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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
1 b8 g b# R2 a. },.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
5 r6 @% `8 }: b) h7 y6 v零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running . ( e& l5 v) X! Z% w# [3 Z
现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.
3 @2 T" V Q* l梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.
: |1 H6 B& E/ W眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.9 _! _+ K( v Y5 w
夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.; w$ | ^9 S$ R. N- d
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool. G ]8 P) |4 I1 ?
就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.% h+ e+ v1 f5 L" U* z
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及; f2 t$ j5 A% _: }, Z5 J
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。& t. o6 Z. B6 q! A( \
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.7 [3 i; S: O8 G! }; x! Z
昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
; Y! V, I& _! r% d2 W' s0 j* o* Y想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
9 N& I% X1 l7 U4 j2 h8 K最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild. 2 n, T0 T, V, |. ~2 E; ~
寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?" m/ r& N7 y2 g! H8 \ ?
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
& q- T2 f1 r' z6 M* [迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.9 j) [3 A' j5 _7 v' s5 ?1 |# E2 N
最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.: S( V2 X5 e r( _1 u
多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?1 N, i: O1 |4 D+ h: X- a& }+ W
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
' M K! L0 D, J多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
; n0 t, X8 U& c5 G' x3 o不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
1 T2 z7 R) {* t1 p; F7 p多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation,
1 x, {$ j3 _) {为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
$ T1 i. k$ H3 g* C多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
, r' M. A/ ~8 I& t永难平息的泪1 A* W- k0 R1 h+ z
每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes
+ x) U) z* s( F1 ^) ?+ ~4 |9 y0 e~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.4 H# V' h& M0 R i+ M7 B) S; F
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
, s' v# N5 d) }8 s9 I2 @1 D$ g让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
7 D( G3 P, [( H. p. n: ~% H你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul + q+ M( j( S# J# Q* C
一抹微笑;& l' }3 ?" C6 L4 Z
一个手势;9 r- m) M6 ?7 g3 C; N, ?/ C+ u0 S
一片话语,
- p2 X( z3 n+ \% @- q: Z7 f1 t( f愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、
- m: @" @9 X! d" _明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner- l( b/ r/ T, u% C" t
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.& O& A+ x* x2 k
这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
: k! c9 `- Y+ o1 }; ^& M也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..$ e2 k- n2 C3 m5 d$ O9 ?
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,6 M+ k! O: N) f4 T! L. ]8 ^
我并不以为然。
7 z' v* z& h6 r) x" M. d可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed
g" k4 R3 n0 e; f c$ R, E8 T" C+ w( T慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion ." o. M9 d- d) h2 A
被一种情绪所左右,
& g3 l% s9 b0 z# G8 l- L6 `5 |% W总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .3 f% f9 t& ^) U" t
即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
- M" i1 k" ^* _+ E( r也不问我是否喜欢你,& {/ t, ]. y3 [: i+ Q0 `% Y
对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
# L& s1 n' R+ c$ u# c4 i/ m7 r只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you0 F/ i- U4 m) b7 @- l. {
3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you
% q4 L! q/ o+ W; A心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil6 }; G6 \* W/ D4 o" y! w
然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
% a8 z2 U v1 w2 D4 v8 o你的身影已化成一种氛围,
0 S; @8 j% ^/ G- U3 x记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.$ @# I' F- K" V* I' v
你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! 2 G- T0 g V3 K% }6 N
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字
' Y2 q L$ ]1 y) K8 i哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,
$ h" S" l7 [) S; V! Y8 x/ G7 N一种声音,and your voice
/ c; j; E2 a% T也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.$ m0 z5 Q7 e$ {- Z5 |
掺杂著幸福的感觉。
% G6 ~& h j( G6 g& C; y与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land" C9 N9 n+ y0 K; O1 O1 M# @6 d
象雪花般撒落在我的心田,' b8 C) c# F/ E+ j1 s" K
倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
7 ?" x; K; w( m, A; O! U) w纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。( M/ c: v8 b; e+ g8 N* v5 l' x& N
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss Y4 R( G5 Q+ ~$ W# S6 s$ R# D: A, g$ F) _
有一个能够让思念的人,2 D- T/ Y- {7 w
其实也是一种幸福。- I5 _+ A7 H! O5 s! {, P
尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer. 3 Q8 J9 e ^) I5 g) {/ O& L" _$ R' K% [
柔柔的海风,
* K$ b' a: b+ t w/ V! @" e7 |甜甜的夏天。1 k0 C4 c' [4 ]* J
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy 5 |; [, K& [$ ^$ i1 @
只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.0 @! @" @# a+ }" E& F2 M
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do./ n0 `% X4 l$ X4 x" W5 G
想和你有共同的情结,8 i$ Q2 j; {8 v0 J1 _
共同的心愿。
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you/ c7 I7 X. z% G/ ~
一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together
6 q) K$ `" s! y# ?' _4 U或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film
2 }/ Y% z% D- M. `; U或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.
0 z+ L h7 L: y# c$ {$ V# P' v『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
/ Y G/ ]: @5 Z M% Z我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
% H4 U. l# q' O3 j& c浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
2 T& O* o1 e2 l3 _5 e( C或是轻轻的一吻,
Y, O" l: M/ Y U- j1 U4 I再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』
4 S" v8 O8 s" \6 Y& p就足够了. That is enough.) H9 `, Z" _" i# Y- S; U0 e! `5 o6 e3 s
这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! . h( x' |' Z! t; m; S% Y7 x: Z* Y/ B
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout." k: o, C+ v& I% w& K9 ~7 m. j, c
萌出了芽," I/ O. C5 j! k* K) s8 \1 M
一如对你的思念,the same as my missing' h( k$ |! V% n2 P# h
浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
/ Z0 T5 g9 \: i$ b如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand
3 F: B$ W! t# k% K& s能够牵著你的手,4 q- L' S1 `6 i- \+ d* ?: o
那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
0 {0 u- d3 j9 L( c a7 [让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully.
8 c+ m4 h7 @ ?7 n慢慢地细读,5 W# ~; N' S" l. ]6 x
我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. 7 B$ X' F' s! `3 w
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me
' a( M8 I9 w# ~7 X2 E我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor % R0 }: _, c E7 g0 c
就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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