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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,/ t C$ ]. n7 C" k. M
,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
5 M' a3 C% J- e+ i# q零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running . ' |! w% C( D3 _( p9 o1 h4 [; P* }
现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name./ z" ?" ^$ T; j' X
梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.
! {8 f! v3 [/ c* O$ r! A* \, A眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
% m# {* I& e, }% B, p) r夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.
7 e& ?9 J6 b0 B7 ]2 ` g猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
* [* L- z. d" T4 U就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.
. _0 I4 Q. G- C/ W5 H+ z1 g我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及6 l% g1 K% y5 P. L
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。( R6 e' }6 \% M$ [
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
% X- d5 G( I! M i% h' _昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
7 b% t3 ^2 B7 {' t4 W( \- v. e想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
) p7 t7 p" `6 F$ F# m. ^最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
% d" j- D1 w. L5 U( l m Z# Y, q8 [寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?
6 P* z0 h/ G7 v- i( X1 `醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.2 K. i% M7 Y$ i# B$ T7 C) _# G
迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.7 i! d( _3 _. L% w( p" N
最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
! }# K3 c" O% z3 B( w多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?( s/ c; x+ V" x0 J/ L. m1 U
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….& @8 J* i2 C1 M6 o9 z
多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously. h t, M5 S) _/ o4 r
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.( ~, b0 Q6 K+ c, _, O! C% |0 D" p. d3 |
多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, 1 |. p+ h* {- n' L7 {
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?+ R ~; W0 d q. z5 p
多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!5 l( j% C7 j( s3 C- n" r
永难平息的泪, ?- ^/ F4 j7 u( Z
每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes
6 `/ V, Q8 F, P6 I8 e~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.3 m0 h9 \3 A7 I7 M
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
0 ^9 A1 e4 L5 G4 y% K3 n+ a7 _让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
+ J2 Z8 e( q) a1 p+ @你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul 8 v+ R" ?/ P" C; C/ N
一抹微笑;7 K3 a& v- y) Z. P0 o( p
一个手势;
% }$ s$ ?- @5 U* }* O一片话语,- w/ B$ U" h8 g8 L8 E9 Q# u
愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、
3 Q+ _4 w, v4 g( c4 L* f( m: K6 w明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner O2 `. _3 K/ a1 f
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.
+ [! i1 f, q, f( Y: f这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
5 V* `& b0 T/ u* K也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life.., T$ k7 w% n4 X5 S$ O% b( w4 B
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,4 X" x \, j. Z
我并不以为然。$ y) t% M: w) {8 y% T' R& z$ v) I
可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed 9 J& _3 p6 F& f3 [& ~5 R& R* b( c
慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .. P0 ?% u# T8 n4 [' |( m
被一种情绪所左右,
2 z0 U! x% Q. r3 F# m/ }总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
! ^' D" X- ~" f0 K: I" w即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
9 W2 h3 _+ E- d, x/ r: y* f也不问我是否喜欢你,
a( B$ {% \, j" a* C; a* e9 a/ Z8 g( }; Q对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.% }& t, d; |" O0 z/ A
只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
1 y5 H2 R; P! N9 u3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you
8 p4 [* x- Y& x7 a( m7 N心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil* y3 c* O3 o- J! L; {; N9 k. P: a
然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere 2 B# r" k- n0 C9 w! H9 d' R
你的身影已化成一种氛围,, Y7 l5 L3 u. {$ r' x
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.# P$ J- U% n! j& R; S5 u2 _7 i1 j
你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
8 z" _. X# A& ~随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字
( u q8 ~1 G- T" i0 P; H, a哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,
' N5 I7 m' Y3 l2 I. a一种声音,and your voice
, y4 ]. T! V) v也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
0 A: N* Y6 w, {! s, M4 X5 e+ h$ U掺杂著幸福的感觉。
5 b% W" H2 P' {6 j0 r; R$ a与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land# F8 h7 Q5 L- r( _
象雪花般撒落在我的心田,
3 p1 X# h3 s6 n% t' V! T倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
5 ~3 ^* b( [1 d& T% i纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。3 S2 _. ?4 A2 C: j1 ]6 K5 M( D
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss; ~. h7 K8 X' |2 S
有一个能够让思念的人,# `2 e) u" v Q
其实也是一种幸福。, c1 n4 |9 F( P
尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
2 t1 {, R( u: M+ \% X. c柔柔的海风,* {4 M( S X, @: _- i" H
甜甜的夏天。
& }2 p. A! W$ e& J1 x一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
7 m- ]6 _. p& h. w9 a- x只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.) N: u! A# [, @2 k' N/ B R- K7 I
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do., \2 E3 f) R/ n% J) j$ [# _
想和你有共同的情结,( O% M* | o' ?; \8 s5 h0 k" w8 D2 }' h
共同的心愿。" F4 y4 w, D4 i# y! w0 p
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E8 r! ~0 [# ~$ Q3 s好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
; R+ `0 A5 \2 {% l3 F Y一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together
% l7 j& J; V1 n& ?, o, n2 t. i或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film 9 ? q3 ^% E- B8 f# H+ N* n
或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.
3 ^' m* ^9 Y9 ]『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
; I) d3 r: p6 }我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, & y* U0 }2 X) z! m6 m
浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”3 p, X4 a/ [4 S' y0 u" C1 O7 u
或是轻轻的一吻,# e# ?( M+ O' d1 O. J
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』
X% @/ S* y( ^1 V: L7 l" i4 k就足够了. That is enough." e e+ o/ Z) V4 d- b
这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago!
, h0 a/ q$ F, R8 c- U+ b- K终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.$ {, _) F) o; e' w0 h1 E
萌出了芽,4 f/ [) P9 x/ }) V! B/ O J2 a+ q
一如对你的思念,the same as my missing. `5 c4 f- Z8 f8 ~ m
浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.* f. m; P1 p( j7 s* |
如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand
" V+ D. U( K& t h1 S$ z能够牵著你的手,) n P5 j% D$ \/ J1 r* i
那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
) z: `: n0 m" g& ?: c& K4 d/ h让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully.
. p+ o" t- c5 t' Z2 ^* A9 D慢慢地细读,
+ s6 d; _! y& M! G! x我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. 2 {2 K- o4 t) U) U q
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me , t' O! }8 l0 z7 u8 B3 o* U& P3 b" z
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor
$ D% n, W& C7 L, ?3 f0 Z0 V就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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