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每当说一句汉语的时候,我总在心里想英语是怎么说的.尤其看到汉语诗歌的时候,我突然想,翻译成英语还能保留原来的意思吗?所以试着译一译." i- u9 [3 J: C# B E/ {
前边发了译文以后才发现有些大小写和语法错误.一点一点地改,很乱.所以再重新发一便:8 @6 q3 ~2 J( _4 c( y. M1 z
Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.8 T% `/ G2 k: f% j T* }$ d
Partial leaves fall down everywhere,squirrels are busily running.
+ |1 v% x+ r. y Current I, the same as one tear ago, the same given name, and the same family name.0 Y7 S x# Y) Z p6 P2 Q
The same hairstyle,the same bag,reserved laughing and talking.
( B6 \, V5 O! ]$ d8 q2 J" CSeemly added something in my eyes,or lacked something.
* e$ M8 c9 I" USummer went so fast that I almost forgot those sweating night:
1 Z. K& r: o: {( r- f5 kCats often played at the whole hot night outside windows to get cool
# a# r' f7 Z$ m" c3 ?: T( w& jlike us many years ago,mindless self indulgence.
0 x! V9 h& U/ y" }I often cherish the memory happened in summer and those people that make me raint even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming.2 H9 x3 N+ r6 \ L0 v
The emotion and the carma only is a dream.& c6 l$ j8 H$ P1 _9 L
That shoudn`t happen to meet each other last tenderlt night.
) z) _5 m/ Y; R& b: {! P% ZI want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.3 `+ N$ n% |0 X& ^! b
I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
2 a. _2 G- T, ~. B9 i/ Q8 KIn this lonely world whom I can step inside love to?
; \8 D% o L- L! y1 \- X% WIntoxicated then feel cold,2 u1 k& `' w, E" [: O
the labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.$ S# i9 o" Z. E, T; P/ ~" R
I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
, ?& E" j4 G4 L$ B& N. E( H3 M7 o) DThe amorous man to whom you gave your soul?
7 [8 ]/ \5 S! h. NWhy I am always hoodwinked!- x! y O A2 A% s# ?, g3 _0 n* d
I have told myself many times cautiously ' z( |# s0 z* e* b$ x6 {
don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
; T5 a. D# n7 D' TThe amorous women always get drunk by desolation.
+ E: s }3 J7 S# i) f% J+ `Why can`t I take it easy?
. J! n8 E4 D# H8 e0 l$ Z7 E) sHow endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
1 s4 M% S2 ?; {8 ?When the quiet night comes
7 V X* p& l3 W; n* Y. R. `your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
% b; p3 j& X- yThe greeting when you met me made my heart in touched unaccountably.
8 Z' O! J5 P9 `, K+ iYours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul,
( W" G$ g' {* T1 Z R9 e/ ]light the dark corner in my mind., I ~5 M, A# y. A
I feel a bit of cozy.
$ Q( j5 q8 y& U1 BThe deep attached to you in a twinkling8 |; _7 W* y7 l
maybe is the most light spot in my whole life.# F m6 H5 q/ G6 a1 }
I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,0 x, i" l j, y
but accompanying with the time passed: O9 ]! H7 e" t& r0 Q
I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion,
) N6 h2 q) U0 o5 P% T& i) s. _! \always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly.: w2 n' q+ [$ P: `/ r- h
Without asking if you like me or if I like you
9 l6 C% M0 a) zonly feel gracious for your existing,0 b( S/ |+ a# V. w5 g( |/ Q
onlt want to do something for you.
% O# l5 O; q: t, n$ |6 R/ b2 cEvery time when you meet me6 }9 Q4 F; r) Q
the sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil,
# ]+ h- v# y' C1 g! tbut I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
$ t* i7 A+ t k NThat live in my heart.+ K2 D I8 j" Q/ \: J4 w' B
Do you know your name can suddenly come into mu mind at anytime?: j" g4 {- P: a
Even only your flying clothes` corner when you turn around, and your voice7 y: p, ?+ N8 f
make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
6 q- Q0 E- x$ M. L" eThe scene that met you prinkle in my heart like snow on the land
t5 B$ K" r! }$ M' Usuddenly flurry that all are the love to you.9 F( Q9 K* k6 [3 m/ j% g2 i
Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss," N5 t% v7 q" @1 F* T6 f2 d5 b
especially on the day, the gentle sea breeze and the sweet summer.1 z# z$ F2 T. Q) _/ {3 r4 ~
Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
8 h G4 G7 R2 [: ?3 I" {only waiting for you quietly
% A* H: O- v2 ~0 Y! Wjust let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
( N& F/ m4 l2 jI really want to ramble in the small rain with you
8 [/ Q6 X8 S& Gand enjoy the rain washing together
' Y- g0 ~) ]+ C4 y9 M% Ror rush to a film
' Y1 G# V9 k3 j( Wor listen to a music quietly., [; x3 j1 y3 D* q1 M
Whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?* g* t6 \5 f; V N0 N+ ?3 V
If we embrace ,dance,and gaze to each other,. _) d, ~: ~- J' ]; _" X, g1 l$ x* |
smile or gently kiss then say: I really love you".* Y- ? u1 P: I, i6 F4 R4 K5 ]
That is enough.! T; z/ A2 W6 D3 n$ W: M2 n
Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago,
8 n/ M+ z( B6 z# O+ M" _: tfinely it deeply rooted into the earth in the season and sprout,, \) g8 ~. c% f6 s- a: W
the same as my missing.2 ]/ _( v* A2 q# G4 j ?0 I
It comes a little bit of verdure.& _' y6 u9 v' G/ }
If, If some day I can touch your hand,
1 |6 ^ w+ \3 G" l, g. Qthen I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.% I! L# ^9 ^) v* O* ~
Let you touch me gently and read me carefully.
9 D/ j7 P l9 |" N2 `( EI will enjoy your mild emotion through your hands with my heart and soul.
/ ?1 T2 w5 x6 o p3 dAt the moment you reach out your hands to me ,
1 z4 \7 ?$ k; U7 c, m* L, `2 Dthen I will have all care and ardor.& b' M- L/ i! V3 V
Shall we walk arm in arm?
9 s5 s: P* b" W) k! i7 E! v) Y( t呵,太晚了,连检查都不想检查一下,有没有打字错误了. |
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