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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
0 P+ t& _+ C% V4 R+ ` j,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
8 i# }* D2 q. m% V k零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running . 3 F9 V; R$ C) o Z% N6 L
现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.. Q6 ]" v7 ?% q! a* o2 r4 Q
梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.
6 z0 {7 ]3 c3 q% _& _眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.. \4 S6 n: n% C7 o- j
夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.: s' U7 M" s# f
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool., n8 }- s, t( F& H w( ]
就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.- B F' h3 c2 P) N, o2 Q
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及. T: z& g0 a5 o( B% ^$ ?& f9 C
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。6 e* T7 o0 f, Q5 M$ J, ?! V
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.- ^1 c0 r7 P' ?* J
昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
) e# U( W4 d& K! l* _6 R" @: P想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.' R% Y- m& V" T) z# b, N; {
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild. ! c- i& t: _& `6 E! N' K1 Z
寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?
! y' L& \/ u) L. N# f醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold., {1 H5 ?% z7 N; d3 c
迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
4 C0 g( u- [) i. w( y1 ]8 E* d7 @- k最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
. J- d+ I$ z) a; r6 z多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?$ o" @6 Y7 S2 P. R) B2 }
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
5 U2 a" ?; S8 b! l7 R" f7 N多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously" p5 J5 E( Z6 f; o* R$ A+ I
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
# r% ^' u `- I r* k3 ]" g多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation,
2 }% e j4 S+ ?0 f. p. P; M为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
7 F- |. {5 x) E多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
6 {% z9 K; { z+ ^- @. s永难平息的泪
: T( |6 h$ @( @, _. g8 }8 X每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes
! f0 J$ C* ^+ Z8 T2 ~2 u9 }; M& _ C~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.; }: q9 C* ~2 d2 {; J4 z# f/ t$ X
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.& k7 H ?7 s0 S. z- S" i, w
让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
/ v l1 r1 f4 _6 t- p你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
2 o& }2 D1 Z4 y( x一抹微笑;9 j7 \/ l) Z% g
一个手势;6 [0 n5 A! |) j$ N! g; a
一片话语,( s( c- _/ ?) J. S
愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、
3 W: [3 [( T/ G7 y% X' J& T# c& w明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner1 o8 h( p2 \0 N+ u6 Y+ C
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.
' U/ G2 r/ }+ }1 j! \- N7 v这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
/ F+ S" X/ f: i9 z0 A也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..: T' b/ U; y7 {) ?
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
- ]7 G: T" a) Z! Y1 k我并不以为然。9 K# T2 L) x5 J5 x6 D5 a
可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed
. D& M! p8 F ~6 d慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .
n6 u q" `! ]& T' }* @% ^) T* o: ~被一种情绪所左右,. V/ v4 g8 K' R/ @, i
总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .1 j2 Q, C7 {' j9 I3 X6 [; @% J
即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
6 U5 x; B7 ~$ {7 R也不问我是否喜欢你,2 I$ O0 `: y* N
对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
2 Y1 u! t( W" t/ Q, x" m4 Y" N8 v只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
+ O$ {1 \. V4 C2 W) H3 C R3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you
' @4 B o* T% A心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil+ g/ M/ E, ?2 t8 p1 |' b9 [$ b
然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere " _' M1 G4 ?4 E; s1 |+ _
你的身影已化成一种氛围,% e5 }; O$ o, J
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.7 S1 { j) s- K# W2 ?% O( n6 Y
你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! : M: D( |1 p% w6 s. C; J: S
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字3 f: \, N9 i% x+ a0 G
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,
4 V5 d0 |3 A) O L s$ }- X9 J/ u: W一种声音,and your voice# E% g& M& y' N0 @+ w
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
5 l. N3 T2 D& y掺杂著幸福的感觉。
$ f( e( t6 H4 v& o, u: W与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
5 y% a' c+ ^4 g# n* `, `: w$ C象雪花般撒落在我的心田,. S+ I0 Y( z* t, U9 B9 d" h
倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
( Q; `6 L& p4 Z2 {! N4 i, I纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。! w! {; h8 v+ g- j [. [
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss. k; S$ M1 Q5 c J
有一个能够让思念的人,8 o; g+ _2 E3 f# K' K3 |- C
其实也是一种幸福。
- w4 C$ \- L% W! _5 D% j尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer. : G& y3 ~5 A* o7 y/ R7 C
柔柔的海风,
, W. c4 M) V( V& |+ f甜甜的夏天。
/ g9 [8 U1 Q$ [一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy ! a5 u3 A: p$ E" q( j6 t
只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.- Q7 {% N! T9 R2 F# `2 n5 L, b
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.! n/ J; \& m5 `7 o& C* M; I0 g! ~
想和你有共同的情结,. Y0 A9 M- b+ ~8 d0 ^! b, Z- P/ p
共同的心愿。
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you" A' \* x! s1 S' J) y
一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together
; ~2 ~) G: `+ g. G" g2 B0 a或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film
/ B1 P5 t9 }5 ^3 R或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.- ?( o, o* U- i. T; v t
『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?, s+ `& u% p1 P. d( p2 v
我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
; C+ n- c9 ]' ^( [ d B2 B浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
6 O) \4 `, G2 v: G或是轻轻的一吻,. X+ z8 Z( U+ s9 f! [: k* q: X
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』1 s3 Z: j4 D0 f: j5 o7 l
就足够了. That is enough.
6 {' W0 Z5 I# R这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago!
0 u! q a+ \6 [5 S7 `% H+ L终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout. @; A/ i9 y% \0 @4 r5 t* k
萌出了芽,/ C% ~$ b3 l1 c; M. \
一如对你的思念,the same as my missing% z+ ~) B- k9 ?& v9 x
浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.5 ]% ?( F4 s0 D
如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand) m! c& M4 r6 n4 |3 L0 S' |
能够牵著你的手,1 }* x$ U! a' D* [
那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
* g* ]) z% p- _让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. " P" Z( U5 p& \. K7 P
慢慢地细读,
* G2 I* A* U6 O) S0 {我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. 7 x* |5 u( @5 A& P! Y2 b" y0 b& [, B
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me 9 q, b0 ^! H' v' ~) A, \$ a
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor
/ p( P7 y0 ?8 w7 s! Z: }就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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