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每当说一句汉语的时候,我总在心里想英语是怎么说的.尤其看到汉语诗歌的时候,我突然想,翻译成英语还能保留原来的意思吗?所以试着译一译.: k" E/ L, _9 ]* i. K4 d
前边发了译文以后才发现有些大小写和语法错误.一点一点地改,很乱.所以再重新发一便:
8 a O6 A4 w% ]8 K' }Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
2 \# i1 N/ t) c3 rPartial leaves fall down everywhere,squirrels are busily running.# \) W/ |4 m8 @, C
Current I, the same as one tear ago, the same given name, and the same family name.: U5 D0 e2 K2 `5 a5 V+ j4 U
The same hairstyle,the same bag,reserved laughing and talking.
* q0 q$ \ _3 h W/ j% _1 h8 w9 nSeemly added something in my eyes,or lacked something.
$ e1 Z9 _2 ~! h! m x# ?( NSummer went so fast that I almost forgot those sweating night:# a9 s' h6 c' Q `% z8 O M" Y* `) x! }
Cats often played at the whole hot night outside windows to get cool
, B. e+ h9 c4 x6 u" A$ L6 b' L% Mlike us many years ago,mindless self indulgence. N0 b* ^9 l' ^
I often cherish the memory happened in summer and those people that make me raint even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming.* z$ j( k; ~! t3 Y
The emotion and the carma only is a dream.3 ]6 T4 d% J4 ]5 q3 R; l, p' H/ }
That shoudn`t happen to meet each other last tenderlt night.
9 i& f& b6 q" @1 {; t- aI want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.# h4 b: Q0 [; C' t; w: W' ?, L- V x; ?
I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.6 S& Q, {1 a/ }0 L! {
In this lonely world whom I can step inside love to?
x" E. v: @7 d! @3 {5 MIntoxicated then feel cold,
7 ]- w9 g# K* u5 }7 O4 xthe labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
: Z; w- L- L* ?, e7 O3 OI am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
5 i7 R$ J* R1 h0 c, @. @, ?The amorous man to whom you gave your soul?5 t7 {+ M# W- z- z
Why I am always hoodwinked!/ r- b8 f" s; X; o* d1 X0 P
I have told myself many times cautiously 9 n+ p- |. y' O6 z1 L' U
don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.) P4 y2 x5 z: X7 a6 n
The amorous women always get drunk by desolation.
& `" w: O2 H0 n* A9 \# D6 gWhy can`t I take it easy?
, N6 n# D# v3 M( jHow endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
9 ]$ ?7 T8 `' Y7 j0 iWhen the quiet night comes2 y$ m& Z4 K( |/ r6 `
your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.- u7 _! {" C4 K6 P+ Q6 k9 ^ c$ v4 n
The greeting when you met me made my heart in touched unaccountably.% C( K; d3 T0 }$ _
Yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul,2 E% ]) s5 K e- m& e- J
light the dark corner in my mind." H8 C2 H6 t% W$ p6 X
I feel a bit of cozy.. O0 N) {0 U- {5 `2 z
The deep attached to you in a twinkling" ~+ e. _: A8 U/ \5 G8 l
maybe is the most light spot in my whole life.
; S; [( A [, C% H9 O. zI didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
# r- |+ X! y; Q' B" ybut accompanying with the time passed+ R, Y4 q* {% p1 `/ e2 J$ |1 d
I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion,$ n9 X* A+ L+ ^% i' H
always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly.! K5 n8 m4 l+ D% e* m
Without asking if you like me or if I like you
; Z( Z7 n' B2 ~: e( ]7 D$ Monly feel gracious for your existing,* ~& m7 G# d5 B5 Q8 c/ E. I, J
onlt want to do something for you.7 d2 V- U: ^! N- U# r
Every time when you meet me
' V6 P! D" \. ~& U- Nthe sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil,% d1 M( t, F I [" n, x) I) T
but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
~, U4 P8 K6 n* c6 nThat live in my heart.0 h" c5 Q# ?6 z9 a+ f9 q, |
Do you know your name can suddenly come into mu mind at anytime?
0 x8 O. Y9 ^$ e3 I9 I$ _4 j' GEven only your flying clothes` corner when you turn around, and your voice
% a U( m7 Q' ?) I& Rmake me gently distraught with happy feeling.
: F. Z0 ?# Z! O" g& YThe scene that met you prinkle in my heart like snow on the land% b4 E* B! v5 _; R: I2 b
suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
/ a1 E( F: q# h4 F3 N+ SDo you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss,
! ~( e: f6 P3 t M1 z7 ~, Jespecially on the day, the gentle sea breeze and the sweet summer.
) ]7 j, [/ ~( \; R0 Q" qSweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
! w4 ?4 P* e6 B' ^: p6 Ponly waiting for you quietly
3 {' L3 @/ E- [- @0 {just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
# x% T4 h! E+ z \I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
/ X$ r) X! g8 W" t9 G. h5 Q& Wand enjoy the rain washing together
2 U" z. e. ^, N. ^9 x7 Z. p0 B( nor rush to a film
5 z' D& _: i) M4 \5 e! h; D. H! |or listen to a music quietly.
F: k, @; v7 O7 m8 V- mWhom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?: h9 o6 S& K, H! i% _1 E
If we embrace ,dance,and gaze to each other,
8 V( R/ y5 ?# F T, y/ R, @smile or gently kiss then say: I really love you".4 H3 s& a2 }5 i( Z& J% ? B9 f
That is enough.
+ v/ s9 z' H1 Q+ a L7 _Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago,, B- U- P- a8 E* T' I& J
finely it deeply rooted into the earth in the season and sprout,$ u+ _. N+ D9 i+ a# I# {
the same as my missing.
% m, f" y* W1 J2 l5 w jIt comes a little bit of verdure.0 L/ A- |2 Y; d# h$ o
If, If some day I can touch your hand,
7 }+ `0 |; i9 i l+ t3 cthen I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
6 Y2 `! a( H/ o) X H8 FLet you touch me gently and read me carefully.
" l, j& U. I* YI will enjoy your mild emotion through your hands with my heart and soul.. g- F1 D% o# _5 A0 G- G& d
At the moment you reach out your hands to me ,9 a j5 f5 T, ?+ @
then I will have all care and ardor.
. W/ g. g, E: N- ^% u0 FShall we walk arm in arm?. A( V; @8 W- D6 O
呵,太晚了,连检查都不想检查一下,有没有打字错误了. |
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