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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
4 L1 C3 @$ e; s,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry. ! D' Y6 D. z& H5 l% ]
零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running . + h7 `* O, Z( q
现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.
' ~9 G, b; d. K9 Y8 z8 \* y梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.
% z3 e7 B+ ^3 d' {+ }& j3 T3 n* A; S眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
" n9 e3 t$ F, J1 n; y1 o夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.6 _" c! G# \+ e* _$ z" _
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.* k: ^) ~( e. O% i
就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.( A9 q8 M+ r- U. u; G2 \0 h
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及: o8 Q/ `5 @3 s2 ~6 X
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。8 G& B8 g \! B7 n" `
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
* g+ x6 [* }7 G$ U+ {. F7 w- t* Y昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.. b4 E4 y' B8 U. H3 P
想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.% X) Z- F+ i( `8 i, @: |
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
( D1 Z/ x( H7 d' n- `5 f寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?
- k4 G1 ^$ m, K0 V8 x/ C3 w8 e醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.; [3 {' m. H7 i" _0 S
迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction. U$ D# J/ ~, x4 P, s
最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.* |) \$ k! J9 @, ~/ E, w
多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?+ {% R' V# C2 c, D! s' U# h; u7 u
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….+ L0 z$ z/ d9 `" g8 V5 G) Y4 F, [
多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
* u6 S/ m# \( s+ _1 q$ F4 \8 I$ _不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.0 e- k+ c- w( [. v
多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, 2 z: J7 ]- ~4 U
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
0 {6 p9 U6 h. |4 q7 C# v/ e多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity! S# o; @: C6 w6 [
永难平息的泪0 B8 I. O5 v; v, a" |
每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes
8 n9 F3 G+ _9 n~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
6 J/ Y! \* `$ ]当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
* t% v% d8 r& J/ @, @1 L& _" T让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
2 r' V4 j! h' J你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
+ r/ U! d/ o5 w1 j/ p, E一抹微笑;- d7 w& [) [1 V& q1 A8 V
一个手势; i5 [" C% K: a6 U, \$ F, ^* h& f2 q
一片话语,% W1 R. l( X ~8 W
愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、* j! _+ V. [3 p% \# {
明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner
! \9 Z8 o% d, Z4 X心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.
9 J* c, L6 F) @这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
0 b4 e$ C/ E, B! t8 N) _/ \5 X1 c; Z也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..8 K& c3 h7 R; Y
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,9 I1 w1 ~, j# Z+ |
我并不以为然。
$ E- r; V: }2 [可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed
& Y! R& x5 k! Q慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .
8 c' ^( h9 O v* d$ q3 v被一种情绪所左右,
/ z; y& u7 v- a2 X9 E( h总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
2 [9 t8 B5 G# l" W% z" ]即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you( K) N/ g! f1 y1 J- }" w0 v s/ d
也不问我是否喜欢你,4 K# J& n, T1 S
对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.9 X L1 \: |7 U& B/ f
只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you4 Q [' g2 z/ R( j: ]/ V
3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you
7 F& ]( g" x) `( ?; Q心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil
Q, [! k% h' \然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
) m9 }) a) x# X$ J& C2 V3 h你的身影已化成一种氛围,# I. A0 @9 @& R, {0 g
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.; d7 ?3 F: ]5 e0 ~5 J r
你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
' ^8 x* P' v& R- B随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字; t5 E# p) z3 @' v
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,. P9 _0 G2 j1 b* \" e% k
一种声音,and your voice9 z. K* `. |+ ^ O
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
$ e5 }. [& v# J, t! M掺杂著幸福的感觉。
# A3 [' S* |2 Y与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land5 {* @" Q Q& \& v. S$ S
象雪花般撒落在我的心田,
. l. b. w( Y/ `倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.; F& J o/ f5 S9 J7 y. o' e/ Q
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。
T: ^/ R: U+ f: p7 |你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss- ]0 G8 g! _! _5 o
有一个能够让思念的人,
. Y1 p# C4 w& ^: @4 ?7 ~其实也是一种幸福。
$ ^. K4 o& ^: Z& |$ V" H尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer. # ?" `9 _& X4 G0 O, [$ a
柔柔的海风,, U% Y4 R" @; z( t: M3 F
甜甜的夏天。( K) }8 g7 k0 U" l% b+ U
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
7 @* ~: o0 T8 V$ D只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.8 B& {! F, Z- _! F2 a! W% a) z$ }
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.+ g( ]) ]* O5 A- g- e" L: D# d
想和你有共同的情结,
: n4 i8 n5 B% c1 i8 f) s2 L共同的心愿。( R# E0 F/ {+ v3 R
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
# p" @1 I2 Z& D3 {一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together5 H" D$ x- t1 |
或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film
% q9 }' t- z& g或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.
, L. l4 L% q5 ?! i& x『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?- ~& |5 G" r! H6 d0 n& @! T8 v4 C
我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, , ]. {( D" e4 r1 D6 K0 s8 b
浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you” i% g) }2 v; C! G
或是轻轻的一吻,) k: l- q+ y) y/ l8 |
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』7 P: B3 z7 c+ y3 a$ z
就足够了. That is enough.
* n; O8 e' m9 m4 B+ T2 u# d这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago!
; B9 K! u$ y' N/ C, {终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
4 y+ \9 }( S. L萌出了芽,: a6 S ?$ _. v2 @; T
一如对你的思念,the same as my missing
0 j A& p, Q G; {# \, q' `浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
5 L& M/ h: y) ~- }6 p! F- I如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand/ B/ ]3 {: f7 g: n
能够牵著你的手,* A9 ~( C2 g( Y3 a! B/ |
那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.& t/ e @) ^+ a" S( H2 Z9 k& E
让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully.
6 A U1 p, y+ D( [ v慢慢地细读,
D$ E! ]% t: V( t0 f我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
7 m2 ^- h& _: f+ N- A在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me
7 e; y: a( ?; i我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor
0 z9 r2 U/ Z) b, {就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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