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每当说一句汉语的时候,我总在心里想英语是怎么说的.尤其看到汉语诗歌的时候,我突然想,翻译成英语还能保留原来的意思吗?所以试着译一译.- e, g6 N: }) Z1 a
前边发了译文以后才发现有些大小写和语法错误.一点一点地改,很乱.所以再重新发一便:* O7 N( K0 u1 \$ `
Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
* u* J1 Y6 L7 b5 IPartial leaves fall down everywhere,squirrels are busily running. f5 L/ ]" O8 U9 Z- R
Current I, the same as one tear ago, the same given name, and the same family name.
9 B9 T- B0 v% u, {The same hairstyle,the same bag,reserved laughing and talking.; ~! v- v; `7 B* Z! c
Seemly added something in my eyes,or lacked something.
0 x1 F6 Z1 }# D) `" d) Z* BSummer went so fast that I almost forgot those sweating night:. c0 x2 u& ~ t* W/ D
Cats often played at the whole hot night outside windows to get cool 2 k/ R% K2 G: \9 T2 J
like us many years ago,mindless self indulgence.; t% Y, N* D0 t- Q
I often cherish the memory happened in summer and those people that make me raint even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming.
- A9 G" o% t& dThe emotion and the carma only is a dream.
2 u- K* e$ v/ O! ]+ j y, {That shoudn`t happen to meet each other last tenderlt night.) d0 u2 h, T" ^! Y/ o; F
I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.- o8 x7 [# H$ y, X, E B
I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.6 e! w( A2 W. T$ N6 V
In this lonely world whom I can step inside love to?& R E) n# w6 o5 v D
Intoxicated then feel cold,
& j7 R+ N: V* y& Athe labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
; a# {2 c( X0 [3 z9 f3 X+ p) z [I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
; k& H* w. _$ cThe amorous man to whom you gave your soul?! B8 J' W3 A$ E- Q5 x
Why I am always hoodwinked!
! X/ C, M' r! t0 e7 v2 qI have told myself many times cautiously
6 \, [0 C( E7 x* tdon`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
* ~) l" y$ o7 k- \# X3 o( EThe amorous women always get drunk by desolation.
* W: d9 `3 P O5 L, cWhy can`t I take it easy?
" d$ Y2 [! H+ v! L" f t7 r/ Z$ THow endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
9 F. W6 T; z) ^3 VWhen the quiet night comes1 B& \7 Y8 _' }" H
your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
9 J$ v) w6 ^ Y7 a4 f3 s3 GThe greeting when you met me made my heart in touched unaccountably.9 `& I$ F O N$ X, ^
Yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul,# J8 k4 B! e8 {, ^
light the dark corner in my mind.+ |* e0 a2 t- B; E5 u/ ^# o
I feel a bit of cozy.
/ r6 y" P3 r/ g; F, }The deep attached to you in a twinkling
% x i/ l4 w: Fmaybe is the most light spot in my whole life.
| M7 ?7 U6 |; ^$ l+ bI didn`t cherish your appearance at first,4 c. S& {3 t5 w- c% U9 @* Z
but accompanying with the time passed3 y0 p5 n. A% Z. r+ G! u
I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion, w' L7 X4 h$ n0 L h" Y F
always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly.+ R/ x3 e8 A p2 G5 F
Without asking if you like me or if I like you1 K3 Y0 H4 {0 v" O
only feel gracious for your existing,
, d. T" h5 \/ bonlt want to do something for you.
0 W' U5 L6 I% @4 k3 o0 O. v/ `Every time when you meet me4 Q6 m. r% w" ^4 b( _8 m
the sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil,5 u% ~/ V0 B8 e9 N
but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere: Q/ O( q: }& R. o/ k- E1 _ u
That live in my heart.
/ T/ q5 N2 u- N! e/ SDo you know your name can suddenly come into mu mind at anytime?7 g2 e" x/ ^" Y6 I- p) P5 V
Even only your flying clothes` corner when you turn around, and your voice) s2 q# x# `% H. k- N
make me gently distraught with happy feeling.% h. ]) m8 o/ y6 B
The scene that met you prinkle in my heart like snow on the land
# x$ a: Q7 g3 s1 y) y" x! dsuddenly flurry that all are the love to you.2 r, E0 Y: u' Q) f7 l: z2 ]" t
Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss,; Z i2 h5 t; M8 R8 ?1 I. ^
especially on the day, the gentle sea breeze and the sweet summer.
6 ~% O: }" S# r( |5 z+ fSweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy & k8 J0 T, _4 D2 U" M% H% d9 J
only waiting for you quietly
6 A u7 }9 [- W- X+ n. Sjust let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
/ G% o5 W+ k6 A) ^% p$ R; dI really want to ramble in the small rain with you A3 {' D( Z" M7 ?
and enjoy the rain washing together
5 j* [2 ]- B/ k$ dor rush to a film
* [+ m0 O7 T, u& r3 y/ A) r% A$ cor listen to a music quietly.
. ~8 e- }0 O6 PWhom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?/ o' E' x- \2 v6 u
If we embrace ,dance,and gaze to each other,
: V: W' @% O4 [* A# n# Z( r$ Bsmile or gently kiss then say: I really love you".0 [4 l* y+ j6 z& w, o
That is enough.
8 ]' o4 A% r$ n* W- tMaybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago,
4 [7 K% ~) O2 a. d9 ufinely it deeply rooted into the earth in the season and sprout,
) R# m6 }0 c% [4 H1 s& `+ Ethe same as my missing.
8 q0 L/ }& i; c8 O( t3 e' ZIt comes a little bit of verdure.. ], x* y. p: s4 D% H
If, If some day I can touch your hand, ' E G" Y$ Q9 ]% r- L. e& o
then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.' F) M$ `4 p2 r9 H$ y$ n P3 J. b0 t
Let you touch me gently and read me carefully.
2 m& |% o! t& k+ j8 bI will enjoy your mild emotion through your hands with my heart and soul.8 o* C% A5 x& h0 u) u5 _! K2 {$ T0 f
At the moment you reach out your hands to me ,
; H1 w: R2 e2 c- jthen I will have all care and ardor.
8 d9 _+ p; a4 O- H4 y2 J6 {, z9 V) eShall we walk arm in arm?
! K3 Z8 V8 _5 X. P呵,太晚了,连检查都不想检查一下,有没有打字错误了. |
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