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每当说一句汉语的时候,我总在心里想英语是怎么说的.尤其看到汉语诗歌的时候,我突然想,翻译成英语还能保留原来的意思吗?所以试着译一译.
7 o4 |( G: `" ~" F4 v8 B前边发了译文以后才发现有些大小写和语法错误.一点一点地改,很乱.所以再重新发一便:2 t$ q$ N$ L% I/ U# w
Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
0 o+ k6 ?% |, l: mPartial leaves fall down everywhere,squirrels are busily running.
3 T4 M* ~5 X B" K7 w4 D Current I, the same as one tear ago, the same given name, and the same family name." f" }6 F5 @8 G$ X4 x
The same hairstyle,the same bag,reserved laughing and talking.
* W8 d9 a! t$ }7 I- H: x: }; M6 sSeemly added something in my eyes,or lacked something.3 |& W6 v! c2 P+ x+ [
Summer went so fast that I almost forgot those sweating night:$ C9 X( ]6 @3 J/ {
Cats often played at the whole hot night outside windows to get cool
^3 C' g+ d# s' ^$ @like us many years ago,mindless self indulgence.
. u! n% F. B5 L3 QI often cherish the memory happened in summer and those people that make me raint even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming.6 |. y# \0 e" a0 G( r
The emotion and the carma only is a dream.9 Y" O) r, U; O$ e6 X; C; \6 K
That shoudn`t happen to meet each other last tenderlt night.
9 q# L: a( g1 X$ G( p' w! `I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
& L! k! g; g6 ]8 NI am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild./ }6 [ X: `9 V$ L0 P
In this lonely world whom I can step inside love to?
) S: U+ A0 E: \* ^, ]5 \Intoxicated then feel cold,! k8 c' X8 [8 \$ |+ U2 l- m. \
the labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.3 g% v7 R9 ^1 q3 T8 O2 L
I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.) A2 _1 L; _6 H A3 a2 c
The amorous man to whom you gave your soul?
0 n3 g5 v5 ]. }# kWhy I am always hoodwinked!
, t4 w. V4 v; P+ rI have told myself many times cautiously ! G/ N( h, z1 g( n
don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.! H) ?- X, n5 p0 }! Y1 R
The amorous women always get drunk by desolation.
% l% n, K9 W( t5 W9 d! Y' F: C( \Why can`t I take it easy?
6 v/ W+ u! x! b; p# {0 r0 v! hHow endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
0 [: r3 t3 L, yWhen the quiet night comes* C$ a; `) ~. M' m" I. l0 N
your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.0 y- O1 b9 v) P( M- D) C
The greeting when you met me made my heart in touched unaccountably.
4 R% E% M R. Z/ _; w ]! ?' C( [Yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul,, d* n6 s4 ], Q
light the dark corner in my mind.
4 h& l' d; W: ^% AI feel a bit of cozy.
5 G9 M. Z$ \6 p3 b; d1 d. wThe deep attached to you in a twinkling! [, @+ _! y9 @- r( h
maybe is the most light spot in my whole life.
( y4 V% |: t0 o2 p# zI didn`t cherish your appearance at first,5 G/ i [9 M7 e/ F8 j$ E0 _
but accompanying with the time passed( W, I5 S: T7 O2 w5 F
I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion,0 b2 t' q8 F. L2 {' G
always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly.5 I( s/ l7 A" f# m9 g9 w) t9 O
Without asking if you like me or if I like you. D5 F& D$ e% P4 j) W2 N$ J% }
only feel gracious for your existing,
8 a. Q" y7 x8 I4 V1 z3 Oonlt want to do something for you.
# t, K# m/ Y m! H3 kEvery time when you meet me
J4 Q8 O- b$ s1 P" X+ O7 }, V/ a8 Fthe sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil,3 D# H: z6 x# q, a8 h( g
but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere. N: ~# _3 o5 h& \- r% i
That live in my heart.6 w1 x& f; L$ a+ q
Do you know your name can suddenly come into mu mind at anytime?
) A3 F) X _% V( SEven only your flying clothes` corner when you turn around, and your voice/ P6 f; g. O6 U0 Q/ Z
make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
, X6 V+ G8 h9 f' R9 C+ _9 S' I# w( l+ r5 @The scene that met you prinkle in my heart like snow on the land f% i1 q {! q& J% o$ \) ]
suddenly flurry that all are the love to you., ~9 {/ A0 t; {( y
Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss,
* o4 K2 l& C7 D F, Q, u' g8 U$ _especially on the day, the gentle sea breeze and the sweet summer.
5 Z4 B- |" w$ ]5 `$ @Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy , m4 c& V7 R' g; O) W
only waiting for you quietly
7 l" Y) ^6 `/ J% Q+ a4 r8 Ijust let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
6 u4 w# p& L6 k) _4 II really want to ramble in the small rain with you
% L8 J; k$ b' Z: Y0 vand enjoy the rain washing together3 o6 A6 P& N$ g a+ v4 p4 _$ O/ n
or rush to a film
' E: x5 j% ^/ F8 f8 xor listen to a music quietly.
+ Q6 z1 n3 V1 X' @5 d+ aWhom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?4 \7 n. O! a! o. [4 {
If we embrace ,dance,and gaze to each other,7 w# W; t+ t$ t( y* R& _# U
smile or gently kiss then say: I really love you".
) ~0 D+ d* Y0 @6 F% c. i3 w8 tThat is enough.
3 q1 {: C% x1 [5 A! Y5 e: DMaybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago,
* o2 e* ^$ f+ ^9 X; e- g. T4 jfinely it deeply rooted into the earth in the season and sprout,
6 W9 Z& Y9 V/ z" H* o$ Bthe same as my missing.
4 T/ M. \3 Y( J6 ^It comes a little bit of verdure.3 U6 L ^% W, o2 @
If, If some day I can touch your hand,
3 u* V2 J) [* Z. i8 Y3 H# N1 ithen I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.: \; |2 a" S! Z/ G
Let you touch me gently and read me carefully.
6 L# a- W5 y/ j- `# _+ \ E, rI will enjoy your mild emotion through your hands with my heart and soul. W" Y# |; W/ c! E2 u' {1 d! h) D
At the moment you reach out your hands to me ,9 C7 T& I _0 o5 q* e
then I will have all care and ardor.: e n9 p! U8 \, G/ h
Shall we walk arm in arm?, P7 H b- h. Y: M% S
呵,太晚了,连检查都不想检查一下,有没有打字错误了. |
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