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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,2 X* D9 t8 C7 C# g
,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry. 3 N6 U0 ?1 r( q0 ^7 x0 B( M
零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
$ A: O, b4 h0 h* Y$ R, M现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.2 ~- G8 A( J1 @+ @3 r( u3 n" M
梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.! X9 y2 Y2 [0 j% T3 V
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
# `5 W( q$ R8 a, o5 D% @0 [) f夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.' o8 f' W) Z$ t
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
7 U O2 S3 S& M# j& E就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.( O/ D1 h! e E
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及: H$ h; T5 Q) n9 X& k' }
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。$ N0 u. A$ |+ Q u* c# n+ X* J
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream./ l0 h5 p( w: @; k( @
昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
8 z9 H8 q& X# Y8 z想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
3 P6 q* }* n6 c# Q; @最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
. H# U& f7 B v) ^( U寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?
3 p' K- |1 `3 h1 m醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.4 a% h0 L* s: ?& ^ {0 o
迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.( y M: y) F0 r( y; x( C
最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.! Q& d9 B0 k+ @' {7 o
多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?! o' Z0 E2 j; {# ^8 D
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….' g0 ^* k$ S& c* g, V: v' G5 f
多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
' T- Z% N- h r/ Q不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.3 Y# p% T4 l: j! z6 x; d; |# n9 ?
多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation,
, |7 V: V; C" N0 k为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
* U7 r2 l7 i( a多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
+ X0 E" c/ q* z0 t5 x& `+ l3 P% f永难平息的泪- g* y) R* P- a. j6 F
每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes7 Y) l' F* k% ?6 I [; p @' J3 ]
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes. \# b( v8 m# J/ R+ y9 u9 A
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
+ x2 m9 M* K2 a7 k ~% W% [让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
3 |! A h5 o& u( N你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul i$ J7 }2 C# G6 [
一抹微笑;
2 S8 ^1 N. b$ m1 p5 B8 r! V一个手势;' a, p8 x: x' E$ e" I
一片话语,: l$ C6 F @: V* m
愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、; i! S: J1 V1 v
明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner
! k/ k+ |6 U3 P4 i心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.
' t6 W. Q: F3 `# i& j这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling3 t' C4 l* c6 Z% Z/ X
也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..* W' z6 S% K/ X) \% Q8 L+ t
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,% V$ [3 i+ X7 _2 Q8 V
我并不以为然。* S9 ~8 y; |9 H P3 p9 ?! ?
可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed
: h9 ?; T4 }3 u3 t0 Y' Q8 b慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .
0 d! I5 K5 k4 G( _6 d9 D' n. G被一种情绪所左右,! i% ?! l- {( D5 P& p- k
总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
/ ^) g1 C+ g( t1 A2 a, o- p即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
$ J! G. D8 l" |* s也不问我是否喜欢你,
7 @- F8 w( d( u对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
r$ R! M: B9 |' S0 K+ q8 K只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
) H$ |& \( F5 g3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you
, a+ F0 \! r* U心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil
3 W. y' T4 T" x+ q4 J然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere . x* r9 D& ~2 o; O2 |
你的身影已化成一种氛围,
8 R! I8 V. e5 E记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.$ q [" X9 |( g1 z; O
你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
2 ]2 a" i3 O% E% |' l随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字5 t: @; Z5 X) W) P5 k+ b* v
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,8 w1 c( F( E0 b! J* M
一种声音,and your voice
# H) d3 k( A2 P" l: q+ G3 j- M也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
/ a6 n! f; z0 R9 g' ^掺杂著幸福的感觉。
, S( I$ M5 W' Y; l, R b0 m/ Z与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
2 H" {, n; G b! G! ^. j象雪花般撒落在我的心田,
& W1 a2 K, E3 U- n2 s倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
. p( R; P, C/ u4 n2 U0 y# z# F纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。+ L$ n% d$ m8 V# O( I N
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss
0 D: \7 v4 M2 b4 ~# Q1 D9 |有一个能够让思念的人,- I' i) [, x T1 E2 L! f: |" V
其实也是一种幸福。2 r- m5 F p3 o0 ~0 U
尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
* W/ m0 D& E3 j( k [5 n9 O柔柔的海风,: O7 _3 P0 N2 E8 r9 D
甜甜的夏天。! ^$ ]' h7 ?/ w3 x$ @+ T: M, o
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy ) F5 a* T2 l7 \
只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.: [! E# B/ T- B
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
# i) H8 G# S' @5 k8 H想和你有共同的情结,
# u/ M' S( ^/ a. T8 T; u共同的心愿。# B4 ]1 R: e# G( c; H
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0 g5 g+ K4 a* v, C# [% J, j4 O2 x好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
8 j( ]# r2 \2 s; x! @7 F一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together+ Q- y* V. ^" ^# a) x' `
或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film
2 P& v1 Y0 j. { l* ^. L" e或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.5 U& g) X- g j L# Z$ O+ N# ]: p
『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?8 l) V2 V* a8 B g" ^
我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
- E5 g) m% v& Q/ S$ p$ O浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”5 j) u5 {0 ^$ ^. K6 {( Z
或是轻轻的一吻,
* U, |6 q) b1 D# b# J再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』6 C- w1 N: S8 j! w
就足够了. That is enough.
4 O6 f2 i+ S+ W4 { e4 U这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago!
6 Y5 ^& K5 \1 c2 f" ?0 c终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.5 ]4 j- p) B+ S7 L& l9 c
萌出了芽,) D5 `4 h* y( g! ]5 s3 K
一如对你的思念,the same as my missing
H, _2 @7 b I# {& V浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.8 t; {" |3 M5 g* r
如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand
5 c1 p0 M- J4 I* K能够牵著你的手,' |7 L% v: b5 e R: i" J- d
那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
5 |) l( G! `0 o- y" @2 k2 z( h让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. ( n: l/ f/ w6 g6 P
慢慢地细读,
; X. Q9 y# ^# B$ ]我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. - H, n1 w6 a7 J6 e" r
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me 6 y! M: |, Z( q. X( N, \* q4 c) q
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor & a4 e% M2 n: b) H2 y
就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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