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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
: C' C5 z( l- b6 u' j. h R,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
1 i% n2 P/ V! o6 b+ m! }6 ? P1 L零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
5 O0 A: G# a) o1 P( d1 ]现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.
" ~! c# |2 o/ S9 @" s2 C# b7 v梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.
+ Y1 f" H1 v2 Y+ D眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.# W& w V/ i- \& n# C/ `! U7 S
夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.7 W6 p! w7 e2 N' ]; ?3 C' C
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
( y: x5 L& M* c+ t1 q就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.. Q j0 S) H- q8 K$ H: c/ T& h! U
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及4 r% E* i# o6 ]7 f1 r. R
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。. J( H4 g% h5 X/ Y6 ^( x
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
- \1 r; X# G# \2 E& C5 Y8 U昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.! I o; |2 h+ v$ b8 }+ ~3 S
想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
: B- ?& C" k5 \( Z最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild. + C& c' e) b: F. {# M
寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?
, b2 O* m/ y' }* c) v. T5 w) H醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.( h) Z- y: i& F$ R" `' W* `, s
迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
( L Z; h; I+ u( f最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have. V- t. T* o* X- X
多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?) @) f) `. Q2 t; ]; I; \+ x
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….% b. K. z9 r( A8 n5 D
多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously+ m6 l0 t9 s! T8 q
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
9 ]( S" u% l0 L; B% Z3 w多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation,
! r1 H% }0 ]/ `3 A) t, c为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
& @" v9 ?8 z! V( B6 X% s多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
% U4 x5 B% q6 A; \8 g# U永难平息的泪
- T7 T7 i& _; T2 ~每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes
- h3 I ?" U3 l~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes. r1 N0 n5 c3 b3 t# g/ U% H6 j
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.) w5 `4 B- R+ o/ I, T$ _* B) g
让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
6 P% W; ]+ `6 ^你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
- t, s4 r3 k* M& y9 F一抹微笑;4 o+ B U; u& I5 ]5 [, c
一个手势;
& J8 X# Z; T7 m' S9 E# r一片话语,8 c$ P E' @3 k; f
愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、
0 g% J) P; L1 b( p2 r. K3 d明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner
* m( r5 R) }3 [8 L3 U. C9 D心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.
' [, B. o3 `6 T: e; [这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
6 ?4 E9 X- h8 Q6 F) D* S$ _也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..9 }6 \! A3 L, x
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,4 d: M5 \! i: F: N
我并不以为然。# k; t1 k* b) U6 W
可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed % T) o0 o) {4 B u: p, S) `3 ~0 W
慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .# {4 z8 m- J, S9 e% g3 z
被一种情绪所左右,: G& l( c% N @6 U3 F& S
总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
) r+ ~; T, G* l即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
; r7 }1 q; z9 n9 W. S+ ]+ l; l- O也不问我是否喜欢你, |) G `: T+ K
对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.6 x7 r% K8 ]0 b% _
只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
* t7 r C2 Q* p; d$ B/ y; w3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you
, ]! R* I: ]& Q( U. u' q心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil+ Y3 K6 y3 [2 l, [- E
然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
7 e) z2 S) r7 c$ s/ a2 D你的身影已化成一种氛围,$ n) u/ s, L" x: @9 p
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.. V6 c" s) q9 u- K: C$ E4 p2 T
你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! " v) ~) k$ B) C( m$ O3 o2 r: ~
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字6 n7 F/ Z$ y, ]/ L+ J: _7 L
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,7 n! k* P+ U. ?. W: }+ s
一种声音,and your voice
1 |& S) w- ^' O' x2 R+ k$ r$ {# \也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
q( Q; r1 x+ H* \8 ]: t k; Z掺杂著幸福的感觉。
3 p0 s3 J) w& n与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land3 S2 H; H5 l! M
象雪花般撒落在我的心田,
, ~3 T( d" p0 j8 h* N% m倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.3 ]/ T0 ]6 [- }5 L( J% ~" ]1 q
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。9 l, A. q9 [; P ^
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss) x7 A3 s! P7 Y9 L/ S; ^
有一个能够让思念的人,
7 k E' W- J* K2 N7 q" g其实也是一种幸福。
1 J5 X% b, u4 x/ G2 Z4 H% H尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
! F, I1 l& I6 I2 H% I柔柔的海风,
2 c2 ^: @ \' p# j0 O. D( ~# P甜甜的夏天。/ B2 i3 E. U& S7 }) X7 h
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy # N% e3 n' @- r3 e" B% C) z4 X
只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.2 z ` \8 \4 ^
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.' x+ w3 e) ^# J" z* i: ^
想和你有共同的情结,
% i" q+ E/ h8 z9 f u2 s8 M共同的心愿。4 ^- C8 r' {4 ~2 W' a
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3 R' x2 y; L6 `6 N好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you" l) D4 p7 c8 {( n
一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together' S2 E9 A. F& X& @/ h, o
或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film 7 n* q# k: @7 u# x$ K
或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.
- B4 `. B v* m/ |; }" x, A『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
2 w/ T, B) [) q2 A3 S2 L" ^我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, $ g4 Q; P$ C# ~* W4 V" L' G
浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
5 M, g$ j" e Y8 I& P: v或是轻轻的一吻,, q Z6 U8 t0 I
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』
: P+ e0 E0 M+ G就足够了. That is enough.
4 `% e# h) l- M4 m9 f这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago!
0 ]1 s/ ]9 p' I3 t: V终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
7 C: H& m, |1 I1 H7 [萌出了芽,
! `4 Z1 a2 w# T e/ y) M一如对你的思念,the same as my missing% `& r% B( J2 p$ y" B
浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.( s O5 [* q+ C$ H: l* T9 Y3 _
如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand
3 ?: l" [" n) d( X q能够牵著你的手,
0 p$ d7 b b) E, [4 t那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
6 Q5 s. n. I" f C) D让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully.
4 {6 d' @8 f6 q$ V& q( |- t" d慢慢地细读,
7 }4 A) [* e$ F0 w$ C0 L我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. 2 u4 j4 f, r% l1 z8 @4 H3 B
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me
0 u5 M% ~$ c' Z, D$ A我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor 0 x1 v( | w0 H2 j; L: @
就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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