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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,' G9 r8 k5 f: E3 e2 r) u
,.清晨，急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry. $ Z6 v1 }' C/ ?* m0 [: u% K
零星树叶的飘落，松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
F7 z4 n6 Y$ B A9 [现在的我，一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.2 {- g/ M P5 q2 k
梳相同的发型，背同样的背囊，不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.- D; @# A/ M/ |2 J( h2 X ~* Q
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽，又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
" e4 \0 N3 _* Q& G, e1 C+ m夏天过得那麽快，我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.
0 U6 G- |% Q" X* H猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉，追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
' A; I2 {2 m6 a' A; _2 E就像多年以前的我们，似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.6 B- j6 }6 f+ A9 I( U- A( h0 P
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天，I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及
( P' ?# K. n, ]$ g5 z& |" U那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。4 }0 V1 ?; M8 S' O
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream./ b0 F" T# c; w) }& y
昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.$ s* l; m5 N. ~3 |8 `4 E. h
想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.6 m+ m8 f" [5 z& O h" N1 s
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild. 4 y q: M, S7 m) \1 G/ T+ F
寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?+ J) F9 } P6 F4 X" S f9 E4 T
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.% R Y* @) I# W. T' N# C
迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
- z8 {& d2 k$ n% v8 H" W1 |最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
) i. c9 X0 x5 @7 D g7 T$ z4 \多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul? w+ ~7 _; D7 Z; c' H
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
+ ]; F1 S" l+ }( S8 }多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously5 S- q2 H& h8 K+ _" V# _
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
$ D5 Z" @9 S$ f, f多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation,
. l, E1 H0 P( L为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
4 S, k# [/ \" v. \多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!( j' j6 V6 l' A6 Y2 i1 J9 b
永难平息的泪& R* Z! S/ P/ z' t, W# X
每当夜深人静时，When the quiet night comes9 f- V: q" b2 i7 i, k K
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.5 x) I# v1 ~5 E
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.& W# Q- t) x; e J
让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动，- B! @# U, o) u. K9 u( c: R
你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
$ k4 T# k# q$ A' a8 C一抹微笑；8 r; Z1 C1 {6 K! h
一个手势；
* z8 P1 O* Q/ R& N7 G, l0 |3 C一片话语，
( K4 Z1 S9 Y* f: L: _7 n: Y愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、
% q) {+ T, P7 S. Y, E明亮著我漆黑的角落，The moon lights the dark corner1 c' v, O$ [8 d x) _0 K M o- A
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.
0 a2 \1 r" C; F- N& s这一瞬的爱恋，The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
% I, G" j z3 v5 K* @也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..
2 I& { A2 H) P5 s) g起初，对你的出现，I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,5 }6 R! t! ^* W7 U
我并不以为然。
- u6 t& E! ?% i" L& N% @3 U* X可随著时间的流失，but accompanying with the time passed
6 a$ H& n( ?5 m2 ^慢慢的不知不觉中，I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .9 `" F9 T! `) n! y; H& \
被一种情绪所左右，
6 V5 i1 G- I @+ x总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
. U. t, J- s k, O- j& M, {7 a即不问你是否喜欢我，Without asking you if you like me and if I like you* i1 s( m7 P4 p, @9 a
也不问我是否喜欢你，
5 S/ f6 Z) `4 s2 D I对你的存在只感到亲切，only feel gracious for your existing.7 G" { {: D8 |5 h
只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
0 e" o, I$ n7 o1 ^& N5 K8 Q9 Q; V& `3每次有意无意的遇到你，every time when I meet you
8 z4 T9 b X1 b) |# J: R* u H8 ?0 Z心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil( c: e5 Y+ Z& s: ?( ]' I6 k$ ~) C
然而我真真切切地知道，but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere $ f; ?! Z! ]0 p7 n6 K
你的身影已化成一种氛围， B, R; X3 p+ B& ?8 j, Q
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.. Q. l$ G( P# o2 I5 e
你知道吗？Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
. E2 [ o V( q v. s% i! D随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字. s* ?6 c! f& [
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud，# S% z9 L2 c) |
一种声音，and your voice2 x; a8 e7 H8 t" n) w
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.4 }. _$ h; J m/ {0 x+ x8 u/ I9 v
掺杂著幸福的感觉。
3 g) a/ p4 o+ c. M o* n N- B与你相识的那一幕幕，the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land& Z9 m% y( u( `- E1 U3 m
象雪花般撒落在我的心田，/ b; r) V6 G+ [' M
倾刻间，suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
! C J: Q% N9 J纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。" J/ @7 t6 _0 ?# U& J" C9 E, d
你知道吗？Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss/ H2 h2 f+ f5 c4 p) Y7 |
有一个能够让思念的人，
" n8 N. F( \. S. G9 I8 z+ }其实也是一种幸福。* I; H7 b( k! i) J! P0 ]/ _
尤其是在这样的日子，especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer. ! r" Z. C2 M- @4 B" Y0 e
柔柔的海风，
( Y6 k- w* |* w8 E3 L& W甜甜的夏天。/ v. T; O& {6 \
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁，Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy 9 d/ r. G: z6 O2 \ }
只是静静地等待你的身影，only waiting for you quietly.
! z- f! B" d+ e8 A$ A& }. J仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人，Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.7 d% I, s0 E V
想和你有共同的情结，
; W$ O) d: P5 C6 F* [4 I, r3 q& J共同的心愿。2 W t1 C8 U* d' |8 N/ K) ?/ S
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好想与你在细雨中漫步，I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
0 H/ d# C! Z$ X- v! ~" J3 s+ Q一同感受著春雨的洒脱，and to enjoy the rain washing together% B W" ~1 @- ], A2 P9 E3 u
或是赶著看一场电影；or rush to a film 9 j) K. A, B# \% b
或是静静地聆听一首曲子，or listen to a music quietly.% q9 r; G' y U+ V) A7 [
『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
, `! U) P4 [4 m- M s我们相拥旋舞，然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, ! p5 ~* ]8 G# O# u2 h; s* W/ ^8 M
浅浅一笑，smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”+ Y4 v# N! O% p
或是轻轻的一吻，- Q$ X v8 g: i; [6 u
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』
) u, x8 ?- V1 }- ]就足够了. That is enough.
# Z9 S& z( @' t9 g; m这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子，Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago!
0 D8 v/ z) Q) v. J, w0 a$ H% B+ J终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根，finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
7 S. y' E$ }' Q2 N/ |1 o! Q1 Y萌出了芽，
" D! ^/ B# F% w3 ~, F! g) C一如对你的思念，the same as my missing
+ I+ j' {1 G* S: t浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.1 `9 D5 x- {. `( _5 p
如果，如果有一天，If , if some day I can touch of your hand- N1 T0 K* _# e" V6 k' }" P7 K
能够牵著你的手,- J' |: M/ @% ^) Q( }
那麽，我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里，then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
' s+ L. K1 F* }1 B# P1 v让你细细地触摸，Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully.
- F, ]1 ]+ M+ U+ a慢慢地细读，0 k+ L4 q& |* f! Y2 z
我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
5 g3 z$ Q. k( T" b( k在你对我伸出手的那一瞬，At the moment you reach out your hands to me ( `$ f, _2 |4 ^0 u [
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱，then I will have all care and ardor
0 S E; v. N: G0 m9 [7 l& |+ _; z就让我牵一次你的手，好吗？Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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