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每当说一句汉语的时候,我总在心里想英语是怎么说的.尤其看到汉语诗歌的时候,我突然想,翻译成英语还能保留原来的意思吗?所以试着译一译.- q6 t. J0 W5 v! M
前边发了译文以后才发现有些大小写和语法错误.一点一点地改,很乱.所以再重新发一便:
% z9 p& {" f# X& o& z; `Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
: ^- @( Y+ e: b s3 x8 o3 c+ n" TPartial leaves fall down everywhere,squirrels are busily running.8 _: Y* ~" a7 s8 G
Current I, the same as one tear ago, the same given name, and the same family name.4 W& K+ B f2 q$ a0 r( v
The same hairstyle,the same bag,reserved laughing and talking.
! L P. r* g! hSeemly added something in my eyes,or lacked something.6 B9 [( W# v5 p, w0 @4 ^/ Y* n" C
Summer went so fast that I almost forgot those sweating night:) J( _/ M( n5 e) E# U
Cats often played at the whole hot night outside windows to get cool
2 t0 d0 T0 u* ]9 q( U2 |+ `/ Elike us many years ago,mindless self indulgence.: S) A. J, l6 J% ^
I often cherish the memory happened in summer and those people that make me raint even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming.
3 s4 B! S7 K, j- rThe emotion and the carma only is a dream.
1 o) J& _% Y7 n& z# CThat shoudn`t happen to meet each other last tenderlt night.
* j* f! @: _: c* D/ K* O* J. II want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
: e: F( [; ~1 F+ j- hI am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
. A I" L: \8 B4 N- zIn this lonely world whom I can step inside love to?
, o5 _3 b) Q4 |0 P) [Intoxicated then feel cold,* X8 J7 [9 x' a0 H
the labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.* i C# w, C3 \& t1 `& D
I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.1 p" F; m4 m- O; ~
The amorous man to whom you gave your soul?
& V+ x% Q' T) q9 b1 j' u2 RWhy I am always hoodwinked!6 \! |: N/ P3 a' ?
I have told myself many times cautiously
5 ?/ ]( [; t$ J4 Rdon`t fall into the spoony whirligig.8 X2 i. J; s7 m
The amorous women always get drunk by desolation.7 e8 g5 b! N, y/ a" H
Why can`t I take it easy?
' f" D3 C& M W( ]" u# D% OHow endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!) i( O# k j) a; {( l" j
When the quiet night comes: E3 i# q8 K/ o6 l& \! e
your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
: m; m) F6 M: f$ u ^9 PThe greeting when you met me made my heart in touched unaccountably.7 a7 i# a8 V6 Y) e
Yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul,) u0 r, |: N2 X; H4 e
light the dark corner in my mind.( y; p0 D F! G; |, f1 b& z
I feel a bit of cozy. i' e1 a5 f. v, T2 {1 T
The deep attached to you in a twinkling
8 b: `" M s# L) _( |+ H0 W3 {; fmaybe is the most light spot in my whole life.
/ U/ u5 @" Y, C4 A+ KI didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
& @- \ R4 I8 s1 v+ k+ T) {but accompanying with the time passed: H: y" Q l8 n% G% h
I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion,5 k/ @ O; T! X
always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly.
1 J, F, J% G6 PWithout asking if you like me or if I like you; X! r8 \) Z# r" Z; n ]
only feel gracious for your existing,: H, G$ H* F9 {2 L; z* D! ^
onlt want to do something for you.
5 \1 T1 t( ]# P+ c6 ZEvery time when you meet me
3 Z4 p+ _& b, O; y0 c( T/ ithe sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil,
' [% ^" t2 z: u- ybut I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
9 k7 s& N% ^' h2 Q. z0 Q! e+ jThat live in my heart.
% L# _2 [: M' J3 a" R1 G* IDo you know your name can suddenly come into mu mind at anytime?
2 @! O3 [2 u$ ~% |6 nEven only your flying clothes` corner when you turn around, and your voice$ R) R6 e* D7 k% k! }( i
make me gently distraught with happy feeling.1 b7 F& j* r' i4 h* f, X
The scene that met you prinkle in my heart like snow on the land8 _( f& U, S& p1 D/ M
suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.9 J" v* k! x4 d6 R4 W
Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss,, a a7 q6 X' {5 O: ]
especially on the day, the gentle sea breeze and the sweet summer.
w7 y! v3 J b- M( m( k& \2 I, LSweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
+ ?5 k* `* A; ~( xonly waiting for you quietly
n0 a7 }3 M0 j8 qjust let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
( V. F) }( ?9 F: M- q& oI really want to ramble in the small rain with you 1 F( `' V, n. Y1 _1 o& \
and enjoy the rain washing together2 Y3 H8 I r4 f- k5 t
or rush to a film4 g$ o$ k U2 \- Q+ z
or listen to a music quietly.( w2 J/ M: @( S6 g* D# V
Whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?9 c1 j j6 f+ h, X! `. E0 I4 ?$ N( i
If we embrace ,dance,and gaze to each other,
; ]! E- I* O: W& H p5 g8 S, T6 ?smile or gently kiss then say: I really love you".
8 ~; g# y: f/ |! E" {4 [That is enough.
7 X/ i( K9 ?* |# F/ y7 J9 }3 P2 [+ @Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago,8 y( {* E; W @5 W
finely it deeply rooted into the earth in the season and sprout,
6 f9 ?& D# k6 E1 f: i2 \4 bthe same as my missing. k: d1 U0 ]1 W3 s4 \
It comes a little bit of verdure.
! w% a z$ d6 y$ I; d5 ?If, If some day I can touch your hand, / Z1 t) p- \) C5 t. p( T$ f' ~: `* \
then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.9 h6 F! _' y3 `# i+ Q; R# E* H
Let you touch me gently and read me carefully.
. ^) y: H1 V$ v9 vI will enjoy your mild emotion through your hands with my heart and soul.
1 `1 P. R" S0 r6 ~At the moment you reach out your hands to me ,, B) l3 U' {1 t e, C9 [% A& Q* r
then I will have all care and ardor.
* s, P0 h9 G# u+ ?6 ?) m4 `Shall we walk arm in arm?
3 F) a7 Q0 r# E9 [, f' e7 z! a, o呵,太晚了,连检查都不想检查一下,有没有打字错误了. |
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