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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
! S- B" Q+ N; c, W,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry. $ _) E, I, Z+ i9 Y, g
零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
2 H* U0 `1 Y- z现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.
: a% y2 H" v! g; | N7 n梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.) `) s; Y) a; s1 r
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
, P5 i0 e) @% D3 a- |6 C夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.
6 _- ^. z& ~) m3 S- ^) _$ ^# X猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
- e% V0 D9 f& @! l; Z( A0 H9 @6 n8 k就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence." b% h" q' a3 \4 x, r% c+ F9 P
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及
U3 }( E+ c% K1 U$ B那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。# X6 i! A: }( Z' X7 l* I
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.) _& }+ q8 D! C# q4 I
昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
R, m1 [2 }$ K, ^想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.7 D% l+ T F: `1 H# Z. b3 h
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
5 s- d1 Z& N* F; P9 l寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?
! p5 Z5 T- D ]3 q" _% G! v醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.; c: S2 B0 A( z8 R- _
迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
; z4 D, N& e5 P% A; a* D: H最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.1 v: X* m$ X/ L' s" \ z+ @& s
多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
5 N# f4 b# y; JWhy I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….) P7 k3 @4 p3 T O- v
多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously8 [. K3 a' m& V
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
" j/ \6 R; ~/ A( _# P" L4 g. F多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, # y" h' v- s" P& V( {
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
9 P z9 p u: P* { E9 I" N多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
7 `; V; j! Q7 U" u1 b+ N永难平息的泪
* \6 T: ?, X& o+ Y7 n每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes* g- R, A# L( _& W
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
5 e: U& w, P: e7 b) w" W# P% f当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
# S" c ^# }# e4 ~让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
+ [0 z9 I. n1 o: _' s8 k5 I你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul 3 v2 }) F9 R; ?! n# U* \8 B
一抹微笑;
5 }7 j+ ]$ G7 R* ?. M一个手势;, a$ M% y7 X0 G" Q4 O2 H9 t
一片话语,/ A2 A* d# v: _
愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、9 c3 R8 w4 \3 Q, Y' I
明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner3 A9 `4 o% T: Q1 p# S2 f& A, Z4 }
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.
2 H+ J! _7 b4 Y: O% V: c3 i" E这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
7 i1 W/ _1 g/ j% R: ?) c: n: |& d也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..4 d) \% d; V/ d2 Y( S8 U9 X! z& v
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,- |; S9 {1 P% }. c9 A& A
我并不以为然。
; F3 }3 {3 s# _+ b4 x- ]可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed 5 C* M) n" M; s# @
慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .
/ g" M6 F, @4 P( @被一种情绪所左右,
/ Y7 J, Y2 @/ J3 r总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
F$ L; D( r2 D: `5 F+ @# }即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
. ~/ y* D0 s4 d也不问我是否喜欢你,4 c; [) g. k1 B$ ]2 q
对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
& A: T" ~! W- K3 M* h只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you3 W) m0 X$ l- o6 n
3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you& ^$ d8 l4 i8 k
心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil
3 F' J( Y" b) w& R& F然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
/ c2 f4 ?; x1 [; \8 n* j你的身影已化成一种氛围,' y, Z" y/ K7 K/ `; ?
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.0 P/ W) b7 X) h q3 V$ e4 h
你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! ! ~& z3 p* {/ d4 Y5 G" s) d
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字5 b0 U& p6 m9 L# X. K
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,- b9 p9 H H, Y7 W8 t% E/ V
一种声音,and your voice
* m6 y. x5 ^$ C. H' j- d# ?也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.( n# ~1 S B' D9 y6 T! |. [
掺杂著幸福的感觉。
. D& [( `. K0 w$ G. Y6 g/ W0 P; t4 G3 ]与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land& D+ r. w; ], k# R+ S$ ?
象雪花般撒落在我的心田,5 @& Y/ S. ]3 t9 @1 o: u9 s
倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.& f1 \) j, ^2 k5 g: d
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。
7 U Z6 f6 [5 I! y4 I你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss# z( C1 y% w' A5 w0 R( n2 B
有一个能够让思念的人,
" a$ s+ E- Q% u4 C7 B! m8 M其实也是一种幸福。
3 s3 p4 q6 G6 O. O8 D尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
! Y& a* T& f3 {. _0 }柔柔的海风,
- N' o3 \0 }; Q9 V$ j- p7 Y甜甜的夏天。
* w3 v; S6 t, p# W+ d一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy ) E8 |! \" D( d, A) |# N
只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.
4 W; S# {( O+ a# n& d: l仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
% N8 D+ C+ w9 |想和你有共同的情结,
# Z, D1 a5 Q; V共同的心愿。
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, d3 @% ?: B; C# B3 D0 S [好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
3 _" t, Z2 d& b% f% p一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together
' ]$ ^$ w: F* x+ U" X6 w或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film 2 n( z/ Y1 a8 r" `& `& i( l
或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.' j. W5 y9 `9 O) y$ s$ Y
『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?6 u. ^, r" B$ ~0 T5 e6 k
我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, 4 d- X; h% E$ g. A# d& J) |3 M
浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
8 \9 [! H. g ?% e或是轻轻的一吻,
T4 _# x) D& O1 w再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』" r! O$ z/ [/ c5 y: x; W! F B# N: E% H+ C
就足够了. That is enough.
0 W0 V( B; l, ^2 |, C这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago!
- }1 V) {4 z6 T7 ?, T, e终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
" M" h0 c _+ ?萌出了芽, E5 C) K% l4 j) k
一如对你的思念,the same as my missing
/ q) l! a7 r, \+ }" `( p! L, M浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
" d% G. G! |2 l- ]# a' t% u; @, M1 b如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand6 Z' f6 g8 z0 p7 W A. B
能够牵著你的手,4 U8 U$ _4 E" {, H y8 [
那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.3 a) _" Y. c( ?; @5 i) ~' h
让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully.
d5 g2 A8 m- g3 Q% b( n* ~慢慢地细读,0 K4 M- f$ r; ?$ K. f6 X
我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
3 r4 N& e2 H7 C7 @4 y& g3 u2 T& u在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me , m& y- e' G3 g+ P
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor 6 P3 o- F, V+ }* L+ C- _/ W
就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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