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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
1 @3 }5 i& ~" X( x" D3 V,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
: {' v! s1 r$ ~- x, ~: C零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running . 4 s `4 U: d" T3 R% D' C
现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.
, B/ r9 V5 u x+ _梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.( o% V8 o0 d8 H5 W; z" G* I2 B3 @
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.1 z' K8 Q# ^& X7 U7 R
夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.
& X" O, Y$ d0 t. J- U4 d3 d猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.6 \3 A/ t( ^; X! S& x' N
就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.& f$ E5 M6 j& o% ^% w2 O
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及
5 Q: k7 U* _5 }0 C' P那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
+ c) a" `/ |# q- y! Y, y8 ~, T世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
7 N: F( ?: J) W昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
, U4 H: a) _' v想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
3 \) `" ?( S& w; B! y最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
1 t: [- e; [# z' _$ c寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?1 i1 t3 W7 @2 r
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.+ c& q& B( u V7 F [
迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
9 M/ h/ U4 @* Q. {最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
, \6 s. g- W& k9 ^, r2 r多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
( m+ [$ E4 n- {$ Z" ?/ ]Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….. q# r( T E$ T# }7 b
多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously/ K! h @4 o" D
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig. Z2 J7 {9 \: l1 M$ O
多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, + D& Z8 e+ y7 \$ r& X# D1 n1 R
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?& Z2 ]1 r f; ?
多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
5 j. v4 u) a# k( s7 c) K3 f$ ~永难平息的泪
' z8 K9 Q# ? d+ @' v: k, R. z/ J: f每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes
, R0 [6 I. y6 e~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
( \/ L# P& v" S; \2 K" F C8 T当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
; q7 C$ G5 L2 ^让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,+ n' ^0 J7 T, }$ T" Q( b- c
你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
( n; q$ Y4 k& A: Q2 p一抹微笑;
0 U$ S7 I/ f! k* f一个手势;! Y$ E! `) C! w1 I. K
一片话语,
- B- r0 m, ~! b* X+ P9 Q1 w! B4 D愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、0 V# D) F7 `. f1 }, l/ H
明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner
7 x& G% g4 R9 M/ b' Q& s5 O( U心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.* Z: p$ ^, l! P8 b' S4 m
这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
% F* f' n4 Z) D( C: Y$ S也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..9 }* e& ?) ~# [+ ]; v9 |
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,) u) s' {& _7 }* t2 U1 B
我并不以为然。
! n; u4 R0 g4 m. ?# P可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed
) @9 |2 L. \ R- g- B9 y) d2 d0 ]. [慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .
. t9 g) b, a! m4 V; s0 O" d. k被一种情绪所左右,# w& g p! O0 o0 z
总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
* C/ p- |. f& k( ?. p2 u即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
# ]! d ], ]; m4 x也不问我是否喜欢你,
. M6 R4 u a) i. G$ R/ Q对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.8 c; U$ {0 }) |& z0 K7 q0 i
只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you& R+ E8 q0 F7 y
3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you
9 Y3 {2 q& y! A. g R心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil
9 j' A, G$ O. F6 V, ?# O" ^然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
g6 V3 {$ G& v# G你的身影已化成一种氛围,
A5 P) g' k( q, X, X0 v记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.
# w" e- C! r7 \& u$ o你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
- n% N' d) f" `# T; a& o随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字. G7 w5 P$ Z6 k6 _
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,
( U' y6 I# ~! i+ `) g0 z一种声音,and your voice
; ?. m- s+ \% }& }3 w5 C. B6 W8 d; q也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
8 B6 i8 m* U) ~1 f- |( i. \掺杂著幸福的感觉。& r& [3 u5 j# h* D* Z. K3 A
与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
7 P* |$ q& u6 p* N5 ^8 N% A0 [象雪花般撒落在我的心田,+ q3 T; F& v) |; l& c5 G+ L0 [ y
倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
; l2 D: P" Q* K& p0 T. D纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。1 n" i$ O% G# h' e" J
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss; Z5 b0 ~1 |$ }2 t0 O/ R o+ a) t
有一个能够让思念的人,
, c2 x3 D5 o1 o4 R. q, a# z, I其实也是一种幸福。
+ N/ `8 B6 L, o尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
6 P0 [8 S. I7 c/ Q) W柔柔的海风,( C4 T# ^% J0 n: W+ M9 s
甜甜的夏天。
7 O! `% [8 \$ V# c5 b' s8 E一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
c; q7 I% l2 A% r& E+ @只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.
/ n s' }9 {# ~. |仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
% x. b$ n7 v; t5 |: |3 t, u想和你有共同的情结,6 @) E" h% s0 n, o$ _
共同的心愿。5 T) j/ g- F9 _
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) [3 ^! k% k( b0 v9 l* V9 u5 Z好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you$ M" K, ]# [) W3 ~2 b$ j( f0 @
一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together1 z& L& _4 y) W: R G! J
或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film % y/ Z/ f( W) i0 }) R8 G7 \
或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.) V# H* m$ L" U3 J: q
『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
8 b5 ?' k. @% z! l我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
. [9 \1 G( p1 w+ F. `浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”& z* w2 U, \$ z
或是轻轻的一吻,( Z4 \/ O; J: m N' V( C6 l5 V
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』
1 a/ e5 m9 q& { |, u就足够了. That is enough.3 |+ Z- v+ M3 [
这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago!
9 P1 x9 ~' t- b7 f3 m/ N1 c/ K终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
0 @0 c4 [# W) G萌出了芽,
; e9 V, T. o) Y9 C: c& `" M一如对你的思念,the same as my missing7 F" y2 ?- X0 f4 C6 c5 {/ a" @4 I
浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
* r. p" w# u, W; @2 e: _# P" }2 R如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand
' e# q: _+ W( ~; O5 A4 `能够牵著你的手,* F6 \$ x1 _2 N
那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
* o. {4 U4 `9 B5 y8 W$ {4 P% }让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. + w, i- a* a I! f1 `
慢慢地细读,
L( x/ P: G( j0 }; B我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. , x* e8 L% d; g7 P
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me
C. i* o: }& b8 C* E# n, h$ P我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor + b6 n/ u3 I' f0 x
就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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