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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
) j. g9 |, @5 B% z7 `,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
4 f6 Z# R8 F9 M2 t零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
' c- y7 b! N8 |" h: Q现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.
8 R2 Z4 K3 r/ L. ^6 f) C% S4 a9 y" f梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.: v; _2 G, U- s' u0 c5 |
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.- C, T( Z8 V. w6 D
夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.# K" L! ^7 ^0 {5 [! Y* T
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
- k0 X' j5 Z3 a& z% N就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.; U8 s1 T5 Q7 e# q, e" Y0 V
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及
) V4 b& E5 j+ D' V; S) F+ l那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。, e8 p+ }7 J- `
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream. u4 {5 J7 q% l8 L; J
昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
% M- e8 |- M1 a7 j- T H想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.2 ~, P! U1 H$ i9 b& \- q# h+ k
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
3 O6 ^, e& `7 n& {# ?4 d寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?! ?" F0 G: L$ j" E7 x9 P
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.6 ~1 R4 ~1 n5 K6 }- _+ m0 ?6 ?
迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
; X5 C) J3 t" c* \4 i0 X最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have./ E6 q) E" u' W& o- j+ J8 u5 D
多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
, e- C- D% D+ n/ eWhy I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….4 V. C& p: X2 Q) X! x
多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
4 Q) c' ?4 r( |6 F1 h8 A不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig./ ~1 Z! p, n( o" k" o
多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, ( t! {5 F9 K. o# q% s# g& f' [
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
7 b; I) m7 c. ~+ n5 N i多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
$ |6 i' J$ C( S- b永难平息的泪- H7 T2 r1 p7 w3 k3 ^& O8 L8 [# v1 S
每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes
+ _$ \- ?; { l1 ~6 Y# L x0 Q3 d A~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
0 Z/ D& Q2 F* W8 l% o1 x( j/ k当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.: O! z; G& e3 S5 v1 m/ J
让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
( D% `8 L+ f4 E0 ]* F& v# `8 f你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
; N% g7 e+ w1 H1 K' c' i2 x+ }( Q4 j一抹微笑;
" b9 w, Z }2 l7 ]8 ^+ D6 R一个手势;$ G& }1 h5 `5 g
一片话语,
# D, t2 E1 i1 [/ G3 O愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、
7 q, l- b/ e8 w; _4 ~明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner9 f J/ n; U! c- h( I2 z4 K
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.
) m% D& R [, v4 l- ?9 b这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling: t. x# f4 g% r1 G; {: t; O/ T
也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..' W* a3 E! B5 F/ _. w) l
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
, Y% I8 b! A. E3 T4 t我并不以为然。* D- `% p( U* v% L$ N
可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed
" V* n) l- D$ @$ Y+ f慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .# D' v* q# p5 l, Y% H
被一种情绪所左右,$ S; h7 r5 J9 |( s L: W$ a* _. B$ J
总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly ., L" _3 V: x! }7 a
即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you9 ^. Y, X9 k: A$ ?
也不问我是否喜欢你,
: m0 W4 g& `9 C% `: q8 D* {对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
- E0 `0 z3 S( H* s4 X0 Z) e) ~只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
. K1 V# P3 L, t: ^3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you: U$ ]; b N1 U' X( l, U
心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil
; ?, w8 E, b0 k; f O然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere 3 i, `3 v- |( O* B6 b6 N' g) D
你的身影已化成一种氛围,( u+ X6 U* g# T3 `; B9 x
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.' W, ]8 ]. l# H0 N/ A* ]
你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
/ t/ h& q' v/ L2 `. v: u随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字
; D$ r( J2 |) ^4 l6 l+ x哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,; d% k1 \5 P8 [7 Y
一种声音,and your voice
+ Q$ a# j, D( |9 _也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
; w' Y; B0 i3 S! [6 N掺杂著幸福的感觉。) Q. \+ |' ]5 W, N- W7 n0 U( k
与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
2 P# l: \4 H5 m X, M4 B& a% f& ] x象雪花般撒落在我的心田,/ M. T, w; D# x4 D" V! U! w8 |
倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.3 X" `$ A3 }% u( J# \5 G
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。* G- x" b% X1 y+ T6 x* t) g
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss* `: J6 m6 e7 ~" q, }! O( c
有一个能够让思念的人,
+ X* b( A% b& }, j! E8 }* D其实也是一种幸福。
7 n- g- u% i$ }+ \2 g# j尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer. & a+ F3 j' r: n5 o2 s. j/ N
柔柔的海风,
1 A b9 a. {. E甜甜的夏天。- m1 ~. n m" L" g! E( P R8 e$ r
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy 2 {3 k/ [2 P, ~
只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.
' _0 {5 ]! i6 \ N5 o, b3 v8 m! G6 H$ e仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.! n# [2 \# ~+ A$ s* [, ]$ @* n9 c! s
想和你有共同的情结,$ Y; R/ j8 E0 g$ ^8 G! G
共同的心愿。0 U4 g8 V/ t2 A& J8 i
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you: p" f2 q% z" X5 `% ^3 o3 {; }
一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together, l) |0 |) ]5 Z1 I: Z. f
或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film 9 P# G9 R3 M* a% s9 F% }/ p
或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.8 B' y( b+ i# u$ `; J! b
『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?, n7 Y3 \4 I+ l7 O& p8 p0 s! _5 k
我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, - A1 {- ]; \" E2 w. T; Q
浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
5 S4 m. c5 ?; ]3 ]! u或是轻轻的一吻,) t0 J0 A8 I3 m; X* L" W
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』5 B! S! s( c1 N9 k. f9 L3 W) N
就足够了. That is enough.
( Z% S8 I( X3 }" ?, k+ ~这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! % Q* e# `' m: N* |& L& {
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.- d. J. e: m/ x5 T6 K
萌出了芽,# _% v+ v& f+ ?2 R8 Y. H0 _
一如对你的思念,the same as my missing
2 s0 G' T ^/ X% C n7 k: Z/ y浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.- ?- v2 E+ l- L9 _# [8 \1 n; N
如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand9 D7 S3 q. j% l$ J* ^# T5 @
能够牵著你的手,3 s# h! N8 d0 v0 V0 R2 ^: T4 n
那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.# M# Z- @4 n+ O! R1 }; W
让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully.
2 C x$ D7 o) j! K" J5 C慢慢地细读,
$ r: `5 l. [. E/ b$ A我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. * I* x" D; k2 Z( ]* y( k0 v
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me + e j$ W/ D9 e4 I- Y+ B
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor
0 a5 T8 j# \4 X: \' @就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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