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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,* E% w* x- a% X @" h
,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry. ! Z# \6 h; @; Q* j2 y& F, Q& s4 l
零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
: Q) |5 e |2 Q# H" ^6 s现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.
$ g% l# j$ a) b9 y7 S7 a- P梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.
# q6 d& E3 F; E9 f& M3 ~4 y4 r眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something. M8 X. B! t6 r% \3 j& T) p! X. U! B
夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.
5 Q4 p8 h" W% I猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
4 z, |" Q$ ]9 \1 L就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.' a Z) x% B+ t3 P! E0 e7 o! G
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及
7 F! ]- o% y# K, _8 i9 y+ C那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
8 j8 Y- o" H( }1 e7 Y$ f世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.# G" X, }2 o8 N% ~3 X) K6 ]
昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
4 W4 h# @. v; m7 K3 i! r想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
1 H9 Q7 A, T& E) ?0 ~( K0 D. K( a+ E8 u最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild. . c- z4 j; E; N6 y
寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?
8 |, f% J; \8 p; a! U* p! ]醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
1 b: v5 y7 x- @" D. D0 [ W# f2 z) P迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction., h2 C0 \' a1 |6 c3 K% i4 F
最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.+ B( H' [ D1 Z. l7 B
多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?. J2 R+ ]. c, Q, P" U. w g, d+ `( O
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' …./ r& V. \5 g, \* r7 H# Z
多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously [# n- z9 T6 F/ q% \$ D
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
8 b( G- A8 k- o* ^1 X7 w$ l+ w多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, , P: e6 s' b# D# I
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?$ j3 ^, s" \# P; r! M9 e
多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!6 A) [2 k( x2 a" ^
永难平息的泪
1 e% N2 R0 H. b6 m每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes# }0 O9 _* ~' l6 V* o2 D
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.( G2 H# P8 \+ k0 o
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
2 o% i% ^ S# d7 J3 U+ W+ }让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,& _* ]: q, T5 F# G0 p1 \- A
你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
+ e' W: v7 { P一抹微笑;
) C. w' J7 N, }% H. T7 f一个手势;
; w0 S6 }& W0 q! h5 L6 d一片话语,
" \' R& y9 O* S# U- _愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、2 c* O5 r6 C; C4 n: e' B
明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner
7 p9 v# d; L# O' p; Q/ D心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy., c. t6 B9 L8 k+ u
这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling3 V/ @ u1 s9 K5 s4 s
也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..0 v( i5 J, R6 U: X6 d/ e1 }
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
( ]" m5 U, C! e4 Q我并不以为然。; \9 J2 a" G" S3 Z% |
可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed 2 t M$ E. \; Y
慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .( ]1 n' l0 Q: l1 I3 M
被一种情绪所左右,
3 C0 M+ _# V! }! G总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
# |' y- M; v3 F' a) ^* u即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you# P: `1 e5 d; X0 N
也不问我是否喜欢你,) s2 Z; K. g- c, @ V
对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.4 Y# A1 m# ^' g
只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you# t o# e9 B& c# M( M; U+ ~) [
3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you
- [$ m3 c7 X7 y; j) U心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil
* ^2 I; V; f7 t3 ~4 z. H: N1 u然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere 5 ~: ?: p$ p! a# h+ N: a0 r4 u
你的身影已化成一种氛围,
/ b) s8 S2 K+ z8 S记在我的心间。That lives in my heart./ v' l6 O! `; B2 g6 d$ T, K! Z
你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! 3 B( E, ]# |3 |4 n' b2 l
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字: U/ F3 f+ ?- Y
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,2 ?# V- [# m, |& L8 i4 I
一种声音,and your voice
4 u8 T T- e8 @9 r) Z也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.5 A0 o3 B' A2 G9 r8 p8 Q- o6 X' z/ J# b
掺杂著幸福的感觉。
! _, t( w4 M g+ {1 p, O" N与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
% s+ v* v" _( \6 m' _% ?象雪花般撒落在我的心田,
0 G) ]6 i" s7 P9 v7 H, _% I倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
3 H1 t, a' `+ T. {2 c, M纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。& G0 f1 B, s) A9 N/ } t4 G' R: J# P
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss) P( ]& h4 X" }0 R. P
有一个能够让思念的人,7 S/ g; w* Q0 b4 b! ^6 I
其实也是一种幸福。: m6 ^1 N, T- J% N0 w
尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
7 G, ?/ R( { G5 |9 B7 F柔柔的海风,- g6 \ C1 a% O" z+ @
甜甜的夏天。
' T5 }8 W+ N) h/ J# a. ]4 y一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy 4 k$ w, Q8 O) o, W
只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.
8 w1 \* U% A% S0 ]$ y仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
& ?, C, y; p# o0 |3 l想和你有共同的情结,2 b C6 m- N `, P5 ]# z0 z) r
共同的心愿。0 T6 L( r3 D! T! i% n+ c9 D
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
# B" D1 o5 x! n D0 ^7 Z一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together
& R5 Y* X" J. U: v- [( _& K或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film 6 d5 f' K3 W7 U0 E- z
或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.
% G# ], Z* w2 m/ L, J; M『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?5 d0 P n/ R- w* D. m
我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
( C. H6 n: p9 {5 n3 o& O浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”" r; d9 _3 n$ {- Y* z$ c
或是轻轻的一吻,
3 |2 a9 o$ o$ M再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』
6 k. `1 ~/ Z- y就足够了. That is enough.
+ M6 k: D O& k8 o这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! + f9 A7 ^+ a5 h, X8 k9 a, I( m
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.9 I# ] ]" d( E& S
萌出了芽," I5 _$ D6 A2 w# c: P- Z& x
一如对你的思念,the same as my missing
8 q3 c+ b" |5 W, [! _# `; N浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.% j2 l" q( d8 M t2 i* m
如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand
) D2 O% m1 ^- H# ? S* M6 g能够牵著你的手,! s( K. V- R5 R* |" K; c
那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
5 `) \* n0 d$ I/ E, O Z让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. , i9 y. O; ~/ X
慢慢地细读,
" o/ Q: ] u$ T9 l% a我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. . D( X: K! ~& ~/ A7 p$ t
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me
1 o6 `# ^) y. r5 h7 P我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor
) h+ q8 B# T9 @2 p+ p1 ]) F- l就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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