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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,& }) Q: ]" D; _: J f3 u
,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
7 G' d! b, x0 e$ K, Y零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
5 x1 u2 K+ n/ D现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.
0 n4 Z8 x8 b, V梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.! N' `5 U8 V; u4 I0 `" N
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.) q' l9 U1 ?6 q7 ?. l! F0 }
夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.
2 g" z$ K( L0 d0 J猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.; n8 J. h, u/ [
就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.
) |- o+ f8 d t, \. p8 t# _我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及" M' p& M9 H$ d& F1 U- _
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
( H. m- h7 y/ f世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.$ n( `" _* I* I; A! v R$ N; P
昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
# X N: R8 A, X4 `想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
# d! C6 Z' y- x& P最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
1 p. R5 @& ~3 j. X9 ~" u5 R寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?
% L/ P# O+ v. u5 i T' q$ C醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
* R+ U$ I# |$ O% A9 c3 g迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
! z w; n, c2 M0 T/ ^最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
3 f+ ~/ d9 }- Z3 U多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?0 @) P G$ {9 V8 R& `8 j
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
; e5 I5 ~( n, D! C/ u多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously6 u( _5 A5 { O6 H6 k
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
8 b9 b, M K2 ~ g6 j" U多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation,
. G$ Z2 k! F; P* z9 o2 \为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
2 V" k5 x1 D; u/ P多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!/ o1 l6 H3 x0 a4 {& w) H
永难平息的泪
+ G9 H' @% D% {7 W/ Y7 U每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes( d& S0 _; T6 B* L8 S0 s# G; W
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.8 u/ z& _3 k6 Z: `7 b; p0 \
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.9 F- p" c, _& g B( a: i; @1 B
让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
8 O5 Z; K A! O. t你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul ( ]9 L9 m+ t# ^ e7 ]; I
一抹微笑;
# ~7 f3 x' @* r& K2 c: Q一个手势;2 Y9 m* t& V; i% ~8 `$ h0 O
一片话语,, j/ s8 T3 e) y, Q
愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、
6 `- W: C* S& {* Q) p8 m5 d; n明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner9 S! }/ n/ q N) Y R( V
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.
% D" b" i, y/ w$ g% _& ]这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling* o7 ?* q5 E2 i4 d8 W8 ~* D
也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..
) t5 c0 b1 N* p8 H- P起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,& h. ^7 |' t7 }- X4 B; f6 E: \
我并不以为然。( U2 l* Z: b" t: ]( @
可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed
6 p& P" R8 d# j0 V+ s) V0 `2 B慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion ./ n, R0 }( h J! I! \- |
被一种情绪所左右,& X% s. O0 J4 d
总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
1 n" O' r3 d) M9 O& y+ T即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you* j* o+ ?% L7 p0 L& w2 U
也不问我是否喜欢你,
# |& M: N5 C. Q' H+ O对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
4 {. V5 {) |' e$ g5 v, a* S只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
0 x9 v- u& G T9 N: _3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you+ C+ F+ ^: L' s$ `6 h
心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil
' r, V: ~3 X$ {$ Y: w) T然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere / {$ o/ O' g$ }- [3 U" S
你的身影已化成一种氛围, ^) q. P8 V2 `+ e8 b9 Q
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.' q" ~5 a7 A) c; \# h6 G/ H2 g7 e
你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! ( V! X5 v6 H) Z1 R: Z: i
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字 B; v! m# M& [7 z' \' u0 E
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,: ]5 _2 y3 f& k
一种声音,and your voice! k6 r% N. W4 S7 T1 s! L& K
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.* y; A& |: }5 l8 ^0 e
掺杂著幸福的感觉。
( D! ?5 O: j/ v5 g与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land0 t0 l4 W+ L- d, x2 [, E- ^
象雪花般撒落在我的心田,: _) K# S# K3 x+ _& f. h2 p
倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
9 [/ K. A( t" M( B. y8 y4 R纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。/ r Y, T h) k1 r8 N1 N
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss5 j- g; O9 N/ c2 }) u- J% Y
有一个能够让思念的人,
' V7 |* j( c# n. v其实也是一种幸福。
( v* j Y4 C' `$ p* r- m尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
! C2 O m1 f6 j: O8 y4 t柔柔的海风,7 y& ~+ k4 |5 k3 e3 Y: C/ W
甜甜的夏天。) O- }+ d' }/ q& @6 S
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
* o9 e/ E3 c3 {9 m7 ^0 `( A只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.! O: a' V( p. I \' z! I c
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.- c$ L! X+ d1 }/ L- ?( u: U t" d- k
想和你有共同的情结,
D/ l- m3 W9 R( S: T8 K' T共同的心愿。% C0 N0 x8 j8 L3 `+ r, u
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you" A5 N; \- Z9 X3 Q' Y- _
一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together
" {6 F5 ~7 ^. J6 W% W+ y或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film
% H }" `# N5 \7 C或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.
$ j& V2 Y4 m+ t6 X, m( h. q『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
4 W$ b* o) r9 z- c% A6 {我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
0 k1 a5 ], u& t/ @( r& z# Y2 m9 [+ R浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
0 L, Y# U i( K9 \或是轻轻的一吻,
0 d% o$ L/ i1 Q3 ^; r* B: i再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』: W& }& Y7 b# k9 U1 ], z, T6 b
就足够了. That is enough.7 d$ Y8 q( c; q( e
这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago!
+ C/ y( E6 W( z+ r- X- u. w3 h/ g终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
# I" \% H2 x+ v, W萌出了芽,
, f+ S o. p n% y一如对你的思念,the same as my missing
3 O/ T/ I5 J) p# x. ?! v浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
2 @0 f$ R8 i9 z4 C {# b如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand$ g! x: F. V. a* y
能够牵著你的手,+ o& S+ n" N. g, M- v
那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
! t0 `" q3 \+ v3 i7 N让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. 7 U& @, g' ~+ e s0 ~
慢慢地细读,
. ?" x, T1 `: C, g5 ?6 K我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
2 Z* Q( k: q( a在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me
) y* h/ ~& `) [0 b$ X; i0 K我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor
' B, y6 G9 F; ?4 W8 n4 c, i就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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