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每当说一句汉语的时候,我总在心里想英语是怎么说的.尤其看到汉语诗歌的时候,我突然想,翻译成英语还能保留原来的意思吗?所以试着译一译.
" N1 B; o# S" U4 g6 y: H前边发了译文以后才发现有些大小写和语法错误.一点一点地改,很乱.所以再重新发一便:- E$ T& t4 B3 ~5 v# u: F: h
Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.! I$ ^, t, S4 y% {
Partial leaves fall down everywhere,squirrels are busily running.
7 V0 l3 c# {6 l" a9 ]$ p" k* r1 M: B: V Current I, the same as one tear ago, the same given name, and the same family name.6 n* Z, s3 z- X1 I; [
The same hairstyle,the same bag,reserved laughing and talking.* W, W' J8 ~. f+ C4 h" u, {
Seemly added something in my eyes,or lacked something.: G+ g) k1 x# V0 t; S6 J6 S6 s2 a3 x
Summer went so fast that I almost forgot those sweating night:
4 R! S0 [7 N$ w/ Y1 ^7 HCats often played at the whole hot night outside windows to get cool
, w+ W! V- q- B0 F- N: jlike us many years ago,mindless self indulgence.
7 _1 x* ^/ o% E" y, u) NI often cherish the memory happened in summer and those people that make me raint even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming.- g* K3 p% R0 I5 W
The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
/ i' Z" W3 z% p; EThat shoudn`t happen to meet each other last tenderlt night.
& v- G( Q8 O$ H) Y! t: {I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
: [- [: N; W& B* N3 s8 p EI am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
8 A: R, [ a* \In this lonely world whom I can step inside love to?8 w0 L( `* N$ s
Intoxicated then feel cold,
3 s$ b8 y( R! g$ F/ t0 rthe labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
* g- C X7 T3 V# X8 }0 _I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have. D, s8 b) A) Z. u2 }: O8 q! ~
The amorous man to whom you gave your soul?
. p$ I) ?. ^% J0 O5 YWhy I am always hoodwinked!
& g8 U" S+ d; Z2 n2 |8 k j4 rI have told myself many times cautiously
0 x1 h B1 j. S* y- r( odon`t fall into the spoony whirligig./ e0 u; o) h* D2 G# |' ` U7 c. ]
The amorous women always get drunk by desolation.
( B+ x4 L ]( ^1 D5 i- b0 UWhy can`t I take it easy?# l* {1 L$ L' v7 t. b& G
How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!& L% n6 N1 P7 x6 B6 p4 F# A2 L
When the quiet night comes7 C" s, o( ^3 F* V
your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.7 ^ F( H: w" B2 Z1 m9 a
The greeting when you met me made my heart in touched unaccountably.% f+ I& I" X9 ~( M1 p+ Z, T5 T
Yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul,
6 L9 I* @$ @& n Flight the dark corner in my mind.5 V0 {- B- V0 f- Z% ]0 `
I feel a bit of cozy.
2 m Z% Q2 N4 x! I5 `# o. ]The deep attached to you in a twinkling3 w- a& X# H( Z: M, B
maybe is the most light spot in my whole life.
+ S( W0 T7 s$ y% P8 _, p5 |I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,0 `( u. U! l) H# a6 e1 K+ K
but accompanying with the time passed
/ a; a2 x' h; n* Q, ^; BI am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion,
" _& E8 c/ R7 o. C( Zalways feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly.
( H# l2 ~$ O) P5 [+ JWithout asking if you like me or if I like you+ u0 a& }5 _& ?( ?8 {3 g
only feel gracious for your existing,* t2 P0 `0 b4 ^5 F5 d6 y! A
onlt want to do something for you.7 F% e& P: M2 A5 B6 Z- y' J8 {
Every time when you meet me
6 i+ o. n% D5 G: Y) {' lthe sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil,
: a3 g' U2 L7 Z. ibut I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
) o' h5 C2 S, T/ SThat live in my heart.
# N5 ^! G2 B7 i& A) b" |- f$ GDo you know your name can suddenly come into mu mind at anytime?. N9 Z; b g5 |* ?: M4 n/ b B$ r$ y
Even only your flying clothes` corner when you turn around, and your voice
# B& S* x6 o& y/ Jmake me gently distraught with happy feeling.
' k4 ~) c% ? C, h$ |The scene that met you prinkle in my heart like snow on the land
: s1 [$ m( N, y' t7 v2 I! Rsuddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
/ i: a- p4 C, P' X6 ]# h9 WDo you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss,
8 E% ^/ S/ `# `9 a) r% gespecially on the day, the gentle sea breeze and the sweet summer.
t& I8 g( J9 |* H$ o5 s& P( ~Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
% a. r. W! U) Q8 lonly waiting for you quietly) k% E/ @6 w5 }3 Q
just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.* ^7 @; {6 Y& B5 p/ l
I really want to ramble in the small rain with you 2 e& M- q1 ^- [7 Q
and enjoy the rain washing together6 _) _ S# A; ~! x3 v& K+ ?0 k
or rush to a film
" L+ E3 Y& i7 B6 Ior listen to a music quietly.
- ^+ ~7 {" x0 A) W% J3 Z7 uWhom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
# `) N3 N+ m' [: nIf we embrace ,dance,and gaze to each other,* Y* C8 }. Z- N r1 ]9 p7 N3 ?( Y* I" }
smile or gently kiss then say: I really love you".
' s9 M7 T1 ~' h! g; V4 ]3 @. t. G6 IThat is enough.' d [6 Z, d) G9 V+ s' Q
Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago,) |* J' i0 l F
finely it deeply rooted into the earth in the season and sprout,3 v) N! |% ] a- ~* A) e
the same as my missing.
+ j9 n" W, G! O( V: K/ Q+ Y: I# cIt comes a little bit of verdure. Z- k9 |* B! \4 Z9 E4 {$ a
If, If some day I can touch your hand,
9 m: U0 ?& T$ A* v w" `0 Ethen I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
f+ @9 D |" l6 dLet you touch me gently and read me carefully.& x2 c* e1 ?& M0 E2 m! O
I will enjoy your mild emotion through your hands with my heart and soul.* C& Z4 w( K7 m3 X" P Q% y+ O
At the moment you reach out your hands to me ,! f4 |3 R" \+ I) n1 ~6 X
then I will have all care and ardor.
4 e4 h' e& j6 B. u. E$ t! lShall we walk arm in arm?" U) z: {" |" N, V
呵,太晚了,连检查都不想检查一下,有没有打字错误了. |
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