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每当说一句汉语的时候,我总在心里想英语是怎么说的.尤其看到汉语诗歌的时候,我突然想,翻译成英语还能保留原来的意思吗?所以试着译一译., ^( @7 M: G1 u. n1 ^3 g i! ?* `
前边发了译文以后才发现有些大小写和语法错误.一点一点地改,很乱.所以再重新发一便:
4 X# j* _5 J% eEarly morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
' s1 p; g* l6 w( y8 R% Y" oPartial leaves fall down everywhere,squirrels are busily running.
0 ^ `- V2 A! m Current I, the same as one tear ago, the same given name, and the same family name.% ~# B) Y$ n8 G6 n" h* A
The same hairstyle,the same bag,reserved laughing and talking.1 a4 V; M) b% i. F& E
Seemly added something in my eyes,or lacked something.9 S: [4 b" E& K3 n) j( m a" o
Summer went so fast that I almost forgot those sweating night:. a" |$ f+ n9 f2 A8 _6 Q4 u0 @
Cats often played at the whole hot night outside windows to get cool
2 ?6 B6 ~# r/ Z9 `- V& w! `like us many years ago,mindless self indulgence.
& A# i. V K7 ^, q6 j2 f. _, HI often cherish the memory happened in summer and those people that make me raint even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming.
# Z& Z% |' d) y' w! O# V. G2 W0 yThe emotion and the carma only is a dream.
1 ~/ C* R$ Q/ J T L; zThat shoudn`t happen to meet each other last tenderlt night., A: O! u5 k4 H1 w3 H+ c0 e
I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
3 t& _9 l6 \, o2 U* [I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
, T/ M7 d$ ?- i( |$ \& a- }! {In this lonely world whom I can step inside love to?
F' V* E2 N- ^8 ~) lIntoxicated then feel cold,
1 }" D, {( j- R& x! V% sthe labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
3 q% [0 _% ~" ^I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
4 d) k) z9 w" pThe amorous man to whom you gave your soul?% C) I" h6 B- I- J
Why I am always hoodwinked!0 {9 C- ~9 P; Z
I have told myself many times cautiously - O" s# y. }9 ?- c& \% K1 g' P
don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
6 H r) Q9 l% ]" Q# h& x7 OThe amorous women always get drunk by desolation.. l% R* k2 M+ ?) v+ |; ^3 ~: A
Why can`t I take it easy?9 k- L0 X/ t4 _6 ~
How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!3 V; o0 m y5 ?) B
When the quiet night comes, E; }0 R# J+ g/ r M0 v5 O, J
your figure usually appears in front of my eyes." Z* m. W; w! A
The greeting when you met me made my heart in touched unaccountably.6 _' i$ m h" a) b$ M# D( s+ c
Yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul,
; r* N( O# Y. B1 w! c+ E5 h. `light the dark corner in my mind.
' n+ i3 d/ ?$ \I feel a bit of cozy.& g+ N9 K5 {$ f1 S3 |
The deep attached to you in a twinkling6 e7 p) \+ `1 I# |, j* {
maybe is the most light spot in my whole life.
& K# g w7 P4 w* X F$ h2 eI didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
t6 _$ `4 J% `' ^& y* ]5 g7 b2 tbut accompanying with the time passed
# v6 N. W. V! x b MI am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion,
% T9 [4 Z6 t$ G' r# j& ^% }7 Dalways feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly.
7 z: N9 o1 k/ O/ N" A5 u* {6 UWithout asking if you like me or if I like you" r( J# u0 c! u- n/ ^- \, l6 n" L# J; h$ [
only feel gracious for your existing,: Y, L# g4 @3 f5 N& ^( ?( G0 P8 Q$ Q
onlt want to do something for you.3 {5 O E' }) @' g$ k
Every time when you meet me P6 A2 X, d1 U- Z; Q0 i( s
the sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil,
" Y+ [, P# S' v* Y. J6 jbut I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
: C8 [1 {7 [+ l: K2 ]0 s- bThat live in my heart./ K9 s2 |; ?6 C" P, L% @6 m
Do you know your name can suddenly come into mu mind at anytime?+ `) w1 l# w! i+ u9 r: r- J: @6 b
Even only your flying clothes` corner when you turn around, and your voice, p8 b4 j' F* ^
make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
/ e, b5 A9 B) z; ^. u1 Q. a6 R4 [The scene that met you prinkle in my heart like snow on the land; S, F2 R) p, ?' V. u% J3 ?
suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
1 c) H5 x' x G0 w) }1 \$ r; i+ N& fDo you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss,
, S: {' Q+ \2 A3 V* F) F+ respecially on the day, the gentle sea breeze and the sweet summer.+ A: b& }. k# i6 _
Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
6 `$ ?" q$ z. v* z7 e! B% Jonly waiting for you quietly7 ^/ C1 j7 A4 Y# Y6 S3 r1 w" p: i
just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.6 p8 R7 y$ ]3 o2 P# e# L
I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
. N7 u# n- w a4 r+ D! Q" g: \and enjoy the rain washing together: o# }* c! B& O2 d
or rush to a film; l" u* Y8 L, n7 N) p% N4 Z; w% F* [
or listen to a music quietly.
' f) r/ i5 e5 p$ ~7 ^Whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
$ ]( Y+ @7 _" T* Z2 t0 o. I6 b8 TIf we embrace ,dance,and gaze to each other,
& n+ d# y' b* z- Xsmile or gently kiss then say: I really love you".
6 ?$ Z$ H! \' L2 D0 F5 p- ?That is enough.7 E( k, B6 t! d9 }4 p
Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago,
/ D1 [; Q6 N& ~; yfinely it deeply rooted into the earth in the season and sprout,
! s6 x+ X) h2 ~' ^* q/ Lthe same as my missing.$ ?! [( a" C& [1 L* ]2 R N% h2 Q
It comes a little bit of verdure.
! Y C# Q! ?$ T* e2 HIf, If some day I can touch your hand, - z) N9 ^- |3 y. c8 x0 z6 `
then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
0 j7 Y" ]9 r [Let you touch me gently and read me carefully.! C3 x2 Q& U+ Z/ o J3 U, k
I will enjoy your mild emotion through your hands with my heart and soul.
8 |/ `# q$ }: M4 iAt the moment you reach out your hands to me ,& E& p; }! q! F3 k
then I will have all care and ardor.9 N/ D* B6 m/ E& @: i( }! J
Shall we walk arm in arm?
& }/ e4 U9 T& ^+ F& k5 ^呵,太晚了,连检查都不想检查一下,有没有打字错误了. |
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