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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
$ i N7 q" Z- _4 U! ]' R,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
# ~! N# Z# ^" W% J# a零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running . 2 X9 i% A$ b9 c
现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.
2 a# v' d6 ~5 ]* b梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.* V; _4 q2 H# r6 Q8 M
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
2 N5 y4 q+ ?! n* t/ Q2 v s夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.* c- f" l1 c: u( P9 A6 ~- ]
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool." @. a3 R- a+ a
就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.! {( e3 m2 M% j* | T! \/ J
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及, j% P9 X, M p6 }: m
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
' y! M4 `* }* _$ b世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
7 i2 ^/ Q3 E) K6 h' y$ B昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.8 ^0 `4 O/ w- e
想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.6 d7 }% X! R# y4 L6 @) C
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
' }$ h3 G% d8 x寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?
* Y$ P$ e4 {* R2 v醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
( X- \) I O- D1 y1 Y! S迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
, K1 u2 I: A3 S' s' T& h8 U最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
: P, {3 l5 |, I/ E9 o% W. w多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul? d0 k# W* {( g! E( ?5 @' k9 x, S, r! k
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
* O7 V3 z: e: P( D1 w1 |多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
, P7 t2 [8 c1 d& }! A' x不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
( b) s. D$ F8 S6 x多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation,
" ?0 s8 e+ Q4 M3 G为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?0 E$ N$ X+ r) Q# J& y% z0 c. y
多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!5 V6 M, m' Q9 ?! E0 t
永难平息的泪3 f) i6 j/ O0 Y2 D" `9 S& Y0 U7 H
每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes
/ b5 m* l# g/ s9 M5 ]~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes. g4 v: `5 ~% Z4 C- ^
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
1 E9 \# I( w! g, o让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动, z/ d' n7 h6 ^( B" T
你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
, y" {' b0 F6 g" j; n; N5 G9 i一抹微笑;5 I% Q$ T* N& \& D0 ]* u
一个手势;: X& J, T2 `6 Q! Y. q
一片话语,0 [) {9 h: a7 N
愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、3 }" m# L& W2 `, d: ?: d- v
明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner
$ H, m9 t3 a1 ~7 D6 g7 G心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.& E! {! m9 r" [0 I
这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
( S) ^! u. d- q; Q1 o也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..
7 j5 F/ _5 F( {8 ?4 J2 J6 R8 b起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,' s6 l/ Q2 r" I4 `4 ?
我并不以为然。% y) h+ ?( e7 ]; G! D+ R! g+ O
可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed $ E j; d. \2 _! b8 U/ k% ?$ s! ]0 b
慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .
7 z# T! t: z( h7 g6 N i- m0 Q被一种情绪所左右," H0 g" ^4 O" O4 v7 j
总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
# K# N8 a* H( p' Y4 N1 u; l即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you" o7 s9 W; G( N/ @3 T
也不问我是否喜欢你,& B$ ]* a0 d( P8 R& ? q
对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
7 d7 w& t3 G" `2 C- ]只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
4 p& Q1 p, q; @$ j! U5 w& f3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you
. O$ z. i, j% `7 p心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil6 W$ w9 p. Z2 Z3 A" d
然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere . w) _2 A7 C- Q" E5 e k g
你的身影已化成一种氛围,0 L1 C5 H3 U5 B3 U9 h* s# W
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart. s3 R& y+ x, J: h' F9 ^& b
你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! 9 |" _! X$ ]1 ~) f) T
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字# Z7 Y* V; S; `! g5 [$ T+ U
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud, n9 ^$ {. C+ _
一种声音,and your voice
7 _, E3 Q7 |. V/ @: R) t) R f也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.4 n5 u w# ^$ x6 _* e
掺杂著幸福的感觉。
* p5 ?1 ~- { F' p7 @' ^$ d& {与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land {7 o" e! g$ `; ?4 j8 Q3 P! @
象雪花般撒落在我的心田,
+ o f$ w. u* a6 c6 Q倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.7 N8 [; l1 ~" }7 U, t
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。1 o' n4 e% i/ d, s" P( B
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss
) M8 }4 r& i0 d6 M有一个能够让思念的人,# c& M* B8 p- O
其实也是一种幸福。
- D% ?9 W& }) X7 _5 ^, X尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer. * d( w; f6 V; w" Z/ n4 _! d
柔柔的海风,
* d, S0 R" V6 W甜甜的夏天。$ M; c8 n1 {9 z( k) n+ j5 Z
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
( m) X6 `. P+ ?. e( @4 ?2 p4 t6 {$ A只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.
5 ^3 e3 H3 g! E2 C# X仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
1 w0 V0 k, U1 J6 r2 X想和你有共同的情结,
8 Q. U9 U5 `/ t2 {共同的心愿。
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
- ^5 k2 e; w f9 v6 D) u一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together- h5 t: m3 q7 B8 y- U
或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film
. I& e1 {( l. _2 l* N# r2 z# v或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.
9 Q# l, {6 D7 K! q8 E8 w『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
! |9 s8 O1 A' i我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
: N3 F4 H$ h1 z- E3 I浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
( Y. T4 L; Z: C m或是轻轻的一吻,
: s. I+ ] \/ V0 d再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』$ g: T8 c! R* y9 B- Y
就足够了. That is enough.. t( q+ ] t( {- N7 X7 H- ]
这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago!
9 Z, Z" y' X N# N% W9 h+ d# I终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.% `/ P% [, M: N3 |! w% K
萌出了芽,2 e; r/ c, s& A h0 J) M
一如对你的思念,the same as my missing
. F6 W: t6 A# u浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
0 D- o4 q. v4 q% U% [, a7 T0 n如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand
& `- I; w/ ]7 R能够牵著你的手,
1 j; n T( q, o: D那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
- i/ e+ M r. ^( l+ \让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. - b( ?6 v5 c: M
慢慢地细读,
$ P, C4 v' \6 [+ R0 g我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. 9 d$ y: n2 U: m3 i9 b
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me % m: V- |0 K3 }% v2 `/ i7 j; S5 G
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor W6 w8 W& r0 P$ N5 D4 O1 N
就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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