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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
: h Q' b& ]7 R" v1 x3 d" g3 d/ A,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry. , c! T" [5 d% I( S! G
零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running . 6 p9 I2 M1 D. }/ `4 m/ C
现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.! _* X" [& P {# W, f/ H
梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking." j& O9 B; I/ o( g$ d
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
, U/ ^, s2 k( F. e7 c' S' K/ d4 L) @* g夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.
! i: R6 J7 y5 z3 `/ Z猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
' [2 B' z6 T5 y( S就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.
7 O! ]0 J& Q( z( \' r我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及
: s: Z$ W! q& j! M5 _ \5 W那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
0 w( d1 C" `% Y# F9 q0 G* {世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
# }" ^- z- ~( q/ b' H+ }' K, _7 a昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.) P& G2 s( f& {: c
想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.4 M& j: `/ `7 `& g$ q
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
& M* S. i3 I+ {4 ^ T2 |; o( K寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?. A, e' S' a* x
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
! w' Q a! e2 W/ S1 Y/ Y- ]迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
0 p$ Y; @' {% y2 }; R最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.2 h k9 g& {! j* L3 \) s K; E2 l
多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?- Z% i' T; P, E, z' w7 j6 \
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
7 i& {. p" v& \5 D( a5 ]多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
& Q S* v- b3 }1 {9 O: q' l1 k' H不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
+ n! J) b) {4 A& s8 d. F5 \多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation,
8 p/ W" I. R" P0 L& t( b为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?% k# |& ?' Z, S% j) s: t. S$ |, y
多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
( n" x3 d% O8 @) P永难平息的泪' l, t2 G4 k$ \) y/ J
每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes3 h8 H: K4 Q W+ p+ T- ^, c; J
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.& e. a: g: C% C) H( r: D
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
+ @5 a$ W1 [5 A$ \$ ?+ A让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,) G$ z" I! J" L) I! Y
你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul # m' M) S: \8 [% R( _, \' Z. `
一抹微笑;
- D% ~# `/ p9 p' m, d& k8 H一个手势;
S0 O5 `( P. o$ e# j4 g一片话语,$ Z( M5 D D0 o/ D H/ r& y! I
愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、$ @ f. u1 ^0 u3 W" ?( l8 \1 }
明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner
( C1 d3 l6 ?) u A3 t! W心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.6 q9 h' b, k0 f9 e3 C6 z
这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
6 @& y3 ]0 s M: ]+ _/ |也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..3 c( e; T3 J v; f
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,/ v8 b/ _7 h5 \* |' B5 ?$ K
我并不以为然。
1 |, W! Q- m8 x% [- ^可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed # h+ a9 K& x" d" |# A
慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .5 F! n5 ~2 l/ t- ~0 j% E8 p
被一种情绪所左右,
5 j% f9 r0 t2 a! _总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
1 @) _8 o, _9 u+ G6 l' `" p即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
0 `; U3 I9 u5 t: {# z! }9 P2 T也不问我是否喜欢你,
3 F' i- J6 J) A/ g! j9 c对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
# G5 l& s! v% M) O只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
- U3 F5 ^; K! C3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you
1 m2 O) d& v# o( v: v心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil: H9 P6 d2 }# g5 ^! P2 {7 F
然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere / t: V/ @9 x+ x7 Y
你的身影已化成一种氛围,4 E8 a1 k1 b$ K
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.
; }" ?& F1 {; b: z" T% B7 W; C你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! 9 G" v5 C4 l5 E0 Q
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字, D5 Z* F% U, f$ o9 R" Q' E" p
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,6 _1 z$ n* O& ^
一种声音,and your voice+ ]" J4 T4 S+ i5 A0 b8 B* f
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
. I- S; T+ A. k$ |掺杂著幸福的感觉。8 T0 W/ p( {/ ^0 l
与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land/ @# k8 i: D+ a8 J
象雪花般撒落在我的心田,
% B) X" x- j) f0 a) C* k" e; \倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.# C. o/ ]6 z6 q6 _1 [ f! S
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。
) w6 Q \- ]) ^8 T你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss* }) W* |' ]8 d7 o0 m' `' w" [
有一个能够让思念的人,7 b" G% G. m9 a( l* I
其实也是一种幸福。' o' @0 ^# X+ a' m) @ b
尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer. ; W6 y% o/ [+ y9 L/ Z `6 _
柔柔的海风,
8 g- h" }) w2 F甜甜的夏天。
8 y5 e% k3 y. D7 a9 ^6 |一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
- E' _# L5 `( i/ R只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly./ L: |4 ^; O, c+ Y! @( l
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
" e* |7 }6 T5 s5 f T1 u. e D想和你有共同的情结,
: j% `; t# V8 x共同的心愿。% L. L+ Q9 o7 I _7 C
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
" R% }% ]4 g1 U- W( @6 L一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together3 D) L2 X" H" C, q9 @% r
或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film 1 n) u& z$ ]; M2 M' A8 `, Q
或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.* ]& ?/ s9 c- D* G0 |
『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
1 R4 Q) N$ _/ u F$ c+ e. T我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
& F4 a. y2 C$ c1 _, {. x/ h浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”- f; V5 o0 }0 D1 b) Z- o" m
或是轻轻的一吻,
4 F" a, j2 q0 c+ h) |再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』
! S" m8 p% f" r$ n& E就足够了. That is enough.
! c" [+ \4 W/ ?, n+ r! ~% E/ p1 q这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! 5 H8 N2 J" v$ b+ w
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
! ]3 i$ A" \! ]3 _( E T, m) @萌出了芽,
) i' @: F. B3 W8 Q) X1 g( c9 z) p6 ^5 H, S一如对你的思念,the same as my missing. e" {( U3 r3 A3 B9 H5 R
浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
7 I/ a# m$ S7 \如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand! a* E3 V! c8 J9 l& r
能够牵著你的手,6 m# h2 ~+ g( |+ ], _) a$ c
那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely. X- |* S: R, `( A& N+ K
让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. 7 r* e, ]8 m- m4 z
慢慢地细读,
" b( Y8 X2 q# y& o' d; C! v; E我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
4 O- g8 h+ N. Z5 i在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me
# x( x1 }4 z. C3 R" g我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor
: t+ ^! }" P0 j" f就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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