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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
% C" T" P! K4 {& S2 `3 J: o; w,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
2 e: ?: W/ b$ k+ U1 X+ o& a3 D2 t零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running . & a1 ?" L% S, V! t, T- O& J* L
现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.+ J9 W1 x2 P* |$ |0 p. _
梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.- E, {. X' d W* z: S; K# d, s* I1 n
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.8 ?% b/ T( N* ^6 a7 M8 R
夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.5 `. n5 T- Z& e
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.. z' Z! `; X9 t e. w3 \- P; |) k, S
就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.; r$ e2 T7 r& p) W+ V
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及
9 Z. L' h- }' b% }9 C那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
' Z. E' O A8 l2 e6 g世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
5 _' t/ f3 U7 D! y$ K昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night., o, t' {# w3 k* p
想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
# v; N# u# K" s- F最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
w: Y7 I! X# {) R' O寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?* z/ `% E% S' R& X+ \* J
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
+ V* p/ x9 g$ O4 n" {& a迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
+ v: B0 _% {5 r$ B& m9 u4 V最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.+ Y6 F9 ~1 f+ I0 p' t3 t3 U
多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
) l" x+ g+ D' g% YWhy I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….) Z7 f% Q% f1 a# d n
多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously- q9 _4 M. ^/ X, B- i( K
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.% Q. Q5 v& u4 ~5 x& V, C& v7 O6 o
多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, . j3 I" f5 U9 P* D c0 x
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?! L7 S* X% s* x) o# H4 k$ w
多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!" R0 P U/ Y: s4 m1 p* K; E) a( Z
永难平息的泪
7 ~, _) @, ]$ d每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes
( z0 G* Y5 R- `~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
. y l- Y4 t! C* d, v当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.. |4 W. f# P8 O2 c. D" j, K' S
让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
, ^2 p+ H) H/ ]& @" \* t8 ^你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul # u. [/ C7 z! k7 v" p; y
一抹微笑;
$ c6 c/ s; P! d* J一个手势;
& X5 U1 c/ h( O& r" t: d+ T一片话语,
) B5 {7 Y2 I6 A# s愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、) V' G. n. h/ ~4 Y T
明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner: l) x/ a( z1 J6 K2 Q
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.: s4 I# z- X+ q0 ]0 \" m
这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
3 T$ L" x3 S" l. m, a! i8 V也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..
c: G) n* l; T4 r" l; Y. x8 E6 y起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
4 Z$ {# y# F( Z! b" v我并不以为然。
6 g* p0 `/ n3 k可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed
+ C: o9 s, W4 i5 V5 Q3 U0 j慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .7 _! f% @! J b( `0 S7 i1 a
被一种情绪所左右,
0 N, c. w8 n9 ?总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
; w$ G2 [3 B+ A, K) K即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you2 n1 x% I- Q5 H! ^6 K& k
也不问我是否喜欢你,
: k0 P. N' Q# @- J1 j7 O2 m* O对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing." o; v* S5 u8 J0 Q3 \
只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you. [4 o( r, H* X+ K1 v
3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you# I8 n T, a+ o- ]0 W1 Y5 D5 G
心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil+ s. F+ ?/ X1 s1 K' v2 T d
然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
2 @/ T) \6 P( h) h" ]: F你的身影已化成一种氛围,
8 B6 h. j6 R5 z8 @3 q7 A记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.
, v2 H) A, O- t你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! & Y8 Q" K; {" f3 x3 q
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字' ?* r1 s% h% w7 K9 A
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,+ l5 l. l$ d! \
一种声音,and your voice4 a6 D6 m9 l" @/ N8 h
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.. Y3 B9 e* x6 j' a# v
掺杂著幸福的感觉。
4 I$ H! H' E" z5 m4 R8 j* r与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land, O9 u2 q4 g9 C- g; }2 N" c( _; c8 [0 @0 b
象雪花般撒落在我的心田,
4 t9 O0 X6 S+ s8 Z倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
2 f4 K9 r r/ w' X7 m2 |; q q纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。4 s" [! m$ e& g$ |+ _
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss3 N' l* ]3 Q, r/ d
有一个能够让思念的人,
9 M9 [3 M/ i4 P- F! q" i- G其实也是一种幸福。
5 |7 E! f. L. i: J" `尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
6 d K: b2 z. t柔柔的海风,
% I3 E( q3 _) W5 H# Q4 C9 s7 D甜甜的夏天。$ ]% `3 i, k, p0 A
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy 9 I" N7 p, N; w* w" T8 }* j8 K; c
只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.5 T; J( U- q, f5 [0 E' s
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
]% \$ F1 A# h想和你有共同的情结,
- ~( g% b* e- C* G共同的心愿。
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
9 X' X, p3 d/ y/ D$ J. `2 v2 o一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together# X' C6 [9 \( r& D
或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film
7 `1 _: O3 x. `& O或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.3 Y4 P1 g" t2 `" Y' v' V
『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
, v& b2 V$ y; I/ c) W4 s: H我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, . T$ ~: [" W6 x% Y) \
浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
* i; s6 r0 i3 y% {& N' g* G; o/ O1 \或是轻轻的一吻,9 C9 ~) D$ n# X m9 `1 H
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』
3 d! _9 A Z8 d0 q. Z2 N$ L7 N* l就足够了. That is enough.
% g: c; k2 q% D0 ]这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! 9 `0 b1 P5 O4 l F2 b
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.7 t; m6 U }$ r& l$ L: M
萌出了芽,
1 T+ t$ {& p8 m- L, T1 y, H一如对你的思念,the same as my missing
- F" I2 U8 `9 F2 o1 x, c浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
0 a+ W8 U3 E$ n8 G如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand" v8 x6 R% l& }: p& |. l: y% m6 X
能够牵著你的手," }) {' n& W$ V1 ~$ c$ {+ Q: Y7 v
那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
# T/ {1 {+ N# T; H3 ?让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. 8 f P7 U4 o/ G, v3 z; t
慢慢地细读,
) b* B+ }; q9 b% G7 p; T我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. # L8 B- Z# I* E2 I# K7 ]
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me
. m0 \+ H/ @- s1 h5 L9 T1 S我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor ' L# X- Y( a( C6 [3 j
就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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