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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
8 O" T$ \- M0 l* w8 Y; R2 R, `: J4 t,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
, @* y+ s3 u/ n+ @6 ~零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running . ) ]& Q5 H( c# R6 Y3 q6 x
现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.
& ?. i5 I- _( Y. X! S% Y" ?梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.
) g& n9 H0 N' O1 m3 K' @眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.6 X6 G9 l. G5 d/ B2 z1 Y5 h' c
夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.3 P/ f. T% c8 X% o& Y
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.* F0 N3 M8 m9 ?. h% T1 Y
就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.$ X, @ M+ g8 i" O! x2 o9 Z
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及
# k) \" s$ Y9 B那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。" B K) y7 J% }/ e& @6 |" g
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
9 r6 Z. K) f' z, c. v/ J昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
( b& y. v- j* j% a5 ^想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
, v4 B+ |5 S) \0 O1 o. h最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild. # A6 n8 ~" {3 ?5 U
寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?/ J" C1 O* T( C( Q; P
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
+ u& f4 y' Z( A1 f迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
0 J+ B, s7 S) h* f3 k最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
" J% C% O! \# K3 j% Q$ s1 r! d多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
4 |, f* G* z: uWhy I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
, N( }% Y$ f# f, X' R& }多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously2 `6 D9 m4 H# M+ e+ E5 I2 i
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
0 [. ?% e3 a2 N多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, # c/ L: @: v# N
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?' U: `: R" T, w0 ~+ f
多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!" ?4 y4 f. C" ?- Q/ Q5 n
永难平息的泪- c1 L2 }2 {; \) A
每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes, G6 s. Z3 ~7 d
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.1 x. ~; g8 H! b4 [; H5 u
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
! X' `' t7 m' g5 B7 A2 o' t让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
) b% x! @3 Z! D6 G& R你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul $ _% U) C! f9 H% m( k" g
一抹微笑;
+ ?1 `5 A( ?$ N2 B一个手势;
$ M) W6 N, x- |9 |: _: N( s% X一片话语,, E9 |$ U6 X+ k
愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、! A" J+ ~" k' i: T
明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner V! W! g$ ^& Q% L, |( R
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.. m& p' C8 F$ b1 C
这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
7 v6 ~1 e3 x, P( |1 \也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life.. R- a; v1 y4 @$ f' C8 i
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
. {8 F6 [- s' R/ f3 i我并不以为然。
% t0 D8 ^) u- t, x1 i可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed
$ u- s; R7 a3 b+ x慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .8 t3 F' {5 v# o6 o
被一种情绪所左右,
+ {% H) t0 f. j3 H% h5 d总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .1 @* q9 L7 h5 d/ W' F& s( A
即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
/ Y7 [2 g$ U& l/ ^也不问我是否喜欢你,2 L+ V8 W% V" c
对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
! o& t- F! ]& ?! ]: J只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
. K3 w. ?6 u6 X C3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you
) m, s2 Q1 Y- \ y心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil1 p% [! @( K3 f! h2 Z1 e6 T( Q" D) R
然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
1 Q# W( u% B- J0 a+ j _你的身影已化成一种氛围,9 [1 @$ |7 V, P5 W% ]
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.
% [7 O1 `% a' y( _3 ?/ w4 ~) f你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! + W2 d( H O) n( j
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字
% y4 a9 A- y: q$ ^# s# K& c哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,; V! [/ g" t4 ~: `, h1 ^9 i
一种声音,and your voice' p3 q( t [1 V
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.' M5 ?7 p+ o( U+ P9 c+ e) n
掺杂著幸福的感觉。
# k. i8 J9 ]1 C& E0 p3 z F与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land. j( ^) X9 ~7 ^, T/ _' m# T: m
象雪花般撒落在我的心田,
6 ` t* W1 c9 @- m% H倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
; A5 s! q8 c# e' u3 C纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。8 s! `5 f+ D A: b9 T C8 d- }
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss/ ~; |, L2 b! H2 O
有一个能够让思念的人,0 f7 g. x/ y0 N& n+ a
其实也是一种幸福。' e& m. z6 `" E3 m; v7 `8 l
尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
. ^) L/ p2 P& z& i ^6 B; b1 d柔柔的海风,
& c( M, [; k3 z6 r' G甜甜的夏天。: Q9 U1 a Y3 Z/ M' h& A
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
: Q1 \) x* V J5 s- j3 {3 c只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.
1 t. R) ^1 D0 K# q6 m仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.% h% g! c3 b: d+ f/ C/ T
想和你有共同的情结,+ U8 C, @" c( p! L1 z' V; {. _
共同的心愿。
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9 t3 t3 O' a, Z. G F9 D. s: Q好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
: ?5 m/ @0 R( h, ~+ L/ m一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together7 W- j2 e5 W7 J# y
或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film 5 N; ` m. z; U) G
或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.
, o5 X5 V) o( u『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
_, \. [& f5 y. @我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, ' ]& {- \* j# `" ]4 d2 L
浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
0 u3 d. g! B2 I7 L% d4 v; i: W4 o或是轻轻的一吻,1 Z6 n* K: r! {$ _! R' D
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』( R' w; K1 b: |
就足够了. That is enough.
* L) i8 |2 }$ p0 X这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago!
7 H+ h0 l, a+ b3 ^" T终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
8 q5 A w* t3 t萌出了芽,
, N. I! @" s2 g: K' j一如对你的思念,the same as my missing
: L; u1 B/ a( |9 n" b& m, p浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.' [7 A X' `* I& l
如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand
0 l' x2 r0 g0 E, ?# w能够牵著你的手,- z+ G6 d0 f1 p: Y; Y' D
那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.# l9 r" T4 z7 p1 y! u
让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. 5 t R, g& }; x( B0 P& z
慢慢地细读,
; l. }9 Y2 l+ t) f; ^8 O我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
3 b5 Y, u3 k8 e; D1 I) x在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me
- w8 a ^/ j' h8 j% N我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor
! v, y9 x; Y6 {就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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