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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,# J4 S5 q& s# `4 ^2 ]/ W
,.清晨，急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry. " j& n8 q: S$ r' z8 l. }
零星树叶的飘落，松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running . ! M! M7 _5 D4 G+ e( \0 x; r3 N
现在的我，一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.
0 ]( T1 f! s0 i* o梳相同的发型，背同样的背囊，不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.2 T6 S7 M4 x8 o* j8 V
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽，又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.. I9 N% L% P1 ~1 `7 V
夏天过得那麽快，我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.
7 d1 c* F( B' r0 s) R" I猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉，追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
; Y8 d! j+ m* ^4 l' r% W就像多年以前的我们，似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.
/ I9 `; _) S0 |3 H" i我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天，I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及 f$ E& N7 S2 e5 H& k
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。1 W" Q9 V+ h5 v5 y5 W( F
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
$ @; }( ]% b8 ~4 {, N昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
! h0 R i! h: W6 W3 l想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.8 B/ L9 _. i: U( `$ L$ c# Y+ V
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
+ Q$ Y) `- l& t9 p r寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?
0 m5 M+ R7 }% @醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
, Y! @' P' K" e1 x* E迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.* q7 X5 I7 ]* p1 V
最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
9 t( @2 F8 N3 L, \. d多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?7 c! b0 b5 T: H5 H5 _
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….8 i6 {3 K( T3 ?9 F/ l- Y" ], S* M
多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
6 F' A: `4 e& T' q5 \不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
- ?8 p |- m% a5 H) V6 h5 m多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, 6 X* q$ `- u7 X, X
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
/ E! n5 y9 ?$ R9 m多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!. D6 n x- J' a
永难平息的泪
! ^) X) j2 f0 }* D& y" s每当夜深人静时，When the quiet night comes/ a" i8 k" N- S1 l- v8 ]; f9 F; k
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.1 ?: x/ a0 Z! A/ H: R& b1 U
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably., x- A$ P: b) G0 i* j; V4 G/ r" A
让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动，1 ~) [0 U" _8 i3 }9 f- A
你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
0 u3 R0 p6 A4 o- Q( ?. b0 @: s一抹微笑；9 _! o( p$ A( ~8 w5 K4 `
一个手势；8 l4 w1 C, G( K& R2 w. a! y8 {
一片话语，# {/ o7 L; `; n% G+ G9 x/ K2 {
愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、
: l+ o! N8 ~4 P; K5 S7 x- u明亮著我漆黑的角落，The moon lights the dark corner4 J3 ^" ^/ O, e; i
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.& r3 A8 Y! G6 f/ x
这一瞬的爱恋，The deeply attached to you in a twinkling' `: ~* h+ ?3 {- k" |& d
也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..' ~$ f" |: O; |5 c
起初，对你的出现，I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,, F8 j; T; D8 I! _% u u
我并不以为然。
2 B# Z2 l2 r$ [) C" K0 S* F3 ?可随著时间的流失，but accompanying with the time passed ; ?$ G4 I ~+ G) E$ r
慢慢的不知不觉中，I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .. w: t# b4 E1 t2 G ?# h
被一种情绪所左右，1 z3 J L4 f2 W8 H
总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .3 Z9 C3 f' U/ b. z9 `' ^
即不问你是否喜欢我，Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
u" R- K' `. B7 W9 W也不问我是否喜欢你，
% O' c- Q7 r- U+ k% U; U6 @. H对你的存在只感到亲切，only feel gracious for your existing.9 f) U! G2 Z) n( ^$ M2 c& ~
只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
3 c: Y/ V+ H; T0 x/ x9 [( g3每次有意无意的遇到你，every time when I meet you
: {0 X% V$ a0 @7 ?) O% ~心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil
; m8 y9 T! P. W/ R然而我真真切切地知道，but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere , [: d' Y1 R1 d" A# L/ D
你的身影已化成一种氛围，
, H% f' ` f: J; k记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.0 |- i4 ~/ s6 x! [
你知道吗？Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! 1 I, \# ?- `' K0 c5 C0 M3 a7 {
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字: c2 \& i$ j+ C W
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud，
$ {: c& P* \/ i: A0 z: P$ _一种声音，and your voice+ T6 D5 O' l; s6 O
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
+ [5 M' y/ H% W5 x/ X4 H8 u掺杂著幸福的感觉。
' f; a( p1 u& g) g与你相识的那一幕幕，the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
' @, v" c" T) @' r象雪花般撒落在我的心田，
* L- I5 }$ [1 ]0 t% X倾刻间，suddenly flurry that all are the love to you." @8 \6 J9 W8 t9 l
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。9 u6 f8 g+ M. x0 Y
你知道吗？Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss% @ V( Z4 ^: C" o! u# ~" @0 H
有一个能够让思念的人，
0 p( t1 q# Z, H9 y其实也是一种幸福。' n0 t% Z q5 K$ b
尤其是在这样的日子，especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer. 0 V8 K* w0 P0 ~! R; o5 K
柔柔的海风，
0 j6 d( n9 a' \) }+ ?5 u+ L1 m甜甜的夏天。# i+ D( I0 s. F1 ]. G# Z- f
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁，Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
+ @3 }' \" j* ?% n- C) v' c( b/ X+ k只是静静地等待你的身影，only waiting for you quietly.
6 l( U" ^* g) z/ m$ I+ ~' B仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人，Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
( F, ]1 P* t6 c5 H$ N, t; a想和你有共同的情结， R: o+ ]# d, g. n( c6 N
共同的心愿。; s( L; @7 g7 {2 e
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* c: |$ D. E5 k$ K2 x8 `+ v好想与你在细雨中漫步，I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
, E; g0 a) C; q% ~一同感受著春雨的洒脱，and to enjoy the rain washing together- ~ h; e4 U8 H# p
或是赶著看一场电影；or rush to a film
, C/ i! J" p) G$ n或是静静地聆听一首曲子，or listen to a music quietly.* |6 i3 K: f& ~) y
『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
+ W/ Z6 r8 ?# J( S' J我们相拥旋舞，然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
2 ~; g1 M# f1 u! o4 l6 a浅浅一笑，smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”) I E' L. p$ p v6 R
或是轻轻的一吻，
! U. K0 x# x: d) y. D+ E再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』
( c1 O7 }2 h9 J# g9 Y7 t就足够了. That is enough.. Y! H0 |" q% S; H) _
这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子，Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! 8 M1 x; y, D; N8 d) m
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根，finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
6 ]% M1 m3 p5 c! V萌出了芽，; f% E: B, G1 t: G g
一如对你的思念，the same as my missing
" P0 T1 f. R; p浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
1 {7 k6 w M' Z2 [- _如果，如果有一天，If , if some day I can touch of your hand
# j0 G% U2 d1 a L2 t- P1 s能够牵著你的手,) t' a, U, P$ k d( {8 d
那麽，我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里，then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
4 Z/ p: W; i$ M6 `$ w% L' W让你细细地触摸，Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. , P5 t9 l6 \- `0 `
慢慢地细读，9 P% J" v! O, A7 j, z
我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
( S# W$ Y2 g F2 X8 a- O在你对我伸出手的那一瞬，At the moment you reach out your hands to me
, j# n: V" }. [, p' c- G6 j8 t" {我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱，then I will have all care and ardor
8 B9 B$ ^; v/ B5 P# h; e( s就让我牵一次你的手，好吗？Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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