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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,; J5 |# F! z! u2 ]: [+ a
,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
. f' i# K+ e- ]9 V6 e0 Q1 w零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running . + B. {' c6 ^& V# v4 q' {- t% z \' z
现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.1 t2 ~3 q' b# r# l
梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.
2 B6 d' u9 `* ? q$ o2 R眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
! P8 x! G+ T* I1 o+ a夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.
" s, V: w7 V! z1 r; I9 z) U" S" w猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.. r, d( _8 m/ ^1 D) Y T
就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.- v6 x$ Y9 w+ a" Q' e: k
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及
# |. N8 d3 ^) f3 b3 K# Y8 k$ x那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。# U' I3 ^: i+ v9 {$ w
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.1 I( M# b8 q) d$ O8 B
昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
: a4 l2 O) ]7 \ b& h( p想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
) p% a$ f+ I1 X, A最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
. q$ \6 s8 n. y. D( Z, K寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?
; E3 o9 g/ Z4 Z* l醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.* u' B+ T" [# z' f1 ^: x2 M
迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.* u# l0 \, `! P. o4 Z
最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
/ Z* n( x- h3 h7 _* o! r4 E( j5 F多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
L0 H2 j" E- h0 E8 N$ ^Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….; W/ f5 l- W! ?' f E' l6 f, a
多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously! L0 D5 F. ^/ ]' j
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
% d0 m; B1 [" Q2 n z& |: T# U多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation,
4 }7 h9 Y) v1 S; l为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
s) w1 @2 s: Z6 k3 y多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
8 N& u m8 w6 k$ E0 B4 F永难平息的泪 Y' ?" ^8 }8 T0 V- ]: Q) Q. P* w
每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes
2 F8 x) a7 Q$ p~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.! I8 D5 X3 K3 l6 k
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
: U( i9 N. J5 O& p% i; k" ~让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
: U* Q, p. ?$ |1 f1 t! j你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul / s* c: D0 M* E" g3 q0 R3 F+ \
一抹微笑;$ k v: v+ X9 p# Y1 s' S3 g
一个手势;
' |0 h3 a" G6 k1 D7 k' @+ w一片话语,2 y9 Y% B1 H8 d. z
愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、2 x: L+ f, N1 x; W( b; W
明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner
7 G i) n4 I! p6 T" B: o心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.& Z+ S7 c6 v+ Q4 ?9 T! k9 a3 p7 q
这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling: `, @! v) A/ p# K P& `' H
也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..4 |0 P$ F6 {8 s+ Z6 X- A- \
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
9 \$ U4 G9 X/ S2 v+ [! r- Q我并不以为然。9 ^" M0 g8 x1 R" C% m
可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed & h) [8 T# G* `3 A- f! d
慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .
( l4 r/ h' W! k. u被一种情绪所左右,8 R8 Y: e9 H" Q s4 v8 |$ U
总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
$ v2 G. b& W* y) p) @2 |即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
* L. [& p- }" j$ m( \) E( W2 Z1 Q也不问我是否喜欢你,
5 U* e2 q Y+ f! Y4 A: `对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
' x% R6 G# T2 U* p只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you6 p8 X1 {9 n: H3 D
3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you/ `$ h5 @+ m$ L: W: ?; i; j
心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil( w6 g, f( x7 ]5 ]8 w7 C$ n
然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere / X# }" I2 C6 h* ]
你的身影已化成一种氛围,
/ w, o+ K( E4 d% d, [8 m$ B+ O记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.
, I5 M4 w7 A f; n G你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
0 S. }6 [( Z9 a2 J! f- o7 \随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字- @2 }* X! g( @* Q# C
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,4 J' p. N- B) n* {1 S8 [% ?* D- B
一种声音,and your voice* ^$ ^0 ^- U9 I7 q
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
: w8 _( J% x u- H掺杂著幸福的感觉。
, F$ g' W. H' J+ p/ }' ?1 @与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land- ]" P) ~7 ]# O; t* B, W
象雪花般撒落在我的心田,
% I( b# q: n% W& S, `( q倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.' W& I, L' z8 L
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。- p! d# P/ u# v0 b9 d g( F- y
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss
" d' R+ w& V; a5 ^有一个能够让思念的人,
3 w. c# s+ s1 I# O, v1 g2 s3 L: w其实也是一种幸福。' D0 U _0 i6 u4 S
尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
9 E6 V9 E% ^; l1 g6 v9 [柔柔的海风,! z- K/ j {" t% M
甜甜的夏天。
4 X( S+ v# L$ N' ~一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy 4 K2 A) D0 A9 W3 z4 }) h
只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.( S% Y( R7 z" i8 v& k+ E
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
" U! i5 q1 s$ Y. w+ p想和你有共同的情结,( x7 O: B1 {8 t6 A9 Y
共同的心愿。
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you" x9 ?9 @+ ]* Z- F) _: v
一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together
3 s7 j5 x' G* I2 \或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film / U5 |# _) e b' x
或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.8 o# `& C3 F# g" Y4 j
『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?& ~% {& s. S; G- D* ~) I/ }
我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
! k5 R, @$ j# r. G" o8 K' _浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
2 \" [3 Q" P, r或是轻轻的一吻,' S' V; l. L- \2 l0 c( f' X$ O! s5 {
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』
- `! ?& c1 j* a( [2 B- n0 m2 o就足够了. That is enough." f j( q+ E6 ?9 s
这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! ; M+ ^+ S2 q R& n) U h7 t
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
: _" |9 O4 m0 w5 z# |( g萌出了芽,( T$ |! J' E# T& A4 @4 p" {
一如对你的思念,the same as my missing
7 z9 j# p9 A7 c- \$ k2 C5 }浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
) U% H5 ]6 P& m: F' E如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand
. r4 ?/ O0 N2 g& V% E能够牵著你的手,
, D8 ]$ f0 U7 h' T. ~+ J- a那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
3 M9 p! g9 }" s0 j. N% v让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully.
7 v. E) v; x* P慢慢地细读,
5 P4 A0 o' I) c8 Q, c. @+ p我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. - l+ M+ i1 e: [' r
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me ! u# p7 y' t. T, {" Z. X3 ]$ \
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor 2 i- i2 _8 {" y" A( t
就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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