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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,5 z) n. q* S/ R
,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
# l9 j8 O) k3 ]# G2 t7 x0 ^零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
7 j/ t! O/ J# ~2 C! k" A( h现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.% y# g" e" R) @3 T3 \ H# N
梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.
- u+ U7 m& M+ T# B6 f, H眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something." U6 A& l6 N& Z m5 ]" V+ L
夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.
5 V: }8 T" Y+ I# T) a# x5 v( ]% j猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
V0 T5 J# O- C4 G" g) ]就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.
% |+ u7 {! ]- r4 d我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及9 V" Q4 V8 U' u$ c
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
5 i- i9 u& W% L1 m- a. S" }% ?世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
( s1 V3 M& i5 _$ G3 e昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.% ]. S: _ q& `1 d+ k
想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
5 z- T; Q* M* v' @$ R; n i2 V% f最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
! A h9 m) c. D4 u寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?
) [$ V+ i& f& [. o% R( M2 M醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.9 w5 \) O, q. ^; T8 t+ W
迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
# b: Q% R/ M* t* Z3 [最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
, s$ j @8 \+ @8 p9 ?* z多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?2 {" w! H$ d2 T
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….8 k9 S9 y: ]# I" S
多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously" i, i' R' a/ Y! X
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.8 O* }, O, I- Z r; Y( O
多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation,
! l9 c. }1 C8 w5 z4 s4 V- |为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
2 {3 U- z2 m8 E; h! ~ R6 Q多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
* A c }; p1 {, B# Y3 k永难平息的泪# K! ^9 u5 U- r/ K. C( m
每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes
7 ~9 A6 D2 o" m~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
& @5 \# Y+ R$ X2 A2 d1 e7 t当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.4 J5 s; n9 j" `0 \
让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,% L& F# K8 }- {1 A
你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
; R, q+ q8 Y, e, M, h一抹微笑;' Y+ `5 G/ |) g3 c* c+ ~
一个手势;
2 j" Y/ ^" ], v& B一片话语,1 U5 l, c4 _& f, J8 \! k1 ?
愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、# O/ W3 s' \. L/ \3 Z2 n
明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner
- r# z5 U; {1 H8 J a4 H9 R$ i心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.
& }9 s( U+ T$ u3 V: g这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
" R7 K. ^$ \4 h+ G" C6 B1 \也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..
$ G2 z3 d* P0 }起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,5 N9 O" H- D+ ]9 v9 V
我并不以为然。
: }! G; y" F3 W0 T+ n, o可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed
5 y4 E! w2 l& R- R, t# T. V) Z慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .6 x) F6 u5 C3 v" g+ ~
被一种情绪所左右,
2 d% e& b5 l( o/ {, O4 x; u总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
' Z0 }0 S: m5 M2 s* R即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you8 c: n- f& q/ Z. I! U9 M% O
也不问我是否喜欢你,) g+ F8 ?4 G3 z* s
对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
7 i b8 N% p; G4 u7 C( [$ Q1 D只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you' }0 I' }/ N5 x$ N5 `3 N! ~
3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you
6 k9 B9 ]# S3 C& I5 I心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil
4 l1 t* e! W; Z% r2 K然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
1 W) I9 U7 E+ W, v$ p, R你的身影已化成一种氛围," ]4 A5 H O. \3 E+ n
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.# Y* P- ? {0 M* S6 D7 k
你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! % P! s. ~% u) S) |
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字; Q. h7 H9 C7 e( W6 r7 _8 L) Y
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,, R3 e, M4 O1 `% t5 ~7 r4 x
一种声音,and your voice3 }) i$ `- j0 W) J8 C6 Z% F
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
1 V9 f$ x. B2 W9 q; B掺杂著幸福的感觉。
' ?1 U t, j/ B3 r与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land$ t6 g+ J8 a% {8 u8 _( A
象雪花般撒落在我的心田,( ] b! i$ p6 W/ @" w$ b; |
倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
4 i6 M" L& V& `2 x6 a% K纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。+ ^: |4 N. p* k: w8 L
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss
$ O0 z d7 l7 f& B% e) u% A有一个能够让思念的人,
7 a9 @+ f( Z% g9 {其实也是一种幸福。
* p$ F8 ]# H/ u+ E, f9 j3 i6 ]尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer. . t3 j+ f! k# d! Q9 [! @
柔柔的海风,% H$ O1 m% J( y2 j& @# o9 b2 {
甜甜的夏天。
; a0 G; W/ T0 q: f* l; i8 [一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
' {$ z7 [1 r0 {3 g0 @只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.+ i1 k2 v" y5 G$ n2 e
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.5 w3 q) P$ ~7 _; e3 b, ~" G* C7 n
想和你有共同的情结,2 L. Q' I/ m5 c8 l3 D- n$ `+ r# s
共同的心愿。
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
. o( V2 v% m, g8 @5 z, D: f一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together' k+ D2 v" ]; E/ @& E* s7 M6 ^
或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film + i8 V- y- [! |9 r- p. c8 e8 V* Q
或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.1 J- z7 W1 O8 Y& a) n6 v& u9 Q
『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?' O1 k' v: s# b
我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, ; w% w+ ?+ [$ K! p% \
浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”* m) I( y, u S$ ?6 a
或是轻轻的一吻,6 G. k9 i0 n8 X* _9 `. }6 h: S
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』
5 X/ I; [! c/ \& z. Y) n/ `0 a" J就足够了. That is enough.+ _0 `# ^4 r% a: B1 v
这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago!
: m( `% n6 q9 U0 w: L' O终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
# D8 P# t- ~4 _) o! g/ S萌出了芽,) r' D$ u# M3 }: a. M) x) N
一如对你的思念,the same as my missing" [- c6 G; ~7 b# t# x
浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.# a' x @3 ~& I1 h: Y( f4 H6 t
如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand
) F4 t; x" L( | R( t B能够牵著你的手,) t6 u% P! |; y; _1 d
那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
+ g: x5 }7 \. U/ x让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. 5 M- U- l3 v" m# Z! C
慢慢地细读, u8 w9 H7 Q$ F5 W- k* d
我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. 5 f! o+ \( j4 @' Z P
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me # {( }$ ~4 j/ M+ [" D. I' ~
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor
0 y. T# M! L/ H/ Q# w7 b& L9 l' M就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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