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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,/ J* K1 M; l) Q
,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry. - s) S4 B" ? O4 T
零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
g Y, e; m, Y4 o9 c5 \现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name., y A7 M4 f/ g& i" ?
梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.! c1 d8 o& @4 O2 {5 _/ X6 R$ R
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
$ T5 H! ?! Q/ W6 ^ ^夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.% Y c, l5 t1 {: u/ G' T
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.5 d0 k+ G- f- `; T
就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.% E4 {" W- P% G0 |& v
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及+ ~' _7 C! y9 l- G" i: f
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
, R7 ?" Q Z8 l5 {% g! h世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
: o/ \: l% P4 Q$ o) }昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.4 p+ Q2 U c. k: j8 o& c
想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
3 N- ]! ~* G V5 @! f/ z% ?1 o最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
7 { g% \1 r1 ^3 X$ N- g* j寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?4 R% Z6 |( ?; u2 t( V
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.0 e$ m3 e" @) o8 A
迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
6 X8 N6 m( d& t' [! l8 o1 Y! b最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.2 o/ Y2 Q- r) R7 K
多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
) n. M% O- W* I. f& h( \$ u& \& zWhy I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' …. ], p; Q# t U& Q8 z) r
多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously; ?- l: u# T$ j1 [, }$ b% t* V
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
7 ~8 F! |- T. K Z8 C多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, , m! L- U5 G: C; E7 t# w
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?0 u: ]9 o& V, k, X7 ?
多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
6 j2 ~5 J* U( A永难平息的泪
7 h3 x! a2 v% a4 x$ L每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes" O. g$ i: z: R) s
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.; O2 e: L, \& S. A
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
0 S) F3 p5 g; D让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
1 R" C M9 [/ C5 G; d你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
; Z2 d! ~* D! `& p' n; D一抹微笑;
- R, } f- Z' x. \一个手势;& @6 S# ]7 v/ c4 H
一片话语,
: d0 \# a0 n% p4 x Y) Q: y愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、 j& s. P6 e+ @0 s; j
明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner
& E3 k9 K) I& A+ `心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.
! f5 x5 q0 f4 L; _* ^这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling/ o+ q! I7 g8 H' {
也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..
3 A! \" C' ?3 c起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
; T4 q, Y S& [5 ~5 @5 M$ k- R我并不以为然。 m( C/ ]- }7 w% {. P
可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed " @3 V' r. t6 }0 [3 ], E
慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .0 \/ S5 S9 a: x3 u3 m# l. o
被一种情绪所左右,
! a7 Q v' T0 s q总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .& }, ?/ X9 C9 G6 a& i
即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you2 j2 ]; V+ Z! N
也不问我是否喜欢你,. j: \9 M: u8 @; p0 |! f8 C8 W
对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
! f7 `4 ^: B2 m: u( A7 R4 r, p/ Y只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you2 V) y4 A5 S, d% k: F% V
3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you
2 @& k, @$ x% ~) j8 \& |( M心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil
# F" W; a+ a7 R- u7 U/ f p G然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere 7 R0 P, `( ~. T7 z# v9 t% E" ?% O- u
你的身影已化成一种氛围,0 U J+ n/ s5 L- p& o6 I
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.
* O6 }# N7 J& T5 q你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
; z' i" x2 s& o4 X3 g5 M. |* _随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字: A' B1 J* e% h. x- Y; K+ U: o; h$ X
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,# a! B4 K7 t/ ?
一种声音,and your voice) ^& Q7 r+ J$ \* q, V% [
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.3 J$ n6 R4 s& K1 Q5 |3 |5 Z: d. ?0 Z
掺杂著幸福的感觉。
' v# o, q3 g1 _# s与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
0 ~# M$ M7 s# y象雪花般撒落在我的心田,: B+ L3 }4 m: P: B
倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.9 z3 s/ j F2 b- V; q( O2 J" b
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。
7 Q5 w' ]) D0 _" l" v0 ~你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss5 K- q5 ?/ \8 X$ B, v# F; _
有一个能够让思念的人,- Q/ O) i; V; Z g) I1 `! L9 o% m
其实也是一种幸福。
6 c& X N# o' [# a尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
' F* x+ v& \1 f( K柔柔的海风,: H; a" Z/ o( d5 A; o
甜甜的夏天。
0 M6 j( c. U, r" d+ v- j一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
2 J! z) |" D c' @$ I( D' w只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.
* b6 u7 }! g1 ~0 S" c" y仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do." Z" Y& ]6 \' J! O, Q* z
想和你有共同的情结,, ?& I q V- U2 X2 }
共同的心愿。: ~1 B) x$ J/ A9 e
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& r; _& j3 M6 u* X好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you/ K( T7 `4 a, j
一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together
" x: O+ o5 f1 l# i或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film
Y. ?6 E/ ~' e2 ]; |' ?或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.: a. T* ?7 J; I b+ w
『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
9 ]: _* m& J9 S0 h e2 E6 u+ m我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, 2 T; @, e: Q: [$ T
浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
: @4 Z, O9 P6 l% D或是轻轻的一吻,( N5 ]; Z. H ?. }, p3 B9 K$ Q
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』, O: B$ Q7 v' T. t4 h
就足够了. That is enough.
& L8 T; I0 W( ^这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! , {: `1 k2 c4 v, E7 J& F3 A" A
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.9 f* s& y, Y* r2 f3 Y' b) f
萌出了芽," x' M- _% G) T- @0 P& ~) x
一如对你的思念,the same as my missing3 M" j# u4 S! C+ E' B; n; {2 |+ R
浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
, c5 a4 q0 V- T+ ]" K如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand
+ f: U+ Q1 w' h! W6 W5 t) y' d能够牵著你的手,
. A$ `3 R. Z1 l# [6 X0 g! [那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely. w6 a" A# M' W& G4 M6 ]2 Y* j( ?
让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. * R1 w2 o7 r0 } i; r- |- r' f
慢慢地细读,4 x; r0 Q" J# p4 f1 P2 l! j: A
我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. : A3 W$ }# ? g$ I
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me : l/ G; \: _( A/ s& ]' N
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor
+ \" f3 ] c! H9 _+ j4 G就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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