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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
" X5 d3 j6 `5 G1 h* N,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
: G- f& s9 l% k: L* ?6 ^& }. R( r零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
0 ?* Z" v6 Y" \' U' j现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.
: `+ Q. P' b' C1 p梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.
$ a/ q6 y# `+ Z% q* |, I2 y0 z眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
+ U+ |: E! `8 G( K- p夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.6 u; Q1 S R# A0 b: k8 W& |0 d
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
4 v! M! L" R/ I T- Y; J就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.; v0 I: _2 g2 l' p( x
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及
) X: f& e& g8 O. t: Y那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
+ m* s: ]% W2 P世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.2 w! D8 ]" Q: V8 e/ Y% ~- K
昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.; p% o- W4 ~& T& W* r: G; }
想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
; s/ J, H* U( w, Q+ b( z最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
1 X5 C3 g v5 I寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?1 [* f/ \7 @: C& F
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
% A4 {( E0 d) n/ i迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
; l& S$ P# P' B) X8 r' `最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
`& `, H% D# g% r1 X3 v- X. C" `多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?/ i) M+ \: `6 @, T
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
9 K! K+ O* w2 o0 c% V5 p多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
. \- f$ }1 F( S) Z& P3 ?不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
2 f" k) c) W6 D+ q' |" z多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation,
' k8 \: g% Z0 L7 Q. F2 K为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?9 P( Z& |, X7 S+ F4 s* s
多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
+ V) g" q5 q/ _( w' u永难平息的泪* V! F% d0 e2 a% Q2 I, s3 d/ a( Z5 Y8 R
每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes
: T! `* g# c- a. H~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.0 E" V5 E) ~2 v
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.9 [" m4 z5 z8 @% Y. Q+ u
让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
6 M- F; w9 h6 j0 J+ L$ H7 J2 O你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
Z% X0 {6 u! P% P5 e w8 ~一抹微笑;
! s! D- v9 k9 z" g/ O. A一个手势;6 L, \6 J6 X( }; ] v
一片话语,
7 ]% E7 s% Y! a h" }/ O. s$ g, g愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、/ T1 B& R, f8 ]
明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner
! l' C0 Q. ]4 V1 s心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.& @9 q6 G( y5 D
这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling5 a& b- p, [; ^ Q
也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..* s3 d- n3 u2 @7 |; c' n' _
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,. K6 D) `6 q" L B
我并不以为然。- j I. ^' l5 F5 F
可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed
! _0 e& ~ U, q' ~$ D慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .
/ L" z/ s( T# q, k0 I被一种情绪所左右, A( [% N! z* ^2 r6 B9 l
总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .0 X& T6 g" W3 f& y& N
即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
; ]# `9 }5 T* J4 l也不问我是否喜欢你,: h6 u1 _+ f! V+ E% q
对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.6 n3 M6 L+ K1 j
只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you K8 D: q) b5 Y/ T+ o5 V# E- S( ~
3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you% G5 R3 L+ A6 X4 c0 h
心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil' Z& B: V1 d( h! V4 Y' u
然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere 1 k5 F" u$ v* F5 m5 o
你的身影已化成一种氛围,/ ?4 N" e% D$ w% z( E* M% e0 w' u
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.
: F! }. ]0 C0 X3 {: o+ k你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
; q- e% V. i% `& C随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字% R7 F7 e/ |/ j( i4 t) }, }% w
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud, C, V( e9 ]- ^& p& r
一种声音,and your voice/ ~; A" ]- \ }& S* m5 ^8 r f% ^; v
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
! x2 s( }; b; Z% S. W掺杂著幸福的感觉。/ ~9 M, K5 X7 }: e E+ y/ O8 M
与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land. e* D2 v, ]& V- o. A
象雪花般撒落在我的心田,
( u% I0 v5 K* P) I l$ c. z8 I倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
- r9 _, v8 N" r) G/ Z0 n, `0 ? i纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。
+ ]. d$ r+ J6 L. d' k$ |/ u你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss; t2 u9 r! n+ _- x6 y) Q
有一个能够让思念的人,' J* F9 M' l/ S9 Q3 w3 r+ S
其实也是一种幸福。- _4 _/ ?9 N- {
尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
; j+ H% c+ U q& t6 [柔柔的海风,- k/ m/ D5 H( c, [* ]3 L
甜甜的夏天。7 e" h: U2 d. `) b; B
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
6 y6 r+ a) n. M2 q. t只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.
2 n( z; k9 h$ X+ r仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
2 E' G& l% }7 |6 |* w9 U想和你有共同的情结,
) \+ Q7 j/ y4 ?9 a- T- |2 |2 K共同的心愿。; K: I0 B+ y) c! K
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: F0 u3 s7 s# T* W+ T2 L好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
) j4 b; B- f# e3 Z4 U) I一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together
* m# W9 U+ ~5 m, v+ S/ t7 U( j: K或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film 6 h3 I. N5 n. g# @3 K& Q" F
或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.) ^& E2 \: n8 I2 W/ c" W
『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?. P- F( Y% I7 f2 c9 e1 Q9 u! @
我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, 0 p2 n y7 ]; a
浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
7 u. R$ H0 q6 T0 v( @; F或是轻轻的一吻,
* B' m& z f" y. P/ t再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』
* s' A( {. Q/ `8 }就足够了. That is enough.
$ b$ n( D3 j% ^& O6 d这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! ; T* S' |; Y% w- ~& W& ^
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.( z+ }0 f2 G: X& P$ R3 b0 L
萌出了芽,
9 [: k) W8 ?( F# p# m5 _' H, H8 U一如对你的思念,the same as my missing9 {3 s6 u9 W/ o
浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
$ I3 h8 o9 |0 z' f: Z* s如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand
+ x3 q d) K" n3 ?; H' W能够牵著你的手,% f* D( u. F5 a) v: t
那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
3 t; [$ C/ ~7 T, r4 z9 \8 R让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. % v- H) ^" n* k
慢慢地细读,
. I6 T4 p3 ]: r' L2 K8 o% W4 ?我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
: A/ K9 Q! w, e: m: y* m7 i在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me 7 R6 Z7 N0 D$ J1 z: I4 L1 d
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor
3 k, N/ n5 Q% y# w! [就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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