed
- ?" z5 r8 H1 T7 q慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .
" A, J @( K O' V) ?/ n3 @' V被一种情绪所左右,
/ I% p4 Y& Y9 [1 S7 |; G# m总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
8 t* s( y* {9 r7 h( I `$ J0 J8 @即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
: i7 U! p0 G$ h0 @也不问我是否喜欢你, G/ N; l' x/ m( j ~
对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
8 U/ P6 Y# M3 Q/ w% U只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you5 S5 f* R3 \( G! t, \; ~. S
3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you
3 c1 ` X6 D% J) m, r心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil
) z6 Y% R9 I& y) }' l$ r然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere % H6 i, i' w9 s3 s
你的身影已化成一种氛围,! b. p* ]; C( Z. |* Y
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.$ L3 P/ k; J) ^7 w1 W
你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! B" A% A5 v: M# C
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字
; M+ m% D, T! S) l/ O) }哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud," v( k/ }$ @9 }/ o5 [8 n
一种声音,and your voice
+ l+ S, H2 K! g3 Z" N* ^: I0 P; n也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.) c! x8 F3 ~- V6 z3 J3 B @) e) Z
掺杂著幸福的感觉。
) k0 w; a* d$ c# ?: r/ X# s7 E与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land1 ]" @" h8 y/ q! c2 w0 S7 l9 E
象雪花般撒落在我的心田,
4 l, R, [( B3 I) G" k; o% d( @倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
# G& t7 r# Z" N% m纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。
( Q# ? A9 V3 s6 K8 r4 |你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss
1 V) ^" r7 |' ]; o: e有一个能够让思念的人,4 i+ e9 x4 o( _3 q/ J2 x2 F
其实也是一种幸福。5 l: i0 `$ m/ Z8 ]9 N6 [/ e: M; W
尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer. 9 s2 y+ c+ O2 ~. Q+ A
柔柔的海风,! k' v# L+ G" F$ W. S8 c. w
甜甜的夏天。
$ z" w: p# s' B6 h! h0 D4 ~( r一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy * C5 [+ P& @& H
只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly., N* T+ l/ q% ^4 z( Q1 Y; t6 J, R3 g. n
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
% F: v# ]7 P4 o$ r+ A/ I) b想和你有共同的情结,
' ?$ B C6 y* T9 `; h4 P7 `& x- h共同的心愿。 l+ W) ^- l+ j3 j6 g4 Y
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1 {6 @2 h; Z# V% o7 ?" \好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you3 S$ R% V0 B5 T& d8 p$ e' n% B' e
一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together& l$ y/ M" P \, Z. ^( g$ C
或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film
! E2 _+ E$ ? H: f$ X或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.
) T3 R" _' v- Z3 @, B- c『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
, F. [4 F6 ? ^, M我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
9 R) D6 [) a4 E1 H/ [浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you” T: h! ?" M& ?2 R5 q8 y0 e
或是轻轻的一吻,1 e @& e2 ]5 a1 X" S
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』4 o. _, F" F! Z$ I% K( L$ x
就足够了. That is enough.( h# w! r! L+ P2 @% {0 l
这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! ; L0 y* f: K$ X. R3 |( r K
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
, i3 V4 g2 z, i5 y$ ~萌出了芽,
7 v2 E ^ ?" p0 y% f4 L, C一如对你的思念,the same as my missing
3 Y6 a# }5 ?2 M v' W# F- e" q+ o浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
0 {! D8 q$ @# y" w/ w如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand: ?. m/ `6 s9 {7 u3 T
能够牵著你的手,
5 E4 W/ \ ^- [ t那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
9 y3 g# \1 S. t. G& u! L让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. 8 R- b; f% _) f' L5 [2 b
慢慢地细读,
+ _7 D+ C; S6 ^6 j, i8 j我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. 2 P/ G. K0 C: F8 y/ F* i; K. K
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me
) y7 a7 f: ~! `4 T我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor
' t7 g) ~5 r& C8 D就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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