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每当说一句汉语的时候,我总在心里想英语是怎么说的.尤其看到汉语诗歌的时候,我突然想,翻译成英语还能保留原来的意思吗?所以试着译一译.
! r1 d( \$ B& \6 ?; P* A前边发了译文以后才发现有些大小写和语法错误.一点一点地改,很乱.所以再重新发一便:
; ]/ {' _6 f" x- n- v- `; l/ {6 cEarly morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.9 Z, {3 G( U) i, C p
Partial leaves fall down everywhere,squirrels are busily running.) M9 C: D9 n0 V7 T- M
Current I, the same as one tear ago, the same given name, and the same family name.
3 l2 t' u6 T! \& {0 dThe same hairstyle,the same bag,reserved laughing and talking.# w& _; T+ {) `( Z& o0 g
Seemly added something in my eyes,or lacked something.8 [3 H( T i9 l
Summer went so fast that I almost forgot those sweating night:
$ y: K$ Z$ j/ GCats often played at the whole hot night outside windows to get cool 5 \1 m0 H" ^! u6 D
like us many years ago,mindless self indulgence.. Q6 _' z3 i: ]5 F. ]* Y3 h0 S/ U0 p( L
I often cherish the memory happened in summer and those people that make me raint even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming.* j& q) w& Z1 l
The emotion and the carma only is a dream./ a+ V8 i5 a! L+ C! x
That shoudn`t happen to meet each other last tenderlt night.: q4 h) y; v( g
I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
7 |8 w$ c9 R6 y& DI am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.% r$ R2 I. G) M) R, }
In this lonely world whom I can step inside love to?
( y# c) X3 `, f( M9 u9 f" I3 @Intoxicated then feel cold,& f# w( V1 Y4 ?) s4 J/ F0 P; _! E
the labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.: o0 v. {% q/ V. @& G/ J
I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
" V5 d, ?9 E9 f% h/ I! t9 A. @% _" rThe amorous man to whom you gave your soul?: k* ^4 \3 K- X( B/ k7 z( A( }; p* v
Why I am always hoodwinked!
+ k, {/ Q. b' D$ X+ m1 eI have told myself many times cautiously
+ P% {* ]% t, u. C) Fdon`t fall into the spoony whirligig.5 J0 j+ U( s( P @4 Q
The amorous women always get drunk by desolation.+ S8 o# o2 s* c6 _- k
Why can`t I take it easy?
- K0 ~6 l. F) w8 u ?( OHow endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
( }- x8 @! U& C8 BWhen the quiet night comes
9 N! p0 Z: f- g$ Ryour figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
, C* M/ V! M5 \1 `! QThe greeting when you met me made my heart in touched unaccountably.
" j4 i0 m$ ?$ x# [$ x1 o8 G! @* K& ]Yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul,( D! S' q- [% X9 |7 x
light the dark corner in my mind.
, D0 u$ f+ x1 M9 r7 VI feel a bit of cozy.; m. w2 P) `; h9 @
The deep attached to you in a twinkling3 C- h+ _* w+ z, `6 Z+ v
maybe is the most light spot in my whole life.
9 ]$ C$ J8 h/ }. _7 CI didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
8 j2 v/ p$ f; {2 x fbut accompanying with the time passed
0 d1 n+ G& D; S/ m: K6 FI am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion,7 T( E/ E$ ^6 O( s7 w* ?7 c& H
always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly.
! h' g( J c7 E4 L6 i/ Z# O1 E- wWithout asking if you like me or if I like you: J8 v( t8 u8 D. A4 a" Q2 L1 ]
only feel gracious for your existing,
1 D( s% Q* @' q2 O9 P- i: f, ~onlt want to do something for you.# h4 h- R) z ]! ^0 [, ^8 }1 R
Every time when you meet me+ h& Q" R* T% T3 O
the sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil,
, J2 D5 i" G7 q+ t+ {# Lbut I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere) ^! `4 S/ A' W9 w" Z
That live in my heart.
0 C1 B% X( B' j0 f' YDo you know your name can suddenly come into mu mind at anytime?
$ H) |5 B* \3 a! iEven only your flying clothes` corner when you turn around, and your voice) m0 C8 A4 V$ Q2 n
make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
, D9 U6 ]7 I7 @The scene that met you prinkle in my heart like snow on the land
" V/ i/ \2 c2 A8 ~suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.5 _, Y) w! K* [1 h' N. n
Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss,3 u8 G* s" W/ s' x e7 W% Y
especially on the day, the gentle sea breeze and the sweet summer.4 r+ O/ f+ B7 J* B" u
Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
1 T2 H% k K a" ?, n) _only waiting for you quietly
9 _& T9 t4 u! s& X- pjust let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.! s+ F1 L6 Q9 B( A; p- K
I really want to ramble in the small rain with you 4 N% `9 c2 T; V( L' }
and enjoy the rain washing together5 c8 G2 [- S$ _1 t2 _
or rush to a film
" E1 ^7 C A B" p) z: s* uor listen to a music quietly.4 `# X7 k( }' i1 U
Whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?* i q' D+ d' ?5 @8 M" g
If we embrace ,dance,and gaze to each other,( {$ \9 W/ w+ @, x+ q
smile or gently kiss then say: I really love you".! a/ n: I* \5 {. e6 c2 x. e
That is enough.
5 {. T+ D" p& a0 l2 g0 n7 G- L8 {; R) oMaybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago,% I9 ~% r# l& c! I) P: v& [; c
finely it deeply rooted into the earth in the season and sprout,
, ^9 E4 H$ h: w( K' Rthe same as my missing.0 k5 M6 x, a' V! ]2 ?- ?
It comes a little bit of verdure.
5 N: ~0 ]4 w% v7 W# m: A! K4 NIf, If some day I can touch your hand, " Z3 A9 `) F9 n* u$ Y: @
then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.( J. j& ^9 x5 h$ R! J, p
Let you touch me gently and read me carefully.
1 ^- K' T+ m) b! B* L1 DI will enjoy your mild emotion through your hands with my heart and soul. D [; m5 j2 b
At the moment you reach out your hands to me ,' B2 ]2 w/ t+ F4 Z5 x
then I will have all care and ardor. B* D' b3 a$ `
Shall we walk arm in arm?1 S3 O9 T+ Q0 a# G. C& t) j
呵,太晚了,连检查都不想检查一下,有没有打字错误了. |
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