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每当说一句汉语的时候,我总在心里想英语是怎么说的.尤其看到汉语诗歌的时候,我突然想,翻译成英语还能保留原来的意思吗?所以试着译一译.
. g- T7 N. M' M6 f& Q前边发了译文以后才发现有些大小写和语法错误.一点一点地改,很乱.所以再重新发一便:
) `5 F. K+ p2 V, ^' wEarly morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.2 M8 |, k$ b) b5 v' Y" @ ^
Partial leaves fall down everywhere,squirrels are busily running.! J1 A4 Q8 `' a5 j% S5 u+ g
Current I, the same as one tear ago, the same given name, and the same family name.
A: A: |2 H* [: lThe same hairstyle,the same bag,reserved laughing and talking.: O |' _' t/ p7 Q
Seemly added something in my eyes,or lacked something.7 W# M( \" ?* C; _4 O, C% g
Summer went so fast that I almost forgot those sweating night:/ T! y, n2 q% B! d
Cats often played at the whole hot night outside windows to get cool 9 ^; [* j5 \, O: l
like us many years ago,mindless self indulgence.
: l& w2 a+ b+ [, A, I ~I often cherish the memory happened in summer and those people that make me raint even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming.
: V; V, Z( n( j( `. F" H' hThe emotion and the carma only is a dream.; H" {& t' o5 p+ i4 o$ ^
That shoudn`t happen to meet each other last tenderlt night." j t- O# e$ B
I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
. {% E/ E6 u( q: aI am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
6 [' z5 ^9 W2 R: U) t+ W2 L% KIn this lonely world whom I can step inside love to?9 U' c8 `8 m' M
Intoxicated then feel cold,
; K% K# g1 y0 f% W" ?the labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
: I3 m: D# ~/ ]4 oI am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
# J {# L" v" k+ }The amorous man to whom you gave your soul?
, W$ v4 v2 E9 ?: B e1 E8 aWhy I am always hoodwinked!
' `2 r, s% |- R: k+ \# LI have told myself many times cautiously
$ F K/ B0 \3 i2 }0 ~7 ?don`t fall into the spoony whirligig./ k$ W- N, ~9 ~* w% v: g5 O! k Y# _
The amorous women always get drunk by desolation.
3 f. t/ p. ^' k! N# [5 h$ ]; W+ ~Why can`t I take it easy?& D7 n% Y% E) Z/ }
How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity! W2 u( @0 S" e" x! |6 D
When the quiet night comes; F5 }" {( ?3 q; U
your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.) Z. |: k5 N3 m, R% L1 L( T- N, t: h
The greeting when you met me made my heart in touched unaccountably.
( S! t# ^7 z, d$ t8 W' }Yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul,9 Y2 `3 d. u# [
light the dark corner in my mind., Q5 Y: N8 Z: g% b* A( a" c. D
I feel a bit of cozy.# I. P6 i/ l D9 {8 C
The deep attached to you in a twinkling; e& A3 {/ O# a* O' z6 W4 J
maybe is the most light spot in my whole life.
" p2 w" n6 g) XI didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
4 P8 T3 s2 u' _but accompanying with the time passed
8 T; L, K! A' I* j8 TI am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion,5 o& A# C. I9 R7 W, J P" j
always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly.- F+ Q, _' J4 |1 [* ^
Without asking if you like me or if I like you/ |- N4 w5 q+ H$ ?/ w
only feel gracious for your existing,) F& S9 M ?/ z% x
onlt want to do something for you., x4 _$ m' z. L- [' Y
Every time when you meet me6 s* H- }0 f+ D2 n8 y' e. v
the sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil,
4 c& r7 ~/ z/ [! |* p: Ebut I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere+ q; z/ I+ s% K
That live in my heart.
- Z- e* l, A1 W- {: ?5 oDo you know your name can suddenly come into mu mind at anytime?
0 o. {3 y. {; ]Even only your flying clothes` corner when you turn around, and your voice
0 {+ s& i3 h& q o: q- @4 y& [! mmake me gently distraught with happy feeling.$ H, c" V% u" a4 m+ X; ~
The scene that met you prinkle in my heart like snow on the land
, \7 _/ P( Q( z: f+ ]3 Zsuddenly flurry that all are the love to you.* k& _4 f* \8 P$ [0 O' X! z& H, e
Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss,
- E# F7 K. K1 ^2 `especially on the day, the gentle sea breeze and the sweet summer.; a$ {" h8 z: t! X
Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
( z7 W' L0 \1 t9 X5 Ionly waiting for you quietly
% @$ T1 y, F2 ijust let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.; [; c1 v" I: c9 {/ d$ V
I really want to ramble in the small rain with you 0 d5 G) g: _* E
and enjoy the rain washing together' ]7 O9 i! ?3 d; m- n
or rush to a film
- r/ k$ ]9 M* Gor listen to a music quietly.
; e8 i4 o3 U' O7 q1 ^Whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
+ z% J, m4 Z: M! r' gIf we embrace ,dance,and gaze to each other,: R- C) Z, l9 g4 T) A- v2 u
smile or gently kiss then say: I really love you".
! O9 y1 \* `$ o) e: WThat is enough.
2 S( S U9 i) s- K8 ^Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago,
) a }9 \( b7 t0 m) \. x, m$ lfinely it deeply rooted into the earth in the season and sprout,3 k. ^/ }4 Z; g2 y9 D. R
the same as my missing." ]9 b3 ^2 k3 q1 S @0 i$ p
It comes a little bit of verdure.
0 z* k, U; Z# T, J( QIf, If some day I can touch your hand,
& @8 k: z4 J7 X3 H" {then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.0 ^" l' w: S& Y- c1 V
Let you touch me gently and read me carefully.
) ?; ^# W) i2 I# l! b) X; E/ oI will enjoy your mild emotion through your hands with my heart and soul.
: I. M5 w( ^# D7 u& [) C* mAt the moment you reach out your hands to me ,( g, Z/ b/ s4 d! s( U
then I will have all care and ardor.$ g0 R" U. o. E, G3 B# X' t1 [9 X
Shall we walk arm in arm?0 S2 Q" e* ?8 W2 r t+ [ |" [4 v
呵,太晚了,连检查都不想检查一下,有没有打字错误了. |
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