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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
1 V! t+ Z3 R/ A/ g6 F,.清晨，急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry. 9 p5 F K5 g' z8 Y. {6 f
零星树叶的飘落，松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
/ Q+ j& {! H1 n/ V现在的我，一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.
0 `, d9 W t' K1 F! o4 I8 ^梳相同的发型，背同样的背囊，不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.- ?4 u; o, `2 F, M: T+ V
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽，又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
. Y+ S+ Y9 t6 _3 h. D$ W夏天过得那麽快，我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.
- ]7 B% }! y! P6 X猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉，追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.1 C0 }$ L$ y h5 v' X2 ^2 C, i
就像多年以前的我们，似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.' S) K& l# I3 r( W4 b
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天，I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及! q* R6 O6 E& e2 g3 ^
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
$ H ^) {+ d0 b; r3 a. ]* v1 N; M( W世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
9 a8 i! ^# X* E. w6 C$ R8 r昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
1 Z4 j5 N0 m) e) v) o4 }+ {想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up. I( a! L. W: q: H' i* H- _) \
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
# V2 W) F6 g3 q1 L' L9 G寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?
' K) q) v" ^) p( o# @醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.7 n( c4 E' |& L1 A! H, y6 o
迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
1 C! N0 z9 m0 r最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have." ?1 X& h8 Y0 g/ v. T( c
多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
- `8 Q# i5 l6 H0 aWhy I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
$ z$ B- M6 P; _1 X0 p- G# q多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
8 X- `% M) d9 T( |/ Z不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.; {6 u, e3 c0 G% Z
多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, 5 J0 V" g0 {6 ?. g* f2 a8 R4 L. L. y
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?2 p; H0 {: Y3 h7 ?0 m) K1 p% H
多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
0 [4 C" `: ?1 W: b) e永难平息的泪9 `% I$ ?4 E: f. m% V
每当夜深人静时，When the quiet night comes
$ n" ^1 I; w# @' D~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
6 A Q6 r+ R# Z8 d4 h当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably. E. H/ Z( j* p
让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动，
- P% W, t4 b) z1 \1 M2 a* H你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
1 p- w# } K- y: _% o7 r一抹微笑；2 p6 {5 _8 x9 |% s) b& D9 d6 l, O
一个手势；7 q; {2 r/ q- l- X. I
一片话语，
- w* z% {7 I) E( z# J7 \愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、7 m: f: K" f) t% |4 L4 H+ G. V, I
明亮著我漆黑的角落，The moon lights the dark corner
+ Q# l! J1 d% g: [心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.
' H5 C& }. p; Z" |- b这一瞬的爱恋，The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
4 G' @# Z5 @9 R* a6 o也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..0 ~* H: p( w! L" f
起初，对你的出现，I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,3 E; D, T0 _- ]& v5 ?3 J6 D
我并不以为然。3 O; l$ W! Y) _. `. r
可随著时间的流失，but accompanying with the time passed
6 T2 U( z0 Z* Z, Z慢慢的不知不觉中，I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .
7 l% |$ F' u/ S# j8 v, f被一种情绪所左右，
1 V. A+ V- o- R% c9 b" x7 R# H总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
# u9 x7 }' o; P5 q7 {即不问你是否喜欢我，Without asking you if you like me and if I like you, v2 ?; ^2 {2 a S' P1 k4 m
也不问我是否喜欢你，1 f& I1 X, s2 p- m% Z- ]
对你的存在只感到亲切，only feel gracious for your existing.$ }" Y+ [! E- O% L0 A( i+ |& z
只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you9 s2 v) n! S, U7 b0 S/ ^$ `: J
3每次有意无意的遇到你，every time when I meet you9 A8 E+ J" A' d! E b. O
心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil
& S9 t+ E+ j6 s5 U; Z然而我真真切切地知道，but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
" h1 l3 y1 \- _1 o; S你的身影已化成一种氛围，- C& s" x L6 j: `3 q4 T
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.) \+ |6 a$ K4 Y
你知道吗？Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
% R- G4 {1 p" {; ^. L f随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字- b3 f* _, ]4 P# K) L& E" r6 P s0 j
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud，, R" L2 L3 O* j) N" i' E5 V) Q) k. t
一种声音，and your voice
6 W; H: E% a v+ j6 f# B+ t也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
[) W/ h# \/ Q4 q9 Z$ M掺杂著幸福的感觉。
8 y ^! |) @0 P& |/ @& g( \与你相识的那一幕幕，the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land( S, V" u4 @' R8 K/ o1 n
象雪花般撒落在我的心田，
& x6 b1 Q/ [1 j) w& o2 M倾刻间，suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.% o0 ~8 p& l4 J
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。" c' n! g5 ?. G
你知道吗？Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss8 w# _; U% e4 Q8 M7 W5 }: d9 C
有一个能够让思念的人，
0 H! O* t9 |: q其实也是一种幸福。! ]0 |5 L! g+ @0 _. j2 n/ K9 _
尤其是在这样的日子，especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer. 1 Y& @7 P" S, ^- f1 J" B
柔柔的海风，8 j0 i' h; y* i
甜甜的夏天。: X: e, t( V7 V* n. J. @. Z
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁，Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
3 x2 m9 V' k+ {5 r5 U只是静静地等待你的身影，only waiting for you quietly.
% h% ~" H3 A! p2 n仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人，Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
7 R& ?+ ?4 i1 l* e想和你有共同的情结，/ e3 `" m Y* u# P) z' t
共同的心愿。' G" R a- |+ W3 Z: u
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' | c, ]7 O, G) } {3 _好想与你在细雨中漫步，I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
s7 C- s9 P. ^' _9 s) n一同感受著春雨的洒脱，and to enjoy the rain washing together, e9 D5 r3 A- h3 o9 U( }
或是赶著看一场电影；or rush to a film , }/ a" O: g- l$ @4 x3 d
或是静静地聆听一首曲子，or listen to a music quietly.0 E1 U) j- }2 ^" {) {" \
『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
A# W0 J; e1 n y我们相拥旋舞，然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
, B: Y1 T$ E, X# e浅浅一笑，smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
p! y% z/ w, C0 b或是轻轻的一吻，; F9 A2 c2 j- k% n& V
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』
! i1 r/ t/ A3 v' O9 K. x4 H' Y就足够了. That is enough.
B7 |% v, b' E+ }# R. q2 h3 P这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子，Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago!
7 l2 R1 d8 {8 r' B" n: q终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根，finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.. ?2 Z, {) k' F4 {& T( y. n6 d
萌出了芽，0 M: a# i5 l& [9 v1 I
一如对你的思念，the same as my missing
" s2 n# r* _" ^0 ]浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
8 p$ B: {2 M0 V) m: H3 y如果，如果有一天，If , if some day I can touch of your hand
; R8 w' q5 |8 h) ?) G能够牵著你的手,% [! D: c8 r( U; e
那麽，我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里，then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
1 P' }/ }; n6 L) W7 Z让你细细地触摸，Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully.
) H+ ]4 k* O2 |4 X慢慢地细读，/ Y# S# c6 w5 y, V+ ~
我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
# w' U- \* d/ m7 Q3 S7 h/ H2 y在你对我伸出手的那一瞬，At the moment you reach out your hands to me
" b# Y9 F \- @+ a: f- s我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱，then I will have all care and ardor 7 H8 _4 c1 F$ ], B' B" ~# l# Z( ~! L/ t
就让我牵一次你的手，好吗？Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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