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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了," _% r* q+ s1 W. }
,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
' U1 y# K% Q; }1 U零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
+ s7 F1 E/ {8 E# Z0 @现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.
+ ?8 r2 T8 g. d0 q/ L梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.- B0 Z8 L) q9 ~
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
7 V( O5 B7 u7 `" M6 K夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.7 @' `* {& S; U
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.. E3 v) s7 D7 E. O1 [$ h, ^. e* Y4 R% u# f
就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.
, F7 r9 i* [, s3 ?/ y+ \3 M我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及
6 B( o6 c5 a3 W那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
# g5 J1 I" N' W$ U8 t+ Y2 B! C& i* U世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
9 y# z/ ]( P& i3 |1 I昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
/ v) u$ I8 V3 H G想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up., g7 B& i5 F9 \0 N6 C* R, n1 K
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
; F7 ?' D# d8 [) o! ]" R寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?( {* ]% I. ?2 S( \9 q+ u
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.1 g9 J/ M$ P" h2 k9 N J
迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.1 [+ @! M3 i/ I/ l& s
最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.! ~0 e6 I/ \ {0 `7 _ h! _
多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?: |# D1 L* ?- W b R) o
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….& R) G- r# \# F5 n6 J! L
多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
/ L) x( q6 \5 o6 D/ y' z5 g: t不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
, i5 Q7 e6 X+ O多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, 7 q! l2 ?& `% A# a/ \
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
4 ^. P9 p8 K# d) N2 f8 G多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
/ W6 a0 e9 G" {+ |' p7 R! N" `6 V永难平息的泪
/ r j/ Q) {6 t% q$ I每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes
9 O- E) K( s/ a& l8 ^ f! d! ?! }~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
/ a3 ]9 q' ? x+ Y/ o. y. e当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.. i" N, K4 ^' d3 P- t; J& ]
让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
$ M2 ?% k* s: D& P4 P* V+ U你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
/ E5 _- R+ p3 u0 ^; O% ^: ?& x一抹微笑;1 r1 x6 ?: d2 k
一个手势;
9 v) d( W; k U+ G6 @一片话语,- t8 b. l/ L1 I ^: p/ _8 @
愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、( F& g( q$ o C" M% }
明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner. _7 w. J, H' y' m& ~- s3 t7 `
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.
5 q4 }6 c6 M* Q9 C这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling% [( u" u2 n& l n. t
也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life.." B# N/ E5 i/ u
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
+ `+ q i: C: L! s% p/ P2 a- n- P! ~我并不以为然。( v; m! y/ |" e* Z9 p% F ]7 T
可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed 2 @. k4 q) @2 b( G1 B" h4 ]
慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .
7 A# q8 r% Q. J. J3 a; E被一种情绪所左右,
0 z/ v- i1 g0 n" q8 _' v) j总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
1 m" R2 k) A: V4 @即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
; B5 a8 H* `4 n$ F1 b7 ]也不问我是否喜欢你,
* f5 t# Y1 o! M1 L+ Q对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.' G) h0 k& d$ T6 n
只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
! J1 F' J" g7 K1 w4 A/ h. Q2 a3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you
; u6 c+ j0 s$ r* D: r; L心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil
3 w, @: g6 }: u+ ?2 ~' |然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
3 A, N3 n% m e: c你的身影已化成一种氛围,
9 `. w( p$ ^* Q- [7 V记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.6 ^ V$ |0 ?% ]+ b x
你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
) ?- m2 K1 Z6 i# t z随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字
! d7 x' `1 D1 B, P, [; Y4 J哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,
2 [* u! O5 T/ r Z- h: H, C一种声音,and your voice
* D7 C- s( X8 p$ F, e1 K也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.6 s5 B0 P4 M7 N8 U
掺杂著幸福的感觉。0 X( }; o3 n/ Y4 {* l5 X+ [
与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
' D' g7 P8 B6 W5 @; L+ ^象雪花般撒落在我的心田,, N5 w! U4 e9 L- B/ _! F% s
倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.# w) V) P" o% w$ \/ j1 b
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。& z, h' }8 e" ?+ [# d2 f+ L, q
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss
9 I" i. M! ^+ p- u; Y9 a' y有一个能够让思念的人,
( n8 P3 r, |- s6 r+ T6 z其实也是一种幸福。
1 ]; f5 D& ~- \/ o尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
& a# M+ [& p, l1 d+ K柔柔的海风,
$ L( b; K8 h! V1 ^) m甜甜的夏天。. L& c$ k- T3 c( ~" M, A# d/ k; R% ^
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
1 K5 c: s; w2 s5 _' P8 T+ G只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.
, _" n, g! y5 L- }, k, O- _3 u仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
- _1 i0 k3 p: E$ ^+ ~想和你有共同的情结,+ f2 N$ a8 g0 @ p5 u
共同的心愿。
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you* _# m8 l9 J' K. {9 D1 w
一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together' Q2 I: d) I$ S' A" {6 x" a. ]# `
或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film * G! t4 ~1 f, p% D% q
或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.
& l8 t/ r8 Y- E『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
4 N1 E" A! Y* v% }7 F我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, ) _& A0 {1 G4 }4 O
浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”) s0 X- I& h+ U3 T
或是轻轻的一吻,' [2 A2 g+ {$ y- l, Q, {
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』
( D5 l: B% d" B' z就足够了. That is enough.
2 F5 Z' s; s- k* {, t这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago!
- `' ^$ m( j0 O& o1 S; F# a' Y: j9 K终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
( A$ u1 Z/ \2 b u' f0 {萌出了芽,. W+ }5 R2 s$ t7 K4 O
一如对你的思念,the same as my missing
" `" W3 J7 g( X, F浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.5 [! V9 E9 K G! c& J5 L
如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand0 P: A9 I' m' j, H
能够牵著你的手,1 m, F o0 [8 i' x/ H/ `4 N4 {: c
那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
3 Y8 Z8 Y# w8 T' z& O- g! f9 k让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. 9 K8 }) T& U7 ?# t+ D5 |6 k
慢慢地细读,: I$ Q( m" @" p, p+ {
我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. % l3 A8 G7 p7 m( g" \
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me
0 t$ C, W' x) n+ d, ]我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor
& @% U9 }# F5 E. A就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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