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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,* o3 E$ {( X( A# ~0 ^: m0 m+ R
,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
0 E! A. y' ^( H* `零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running . ( K8 y! t9 O0 J: ^$ W; Q3 k3 f: Q
现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.
# O& [! B$ m% B+ S2 Q+ v3 L梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.
% w* W2 u8 S+ ^9 H眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.7 p5 I6 d; V3 m6 T
夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.4 {" M( s$ x9 v2 E4 y: h: O, Q
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.% a& E. |) X% N
就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.7 x, A& x) S: P- C/ o% ^) T7 G
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及# h& Z: Z" h$ o4 i( Z* G) l' l
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
' u: f, y% k1 G" s1 ]/ V1 ]2 }& ^( g世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
, w) x, }5 e$ r. J5 k昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
$ N5 J' u S7 @想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up./ {$ }( K8 f3 W: s
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild. ' P9 @6 f# q4 b0 x' t" V O8 D' H
寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?+ s) i: `. E$ ?! S& h
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.& F& j# l) P! m3 M# R" m
迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.' }5 L0 C6 H5 C* h1 O) I; Z# R' c
最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
p4 w9 I4 e/ d C# Y多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
! |7 @1 c& O- y+ l' T# \2 |3 `) D+ CWhy I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
! q, E4 p* x, J& {9 A6 E多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
4 T6 G$ a# ~% g% C# W6 N* s8 e不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.3 w* m7 H4 S- m$ k: K( T
多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, 6 c* l. b$ C2 J; E2 X* L
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy? z* i& N* D! u0 c
多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!( ]$ {0 J/ M. B: t8 i, w
永难平息的泪
) X8 P" X8 ]" T" b6 h4 ^每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes$ L% k" y* ]7 J: M3 P |5 p& V
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
# H' e7 m" G6 ~* N2 ?9 D$ C4 ]当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
4 R; N% J( Q+ ?+ D# F6 R0 {让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动, t' a* K1 |* k. x) k; w& ~
你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
; ^6 ^, O' x+ o6 _: F3 {+ v# q5 F1 M一抹微笑;
: V3 b! a. o _9 Z$ g# e/ }6 ^4 b一个手势;
' [7 y- u* F* g9 C# C+ E; ?一片话语,
8 H3 R1 t2 T/ {' C! t愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、: U. M6 \: M+ z& O
明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner1 Q. W4 e( C# t0 F+ o5 r
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.) \* W3 |% ?( n4 _9 O q# ]
这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
% [% {2 i( F" ~$ Y$ S3 N也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..( L( X, ]4 i7 G ~6 Z
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
* C( N* o4 W) x* \7 P0 j我并不以为然。
- A |3 m+ D6 w! J- Z6 {可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed ; Y/ I9 F6 w2 |! \
慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .
! H% U. Z: F1 W- O# C被一种情绪所左右,
# d5 R) K5 p3 v; u; J8 W总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
5 g% ]7 E" X$ i* S, }+ F* X即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
! B8 @; b8 }0 z; k3 p也不问我是否喜欢你,2 M+ V. D6 r5 J7 R1 C# l" E! Q# }# L
对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
0 s) b3 C, o, r# d3 D只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
: K& H& a; I ?5 w! n" M$ [3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you; T3 W, F" D0 R" {, T% x: j& E
心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil* k: s- I& _8 C1 j W" `( a( J4 p
然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
! g. K$ w$ K1 u S' v你的身影已化成一种氛围,0 W% o2 R$ X, ~5 u/ F; z7 g8 f
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.* d, a, ~0 L. \+ R7 t
你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! 1 C5 z7 v7 I1 [! e" k
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字
6 x1 r, l/ j% X& V& h, _ \) X2 @哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,! H2 l! |5 c* H2 G6 Y: ]; h2 H
一种声音,and your voice
+ f& H9 [- G3 t9 e4 N' a也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.+ S' H2 G$ _: F( E& F
掺杂著幸福的感觉。
3 ]* w' \7 G4 n+ K7 g; s与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land+ p! |5 W. a8 s- O
象雪花般撒落在我的心田,: Y4 o9 Q9 k q9 o" _! Q: ~# \% g
倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
1 v, y/ b( Q! ]/ m+ F, p纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。. T0 e! ^$ b: L5 a+ {( ?
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss) w! p' Z+ k; D& S) r! n. Q( {
有一个能够让思念的人,
, q4 N; ?$ I/ s) S0 P& m其实也是一种幸福。1 ?( b2 }) i1 j. N7 P9 N, D( z/ j
尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer. " T0 y. e5 G0 v" K' k% ^" T0 W
柔柔的海风,
" E! J. D) B. b8 f- u8 u _, h甜甜的夏天。9 \8 ~+ {& L) A' ^
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy & @7 a& Z, m- C1 f" k: ~& \( i
只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.
0 L. O; \- V( c仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.4 c: q$ F1 t2 G4 h1 h: e- e, D5 H
想和你有共同的情结,
8 i2 @) x9 m# \$ l' P- J共同的心愿。$ B5 q5 R; o! ?) ` L
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you3 x# e5 N3 H/ q9 B4 u3 D
一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together" a$ X0 W# X& @( d$ ~! E3 o% T( a& L
或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film 9 T% }8 O& h; \/ ^6 |
或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly./ d0 q) K2 e; `6 ]0 X( d1 R) G
『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?! l' {7 O4 {7 V
我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, 0 u: ]# M/ z+ F* q$ q8 O, Y6 W1 W
浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”9 v. K% d$ I# g) O( H1 j
或是轻轻的一吻," k* w1 H6 r1 q5 I" t, k# j: O
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』
( ~5 U* n7 r1 L1 F就足够了. That is enough.$ Z/ v2 f6 \$ \
这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! " \7 k8 |. c' o
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.! P5 B" w" p; O* i6 m5 q# g! r
萌出了芽,3 u; N2 K) R1 a1 ]* S L
一如对你的思念,the same as my missing
6 q7 T! O! t6 S4 X) k浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.1 h) \+ V6 q' U N$ @. J% J
如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand$ {6 [5 v- v) r K; E, `" [8 g
能够牵著你的手,6 J/ ~8 i/ J: y
那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.$ @0 m$ O1 P- {% G/ d$ [, v
让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully.
. q ^8 E) T7 P) H. Q( M* U9 {慢慢地细读,
8 Y8 ~5 p+ C1 h我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
. m9 O2 o+ J# ~5 q# H( p在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me ! p9 Z( Y. L: U1 a& B- Q! R
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor 7 s2 M0 g0 Z+ v3 u! A2 E* Y- k4 a
就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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