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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
: v' w I- f9 `% V+ n3 c8 s4 X,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
8 y9 W g8 f2 {! l9 n. D零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
; a' H' o5 Z4 B7 t; k现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.- i$ h% ?( ^" ^ ^, |+ [! V8 j
梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.1 l- U+ u9 F/ R. s( ?+ W4 U% v) P
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
. I- t1 A2 w5 b& s; l夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.
- g! d$ a# l7 U1 o4 A2 O猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.7 y0 O9 z7 `& g/ F
就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.6 K$ l- ^" G" \, k# V& p2 K7 Y
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及
6 a# [0 S' j7 Y2 x那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。1 S" T7 T( U0 e/ {9 p
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.* B, [- @3 C) i9 S+ l
昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
) i. j, s/ S* ~+ E想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up. b& n2 b$ P# T0 d7 J% q. A! n
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild. 3 R# g2 | t0 \* ^
寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?( W/ v- y# o8 e$ k9 o, W$ A
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
2 a+ C7 z) n4 L! D0 j5 b; f迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
% ]0 {0 E& P; E6 u最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
# O4 t4 H3 V! ?. n" c多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
3 f; }* R# A" k" u3 |Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….* o- `& i# b/ M$ |( F. D) x
多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously8 d+ G+ X: Y& N1 @! t( u
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.$ F6 k3 f* r# D! f
多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, , S6 L6 W8 Z7 @7 y8 J* L4 p* k# \
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?; [* C2 F7 Y% N/ D, l, D1 f& j
多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
7 r) Z8 ~, L" O9 {5 j: { Y永难平息的泪% ~, V2 W7 y i3 B2 y+ |1 }8 d
每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes' M8 I3 K: m& r8 W8 H
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes., ^ F( j2 s2 o2 `9 l1 x- @* K* g
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
7 S" S; F {7 m$ i0 [让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
2 \0 f2 }) F9 ]* J, b( K. {& ^; F你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
8 |+ q2 F* _& D) ^. f3 C! n3 {一抹微笑;
1 z1 ^, S! r& N3 k8 L' B+ W一个手势;2 P: U, [- g1 p4 D: a6 G$ F
一片话语,
, ], Y7 e) ?' l% Q; A/ p7 ~2 f愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、, I O# M- |0 G; q
明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner* v& q( J& ~9 t; C- Z8 E; `
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.
7 ^/ A1 ]& Q3 N. [$ I5 @6 g这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
- ^! {( }+ s# q4 t( R也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..6 e2 X3 E3 f7 t1 N
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,2 t: K/ G3 R" h( e9 q% c- ]
我并不以为然。
: h* X8 a! g! f* C0 ~0 v可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed
9 t1 S3 K# G1 {1 w/ ], N& w* U慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .+ V# p# U( e! p" ^+ n
被一种情绪所左右,$ G, K9 W0 c: a; K) @, |
总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .! M; e3 h2 J+ \. p/ O8 X6 Y9 l
即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
. ~/ x2 p( k+ `( c0 d8 h5 z$ e也不问我是否喜欢你,
" H& p1 M3 d% ^$ b3 \对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
9 l; E3 |+ a0 V8 D- `' @; Q只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
; |* _8 I' Q9 x J# y0 O; z2 z3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you: U; ^. c* k. [$ e3 f$ K8 E
心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil
) `! p+ e- c. q# B然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere " i1 S0 c: J7 ] I
你的身影已化成一种氛围,
: H8 m1 g/ C( z# P% m9 ]- ~1 b, t记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.2 c2 V4 c- W, H- s
你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! . v7 a3 _7 g( @; }3 ]* B
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字" R4 z L( B- N; x
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,) U3 T( y% v% o+ v1 ]
一种声音,and your voice
( s7 o; ~, C& B3 N也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling., X" V" \/ ^, c$ ]9 |
掺杂著幸福的感觉。
" L" ?6 x/ j3 ^, B& a3 M与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land. C- N* o1 @$ P3 a7 a: g; U( M% P
象雪花般撒落在我的心田,
7 `: S. @( B7 Q. X倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
@& K" s9 E: i6 y. h, N( J纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。. q9 ]- z7 e) O; N# f7 l
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss# d- y7 P' G1 R3 y H! r0 W
有一个能够让思念的人,
% ~7 D! k" H) _- X1 C其实也是一种幸福。
. h0 J9 u* s g: r尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer. 7 Y" D% a" N; c, M/ I
柔柔的海风,# R% f: h4 W3 F* r2 {% h
甜甜的夏天。
1 Y8 H! T" ~% J; F( z2 f9 T一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
6 S; A+ X/ `/ {* Y5 Q4 W9 m只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.- H/ m. ~9 N! h8 D4 h
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
9 J1 p' K' r3 o2 e想和你有共同的情结,/ l2 y' \' E, N
共同的心愿。9 K$ T' T& v2 k. ]) P' [
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; w4 y6 U- j, p% t好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you* M5 X5 k/ e! e8 F! k/ I
一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together; s; ?! P0 U" U5 s1 S
或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film 1 H; O& s: D1 H9 B+ H7 m
或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.
/ f: C' e/ Q' }. a z0 {. I1 }『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?/ p% E( u3 R( F) k; ?; t. |( q
我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, . B! ~% W4 h5 b1 W- G q
浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
7 _1 s7 x& @6 ^5 |' \8 }或是轻轻的一吻,) P/ H- {+ n+ T1 p
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』
) y! E- a0 \8 B就足够了. That is enough.
1 ?& r2 C1 P _! d9 j这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago!
8 j; q2 O8 M2 U终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout." R5 e1 f9 F1 c, O7 [
萌出了芽,2 \+ B1 C0 u8 O8 W0 |+ z5 N
一如对你的思念,the same as my missing3 G4 [0 M& V% c
浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
9 U) _6 i. d( s4 e/ `5 y如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand* f0 F4 t) u6 d
能够牵著你的手,
4 i/ }) c* N$ ~8 F5 p" C那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.( M, V$ U* `" y# y* d8 B
让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. 8 {3 T0 \: S% k, h0 w
慢慢地细读,7 E2 Q- ]/ N W' ~! H" g2 K
我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
3 J0 ~. L7 t' s Q E在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me
4 y- {7 g0 h" @$ \1 V; P我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor
3 K1 t9 V5 L8 j1 [- q就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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