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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了," {" B8 P" v* s8 M; q
,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry. + H# T8 F, w1 K
零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running . " w! D, r' D% c! v
现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.( w; D+ z7 s, p; ~! T
梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.& O' G3 L* o3 K( ]3 ?
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
* o' f7 q: e6 w4 j, |* a- F* Q9 k5 J夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night., h7 ~& p/ f) p5 n5 _/ W) I
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
2 T* F" `7 _9 p就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.
3 y# m: Q+ y( V8 N' }# {. G- G( \我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及# T- I {7 V8 t
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。0 O0 h6 T) Y; ~7 O- ] g
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.8 g) s- z" t! f, g
昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night." g2 C0 Z: y6 r s
想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.' Z9 a& L; q. d" n- `
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
5 e, ?/ Y% d4 j6 f) |* O5 p寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?- {/ H! l( H1 S$ Y+ a) |- {
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.2 E0 s( V4 a5 p k
迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.. m; h* \7 g8 N
最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.& x+ f# ~7 N+ [6 I j7 E) G
多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
( V2 f4 ^" d3 B( ~Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
0 c: `4 `+ Q* R多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously! i) \; c% {. x; D5 U: `, s8 G% j
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
( v* K* Y1 `" b多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, 0 P5 p. p9 ?: ?. s
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
& h7 w, k! _4 J! f+ n" n3 r多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!& s/ n( J1 z9 o E
永难平息的泪
3 Z" Y% o( v4 @( i每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes
( _/ Y$ Z4 o8 F" X8 _& D~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes./ T! j' y+ l$ T) p7 ~
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.1 |& R" m4 u7 l" F2 o
让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,, r" }) z4 ] s2 A
你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
" T6 V9 Q6 J- e7 i, a一抹微笑;6 Y- m5 L2 ]& K6 @& p" f
一个手势; {' D" j% q+ h
一片话语,8 c( @2 Q6 e+ V0 W: Y% Q
愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、 U Y4 A I! D& y; k
明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner% u7 ~4 A4 ]% t2 F
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.) K+ ?+ Q* l. p) ~1 E* y
这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
+ @. D) D9 U$ I' S6 x也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..1 g' }; ^* {. J S8 S3 o" Y
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
. q- v! `" Q0 W& n8 n; G我并不以为然。/ \& I$ t2 D U6 R3 y5 F) r
可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed
) z' ], H- D% e& R* c6 q" `% a慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .
" m4 x2 r. Q. n/ h( G/ |& q P1 ?被一种情绪所左右,* [ i0 [7 Q/ Q
总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .+ n$ c, @) T' R c6 d6 [
即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you5 v, f& E8 \- S3 M! A
也不问我是否喜欢你,
% v/ R0 i' L& g% r. [3 t0 U对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.3 T/ W8 }( G/ T+ L w6 M& R
只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you6 c+ r" p) H+ ?! K4 o
3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you
3 z# ~( O1 ?' g+ J, `; q {8 U心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil1 A; ]! F/ M+ v8 \) S4 v
然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
) V* [$ R1 L4 N. B你的身影已化成一种氛围,; N/ X6 Q9 J0 e) O0 A, V! v
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.
1 b4 s7 c' a( X. G+ r! V4 ~. _你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! 0 P% ]* u6 ]' z( J$ v. x/ _) U
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字 O7 s( e! j' u* H: H4 B+ J
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,
# n" _. d! Z$ m$ b% A1 u3 O一种声音,and your voice/ D$ ]0 P& `, o2 L: D2 R4 L
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.. y6 X7 e8 O: ^
掺杂著幸福的感觉。) J j! Y" U4 q4 e) g. T
与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
3 ^8 ~# e0 [' @象雪花般撒落在我的心田,6 f6 A: ^, m1 `1 Y7 A
倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
- p2 E& K! |, J2 _纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。
; g3 ]* q$ L9 L! ~你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss9 l& T4 l1 @2 _! p: n& o; R
有一个能够让思念的人,$ _- i7 Z7 c+ z' X+ f- A) p: Q/ j+ @
其实也是一种幸福。
/ E' |, y* Q6 P, x9 `* Y0 r尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer. ; V6 f6 x/ O4 X' T/ L6 z% C
柔柔的海风,
q( t _8 i1 k; W! Z( z+ m甜甜的夏天。
6 b5 s) Q4 g6 p$ k) P& {( v# C6 }一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy . n# ^! O4 W7 B0 t
只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly." X" h$ d' @6 v( O" ?5 {# Z. B
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do. Q+ P- d7 P) e
想和你有共同的情结,; V% T/ f) _$ q9 \6 D; C, k0 r S$ f# x
共同的心愿。( }' ]8 P' I8 i) E+ g" g
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you7 S- u( m# }9 G1 P0 l, M
一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together2 p3 Y8 _* d7 I$ s! V
或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film
" f6 c1 |( I6 x. F3 {; T( f3 T) u或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.
3 B$ N8 F; \$ p# A) M2 F$ {& [+ a# W『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
1 |6 z( A' Y5 T& l# w- @我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, 2 P9 p; a ?" D- ?0 p7 E
浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
' E; q: n. [, w+ W' k1 l; z或是轻轻的一吻,2 v( H) x: B9 D( n
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』
7 F' L* Q7 E& y就足够了. That is enough.# G2 u5 v% ^/ n- H
这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! $ s4 g- Q0 t+ }- A
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.0 n5 V' x$ J- h7 B7 a; _
萌出了芽, @7 N7 G( A+ p7 [8 s) g, w+ a
一如对你的思念,the same as my missing
. H( s) {% J2 |" B2 n+ l$ k1 y浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
# H# |* \1 x' `2 _5 Q( m o: I d+ n如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand
5 N! M3 j& {7 `$ u能够牵著你的手,! D. u* d* I+ z/ s* i
那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.: Y) J& Q/ E! K, E0 |2 x
让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully.
( A4 j2 ~ S$ G! z慢慢地细读,
- U# V: y) t$ ?: G' W7 B# a j H我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
# G7 z( w7 ]' f. n/ N' v/ f+ B在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me ' J" l+ Y1 O6 ^
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor
* C5 O% m/ O( F就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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