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每当说一句汉语的时候,我总在心里想英语是怎么说的.尤其看到汉语诗歌的时候,我突然想,翻译成英语还能保留原来的意思吗?所以试着译一译.. a& j$ Z# f0 \
前边发了译文以后才发现有些大小写和语法错误.一点一点地改,很乱.所以再重新发一便:
2 I* B% y/ u6 L# s, SEarly morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
' D, P- r9 k+ q& w7 E4 qPartial leaves fall down everywhere,squirrels are busily running.
( d" G! k* |% q+ o1 H$ | Current I, the same as one tear ago, the same given name, and the same family name.6 _& k1 E/ z* e6 b/ n+ I' u; W
The same hairstyle,the same bag,reserved laughing and talking.
0 j6 p- N, \% [8 F- `$ C' P3 C+ F/ USeemly added something in my eyes,or lacked something.
1 U% V' g+ { U1 E( G! i1 HSummer went so fast that I almost forgot those sweating night:
; x1 }/ s( x6 E) z1 TCats often played at the whole hot night outside windows to get cool : y1 h: }1 Q9 Q0 f- U( x7 t
like us many years ago,mindless self indulgence.. a3 _+ B: ?3 c( Y4 n. ?
I often cherish the memory happened in summer and those people that make me raint even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming.
+ R; P- t4 w3 r8 FThe emotion and the carma only is a dream.1 v: K9 F* x% h: L6 S
That shoudn`t happen to meet each other last tenderlt night.
) f6 g7 Y( k( I4 a% D# gI want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.5 h/ r3 H9 m, _: P5 H3 s. y: I
I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
9 l1 n/ }9 z/ ^% g3 ?In this lonely world whom I can step inside love to?
8 U3 A1 N9 w. z' Q' j9 t1 _Intoxicated then feel cold,! b! @1 x2 s6 H, R# S. X$ {. F
the labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
$ T$ W' t# C$ i A9 RI am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.& x& i) }5 t4 `# U" ?+ f
The amorous man to whom you gave your soul?
/ Y0 g. V' H; p. N! Y9 a/ f. gWhy I am always hoodwinked!/ `+ {$ H/ _3 P8 \% ]3 ?
I have told myself many times cautiously
' d7 u" D+ {* R* }$ mdon`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
9 [- q% H$ n* LThe amorous women always get drunk by desolation.
4 {7 G3 n% R) RWhy can`t I take it easy?3 o6 e6 M9 f* f& p: T8 M) Q, H
How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!7 X4 T9 d6 c: t) {# q2 W1 @) f
When the quiet night comes% `' T" O( g$ Q3 c
your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.- T7 `+ x9 \7 G. ~% f
The greeting when you met me made my heart in touched unaccountably.
0 w) p* z6 Z( ~( E7 rYours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul,' g9 ~* A& _, a+ c
light the dark corner in my mind.8 B; Q) e( E: j2 E
I feel a bit of cozy.
! B3 \' v/ J( [/ M, J( h4 T! [$ \' OThe deep attached to you in a twinkling
6 ^8 s5 r0 H* z) ]maybe is the most light spot in my whole life.+ w+ R+ g9 ?! ^* R8 E
I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
8 Y/ i, _; {: h5 ]0 e$ `but accompanying with the time passed
W6 A8 y' v7 C. w) Y* Z [0 OI am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion," @3 ?& F8 D* S: U2 Z; f- M
always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly.4 h+ G) i9 }8 L
Without asking if you like me or if I like you
+ A9 n; B% M4 i- t( J! Aonly feel gracious for your existing, X: R [3 p! p8 }) Y0 o
onlt want to do something for you.
}4 \( I( c9 B3 D- w* Q2 oEvery time when you meet me/ u7 S, K$ k N3 l& P
the sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil,9 {7 }, U t: z, w# \; f* S# P5 A/ R: T
but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere# L2 }) a/ W, t { ?; u ^0 s# H
That live in my heart. p* T9 j1 g8 X& c$ f) p% _3 t
Do you know your name can suddenly come into mu mind at anytime?
* |+ y/ J1 ?- R1 M' f: w2 K% MEven only your flying clothes` corner when you turn around, and your voice
& f4 G- E: s& Q O. j hmake me gently distraught with happy feeling., c! V3 a4 F. y. v
The scene that met you prinkle in my heart like snow on the land
) X9 }4 S, Z3 Fsuddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
1 y2 z8 W( L' t$ X+ F0 S) IDo you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss,- T$ D; b: f1 |# E
especially on the day, the gentle sea breeze and the sweet summer.. Q( z: ^) T* Z2 q( B1 n
Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy 0 L( y6 I3 E6 A5 B/ x( F
only waiting for you quietly; V" A: a4 C+ v2 Z
just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
# D% M: N4 T' X: |& E' pI really want to ramble in the small rain with you
9 l( ` ]) J" \' }* Iand enjoy the rain washing together1 s" l( \3 E; z. |: V
or rush to a film$ \. f- f# u" h: w# E9 R, z. E' D
or listen to a music quietly." X: X3 m' Z2 {5 {7 v
Whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
. P# {6 q. d$ mIf we embrace ,dance,and gaze to each other,, p4 @2 q* R0 C* ~: k
smile or gently kiss then say: I really love you".# O/ z" O" K/ s/ ?0 O. k) V
That is enough.. n$ s+ T7 b6 N: @+ [
Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago,
' w6 ?9 q) |1 mfinely it deeply rooted into the earth in the season and sprout,% v, n" Y/ d5 i) C o) A
the same as my missing.; x8 ^, ~, E' R4 q
It comes a little bit of verdure.8 S: A- J, ^4 N" r8 Y4 }5 m
If, If some day I can touch your hand, , z6 h2 Y4 Z, n& S, O, W3 z
then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
( N* Q# R$ ^4 s! \( W' ~% x% \Let you touch me gently and read me carefully." e5 I0 S, _. i! a1 f, i0 U- l
I will enjoy your mild emotion through your hands with my heart and soul.3 B/ ^2 h5 d+ z) M% L
At the moment you reach out your hands to me ,+ t0 p' N! y1 v4 x8 Q
then I will have all care and ardor.
6 Z% n# M" v; o$ YShall we walk arm in arm?; ~* e& d$ ?* P7 ~) ?9 t
呵,太晚了,连检查都不想检查一下,有没有打字错误了. |
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