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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,3 Y# V7 c. O0 U& \
,.清晨，急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
. o6 z5 [3 b. \零星树叶的飘落，松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
! I. x. Z/ M# Z3 H3 R3 Y. |) P7 @现在的我，一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.
+ x. y( J" P' X# ~' y0 y梳相同的发型，背同样的背囊，不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.3 _! `" E2 Z7 K A( ?( Y
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽，又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.. M2 K1 t& O6 `: b6 R
夏天过得那麽快，我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.
5 z* p" p) s, q! q猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉，追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool./ F. B" `6 z/ d Q7 I
就像多年以前的我们，似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.
% t' h2 X5 z- h7 ?( h我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天，I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及
( {- g/ I; w9 y0 d: M8 l+ q那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。% Q3 K+ Z( l) j3 p/ t( V4 V% {. v2 K
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
a* M0 J! L% ]4 j昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.+ M& F# u% A5 ?- y0 G$ ]
想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.0 h8 Z# K1 [ j; P
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild. ; T$ V/ I1 S3 V& r6 `/ g3 Y$ M2 f
寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love? e2 R' p7 F9 Y4 G$ g
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
3 Y) g! T9 f) k迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
* c* e1 _$ v; i& F6 M W最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.% J- r; _: Z4 W
多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
2 k( t1 H8 c8 w3 j5 XWhy I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
6 b% ~7 I1 O- o% c2 |$ H多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
k4 x( ?, B: b3 U5 f不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.+ ]' O0 V& ~/ ]3 {' b
多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, 0 k$ c; e5 Q' R. q9 m( H
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
6 }5 N- |0 ?' \, w5 P多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!4 I1 d' _6 Y q$ m3 l! _8 E7 x
永难平息的泪
a' o3 a, g8 M6 K X3 ], X每当夜深人静时，When the quiet night comes
) b' a d& J7 M) E) v6 g! _~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
+ i% s, N* p _, m+ l% Q当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
) D! u5 p+ {. N1 A4 j让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动，
: t5 ~+ p" m# a5 B, w' e/ O2 f; p你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul " [$ Q9 |4 v* N3 i1 D) U
一抹微笑；
v c/ J4 D/ |+ G一个手势；: r/ `& ^) J* X, C
一片话语，- Z1 ~) ~8 }# S; T) G
愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、
( M- W& |8 y9 X+ }6 v5 x: F3 W! c明亮著我漆黑的角落，The moon lights the dark corner W7 `3 M! Z- S
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.. s$ U4 j, M: n: Y4 y" w
这一瞬的爱恋，The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
, C6 w) ?1 K2 R1 L8 @5 c7 g) H也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..) W: J+ h& {8 U% \: v! h. M+ i
起初，对你的出现，I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,# l) r& C- ?3 L+ X/ ^2 Q, L3 }
我并不以为然。
f* Z" M* { ]9 w$ g可随著时间的流失，but accompanying with the time passed
$ m* w. f8 |$ }1 K U8 O慢慢的不知不觉中，I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .
: s# Q* I+ `: x被一种情绪所左右，3 D" M9 Z$ F# p7 B
总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
4 w/ I; k9 {# L0 e5 x3 c即不问你是否喜欢我，Without asking you if you like me and if I like you& Z; N9 ?6 J4 g6 M
也不问我是否喜欢你，
+ s( F8 Y0 w u1 p; g4 I' v对你的存在只感到亲切，only feel gracious for your existing.
" Q& [. O6 k, }; W1 @0 n只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
* G6 n9 v3 U& T1 p9 b: ?3 q) r3每次有意无意的遇到你，every time when I meet you
, a, o8 C9 j- J, S' Y8 `2 v3 g心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil
4 \" y3 p- Y6 l$ H" V4 P s2 X然而我真真切切地知道，but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
2 m: V: ]3 U8 b. Y: d7 n' i你的身影已化成一种氛围，
# z7 b+ k9 f9 v0 @( T, X记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.- V$ z( \$ E1 G# `1 d8 `
你知道吗？Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
* N) e% W# v k# V7 M+ @随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字
, {+ n0 z5 x% D. [7 ^1 e哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud，
3 E; L! ^3 W& a. }+ T7 P一种声音，and your voice, l0 F3 H& [. y" A+ i
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
2 s% Q% G" j7 |/ A5 u5 w掺杂著幸福的感觉。
) ~8 p* Q* m& h. C与你相识的那一幕幕，the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
: {2 ]0 m# W9 l: J( {1 ^象雪花般撒落在我的心田，$ V; b! V$ w$ `6 ^
倾刻间，suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.' s4 `$ z- b U- D5 f( P! `0 x: Y4 \
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。3 G" s7 \- d+ h0 ^, u6 n1 [
你知道吗？Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss p$ K7 W# a9 ?6 `- o" V9 k
有一个能够让思念的人，, M" g/ @7 R/ N( Q6 c0 b
其实也是一种幸福。, n) d: o* Q7 M5 c1 Q. _. u' ^
尤其是在这样的日子，especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer. $ ?" @, X0 d9 l6 J, b6 \ U# ^
柔柔的海风，5 o3 z8 p. }8 n: Q! F
甜甜的夏天。
4 e3 h, z2 [4 A# H; i. k% U! @一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁，Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy 6 F( W4 S9 `: S! c2 U2 @
只是静静地等待你的身影，only waiting for you quietly.0 v" _" Q. R* x( a1 B* Q
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人，Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
8 \% J0 L1 P7 j1 B0 b) Y想和你有共同的情结，* e8 p0 b2 P+ ~& i9 L
共同的心愿。
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好想与你在细雨中漫步，I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
. u6 |: X: I4 t5 |一同感受著春雨的洒脱，and to enjoy the rain washing together. ]2 b/ U( r3 J; ~& V
或是赶著看一场电影；or rush to a film
& E1 M6 n; G' p( l9 X或是静静地聆听一首曲子，or listen to a music quietly.
& Y: ^: I3 {$ ?: E8 A6 z; a D! W『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?2 w: h3 U0 {$ `+ P; E0 K+ i* v& D
我们相拥旋舞，然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, + F4 P8 M0 h9 x
浅浅一笑，smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
: v, e4 a, A( N; X或是轻轻的一吻，
) `# g. A1 r+ T# v$ M/ z. _7 A8 A再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』
& C& _' i. e0 r/ G! _就足够了. That is enough.
2 k4 d2 Q0 Q/ v2 q6 f% X* X: p5 S这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子，Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago!
6 M+ Y; U {, q( B0 n% R0 i3 @终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根，finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
2 V* [) n( T$ Y/ K6 P萌出了芽，/ D; L ]: I7 v7 `
一如对你的思念，the same as my missing7 _+ @' g- \0 O/ g" i# p
浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
+ I( Z# z7 T" A) \; |' J# ?/ }如果，如果有一天，If , if some day I can touch of your hand! L p b* ^/ ?8 W7 H, n* ~
能够牵著你的手,
: T8 s% |+ i! x& v8 g2 }那麽，我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里，then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.9 b }( @/ b1 t" R9 Q
让你细细地触摸，Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully.
& x) m, H( x4 q C4 u( Y慢慢地细读，: A* d; E; y7 G6 l& ]% J$ }
我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
7 c' Y) L i1 J g+ U在你对我伸出手的那一瞬，At the moment you reach out your hands to me
9 D+ x: W+ a7 R8 }) N6 u' w2 `7 i我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱，then I will have all care and ardor . _5 C1 l, E! ?) |1 y" _
就让我牵一次你的手，好吗？Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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