锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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. c- x' m+ D5 C, M　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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1 S( v) X9 x4 W, [1 e8 N　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

7 v2 h9 s3 M$ m7 U　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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$ `) O7 d/ s7 ?0 h: G& m　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

& h( ^1 S8 b& k$ e" c& ?1 m$ ^　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

: T& ]/ x7 s/ a　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

8 C6 c% {4 [& o4 g　　6. Their brain is still very young.

+ V! |1 V$ W- b5 t! ^' o　　改进: They are still immature.

　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

/ v; f6 B$ u% e8 K& R; [　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

; C2 k% Z" j. W　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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$ c8 ]) t7 K! T: F! ^+ V/ u　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

- X: S+ N# }2 u# {0 c" W$ F( O& W　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

" s; O6 C8 D; g+ @5 S　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

; z) [6 b1 A$ m4 {: f, T　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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% _: ~7 ^9 M; l# G/ ^+ Q& p( c5 K　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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" Z1 E8 |* Y+ d　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.

　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.

　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.

! n5 r1 U% h$ [) \　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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　　19. They cannot think clearly.

6 X+ q5 X: q9 D　　改进: They cannot think straight.

　　20. Money can improve their living standard.

$ ^4 |( Y6 ~0 a　　改进: Money can improve their life.
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, E5 A" S& C2 S' a　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.

　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.

+ }& ~- K" F' G: M- J9 [: P& O　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.

　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.

　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.

　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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, I3 |( l+ p+ @9 h) l. c　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

, ~9 Z$ X! b, p+ F" l5 L　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

0 B. H) k# f) M3 K* ]　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

& L9 [' C! \1 A+ R- r! w7 m! Z* W, J　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

　　28. What's about nonsmokers?

　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

, h$ o  d5 z" I5 t　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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2 S+ Y, S% m! K　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

8 Y; l9 I% z6 C6 ?0 P$ S3 j, M　　31. I am not good at maths, but English
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" ?( m/ y/ t) j6 ^　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

) M$ @) y: p+ a# k8 E. z1 u　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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) {  p; \1 h! w/ \9 h- R1 m0 V+ G! J  }　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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/ t- n: g6 |' ^( h- }/ A　　34. I agree the latter idea.

　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.
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　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

' A+ \' i- W, {- P' c8 Z4 i' g　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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. T) l( @9 q4 I  B* ]* A　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

- Z  A0 c6 f) ~　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

! t& T* g. q% F8 k　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

; |  ~% N8 n, P; [0 ~% w　　38. No one knows all the things.

5 `" ~" F; L  _  x6 Z　　改进: No one knows everything.

  M$ |" D8 d' K/ h( _　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

, j) ]! O. K+ E0 R" j　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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. ^, d5 W8 V. s( W5 T/ X& g1 Q4 g　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

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　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

$ v! T( C; T. N% x6 b" w　　改进: They will develop bad habits.

1 U" G; p6 h2 m9 P7 L' Q6 ?　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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$ T' n- _; ^- a5 w　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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/ R3 o" \& k% p# G' n1 {　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

, l* C2 p* \0 W: W  M　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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7 X, F( m, v( z　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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1 I* [8 A( y3 @5 _5 W) E　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.

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　　50. I felt alone.

　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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Thanks

sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka