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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
' ~# i3 X6 e. p6 H# _,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
6 t" U9 K; }: I" m$ {. K) s' B零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
7 {* o) Y4 x4 h/ Y5 v: _- ~9 E现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.
; \% E2 i4 t; f& N8 b% r7 d' ]1 f梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.
) [2 m: @( E2 p1 r. p) \+ W眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
_$ y& q. e7 w) z b, b% C夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.# U! L) v& F8 X4 A$ j$ k
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool." I" v, F: T0 o
就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.
( Y) e4 w) a& m P% |我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及
t$ [1 ^9 @, T2 R那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
3 X* U; o* F' T+ L. \! b世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
# p6 M' O+ @" \5 ^# N昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night./ Y8 e; K3 Z; Y' T7 m3 ?& [" s M6 [
想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
) Q5 U' [* c4 _5 f9 Y最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
$ o" b. r) O9 M, o) A& m5 K0 C寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?! D f- A/ K/ u! B7 ^1 c
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold. F! D$ j# }% `" J5 o0 D
迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.* {9 i# v6 k9 E! K R+ F
最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
5 ^+ f1 w) |% E* B' Z Y) i多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
s( o4 b+ F- P. |; e" A! X6 d, AWhy I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….2 s5 c- R4 {" ^; d( j
多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
6 ~ @- x0 Z5 ?& z# t不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
2 W9 E2 E: k# _- Y( y2 |" y多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation,
2 D, _5 L9 S) t: L9 w# Y# z; [为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
2 S3 w' n. r2 O- W( \+ v1 Z多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!6 l& W# b: u- C* D0 v3 [$ s
永难平息的泪+ ~. U; S. d, r! o+ e
每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes" h" Q6 m8 O2 W3 e$ H5 X
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.# B/ Q! i w; ]! I8 V
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.* p/ _, ~; w( F* d1 R5 p
让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
+ k3 M8 r. M# ^你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul 4 d; Z- A" d) ]8 l( \
一抹微笑;
1 V& B9 v9 ?6 ^, k% F一个手势;: J7 M( K! X( T7 m$ ?: W3 O2 _& L1 c
一片话语,
5 y" s, \( z1 y+ `( d6 O, n5 | @愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、7 l& @7 ~ U! A; S+ |; }8 k% |
明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner
0 @- c# q; g9 Z+ D心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.: |! Z8 K% q- A
这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
( @0 C% h4 t! ]* D也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..
: b# y; a E* b# e( Y) e* n4 a# P起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
) j% }% p5 [+ @' y9 u7 {% [, O* m4 a我并不以为然。$ R2 ?) U/ y* J7 f9 |9 `* c
可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed
( T5 _" r5 m1 m慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .! }0 \+ c3 V# }
被一种情绪所左右,9 k* g" p. ^ E1 e/ l
总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
' D. D. R; a" J& E即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you+ ^; w/ O; E( ^* y) ]1 u
也不问我是否喜欢你,
, q, p E9 L( {: b+ J! K对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
( f0 g% I, d% Z+ F1 s只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you# L% \% F# o* r* A% W8 [/ h" E
3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you U3 t$ g1 r7 w6 Z! e7 q4 F
心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil8 V1 p6 B$ S J; m: ? Z
然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere $ `5 Z$ ]( j& a' }
你的身影已化成一种氛围," T) v7 X6 V& [
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.
& G% D) l! M9 s$ T, f) o你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! 1 e# j2 |1 \& A( N3 T
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字9 a" |8 r- T) R% @* T6 f9 B
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,
1 \. e1 H# Q/ \一种声音,and your voice9 R! }$ c& W* u/ a* l6 F9 c5 e
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.9 \. O6 W2 o& L
掺杂著幸福的感觉。
: Q" M" G d& F- B% P与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
4 Q& f1 w1 G& D# M1 Z, H0 w3 Y, W5 @% ?象雪花般撒落在我的心田,
) \: T1 Q$ V/ `1 C倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.( X% \, a5 q9 T: B8 T U" K
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。
3 M6 y0 N3 \ U5 ^4 e你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss# c5 A H. r$ V) }. r
有一个能够让思念的人,
' [( F8 E& s1 [! |9 d/ d1 \& X其实也是一种幸福。7 f5 A! Q) O" p& R8 \: ~
尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer. : Q$ L9 A [' X
柔柔的海风,
& q* H' P/ i: s5 U甜甜的夏天。
2 U' H/ F+ [# {1 b! @% S- o一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
0 N9 \- @- W* Q2 z只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.
6 D+ l, q$ l! O. v8 i" V仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.5 u" R3 A. O2 e i i* O
想和你有共同的情结,8 X3 J5 G, F" X0 u( M
共同的心愿。
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you) u1 K7 \- ]; u5 N
一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together; s- k7 C( c1 Z7 f5 _
或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film
$ k! C0 D% f% `或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.
3 e: V6 p8 |; e( y『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?* _" i; W8 G' O' a2 }
我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, 4 ]& G+ P8 ~& B$ @4 f6 h
浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”4 n2 G! L* _: X. Z9 A
或是轻轻的一吻,
# ^5 ]# }6 `8 j# E7 }" Z再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』" n n2 g9 j5 p
就足够了. That is enough.
3 E. j3 \: A# o5 i这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! ) b& z0 v; c( ]8 C- u; ], ~, u
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
- u# o$ [+ D# s- i萌出了芽,9 H2 S+ p) S/ H* g, f
一如对你的思念,the same as my missing1 F; S$ I4 `" q) g2 `
浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure., e0 B7 z) e$ s& o' x
如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand
+ l2 b+ }* v5 j7 v3 A( H" }能够牵著你的手,: K6 P' }* e) f- F9 V# C7 ~$ c0 ]
那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
$ Q8 Z+ @+ B4 U7 Q! }让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully.
# z: J) T, k8 r6 d慢慢地细读,
0 [5 R8 C! H, f2 C0 d我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. & H/ J X2 T2 w& Q- h% D3 y
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me
$ F1 u1 ?+ z- \/ n, e2 i我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor " k& C% |* N6 P) ]* b
就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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