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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
5 v; F" \ g/ ]* a9 J# `3 B,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry. 5 h& f \, o+ t D( {9 L( l
零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
8 R" H3 e; C% v$ I' J现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.# b$ j. |9 w7 N5 O$ z# C
梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.! ~+ R- W. Q, L+ A& l1 I( `
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
- h9 j! l0 o6 t# B5 V夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.. u& H: a0 g; O; l+ A
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
) i2 }/ l+ K r5 A; M就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.
) Q- J! u% h; u( L) ]0 K我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及! e9 f* }' O) u+ H
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。8 I# D( Z7 G4 E+ j# m$ T" L
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.8 W0 S7 q; h \3 B4 {% c
昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
+ J9 H1 g" g4 j3 @( a& d# w想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.$ S4 U, h, j' }3 v
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild. # I$ W( E! ~: Y- v* \# k
寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?
2 s& x/ _) @: J醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.' A. j8 Y" V6 c# E3 u; u
迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
' b; _+ F9 ]3 M' o+ \最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
9 y, ^% p( ?" {& r1 g$ V多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
4 y4 K: w, a) s7 W s3 HWhy I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
) f) N( z5 K% D/ ~/ {多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously8 O( R6 R/ |+ ]' w. T
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig./ S f: y0 d5 R/ h( | q, @1 Z
多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation,
/ y6 b P4 L$ X D6 W$ O+ \为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?1 B! g! K: h3 [! T4 `, }
多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
5 @& }5 j4 J* w永难平息的泪
6 ]* z, d# m6 Z每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes
$ ]+ m' T. \, G8 s, d~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
8 g; G: y2 U; P9 @当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
+ R/ Z: X/ f3 S" l% q9 n* c让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
1 Y- Y8 o9 @- b1 C# t; N# m你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul ; U: u; N7 }1 A, H+ \9 {
一抹微笑;% ^/ x. K' N1 U* p7 Z
一个手势;" W9 C2 x9 l. y! ^3 `
一片话语, \ L' ?" c; `/ y5 V; o+ d" _8 T
愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、
# x8 W2 W7 M/ E ~ Y3 S% _% t' _& v明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner
% e" R- c. d X1 }. ?0 Y! `心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.$ Y$ Z/ b# ]( M5 A9 o
这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling$ B1 ^5 J$ ?$ v: ?/ B' {
也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..
0 R7 w8 [. d8 Q5 t4 q% R: y起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,2 K: N4 G+ U ^: W0 s+ y. b- T4 v
我并不以为然。! s1 `. Y+ m" ^5 d! e/ f
可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed : ]4 L/ L' n% p% Z5 c
慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .
' D: \0 c) Z) a# O& U Z被一种情绪所左右,
% N. X- K9 Z( G4 O2 E: J总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
) d$ z- X' P) E, f, z) ^& [即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
/ C& C; W% g, }* O9 K也不问我是否喜欢你,
& U9 G. J* ^9 ]对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
5 V& v) k1 K6 A; M% h4 H5 n& _5 T* n2 `只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
) b) Z) c5 q; {0 E1 l1 \3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you
9 z+ h9 U$ x( V心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil
$ w* h- r" K1 T- U" l; A" ]) m然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
& u# q. J+ S4 u+ ~* K% [2 U你的身影已化成一种氛围,
- C2 r+ Y( ]& ]- A4 u- a记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.
3 s; Z/ N/ U. ]9 h你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! 6 Q) t! k" D. P& [: e" i1 k
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字0 v0 k- o/ t5 q* D! D
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,
9 m& y8 c1 ?4 f+ y3 O. s# ?一种声音,and your voice' ~! t* L% z; B% L% n5 \) Z: g
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.- _9 s: P- R' n, O8 p+ f
掺杂著幸福的感觉。
/ ?3 {# D' X7 l* ^与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land: K Y! f3 M0 c" w
象雪花般撒落在我的心田,/ w' b* n: f: H, }/ I
倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.6 B- F& c5 h* T+ K8 G0 \
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。
8 l3 x% ]( Z9 b你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss. o& M1 z/ \2 T3 b; L; V
有一个能够让思念的人,# U0 h, }6 f7 `3 v/ Q4 K/ i; E& y
其实也是一种幸福。
! i# g3 S) N( X1 f8 A( G5 o1 n尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
& Z" l0 b8 ~2 w; c1 @柔柔的海风,
! V3 g1 o/ w" i* w h e甜甜的夏天。0 `. h& ?! U, L. `
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
1 R( y# g8 `% w( l只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.
* t! }% s7 g: q6 k1 i仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.' {2 V4 ?1 |6 J8 E. q i
想和你有共同的情结,. s/ ^8 ]9 ?5 S; \( O2 O# J
共同的心愿。
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
9 c* w3 _6 n( w, r, e1 r ~6 `一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together+ C7 O$ ^' C. N5 B& v: S* X/ s
或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film 8 y" C9 [7 H0 A' d9 |1 K6 \
或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.
! l8 q: K8 y6 S7 d『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
/ @, l; R4 y2 z. t1 V9 c5 Y我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, + b, A3 `. _( _" o
浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
- m/ D7 F0 J h9 N* {4 {- h或是轻轻的一吻,% C V+ ~5 P9 G% B
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』
( i" }6 @6 l0 \! D/ L. k( C就足够了. That is enough.) ^. g& Y( }, H" P- B1 K. J
这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago!
" [1 H: }- ]* U1 |# q终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
3 s6 W- |- l( L$ `+ ?萌出了芽,) ^1 w/ X9 G1 I) Q. ^& c
一如对你的思念,the same as my missing( z) l3 C& x# ?- g5 |: ^0 L8 \5 A
浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
: F) D9 c, D$ K/ [如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand
h4 [! ^; d9 e能够牵著你的手, Y$ V) ]) v6 k! n
那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.2 d1 @; T; \2 t1 R5 |+ F' m
让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully.
. w2 |) Q: c3 y- Q慢慢地细读,
: G. u* W4 _3 t我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. ' S+ t: h& T6 \' R
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me + u" T. R% z9 d1 D* w# v
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor 1 [; F" N a) n. E6 f4 t
就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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