锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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1 x) g$ k" N9 {& C　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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. @( H3 Z; [( W8 |/ @3 H; ~　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

5 E5 N: A, F0 N( F) q! I3 y　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

# H0 t) z6 N$ R) V2 ^- u8 O# ^- ]　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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4 s2 {; n5 _" S$ B, {) ^　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

　　6. Their brain is still very young.

0 P* o+ \2 G$ S& Y6 z　　改进: They are still immature.

　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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, Y3 |; C; M) p. Q. G　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

) z  {  O; y5 B8 n$ x　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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7 [1 }5 K0 \0 O　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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& p: l, a! S5 [　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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0 G5 T# k+ O# h) _' ~0 _　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.

6 }5 P- s# T( W. Q* c( N　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.

　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.

+ Q9 m9 L& p7 Y; r6 h- Y" \9 K　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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! o7 M5 _/ f% W" ]; n3 G1 s　　19. They cannot think clearly.
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　　改进: They cannot think straight.
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　　20. Money can improve their living standard.

　　改进: Money can improve their life.

( q$ D6 z* N* V$ V- k; u+ u: L6 w　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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0 u9 y# }, u$ s* v7 _' f" d8 N　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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: a& p/ z. A5 s　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.

　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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1 i; c$ z1 {5 q  X5 N! D' I　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.

　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.

　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
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　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
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　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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' A1 C" I4 M/ x; w/ d! [　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

" |( \  [" ], Y3 g1 r9 J* l　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
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　　改进: What about nonsmokers?
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　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?

3 d4 j+ a9 W1 p　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

　　31. I am not good at maths, but English
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　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

0 C5 r2 Y, B# N( ]/ t/ M　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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; q- g! T& U5 }- v/ C. f/ b9 ?8 a5 B　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.
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　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

6 U$ b+ ^2 u/ b! F: P　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

: Q) |% @. B9 G: q　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

7 J! [1 S! R8 v/ Z7 ]　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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/ Z4 Q/ g1 o, g　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

; g) a- w0 }8 p" E# g! N　　38. No one knows all the things.
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　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

* y3 o6 b! ?& s, r; p　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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- J( L* f' h0 M  S　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

3 \) k7 O3 v: m% V% N- e* p' e9 L　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

2 V; G+ O- S, I$ l( z　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
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$ P% T7 q' z2 g% C! O! u3 G　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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4 K! w  d) [. q% a　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
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　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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9 L8 g9 G) f2 t* B; Y　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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3 C* H6 Q! N/ O; Z) J9 V/ u+ ^/ P　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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8 C0 @' c9 S3 F  l　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

4 @  K& B6 y' k! Q- ]# F4 u　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

9 w5 {6 k" ~" Y4 f3 {　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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& [9 @2 X  j: ?5 R& R7 N　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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' ^, v6 d- W  g$ q4 v6 u　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.

0 f1 E0 k6 h7 Q( \8 C) G+ S　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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( w4 [. f# h6 Y　　50. I felt alone.
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　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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sindowa

随便

平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka