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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,+ O9 m9 [7 L3 F
,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry. 6 {; T0 D% G8 ^6 f$ u+ m
零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running . 4 y+ o1 `8 V) F7 ]2 o' \# u/ C
现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.
* U$ }( Z' L2 K( K# {梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.
8 N' c9 r5 O: E3 j眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
& x' Z3 M, |' o4 _0 x) i8 H3 r夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.% {- j7 Z" ~$ a! X' h/ W" M( }
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.! G' t# z3 T9 Z" Y
就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.# g/ N2 \/ X% H- W
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及4 Q2 F# @* i8 Y+ |# ?
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。/ ]6 i5 L+ v" A I: D6 }) C& m& x
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.; v: t: a! _+ _5 k0 s# O. A( k6 O
昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.% i5 ^* {0 c* K
想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
: E# d/ X5 x+ Q/ ~$ O/ u最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
0 B2 g+ d* x! x: ]# ^* A寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?& X. Q; w. I# j1 E
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold. W5 ?' u' a) p- l
迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
, m9 d& ~ l3 L; y2 V+ z& H( a最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
8 P# D1 C, P- i; S z/ ] A多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
. g! ^ T; N- I2 ~7 F0 VWhy I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
4 p5 p2 Z4 O1 D1 h6 ^+ q. |多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously* c s' o! |3 s; J
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig." X% [# V5 S- b, t& P7 Z$ m2 g
多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation,
4 [8 C' G8 |/ S& ~$ _为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
! B1 }/ B7 |" S* w! L' ^) x6 B8 ^, b多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!/ l9 Z; T4 f; E( d/ D
永难平息的泪
- X8 W t; e+ l2 |- v每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes. \! w( E1 a# }( V- w
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.* B/ {4 m2 H$ ~5 k- y
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
: @- D: e2 h6 f! Q# H! n' \让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,$ W+ y0 L! [9 h
你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
$ _5 _$ J k/ H6 |( Q4 K一抹微笑;/ R, b% e; s- p8 U: H" u" E
一个手势;) j5 Z; I1 M* ]0 `7 @
一片话语,. H7 S6 f* [5 ~4 g# X# p' x) \# s! o
愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、
2 Q, ^4 A! ^: H; b明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner
8 x& e" U" F, ]0 M心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy. g( D1 n# a8 Z! }" {: F0 i
这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
' b6 s, H: r& b: c1 ]也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..
$ C a) i7 h* A' w起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
2 K: h6 Y& p' L4 L6 r- U# Q7 G我并不以为然。
! q! X J8 _% |% ]可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed 3 |2 P/ M& _" {3 d: ]1 H* T. J
慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .
. x1 V6 H6 U, l. i+ Y被一种情绪所左右,: H5 y* s/ k% f# y) y3 t
总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
# p! P" ]* O6 i, _: {5 n" u即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you9 k0 Q% p8 Z, _
也不问我是否喜欢你,
$ t0 P6 l4 G" D4 w* J) ?' z0 b对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
4 z* G% a3 \4 k# a1 H7 U- P: E只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
" F6 Q+ D% N& T, ]3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you1 v3 o- D% Z' z2 g( ~' o6 M2 |
心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil
; z! \, l) U, K; g然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
' u" u( q" D5 Z4 |你的身影已化成一种氛围,
* I3 ^9 b8 U( V" W/ \记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.
, d5 L6 \) r. S* g d: m你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
. s0 ^9 o1 }. h1 F' u% n: {随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字
, v4 D. F, F9 J, W* C哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,
& l' R' G& d; H2 W# g一种声音,and your voice
% }, @$ a/ T# e% @6 i也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.2 j) e) O( j+ ^
掺杂著幸福的感觉。
4 h' P4 A5 j `: d与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land" W5 U1 Q" D& W' d# s% Q' Y
象雪花般撒落在我的心田, @9 A/ C4 d' R) J5 J
倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you./ e0 M" B4 W4 W' z
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。
# L6 L7 w5 G$ G6 `+ z你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss
9 ]8 U+ W& Q+ `' c有一个能够让思念的人,
/ [: Q3 g0 R7 u- o) C" A, q其实也是一种幸福。
/ x! K' r: T- P1 r尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
8 z g0 x0 }# ^柔柔的海风,
& Z3 J" q9 Q- u/ ~) h2 t9 G$ M甜甜的夏天。
9 j5 b. K$ |/ u. F: L) u2 r一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy - \3 B- x& Z) g/ z7 W, ?
只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.
/ e: i" [ w w3 A仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
$ I( h# O/ L+ c! J想和你有共同的情结,
# V; |/ ^- j# w( t8 p: N# @4 G共同的心愿。
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2 |; Z, w8 `; q好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
0 e% g& C( `: j& r/ Q* ^一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together
, t/ b- G2 E. N5 E6 J D: @或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film 0 \3 t1 J0 \. U& A4 Y
或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.
3 ]: h. E/ t8 g! B4 }; C『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
x7 ^4 i n' I我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
9 ~( @1 R3 h) }0 B8 G浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
7 p! K1 D5 M$ U! a9 u: F或是轻轻的一吻,
* N9 @3 K1 l* Y! g$ w再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』
9 c `9 Q7 e5 v% x/ l就足够了. That is enough./ m# f1 B& t# e' U
这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago!
$ d0 y8 [, }. ~1 ]4 v' E终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
1 E: f* n! ?8 X, H! v萌出了芽,1 N6 f4 t" H9 |' o
一如对你的思念,the same as my missing
! O3 u& e4 W" ?( G* P' N浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
. O# c" I3 ]% K2 O# \如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand
+ J8 y8 H. V) T: I0 C; q; }' K能够牵著你的手,( b( H6 u9 N& c. W/ O1 X |
那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.5 t9 Y) l5 g6 O" P$ Y9 ~% Y3 j
让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. - L7 D1 Y; X6 f- I" G
慢慢地细读,
! N/ Z# K9 Z' s7 z$ W我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. - f7 [: S: I, U7 @3 D1 w, W
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me
2 h: q. V/ Q. @( I$ i6 P6 t y2 t我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor
. G. |; j1 V, o就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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