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每当说一句汉语的时候,我总在心里想英语是怎么说的.尤其看到汉语诗歌的时候,我突然想,翻译成英语还能保留原来的意思吗?所以试着译一译.
+ v. y+ S9 e$ k' k前边发了译文以后才发现有些大小写和语法错误.一点一点地改,很乱.所以再重新发一便:
" l E; k4 j* ?Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
( J4 ~. r; ?; Y. F0 c3 K/ BPartial leaves fall down everywhere,squirrels are busily running.
' a- z, I1 P5 e Current I, the same as one tear ago, the same given name, and the same family name., ?" U. ?# s& l7 z! ~0 J0 n2 \
The same hairstyle,the same bag,reserved laughing and talking.
9 l6 G2 D1 N) X; x7 z( y/ }Seemly added something in my eyes,or lacked something.
x$ V$ |- j- Q6 MSummer went so fast that I almost forgot those sweating night:+ h3 B; d; _" [ I! }
Cats often played at the whole hot night outside windows to get cool
4 l( K e. ^( Q6 {! e1 Dlike us many years ago,mindless self indulgence.% X$ Y: m+ S. y1 s ?
I often cherish the memory happened in summer and those people that make me raint even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming.
- U0 d8 b% ~4 p/ \The emotion and the carma only is a dream.8 k1 S- ~( a3 ^3 ]1 S/ F8 ~
That shoudn`t happen to meet each other last tenderlt night.
3 r8 t9 G u- }8 q, ^. z: GI want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
) ^( h P/ Y; v9 `/ W1 c# a' CI am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.% k$ U2 N0 l2 C" N7 l) M# D1 S
In this lonely world whom I can step inside love to?
/ M' F- N' C/ V' @9 t# ~8 K) `- [Intoxicated then feel cold,3 r: |1 Q+ ]! O2 A; _$ N% @) h
the labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
' A3 m3 y; y1 W: y( i( K, xI am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
* v) @/ y; O# D# b: H# ^: Z6 XThe amorous man to whom you gave your soul?
7 S, A" a; K" d/ r1 BWhy I am always hoodwinked!
! a& M) l z7 ]5 G, G' R. e7 MI have told myself many times cautiously
( y. U5 ` b; C( }, Fdon`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
4 \1 [1 G( R/ t4 Z1 w; t0 `- HThe amorous women always get drunk by desolation.
# t" d) e- W! y% {8 M5 YWhy can`t I take it easy?
' H d _. P5 p* [How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
4 _( r" W6 n: f# `4 JWhen the quiet night comes; u& P5 |5 P# l
your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
9 r/ j9 j" g2 q/ b u2 @) W2 K7 WThe greeting when you met me made my heart in touched unaccountably.
, m: H! E" i2 F7 ^/ KYours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul,0 n q( ] l/ `
light the dark corner in my mind.
3 x1 L) t% }4 ?" }0 w8 eI feel a bit of cozy.
( L5 j* s+ ^9 C* ~: |The deep attached to you in a twinkling1 x, [* n: L* W+ R! \- C1 [
maybe is the most light spot in my whole life.. ]: o, ?! T- \$ l) `: A
I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
. {9 v3 P3 d8 sbut accompanying with the time passed
7 Z Q3 D7 O6 m% VI am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion,
! Y7 e9 N- ~6 `7 T qalways feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly.
2 _, u Y) I Y! Z, xWithout asking if you like me or if I like you" K: B. f1 Q( T6 S: F
only feel gracious for your existing,
- Z( U1 J6 t9 H f+ }onlt want to do something for you.
! k& g' `+ q+ xEvery time when you meet me1 h: J6 o8 m8 |3 c2 b# v, j- @5 C2 Y
the sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil,( k5 Q# U: b' O! B( b% h9 O. a, {
but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere8 B( o& p& y9 j# d" I% [2 }
That live in my heart.
4 d. y1 s/ u4 ~- vDo you know your name can suddenly come into mu mind at anytime?
9 F* S1 M7 T/ s( U6 Z% P2 v/ zEven only your flying clothes` corner when you turn around, and your voice; P/ [6 h/ f8 W- b6 S* Q
make me gently distraught with happy feeling.8 z3 y4 o, M0 r7 }: f) Z
The scene that met you prinkle in my heart like snow on the land
: e. B2 F% @5 \6 E) j' Ssuddenly flurry that all are the love to you.4 Z% K# G1 w7 z/ f0 `# w
Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss,5 P7 u; e3 @% W. W& s
especially on the day, the gentle sea breeze and the sweet summer./ {7 N) I- ~1 @! L+ b5 J5 y2 n
Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy * n! _' \* g8 t' r0 v+ ]- l
only waiting for you quietly
, P- R0 D F( gjust let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
! O; N1 B$ g0 U0 M o" TI really want to ramble in the small rain with you
: A1 `# C ]6 Y. J( g. Sand enjoy the rain washing together
! m0 \- n3 k, l. k F2 Bor rush to a film2 l7 F x# u8 j' v
or listen to a music quietly.
& A6 Y# o2 |* ^( ^5 c' \Whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
/ v8 p( B; f S$ p, ~6 U3 L' d1 OIf we embrace ,dance,and gaze to each other,
! I* O+ y8 Y* v4 Z6 H* j) j6 k; Qsmile or gently kiss then say: I really love you".
2 D9 Y N# a8 ]$ i# RThat is enough.6 _* d3 n4 [% ^% b- u
Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago,
8 r, \% T- ]9 o% M6 @! Z& }finely it deeply rooted into the earth in the season and sprout,! ?0 H% U) @, a
the same as my missing.
; L1 n. {0 M0 c2 IIt comes a little bit of verdure.
" k$ ~; m6 p5 L9 u: ^( A1 x$ S$ ?If, If some day I can touch your hand, + }" E K4 a [2 d( A
then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.( E! G2 Z# Q$ ^
Let you touch me gently and read me carefully.: f, X" e. R0 K& N @# l) Q
I will enjoy your mild emotion through your hands with my heart and soul.
9 {, ^( A9 p: A9 sAt the moment you reach out your hands to me ,
; a5 [* V2 @1 b; q0 O) ] \ S$ @then I will have all care and ardor.
1 G! ^. t8 T. Y. {1 \, d1 fShall we walk arm in arm?
7 i6 x4 v, l2 M0 u( S9 b3 t6 @呵,太晚了,连检查都不想检查一下,有没有打字错误了. |
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