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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
, i+ {9 D/ o5 t9 n1 ? F: `,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
, a8 F% |9 A7 q零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
& i8 n" l0 t O现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.% h$ \8 o' @5 y; F4 ?+ L
梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.% J4 |9 f: F$ D3 l# q' q/ r% M
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.: L; K( l! r( v' b& p: _2 d+ z1 c) g
夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.$ [( O& C$ Q/ ^
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.7 T* d# @- m) v# Q) A/ q
就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.4 f. w% `: o* R
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及0 x3 u( W4 O( z/ \
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
) B. _- c/ o$ Y4 m世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.4 y# X2 P1 I, m, F* V
昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night." u& f; F) w; h# J% r/ v; C+ u
想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
0 @& }+ d' R/ P x/ e最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
! j6 [4 m" H3 N3 k寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?7 k/ }1 E2 J) H, d* G; o
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.: I5 P, {; f, M: \" s5 o6 ~
迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
a+ m/ ^6 g8 @( B. N最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
' e2 _+ I" U; [& S y) g多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?$ b2 Q) c7 y4 e0 ]; x& u+ X0 k& `
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….' S1 q( W [# }; z5 }. \
多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously8 `5 h+ u8 U9 }+ Y$ G$ U( [
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
( x- c" B( l0 X& ^多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, , K0 b0 S, q) B. @/ u
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?/ S. S! E( W7 [1 P. A( q
多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
4 H" j. [# ~* v0 ?, q: o! T永难平息的泪
) s1 X5 S+ A. I6 v每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes
: P8 q& j, t" x! K" F& {~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.9 i# q7 i( B; z! ^7 Y
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
! I+ y# Y& N% v0 Y% b! Q8 k7 G& B让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,, P. X" r, d3 k! z
你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
: r" l7 v! \ o! \4 z1 A一抹微笑;: M; q& k3 B3 j. Y' J6 U
一个手势;
. [$ h" v, H2 Q一片话语,
/ X" ~. [5 ]6 W# u- u* }+ C愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、 H: j+ Y! `$ R9 s7 U
明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner
; w% n% K1 G' y) Q. Z心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.% d, {. H, _1 w
这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
6 i1 x$ W! c Y9 p2 v也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..0 ?) M M7 I* O) o4 L
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
! \% T$ k2 O5 e% D7 p7 S% t, ~4 O! B我并不以为然。7 p u' o# m5 k
可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed 3 ]3 M1 s/ E9 P& x' S z
慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .% V) B* ]! d7 U' o7 r% L) R
被一种情绪所左右,
* F5 F& Z& i* P7 S9 X* K y总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
/ r) K: C, T" U" K4 r; \即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
9 X! R2 v9 N7 \2 B1 K( k" Q也不问我是否喜欢你,
/ e; g1 b( H, P! U; U对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
0 J! A% w8 }/ x- N9 X/ O2 t只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you0 p! N7 T; \. \ |5 P! _ }2 @& b
3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you
, @; h9 X7 I0 n9 E/ s) @心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil+ m+ Q0 h! W% P g# S8 g' s0 t4 l7 ^
然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
! ?% x; E$ g/ u0 U- Q你的身影已化成一种氛围,$ Q) c7 S e3 E' @3 b
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.
3 r. @ Q i6 C4 o- S! X' \, p你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! $ u- D$ P3 V5 B) i" _" G% p5 f4 W
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字
$ P2 x6 B7 V/ S5 W* B哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,1 l5 s6 V7 f& z( j0 w
一种声音,and your voice0 \! m. t' i) q' y3 m% f7 k& E% K$ N& q
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
: J* m+ e0 h) x6 T掺杂著幸福的感觉。
1 u- S ]( q' v6 G8 w2 ~2 d6 @与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
' G, [( e6 i6 z! `象雪花般撒落在我的心田,
$ p8 B+ b6 o" [. G6 f' x) f, u倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
& [# u, X. O) ~8 x# j纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。' A: h7 e( \9 R" ^) A
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss
: O- _( k: m/ J. l: H" [- m有一个能够让思念的人,- o \/ \( V4 q4 v- k6 }
其实也是一种幸福。- I6 w$ j! }) ]* f& ]
尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
- j( a8 H4 o" p2 Z3 p- b5 M0 g柔柔的海风,% p% v" x' N! q. r, R' U0 A% P
甜甜的夏天。
0 O. b" v3 }% |( y! H1 X" |一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy 5 ?" O1 G9 l7 q( k( ?/ y
只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly. b0 f- Y% ^" V: V
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.+ C C# ^( c* Y& P5 \/ ~) f- z5 f
想和你有共同的情结,. L8 T6 [- r5 P( X+ G( w
共同的心愿。7 W6 [& g' Z3 ~+ T
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
) e2 d0 G) o/ T8 V G) C一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together* }) g% i1 }8 i
或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film
( f3 ]1 w# m" T7 P. Y或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly." V5 ^2 s0 j8 g" Y
『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
1 d e: c9 e# l9 r我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, * t: V/ p1 ?8 r* I% F6 R" o
浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you” E% W1 W7 l7 R
或是轻轻的一吻,' v: [4 R+ f# l- Q+ @
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』
9 \8 O w$ C! v$ o, n: [. Z \就足够了. That is enough.
) Q. W' a1 Z$ Q/ D9 t. Y% t/ d这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! 5 e6 s+ _! c% Q/ e, K7 u9 d: ^
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
$ ^2 a8 n5 j/ ]" z8 M0 r1 z: @' w萌出了芽,
) \3 h8 v, u. x: m9 v6 O一如对你的思念,the same as my missing/ E) M5 x1 i3 u- j) w0 @4 A
浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure./ R; H7 n% U# U, ~* E8 e
如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand
7 d1 Q4 x. R. _! v' w能够牵著你的手,
& c! I2 P3 {. @! r* c那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
, C- H& X; v; z( G+ G4 E让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully.
. U6 S8 d# }4 D0 t慢慢地细读,
7 Y7 q y3 z8 H8 U: J! X我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. 8 n0 y/ t2 _# y
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me
" ~- O8 M( i$ }% w我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor
( o) V3 {- [) E8 w4 h8 I! w2 u就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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