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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了, j# X: y, y A, S0 |+ l7 z
,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry. ( x. X9 g1 v$ L. H# S
零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
& ~4 x8 L/ M# K% l1 }现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.
4 L* o4 z q% S9 t6 Q; m梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.
: _. @5 n/ J/ X6 ?* N8 y/ j眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
7 k4 p& {9 G- S5 ~5 f夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.8 s: d5 p+ l. d( N) S- U! Y$ x
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
/ ]) ]$ b3 V7 ~, t, h0 C [; N就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.6 e: O1 m$ i% A
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及# W5 t& _* P# y, j2 j# q( A9 @
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。9 S7 W& z% P' ]# \
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
( i# {3 z: \% X: h5 { L1 B昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
) q8 k, M6 M8 X4 i2 k, s+ K想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.! f' C9 f t. E5 m
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild. $ B2 B4 f/ f- r, D! C0 E) Y
寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?
- z9 Z* K h5 W& w* {醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.1 Q R$ b' P8 ]# J
迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
! X$ P, [9 f! V/ W/ Z# f- c& T) L( Q最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have." m# y! I/ W3 w9 t& h- F- V4 l# g9 E& S
多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?' y7 f) z+ M4 g8 A2 g+ e
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….. ?- G6 [. J) G9 S; y
多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously2 a( M' G1 S* f' B0 S" |) S
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.2 i5 m" {" j5 |# j& B/ A- Z( L; m
多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, 5 ]" ^1 Z* H [$ D! K
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
5 r+ Y. }/ T" _5 |4 z( d多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
0 u! @# U3 L# D. \. y+ L永难平息的泪
/ v! X7 D8 c; ]" U: f每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes0 J1 `' a. B: y7 G2 @" z
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
; k: w* `! Q! C3 f1 V当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.; `& q$ i# d; x6 Q& S: L" N' [: z
让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
% o+ Y) s. l, }. V7 B你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul . g# ]2 Q7 I) i& ^
一抹微笑;6 S& J. \! @8 _) U R) A. N1 d
一个手势;
& K9 G6 `5 _. L" |/ G$ ~- U: `一片话语,+ P) u% g+ i4 ~0 X
愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、
! f/ f" T$ t$ r1 {. H明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner
/ G6 n! R' j7 a8 G$ ^) I心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.5 T% `7 O; T- U r2 U7 _' h4 d, K
这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
& p3 U9 E' f! c也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..% _& v# d2 R9 @3 D
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,# T0 T, }6 e. ~
我并不以为然。
. H5 I$ m" w6 \9 V& c可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed
* r" e- c* D& `慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .
+ r, P# q, ~6 V: h& u+ K被一种情绪所左右,( Q8 T2 K5 Q& o$ T0 T' c
总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
0 ?) V4 y, n6 a( X0 F即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
+ f O1 W8 P7 t5 i# |也不问我是否喜欢你,: c A8 i2 J: N; w) a4 }
对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing. @1 Z0 K: V1 ^: A) n
只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you4 t/ n) M, Q% _# {; e. g" U
3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you2 h* M& Z* k: s9 P+ @9 J
心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil
- M: w3 n9 x+ b- w) K+ h, K然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
" r: I# Z8 i, K% G Y1 W你的身影已化成一种氛围,
% u' @' P& b) [% j记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.
2 _' K! D( `+ V6 j# t, \你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
, D3 o1 q/ Y$ p1 v* z" z随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字6 t; h2 \9 ?; V# C6 ^
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud, w3 Q1 P; D5 y r+ E$ u% B+ N! m
一种声音,and your voice
2 ]2 \% \( ]7 u7 y# b/ l也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling." T3 a6 p. e3 R
掺杂著幸福的感觉。6 G F) a6 {% ~, K& P) g r& `7 `8 b
与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
. N- z- r' w I3 n0 Q$ Q# D1 `3 j' O象雪花般撒落在我的心田,) D ^; ?. H p8 L1 n5 _
倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.7 m) K Y8 z" x0 D7 O" I) m
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。1 {! n6 B3 {. W, K# U* f8 e$ O% h
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss
6 E, J7 b* N1 H有一个能够让思念的人,8 G$ O, [& `5 o/ I2 D
其实也是一种幸福。7 g7 z1 B8 b1 E( Y" f
尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer. ) E: z1 Y: r" q9 n& `2 X8 z# H
柔柔的海风,
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+ y0 H1 ~8 G0 V一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy ; N/ Y& R j6 W" c! P6 r# a' ~4 E% B
只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.8 {4 }4 k1 N' L# s+ ~3 r; e
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
8 E! w' R% b) {( t想和你有共同的情结,
, U# D$ G! z4 P% {( o/ f共同的心愿。
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
/ Q G: a7 G3 K' k一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together
3 E$ B2 `3 Y& b或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film
! [* M5 \" }( ^0 Z `, j! o" H. A( Y或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.! M( G5 u- L# v# @9 ]
『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
0 X8 T$ B" q! ^我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
8 M( W3 x/ h' @/ s: m浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
s4 a8 R. v$ _; v2 ~8 x$ j5 u或是轻轻的一吻,+ n+ U5 p u* L( v
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』: n' t8 @, |$ {6 l) Q
就足够了. That is enough.
6 t8 N6 j2 M+ m$ f5 X3 Y5 f这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago!
4 h2 ]9 ]' M$ F' }* G9 v终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.1 v1 R2 @0 n9 K& @7 k
萌出了芽,+ Z6 w2 b0 G1 e4 h7 y8 n
一如对你的思念,the same as my missing `* y5 @9 M& v! @8 E; j U
浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.' e: \6 |$ ?4 p# A& W" t
如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand
6 u& g. Y$ F, i/ }' P能够牵著你的手,- T- g) K T; U9 X* ^$ A0 _
那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.$ V) D( @" N# u
让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully.
2 ^! I8 g Z. h8 s; P8 H; d0 j9 } x慢慢地细读,; ]& P8 q6 D8 x
我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. ! |6 W+ l' T! f o6 K" V7 |
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me 5 Q$ |) v4 H. e( g7 ~
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor ) L, ?3 U; F1 g! P A; w1 J/ {9 s
就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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