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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,6 z/ C* y- Q9 G6 B- H" s9 c
,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
/ F4 I5 {. I! N% a+ u* H零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running . 0 [3 ^- X' D+ H* H$ k
现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.& C+ ~& ^5 G* g% b2 |1 q" g
梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.3 x V1 w! t1 |, ^0 H% W
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
2 y _9 M1 M, J8 D夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.5 j! @2 U( F) ]6 M( E% R
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
5 ]$ W3 `2 v& k9 C( d* q$ a& S就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.& K3 j% t( M! \
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及3 M5 I; l \. a
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。2 b2 a$ ]) @/ v2 a) Y# j X* O
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.5 F+ a/ o2 A0 [ r
昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
$ e6 W# e& [% s& I; o想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.. I1 X2 o- h2 m) d+ \7 N; ]9 w
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild. $ ^6 L1 ?& ?7 w" c, R
寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?8 q1 K1 J6 H! L# ]" ?+ G
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
3 v& h: |8 Q7 X( N3 n+ {0 P& `' l迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.' D, o" ^1 n/ S0 v+ C
最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
6 H3 R: a( S2 U: I多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul? e# V+ j, {8 {7 u
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….+ |: U- w& Z4 n- Q, Z/ Y2 ]
多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
4 H& n3 ^7 _; @, _: [& X9 b不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.4 P9 w" b9 z/ V6 J# F) v6 U: X& J" ?
多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, 2 w* [3 h, o7 u4 ]0 p9 I5 @+ r6 o) T/ b
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?7 p1 v; q! S8 I. @
多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!9 ?# o' j V z, n
永难平息的泪
|+ O$ n' v: P- }每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes1 q* ~/ o# D& F
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
9 O' [9 p' U1 x s( P4 @& k当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
]" z% ~$ T- f9 a- }3 j: }" D让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
) d& v+ F. M+ M& o1 M7 a- z你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
- h; m4 l3 A" h' G( b+ G4 F y一抹微笑;
T+ A3 y4 g# B& e/ S' [一个手势;; P' Z5 T' k/ J* W Y) s9 L
一片话语,
, E$ P, R( q; M0 s4 W; n, P* r愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、
( b: \& D7 J; G6 w" |3 a* O7 r明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner5 M) H# d E. W( @5 h, |
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.
) @3 J( B4 ~/ Q/ K* R/ u- V$ ~这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling' r9 p+ ?# Q+ O6 a; M. p- X# J: b4 u" d
也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..
* n3 h3 F- ?' ~6 O. p& j起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,4 _* G" [0 T, f4 N) Y
我并不以为然。
- _# Z" l% {0 J; P R p可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed + B7 y2 C' e2 l" G5 V
慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .
8 [: S5 D* S, ?2 ?$ T' P% Z被一种情绪所左右,( {. U( W& A. n' {: h+ G2 M: {# I
总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .$ Q! ~, G2 B' I# c
即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
- Y" W7 `, N9 A8 n. I也不问我是否喜欢你,) ?$ a5 V$ O# Z5 v0 n$ i7 ?- ^
对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
6 r2 k) K, H1 i6 q; r只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you; x9 ]8 j" y! _$ `7 I
3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you# l. a" d2 ] q4 ]! }( r
心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil( J/ \3 U3 A5 h, k4 K# S3 `
然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
+ K* M6 r5 d2 w6 R U7 {7 y2 Q, S你的身影已化成一种氛围,
6 O ~2 z. W- _0 a/ u4 E0 N记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.4 B; A0 E& S" }: j- N* B) q) E
你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
- v% C1 d8 N( J, R) a随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字
# N8 Y3 I3 V- L$ A/ B哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,! w/ r, n5 C, u( ]- x
一种声音,and your voice
4 c; R+ h8 u5 S: j也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
) Q3 S! k5 e* Q- G6 ?. S掺杂著幸福的感觉。
4 p" [: _/ R5 l" d* N0 ?2 N% _与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
8 `5 k O: Z* E9 X" R" B象雪花般撒落在我的心田,1 o: a0 z/ w& v/ W' W
倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.$ R, R% h; R# P' O
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。% n* n7 F. ~8 _3 [! W0 l0 d# b6 t2 D
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss
) q: ]0 |/ B2 o7 p% N有一个能够让思念的人,8 y. R7 V3 ~2 f' Q3 x
其实也是一种幸福。3 r4 G8 F; e+ I) t1 s3 u, d+ x4 J
尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
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甜甜的夏天。! R2 f2 H: f! U% k K
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
8 K3 q/ z+ U$ A% K. e7 O7 S1 M只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.$ J- n; J/ K5 @9 O9 k
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.( k6 ^% H( k! f4 W8 ]" l- n
想和你有共同的情结,
0 J9 t3 |* b' {! d, B8 N) G- L共同的心愿。
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1 V+ Q' w( I+ g好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
. h: ~; W$ C- B5 z! |9 f+ K# \一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together
, U5 B8 | Y8 L; x! {: y% }* F0 N6 b或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film & ]# Q$ l/ X1 t8 \9 F8 D% A
或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.
* \! i% y: @- j『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?: S* y7 q( u1 b# P3 C2 ?# ]" W
我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, m( b4 g4 H, z' a: \
浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”7 T0 }: H( i7 g0 }; F6 ]
或是轻轻的一吻,
; Q. }& n; V' s$ T$ t5 J" s2 s再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』
, n* g$ T7 e/ t: ?# S就足够了. That is enough.
& {' e1 _+ d+ v1 k这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! 6 r0 ~, \* T# W- i! R
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
% b+ @: M: k# P+ j g1 {2 D萌出了芽,
7 D; {; J) |7 j! H" E3 R, U! }一如对你的思念,the same as my missing# e% u) v E- J8 Y" |' s
浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
1 M6 z, u& ]+ m, ~3 ]% A" D: A如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand, w- K: d; F0 l8 p
能够牵著你的手,
! ^1 T' T4 _9 S那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
, D& i* Q6 l2 ~2 b0 z- l让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. * G0 |! q5 w* r; P, q
慢慢地细读,3 I l5 c/ o: z7 h
我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
$ G4 P* ?$ ~+ Y' G7 X在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me
' ^! G/ ^. q. I0 A, D我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor
) g9 c& \; |% a7 o, Y+ ~就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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