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每当说一句汉语的时候,我总在心里想英语是怎么说的.尤其看到汉语诗歌的时候,我突然想,翻译成英语还能保留原来的意思吗?所以试着译一译.
1 c& c7 W$ i3 |前边发了译文以后才发现有些大小写和语法错误.一点一点地改,很乱.所以再重新发一便:9 f) l7 d# {6 L
Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
. v+ t5 E- r8 a1 Q% @Partial leaves fall down everywhere,squirrels are busily running.- D8 j2 a8 A6 {' e3 x, J; E- J: ^ Z
Current I, the same as one tear ago, the same given name, and the same family name.1 q, p$ S: i4 _7 r& v
The same hairstyle,the same bag,reserved laughing and talking.
- e6 V: V, S0 _ d( E* Y% fSeemly added something in my eyes,or lacked something.
; X3 C3 U7 p0 pSummer went so fast that I almost forgot those sweating night:9 X8 N" } K) ^. \
Cats often played at the whole hot night outside windows to get cool
9 ^2 H& w, Q. _) a( `9 zlike us many years ago,mindless self indulgence.
3 |8 m0 A( J8 _; z+ ^! uI often cherish the memory happened in summer and those people that make me raint even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming.: D4 m/ v" G# e5 f- Z9 }
The emotion and the carma only is a dream.7 {+ M, j- U9 c2 d2 u3 f$ n
That shoudn`t happen to meet each other last tenderlt night.
+ ^6 B# S' _, S. E8 cI want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.# q$ T$ f! b3 O, F/ k+ F2 I
I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
6 O5 ]0 P$ K) T, L: ]# iIn this lonely world whom I can step inside love to?* s; W$ x+ |9 t! h. g" S
Intoxicated then feel cold,
" U1 _. v' ~ a& e. X6 bthe labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
) w5 B, G/ B* m4 Q5 ]9 LI am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.- v. V+ H* E% \. ?7 @2 t/ G9 [/ _
The amorous man to whom you gave your soul?
6 O2 b# M+ Q9 G `, U; B, F' F8 KWhy I am always hoodwinked!
8 U* H" b! W1 J! }; J ~I have told myself many times cautiously ! T7 m' A9 _) |5 v9 C7 a, }# Y
don`t fall into the spoony whirligig. ?1 J9 c4 N6 B; x# k+ O3 y
The amorous women always get drunk by desolation.- b0 z9 R7 Z7 @
Why can`t I take it easy?. g; }9 C7 |: {6 J: B( V$ Z
How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
6 K: o) Y6 g3 Y4 ?0 M, yWhen the quiet night comes
5 X, F; e1 z$ N! d% W6 D' ~your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.6 W9 m4 k+ H; S/ c1 t3 E8 J
The greeting when you met me made my heart in touched unaccountably.- h! N8 _! r4 z: W
Yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul,
1 h/ ]7 S( W2 N: C4 z/ e; o1 v# f1 tlight the dark corner in my mind.% k( W1 J( Q! R$ _: x
I feel a bit of cozy.$ o7 p. | m' h2 w7 i! x: U2 x8 W
The deep attached to you in a twinkling
( \) C- r+ K8 U I2 l+ S* Nmaybe is the most light spot in my whole life.
( ]" v% p% |, c# d1 {- TI didn`t cherish your appearance at first,4 Q/ d/ n( d9 l% s$ a- e5 S4 S
but accompanying with the time passed G" S) i/ _: p4 U
I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion,
3 L( c1 q9 {# r# y- ealways feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly.
R+ {' m! y- D( W" u, |+ X5 s! uWithout asking if you like me or if I like you$ M% P9 q. X9 p; A* T& `+ P
only feel gracious for your existing,
8 s ?# B5 P+ e2 |- ^) Tonlt want to do something for you.
, t% ]# Q6 R8 ^* w( |2 h" OEvery time when you meet me- ~8 M/ \# k$ }% {2 E
the sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil,3 e! O6 L1 l: b% [2 `) p4 z
but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
) y6 J4 V. J; h3 C! J3 UThat live in my heart.
K) h8 G! L" s( P8 i7 aDo you know your name can suddenly come into mu mind at anytime?
3 J4 N0 f) l( |7 YEven only your flying clothes` corner when you turn around, and your voice/ h7 I5 L! ^/ P! `+ g: h
make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
% j$ o3 I1 |& @8 X; J$ VThe scene that met you prinkle in my heart like snow on the land/ Q: k+ X# o' r" j
suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.' a3 X& x6 e! F, A4 ` Q2 U
Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss,
5 u. l! K3 I7 ]4 H k# @+ fespecially on the day, the gentle sea breeze and the sweet summer.1 q8 z9 [! U' L' {
Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
( L4 A8 Q7 x5 U# E2 Z* Qonly waiting for you quietly
! W. ~& W9 J5 R+ H$ Q/ qjust let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.+ T: O0 o3 B G0 z5 \: `( K5 `
I really want to ramble in the small rain with you 8 a. x* } S$ n; s
and enjoy the rain washing together- }( s3 U* T8 S, p" F
or rush to a film ^4 i8 E; m5 N
or listen to a music quietly.
4 k. b0 i% i7 v; aWhom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?9 U3 |+ s2 {7 m5 q7 b7 c% }2 i
If we embrace ,dance,and gaze to each other,
, @4 i1 I; D( Q; U& R9 r# M- ^0 _smile or gently kiss then say: I really love you".
4 W5 ^- m* P0 ^/ U1 h, X2 ?% @That is enough.
: f [: b) |& x( n4 ]) \2 @3 xMaybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago,
/ ~- z! |0 N4 U0 _1 B$ qfinely it deeply rooted into the earth in the season and sprout,, |( n/ C6 _) [$ U& c. ?
the same as my missing.3 k3 o1 \, d. }& j
It comes a little bit of verdure.6 m" d; L3 ` N9 {1 O# V
If, If some day I can touch your hand, # u" R- }, W' B9 z$ s
then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
! H. U5 P S6 x/ G& d/ BLet you touch me gently and read me carefully.! c) i) x$ ]! I7 N. j
I will enjoy your mild emotion through your hands with my heart and soul.+ a" o0 j$ x; K6 ~( D& C$ Y
At the moment you reach out your hands to me ,
/ N" j! {7 I( E$ ~then I will have all care and ardor.
/ O2 h! A+ f! `8 [Shall we walk arm in arm?4 F+ n7 k8 r) Y& V
呵,太晚了,连检查都不想检查一下,有没有打字错误了. |
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