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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
% A3 b0 H6 e- Z3 I$ K,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry. ; V8 x/ m6 l8 b
零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running . & A" F" P& M, I- O3 C
现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.* T& ]' Y3 n. i5 B
梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.
1 D- {2 C' n6 k6 t. P I% \眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
/ z8 i& w8 ?0 F& i3 g夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.
8 P. i1 \ T* `& ~) s8 ^5 z. D猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.0 V+ ? k3 |) N( h/ A) t) M
就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.
# s- A# V8 p- S我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及+ V/ ?2 F# ?2 @) N# C O
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。. Y& F# H6 V& u8 z# w
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream./ F9 H1 f/ D6 h: {. G# ]) E2 E8 z
昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.1 n3 H& R+ }8 K8 k6 l. N1 Y* D% ~
想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.5 z5 K2 }3 M L: V' f- x
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
+ f( l5 @8 \ K0 _6 e x0 o寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?4 N; @( d, f7 R4 H* p/ A
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.( T& \/ n7 I6 s5 a2 E7 z. S0 a
迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
9 u8 u( O4 p" m) A最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.& z7 `. a( m& Y, o; ]
多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
' c# C# ?6 Y' t3 L3 e& GWhy I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
( I: y. B& ?* B多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously# m0 z/ R+ O/ c T" `* \3 N
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.2 X& \9 n, ~; X) Z* E N
多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation,
, z" s$ D1 n$ a* T6 ]为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?, j- F/ n ]' u( o3 ^
多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!0 E- c! D0 {: j# m
永难平息的泪* z; k4 I' O% y5 q: S
每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes
# @7 U' G, M7 ~% p5 _~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.. J5 W* c# z) ~: |! `
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
- S' U3 f; S G4 x( `让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,) E! l; {. L+ v$ r! K
你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
" _. i+ o7 G; u. l* L, @一抹微笑;
0 Q& E1 S. {& j8 E& K; w+ y6 o- y: H一个手势;
' j% O9 i. {1 j- l一片话语,
+ w# [) R% Y7 d愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、; J3 f8 ^! n5 X0 z5 a# s& }9 n" L
明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner
4 a/ Q6 x9 H4 O心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.
- w1 Z$ o9 Z7 l5 n4 U+ j- d* K这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
8 q8 E1 F Z: x& |2 }1 K/ f" ^1 W也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..# C3 |# {3 g8 ~1 ]
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,) d p5 o# K' |+ \( r) c
我并不以为然。$ ]# X; _' b2 Z/ a9 G9 |
可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed
4 U9 x9 ]* u6 E! D- q( E) N9 F9 d慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .% @9 b( ]8 I/ J. R$ K1 _
被一种情绪所左右,
7 C3 W; M7 ?6 i+ E& `* y3 x- ?- y总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
5 ?1 l% g$ T4 Q" }4 Z( S即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you' h8 I3 s8 r. e( K' u
也不问我是否喜欢你,9 x7 Q. D$ ^ W& m* v' h
对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
! v& }5 i+ K5 Y, X8 B6 b只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
+ V5 }+ ?3 G( w. U! f% T3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you
4 P- u: k, @! `) I9 M2 P# q心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil
1 l/ \& V1 d3 J: g然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
, Q; f; Y E: [! J5 k4 `: n你的身影已化成一种氛围,
8 Z* Z' q4 D! K! ^记在我的心间。That lives in my heart./ W& v2 C9 @8 ~1 R$ l0 x/ }$ l. ~
你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! % \2 q4 G8 y7 [1 W
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字4 |" J: u ` K
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,
% L& t2 u/ d3 T b一种声音,and your voice, {8 |# {5 o3 p! y& Y( S2 {
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
! i \. ~* e. C% ?掺杂著幸福的感觉。; j- c0 S3 F2 D
与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land% ~) U4 l. D4 c9 a
象雪花般撒落在我的心田,
: ?0 n6 G1 J1 E! N6 V8 N倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.) {- `! A2 O6 x0 C
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。) K$ l! O: E/ t$ w8 [
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss
4 U" h5 l3 _) S/ u, i; B有一个能够让思念的人,
* P& W# D8 n) \; T3 E其实也是一种幸福。
5 X8 T. }7 ~6 Q尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer. ( j/ e3 D" L8 a- T
柔柔的海风,
, T0 c8 Y) y" j9 `甜甜的夏天。) I" c, E% ~+ s# t2 ]7 _8 [
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy & _" n! t) U4 _# Y S
只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.# t4 F4 e% Y* Y. |
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.7 p" o4 U8 t+ ]& u6 G
想和你有共同的情结,
+ A( k0 {+ V9 _) W/ c共同的心愿。
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
$ A" A+ U4 M+ v) ?, q; b, T一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together
' c; {9 ` [$ |# j, q' D$ e或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film
; r) }2 c9 D, f3 u" i5 b& T或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.
& A4 `1 t! c, z『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?. P& c0 B* v3 m/ z& }
我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, - \4 r, U6 E" ]& R O4 H7 u2 k+ m
浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
, _% d4 ]9 B: y5 _/ t2 r# u% f或是轻轻的一吻,
- b- N \2 v1 R0 S, w2 U# V1 z再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』: n1 P8 L, b' w; @8 u( N3 }
就足够了. That is enough.0 ?% `! J5 i. d {
这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! . Y ~- q4 O! L8 y3 H
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.' ?6 y) s3 Z6 j& z) ~
萌出了芽,* }4 N% D6 j/ V$ [5 \! _
一如对你的思念,the same as my missing
, _0 p5 l2 A: B4 E. t' n8 L浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
1 q' [/ g% g% A: x- D$ a" Q$ l1 ?7 t如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand
5 |% t) Q4 z' k5 m* u, k& p- t能够牵著你的手,5 @0 ~ z; f2 [0 r4 X1 k: d! G6 ` W
那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
8 B4 G& E2 @; {" l; Q4 Q让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully.
/ y# R) ^+ b# f* ~* ?9 [% \$ [) R慢慢地细读,4 z0 K! u% m7 c' o d# w
我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. ( Z: a6 o. \% u ~5 `9 N
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me
( f# X& @( G7 y& \我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor
& |2 t$ L* {3 `! t+ k# r就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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