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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
! A/ z) B" l8 L% m$ F9 W& z, S5 l, o,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry. ' \5 g- \& c, [) _& @& N
零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
* O* G0 |* x; H0 V现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.( D7 x! v8 ~; m" [
梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.. W# D/ u4 i0 y2 n3 f; b
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
" p2 o/ E6 Z8 a1 |2 g- _夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.3 A7 A4 c# d9 q3 C( J7 j
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.$ S& z9 c. K- N) j& m+ ?; f; ?
就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.
- ?' I) {9 ^4 B6 c我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及, s4 j: E) o: _& M5 k
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
x# y! S1 q5 q* l0 p世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
% J% Z F* h9 V ~, K, d昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
: s8 c$ p2 k5 Y1 C3 ~% a+ i想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.- v4 J5 C) V3 U: C* g# {+ @; g
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild. % Q; G+ i2 \* {& [$ j0 M% {
寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?# d/ C/ D/ }( \, r* J. h% U) u+ E
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
$ h G9 n6 R( D4 G ^6 Q迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
5 s( `6 o( [( G: W* Y/ g5 ]最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.% N/ t8 d& b6 h$ q6 w& L0 P* H* C
多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
& G y6 d7 U7 ^+ KWhy I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
" g5 l/ [% x: {* T9 }多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously3 s a2 S$ o9 R8 R
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
$ |. Q' D( }: h0 s# ~- F多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation,
( ^! r% Y/ [. n7 Y为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
# r2 S7 v1 F* f+ c# r" o, e多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!0 |, b# k, N; U( f# @7 G
永难平息的泪
0 i- B. } m& F9 Z! B% W每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes1 w1 y" H& ?, R+ b# E, b4 Z* I
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.2 I& m! e3 M% |* w, b+ n$ x3 K
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.7 a( i' |" l8 R
让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,) r6 I1 I1 o% S8 X. J$ Q+ Q
你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
( B: v- k1 B6 Y2 ~& q一抹微笑;; X- E8 h. G }/ R. }
一个手势;
1 m9 g. C; L! [一片话语,
, c/ A3 b; H( h愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、
9 }6 W) U# M% a9 I6 E明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner9 u. v6 f( A5 i% m8 ^; Q, ?
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.
! }% g; v$ i P: w! A' A这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling+ h9 l+ i+ i1 Y" m& r3 t: j" J4 D
也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..
1 T. j* [( j b起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,8 v$ {, n8 P9 Y2 p% c5 X: p- p
我并不以为然。8 J- M! [4 N3 ~, ?
可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed
" D6 {1 r: H7 b& U$ W5 z, s, V慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .- x! C. T1 z" o. u. _
被一种情绪所左右,
- V7 c7 h. n* g* u' B \总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .& f5 D7 P+ \; P$ z
即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you' L$ D% e4 `. Q. C3 H
也不问我是否喜欢你,
7 B7 w$ G& r7 C9 Z( U( a$ r0 [0 N对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
6 `' y8 p0 W# Z% {' G6 U只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you0 v% U* Z. Q1 I
3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you! @; d1 q* ~: l
心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil% J) V$ E8 @' f* g1 ~
然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
' q: q! V: Y7 X1 `% \7 r' J2 m你的身影已化成一种氛围,- f4 C M A$ P7 i6 H
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.) n7 C4 P5 e4 B5 r; @. ^" ?( o
你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
" t. g% F1 \8 B; y随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字
& |. u; K+ T4 m哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,
& S% q9 v6 H% n& a; a7 c: U% m7 D一种声音,and your voice
& J) f9 ?6 o2 G; N5 m也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
4 n0 ~* J" h, b& Q- s' I; T掺杂著幸福的感觉。: l% X% t9 H. K+ @' t! B0 x( y- V
与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
4 c! _5 t( Q3 [- e( p象雪花般撒落在我的心田,
/ {- [1 l7 y* X. p" u: ?倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
y( ~) b6 e( N) q# ]1 ~纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。
" q+ J0 e. O* b9 b" O3 r7 q0 w你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss* d* S( e( |7 _- A- S1 B/ s) U
有一个能够让思念的人,# w9 u* S: s0 {3 F) s
其实也是一种幸福。
- W' C; a, f" r/ F* n4 s尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer. : p' ~) s, {# Y8 t
柔柔的海风,
# n: Y* U* d5 Y- ?0 X* h甜甜的夏天。1 J! ^3 c1 t- t$ E* ~
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy . ? K$ P% z6 P- L" I8 g; t% P( s
只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly., R7 ~( n9 y8 L; G( p. K* y
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
$ ]9 z1 w5 j1 s3 p+ v4 t想和你有共同的情结,' T0 i8 W- G0 F S$ R
共同的心愿。; Z5 y U! u& D! [0 e+ p
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5 D8 z3 X d: W' N8 x1 h好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you- ^( H" I& W$ a. r# N" u s
一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together" R6 ?1 C7 `! X7 p
或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film ( ]. \- ]' a' M+ [ y
或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.
( v; e/ x$ R6 Y' g9 V『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?/ _3 i& H# g6 r; }: T" E9 X
我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
" L! u) T- Q; i* m浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”! b6 v; o2 x6 _; Y5 U: k
或是轻轻的一吻,
; Q9 F2 y5 @! \- x再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』
, K2 ]$ k: r$ A2 T( f3 s$ ]就足够了. That is enough.
^1 D p* J4 ?5 H* y' u8 c这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! 0 J& E0 g8 k) r6 |, j! D
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
, M/ K5 H- g8 k, V4 C/ K萌出了芽,' t* [0 B) o+ }" W5 k
一如对你的思念,the same as my missing# i+ \/ n7 J( w' q
浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.3 i- N; w& A& _$ ^6 k
如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand# P' Z+ z3 `3 B. [: c, [* G# S( z
能够牵著你的手,
" a( T$ S3 n# u7 ?那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.2 O$ d" q# s2 j. [# M3 P' N9 s& E
让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully.
, G8 m8 ~" ^3 l3 S. Z慢慢地细读,
{. Q4 S, \9 J我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
. w' ^6 J3 l0 r6 k在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me % |. H1 C$ T; y% o& G
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor / K! N! L" x: x
就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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