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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,0 E& q1 K A2 w9 i6 k6 R
,.清晨，急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry. ; R% a: ~( O0 ^7 v
零星树叶的飘落，松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running . , Q# B/ ^/ _8 c. I1 v1 [5 C( E
现在的我，一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.
/ P: b6 i; z) x% \梳相同的发型，背同样的背囊，不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.% ?) I: t A% E8 K
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽，又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
+ u5 n% o5 m! B D0 ]: i' G+ h: Y夏天过得那麽快，我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.1 Y) N) k( I5 J
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉，追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
\ G1 g7 ]' f+ ]1 j1 G4 R: J就像多年以前的我们，似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.3 Y: k$ @0 W) @" g) g
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天，I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及
" E, i ?) {$ q! O- R/ \1 d那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
/ B) b; i o+ p- a+ b9 j% p( @" w世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
+ }! E' X1 T: q' T昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
: U: F5 f6 S' \想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up." U" o6 s* N6 K$ _/ J
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
! J3 E( A) Q8 e) Y- v: U# b: T寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?
1 g. f" y6 |4 s% [& @# [醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
; R7 U0 K9 v) z* [迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.% j; i B5 ^3 V$ o8 G2 n) h. E
最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
# G, W4 {+ N' C d4 E( g3 c多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?3 s# J5 f9 W6 k
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
# g# p& i, Q+ a4 q. G$ \/ n多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
! U& j- u" n% s4 ` P. a6 K不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
8 S5 r/ ^9 |" \* R2 u& H: z多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, 0 O2 t+ a" @% d
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
- \, B* v3 ~9 Q6 F多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!6 d) }( Q" c4 `+ R- W2 {$ b @/ p# `
永难平息的泪
% w8 }2 }& P5 w3 N7 E* }. P5 [4 y8 N每当夜深人静时，When the quiet night comes
9 G) k# E0 \. S2 Q% O! F~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
) J; G% a( k6 p! O2 U! G& B当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
: l2 T$ g! ]& o! @让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动，) o7 K6 L9 s+ I s) m& b5 b
你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
5 `, W, _( [: J5 R7 C一抹微笑；0 N' ~; V$ J P2 H1 X. [0 \
一个手势；
* l0 ]! y+ w" Q, D t' w S# F! Q一片话语，
H1 K4 a8 J$ x, m; c愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、
& E9 V1 J! k) L- o明亮著我漆黑的角落，The moon lights the dark corner% L* w. x# V* k% [
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.7 G) a0 M* X( b0 f2 [" Q& ^0 m% c/ D
这一瞬的爱恋，The deeply attached to you in a twinkling( X5 ]4 u, W4 |6 T8 s& m0 s
也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..
) Y6 T2 l" s3 Z5 _0 f0 |起初，对你的出现，I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
" u) @- D2 u a5 H8 [我并不以为然。; Q" M! ]" I8 F2 e2 [6 b! m; c
可随著时间的流失，but accompanying with the time passed
) n2 y+ D+ N3 T# l慢慢的不知不觉中，I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .( Q' a9 B4 V9 l# D
被一种情绪所左右，
, @/ b, t7 s0 D$ W总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
" o% N3 O% _% ?. h9 w8 h. Y即不问你是否喜欢我，Without asking you if you like me and if I like you/ P* N6 V" C Y
也不问我是否喜欢你，
: B9 H; w- B/ n9 Y对你的存在只感到亲切，only feel gracious for your existing. Y/ c) d! M8 d- `
只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you/ G- n! G% M3 V
3每次有意无意的遇到你，every time when I meet you
) z2 p ~, T \6 u# ~$ |心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil# V1 \2 g2 Z; n- B$ T: c5 z6 ^
然而我真真切切地知道，but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
, C7 r9 a/ n# X% [% |, @* s你的身影已化成一种氛围，5 I) \8 d' A& S ?
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.
5 ]7 C4 T) K+ ]: ~" Z你知道吗？Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
8 a0 D8 d- s( J$ r8 r$ a0 a$ C) b随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字
+ g% r5 n5 a8 b6 R0 y, }! t2 A! S哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud，2 ^) b. e' k: n; I* J
一种声音，and your voice
/ {( } s& g( b7 S也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
d" y7 d2 z F+ Q0 s! @5 v掺杂著幸福的感觉。# a }3 ]& h' x
与你相识的那一幕幕，the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land; X* S5 u9 I1 K4 O5 R' {- X
象雪花般撒落在我的心田， f2 d/ x% d/ |0 [/ N/ b, D
倾刻间，suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
1 {1 _) g5 w6 k i纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。
! M5 G+ s; D( ^' e你知道吗？Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss
) i4 C7 W3 K0 U `% m有一个能够让思念的人，
X* N! E0 x( x. D* I0 g( V其实也是一种幸福。
* s# X. K: n2 S, i. d o( l尤其是在这样的日子，especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer. 0 o4 Q9 b2 P$ B* y) z2 P
柔柔的海风，
5 N. B/ h$ Q! e, I甜甜的夏天。
& z. {6 ?0 O5 t( A/ y一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁，Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
0 V/ i. Q) i7 k5 j( F只是静静地等待你的身影，only waiting for you quietly.; ?$ Z, a6 F/ o6 \9 l x
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人，Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
9 j- g9 y% i+ D7 p% s( z想和你有共同的情结，
+ ^: U; d0 j% c共同的心愿。
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- g8 O2 ^1 x7 j8 ~好想与你在细雨中漫步，I really want to ramble in the small rain with you/ B( d I ?- g0 a% M0 c8 v" z
一同感受著春雨的洒脱，and to enjoy the rain washing together! C8 q' C0 n, D" {; O
或是赶著看一场电影；or rush to a film
' m' J6 ~' ^6 n% u- p: Z或是静静地聆听一首曲子，or listen to a music quietly.& i9 v6 d; M& s8 B. V( j1 N5 `6 l
『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?0 L/ r/ {5 c2 S% H1 X: k
我们相拥旋舞，然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, 2 m! ?- M! {- d+ t, u7 ? F, H, c
浅浅一笑，smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
& Q: A' u w0 J, f$ N7 K& g或是轻轻的一吻，
$ b) F. y# E; o8 G" d再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』7 _% ~- E0 X! G# u, s6 ]
就足够了. That is enough.
5 [1 }/ i+ L' s4 N, o+ |这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子，Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! ! d+ g/ ~4 b9 T! ?1 m
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根，finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.& Y) q8 A8 k; w
萌出了芽，1 N% s0 Y1 H, |' a+ V: \% M3 m
一如对你的思念，the same as my missing, L1 i) B q z1 L9 L
浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
' n) N7 e2 C: t& w如果，如果有一天，If , if some day I can touch of your hand3 }5 x7 T6 c* H! T
能够牵著你的手,0 B- ^ P' h& p, \# s1 E
那麽，我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里，then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.- T9 b" X- W1 b7 D' O4 {6 Y6 d
让你细细地触摸，Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. % T. `9 B) ^6 O
慢慢地细读，8 `1 V# r+ g" a8 K' _
我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. q6 C& I% M' w. q
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬，At the moment you reach out your hands to me
6 }" n. j' _- p4 s3 y1 t: J我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱，then I will have all care and ardor ' p$ G; ]1 y1 M) J! e& r- a$ Y
就让我牵一次你的手，好吗？Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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