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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,6 A8 V& `4 F$ M. X
,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry. 0 u" m6 E; I, q: L9 `9 C
零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running . 3 [4 A! }, v2 I7 a E" _7 H$ u
现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.* g# a9 E- ^0 a9 {
梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking." e5 Z' C! r, V+ j* u9 ~5 o; U3 h
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
# g1 L9 `0 S/ y4 v- o: r夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.
( n& m* X& p8 j4 S1 o) f猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.% K; R0 r$ j! v$ ~/ D
就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.+ l- j- l6 V1 A( b
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及9 O/ u9 ^. M! Z" N1 y1 i& E) ^- q
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
! N6 ^! p$ k4 S4 a+ K4 |. B1 L7 ]# ~世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
' W0 ?( F% z4 Q昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
* t( W! t8 v; F/ A7 `' t& n- F想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
0 Y6 D* H; h$ E+ F& N$ H3 J" x最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild. 7 V! ^3 M$ P2 P* w% Q' Z! ]( f
寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?5 u6 Q# T* g; r) S( B6 q' b
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
% [9 _% |: a0 _* t! A迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.) T4 J. |& P7 q) v. ~4 o
最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.# a0 x, E# i5 g
多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?! i6 s) T+ O! r0 Y
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
8 l, o0 R& F; M& |9 }# N" D) b多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
7 l5 x# [' ?- x4 F3 k5 G7 ~4 @& c O2 Y不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
* U' a$ Q$ k A% {- f# D5 Y" ~多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation,
, ^) D0 ~" @' B, ?6 N为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?0 w* M& f2 r0 i& h$ |, H+ ?( {! w
多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!; ]. P+ h K' Q1 l
永难平息的泪
4 y" }$ E5 R; Z7 }+ z- w每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes
6 c3 c W5 f0 }# i. [0 f O) ?9 H; ~~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
6 v" @: W3 z( U; m当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.- [4 R9 o9 S( t7 k, W
让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
) u+ l2 w! q; h8 Z/ x你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
; d, g) w8 e& }, V& Z5 v0 V& H一抹微笑;2 Z( a* Q! H( L4 K+ {% ? @+ p$ m b
一个手势;
! K9 S* B0 X& I* p, X z一片话语,
9 c/ x" W: T3 `# X愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、- d9 J" T9 b* R. ?, h* l: v) l
明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner
& y2 k) _7 A9 h9 ^6 v6 n心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy./ n* Z, F; f+ i3 W% C0 c; o. n
这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling% P; p; u% V' N( A$ T
也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..4 ^! a% E) _2 q! n" h8 _
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,# g6 [, R$ @; m k- s
我并不以为然。
4 n. T. A; @, p+ Q+ K* [/ R可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed 8 m" @+ f; r+ \* f: c% q. L* X
慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .
* ]$ m" J9 ~" U' }; t7 W, P9 U被一种情绪所左右,. Y/ U5 H) B, {+ c, ]
总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .' G+ q. o" X, `, x8 V
即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
R& |2 L! l; V3 o也不问我是否喜欢你,
. j0 t: x. e/ d9 ?7 b对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.9 | g9 |1 h: k6 q, ^; m1 I
只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you# W1 p c+ Q4 D) F5 h
3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you5 d/ [5 o/ R7 R E! p- W. A2 B
心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil) C) v2 _0 E; ?" ^/ a9 h* x1 P
然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere ; e1 ^ n6 f4 C- P! g$ N2 H' S# O& W
你的身影已化成一种氛围,
b( u- T% i2 i记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.) l& W5 S' W9 b3 ]2 U
你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
3 f- ?- f3 L5 A6 R" K4 F: S随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字
% E2 B. i5 V1 H* o( L1 R哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,$ r) K/ X$ d( X: V' g% A2 i
一种声音,and your voice" e+ @) u/ z+ o0 q- N
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.4 d E( w$ f. C1 q& x" z
掺杂著幸福的感觉。
: D. `' r, b0 N# a" Q9 L% A: j4 g与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
: x' k5 ]' A2 G/ \+ v象雪花般撒落在我的心田,) }$ |! w( D) O Y" k$ q. t: n
倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
+ c; x" w/ I4 n8 O3 d. e9 C, M5 s纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。
3 q- H l) ] [你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss8 I0 u/ T9 X0 V. o7 A9 O3 U4 |
有一个能够让思念的人,+ l8 N9 ]" @9 f8 {$ T
其实也是一种幸福。1 {: p. N% i1 b8 R; c
尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer. 0 H) y' y1 @4 e+ g8 a- U+ x
柔柔的海风,
1 J# B- A% t3 q) ^( e; g/ C甜甜的夏天。' Q B$ {9 h, [$ u
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
% Y" a+ j+ D; J6 z" Y' v只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.7 G3 x. y% g( N( O3 l( C: `2 z. m6 d
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.: P! A1 Z6 V9 C
想和你有共同的情结,
$ T8 g! ^7 p. q2 M; i, e& ~共同的心愿。" h/ s4 U$ p+ t" E0 H) C* l6 p
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; `! _6 n& c+ X7 ^+ x4 l1 x好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you z% l& x. N4 j& [/ j5 s% n% M, l
一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together/ n. _8 m3 d$ Y2 z$ V/ y
或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film
/ b5 p6 X6 h$ d或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.
" E* ]( y0 E, \; I+ D9 q『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
9 {$ X6 }/ \0 u1 L3 ?3 g% T我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
7 z$ n2 q& } b浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
) r4 ?) s! `4 h或是轻轻的一吻,
( a# W% c2 | W& ~) Q, R$ A再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』
, ?. R' Z- k7 d; E: l就足够了. That is enough.
2 \6 k. L) t4 r5 K这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago!
/ W( T' l3 g* Q1 _2 r2 i终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.6 i; Q2 k0 [0 d# R2 b! E
萌出了芽, I! |( B$ m% [* d
一如对你的思念,the same as my missing+ u/ S; e! e" I- l* _
浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.5 C+ v/ y6 Z V
如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand4 [6 t" E [* V& A. f6 ?2 W
能够牵著你的手,; x5 h0 H5 X. z- |. o2 P
那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely./ e3 w# t3 K( b0 w. R
让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. 2 o$ e% M7 N k+ l8 w$ c
慢慢地细读,
: v# ~8 g% y! i: X我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. 5 C; w2 s) y) z4 s( p- {+ m6 o$ p
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me 6 [. s1 H- @- m w
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor 7 Q/ {! Q6 y" \. B: C
就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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