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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
$ m( U0 u- F: T' h7 @, G1 c,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry. + a4 X! p2 B0 J1 J5 R9 w
零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running . " p" J: t r- n7 e. M. @ R2 Q
现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.
4 U- n/ N- [- y9 y2 j* h. ~; g$ `梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking." e, {9 @+ F+ r1 J1 H) M2 E
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something./ @. {, P7 _- o" g3 B: p$ V# x
夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.
) f, W K( P3 s) c猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
$ P. p l. ~, E2 Y. ~) c! a就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.
5 C! v; G8 j& r' M) ?3 R! v9 p我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及, u# b! g3 v& A5 \8 x! t" v
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
8 h+ P1 [1 M- D9 E1 M4 S世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
' L. o; M" p/ @# r昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.9 ~+ k' N. Z" C% M1 m/ W5 x/ L
想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
% b3 n2 D9 E3 b1 D# K: j最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild. 9 B5 w# p1 @/ X g' I0 Y4 h
寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?; Q' _" B! K2 D1 ^
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
3 ]* O2 Y6 f0 ^8 a! F' f( Z迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.$ B, B7 m5 ]0 H! u8 a9 k: u
最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
1 G7 @# P# r1 m, n5 ^" |7 q4 M. C$ w多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul? R9 O4 a5 p8 N. h. j+ v- j
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
/ i$ N4 |- S6 z多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
6 x L3 ?% O1 |6 t) q$ a3 k) _不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
y+ O( J0 m/ m2 x/ J) P: l多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation,
% W# X7 ?5 S W1 e+ d) Z( U+ t) K+ p为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
" Q9 v* ^" P K+ w# d+ m3 J多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
3 R# N; z5 h( k2 w7 D* G永难平息的泪
0 e( \2 t4 K3 U1 s1 W' v( Z6 [' o每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes$ H) D3 u+ k4 p0 a
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
6 n' n: V! _( Y% N当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.& c) N, \0 m9 v% O$ I1 p
让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
, n% k* J# M4 g; B0 k2 J你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul # M4 I- @1 P! Y! P5 T
一抹微笑;: M6 c, s' V0 n1 g
一个手势;% P( z" x) r3 z- f
一片话语,
' _' ^6 }# O V$ R" z0 D) {愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、* F3 t% X, {( A2 n
明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner3 Y2 r7 P, j5 k1 l; ~1 `. v/ z- g7 \
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.9 f. C6 [0 P z, x
这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
0 O2 F- m- r9 h) }: }也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..* n( q( }/ z$ Q& C- \
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,* o- U4 c5 Q: k
我并不以为然。
~+ X* R; G0 k2 b7 r6 s( e ?# v( A可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed / R3 M3 V- Q; e/ x B5 j) V
慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .
6 |( {0 B3 t/ u: c3 x; j u被一种情绪所左右,: i: h8 E! k* t5 g' j
总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
3 W' A ^ `5 X; E6 y) V* s即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
! J: t5 p( ]+ r0 l6 a也不问我是否喜欢你,
& ?5 E3 f- _1 ]0 W8 n" e对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing., v9 H4 ^% v& X: M5 o; ], v
只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
H, n: w/ S# D) W' t3 ~3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you) X. G" X$ Z9 B( U
心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil+ A0 w: s! R* Q/ Z! i1 c
然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere / n4 Y7 E' `. Z8 B7 U% B
你的身影已化成一种氛围,
5 {! Y* i7 X4 K记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.9 I! {7 R. s( i" M1 K7 |
你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! - m! a* H4 t x- l" h4 S! ?+ d
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字
3 Z! Z' I( Z3 Y' s哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,3 `+ ~% F( l1 b. N0 o0 l Z
一种声音,and your voice9 d# ?- E I* C0 G2 Q
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
* g+ v i$ L: v& p7 J1 y8 l. j5 Y9 G掺杂著幸福的感觉。3 [3 d' t( d& X4 }# g0 F- v( {
与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land5 B4 ~/ o& b# ~% a
象雪花般撒落在我的心田,
+ t5 h' n+ a- P$ E$ _倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.* E: O& F) }' f$ B: N( G. R
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。
# u! l% C. v0 h9 H8 L你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss. u; ^$ y6 s+ \! Z) o" ]/ e% ^
有一个能够让思念的人,% V4 u$ @- ]1 p9 c& Z0 g- c
其实也是一种幸福。
; Q( R, [; r0 u6 u' h9 [尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
k- A) k: T( h I1 L7 T柔柔的海风,1 v' @' ?! e5 j% g" B8 Y& ~
甜甜的夏天。/ S1 r# U5 q5 Y$ A6 l
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
$ i' \$ @7 W, o2 L只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.
# \) A# c5 H, D7 V( E仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.. ?& w1 ]! w! W2 D
想和你有共同的情结,. N" b- ~. V3 y# x
共同的心愿。
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: _" V4 j& B" q8 H; Z5 h d$ W好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
. D4 J3 \8 U7 H: G- k$ R2 B一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together
' X# r* L Y) L# z! Y3 c7 T或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film + d& S; j0 |+ ]" D+ ^
或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.
$ s- T( a0 o+ }- J( {# ~( v『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?9 g8 w) h* o2 o: X
我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
; F, O+ \# c: }: ]% I: ^- B浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”4 t2 W1 m. @/ M1 E/ H4 H
或是轻轻的一吻,4 t4 n2 b# |: Q5 ?' j' U0 x
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』
/ w+ U1 W6 `# M6 c2 `/ f就足够了. That is enough.
% x& B/ G6 M) b7 \) {" o这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! & J! Z7 M7 I ?. c" g5 k- ~
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
9 O7 ?7 P0 n9 W |+ s9 v/ A2 a+ k. e萌出了芽,& ^; g/ d& {. e1 S2 M* y& }" X
一如对你的思念,the same as my missing1 w& [& l6 w) O K% L1 w
浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.. Y9 n* m/ T( j) }& y# ?( B9 |
如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand
1 l! n% W" K( S7 k( \1 r能够牵著你的手,7 C% W/ _8 N/ l1 Y5 E
那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.* v- Z1 |/ B" s* h/ G2 m* F( h% W3 g3 N
让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. / I- _) [+ E: M/ k$ J. W
慢慢地细读,
! w1 B+ {; F! p0 L我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. L- z% L; v/ U' K
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me
5 m, x& e' S1 j% j! }9 k我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor
4 g( }% i) |! N& F就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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