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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,( H% _3 C7 ~- i, o+ J5 |
,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
3 L& _& r( J3 X$ R零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
4 e# T* y A6 P+ c现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name." L: }% f( n5 ~
梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.
2 v h c2 ~7 `5 v5 Z7 q眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.! e, x) E7 h, X: f
夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.
, N- D5 u4 N: S7 ^猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.- e. z# r& k+ B) U: ]9 Y
就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.
/ }0 u4 d$ J5 ?( l/ l9 B3 k我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及- J% l# l0 r9 {/ ~, [0 |$ Q/ i
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。6 M9 f+ f9 A& |. v7 v7 ^% b
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream." D! S" E3 _$ w; g, n4 B7 B1 q1 Q
昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.8 j& B4 k) E5 o$ F( w
想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
5 Q: i4 t+ j9 I最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild. - J: N; g' _) z' S
寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?" A. ~ e, {1 @
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
' _) G; _, i+ U _ Q$ G迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.: W( f& p% y# i8 J3 ]
最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
# u+ Y3 X: f. V( F h4 ^3 m) o9 J多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?* m- H$ m/ x5 Z" n8 M6 N
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
C1 S/ V1 n$ L多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
2 h0 B C( m1 W不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
: p2 j7 X( g9 A多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation,
! ?% r. ]8 F% ?0 F为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
$ T5 c3 Z5 X$ `多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
4 j6 X3 q0 \2 |( O永难平息的泪5 s0 X6 A6 r: w0 M& ^4 k. k+ T, z# ?
每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes
( A" o7 S+ C( Z" |0 q) ?, o~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.6 }) A, u6 I* S& E$ d
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.7 D6 h2 p9 M! Q' ^0 V9 M: i; n
让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
( [9 ?$ U7 O+ T8 h6 Z0 ]你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
5 O2 K- ^" z6 n! M% \7 f一抹微笑;$ `. R: w0 U6 z+ U5 ^- i
一个手势;2 }# T, F; L/ L- P+ j1 h$ N
一片话语,
) ]+ @" }) g% c7 t( C愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、
; b3 `5 s' M3 Y' ~. V" d明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner. ]& q B4 d. P+ w: u# _
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.& l* ]9 T3 ^( _' k( f W) m( M
这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling& T0 t2 _+ r9 e
也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..
o& p3 [0 H; V6 d起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
- J$ ]8 k+ d- A9 }8 y+ G我并不以为然。% V" ]' f) A& z
可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed
0 Q9 P0 X" G8 y慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion . W; f" W; d- r2 z
被一种情绪所左右,
8 p! r9 ?4 N1 g8 l3 K总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .& s# r2 Z4 m3 j, g: t8 o3 P
即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
. P3 C; C& f9 M也不问我是否喜欢你,
* d9 X% S$ J. T m4 ~对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.+ O5 G8 _# D3 b
只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
6 p: F0 c& C$ s8 h/ m3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you
1 h& ^* ?/ V* x2 `3 @心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil- [" o A' J/ Z% N- F+ x* @
然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere . r1 g4 O8 i8 f% Z( ~% n7 j. |6 l
你的身影已化成一种氛围,) r6 z9 g9 Z- I& r
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.' u' W; d, Z2 t. r! y3 u! h
你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
/ K( I9 h* n' a t2 C随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字
2 e6 N# x7 k* i( r. b8 T! H哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,. K0 x! I& h9 A4 m
一种声音,and your voice
$ Y0 G1 A; i$ |" A) L9 V2 }也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
/ P6 ^& d; R T" c. z2 J' k掺杂著幸福的感觉。9 w& Z `7 e1 j0 { H5 ], x
与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land! `8 V7 a8 X, I
象雪花般撒落在我的心田,+ p! W4 Q6 R5 K7 X/ R6 {0 g
倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.$ T+ ^' P: ~* }6 S9 R( O
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。
5 ?* O. `+ G8 K4 Z l& Z) g' }6 j你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss1 R9 S6 {: m" K0 v( ]: Y1 p
有一个能够让思念的人," [9 z# t/ D8 {# }" }
其实也是一种幸福。, Z4 b* d9 w' C; g3 k- L! s8 r, g9 \
尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
% f9 d M a. k1 h柔柔的海风,! w/ N: H7 b& Y! q, F' ^0 ^
甜甜的夏天。
a2 k# c) l+ r' o一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy % _7 M/ l e1 e g2 F9 w, b0 \4 V
只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.
& `# f; f$ n* z& b) u0 g* q$ T5 h, i, i仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.. t( d2 B" |$ ]. {7 X# ?) h: `; r) `
想和你有共同的情结,
# e$ K& i4 Y0 D: Z, ~共同的心愿。
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you; f2 E) f E3 _$ N2 r+ W i8 l
一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together
7 x l* _( T2 \或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film , G) M Z7 |# q7 q
或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.! M4 q6 M6 C/ B) S
『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?9 h, r$ W5 E0 [! K2 m2 E
我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
" y9 i4 S9 x2 }8 s2 w浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”7 F! }1 }9 f: @8 t3 m2 J) j' [/ c
或是轻轻的一吻,
$ R4 \# u: E3 y4 P3 a+ m2 x. b8 G! i' Z再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』1 t, h" R/ Q; e- G. s+ x; Y
就足够了. That is enough.1 o7 R( o% p9 O0 U3 F- R+ P
这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago!
q* f. t1 U( s终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
+ M; w( C- W4 `% j萌出了芽,6 o& `+ \# e+ V2 E7 O; J4 f
一如对你的思念,the same as my missing8 m0 e9 R0 X! g% o" {4 ?' U
浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.& W/ a5 N# I% @' S- d9 b; U% a# r
如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand
' G9 ?* ]& l. c7 s能够牵著你的手,
8 m- b( H; Y4 [. ?0 o1 |" [$ O! R" l那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
K* T% |5 @ |让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. 5 K, h% U( C3 M* C D& \' D0 M* D
慢慢地细读,
$ p8 h* H: Q# j: O- C5 D+ O% a我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
2 u1 h1 |4 n2 e0 ~' v4 }在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me
$ c' ^* C M" w9 B我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor ( k' d5 V/ }# f# I5 I
就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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