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每当说一句汉语的时候,我总在心里想英语是怎么说的.尤其看到汉语诗歌的时候,我突然想,翻译成英语还能保留原来的意思吗?所以试着译一译.
& r# ?2 [- b' `% b前边发了译文以后才发现有些大小写和语法错误.一点一点地改,很乱.所以再重新发一便:1 X/ ~2 t6 D2 R9 W6 b2 W
Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
$ E) Q- y2 }" P" E, v$ a6 JPartial leaves fall down everywhere,squirrels are busily running.
2 Q# ]- d+ k, A6 \ Current I, the same as one tear ago, the same given name, and the same family name.
/ K/ u- Y- c/ [6 `3 ?0 W+ bThe same hairstyle,the same bag,reserved laughing and talking.6 _3 w( P0 j/ T0 I- d* r% M
Seemly added something in my eyes,or lacked something.
/ Y& `& Z, O$ v9 w m" d$ ]1 q5 vSummer went so fast that I almost forgot those sweating night:
6 y1 @) ^' Q' q2 S) o3 J3 I) ?Cats often played at the whole hot night outside windows to get cool 3 w& P4 X" g" I
like us many years ago,mindless self indulgence.7 g- s8 t6 J: V9 B) W: g: Y
I often cherish the memory happened in summer and those people that make me raint even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming., H8 T9 l9 F k0 `8 e
The emotion and the carma only is a dream.% O! `+ [& z& N9 n7 K
That shoudn`t happen to meet each other last tenderlt night.- q/ t& O- E& U+ ]% a4 }
I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.; `5 [8 `. I, [
I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
9 }; u f# u. j% ]* d: bIn this lonely world whom I can step inside love to?" }' M0 c$ N8 F3 M& J. v
Intoxicated then feel cold," X; t, h0 D A. Y" a
the labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
( |3 v$ ^8 R- |, Z; A# Y+ G4 rI am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
. Y: M6 A U* a% NThe amorous man to whom you gave your soul?, `) V y4 c2 ~! i3 z4 p$ p
Why I am always hoodwinked!
& j% h1 J: F# p; ^I have told myself many times cautiously + |5 d( E6 W: x
don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.8 v/ P/ a( M. r! q8 F! Z5 T' y; |
The amorous women always get drunk by desolation.
- _2 Q$ `* V% Z. wWhy can`t I take it easy?
0 o" q8 f1 Y) d* @! t, H1 f7 _1 NHow endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
/ l4 W* S7 V9 N9 k+ _2 \When the quiet night comes8 S/ {7 O# j6 }" A% v& R7 _$ L
your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
) g( ~4 e V1 |6 w7 JThe greeting when you met me made my heart in touched unaccountably.1 ^, b5 s/ C3 O7 W
Yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul,
0 D' O7 i( ~7 I0 i! T2 {light the dark corner in my mind.! {0 M* x9 h# w! z" I; u
I feel a bit of cozy.2 a7 x8 x1 }8 W+ ]$ u
The deep attached to you in a twinkling
7 y3 w6 x; u. Xmaybe is the most light spot in my whole life.
0 l, c& ?2 o: wI didn`t cherish your appearance at first,- U# u# g9 W, j: B: z$ y
but accompanying with the time passed
6 Y H2 @9 I$ C1 D- ?" uI am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion,
( ~- u7 U t4 O+ ralways feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly.$ \9 m9 A* c5 R# r- _ f
Without asking if you like me or if I like you0 q- o' h3 ]" t( {8 |/ A
only feel gracious for your existing,6 A/ I5 `! `( Y( a& C* V
onlt want to do something for you.
9 n2 G" _/ b( w1 o1 oEvery time when you meet me f4 H" v0 ~) u' Q
the sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil,
) p; s; d0 q# W1 f8 f% |but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
% `. h+ G8 C; {" F" z3 D1 dThat live in my heart.
4 g7 a3 A/ C5 j* q# X# ]Do you know your name can suddenly come into mu mind at anytime?
* J. S1 @! i# ?4 Q: A+ A' jEven only your flying clothes` corner when you turn around, and your voice
5 k1 E: [, W, |make me gently distraught with happy feeling./ x" D' T( k, w& o
The scene that met you prinkle in my heart like snow on the land
- C3 v% |: n, j/ s5 c. x+ ^: B- esuddenly flurry that all are the love to you.0 I+ v \5 y L6 v; W
Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss,
" h' r4 f& D% I( s k4 @8 \$ vespecially on the day, the gentle sea breeze and the sweet summer.# n0 h& V4 `: ~7 b7 W
Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
; r2 }6 B, X' u: c& H, M% P+ H3 qonly waiting for you quietly
6 G; m3 r% S( m( N9 o$ ^2 ajust let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
* T& S% v( m7 yI really want to ramble in the small rain with you ( j# [2 p9 n6 d9 c1 B3 z
and enjoy the rain washing together5 m" U/ N" T7 i8 X1 a/ ~* W6 y Q
or rush to a film
# ^0 z# G8 h" a, hor listen to a music quietly., V+ a2 [" H2 U9 C3 t2 H
Whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?# _- g; ?. v& g: l) h
If we embrace ,dance,and gaze to each other,
5 c3 q4 p# `' Z5 ismile or gently kiss then say: I really love you".% h' ?0 \5 r. H- U) z3 T
That is enough.
# o3 G9 n, ^" {) K, OMaybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago,& U# f; M: y8 m8 u, `
finely it deeply rooted into the earth in the season and sprout,/ ^: F3 n& V& G6 ?3 H- Z. n, T
the same as my missing.
) d5 w! G5 ]* v$ G7 Q. k" bIt comes a little bit of verdure.
8 W* G8 F: U+ T, p- s$ l, a% n" iIf, If some day I can touch your hand, ; _ g; L$ w8 q1 n5 _' o* K+ V
then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
4 T P/ F& U5 z! H* RLet you touch me gently and read me carefully.5 `7 c7 A+ |1 _. ?& m' C
I will enjoy your mild emotion through your hands with my heart and soul. O- o9 h) q _% k, v2 |6 O2 z, Y' d
At the moment you reach out your hands to me ,
3 a( B- j5 ~& j- `2 jthen I will have all care and ardor.& D: I" ]% ]. j5 l7 e) k6 A
Shall we walk arm in arm? f8 o* p6 @7 P: N! J: T9 A
呵,太晚了,连检查都不想检查一下,有没有打字错误了. |
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