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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,3 J2 T$ s: o! A8 O
,.清晨，急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
* ?# O9 Q- E- Y9 I零星树叶的飘落，松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
$ e; \: k7 N/ Q现在的我，一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.4 J- B' L. k& D# z* n$ ~% `
梳相同的发型，背同样的背囊，不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking. y X3 C9 ~; j, w
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽，又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.0 w& K1 y! B, n$ V
夏天过得那麽快，我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.+ z: L- q, j! m; u# }
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉，追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
$ C" S/ u) c/ [3 W3 l6 g' Q6 O9 b就像多年以前的我们，似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.
6 w( ~8 D: m% p5 B我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天，I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及' ^. G- I' o1 t" u
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。+ w2 ^2 S' Q: F
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
! u- `* x* l. I2 A; r2 i; g昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.( f+ L- O$ R6 c" b
想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up., Z2 b4 e: M3 H
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
" n1 U0 a8 n8 T* i+ m% b7 f寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?
; ]& o" D- p' E/ S7 {: R& |醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
) i0 D' j6 M* H: L3 C迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
3 x2 B `4 \" ~( O5 _2 f最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
2 b' U7 M! A$ _; u) M. O! m多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?; L5 ^: G5 ^, ?4 V
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' …." u* ^ z/ O( l( k. N
多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
. I j, t8 |7 l- m3 x不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.4 v+ K( G6 d9 @# f1 N6 J$ b
多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, 2 w+ o/ ]* {% X; [1 O! O
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
& n2 f8 |1 V+ N9 |! N) b多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
# ^) N" m5 w* `永难平息的泪) ]6 ~8 h$ ?+ |, |6 q- Z3 z& X
每当夜深人静时，When the quiet night comes
8 p' @7 T) z, `1 Y y9 ~ m$ j~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
9 K. A' S: e9 H2 r当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
- X: T) O; S6 S0 ~7 H# b让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动，
8 {" x# I, X- h你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
: s# r2 u0 C0 Z6 i6 K一抹微笑；
F( G+ A1 X& e: y一个手势；
- N; J) v# p6 w' |1 {+ X一片话语，1 _' X! t5 F. j0 f
愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、
4 K* x* s$ u. G: H, p! x @0 p明亮著我漆黑的角落，The moon lights the dark corner0 b! v, E0 P# U6 X6 d
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.: z% R& h+ W: h& a
这一瞬的爱恋，The deeply attached to you in a twinkling- p- g# H; n- r) c' h ~
也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..# C) F! u$ T" h( a5 Q
起初，对你的出现，I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,. S; T. s3 k. @# O/ |9 _1 M
我并不以为然。
) m. u+ H- Q9 G" A+ ?可随著时间的流失，but accompanying with the time passed
5 d& v. P7 w. l7 I慢慢的不知不觉中，I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion ., G2 K. k" J5 |) M: s" f
被一种情绪所左右，
. L! y* S1 r$ ^5 ^0 M总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
a* E6 N4 O, E# R2 A" @# L即不问你是否喜欢我，Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
+ Y4 R% R+ I- m. C也不问我是否喜欢你，
) e) V+ B; L0 s( F/ c2 J, X! d对你的存在只感到亲切，only feel gracious for your existing.# o4 }+ J. F8 c
只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you: H% P2 g6 E8 t' i# U( W! \
3每次有意无意的遇到你，every time when I meet you# g! T9 ]# a5 ^* b' L0 K/ I
心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil
" D1 |; `1 X/ `2 E/ c! ~4 q3 {然而我真真切切地知道，but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere 1 y; g& \" s: P" }0 r
你的身影已化成一种氛围，$ H) k/ q* B% L* [0 j/ B
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.) i; ]0 |) n4 | _
你知道吗？Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
/ \! [! a9 B! t0 Y; E随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字8 `' a2 S* C# a/ p1 P( _5 O
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud，% P1 X3 K+ `% D5 W( { e
一种声音，and your voice# k/ ]' Z3 f0 R- F9 Y W
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
/ |9 e) Y+ H. ~( S掺杂著幸福的感觉。
4 u, h2 L9 ^' F2 |0 p与你相识的那一幕幕，the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
7 g* Y/ D' W0 D) B象雪花般撒落在我的心田，* |: U6 f. z/ m0 L
倾刻间，suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.; A/ r& x: \( d5 t9 y& o, r
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。) s9 b5 a, ^" W7 U5 Q9 t1 ]
你知道吗？Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss, u7 r' ~+ R8 I9 [- J2 o3 ^
有一个能够让思念的人，2 [$ a! h" ]# j6 T
其实也是一种幸福。
5 A# i2 o: O' ~; Y尤其是在这样的日子，especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
0 I4 |4 u0 K+ H# ?, i4 G4 z' X柔柔的海风，4 u# L6 f8 N; L3 B
甜甜的夏天。
4 i& P- m7 K' J4 u一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁，Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
3 ~: c) {% m; E5 \8 a$ E只是静静地等待你的身影，only waiting for you quietly.! y" w3 S4 `/ P, G! {
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人，Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
( [1 Z/ X' k+ h/ d3 y+ f( B% F想和你有共同的情结，
" P, l- _$ s. p/ ~$ Q共同的心愿。
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好想与你在细雨中漫步，I really want to ramble in the small rain with you6 H) W" S+ b8 ]2 v
一同感受著春雨的洒脱，and to enjoy the rain washing together8 w J7 C- q/ m! H1 |$ u7 b
或是赶著看一场电影；or rush to a film
) h9 g- b* q0 V或是静静地聆听一首曲子，or listen to a music quietly.- J& a/ V& Q7 _* a
『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?6 O6 x1 w/ D6 w2 c8 t6 G
我们相拥旋舞，然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, z( }3 K9 N: C
浅浅一笑，smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
+ K7 e1 q7 E" [6 @或是轻轻的一吻，
. m( o3 ]9 U( M6 y- `再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』
3 \$ v2 U; }3 i z) n1 @/ L就足够了. That is enough.5 }8 J( v4 Q% q3 Z( H8 M
这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子，Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago!
0 d" g2 P! b& l终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根，finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.& v9 {- o9 D+ b% }* i R# @ D7 g5 g
萌出了芽，: r" X7 O0 U! U" ^! }
一如对你的思念，the same as my missing
, R1 l% F2 J; r5 w浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure., R% X+ L0 h) A9 Z/ V- w2 Z6 j6 }
如果，如果有一天，If , if some day I can touch of your hand# m3 f l2 t' s: X. a
能够牵著你的手,2 J3 @0 N y+ L& y
那麽，我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里，then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
) n9 o: a9 ]: `" s$ y让你细细地触摸，Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully.
# y5 B4 r9 V$ s$ i, Y慢慢地细读，
) @8 ^2 c9 }8 @/ ~2 J我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
/ i+ Y' z1 _0 a7 \# p; I* X在你对我伸出手的那一瞬，At the moment you reach out your hands to me . g# F4 W4 x/ x) x
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱，then I will have all care and ardor + [- X; ?& W/ P1 f& w' R9 n
就让我牵一次你的手，好吗？Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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