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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,; n R& n/ M. u
,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
! [& G; l. L# e, O% f7 E6 c% @零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running . 6 d6 F+ J' h7 ?5 ]& E" n$ @
现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.
/ g1 d# }! ^# v6 c I, z6 t7 o. W梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.
% l% m. I3 Q2 F: Q& Q% k眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.1 K. X$ O( O# Q7 M, }1 J
夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.( o; U. C4 @& y% ^
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
* z4 K) B) i+ M1 x6 L5 ~就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.
! z( |; m/ I3 h( X我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及
1 y; k( ~; T: w那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。: M# B3 K& S5 D) W `
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
" K# a8 f# x# `; Z昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.9 b. ^; H0 f( ~& F
想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
6 g. h x5 e# S& b/ q6 i; g最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
& l% X' i6 }1 h" d寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?- v7 p0 {* M4 i( `& O* U
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
# `( ]; F" t5 v7 |8 l( ^迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
& e: J4 w' t5 ~- x! W9 c最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.6 h& h& M) e* }: G& S
多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
& Z# T6 h9 J! [# x- @+ qWhy I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
# ~* {/ P( b5 A% ?# F5 U多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously5 w2 F, H' `0 ?8 m9 u% g
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
) r% n; t- S6 y) |1 e多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, ; `, D9 c8 X6 T" M
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
# n! p% R8 {( r4 C6 e7 y多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!! J' v0 h' Z# O/ `8 z D9 j+ V: t
永难平息的泪
" S( W! g' L7 }$ W+ D每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes' @/ H* F' d7 \
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.8 f' j$ T' T M# I5 J* d% v
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
6 @* [# W) z% J让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
( _+ o# p( y# I2 J你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul % l( h3 @6 ?4 Y5 H9 s
一抹微笑;
; i3 n t! U/ o3 H( z" P一个手势;
- g! h, F3 ?4 W7 p: P/ i2 ]6 H一片话语,, ]/ V1 ^( V: U* n) T4 c
愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、: d" R; |3 j8 l ~
明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner0 ^4 u. f2 w9 m" m; Q
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.
- {7 p9 r. f2 [这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
& y3 ^% N) @/ q9 O% |0 F' j w也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..
; q7 L9 Q6 d1 U/ {起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,$ L) n, V/ [; @
我并不以为然。# P, p% z4 K% A3 G$ J- j
可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed ) W0 O4 _8 J7 K* O( X) y
慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion ." O, b" _0 M% ~& M8 x5 N
被一种情绪所左右,
: X h- |. T0 M% ?. R总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .# O" B- H- `) q% f
即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you6 p( i, n! W* h) ~2 B8 j( [! e
也不问我是否喜欢你,
% r# J' T+ _( ~: w对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.( Q4 l" n D6 X( Q
只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
2 I6 b' [ G1 F7 o1 K# m3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you) G4 i! x& R' i- n( K
心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil
4 u" A t# |" S5 l' W( R然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere ; c5 a2 h* d' {3 A: S% i# B* y" ^
你的身影已化成一种氛围,
! R+ S! p% }3 s记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.4 C' a7 Q1 P9 A# d- o( p c/ O7 M
你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
: I5 L, y7 m& B. U; T1 `随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字
/ K3 P0 Z7 o- \; a$ @0 V2 d哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,& p- d: Z- h( a, R4 ]
一种声音,and your voice- z9 c& S4 a- T4 d3 I+ A* I7 E% i
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
" t/ u5 j/ ?+ B5 k1 J+ s掺杂著幸福的感觉。
/ Z6 o6 N/ B2 P" l1 Y6 C8 M与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
, S3 h) a4 C8 n) U象雪花般撒落在我的心田,) F- B2 j! F5 w6 b% d
倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.! S! z; R9 f' d( N& L
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。
7 @1 `6 u( h% Y$ `你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss
7 g C% |5 P5 J0 T1 l% w有一个能够让思念的人,
" X ?& e E! |1 H其实也是一种幸福。( ~& D2 I) @) J0 s
尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
; Y$ F, c! Z" q" o柔柔的海风,
) Q, c) p# n9 ], y8 s3 H甜甜的夏天。
5 y: O, `8 x& J2 W Y, I+ N' C% @一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
9 e8 |* }3 J: R! ]% E. M; h3 ?2 O只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.
5 _4 n8 r( k5 x/ e g* q仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
" ]. g5 J6 t' b$ A, D9 [想和你有共同的情结,
, F6 q( o, \4 u8 j! _; e3 t2 x# c% {共同的心愿。 p% N+ I8 ^- |7 e1 j
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- c: T; W2 E" s! m! N好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you- X3 L# r3 `9 h! M$ l, M
一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together
* v) f7 G. r9 s2 _: n8 {/ {或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film 5 R* ^% _( e f2 i; E% u9 r
或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.
& `7 K# r5 I% r8 v『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ? [# G Q; @: S4 X* v
我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
3 I5 h; i% o% O" [. n# h浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”; t! l! H/ Q, j$ c& }) l
或是轻轻的一吻,
2 [/ P: _6 s- v% ?再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』7 }* o. x+ l" V' a( p6 L3 ?
就足够了. That is enough." Z/ o" Q. H! `, E( P' [
这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! 8 f7 S K% N* {" D# k% e- v' x
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
+ J4 k* u! Z# w( U萌出了芽,, ~$ g% o- i2 Y% I* @, N# ~
一如对你的思念,the same as my missing
* q3 u0 e7 b7 p& Y. q# d" t浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
1 K3 {" r( u3 L$ Z1 c如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand
) B- _: p4 v, e: Y: _能够牵著你的手,
; Q% X' h" ^& t% _5 V; B那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
. b i4 F. p [* {% \* E2 R4 E让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. # ~$ r3 l3 G4 O; e" w
慢慢地细读,6 y# H0 }# H+ W- X
我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. 1 b. x }9 W$ B3 R
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me - q2 I; o$ a/ L) H1 V$ m0 [6 U1 v
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor 9 c1 \3 X6 }6 ?
就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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