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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
- [1 L! l; P; [: W) L2 k,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry. ! R# W6 g5 ?* ~7 p1 H1 [
零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
+ W. @/ p! m6 L6 C9 k8 u Z现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.
8 a7 K, I! I( V梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.! r y+ w( W" \. t! T! N9 I5 |
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.9 g5 M @7 {( h! n5 r Z
夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.
' _1 Y% b# o- E6 H( L猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool./ A7 {: E2 v. C Y/ ~
就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.3 N/ X" z, b# {# m9 P7 ?* F# C
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及
; Z6 J0 t. t( {3 W+ g7 a1 p2 a2 {那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。& ]& M( Q8 v( }! ~$ {
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.+ N4 l E: L7 d" y; _# Y: F* o
昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
: B9 T( U5 q3 O8 k$ x8 C想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up." N; n/ o1 |# r8 _2 ^- h
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
5 k* f2 h Y: W: ?# Y寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?$ h6 d+ [4 ^6 }, }: I( E3 y/ G3 a- |
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold./ A0 s- u+ L {. {
迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.7 [. k' q4 p/ S- c# s6 n
最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
, I9 C9 M% ^8 a% `6 l7 J- t2 q多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
# Y0 j; X1 |( A: ZWhy I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
2 H/ Q- t/ B" Z9 Z, i: U! |9 e多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
: r1 \, ]# |1 E( c4 |9 C1 W4 D不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
) v' Z$ v6 i+ K& q" u' x h" V% X多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, 6 q( q& I0 p+ l% V Q% L/ Y0 Z
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
9 Z, l, A" _- ]5 l9 g多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!. @7 v& s) y7 w" K: P* j1 ? @3 x
永难平息的泪
8 C4 ]( L0 d) d5 ^" V4 _5 J7 ~* X每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes4 _3 G0 `7 X0 Q6 t; b' Q1 o
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.9 G; _+ H# h" R2 G: Y& Q6 `5 G8 e
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.# F8 ?/ N( O' C; a7 |
让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,, G2 l9 E3 l% ]' [
你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul ! M* B+ U5 n4 _7 ]4 Y+ F
一抹微笑;7 G! K: X8 [( I5 F: G
一个手势;
0 A! M3 w( Y$ A3 _3 V& u+ G一片话语,9 I0 L4 v9 N7 C$ }$ n# {
愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、
b0 D7 I- E( J1 Z明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner
: f. A' ]! `. x% S心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy./ i( i9 z$ }+ r
这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling/ o# Y0 ?2 i8 |+ b, T$ H
也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..: N& s5 W# U6 U" n0 y4 B0 N
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
& q, u: k% t* R/ l3 m我并不以为然。: B N; T3 e9 e+ J+ F9 f
可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed
: l ?5 G* c/ n& }' |( o! M慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .& p. c- W8 G `
被一种情绪所左右,
: Q3 ]4 Z3 Z5 h总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
K6 v$ v# [% B2 L5 _% z, j( |# J! O即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
4 u" m$ {- M/ W4 z2 Q也不问我是否喜欢你,
4 I0 N# P5 |( B! `9 R对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
. P5 W/ W1 n, g* L$ N只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
9 w4 F9 [( z# ?% g0 v# p" Z7 X3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you$ h- C3 D6 g0 H9 F( A1 N2 E
心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil) a& O: ?" r, Z9 S* l* A1 a8 X3 Q) \
然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
( w' z! d- `# k( j0 u5 N* y你的身影已化成一种氛围,1 K- n* v* k& F: J4 b
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.
" T% g: e6 S7 X+ v" Z+ c7 g1 T你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! 7 W9 [, e& J9 \# h! w: b1 h
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字2 F2 Z2 T5 P6 |) T9 D
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud," L% b3 G* W& R
一种声音,and your voice3 G3 d- S: ~: w- C% |/ F/ b
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
) X+ j4 s; {9 B/ u5 ^# G掺杂著幸福的感觉。
! k0 I/ q! w0 H2 w# o- Y3 R与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land7 @9 R/ n7 g/ X3 V9 z
象雪花般撒落在我的心田,1 y& a& d8 W6 l# E! [1 ]) X% s
倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
6 I& e4 W5 w" f# f! h7 ]- p# ]纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。4 {9 e% Y4 \! b' M3 u. [" U
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss# h8 S' @, } t, G) g" }
有一个能够让思念的人,
& J* W! N2 @7 M& \% k# p其实也是一种幸福。; M4 Y3 u# z" q9 r# c; M
尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer. ; I4 S9 i E2 n# [6 t7 H
柔柔的海风,
m. M' t: {' {- X% B甜甜的夏天。
7 @( `' }$ v, E' q! I7 J* O一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
& j" d9 Z, J2 e" b' ~/ O6 [0 _只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.& _$ M7 [* X9 q4 t4 _' `
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.$ G8 V; A& Z6 S3 L6 x
想和你有共同的情结,
5 _2 P r L( o0 N, n1 J共同的心愿。
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- m" w# U0 v) N n% P! U) a好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you- @2 O( S. i# T' N' f( g
一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together9 h( L" j6 D6 }+ [. {) p0 H
或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film 4 |4 w N3 r( o. w6 E
或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.. C% L% q3 m, t# f
『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
6 [- D3 b& g" U! n2 H, `% j3 [2 x我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, : F; T- W: ^+ d% i, Y
浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”0 N5 u% m1 \* b' l' u# ~& @- v* Z
或是轻轻的一吻,6 `+ e: S `3 D7 S: E6 K
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』7 R' t; P- D8 G5 x
就足够了. That is enough.
# N7 E* D1 C T' X/ p这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! . p2 H6 i$ `2 m
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.8 |, e" T4 w' k. W; U
萌出了芽,
5 S# K" H0 n' ^! S9 \. l一如对你的思念,the same as my missing
, q, m( m- g! L8 b- R1 |浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.2 p0 c/ E! Z( F' p* R
如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand
; n7 m3 p$ C& C. a能够牵著你的手,% ]$ U* \* N) I% U" \$ Q* d# l( W
那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.( t) _* Q* d; P
让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. . }3 `* R/ U8 B$ c$ j
慢慢地细读,6 G+ `. `" ]/ H- U! B7 Z% B
我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. $ ^0 @4 Z0 n2 Q$ T n
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me : S2 ]! u Q) i, C* \+ }& Y; C
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor
' E0 u+ k% ~! W6 n3 \就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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