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1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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2 b" a& f" r! v- H a 改进:Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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, q: r" I. @3 ` 2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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改进: Suppose you work in a big factory. 4 s; l8 m: p3 ^8 Q. h- M
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3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job. 0 V8 F- O* ~" x; L# S
. J- k7 L( u3 i6 y 改进:You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck. ' t0 w+ r8 N A5 Q- C; V
+ C% P# X' E" ] 改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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; H6 _3 i ?7 f2 B6 M7 [ 5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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0 ]0 }* Y& ?: c$ a$ I2 T/ D 改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life. 4 @$ q! j$ S: ?9 h2 C) x
1 K4 ]: F3 c7 {9 i7 { 6. Their brain is still very young. : I6 O8 H8 q" D2 C
5 e5 t* K. y, V( W1 _0 n4 w 改进: They are still immature.
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7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better. # _7 }6 V) i% A0 Y2 t
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8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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B' n" n+ W6 p4 |" M 改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it. . n5 {$ z9 F" H( P2 n) Q
* L! W2 P0 D- |; v 11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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9 `& S5 D! N9 j; l% e$ Y! `! Y0 O 改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development. 4 y2 _7 `: s+ y
! I5 c1 a D- }& P0 F 12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money. # _$ k; t1 l6 g0 k' }8 ?6 ~
5 Z' r: |2 y9 l, U, Z9 D7 D 改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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! Y3 I# l( `& s$ v 13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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- a9 z& q' d; r; h. R- R+ ~# u) Y 改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money. / @1 S; { J, v( n+ i
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改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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' n+ t$ f. u* x4 d+ u E6 f6 k; I( n 15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products. . v" V& M! i v$ v5 u
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16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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1 S: ~$ M+ h* y, Y 改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians. ( K1 g2 O6 t0 c7 k& O0 c) H0 \9 a
2 P9 K* {- Q' s: S& B/ V; Z1 p( _& S 改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand. . o& U' t5 P8 |% W2 {! M
, W2 Q; ?# A* B( @ 18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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' g9 k& s" ` V& A1 Q% ^0 j 改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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19. They cannot think clearly.
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改进: They cannot think straight. 3 f" i4 u) e$ q1 Y( @
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20. Money can improve their living standard.
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改进: Money can improve their life.
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+ B7 H, F1 A, }2 ~3 }( R 21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money. - V Q* X2 c* r5 @( A h
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改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money. 0 l& G: q: P7 N/ L
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22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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0 U' \# u" ?: S2 v! ? 改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life. , V' x: o3 Y: B
9 G: Y, N9 ?. ]4 s6 u 23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later. % h4 P M& t ]; E
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改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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0 S4 }% y. j7 c6 [4 t3 {+ ^0 k2 ` 24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano. , V3 `6 e1 d4 x1 B- ]
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改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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" i0 z# o" U" t( I* u# v* L# {! i 改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
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26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing. 2 S4 k& E9 J- q
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改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
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27. Smoking can help you relax your mind. 6 V9 s0 Q, }, e U4 q. L
! n# c" ]$ m' D- i- h" m0 y 改进: Cigarettes can help you relax. 2 ~) F% V ~: d7 z6 Y
J: B2 r) L4 [2 J+ p/ i- d. w) a) T 28. What's about nonsmokers? 7 d$ `6 w3 m. N+ g0 d
( E( w/ a! n, J$ i; }* z; L1 Q# ` 改进: What about nonsmokers?
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29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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改进: Why not be a non-smoker? ) J/ ?$ z* c, M) P+ C6 R
3 A+ Y6 M8 B4 M" M5 K. ~7 u 30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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改进: Everyone has friends in his life. 9 U7 M0 @# n1 e k( h( d
! m) U/ q1 p5 l 31. I am not good at maths, but English
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改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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8 ?8 c4 q8 ~) Z7 G; f) I 32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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0 e U# }+ o6 O5 n0 c) p: A- D 33.It is children who clear about their interests. 5 C+ e: c8 f0 B
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改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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8 j! {' Y# c4 e& E 34. I agree the latter idea. $ B5 c, |0 L% z7 [* O
" ]# p) f \" m/ m* Y( W 改进: I agree with the latter idea.
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35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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1 o7 {3 Y, A8 b; K8 y/ V 改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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& ?4 _# }) d4 {7 q& ]5 L( z+ r 36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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- P: c/ X2 h3 x 改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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2 c% B, R" {7 R h& R" ~ 37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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改进:People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn. / m" Q4 a! ^$ S- U2 N* p
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38. No one knows all the things. ; t3 k/ a' j/ `+ h3 W
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39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life. # B4 ?5 E% i5 \+ S& \+ f
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改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life. - o& Y- T, H) H) u
; j6 W/ }4 {7 \+ e5 _( W4 O, e* @" K 40. Each form of having friends has its advantages + {( ~2 [; U( x. S
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41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up. + Z. X5 y% |8 G; P! u. X* D, w! P& ]* ]2 e
6 t: f2 [# H4 ~( u3 V, Y 改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply & ?8 s0 c: f/ R
, ], O- \; A3 i; f0 J 42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
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改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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3 ~( O: P# t; w5 G/ o 43. They will learn the bad habits. 7 ~4 t& n' X& W2 i5 P4 O1 N
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改进: They will develop bad habits. , X' Y6 V; i) N/ j6 u7 g$ Q
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44. In this continued process, people make progress. # E" M! U1 \- v/ j. S0 I
2 d( b5 B7 i0 Y2 D- D0 C 改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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6 {/ F6 i6 N; e* Y9 t 改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary. ; V0 h1 \, ~0 B6 N
: q. ` }/ ^& I7 ]: S, V 46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings. 7 ?8 N3 e. T7 K( X8 @
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47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact. . i+ T. u( F( ^2 y: s; ~
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改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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: C4 ^! R3 A& Q6 P 48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing. . q2 V# i2 D" B: r' e1 c& W
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49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost. ) d } p6 c! h# [4 E
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改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss. . z) j1 f' V& ?" @. B8 w% k
C- L) u9 U# Z$ T# f; f/ T* b 50. I felt alone. 9 `: R% N6 R9 [
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