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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
4 O5 V: r: I$ J K1 O,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry. 9 L, W4 B9 s& h1 W" ]2 }; A3 a1 @$ d
零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
$ w; S* L) {. V3 L: x6 s" c现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.$ `! Y& {8 H( A& V* ], c
梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.: \! A- c( K1 V) X; Y
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something./ i! b7 c) X; i# B: C
夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.3 ]' r1 m( R2 e. t/ z: Q, J
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.: I" Q# U; B& _% J: M+ p
就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.
5 W/ @+ N$ t0 M2 [( l我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及" }, d' {& t; r' m8 Y2 f: L, b$ z# h
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。$ [& o! M9 V* t
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
) V& `, N# [2 v3 h6 \# v& v& Q8 Q昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
; N- e( V- t G' ?想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
; E1 ?: e' m2 B q最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
2 Y: m# V% ]% a! t( W2 h4 s) t寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?
6 P' J+ B. t0 \" i, M' r+ s/ v醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.( U, A2 X7 j5 Z3 ]
迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.5 n8 @7 R+ H, q6 K
最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
% l8 }) E' v, j) \' i4 s$ f& I多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?6 @5 _# V1 r& f, g( g) x& S
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….8 {# Z3 u" v# q x: J
多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
7 ^: d) [8 I- X* E不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
1 r3 Y- B. r7 m N) Q0 H, e/ L多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, - J/ C( }% v7 {; d& T
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
2 C7 E# |& \# B* L多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
9 F; l+ e. a9 l2 c( E* G2 e% e永难平息的泪6 f- I, w( F3 }' c
每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes1 d) M8 x3 ?$ w# a% K5 p( p
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.( i! \/ d4 g6 ~4 D9 \5 W8 G! x
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
( u% l* F$ [' M8 M& e; U# D$ q1 V让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,3 |, T' Y# Y- x7 l
你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
" C0 a& G# g3 S2 M; h# P' H% l一抹微笑;* o; [3 L5 w6 T5 E7 H6 N
一个手势;
6 H5 ?% W* F3 [. }一片话语,6 @7 X! ]$ m) A f O* y" t4 U2 q
愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、# v+ ~5 U" I. T
明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner
# Z& z, Z9 H, C心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.
2 O' g$ T5 Y: L, C% ]/ E2 m# K这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
) D' `( `3 R4 H0 q4 G2 ~1 I$ ~也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..
% d; r/ B, B- v: c: F起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,# q! x' Z% \% g! I$ j* b, b, D
我并不以为然。
, j) R- T; x( T5 e; J# Y3 |可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed ! M! u- I! w' t# R% S; T# n
慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .. d) q, w2 n3 g9 I7 e
被一种情绪所左右,; Z P2 d8 O& w: u
总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
9 v7 h& ` U7 i; b即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
+ g5 ]) `- v6 f/ b1 K6 P3 I; l$ B3 b4 K也不问我是否喜欢你,) e; g7 l. H: f8 H6 `9 f3 L
对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
1 H& g, b h* M7 C# E: A) {; r只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
' X% l0 R% C. i$ z4 A3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you& s- V3 U4 ?# T8 S' T/ m2 J
心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil1 q$ B# {4 t5 `% R2 M, A' d
然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere " G: L6 P% a% j b) r5 f; R
你的身影已化成一种氛围,
. l0 n! e' k2 m2 K; M; r$ Z记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.
/ U1 \, Q1 s0 w1 D; ^. u5 f# Y/ q; X你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
% _( ~& d6 h/ y. y7 ?随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字2 b9 c% c) |/ q% Z
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,4 f( j( K/ F5 W( t0 ~" F1 c; C
一种声音,and your voice
( M C+ I0 [1 b# e$ Q ~4 D$ ?也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
* r, u5 U7 x) m, m4 l% n5 \掺杂著幸福的感觉。
* [' g. j9 L1 _! _5 H与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land2 h* E9 N1 @; q2 q( q, E9 D
象雪花般撒落在我的心田,2 o5 I: m l9 _9 ]0 B3 u1 N
倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.$ _9 G' u; I* a) k) l
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。
, s/ w) E# S! y3 v4 ?8 s; j9 h, q你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss
* i3 r' F3 ~# @! w' [有一个能够让思念的人,; {+ ?- x4 b5 L8 b% u& L
其实也是一种幸福。* m) d& {: \, D& c6 ?2 q. f
尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer. $ ]+ o: E: @ a4 q4 T6 Q
柔柔的海风,& ~9 Q: C1 s! Y( t0 f
甜甜的夏天。
8 Y/ w+ x2 {9 j( E一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy 2 ~3 _( K2 {" T' d$ R% J1 ?
只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.0 p, G3 {" A1 s; j
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
. Q% Y z6 R* ]& I3 B想和你有共同的情结,
& T0 A5 t8 q0 o共同的心愿。
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you0 a4 y8 v- U: ~9 z
一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together
`3 S- w I- G }或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film
! q: N8 Z+ P3 P, N B7 [8 _或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.' n# X `7 [- L' J; A
『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?# O( u6 o3 Q2 V# Z
我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
& K' E' a/ Q% Z: b. H浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”6 ?% R/ }! {4 P0 d
或是轻轻的一吻,
6 ^* c& D8 b) @ q; L. h再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』
7 ]5 w( O( | ~9 U# C就足够了. That is enough.
2 V# S" `% e5 a# c这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! 5 t: K. D4 Q7 s3 h
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
; h. v" p6 l1 L4 i n0 j T$ |萌出了芽,- G2 R9 E g; S6 T
一如对你的思念,the same as my missing
/ Z5 f+ ~) z3 X- g/ y4 d浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
, h& `6 a% ~% s8 B+ F如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand3 f! ^8 G/ r7 K8 {* r
能够牵著你的手,
U) {# E+ v' V5 K/ Z4 J6 Q8 u- l那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.: _, d" O: i. A _5 E; F
让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully.
0 U' s q# I) h慢慢地细读,
# x6 c3 W) p# w* h6 @ Y5 O# ? L我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. $ V" @% X, L- D8 _* E- G8 o5 \
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me : n2 l4 d: ^, P2 k
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor % j2 X: K5 q8 `; Y/ V0 Y* D5 i. y
就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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