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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
$ x( i; P( r; l) y* N y,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
9 Z0 w; x. |% x零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running . % v4 k) y( H* M2 N' B
现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.
% f! o5 S2 f2 K, M$ R梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.' U# _4 Z! N. o7 l6 d. O6 E
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
: `$ P, w, N, Z* C& j夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.$ M0 p* ?! x4 V. `# u v
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.; y% i4 M Z/ u
就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.
& H0 N0 v9 P5 w( h我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及4 ^# x7 {3 s0 @. ~/ R5 Z
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
3 a) ^7 K8 \# v: G: w6 ` f7 C* k5 O世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream." k8 a8 ]0 W$ L- }) I
昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
3 ~$ h; |; P" a5 D想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
! X* N% [8 U9 X7 O0 |( X2 y4 }最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild. * m! J \5 x1 ]4 ]+ |) X9 E d4 @
寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?
& p% A/ C+ {9 X4 G* S' q醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
: h- J+ D) r, K( l9 S |迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.) S+ Y2 P6 D G, H# j
最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have., ^; \* o" S8 r. O
多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?3 Q' }. \6 ^6 ?+ p; N
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
, V. K r& @" K! }3 I) k+ b多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously% U# J0 }/ g8 M
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.$ J) ~ x( g& B3 Z8 y
多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, 3 W; U0 l# p8 D6 p
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?- p# g% ^+ B& U! N7 Y* @' X
多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
2 k, J T" O Y0 M永难平息的泪# A' ?' f! @- h6 N- \* z0 s
每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes
8 A% u& t3 }" Q~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.$ d* n$ c6 P3 z; G! z D
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.0 H3 n5 k; s |/ n1 ~+ `; o
让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
' Z9 f8 u8 Q% k. e1 a; \5 r你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
# a% ~( `" @# r; \一抹微笑;4 b( z8 F* N$ n) q( h8 D
一个手势;
1 v% R' Y+ ~- O3 b6 a1 M/ g一片话语,
5 [' k. v2 T3 i愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、6 X) Y3 k) | S
明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner$ u e4 t7 K G" q( o1 P# S, E% T7 @" }. o
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.
# @# U2 y0 v6 ]这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
$ g0 t9 O5 `# a3 ~# G1 y也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..5 W+ X* ~( L8 U+ y/ _
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,. i- e' N3 O5 K1 y; w
我并不以为然。
- S k A# j. ~- D6 z可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed / Q$ L5 Z/ n. i4 f' _
慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .
( c) v) n' m q; Q$ a) \" g被一种情绪所左右,* K7 m V/ m% d9 @ Y4 o1 O* F6 f
总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
1 p4 ?. |1 \9 y即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you* }1 M; v; m l, H- ?9 j& G
也不问我是否喜欢你,
' O7 n* V0 X; K对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
4 O( K# I$ a; |" ?- l/ G, I, q& ^) Y只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
, b& d4 k& B2 _0 o, n0 l* O i3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you1 B) h, p) J. e- Q5 J! ?) F7 ~% \
心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil
3 s6 R$ K$ c- p然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
# [7 ^4 b/ J! c; j8 c你的身影已化成一种氛围,
) Q/ @/ a8 E6 w& i& b, S& E: \记在我的心间。That lives in my heart./ ^+ o) _0 F* {" q( E
你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
8 n; f# I& d( x* w! h. K0 Q1 |随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字
& B0 N4 |7 r5 [' ~* D' {, S( e哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,
: e# ~: P) K% ^( C& |一种声音,and your voice0 V! v% u' x* }) I6 n6 h
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
% I2 z: ^3 W0 u% _! k+ q& F1 H掺杂著幸福的感觉。
; N' {1 N1 x+ O! @4 b与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
$ g: H; {2 A) r* o" ^# m: q象雪花般撒落在我的心田,, Z/ E7 u6 e& q/ M3 S7 _% D
倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.% q- l/ j" X* a5 a: D$ D1 y6 a
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。# n% j' C4 P) E" C
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss
" x) Y9 p( |* z* G, o% z有一个能够让思念的人," Y" ~% q: w8 q4 x; L2 s
其实也是一种幸福。( z6 l- y( F* J+ Q5 D B
尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
+ l9 c% D$ Z0 ?( U7 z7 b' @, c5 s柔柔的海风,
: k- d* w4 P! _5 E8 p8 z/ h甜甜的夏天。
6 r, s# V/ d. ^3 n2 r% }( [一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy 4 h" a6 n) }0 o3 K: n
只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.
: R7 |' T4 d% K7 t* @6 Y仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
( ]+ y8 M" T% K1 I/ m0 e' F想和你有共同的情结,% G4 h7 j# H# l' I
共同的心愿。- k% Z; e5 Y6 w( Y% j+ O$ @
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+ `- [) m- s7 F7 D5 S' A好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
! E. a* o" Z: _8 [4 n% L; ~一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together
1 v8 e5 x' o" C或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film + ?/ Q3 O# ~' J Q# K
或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.
4 K9 T A/ Z m) v$ \『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
9 }1 S$ J3 t' @' O我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, ! P0 _* ^5 b, l3 s% z
浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
( [% w9 j& y4 M3 E r- }或是轻轻的一吻,: u# e {. L" l# ~
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』
' N9 B: X, K* `: a- Y+ Z7 o就足够了. That is enough.
: y# m2 n' k* W1 ~5 N2 p这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! 5 ^4 b( t* N) x
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
8 f9 f7 Y4 N0 [5 a! g7 W: `$ F/ H- }萌出了芽,, S' R; q7 m" F+ W: ?
一如对你的思念,the same as my missing& U) h; J: S! j R1 n# @
浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.9 P# V& Y( O; }% B& m
如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand
, [8 ^0 C% O+ C: u能够牵著你的手,5 N7 t+ U; E0 c2 ~, ^
那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
9 r6 u7 V$ ~ k让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. 8 n; [% Y1 [6 G. l- @0 e
慢慢地细读,4 Y( j+ C9 i/ ?! M- z/ e
我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
V! C Q# K q在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me
/ Y% Z8 S8 b3 G$ k4 g6 ~* A- H我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor
; H8 _* t1 |) \) ]就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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