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每当说一句汉语的时候,我总在心里想英语是怎么说的.尤其看到汉语诗歌的时候,我突然想,翻译成英语还能保留原来的意思吗?所以试着译一译.
1 f& Z; _$ o; l: z* Q; J8 S0 a前边发了译文以后才发现有些大小写和语法错误.一点一点地改,很乱.所以再重新发一便:
; ^* n) i8 T% \! v+ N5 L$ M; f/ OEarly morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.' l% n) ~& R0 l* o) t. l
Partial leaves fall down everywhere,squirrels are busily running.% N7 K7 j' M& {5 S5 l/ U
Current I, the same as one tear ago, the same given name, and the same family name.
% _0 e e1 W3 P! t2 K1 e' C2 }The same hairstyle,the same bag,reserved laughing and talking./ D+ u: U8 D4 d+ s1 S
Seemly added something in my eyes,or lacked something.
* I1 S' L0 y( k6 `8 P4 DSummer went so fast that I almost forgot those sweating night:& n. X* ]& _* O9 S7 `$ |7 Y$ a$ l+ i ~4 }
Cats often played at the whole hot night outside windows to get cool
* N: d- O4 M I# N9 C. Tlike us many years ago,mindless self indulgence.
b9 l( X- y1 L" n, j! K5 JI often cherish the memory happened in summer and those people that make me raint even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming.
& t% M- G# \4 I* FThe emotion and the carma only is a dream.5 S# Y) d! ^! j/ N4 y* [& x
That shoudn`t happen to meet each other last tenderlt night.4 ?$ F) p& h. ]; Q& _& ?1 }4 e
I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.1 _! e# X% f; j' e
I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
+ [5 l" T9 a7 W) C- M* w5 tIn this lonely world whom I can step inside love to?
4 c$ \% v8 b. w* {! ]Intoxicated then feel cold,
& n J" B2 T/ m9 W. J5 L" bthe labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
q2 S3 V, q4 ~( pI am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
g+ d4 { T: |; ^/ O0 b% |The amorous man to whom you gave your soul?' e2 w+ K6 {/ g) q% Z+ f+ E* c0 C
Why I am always hoodwinked!
: t5 I3 } n! K Y) G: Q! Z" B. yI have told myself many times cautiously ' @: G' @2 n2 s$ L
don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
- [7 W6 n3 u2 I# v! oThe amorous women always get drunk by desolation.
, I+ q) V% \5 Z; W3 r {Why can`t I take it easy?
* c+ G) s i( f' g9 W* l. `: YHow endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!* C! o& ?6 U# m0 x7 H6 }
When the quiet night comes" S9 S2 z8 ^2 L+ N9 ]& b; n0 C
your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
* P, b+ C+ X7 n' t/ r( v! kThe greeting when you met me made my heart in touched unaccountably., ?- n6 N% G1 P
Yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul,
, a+ L$ e& x& g( }$ g+ clight the dark corner in my mind.7 _6 ]& `' k) E2 N) G
I feel a bit of cozy.
+ B! ?" B( @; J& s" tThe deep attached to you in a twinkling
/ @! j# H) W2 x8 M2 M5 `2 omaybe is the most light spot in my whole life.) Z* }, k5 D$ U! H, E
I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
- O+ {1 ~, v- R" c, b& _but accompanying with the time passed
3 N& W. I8 Z' D3 |! r- m% oI am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion,
( d3 B ^4 `* v) yalways feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly.
6 |5 M# t5 X* W1 c3 w$ IWithout asking if you like me or if I like you; G: k1 b; P I% u/ z( J+ U
only feel gracious for your existing,
0 k% h/ _5 D- r. P, Y( O) Sonlt want to do something for you.- `& ?! \* P, ]/ p% s
Every time when you meet me6 P2 q* ^# ^# J: K8 b2 D# P
the sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil,1 ]) m" `. V r: ^: t- |: g/ C
but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
- }; `: Z0 }1 P/ D: M0 B) D) HThat live in my heart.
W7 k+ a% `& F5 xDo you know your name can suddenly come into mu mind at anytime?# O6 v% X& N5 ]
Even only your flying clothes` corner when you turn around, and your voice5 o3 Y5 b, Y8 B: q* w
make me gently distraught with happy feeling.) _9 D# M% ?3 Y: ]) w
The scene that met you prinkle in my heart like snow on the land
# A U x8 Y) n$ r0 S, lsuddenly flurry that all are the love to you.: q0 ]6 P( k% u3 v, O9 H/ v% L
Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss,
. |9 Z5 W Q- v: _especially on the day, the gentle sea breeze and the sweet summer.) ?; \1 M. g1 {2 D
Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
( F0 Y/ [3 e( ~6 k) p& Ronly waiting for you quietly
& n( t Y4 p, x9 S {just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
: B' f$ |8 | w! Z3 K" RI really want to ramble in the small rain with you * F0 w0 g. X+ p2 D
and enjoy the rain washing together
2 R; {' `1 ] B, n. C& [" _or rush to a film' F3 l1 ?) [( g+ \' z/ y
or listen to a music quietly.3 Y0 W1 c7 B: C0 v
Whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?/ |# Q: Y( Q+ f0 |) s( J g/ G
If we embrace ,dance,and gaze to each other,
% }% @+ z2 }: [* fsmile or gently kiss then say: I really love you".
& ?2 t0 R- y/ f8 D$ UThat is enough./ q+ I6 }! `+ ]' Z' d+ P7 \5 v# d
Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago,
& s* x5 }$ j& S3 Y9 tfinely it deeply rooted into the earth in the season and sprout,
/ ?+ `' w) T+ h) Y0 K& H+ r/ `the same as my missing.
8 p; Q! ]8 O; ^7 h* _3 c& DIt comes a little bit of verdure.
6 U' y% k* \# f9 S3 N; tIf, If some day I can touch your hand,
8 y* G1 ~+ C& H( @( Y9 e( Rthen I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
& C; H6 ]6 F3 a9 s: Z' _Let you touch me gently and read me carefully.9 C6 O1 ^7 O% L2 l; x3 ~
I will enjoy your mild emotion through your hands with my heart and soul.
2 w0 V/ S& U( F: X u! RAt the moment you reach out your hands to me ,$ e/ n' s" y9 d
then I will have all care and ardor.' k; u; d& ]: ]7 o
Shall we walk arm in arm?
# e c2 X1 r5 W; k% J呵,太晚了,连检查都不想检查一下,有没有打字错误了. |
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