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每当说一句汉语的时候,我总在心里想英语是怎么说的.尤其看到汉语诗歌的时候,我突然想,翻译成英语还能保留原来的意思吗?所以试着译一译.
$ {% b3 n4 b& d/ x1 B- K/ |前边发了译文以后才发现有些大小写和语法错误.一点一点地改,很乱.所以再重新发一便:
\3 T6 c0 N1 pEarly morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry., ]/ j$ N+ v& \9 y' ]/ O
Partial leaves fall down everywhere,squirrels are busily running.( W; u0 [- W( J/ J- x6 w/ _# }
Current I, the same as one tear ago, the same given name, and the same family name.
; g, \, B# z. x" H+ T: ]2 Q. OThe same hairstyle,the same bag,reserved laughing and talking.
8 x- Z6 O- _( \7 _2 Z7 ~- a1 `Seemly added something in my eyes,or lacked something.4 b6 F$ l( B, C$ V! @; L* X$ z
Summer went so fast that I almost forgot those sweating night:" j& b/ w. x3 B$ C, F9 b
Cats often played at the whole hot night outside windows to get cool & \; v j' a0 P$ j& _, O
like us many years ago,mindless self indulgence.
) `( }; Y' i4 UI often cherish the memory happened in summer and those people that make me raint even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming.. T. m2 a- b2 @8 x# J% q
The emotion and the carma only is a dream.- H ~, x, T8 e# f. U
That shoudn`t happen to meet each other last tenderlt night.5 T0 S v1 H, I( J# J9 T! c: Y
I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.8 }0 F D) s' i8 Y/ Y
I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.7 v8 l1 B$ E/ t' c
In this lonely world whom I can step inside love to?
4 J. g% |+ V& ~/ XIntoxicated then feel cold,
! W0 _ a6 s, w9 R% Y. _6 Zthe labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
6 q% O6 r; k9 x& fI am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.8 C5 e* ?* q( ?$ k$ L3 J
The amorous man to whom you gave your soul?
$ p3 y3 Y* J2 E! y, PWhy I am always hoodwinked!
9 n; \/ a7 ~6 ] \) r% zI have told myself many times cautiously 8 k# p% S+ y! N4 r% ]2 N3 k1 _
don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
! o' z n5 [8 HThe amorous women always get drunk by desolation.9 j$ b& ~4 f, Y* D) r9 ?. s# N B
Why can`t I take it easy?
1 ]( d) ^7 G; ~) uHow endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
# U# s& A0 n# q) A7 |0 ~When the quiet night comes
+ V1 ]9 E8 t. `+ Q# T, G6 a+ fyour figure usually appears in front of my eyes.: y5 i) i- V) a# o& C
The greeting when you met me made my heart in touched unaccountably.+ h' {! m( V V# _/ V
Yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul," E7 e# ~+ b# B$ Q/ p
light the dark corner in my mind.* ^$ A$ k% L# G1 |6 \5 p
I feel a bit of cozy.: N. @& ^' v/ q& q5 w6 x
The deep attached to you in a twinkling
@2 e, K2 R" }+ Z' @maybe is the most light spot in my whole life.
# ?% E; I3 C7 C2 b$ hI didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
$ g) N# ]$ ^$ _2 H; Cbut accompanying with the time passed
6 n7 W* D9 a7 J/ D$ b2 g5 d+ yI am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion,9 _3 a/ V' _1 E d
always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly.% b5 k# ]9 J1 d
Without asking if you like me or if I like you/ o8 O/ q# U5 v p1 |
only feel gracious for your existing,4 s' ?& a) J/ T. y) T: j( S
onlt want to do something for you." y3 ~7 l) K7 o/ W7 \( Z8 b9 B1 D
Every time when you meet me
1 k3 P( ?1 @% f- u% i# H! Xthe sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil,
" N8 X1 w5 }* Z! I; B- C- r# Ybut I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
8 J# u% D n1 p7 R, Z* d( Q6 mThat live in my heart.$ X; f$ C0 Y+ `; U! D; s- W/ L% y1 d" j
Do you know your name can suddenly come into mu mind at anytime?/ H7 O( U) }* e: t/ A
Even only your flying clothes` corner when you turn around, and your voice0 u- u! M. v: ]5 u# E# r+ L
make me gently distraught with happy feeling.2 s" C" g C( N; y6 D
The scene that met you prinkle in my heart like snow on the land- d/ e# X( r" ^% k, J8 s2 E
suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.- S4 c) T# T8 C* D
Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss,/ S: J# B1 ]# ?2 `
especially on the day, the gentle sea breeze and the sweet summer.6 {) }& @2 h) ?6 ?3 Q3 Y4 n( f5 @! O
Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
Q) f* h+ `& o+ S2 L2 Oonly waiting for you quietly) p; Y- e) R9 d3 z# u
just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.7 c& y+ ]5 _. q! z, M
I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
8 a" \: s. z eand enjoy the rain washing together
: ~4 Q9 S3 \& ]8 tor rush to a film* @* }) J% G% |; S( d! Q: O- m$ e, `
or listen to a music quietly.
+ \/ @: ^5 r- q5 SWhom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
( r+ H9 v, M& i5 v2 I$ hIf we embrace ,dance,and gaze to each other,7 A3 L) ?5 \$ o+ y
smile or gently kiss then say: I really love you". w6 i2 {6 m7 i* o% D
That is enough.
' T/ _2 w0 R% @1 fMaybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago,
$ ]* O0 L& l/ }- H& Wfinely it deeply rooted into the earth in the season and sprout,; x* Y- R; E4 ~* w
the same as my missing.9 ?2 B5 _4 `5 q+ Y* L) g4 @
It comes a little bit of verdure.
# P) h8 _0 @/ V7 O0 vIf, If some day I can touch your hand, - V, S' e. H0 ^# h/ T7 C0 |
then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.% t, p- ^6 y) j& ~0 e: l- E0 H
Let you touch me gently and read me carefully.
. T( i" n+ v" B" E3 tI will enjoy your mild emotion through your hands with my heart and soul.
0 R. R' K% A% |/ E: w( X1 AAt the moment you reach out your hands to me ,
) ]3 M2 q; Q8 M/ P' J& x3 Kthen I will have all care and ardor.# |( p5 A7 g: p/ W# ?& H
Shall we walk arm in arm?! g" i" N( _) z
呵,太晚了,连检查都不想检查一下,有没有打字错误了. |
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