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每当说一句汉语的时候,我总在心里想英语是怎么说的.尤其看到汉语诗歌的时候,我突然想,翻译成英语还能保留原来的意思吗?所以试着译一译.2 l& V& x; m) k
前边发了译文以后才发现有些大小写和语法错误.一点一点地改,很乱.所以再重新发一便:
5 v. {& `5 N9 PEarly morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
: ?, }- _$ k) K& y; r- ~Partial leaves fall down everywhere,squirrels are busily running.6 O, q7 U9 f! D/ g; a
Current I, the same as one tear ago, the same given name, and the same family name.
" W1 r" I' K6 g0 V+ Z) c/ EThe same hairstyle,the same bag,reserved laughing and talking.* y- l; v4 s- G$ e9 c" x ?3 t
Seemly added something in my eyes,or lacked something.* n" t; @- A" h- J. [* G' R
Summer went so fast that I almost forgot those sweating night:
5 Q% U m/ q, _0 HCats often played at the whole hot night outside windows to get cool
4 G9 z" V* c% F' J1 F: N6 G/ Xlike us many years ago,mindless self indulgence.
2 J. d, H" @% h) N k% sI often cherish the memory happened in summer and those people that make me raint even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming.
2 o {( R& k4 E- CThe emotion and the carma only is a dream.7 B0 e X9 B% R' @
That shoudn`t happen to meet each other last tenderlt night.
( h$ S" a9 O' G3 Y0 D. eI want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
P$ L# l4 I; UI am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.0 i/ A0 j6 @6 R: n" ^
In this lonely world whom I can step inside love to?
: H1 m: u2 U* E0 AIntoxicated then feel cold,' R( U" z9 z6 t% ]4 G
the labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
) J. D& \- S5 ^& J; p5 {6 T& }I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
3 D, ]- o( [% X; a4 }/ u3 @The amorous man to whom you gave your soul?; G, j A0 f0 I7 ^# H+ j/ M, G
Why I am always hoodwinked!
6 |! q; Q% G( J9 ?; C- m& S5 cI have told myself many times cautiously
$ i* U- Y4 B* _/ Y# ~& Bdon`t fall into the spoony whirligig.) |+ ?9 k( ~8 H1 y7 b
The amorous women always get drunk by desolation.
( \( X, @. i9 C& P, e2 fWhy can`t I take it easy?
9 t$ E ?5 O. S/ ^) O# \- k8 s6 HHow endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!+ L0 U$ M) {0 k; `9 U( N4 X
When the quiet night comes' S, F1 X1 ^4 v+ ?! N1 y+ v
your figure usually appears in front of my eyes., x; q5 [3 P* `# x, T
The greeting when you met me made my heart in touched unaccountably.
- E, ~- Z# \3 B& \$ cYours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul,6 t2 _. @+ d- Y0 V+ A( C; o. n
light the dark corner in my mind., y. [+ K9 \0 r9 T0 S+ a
I feel a bit of cozy.
9 S7 d5 r$ {/ O6 R% iThe deep attached to you in a twinkling
8 O3 U, g. \& O4 {% L smaybe is the most light spot in my whole life.
- ]' G2 u$ D( L. g% p. a; lI didn`t cherish your appearance at first,. I/ ^5 y1 R- h: T3 R
but accompanying with the time passed* C; U0 M" y5 W! q; W. R1 {
I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion,
# P1 Q- s. _) aalways feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly.
" m6 e% e; R: fWithout asking if you like me or if I like you8 G4 s$ P6 A9 w) Z
only feel gracious for your existing,
$ Q1 G( U7 O) ?, e7 v" |onlt want to do something for you.
* q# e, z' X6 \0 t. cEvery time when you meet me
) z& D* r2 L* B5 h6 Nthe sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil,' F/ }9 i1 w. I+ |5 d% S" C: T
but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
1 t5 I8 ^0 @3 f- {; B4 t: vThat live in my heart., N! C1 O* L' Y
Do you know your name can suddenly come into mu mind at anytime?! W" ~9 l2 V4 A
Even only your flying clothes` corner when you turn around, and your voice3 O C: _- V2 x$ k
make me gently distraught with happy feeling., |0 b5 ~; @7 |% }
The scene that met you prinkle in my heart like snow on the land
8 P3 \. ?& k/ asuddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
5 j" D( B( m3 S" p$ s9 IDo you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss,
- U) @: b. p/ Z+ l/ r8 cespecially on the day, the gentle sea breeze and the sweet summer.
( t- F# t% O0 _9 ?Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy 6 O1 o% Z; f* q5 ^3 Q
only waiting for you quietly
7 g' w. d& F L u/ E& A6 w4 }, |just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
1 V* T8 l/ F- q D- m$ u1 eI really want to ramble in the small rain with you
% V7 |2 C( L3 X; f% gand enjoy the rain washing together! v6 s( f9 x, `+ E
or rush to a film
0 d) X7 l" t' Y. Tor listen to a music quietly.0 n1 r! f0 K. N7 @. L4 A4 R
Whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?6 q! v, Z+ e7 t$ U, z4 h" f
If we embrace ,dance,and gaze to each other,
/ n" L! U4 @+ I! c3 j: [smile or gently kiss then say: I really love you".. {! v1 f- T! I/ M) g7 U1 _) ]" r/ c
That is enough.* ^/ I/ m/ q6 p; e* U e( F6 u9 x
Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago,
7 ~" d( e. x: rfinely it deeply rooted into the earth in the season and sprout,
4 t) U+ g! y' a; m9 @& othe same as my missing.
/ i7 N0 A* y+ N5 F0 `$ jIt comes a little bit of verdure.
+ {( {8 u# v$ p# \# ^9 tIf, If some day I can touch your hand,
$ E2 L& G, A. pthen I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely." \+ P5 b) q+ q9 R
Let you touch me gently and read me carefully.
1 q' o0 t$ t$ \/ @' W" h: MI will enjoy your mild emotion through your hands with my heart and soul.
6 y/ ]& d! Q0 ~# {2 @8 T. DAt the moment you reach out your hands to me ,
7 F+ ]9 I+ r ] r/ `! Gthen I will have all care and ardor.7 [: [# [% w0 j7 }9 h
Shall we walk arm in arm?
a& e0 e9 N( R3 y. w$ R M* a8 C呵,太晚了,连检查都不想检查一下,有没有打字错误了. |
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