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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
- ~$ c( b; o$ e l9 D" K' d,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry. 8 r* Q) @8 g1 l# A
零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
?; f) m# Y) A5 l( H5 Q) p8 a" c现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.
1 Y# t" |# i9 t1 v3 W/ r4 M梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.
5 ~' x# A5 A7 M$ B1 F" i& y1 l眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
0 J9 d" O# D; A: ]& S夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.8 D; L, e Y( V+ `" Z9 z# D
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.7 v3 e5 P! E5 ?, f! l
就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.
/ h& |* ~7 v5 V我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及8 S& s' T, b0 m1 v S% g
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
1 E1 D4 X* ?) n世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
% u2 P' L5 J) ]2 y! {! k" g# `昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.) ?6 C8 T% l0 Q9 v. w( v! h. D
想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
4 [0 ?$ i6 [7 l+ y4 a* q: F最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
2 H1 j' Y' u7 x寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?% k5 l4 c( Z+ o
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
& u: N1 C f) i迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
8 W, T6 \" u/ }4 J4 h最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.1 `: d H9 P% d( `7 R
多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?- e, U1 D a. y( {6 p5 r, [1 b
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
' q1 y( j D! w: y多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously, {& [4 i/ t4 z! F1 L: w7 J
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
: p# f( l- Z7 h8 S( R$ ?5 t多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation,
/ F+ N6 \3 A. K为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
8 i3 R0 G$ R' q$ b, g1 H多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
+ e7 P1 ]" W1 w/ y6 b% w4 V% _永难平息的泪( z- d+ [7 {" H9 G) |$ C
每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes' Z- K- s l3 d5 S" e9 S' L* R
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.: B) n1 h% }: K. o0 T( t; M$ u7 f
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.- {% J8 ]1 t) B& `, @6 K: O: B: Q- b
让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
, x5 Q+ ~6 C# L$ o你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
) j, B( Z/ G+ b' |) L% C" R一抹微笑;; _+ q2 x9 C# a, {, [. N
一个手势;4 a8 |2 E& U$ ~- ~
一片话语,
7 \3 [% ]0 j, n1 o% Q( t: E: `% {% g3 Q愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、
# Q" E& Z1 p# @$ m明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner/ d+ o$ U$ T$ p3 _: ]) Y: c6 ^
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.
0 M1 y" T, v U; i% m, x这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling, \( }; W8 A, Q4 ]+ Q
也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..
0 z" ]3 h8 O% m8 N2 v起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
- U! l& O1 g q+ x; E) \我并不以为然。
2 j( V, E0 |& B0 X$ M/ Q9 C: u可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed , C. [& j5 e4 A& s9 q$ a6 [
慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .
: e6 i/ p- U& g/ y k( c4 @; `被一种情绪所左右,
7 @& R% b% @1 k# F2 f/ t$ k总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
W* F6 d! }* `7 x6 x; i, Z即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you+ J: ?$ f6 E, j
也不问我是否喜欢你,( ^$ O* n2 c8 v% I1 o$ G' d
对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
a9 D4 T. [+ V/ @只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
+ P" y' O' E" x0 ]: N) @! t3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you
* B# q2 ^3 ?6 q" B9 P1 @! o, h心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil; ` K0 E8 p6 L# Y
然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere + F/ z; B) n M ?2 j1 M
你的身影已化成一种氛围,
) a1 d# K/ Q& C. s) T6 \" q! r" x1 {记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.
7 u0 [9 B+ ~, d$ z1 w6 Q5 F你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! 0 c) h+ Z( E+ F% H' W0 o# J2 b T
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字% o1 }4 H" z1 M) L) e! w% n5 u
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,) w' _1 r% @) V9 w9 f, K# x
一种声音,and your voice$ G- P8 P3 g4 X
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
, X9 R8 _0 i0 o9 }: l, {掺杂著幸福的感觉。
) P+ ~* t* o4 L$ r( Q2 @5 l+ _ @与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
5 R8 P/ G9 C) ?( _/ _& T* O6 v+ P l象雪花般撒落在我的心田, ^! ]* p5 m0 z3 l
倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you. |/ a9 m* M, i* o6 L1 N
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。
" Z1 N' R* H" ]( H" c; `: i你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss
" w8 ^. f* d. n1 b有一个能够让思念的人,& f; o% v( y, J. J
其实也是一种幸福。/ f- p1 s/ E7 J* }3 g! [
尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
& C+ F, o# y) W1 {柔柔的海风,, |# u* L9 K* O& w" B. I6 c6 P
甜甜的夏天。
+ n2 o1 i) V* K( r9 L. `1 K, W一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
8 X# w" o5 v. O0 d只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.2 m+ y' K1 b5 E% {" X1 a
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.0 \& s! X$ ^2 o! k6 {# Q* Z' Y
想和你有共同的情结,2 m+ w6 R# i! n& [# w9 _
共同的心愿。
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1 v, p+ x* B2 b+ e& Q2 N8 P好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
$ h+ k) E/ P" ~# w2 Q5 K; Q5 w% X+ u一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together3 M0 T) k1 H7 j9 D. M
或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film # Q4 s( v$ ~3 b4 D& H
或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.
: A3 F0 E# w b! ~0 l7 n; c『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
8 I& t5 f" Z. b6 ]7 N2 A; x我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
3 y% f1 k- O& \! v' K6 {浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
8 k9 F2 h l1 {4 S) \或是轻轻的一吻,3 a! Y" h$ S" N" G$ O) ]- e' I
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』* T* M" p) Q( K( A8 u i
就足够了. That is enough.
4 N5 k9 C7 e# X5 J4 @7 F这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago!
5 G% W8 X9 E% I& q$ B# t终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.* x3 ]9 [, H& X+ I/ K+ R( }/ f+ K
萌出了芽,
( X8 l- S* K1 f# h o一如对你的思念,the same as my missing( T7 a8 [! v7 y7 ~8 w) A% ]- S/ h7 _
浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.; k) n# g, s# Y6 z) v, r
如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand
" Z. D' W/ o" e1 n能够牵著你的手,% t+ F7 [8 y, {# o5 k( {* x
那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.3 c4 g. b! \' c8 N
让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. + e4 b7 z+ q( P* o/ g$ [8 W- _" v- `
慢慢地细读,
( B7 L+ b1 S% @$ X* R) @! y& w& B我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
6 l2 v. s6 \. |5 w! r在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me
% |) d4 L8 f/ U0 ?! w, S& {' `3 U- o我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor * x3 a7 M) K: v# z; _1 J# L) ?
就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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