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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,& S* b# ^; A+ U7 B( [# J- W. @ G
,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry. 1 d4 l, M1 L/ N: W# f! H+ w, \- o
零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running . / ^+ s7 h. R/ f" o
现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.+ d) u1 R$ L( D ?% a& t( v; x
梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.6 s8 B/ y3 y4 N) y
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
- [( T/ G! W, ]" b夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.9 I3 u/ P! `& T# }2 h3 \
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
7 C* L# X7 ~5 |7 m7 g- D/ q就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.
9 h* n. k- O" s2 |4 q我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及
& }- t- Y6 M7 N2 D那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
# L1 y/ n& r! k' a# i1 y6 g世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
( v |5 H9 V9 `0 M9 @$ ?) I8 o昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.( s" u: {( p) Q% t5 O
想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.4 A( ?; G# o. Q$ ?( a7 }# H B+ }
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
- o6 N! @) d. M+ I* J寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?7 m- U6 A7 T! P: F( J2 y) {
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.3 Y! H/ W# p" \( o. q7 E, N* w
迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction. Z# u( D8 i2 U) R# t
最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
) j9 A5 [& I- ]3 L& g4 {多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
6 H' d/ e3 L: UWhy I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….# \5 V5 ^& x3 Z* |$ c
多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
; \8 k( I) U/ F0 e! B& t) H W不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.1 R+ d/ M( X( r* G" ?
多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, ' D$ i! c( X* M
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
: j8 s! Z; c' E: E/ T多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
# k5 j: Y) e$ k# v' o永难平息的泪' g. }% u( f9 d1 g6 Q r! w+ U
每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes) R' o# ]2 ]9 T" A" C
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.5 z" b5 ]* Y" X
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
" a1 k. f, {6 S让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
/ l1 b* ^& H: C$ [你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul " I! W4 C7 m4 _# K
一抹微笑; T; O! g' t. ^( t: l0 |3 A
一个手势;. b) ]0 I2 Z Y
一片话语,& z, f' j* |! t
愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、
3 `% p# O v) n/ |明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner; B; _+ I( Z R
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.6 p) G( o0 {/ s4 R- p- v
这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling5 V4 X/ n' M0 t4 |9 W
也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..9 E& s$ V4 L1 Y2 U6 y
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,( a, [# T# c; N# ?& b
我并不以为然。' g$ c1 S- |9 W/ e
可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed
+ l$ _8 R) A8 k* s5 x慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .3 g2 V. I8 v6 t# D3 N
被一种情绪所左右,. h" A% h* E! |! g! o ~
总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
[3 }& b4 i7 C1 Q7 S' e& J即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
2 k1 U$ ~1 r% }+ h也不问我是否喜欢你,
. G; b$ F, E: e7 m5 T对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.( \# @ W8 Z/ ~; K1 `
只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you g. r- e( ~, V; ^, E& E
3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you' V* l9 q# M$ k* o0 M
心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil
, E1 L# L) i+ k1 P" K然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere $ C2 P( S1 ]( `# M; Q
你的身影已化成一种氛围,3 O3 s4 H$ G F
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.
; V1 K( r5 H, K. U6 l$ A你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
" m" o, x: H1 L1 P. O随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字7 B9 x# p- I( S2 @8 |3 O
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,
# f. H, F& F) h) A- \+ ^ ]: `一种声音,and your voice) v0 a! z" ]8 W$ m% {6 i2 C
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
c8 j) R+ ]) B4 y- J8 s掺杂著幸福的感觉。; B" }6 F r$ C* S. D
与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
; j b3 J" ] }" C, W象雪花般撒落在我的心田,
0 A* ], f8 s0 P+ P' X7 K4 R- u; J倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
6 P4 Z3 R. j( T3 c7 B8 d& B纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。
: B# B5 k7 x& D4 h% A4 w1 U- H0 J你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss6 L, p- j8 B+ [* L6 w/ P' b
有一个能够让思念的人,
; `1 @# O6 d0 v9 l+ X其实也是一种幸福。/ L+ q# o2 A9 O5 q1 X% v- I! K/ ~
尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer. h, l/ i% p+ H8 {# m" \
柔柔的海风,
% K0 Y! a4 i* d7 C6 h* ]8 A甜甜的夏天。+ a( q2 {1 L$ h% t
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
' |/ H5 N4 t- N/ R8 I- H只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.% @2 N; ~! a( {6 h' a
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.4 M1 g. d/ M: @, }3 c' x! g, _
想和你有共同的情结,
& O% [: A, q6 ?8 {, k* p1 ?' V共同的心愿。5 N! C* M9 S* @ H8 Z6 H/ Q- X
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
8 _1 H g4 H6 ^: `: L# W! `- t一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together
6 \$ x p2 S/ u) h: [: o" g6 |或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film
0 S" a$ I; d; Z) y3 T1 X& N! H, B或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.1 x7 v9 k) L* B) S3 J* U
『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?/ p* D; {+ m0 l. {5 }8 k
我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, 0 E. G. C; d& c$ P4 s
浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”6 u+ q0 L9 s" s# k2 |* ?& ]6 l
或是轻轻的一吻,
" @5 d0 q8 I3 o2 h再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』
" ]5 U3 p6 m1 P p; e- N6 T就足够了. That is enough.$ d/ f6 w( t* o; I9 P$ Q2 h+ k
这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! / ~3 Q, [. X2 m! H8 w' D& {
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.1 @, E- A- L8 J
萌出了芽,( h0 R* F& B, D! z2 z8 Z
一如对你的思念,the same as my missing* d. a% ]; ]: y7 J
浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
$ n1 ~9 p2 |- }9 A/ c" l, W8 q* B如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand
D6 t. [- \& \! o能够牵著你的手,
: \4 y& z1 r+ p那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.6 W/ o: G; V! L
让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. 5 T2 o( k- L, y. A$ S
慢慢地细读,
5 G8 Y% v5 F- Z! e) N我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. # E& h7 K: q% W* u% m% K+ c8 D3 T
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me
$ c4 V! [! n+ O( q' p P我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor ) [% x4 }8 t8 y+ a# Y
就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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