锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

! K9 J. r2 R. I% |1 ^1 }　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

" f1 Q/ }+ c5 d! Z　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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  Q! D# s$ s. O; L; U　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

/ E1 ^" S3 i4 I8 x; q8 K4 T5 W  {　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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　　6. Their brain is still very young.

$ Q0 |$ s4 w9 P　　改进: They are still immature.
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+ t7 C, n/ F4 f- w　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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8 s; j5 O7 [. u' D  [1 C: x　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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8 p0 T5 \7 {  N6 [4 o1 z' o　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

$ D; t- J; L! p* G, E! D　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

7 [- x! I8 y8 g( Y1 N　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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+ u$ d/ C: R6 j7 o4 I) |　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

; F: C% ^; \1 V  [　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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6 l5 A3 a; J  M) a+ C# |/ J* G　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

$ e. A& o% p$ f+ C: }　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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& S+ C; Q7 l/ X0 B% K　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.

　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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, {/ `/ s! v8 |/ c- P$ I　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

, ~! U, _6 C/ }- A( M　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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2 z5 x5 S: H) O( J- H! ]. ~9 l　　19. They cannot think clearly.

% F9 j( r7 N3 p　　改进: They cannot think straight.
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　　20. Money can improve their living standard.

: w) B( q# E6 u　　改进: Money can improve their life.

" O* k5 u2 h5 g. F/ Q　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.

" c) F0 ]2 P' K' ~　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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/ t! |+ `* l1 i0 T5 Q& x　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.

, r+ d, D8 C4 f; Q; e. a　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.

$ J. ~8 F5 X6 Z. a& [3 I　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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# L8 r2 c8 l; N# Q" b: O; T& t) c8 V　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.

. U$ w# ~" \* n$ Q5 e8 ?; I　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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9 |7 L4 R* M' {　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

) B0 j3 y" u* v( Y& V2 F# g) }2 t　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

' s1 @* a" U! p" N　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
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  _( I# e( {$ X3 |  P9 {, x　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

; a0 p5 ~- x+ \　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
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2 S! s* H  {8 N+ \! w/ x　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

7 q3 c" x5 J4 l) Y; t9 A　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?

　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

8 O% k) }! W/ L  w  n3 a　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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　　31. I am not good at maths, but English
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  \* g. m8 X% N  ]- K+ }( r　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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2 j: T& w1 R1 t( q: g　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.

　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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, M+ B: ]" p7 g7 n4 A& N6 R　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

; m7 g  I& ~* Z$ q: x　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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+ k; H" V3 ]7 B( F! L　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

" l3 q  }; w; H! O% a/ M, N　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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2 @1 \3 X" E! F$ v$ L2 L　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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" q! a# I0 m! `1 J　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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, ~/ D8 b) k9 j$ t+ Y1 T# s' R　　38. No one knows all the things.

　　改进: No one knows everything.

1 Q7 R' j, L. ]" B0 k　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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) ]- v! _/ W4 z8 f　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply

　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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5 n4 {/ T6 T9 R9 e　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

0 ~6 N6 S; h& u. g; s　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
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' Q1 L9 O6 k- C6 i; i+ d( I　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.

! Z5 P0 u6 o4 k7 Q　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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$ t8 R) y! X" P- h　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

# j, {; f! ?" j% I" a. {" T　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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" t  r1 {7 i  e: G2 R. o* E　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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: t* f$ M3 v: H! C　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

8 O) P+ O, E3 `, R5 n8 z: D6 ^. o　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

; f" e0 V! ~/ \  r9 F$ g/ A　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.

$ ]0 T% I# c% M; L+ h! ]- Z3 r　　50. I felt alone.
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% [$ c' n  c, ]% n- ]　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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Thanks

sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka