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每当说一句汉语的时候,我总在心里想英语是怎么说的.尤其看到汉语诗歌的时候,我突然想,翻译成英语还能保留原来的意思吗?所以试着译一译.9 n9 Q$ f) s* _6 x. Y- m" q. z8 k
前边发了译文以后才发现有些大小写和语法错误.一点一点地改,很乱.所以再重新发一便:; R8 R2 X, { ^
Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.' H4 K( h6 |/ O6 G5 N
Partial leaves fall down everywhere,squirrels are busily running.
' y/ |: I9 a# b7 D& y Current I, the same as one tear ago, the same given name, and the same family name.
8 ~! [9 r' w( RThe same hairstyle,the same bag,reserved laughing and talking.
6 `: Q3 {& Q: r% B: NSeemly added something in my eyes,or lacked something.: \5 F% {6 j) @& b
Summer went so fast that I almost forgot those sweating night:
( R8 y9 D7 s' H6 z o) kCats often played at the whole hot night outside windows to get cool
3 V3 @: u6 W/ p Q9 H2 n" a+ Vlike us many years ago,mindless self indulgence.: w9 v6 A: L4 R: H8 p0 c% V
I often cherish the memory happened in summer and those people that make me raint even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming.+ j `/ M- L. @0 w& |" y
The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
% ?$ Z: I5 b k6 K8 IThat shoudn`t happen to meet each other last tenderlt night.
7 j+ o$ T6 p2 l0 V3 @. Q5 kI want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
8 X0 N1 p* G' m# C3 \I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
. B |% @4 ~ c Q8 ]* UIn this lonely world whom I can step inside love to?
w8 C; J# h7 E! o! G; h3 i4 eIntoxicated then feel cold,
" y+ }6 Y$ p Othe labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
& K* M$ }+ }: k' L$ o3 T- CI am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.. l1 G" E* v& A- g. ~$ w* i4 P
The amorous man to whom you gave your soul?
( K% r$ S3 }- \3 k& o9 eWhy I am always hoodwinked! m5 y0 J) B& q1 s6 ^# ^
I have told myself many times cautiously
) E9 ~5 ?; _, u# _0 Pdon`t fall into the spoony whirligig.6 O# M. f+ L( X: O c, J! k2 V
The amorous women always get drunk by desolation.
" }, s6 W2 O# p1 Y3 w' S! p1 ]Why can`t I take it easy?9 D' V5 g; ^% a3 N; K
How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
- ]8 f. X( r0 FWhen the quiet night comes* D. S2 z4 g s' u
your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
0 r; ]1 m' \1 F3 A/ s* J/ `The greeting when you met me made my heart in touched unaccountably.$ _- g1 E6 l5 v
Yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul,+ T6 T# C; m* ~- V, P- ^
light the dark corner in my mind.
' T' [; [; ?9 F7 L; fI feel a bit of cozy.
. N1 K/ I$ w! h LThe deep attached to you in a twinkling8 {" d8 S( a4 |1 |1 {
maybe is the most light spot in my whole life.6 ?7 E9 R4 d: A; F3 r- s: l1 M% Y+ s
I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
( b% B* e. {8 }8 Lbut accompanying with the time passed
% M5 z2 m7 l2 ^" a2 S/ N% G! wI am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion,
0 Z4 S* {. i/ Y: \always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly.
" [! v" `. T* B5 e: \Without asking if you like me or if I like you- |2 v$ _. j* Z/ m4 T/ Y a k
only feel gracious for your existing,$ _8 o* n$ Q7 V. z% G5 [& X
onlt want to do something for you.+ e7 j2 M) o, Z, a. v1 u. N, x; U
Every time when you meet me
/ m- m5 q! G3 }0 O9 ~8 G/ Xthe sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil,- R9 H* J# f" |. A7 n1 K
but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere- v) q! x, s6 A' H! U w+ E
That live in my heart.. ?5 q t1 _) M- L, ]
Do you know your name can suddenly come into mu mind at anytime?
. [5 E$ S' y; N* x" j1 UEven only your flying clothes` corner when you turn around, and your voice
6 ] n9 h" @0 Pmake me gently distraught with happy feeling.+ X: P7 w3 a$ X4 j# m( M) w4 E
The scene that met you prinkle in my heart like snow on the land
4 r' U* g+ ]5 e7 T( @9 p8 k! v bsuddenly flurry that all are the love to you.5 u2 T) c: |1 Z, P. b
Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss,
/ V' ^+ Q9 P- f4 a7 Kespecially on the day, the gentle sea breeze and the sweet summer.' H, p7 Q3 J: P0 ^
Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy / u# }* c$ R* E+ G U
only waiting for you quietly( e8 S/ E+ k3 t0 b8 l& e1 C
just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.; @% U* k5 H* s) R$ k* W+ e3 b
I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
4 V8 }* N- u5 R& j V2 Vand enjoy the rain washing together0 A: X: g! M; |8 O! G, A
or rush to a film' [* N# w& Q6 Y
or listen to a music quietly.- ~# l4 r: r/ v, J/ }7 K1 Q
Whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?+ _' p' q: q& S5 O- T% ~
If we embrace ,dance,and gaze to each other," ^) _' X$ x( b/ H6 h( n! r( N& d, V
smile or gently kiss then say: I really love you".
) @) t. f) P* l, D6 ^' QThat is enough.
# w: b6 \: U$ y% w' D, L" p, [Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago,
" V3 g) I0 k |1 ~7 e8 Q$ ]% tfinely it deeply rooted into the earth in the season and sprout,
# k; P4 q6 w8 M, |the same as my missing.
) f6 H2 `% f" L% _1 eIt comes a little bit of verdure. e" L$ y3 m" g7 S, d9 \" C/ W
If, If some day I can touch your hand, ' F Z% z! M. ~1 A
then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.- m4 t, ?* }# e/ |7 `
Let you touch me gently and read me carefully.
5 C* d4 o" ?+ ~6 Q9 K7 A% GI will enjoy your mild emotion through your hands with my heart and soul.2 B2 k5 |/ P3 y; p8 x
At the moment you reach out your hands to me ,
5 R: f) v, b# d& l& g: nthen I will have all care and ardor./ H3 D* F, M1 H1 A" R
Shall we walk arm in arm?
1 {- x0 _# z3 J1 F. D2 `! \呵,太晚了,连检查都不想检查一下,有没有打字错误了. |
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