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每当说一句汉语的时候,我总在心里想英语是怎么说的.尤其看到汉语诗歌的时候,我突然想,翻译成英语还能保留原来的意思吗?所以试着译一译.
0 k* a3 S+ d, ~; e6 |0 Q前边发了译文以后才发现有些大小写和语法错误.一点一点地改,很乱.所以再重新发一便:5 B2 w+ U; J6 i' u* }/ |% H
Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
T1 X! J5 q# v& z, w5 {& s; B1 BPartial leaves fall down everywhere,squirrels are busily running.
0 e4 k. |' k7 [ Q# n# P" f Current I, the same as one tear ago, the same given name, and the same family name.
; T2 u. D+ U' C: w/ p7 R9 W1 I( XThe same hairstyle,the same bag,reserved laughing and talking.
5 N2 c+ @3 h0 v. K; ~6 p% gSeemly added something in my eyes,or lacked something., _/ c' L, l2 y4 M3 _8 z, Y" l- R
Summer went so fast that I almost forgot those sweating night:
6 f: y& D) f l2 a$ s+ {8 _, I) j' ICats often played at the whole hot night outside windows to get cool
* X9 Y' |2 @9 ]2 @! rlike us many years ago,mindless self indulgence.
0 [% G7 R: e: ^. D& d8 H0 t7 }8 II often cherish the memory happened in summer and those people that make me raint even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming.$ ]: d3 i" d7 u7 b( l( G, _
The emotion and the carma only is a dream.: a3 N$ R3 v& k7 t. N/ i
That shoudn`t happen to meet each other last tenderlt night.
% ^! Q+ \ A1 ^6 [: ?( |# G3 eI want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
4 C9 b: }; d) W& R( W3 I- ]I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.$ I8 F2 X3 n- Z, y
In this lonely world whom I can step inside love to?
* D0 } y+ D7 TIntoxicated then feel cold,
' o8 [8 a$ O. p: I# l, \- u: athe labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
4 i! ` b7 ^& TI am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
5 q8 }) D: j+ k% q7 Z1 @The amorous man to whom you gave your soul?$ t. v4 ?' r1 {0 {
Why I am always hoodwinked!9 {# L/ @4 ]! Y8 p9 T1 ?
I have told myself many times cautiously 8 J, h. V0 ]4 r! j3 T! u. n2 G
don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
& g; W0 y' D, v/ P; K' [( E! oThe amorous women always get drunk by desolation.
6 R8 }8 ]+ ~# I7 |0 x- g t/ rWhy can`t I take it easy?
. T( f1 h6 i" _, y& zHow endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
/ r5 ]: l3 U" k# \8 l! j; oWhen the quiet night comes9 N9 X. p4 [7 C: M
your figure usually appears in front of my eyes., X3 H. c0 l: \- e1 I
The greeting when you met me made my heart in touched unaccountably.
$ |3 V$ G% @# W) C: WYours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul,
) `$ @ T/ ]2 d4 K7 w" }light the dark corner in my mind.. `* _9 X8 p- U. j j8 C
I feel a bit of cozy.; S' \1 M0 n$ \" _( ~$ r5 O
The deep attached to you in a twinkling
* g8 s& d1 ?; K" o+ Umaybe is the most light spot in my whole life.' Q- D+ A4 I$ w1 f
I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
% H% m8 B. }( I7 _' Gbut accompanying with the time passed
: V. t* v) ?' w% t$ A: q7 gI am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion,
% \/ K: U3 V1 K( T3 j$ P: x& Malways feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly.
- f+ t9 L1 u8 U; H [Without asking if you like me or if I like you2 A% h9 T! R- t3 C+ T) |$ [
only feel gracious for your existing,8 }* V7 G3 L8 P" h0 [
onlt want to do something for you.
5 t2 Z- I$ B6 hEvery time when you meet me% v6 \. P r. o
the sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil,
9 `# F) `4 L% V/ Y$ B/ Z; gbut I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
) |, i$ Q/ D/ o {2 [6 t* _That live in my heart.0 E" d5 E# J! k Z G
Do you know your name can suddenly come into mu mind at anytime?! _5 J2 u/ `. ~% G5 ?
Even only your flying clothes` corner when you turn around, and your voice; L% H3 [+ ^( h, I+ |5 @6 a
make me gently distraught with happy feeling.9 N0 ~$ D8 b9 z; ?: E
The scene that met you prinkle in my heart like snow on the land- I& z' T0 {3 F2 w
suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.& H! f2 n! {! K8 }
Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss,& g6 X$ ^) ?" a* M9 H8 `! f* Y
especially on the day, the gentle sea breeze and the sweet summer.+ i+ d% l$ f; ~4 F
Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy 7 n X2 w8 u) f6 a5 Q2 I, u# k
only waiting for you quietly
1 `6 G5 U3 N/ K: t; r! y' `just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.2 M! J# A/ [7 d* Q' j
I really want to ramble in the small rain with you 8 Z! D; v7 k. F) Z
and enjoy the rain washing together w* ~) T8 R7 I1 I: b- t2 T( r
or rush to a film9 t! P/ F3 B) C6 y ^; w1 K
or listen to a music quietly.2 f/ ^: A% O7 C) A- k9 m
Whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
7 ^$ r T9 V( j" p. r, }If we embrace ,dance,and gaze to each other,
& y% u5 o5 v" e0 A' b' xsmile or gently kiss then say: I really love you".7 |, D% i$ W' c7 {
That is enough., ~- t, a6 G' b6 ^( O1 U) h
Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago,( J7 e( C+ {. e$ I# E
finely it deeply rooted into the earth in the season and sprout,
% @& k3 P& b: e( \the same as my missing., h* B( b# }% L* j& w( g* l- y
It comes a little bit of verdure." `' k0 K$ l* l7 d. U( k" D7 Q" Z/ m
If, If some day I can touch your hand, 5 \. G1 W C3 Z
then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
+ q% c4 R, s: @% g) W" pLet you touch me gently and read me carefully.
* I4 ?: [! Z2 NI will enjoy your mild emotion through your hands with my heart and soul.: [4 k+ [: o. w+ `
At the moment you reach out your hands to me ," C' h" G5 z- S# Q2 i5 j) v' z/ A G9 a
then I will have all care and ardor.
0 O4 n0 ?5 T' S, J+ NShall we walk arm in arm?
; P, }1 x. M% X; J3 y! `! b3 K呵,太晚了,连检查都不想检查一下,有没有打字错误了. |
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