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每当说一句汉语的时候,我总在心里想英语是怎么说的.尤其看到汉语诗歌的时候,我突然想,翻译成英语还能保留原来的意思吗?所以试着译一译.
, ~$ ^! d) D7 ^4 v前边发了译文以后才发现有些大小写和语法错误.一点一点地改,很乱.所以再重新发一便:
( `( ?$ ?" T& \5 [5 @" l# O b" aEarly morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.1 F" ~ m! n/ K* ^
Partial leaves fall down everywhere,squirrels are busily running.2 {5 }1 T7 F4 [! r3 r$ j3 O
Current I, the same as one tear ago, the same given name, and the same family name.
4 r. }% I6 \* e: p) h8 X$ ?The same hairstyle,the same bag,reserved laughing and talking.
3 h5 v1 |9 E. ~3 T. Q, v! jSeemly added something in my eyes,or lacked something.
/ V+ Y$ \% F- I8 S! iSummer went so fast that I almost forgot those sweating night:
2 H4 I6 C8 K' aCats often played at the whole hot night outside windows to get cool
H+ \ X. x( glike us many years ago,mindless self indulgence.
( c: x7 ~7 F8 S. nI often cherish the memory happened in summer and those people that make me raint even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming.
$ v8 ^: s4 ~% dThe emotion and the carma only is a dream.1 v% N5 G# ?/ f5 W. v2 a! N+ b
That shoudn`t happen to meet each other last tenderlt night.
1 V$ T& {* \) V( Y6 Z$ Q' B1 EI want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
3 P5 o1 D* \ W7 A8 fI am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.- d: i, w1 c' }
In this lonely world whom I can step inside love to?$ |$ `3 j# z* n! `# F$ Z4 m
Intoxicated then feel cold,$ P1 Q3 X( a6 R' d! Y7 T
the labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
0 g1 w9 e5 P7 a: P3 p; cI am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.+ j% g1 A, }3 L
The amorous man to whom you gave your soul?, S7 R: y" x8 B6 C$ V2 _
Why I am always hoodwinked!
4 m# _' a" V6 L$ l- _3 ^2 xI have told myself many times cautiously
( Q9 V) c% i% _don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
7 N7 D9 k& E1 ~8 b7 mThe amorous women always get drunk by desolation.) k( y) r8 | p1 l* M1 s/ W
Why can`t I take it easy?
. e+ j( N+ T- z4 V6 B( l! |How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!! R4 [) g8 \- U+ Q Z
When the quiet night comes7 G2 v, V) W- U' G, k! o3 d X
your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.; H9 m/ R1 o, Q: b
The greeting when you met me made my heart in touched unaccountably.3 W! D1 ]* W% j+ |
Yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul,
d, W+ w' V7 N0 g# ?# Dlight the dark corner in my mind.0 J1 d! D$ a9 Z: h4 Y( M
I feel a bit of cozy.( _' c) H" v0 R* z6 b% I! R: h
The deep attached to you in a twinkling
4 N# L. d; S8 q, w4 v* ?6 Qmaybe is the most light spot in my whole life.0 t+ |: X. {1 I8 P+ K' W+ i0 {
I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
! w9 |1 w) m2 ~! p. o' f* ibut accompanying with the time passed
$ y: }1 G% ~( A: g6 gI am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion,3 A# i; x# X2 o- n9 a: |
always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly.
) Q7 p& ~ r; L# C% DWithout asking if you like me or if I like you, T5 r+ F8 c! A6 j
only feel gracious for your existing," ^1 R$ x% V0 X! j1 |" }
onlt want to do something for you.
9 a& g: `; s- e$ xEvery time when you meet me" l" }4 O/ ^" o! `6 t
the sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil,
" s8 I0 R2 _/ rbut I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
7 {* {3 z% ~1 ~, h' U+ ]! ~That live in my heart.
# \, d) ]; R4 q7 nDo you know your name can suddenly come into mu mind at anytime?
" p; O) t( b! REven only your flying clothes` corner when you turn around, and your voice2 X2 Z; y, |1 r# N# Y
make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
! C- v/ e6 W! p( m" DThe scene that met you prinkle in my heart like snow on the land
$ i8 Z1 A, Q' k: dsuddenly flurry that all are the love to you. ]+ l: V5 \, A, p/ U9 P
Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss,. O+ ]2 X- o! a+ o
especially on the day, the gentle sea breeze and the sweet summer.
" N" w- |% s( l$ B- VSweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
2 j+ {) F" x* \6 _1 J) W+ I/ Tonly waiting for you quietly
- b( C4 _% A5 K/ X( L) x- o( ljust let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
4 V6 {* L$ }4 O$ Z6 a$ H4 A# i, kI really want to ramble in the small rain with you , r% ~) A1 c& V. e i |# \+ ~
and enjoy the rain washing together
( a2 n* @+ |* A0 t0 D% E7 a! B# X+ tor rush to a film6 ~: r K4 _4 j* V6 z- w$ ?8 | D
or listen to a music quietly.
3 k- d, t$ F# E) q: qWhom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?* P' k" X5 h7 u' {- X1 M3 S$ T
If we embrace ,dance,and gaze to each other,# \+ J D9 F& Y) g; f$ a, D
smile or gently kiss then say: I really love you".* |5 U6 V; ~8 v& \( a1 k/ z O
That is enough.
; [2 T6 ^- @2 G, m8 G( @, fMaybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago,
; ]: ?/ H4 j: d8 E8 E2 R8 gfinely it deeply rooted into the earth in the season and sprout,
) B: I ^! s5 m* W b( y1 Cthe same as my missing.+ C* U! s* W% f- p( z# M
It comes a little bit of verdure.0 }9 ~1 y+ S+ f8 p2 c* @, e" @
If, If some day I can touch your hand, . L8 ]+ |* g) N2 g* l& v
then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.3 L2 U4 V3 S8 Z! n' t9 m
Let you touch me gently and read me carefully.: ^. s5 P$ Y5 W9 F" {# Q
I will enjoy your mild emotion through your hands with my heart and soul.
) }4 y+ ]% n: R# RAt the moment you reach out your hands to me ,
. g0 l* K" R( ~then I will have all care and ardor. N- o4 t. \/ v1 s
Shall we walk arm in arm?) L( | J* G3 T' o
呵,太晚了,连检查都不想检查一下,有没有打字错误了. |
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