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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
- x4 \( n2 R* P/ q6 Z,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry. $ d# U' i4 w5 u. O% \
零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
) Y' \# T! r, @7 m" Y现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.% J8 b- z! }& s0 `, v* ^) _" q
梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.
! D8 X* _0 r! ]2 _8 h4 @眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
9 Z- A5 |' }' [! i& `+ s夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.
3 e& f6 A( n; s1 q( K! ?8 ^猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
- | p: m! p8 h6 H; D( K! d* O, c就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.6 X0 @5 n2 }7 ]* u( l7 X7 R+ o
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及1 B4 W% \0 p, m- B, @! O6 [: P
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
; ?. u. O& z) K' d: V5 g5 T世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.) s" Q- z9 `+ o
昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.* s1 c7 o; z/ m9 F
想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
, H! i% Y! T, w7 f' P) C! ?9 R" u; j X最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
: p. w# H8 E6 L6 Y' ?+ n+ o3 v寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?
, D0 R* Z# ]+ Z% |* G1 z: s醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
1 l7 G$ c+ o2 j" b6 F- o迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
. `) i9 n- m; l! N( m最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
% x, p; E! w( ]! S% _0 m- g3 P多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?7 ~7 V F |/ J! Q' V- H9 l5 [5 [
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
$ i! s7 d, `, L7 u+ v多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
% k5 n4 H- ^, a5 `% _不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.* G$ O9 {3 b' P% a/ q F+ s
多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, # d3 z5 D4 R2 a D1 G
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
' G2 T, q2 }+ l( `多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
4 F8 z% o2 }- R% [0 D6 Q2 Z( r永难平息的泪
2 T1 T& w$ s# r7 q' X9 s每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes
# @" {! u6 s# z1 K- q- m~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.( S+ K) m7 i) b
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
; {9 U" p: E9 e' c! k让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
; I$ H$ x+ Q! h8 @你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul ! |; n7 @3 f2 m( u2 W1 A& `; E
一抹微笑;0 A- J' U E4 @8 g8 X2 ~; }
一个手势;! }! `& c# o: H- ~% {5 I
一片话语,
/ l5 b/ G& t! K愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、# @" b; y& [2 ?% _' M
明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner& D; @- k& l5 b
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.3 K) M* z; ?) k8 Y- L$ |( ?7 f
这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
! k, G3 I1 J( P也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..
' Z# f# J. _% o! C4 \% _起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,5 D7 Q, _' x8 n$ q( g
我并不以为然。+ a9 a' e) ]! X* `. H
可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed
( w3 j2 N9 J) m/ w+ v" h3 }' f慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .% k7 ]$ Z/ `' F1 I6 o% T
被一种情绪所左右,: G' ^ R( k: ?! M0 m- z1 R% U
总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .' ?, G3 k/ b: x) \6 O
即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
1 y+ B$ W0 L. ]2 n* X也不问我是否喜欢你,, M _" q5 D. c8 [
对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
/ m4 a* g0 k3 c2 K2 A+ b/ P" S$ @, M只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
+ n1 T+ t3 U- x8 y1 C0 @5 t4 Q3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you
" @3 N% Q: m) s `# b; u) g* W9 r心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil/ v$ Y/ H4 ~6 ~" z7 O! P2 [
然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
4 u4 x W8 i/ R2 n你的身影已化成一种氛围,
( b" Y! C0 C/ n& L. s. M1 A+ J记在我的心间。That lives in my heart., [! t7 ~8 Q J( r8 B: P
你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
$ G* A6 G, }; |" ?+ {随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字) ~- e7 n3 D6 @; \
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,) w- n# U9 d; q% e" h; i3 S
一种声音,and your voice( @5 D$ Q7 m. J7 U' H
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.' ?( x# X P* `8 k* P
掺杂著幸福的感觉。
?: ^4 K6 J' ?7 P与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
0 g. K6 e' f3 k; D; k" B2 g# z% F) h象雪花般撒落在我的心田,7 U8 S' z& I" _
倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you., M7 p( g3 \6 a8 [" ] V
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。- {1 Y1 L" a, |" N/ c
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss9 L, ^3 J0 d% F! K
有一个能够让思念的人,
6 N3 C. W, y5 X% C. L- U& l! `. h其实也是一种幸福。
6 N" J% G: L7 b尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer. ' r5 c; O' t' S- J1 [& w$ y! j
柔柔的海风,
6 H: Q6 W5 f9 S: `$ \+ d甜甜的夏天。
. N% f" ]: d) J% [一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy 0 |0 f+ v( U% k, u! V# }, L
只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.
( {- O1 }; m$ |& U& t) V- p仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
' j7 {9 Z: B3 q4 d9 j/ p* ?+ T想和你有共同的情结,
& P- \, H! v0 Z! ^共同的心愿。8 \0 U# ]3 m5 R) t) D
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you2 m$ M% n `8 J4 I. m# X
一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together
) W; o& a7 i" A4 x+ X7 S+ L! @或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film
+ S. I7 O6 I' z" C1 J7 d或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.
) |; ?+ d- f B3 d- _8 u『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
% d ^& L$ w$ f: u我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
4 O& {: H- B$ A) L- p; a浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”3 }9 s7 ^& U/ b( w
或是轻轻的一吻,
& x! {; `, X9 D7 O0 y再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』4 O) a' H3 O& q& a
就足够了. That is enough.
2 P6 k% u/ G" E: z) A0 [, _$ z# |这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! . b0 S* A* A+ K4 ^: g
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
2 V g8 c' f9 Z" w萌出了芽,
( f" N. U W4 _" e( t+ d# c* _一如对你的思念,the same as my missing
. _% U4 q* j* U7 K9 C( Y浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.& B# z1 I9 w1 M* L' ?
如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand
6 U4 ]* P `4 v能够牵著你的手,0 _8 I3 s, H1 O; H0 z
那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely. z2 N: v& @7 k8 G' O
让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully.
4 D; G( h( ~2 L" ]/ o n+ f慢慢地细读,$ A9 o. ?0 a# I- t. z! G
我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
0 N6 r/ z2 H! B4 s在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me # S; K E$ l3 b4 j
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor
7 E- \" U) ]& p- H7 R6 S就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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