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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
- X: Q: Y: c6 e2 W& G,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
- D0 k7 Z& h1 K# k/ W零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
/ X* f3 K4 {! v4 m现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.; h* O/ v$ g) G* Q; l
梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.
/ _: M* U6 Z& G5 ?眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.0 @+ `$ m& E$ j% C8 G5 U
夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.4 M9 z5 O. a4 H# Y, ?
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
8 ]' ^7 w( K5 Q( h7 J就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.
4 {5 W( n) p& |% t: H1 O& i |我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及
# G9 Y1 ?0 M* A4 X9 i0 T* _% X那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。5 D/ d E* \+ O4 O
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
6 z# }, T/ c. m! I" w8 D昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
# k' N1 J2 e) p, @% C% ~- R想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.7 b9 u; j% a0 ~, X5 W
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
; N0 q& P& f5 v& f( H5 i7 |寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?
/ {9 W- Q' K' R- F. O醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
% @6 B5 }2 x3 I4 n+ D; ?迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
" A: [$ T( ]! I5 ]8 R4 J" s1 S1 }4 E最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
" ] D" p% _# o多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
; ~$ U# d! ^: X8 V* E2 yWhy I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
% v/ A% F' O, M/ A多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
. x- |9 q5 w7 y- U不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
. v; E0 s0 O5 |% n8 M多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, , w% F( _# F9 \3 W* M
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?" {, T9 v, z8 R7 r3 }
多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
8 z2 H! N z! W8 U! T0 A永难平息的泪
; f9 s' L% @: X9 m每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes- ^1 J, f& @5 ?2 z! I4 z3 v& B
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.% V" b( T1 ~: u6 f
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.% |7 x, N, U% `6 S4 `3 m/ m
让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,' y" |7 n3 ~3 W) a& |
你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
: h) M1 Z" g1 B. v- V一抹微笑;, [ g O6 {0 Z: k
一个手势;( W9 H2 {5 W& [
一片话语," \0 f5 i) Y4 }
愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、, z+ w2 u* o& A% z( y0 r1 }
明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner1 M9 Y) ^2 b1 p0 }* K7 L
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.: n8 u8 Y' G& |0 n4 O
这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
: A' J" F! f3 E [+ B也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life../ D: R) }+ T2 X. [. J7 v
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,# h; i* m8 l4 V: C0 x
我并不以为然。/ m) C2 f. T8 I; l; G4 l
可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed + \# s9 T( Y3 |+ ]' n
慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .
, v2 g$ k% s# D( R被一种情绪所左右,
b! M; p8 |! ]/ O: f1 T. X总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly ./ R1 Z& N. L. e3 A, a
即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you6 i( y7 f x( t5 t. E+ Y
也不问我是否喜欢你,0 k" n- l& w# [" d2 \
对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing." u6 L {* K- K, E; B% R! u
只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you |/ |" [+ L. ?) q, b/ O- l7 P' ~
3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you
; k0 V; @# }, y- _ l) p/ @3 W心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil0 S2 J" M0 t$ c6 ?: R* |7 w* F
然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
5 V. x6 q9 T$ Z& [你的身影已化成一种氛围,# E% S5 E3 v7 T5 t: J( G: g
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.
! }( Y' T* z+ m" ]5 q- Y& b你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
6 K7 d3 E$ {0 e+ n随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字$ H: A, H5 s9 \: }' h3 ^! |
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,
1 V$ B# V: ^' a7 J一种声音,and your voice0 I: J) }: g- z l6 ]8 s/ k
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.' {* t+ A0 {/ [8 f% i7 l
掺杂著幸福的感觉。
1 d! K# n8 h& G+ U6 ~- B3 k与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land5 X4 c% Y+ S/ A* ~* V
象雪花般撒落在我的心田,
, t) r: I- A4 w. Y倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
5 z- Z) c$ _( Q; G+ p: k纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。2 K6 g) B8 H: \4 s. ]9 V
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss+ Y* Q- z3 h' @1 e
有一个能够让思念的人,7 L8 j! {3 ~# l7 L
其实也是一种幸福。
8 P( C9 e9 a- _ S: q2 ?尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
: g; W. `: p, b o0 @/ T柔柔的海风,
$ w3 \! v" K$ p7 s5 g4 Q4 l2 `; @ B. h$ F甜甜的夏天。
* p% l" g1 |3 D/ z一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
y1 R" S8 L- d& D4 U" x只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.
! X5 o8 b2 ?( I9 R仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.! {5 h, O6 A! R0 l
想和你有共同的情结,% g( S7 M( h% R) |- ]0 J; A
共同的心愿。
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you) B/ o6 J- v2 k) a1 ]5 ^; u
一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together, a Q- U; @# z# [7 p1 J
或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film
( P7 [+ w6 F% ?# U3 B7 M! Y或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.
2 E4 _4 ~) u3 P9 I+ t0 F0 s『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?/ C) z$ B6 [, K- @2 s, A/ M
我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, ; Z% ~7 d9 a& V, B# a
浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
% p2 i7 I1 l/ G3 e- u: B b2 {或是轻轻的一吻, o( |- l5 d0 J3 a# T0 i3 N) p
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』5 H* o2 l( K/ q ?% V# N0 m
就足够了. That is enough.
E; K9 P X- v; v这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! 9 ]1 J5 C5 k" _. o6 B+ a9 ^
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
. l' l7 Z) x7 _+ S/ B! P6 T萌出了芽,
4 Q. y& W1 ]; q一如对你的思念,the same as my missing8 W0 D0 ~2 J; c0 I0 x# ?9 i
浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
2 B( ^; k, n* _% U如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand
# {# k6 `' q- X能够牵著你的手,; p* q! e) \& M; X/ ]. [
那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.* v3 i3 p% O2 r. D4 `) p
让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully.
: H- ~8 v( e$ \ _0 t, W6 S慢慢地细读,; _, g% [, y7 u- S! C' j
我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
3 Y6 ]6 f8 L2 K6 B& d1 i3 c在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me 4 W3 m9 |! J7 J- C
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor
8 Z: |, |8 m; D7 a- j0 W! j就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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