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每当说一句汉语的时候,我总在心里想英语是怎么说的.尤其看到汉语诗歌的时候,我突然想,翻译成英语还能保留原来的意思吗?所以试着译一译.+ b0 ]/ J& T6 Y' Y& ?
前边发了译文以后才发现有些大小写和语法错误.一点一点地改,很乱.所以再重新发一便:) |8 ~1 i S& H' q. i" X
Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.2 \, u- p, D; X9 O
Partial leaves fall down everywhere,squirrels are busily running.
% H7 n' |5 e2 d Current I, the same as one tear ago, the same given name, and the same family name.
, z, @) r5 k" o- M/ YThe same hairstyle,the same bag,reserved laughing and talking.% ?" }( [1 E+ I# i
Seemly added something in my eyes,or lacked something.
4 v# H8 V9 o9 R9 J B7 ^9 ESummer went so fast that I almost forgot those sweating night:
0 |8 T4 W8 P$ J' m) [" UCats often played at the whole hot night outside windows to get cool 3 x" h3 }1 ~. U1 f/ o- E6 r h9 m
like us many years ago,mindless self indulgence.
: }5 E0 ?& H4 E, A& fI often cherish the memory happened in summer and those people that make me raint even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming.; J& t8 G% r# A' T8 i
The emotion and the carma only is a dream.9 K0 K+ t9 Z# t; `1 n2 G
That shoudn`t happen to meet each other last tenderlt night.
$ d* E/ M3 K* Q; `3 y9 v& vI want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.5 C& Y% p/ m4 ^: e
I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
2 g. p6 t/ e; H& A* }4 z* u0 YIn this lonely world whom I can step inside love to?) R) Y8 U1 `- [- J0 V. O8 ^
Intoxicated then feel cold,
6 l/ Z) D! q% }. h0 S8 ^the labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.3 p# H1 Y. \: `; ^9 X
I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
: A3 U. ~% ]$ R( WThe amorous man to whom you gave your soul?: z ]2 O. m4 B
Why I am always hoodwinked!3 d% z$ s5 \/ V P) a# [2 v o' [
I have told myself many times cautiously - r: I% ~: l% f& |% H
don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.) |7 c l! s( c
The amorous women always get drunk by desolation.
' d _& f c( I8 d& KWhy can`t I take it easy?
' f# p5 y$ G# J5 WHow endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
6 h9 ]+ F# I$ hWhen the quiet night comes
X' `2 p) h1 [5 y& Wyour figure usually appears in front of my eyes.: {* P- X: W- O8 ]1 V& }8 K$ ]+ S
The greeting when you met me made my heart in touched unaccountably.
7 \; a" N! n& i- n9 T& E( \Yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul,$ {) P- U* C! b1 A0 {, _
light the dark corner in my mind.6 s, B4 R/ @3 d# e
I feel a bit of cozy.
4 a, A0 F% G( L z; uThe deep attached to you in a twinkling; h7 u J1 f$ I; ~6 e
maybe is the most light spot in my whole life.
& c; g4 I" q3 wI didn`t cherish your appearance at first,% Z4 X" [7 b0 M8 C2 g2 ?4 b
but accompanying with the time passed/ [ D) J- ?/ u3 s
I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion,% Q- O7 T) f. }0 O2 s
always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly.
$ U" H! V9 J5 y8 F3 y; _- dWithout asking if you like me or if I like you
* o4 t# }3 k5 D/ Z( C# G3 Ronly feel gracious for your existing,! d# [2 R( ~5 q% h- d( e) s* r
onlt want to do something for you.
8 n/ y) t1 o6 A5 f' Q% H VEvery time when you meet me
# y: h( }( O2 `' @; v5 z" zthe sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil,2 H: h% w3 q9 D4 X/ \& I
but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
# n) r& g. B1 {7 y- p+ F. zThat live in my heart.+ p* h$ y' n/ {4 P
Do you know your name can suddenly come into mu mind at anytime? O8 y& f, u3 p( G9 [5 e( U% m1 T) h3 L
Even only your flying clothes` corner when you turn around, and your voice
7 K% r# ]+ ^4 ]$ L/ imake me gently distraught with happy feeling., `0 A' |9 b9 }! d
The scene that met you prinkle in my heart like snow on the land
+ C' D6 d7 X+ ^- rsuddenly flurry that all are the love to you.1 V X9 p; S2 Y5 ^! M. E6 b: x
Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss,! C: [8 F; n& P* r( S H
especially on the day, the gentle sea breeze and the sweet summer., s" @; P% e: F0 l
Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy ; h2 k0 h/ f. g4 Y9 a
only waiting for you quietly5 D* t) F! ]' @" x; q* @/ [# U
just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.$ j$ y4 G: ~7 |" ~9 k: a# e
I really want to ramble in the small rain with you % _! w6 q$ |% x- z6 L$ \' U# C6 `
and enjoy the rain washing together p. v7 d# q! K( d. G: p2 ? c2 ]
or rush to a film7 W3 \- l* ?9 y5 g+ Q
or listen to a music quietly.
% e* K3 M+ q- W! W& UWhom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
8 ?, t4 j$ k- ?, }If we embrace ,dance,and gaze to each other,5 S# q. i5 w5 ?
smile or gently kiss then say: I really love you".
2 v; c! W* Q& q8 R2 l- AThat is enough.& R. Z" i9 p* e6 M; k0 o# t2 G# }
Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago,, {/ S7 e! J3 t4 Y; a4 V
finely it deeply rooted into the earth in the season and sprout,3 M3 c1 [ P* g5 \1 l% n
the same as my missing.. o7 K9 Q- Z, @" t0 o
It comes a little bit of verdure.1 u9 y2 s( h* k. C, |% y" g {. E- J. Z
If, If some day I can touch your hand,
' @0 s- R9 B& J' A7 f* Bthen I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.6 N; @' c2 p7 Q8 [( _
Let you touch me gently and read me carefully.
" P4 M9 a9 t/ A# D. q/ DI will enjoy your mild emotion through your hands with my heart and soul.
, y9 j/ w3 n0 h+ I3 hAt the moment you reach out your hands to me ,
8 r Y* A8 A7 F# N; D8 l! Hthen I will have all care and ardor.' e2 ]% c& M/ u9 s. w7 q
Shall we walk arm in arm?
; `7 K( b+ F* t9 E8 z2 H$ z# j. }: J+ j呵,太晚了,连检查都不想检查一下,有没有打字错误了. |
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