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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
8 N, K: E7 Q$ v9 C2 V,.清晨，急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
( a2 R& r! h) A- N) x0 m零星树叶的飘落，松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
$ g) U a. I9 y0 l- B! h现在的我，一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.1 f+ c! q E9 \4 m# ]6 s5 I/ H
梳相同的发型，背同样的背囊，不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.
: l6 l$ ^3 f/ v* e5 S眉眼间却似乎多了什麽，又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.) `$ Y+ }0 f& z- P( f
夏天过得那麽快，我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.
+ S) P& X& }: d猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉，追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
. S. I) i/ O8 ~ s5 Q就像多年以前的我们，似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.6 w/ s/ U6 J# |6 m; c
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天，I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及$ H& k r4 f; d& Q. }
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
: t* y% {( x6 n$ E世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.7 L3 U: r& h# s' ~. n: `
昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.( j. n! C: \ O' {- X( K
想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.2 Z# v( C& i! {) A t% ^
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
: Z f: W- S- U3 U寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?8 N/ J, p |; i9 _& f
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
# c- t1 R8 M1 S: A9 G迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
/ J X! U% N- @! ~! R$ T2 p最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
* R/ ~+ N6 [/ g$ _: b多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
6 B" _ P! N8 e- u% `$ MWhy I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
/ l( ]) _, {; Z4 Y1 z多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
8 }2 s" k, T4 s不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.) ?' J7 @- x6 L. Q; V$ Z2 \# l! z9 {
多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation,
5 V5 g2 G$ |. t) N- K0 H为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?/ w8 K* n. s; k9 m! P9 Y. ^
多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
9 M" I/ V. E4 ~3 H" L% N永难平息的泪5 }& R$ F! g" k! m3 d
每当夜深人静时，When the quiet night comes3 e1 n/ ?$ z- z, X9 E+ g! T
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.. `5 t8 W4 n1 c3 N
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
# Y2 l0 L& G9 |" C! S$ l让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动，; ]& I! L4 }" K4 J: ?2 J9 H
你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
7 i6 f! w4 x2 n1 F; c9 l V一抹微笑；
' c; c5 g s- T' |, A! I1 z5 |一个手势；
# u8 r4 J+ V: G8 i& {一片话语，
8 T, `) a; F; s3 G) P愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、
5 w& q+ _- o) Q& \* }明亮著我漆黑的角落，The moon lights the dark corner
6 m' K( y% L5 A心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.' f' O+ W U! g% q( I- M, i
这一瞬的爱恋，The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
7 j& D c% k, H; y1 d也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..# B( W1 C9 M; K7 p. H2 F
起初，对你的出现，I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
" W8 L/ J i2 i8 e; U6 S! n我并不以为然。1 X, T; Z% R2 A7 j* L
可随著时间的流失，but accompanying with the time passed ! C$ g* i6 f% s1 c
慢慢的不知不觉中，I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .0 Y8 Y3 v( Y1 n; d) j/ f) b
被一种情绪所左右，
/ }/ }6 l/ d8 U总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly . @' u/ [. O2 |4 \1 n) h/ i
即不问你是否喜欢我，Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
# ~4 n; y) d/ h- E6 ~9 C& R2 c3 m* J也不问我是否喜欢你，
) @) C2 g4 R& {. f0 w' ^8 F% o对你的存在只感到亲切，only feel gracious for your existing.
8 m& q5 c+ M; e0 R/ V8 T: U只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
* s" P& ~8 h ?* u3每次有意无意的遇到你，every time when I meet you
/ X0 h7 e2 K+ \3 @/ ~! P6 |* t心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil
0 l% _. i: Y) P, M# d' G然而我真真切切地知道，but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere 5 v' w9 u2 b' K& h& |
你的身影已化成一种氛围，: i" H& }9 Y2 e$ w3 h4 p3 T' [
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.
! Z2 t7 R+ {: X4 J* H你知道吗？Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! L: L& V+ z. s: i
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字
6 a* c' u2 n' h% B8 j3 c8 b哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud，
J P7 i# D% l3 }1 {- k4 Q) f一种声音，and your voice
( D$ d! `1 x& g/ V) S也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
, w) \: _; w+ n1 _掺杂著幸福的感觉。
; o# x) {! ]/ Z与你相识的那一幕幕，the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
" D. l2 q- C' b+ w象雪花般撒落在我的心田，
" n7 }- v9 U f S6 {, ?& ^倾刻间，suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
4 a3 H( L0 m s) f( k# q; J纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。3 Z8 b! d& T) N. G( J l/ T
你知道吗？Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss" N% r h: j# Y* _/ q: S
有一个能够让思念的人，/ b6 [' L' j! u* v: D! I; w* {+ J
其实也是一种幸福。% z5 Z0 W5 U; `6 t9 v
尤其是在这样的日子，especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer. ( f, }1 F, b j: E: d+ E( l
柔柔的海风，0 s% g* P' y+ k# c2 z) S. T
甜甜的夏天。
% V" c# g P: y9 T6 z( g4 `一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁，Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy & W/ W9 M, Y# W/ m1 O8 s
只是静静地等待你的身影，only waiting for you quietly.6 S+ \/ x4 \) R) `
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人，Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.3 C3 M7 r+ ?# N) S b! x
想和你有共同的情结，
; ~" V5 n7 \1 K6 r2 @ v* D共同的心愿。) d A) ]! z; y* X9 U. U
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6 W! _( E- {2 u好想与你在细雨中漫步，I really want to ramble in the small rain with you2 G- ]5 Q g- V
一同感受著春雨的洒脱，and to enjoy the rain washing together1 I2 V8 Q( j& F$ V
或是赶著看一场电影；or rush to a film
7 Y; D' z. R* J0 d或是静静地聆听一首曲子，or listen to a music quietly.! Q: [* w+ l* z% G: Z
『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?' M+ L0 H- O8 g. o
我们相拥旋舞，然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
. y+ S) t2 o- \ c浅浅一笑，smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”! m- x8 s# o, J
或是轻轻的一吻，! J) ]/ _! c* ?1 Y3 a+ I5 x$ K
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』" y3 Q6 b8 d2 K# Q, l
就足够了. That is enough.* X- n) E( o- H' t1 e/ C( o, n
这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子，Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago!
- T1 S- t+ t( V1 [3 _$ N4 g终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根，finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout./ D0 e* K8 P- l& c2 v* N3 R9 c; _
萌出了芽，
% b$ e: T5 E1 ^9 Y, p一如对你的思念，the same as my missing7 [7 ^: ]1 N; A0 X0 s) V, t
浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
$ n7 p9 x( Q- \- `. D% |5 J如果，如果有一天，If , if some day I can touch of your hand9 `( t/ w+ a5 E' } b% u& ?/ }, V
能够牵著你的手,% _! @ Y \' P7 a
那麽，我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里，then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
6 N9 X, M& I& b5 t. n, ^ d让你细细地触摸，Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. * G8 N% E7 Q# k9 s6 ]% I0 r
慢慢地细读，
I$ ?! C. E* i: [5 I0 }我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
7 d2 v* L, z% f* b, `4 Z* s- s. l/ o在你对我伸出手的那一瞬，At the moment you reach out your hands to me , C \* n# _4 `; ]2 X' F. `2 T+ m
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱，then I will have all care and ardor
! m; i, j' |# f$ G5 S9 F- e" P就让我牵一次你的手，好吗？Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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