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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
9 N6 \& h, x% j; u,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry. - V7 c2 F" g! s4 A
零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
, w7 p8 m9 S6 e, y# U* [现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.
- A; A r8 u- W5 y$ V* O+ f梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.( A/ w G. s' I- }
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
* O: ~& Q; l5 e; I- `夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.
; f9 v5 K6 a+ B F猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool., J' m2 \+ ^: c+ G% D: t$ t3 w
就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.
6 V7 ]; @7 k0 P8 ^/ J$ q我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及, h" ^) b5 [: n$ B+ c6 {' ?/ H
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
. o) P* {& J$ k世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
+ ^/ j' v& Z z: o8 J$ z昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
% d- V% }. I L" O" k( E# W' n想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.9 d* J" V+ W+ v! a& X
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild. 9 a1 [3 c6 l/ V8 v; F! l9 T' K5 T
寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?$ \ T) z& [" n0 j
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.& @$ P* T0 b5 b7 O! G9 C+ @
迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
, {4 j) `0 U0 [2 ~7 ?4 b# }最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
9 T6 U" e3 c& t6 }* v3 S! {' j8 ^多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
$ F% y% \" F9 r. e( ^Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
" @9 f& P* d2 i多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
0 c/ N3 ]& E F5 V6 R9 S) K不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.; X, }9 _0 I( L& t) o9 T" _7 R
多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, * M# x- K# N! m6 ?" S4 `
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?+ I7 X3 W" R- G3 Q1 j3 \, S; j* p
多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
* L) |9 Z: J+ S& }' w永难平息的泪. f" Z& S/ x4 I5 U2 |8 q
每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes' s9 z( |8 q$ F
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
# z, N8 L q* O. x3 x! a S. J. `当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.5 B& _% a# E: I! t; @2 @, V
让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,5 K: ~) I+ j, A+ S2 [& m; X+ g
你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
, M7 h9 d9 m* I7 r一抹微笑;9 |7 e2 k- y9 b* u {) ^+ Z
一个手势;$ h; D4 J0 Q8 L$ Y4 M
一片话语,7 U& d3 O8 G5 H" L
愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、1 F' s0 b3 @6 H. s! D D
明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner
6 L( \% R" T' @9 f心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.
9 ]4 T/ Q1 A5 c' K/ p3 J这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
" T- N: M. F9 }6 N也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..
# U: V+ M) F( I0 e9 f. \起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,' j3 v- }& [0 U; @, Y6 M' ^
我并不以为然。8 K/ w6 s) J4 e( j1 ^4 `
可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed 9 d3 J& W8 q* e
慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .2 |* S" h- _" L- f/ b0 o- ~! F: P
被一种情绪所左右," ~2 `. ]2 Q9 b0 s) t
总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .% t% _9 I) n; f5 B
即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you- m% T5 _1 f* R+ t& e/ T
也不问我是否喜欢你,+ S9 ?+ ~: K6 J) v2 p" w3 O* ]
对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
# L: \; ?/ w, @: G' o, v只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
$ q! T9 K. K$ @: t3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you
! S. n5 H4 o- [- _心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil3 k d+ Z* E: ?6 P2 y8 n' q c
然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
- D% n. ~2 ]4 q; P你的身影已化成一种氛围,# r/ ~7 ]. |! t1 z! G
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.2 I, d+ |8 [9 L H
你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
0 ]3 H% O6 K" ^( `! N/ n随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字. c8 }0 N' A8 z3 t% W% Y
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,, Z! Z3 G v, |, L8 [0 \ _- C
一种声音,and your voice
' `. ]$ I' _7 }8 j6 y: F" l# Z也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.3 Z% q% w' d! n4 r _4 U
掺杂著幸福的感觉。
& a' C* c* b. i与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
& [- e( ]* s% C* S; ~/ G" x象雪花般撒落在我的心田,
( ]2 m9 q) O3 N: B) `$ z倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.4 V3 J& `6 l# U7 `
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。! H3 T/ X" L4 J# [6 F
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss" e' y1 J: a/ l, j
有一个能够让思念的人,' S" [7 w i: v; `2 W/ A8 M9 i
其实也是一种幸福。/ S, r" H( q" m+ _/ N. k3 W
尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer. $ g5 m/ D1 i2 u
柔柔的海风,! c( Q# y9 z$ ]: U/ p ~
甜甜的夏天。
& c, C6 Q+ y$ y( J- q2 _- S6 Y一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy * `5 J! p$ C2 X* e
只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.0 M! ]6 p$ q- [- W! s
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.& F* u! C6 L% G9 \. d. Y
想和你有共同的情结,
3 s! {. O$ r0 A1 r共同的心愿。: W: l) L- {- e9 o( W
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
6 Q/ ?+ V: Z* X( l0 q6 b: u一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together
# d3 h! G) N1 y8 y5 q4 r6 ]或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film ( w6 n! C, X: I( `4 V1 v
或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.4 X1 Y% _; X9 Z8 O5 g3 l
『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
6 f. G( Z9 [4 c; g2 J- T7 F我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
/ r8 `" ?# o+ J1 R# \浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
& P& _5 `. b4 e: I- e或是轻轻的一吻,% {; j, m4 x1 A9 M# e3 t
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』9 H# H9 g. Y! M! d
就足够了. That is enough.
5 H) v( _: s9 d( H' v# b, }这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago!
+ a, c1 Z. c9 c9 \. r& ] ^6 f, M终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
' q0 A4 R- g' H7 r% V& p! |萌出了芽,
2 J2 e3 |5 T/ h0 Y' Z, F一如对你的思念,the same as my missing% K' n3 ]5 V4 |. a( ]
浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
$ Q/ \9 \# j% Z$ \如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand! E9 W" m8 S* D
能够牵著你的手,
/ y, O8 n1 T# \+ d& p0 S( |那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
1 e0 _, y+ e* B让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. * @4 S5 x- n" m- f# x( N; I8 q
慢慢地细读,/ a2 G/ a R8 ] i
我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. ) w% `, L0 }6 Q8 l6 r
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me
0 `' p5 A& C( k$ k p/ @% _我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor
/ l1 Q5 a) Y' ^0 S5 @, }/ c就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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