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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
/ E* v- Q7 p: n, H+ i7 m,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
: I- j3 O. v# Q! G0 Z零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
( t; n! r& R5 p/ z现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.+ J N5 ]8 j g4 D2 o$ C5 z
梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.6 L. {- m B4 ~$ ]8 \& p
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.* Z% T9 }# C5 F; a' d
夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.+ V7 ]& j" Z1 y7 |. j( e% x( A/ k# d
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
+ m# Y7 S. @+ _ N. o4 x就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.
$ y c* g$ m8 ^+ Y我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及
# \8 B& e% ~" y3 {* y3 q% K% w那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
) |, I* S& V& i世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
1 w; y# [2 m/ X% L0 F昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
' b7 z5 c8 [, w- k% A想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
, m" C& B" u* g6 N7 g3 i3 L# ]最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
, d( M; t) U) h4 |/ Q寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?
8 l8 R; n5 B: p8 M R q: {醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold., V( J/ W# n( U! p6 J) y
迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
+ i, t! u {! c; ]0 i最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
8 I5 B! x! z8 [3 T5 P+ S$ |多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?* V/ d ?$ b6 M; k9 \$ _
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….; M3 ?+ E5 o. a, g$ h
多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously- N* ?, g0 M+ y8 t* V6 H, G' I
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.# A8 @& W- a! }( I) @+ q
多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation,
4 N+ q% h0 V& G8 n5 `为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
4 t; {3 S" i5 U8 [ @多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!1 U- o N4 _% n! _# s
永难平息的泪
- J( w9 F% Z& s% `" M* Z/ `6 V3 f% O每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes
1 R6 p/ ]4 C# A; k% K~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.6 w: j+ j# G# \
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
: I+ B2 L. [, ^& ]: {$ X让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,6 I, C) h3 r. C: D
你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul ( k2 r; i' E0 Y% |( i
一抹微笑;
9 p) t" [4 v- z6 y5 d一个手势;+ L, C' Y2 f1 L2 E: N3 J4 l
一片话语,
: s- z; Z7 t# v+ R; S愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、4 f2 l8 r' Y5 K8 l& u0 d
明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner9 E( R; l" t! c {6 M
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy., w9 ], P; s. z; d
这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
! N$ z# a+ J9 ] _1 M/ E! X6 u也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..: N% H) @8 D4 f, R' t
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
8 ]8 `, A7 p! a$ K5 z# [我并不以为然。2 W& D* r1 W7 ]- R2 i: R) K
可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed
7 ^9 W' a+ H6 |5 T/ \( w {* p慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion ." i! B0 a2 r: [$ `/ m) ] V
被一种情绪所左右,6 d$ M9 n* z! q# ]6 K0 d; J
总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .$ m& q+ |9 T& `5 A6 ^6 q
即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you N u( J! p2 f7 F- y; o/ ^+ W
也不问我是否喜欢你,, G4 t: s" V- b, _7 c6 L) a
对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
# d2 ]% x4 K ?4 \; X只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
1 Q/ r- B. I' H7 Q6 d1 U3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you
, k0 s, b( O( u心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil9 r, l$ g. n6 ~
然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
) y1 w! a" m2 o你的身影已化成一种氛围,' l# W. a! n( r
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.- L% C3 _; `0 G
你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! # f+ }) w! m$ R. m* D5 r# |
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字
7 ]: @" @1 z' _& t- n/ p* n哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,$ t; ^$ s6 `" I: L8 b
一种声音,and your voice V0 [: m9 B9 x/ a8 a
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.% C( e5 T* N! L! f
掺杂著幸福的感觉。! o9 S0 L9 z# @5 s% ?0 Z& `
与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
5 l4 [! b5 w1 \* Z$ a8 n象雪花般撒落在我的心田,
% F5 \& L& K- C; f) f1 z$ N: }+ Z1 o倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.3 X. k' \# `4 o3 a7 ~" o
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。
5 a: L. _) }: P# p. v你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss/ f7 Z( v( T3 p: o! I
有一个能够让思念的人,
0 R$ v" j; V" S7 S0 ?8 @其实也是一种幸福。
; |6 i( E/ ], j尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer. % y7 J/ b+ d5 E
柔柔的海风,2 d/ r1 v' V. y$ k. h
甜甜的夏天。
7 D9 t3 Q; S) L& l: q1 G. k/ ]一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy & S6 I7 P! M+ r9 [( B+ q5 O
只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.
$ R+ I& b; g+ [1 \3 W仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.3 a; ^5 M1 `/ \; _& e
想和你有共同的情结,
j7 y4 H, r+ v7 ~/ m; p$ B共同的心愿。
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$ W7 H' \# U% m2 v7 c好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
% B2 R" F9 Z8 Y一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together
* P% T+ }- J6 J; U) \$ y或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film
8 p- |" s" {9 V7 G或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly." A3 _. F7 K+ P6 J6 b* k2 n
『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?4 J' u# J* F. b0 Z* b8 H
我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, ' j1 X( z( c- J& v$ x* N
浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”) L" M0 t. u4 r5 K# b7 T
或是轻轻的一吻,
4 _9 O( P0 X. W2 t再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』+ H% I5 ]6 z' A0 R, F# ?5 r6 o5 E1 `+ k
就足够了. That is enough." B% O; Z% t& p: Z) ]
这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! 7 x! B! Y4 X$ l- f% G. i9 H% D. t
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout./ v, S: n$ d' m0 D, R
萌出了芽,. O7 c7 Z) _1 X0 ]6 h$ U0 N
一如对你的思念,the same as my missing
i2 d! l2 |$ s) |6 p& E% F/ \浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.3 L- @" J8 T: R- n
如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand
* a: E- x6 U: ~' t0 w" K& W能够牵著你的手,
: w0 s" H8 t- g" z, r3 \3 z那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
0 n L. \9 \# g1 s2 K让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully.
$ ?; H. R4 Z$ ~5 l慢慢地细读,
, c6 R+ I/ Q { R- }& x! r" k我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
, L, L' }- X+ V) C7 e' h5 U6 d在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me ' ^7 p& q7 U# ~1 z
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor - k& T, n* l, e* W
就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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