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每当说一句汉语的时候,我总在心里想英语是怎么说的.尤其看到汉语诗歌的时候,我突然想,翻译成英语还能保留原来的意思吗?所以试着译一译.: S4 `# D9 c" \7 R2 ~3 B/ C2 [; N4 M
前边发了译文以后才发现有些大小写和语法错误.一点一点地改,很乱.所以再重新发一便:
6 F7 G k' K6 vEarly morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.1 \' z0 D2 [7 G# e+ J( E8 L
Partial leaves fall down everywhere,squirrels are busily running.
( g! }8 ?+ Z. L- t- N Current I, the same as one tear ago, the same given name, and the same family name.2 _, ~' {8 i2 ~% n( x4 e
The same hairstyle,the same bag,reserved laughing and talking.% |0 {, _- W9 A# R& q: g
Seemly added something in my eyes,or lacked something.
+ s0 S/ n5 Y3 W& Q, QSummer went so fast that I almost forgot those sweating night:
/ k3 r3 L+ ]( |* {& v/ O; ^ ?8 NCats often played at the whole hot night outside windows to get cool
8 G/ v' T5 ^8 ~8 c' \like us many years ago,mindless self indulgence.
3 `1 o: F7 q s1 A2 ^3 vI often cherish the memory happened in summer and those people that make me raint even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming.' L# ^- F. |: {* |9 B1 n d
The emotion and the carma only is a dream.) G6 q: S9 k9 i7 F3 ^; H$ ~' _
That shoudn`t happen to meet each other last tenderlt night.1 ^& Y* \: H+ A0 h: s0 X+ z9 z
I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.8 k( W* B0 [' y7 @% @9 |
I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.$ t8 b8 G! C. j- K8 e
In this lonely world whom I can step inside love to?+ P8 c* }8 Y0 G! }, Y9 o3 |
Intoxicated then feel cold,
8 o# d0 l: v7 f1 e& e7 wthe labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
! @% H( b: D( v4 T( DI am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have." D! {2 a0 `# l/ Z5 `* b* A% @# l
The amorous man to whom you gave your soul?
& [6 n6 h. u8 \- v% y2 z/ KWhy I am always hoodwinked!
) G% U' _7 d7 M* L# bI have told myself many times cautiously 2 o) }# d8 J0 }3 y" Q+ K6 K
don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.0 e0 ]! L+ P: e! o
The amorous women always get drunk by desolation.
( Q% j/ x2 J! jWhy can`t I take it easy?
( G+ }. R6 i3 w, j' Q: g& ]How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity! l: k( e2 P3 R; P$ Z
When the quiet night comes7 ?# @ o' Y" C- a0 @4 O
your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.* Z5 R0 x' c" o% c
The greeting when you met me made my heart in touched unaccountably.
' ]. Q8 {5 [: A0 C9 iYours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul,
% J6 R5 U/ t, \' y/ Alight the dark corner in my mind.
: w2 b* [4 P# HI feel a bit of cozy.
+ F/ v$ F9 r7 ~) Q9 g1 s7 ?% ?The deep attached to you in a twinkling
% B8 Q! O6 u8 P! }' _/ Omaybe is the most light spot in my whole life.( M5 _9 K/ S( H* s& q. W
I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
7 a' E7 Z+ A5 o- E n5 {" G6 Hbut accompanying with the time passed" x+ W" o9 P( U$ [) i5 O4 ]
I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion,3 g' t8 r1 [% a# R8 n/ t+ x" e0 v
always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly.
+ e1 Y0 n. C/ |( G* ]. QWithout asking if you like me or if I like you' f ]8 P/ T8 ^9 Z
only feel gracious for your existing,/ W0 N1 P3 @. U; b' m7 p
onlt want to do something for you." Z. @( N, F2 @0 q
Every time when you meet me# w- _5 G! M: F" \! i$ ^# N+ L
the sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil,
' ^0 Z1 x' b# v/ C6 \! P" v. [but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
4 C/ Y+ O1 M) eThat live in my heart.& p! y1 o \7 M/ j. e
Do you know your name can suddenly come into mu mind at anytime?
# [5 r3 j! s3 V; B# M# I# GEven only your flying clothes` corner when you turn around, and your voice
4 @# W4 q9 G& T4 R$ ~make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
5 V( T$ }0 k, ?, ?The scene that met you prinkle in my heart like snow on the land
( d0 c2 v1 Z) U* Y* p+ ysuddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
' f0 V) `- |. x- ~8 j9 a$ BDo you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss,9 m. r- k; V4 Y% s
especially on the day, the gentle sea breeze and the sweet summer.
: z; m: u5 P, X8 hSweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
4 P8 N6 ? _: m& ^+ o1 |only waiting for you quietly
|# f$ ]) d- P3 K* O& yjust let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.0 f5 V0 r6 u, t `
I really want to ramble in the small rain with you 4 Z6 \0 j: x* o9 L
and enjoy the rain washing together2 y* @/ b3 u! k/ e0 O+ V& E) e
or rush to a film! c+ L/ k1 }1 @+ l' Q2 |, X- _
or listen to a music quietly.
. X7 d5 ^# ]# L: n- B/ CWhom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
! H( u0 D, M- _( ]+ HIf we embrace ,dance,and gaze to each other,& ?4 e) B. k# s- o+ Q& D
smile or gently kiss then say: I really love you".8 b! a( i/ r/ e9 D! p4 t; B
That is enough.# O$ A5 R _6 h I' V, N
Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago,
2 L6 b) |7 H5 |3 h9 U+ Dfinely it deeply rooted into the earth in the season and sprout,, g$ B( ?! h/ S9 }& f* Q5 u
the same as my missing.
W% G+ d' ]% a* c8 y, GIt comes a little bit of verdure.
( V5 z/ y5 v7 ?* w0 Q$ _! r. o) s2 pIf, If some day I can touch your hand, 6 i' T: x' S/ r/ n
then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
+ o0 J7 t! K/ x, y2 a+ B& ^+ ?4 aLet you touch me gently and read me carefully. ^& u) z9 S& h% q( Y6 R
I will enjoy your mild emotion through your hands with my heart and soul.
* E! l8 X/ N% x) N3 KAt the moment you reach out your hands to me ,
2 d' \" ?0 V4 d: [$ Ethen I will have all care and ardor.
0 f$ g( k: E x3 {" n9 U0 mShall we walk arm in arm?& H! `7 d/ _. Z& n* l& o
呵,太晚了,连检查都不想检查一下,有没有打字错误了. |
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