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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,2 \* ~9 g5 U4 b# c* T8 P B
,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
1 v) @6 g1 t5 Z) o" ^零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running . ( ]$ m5 f; D3 _
现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.
. a$ P" i" X6 P* ^2 m+ p, `梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.
/ m, C# H8 Y* G- j2 t. u眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.) N) F' J! m: l# J+ H1 `( w
夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.4 ^* l; N. W6 x8 U( T
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
4 ?1 F0 ~. y R0 T0 ~7 x6 A( n/ m& @就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.
6 C* R) f; y4 D6 D; n$ }3 s我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及* v2 Q$ w, R$ K
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
, G+ P& n4 g0 K' B) v* H世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
( K+ s5 B* M/ M, s1 C昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
6 x6 g g6 S+ g想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
4 y2 D+ w/ o/ P* s! {最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild. : l6 d# w& A; x# X
寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?
; K& o) s8 l5 \$ d u醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
3 _: c. v7 t. m+ z1 s# C( P迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.% K) R; c8 o S8 P
最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have./ N+ \+ q' z3 Z4 W* K
多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
( A8 I! p: ?' B! @: DWhy I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….; {- f4 ?" C) Z- [4 y8 |
多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously6 r3 v3 g1 k9 a! z. a2 h: M
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.; n- b- W" S# @' A
多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation,
5 \! W. o8 C! G6 F+ ^$ B# |为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
" F" V+ q2 c; L, I多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
x+ o9 x: \8 h3 p) j永难平息的泪, _& C4 S' L6 F" b0 Q K0 d
每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes# x* f; {; ]" M; a, \; m
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.+ W, ^8 m( j; d |2 O5 G0 g
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
0 i0 U" \% D. `$ W让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
% o& G D) Q( b* N+ W你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
]; | |& h3 l+ y/ o: e- w一抹微笑;( h" c$ c; J0 Q; k, l7 u0 i
一个手势;
) m6 |% O# U/ ]一片话语,
8 W. Z* W, e9 M1 u% t2 o: J愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、
1 M3 Z9 d+ y% M明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner
% ^4 ?& h) [$ y; [4 z0 u心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.
! G( n* [+ I4 I+ R* `1 M+ O这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
" d4 w- R2 i6 g1 R) ^也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..: L; k. ]" ]- k; \: @
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
' [5 i+ P. D' e$ ^+ H# w8 f) T我并不以为然。
- ~& b3 J& r1 {) o* R4 H: q# n可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed
2 G/ |+ Z3 c, Z+ y7 `慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .
5 ~4 B4 [: }! }" X, D被一种情绪所左右,: y$ c# F& O. m6 H
总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
9 Z/ M% }: v4 k Q0 l X6 s即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you: I' q' D& b3 v6 ^% l, X6 I
也不问我是否喜欢你,
! _' M$ ^: J. Y2 k, b. Z对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.7 ~7 ]0 ~) W; H9 z' w! Z Z1 K( ~
只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you7 B+ [$ p2 g/ i
3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you
% T0 C4 p. O* t \心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil
5 f& E4 X T" W然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
2 b6 S) Z, m! h9 s% B你的身影已化成一种氛围,
9 N9 u9 c }/ Q1 i/ \$ r# l* m记在我的心间。That lives in my heart., M0 V! f) D/ R# h
你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
" q( @* m( T& [7 f随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字$ n/ n/ d/ i& G0 S2 e% R
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,& B) { t( l5 N- q
一种声音,and your voice
" z- F$ P; o' ~+ p也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
c# d( K" t1 L) d3 X掺杂著幸福的感觉。# W3 A5 E+ B2 ]- j6 q& p
与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
* M& |* M6 C8 u8 A* t, F象雪花般撒落在我的心田,, Y9 c D: X! c7 }2 U
倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
t2 J# u0 v3 J- Y纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。
. b# j* U& V* e9 _你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss
+ [9 @3 o* u" D有一个能够让思念的人,/ b0 _0 e" _ v" q+ Y
其实也是一种幸福。0 [8 Q* _& n$ D$ x- c3 c3 L( @1 h
尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
$ d2 |, j/ S4 }& b0 {柔柔的海风,! ^7 ?% j5 r! Q
甜甜的夏天。
" A/ T& s1 k5 e4 L一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy 2 J; m2 o( B( I3 \- M, A+ J
只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.
5 G. y/ q9 i& B( q h% E仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
+ W* g; H; s+ V7 f想和你有共同的情结,8 Z: T* ?; [- n$ m
共同的心愿。2 }7 d6 h6 I1 R) o3 x! A7 I
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you' O4 U; b- G/ b/ z# Z9 z. L
一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together& c+ p- {& D- ~# B2 v" I( Y, A( h
或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film
; y! ?9 n. e/ V. Z; H& O4 |或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.$ F" B* O2 R: |2 ^" V
『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?! q. W& z" U: y+ H) l
我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, , h! [0 d, A A& T
浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”2 O: ]" l) K! `5 V1 ~" @7 u6 ]
或是轻轻的一吻,, @0 C" m i F& _' |7 x# ^7 }+ ?
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』4 U) [4 X' m4 x- f# A
就足够了. That is enough./ H8 ]" [' X1 i* }
这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago!
+ d K! X& J* i' |# f8 |+ \终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout./ y6 {0 E/ _1 H( ]: a" A+ J& f' x
萌出了芽,4 ?5 w) H0 G, G6 {) V- C0 c
一如对你的思念,the same as my missing" L" P8 c$ j# P$ c3 l: ?8 J8 j' {
浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.; F- H9 Q1 B" `7 j W. D [
如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand; n3 R8 y+ x& I9 J# B
能够牵著你的手,5 V6 j4 r% \0 C5 F) U
那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
3 F- W6 \6 Z& j让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. $ a; U9 i2 p( e. }* b: P7 v
慢慢地细读,
7 ~9 f' W9 f8 p4 c3 t" h我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
% |5 ~! ]" l# Q# i4 ~在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me
. H' ^7 ^! g6 w7 U0 e5 Q我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor
- _: r+ R, t7 U6 H* G; p; x就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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