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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
1 D0 G+ C, E5 j/ A' F2 J0 y) p,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry. $ |1 Q: E1 H; T6 m# c% ?6 t- N
零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
0 |3 [7 S c( z9 Z3 y4 h/ ^现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.% {3 p1 g, Y$ r4 |6 i; m: P
梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.% ]4 o7 b9 q6 ~# Z" l7 h7 u6 O
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
% b" r; ]8 O( W" `" `9 r8 \夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.
8 P% n L6 \; C3 R+ c9 s& J) C7 w, Y猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
3 E/ R& f' O ?" `; w就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.8 }6 u" n" c& i$ P
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及6 M( W0 i" P, h' x h: ?* d
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。, v6 X7 X5 C' s. q+ N
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.+ E4 D4 g9 j3 }! \- T9 v
昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.) S+ f6 y* l3 U
想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
7 J3 _7 v/ I7 O/ q/ s: o) V- V( F S最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild. : r+ x6 F' P- A, E3 w
寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?
6 o2 R! ^( L; f% M5 i% _. m醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
* N, m( j/ k1 b迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
, q9 B* A0 L' x, f7 W8 Y最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
% X! D5 a, K9 j* U% o& P多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
* X" p, y( W, G: s( @' K" wWhy I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
& P( T: g# {# d% a: B多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously, E; D! G. a. D' I
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
7 t# q8 F# `+ C" ^2 p多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, ' c7 I: L2 j0 _( t1 J3 r* ^- n8 \' _
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
& w9 M+ R1 F/ T K多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!( k* E) n6 T6 I: n) R+ w0 M) K
永难平息的泪
7 C% ^7 I/ Z0 B每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes- ?& ]' K4 R, R8 _7 |
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
" s' Z \ ]$ g. A当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
! @: J* d+ \/ _) x让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,% g1 } T8 w0 ]( u
你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul " T O" e b0 `) P
一抹微笑;& o7 \% d# n( O% S6 l/ T# ^+ ?2 A/ j7 l
一个手势;- A6 ~! I$ l" o
一片话语,
: x3 F% j) O H- t9 Y0 J0 T, B愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、4 T/ K. A( u% R& p- V, y
明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner( Y) z5 b& l' p" g1 F7 D
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.1 f' l% X. g* @- [2 K
这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling4 r: T9 R; `: S* Y7 r
也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life.., o% ]" {" V% ^* y, H1 w
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
8 m7 ]- l5 d8 c2 I! w4 I- ~( U( l我并不以为然。; E9 d" ?! A; N% F: K
可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed
- m9 j2 t1 A% J4 l% J慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .; j/ F- E" F! V# Y
被一种情绪所左右,; ^# b& R+ z% @( i' {
总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
& u- ?3 @8 h7 f5 \即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you- k5 Z! G& q( N) p! u# g
也不问我是否喜欢你,
" u" W9 E5 K$ H. w4 \对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
1 j5 _ Q: c& ^ s) o1 w只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
8 ]% b0 n1 {4 O2 m4 v3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you
. d& x. g. u* `1 h! Q; J* B! {6 V心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil' E2 L% X% E7 P) i# u2 I. R8 E
然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
& h7 G; [& i$ X) t& O你的身影已化成一种氛围,
3 L9 _( x$ x4 G8 r0 y" O; E记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.
; e4 B7 g: ?: d# h5 ?5 ~% }& {# r' D你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! - U r! j: U7 J6 U
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字
& @ }0 V* t c2 Q哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,1 U1 G2 S, S8 U, t+ h: s
一种声音,and your voice
) J. a4 T/ f( }' b也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
4 b1 `* x1 \* r2 m' F9 i" d掺杂著幸福的感觉。
' r: I3 I3 I& Y& b# k+ L与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land; M4 z/ Q3 L- _ ]0 D" V
象雪花般撒落在我的心田,
: M3 y; s, f8 ^/ F# x( k倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
" b9 ~: l$ l) K# K* q) f纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。
9 l! s4 h6 |; ~% @* k) {6 B你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss% ~1 `# r* M- i7 G9 ~6 h' e
有一个能够让思念的人,
$ @! t/ A# Z- T9 D* ` ]其实也是一种幸福。9 k% a; ?* Q- A3 F6 N
尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
$ N# S- D( y% }, ^+ a/ |* ^柔柔的海风,
; X: d) j- Z' R! r' X$ R S甜甜的夏天。
# r/ D$ ^' D. Q一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy : i' m; t% ?2 V( r* {& M
只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.
9 H6 @( \7 G9 o. j, U" K仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
8 I k7 o6 H+ W- P' |0 \想和你有共同的情结,% k: M% z9 m! Z. y* R
共同的心愿。
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
! C% F2 b1 u) I [7 I一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together
: ~( Z& f: d4 O; b$ c, ?或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film
- ~9 m1 U1 k) X或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.! @+ r2 r& m; K( d; X- X! F) ?& L( ?3 M
『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?4 x; W; `$ _5 k& s
我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, + D9 p$ W c/ ^% f( l& ~
浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”4 o/ i2 V: F6 R
或是轻轻的一吻,6 i+ P. l! p$ i( w* q) u1 f
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』
6 @& B2 c+ [( g* g% F, G就足够了. That is enough.( B& _) c& ^8 ?& Q" q* W+ X: N" [
这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago!
3 ~' d P7 z6 K! k& }* u' W终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
9 C4 B A. f t4 H萌出了芽,
* ?) `; i, e0 N4 ?( u% G! f! F一如对你的思念,the same as my missing
, n" U) r6 ?2 I" x( ~浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
1 G' _- X2 _! P! K1 `0 H; ~, _如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand1 i( G" g2 @6 J# w0 R# w& q* f
能够牵著你的手,
5 p9 c7 ^# N" s那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
7 a' e6 |: H# v- z8 c. a, a让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully.
6 ?( A8 G* f; U慢慢地细读,& u# r0 w: n1 K' s
我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
2 x7 ^1 `' ^. m& ]- u在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me 0 ]' r( b) h. B- z0 C# r
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor : b- i @/ O: T8 l! J
就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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