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每当说一句汉语的时候,我总在心里想英语是怎么说的.尤其看到汉语诗歌的时候,我突然想,翻译成英语还能保留原来的意思吗?所以试着译一译.7 t- l7 q: e2 Q, `& \
前边发了译文以后才发现有些大小写和语法错误.一点一点地改,很乱.所以再重新发一便:+ p( m( ~' H4 r+ W; s
Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
+ s- o+ |9 \$ H- `3 o9 dPartial leaves fall down everywhere,squirrels are busily running./ e2 {) t9 d: c
Current I, the same as one tear ago, the same given name, and the same family name.0 e2 t) J# E$ {) ]- Z0 i
The same hairstyle,the same bag,reserved laughing and talking.0 d; s: u" o7 y* U9 c" |/ U
Seemly added something in my eyes,or lacked something.# B% P9 J3 e7 c' ~0 J6 h; Y
Summer went so fast that I almost forgot those sweating night:
3 Y, ~8 M( t8 O8 kCats often played at the whole hot night outside windows to get cool
4 ~+ l8 K$ I5 @5 K5 s( v* _- Plike us many years ago,mindless self indulgence.. x: w) H S- n, D
I often cherish the memory happened in summer and those people that make me raint even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming.6 v% S: x+ A( g+ i5 w% H2 `
The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
8 {& h! G! j; H* f }' ?0 s, UThat shoudn`t happen to meet each other last tenderlt night.
" N% _0 J X- X" p; C4 E; X6 bI want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
) q) C% S& `, Z+ h6 Q. c6 CI am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
/ W, E2 y s1 U' I$ t( WIn this lonely world whom I can step inside love to?
/ z$ j: D* @- }: O/ q9 oIntoxicated then feel cold,$ o0 u- f5 o1 w5 k
the labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.! l R4 W% y, o/ Q, }3 J3 g. n
I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.! _2 t+ D/ b, _8 x) Q+ o
The amorous man to whom you gave your soul?
6 H* l- I( |& ^$ x# U" YWhy I am always hoodwinked!
, }9 `* i& |9 A* [- W( fI have told myself many times cautiously
7 Q( s- r' V3 g# idon`t fall into the spoony whirligig.2 E W4 U' v/ K- q+ b- v2 x4 E
The amorous women always get drunk by desolation.
4 k+ N3 A! ^/ K/ G- e9 ~Why can`t I take it easy?( I+ M7 V' X5 e7 R9 d
How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!( G# a4 Y( u+ B# J+ K/ O
When the quiet night comes+ i) F3 L/ C: m z( e
your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
1 e, o* Y, r0 l4 zThe greeting when you met me made my heart in touched unaccountably.3 d7 m( s( o! ^
Yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul,
( F; T' P6 e& q. ]0 blight the dark corner in my mind.
0 a6 h* \5 a: z# h. I: _I feel a bit of cozy.6 Z7 Y3 k; j3 ^7 W: ^4 g
The deep attached to you in a twinkling
3 e3 D& ?0 a* g7 Bmaybe is the most light spot in my whole life.+ R# K; I- g! F
I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,1 R6 o( r; T- S6 ~( s
but accompanying with the time passed( d# F% P3 P* s4 }( C3 ~
I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion, t; O! q: |6 l( w# z l
always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly.
9 u' L8 ?# `, `. hWithout asking if you like me or if I like you# v% E6 G' H% B$ V
only feel gracious for your existing,
* j ?5 W' k' yonlt want to do something for you.
7 J9 i6 B! H) ~4 S3 G! p( O9 @Every time when you meet me1 t7 ~3 F6 d s
the sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil,' t5 I/ F, o. @, J( V, p. Q7 G6 ]
but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere& O% v9 h5 f2 ^) o' C
That live in my heart.
- i* t$ _7 E* M3 w' C7 L. pDo you know your name can suddenly come into mu mind at anytime?
& b* D( }8 f+ I3 m# y" H8 aEven only your flying clothes` corner when you turn around, and your voice
& k' z! N4 N; D% b! \' X# zmake me gently distraught with happy feeling.' [: R v6 K! `3 k7 {
The scene that met you prinkle in my heart like snow on the land# b4 f- w: p. u7 g
suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.2 i" e+ O5 Y% m
Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss,
& W: D) g* t2 T/ V$ J: l, Hespecially on the day, the gentle sea breeze and the sweet summer.
2 u7 R8 ]5 I% l( d* s/ ]Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
% V" E; f+ @7 O0 Jonly waiting for you quietly- Q' k6 ]3 o4 @; ^* Q3 [) y- l
just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.0 q- y; ?! G) |5 l T* p, ]
I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
) r; ` _! N# r* w$ eand enjoy the rain washing together
& w3 w' q7 G, r' G1 z2 l5 |or rush to a film
: ]2 X: g3 v: Y9 Z" O9 zor listen to a music quietly.8 }. x \, x1 }$ m. |0 g
Whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?$ ]$ g' s, f& d- x
If we embrace ,dance,and gaze to each other,
3 A6 }( o$ m! h, d- M& ~smile or gently kiss then say: I really love you".* h i/ [( j$ H
That is enough. m% \1 n s1 p& h+ f$ Z
Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago,% |) \5 \. f* |* P9 z+ X, q
finely it deeply rooted into the earth in the season and sprout,* l4 D5 e- }1 B. c$ ?
the same as my missing.
|( W a. S" d. W, CIt comes a little bit of verdure.5 J. C% ^7 q+ W: e2 H/ I2 I# h5 P; E
If, If some day I can touch your hand,
) X6 W9 ~- o0 \9 P3 e8 p5 S% zthen I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
2 B; s J u3 e$ L. O7 N( e( |Let you touch me gently and read me carefully.) J6 z- \- y; Y
I will enjoy your mild emotion through your hands with my heart and soul.+ _; u- F, V7 o
At the moment you reach out your hands to me ,) E$ M2 w- p, ~5 w+ l7 e: B
then I will have all care and ardor.. g5 {* B `1 s9 w
Shall we walk arm in arm?
9 F# [$ K) w, z& G# }/ r' O7 b呵,太晚了,连检查都不想检查一下,有没有打字错误了. |
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