锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

& |: s' Y8 E2 @0 a* Q　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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& }/ q0 D5 T( O7 T3 g　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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( v# {5 ~- F+ M# D　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

3 H5 ?, g3 x$ v1 @; F+ ~% |　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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5 R; @1 u: T! E0 r6 g　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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& @2 I4 L" u# W, Y4 h1 R　　6. Their brain is still very young.

' m' j- v" `1 b0 k7 v4 W) P　　改进: They are still immature.
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　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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9 J& j3 `* G' t# @2 q# G　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

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8 [, _) [$ H  m/ G" X/ i　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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8 g( N; o- a% r+ u1 Z# `0 G7 `5 v" _　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

3 H+ }* R' x; x2 f8 f- V/ R　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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+ G3 B8 E  M. d# G1 s1 H) e　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

& ^) \, |) P: Q' f8 V　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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# g- i- S! Y- W7 ]% [1 R( g　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

) v0 K" A' L0 P/ u) a' r　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.

　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

5 d6 j2 \! p: N9 ]. V　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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" v' w( y$ d3 W) ?5 G　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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, b( |7 g- [" `; _　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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9 E0 G8 b$ {, b9 o  b/ J( Y( P5 P/ a5 s+ ^　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.

- a2 c7 p! ?- X) k9 K9 `　　19. They cannot think clearly.

　　改进: They cannot think straight.

　　20. Money can improve their living standard.

, i! H: m3 y6 R" R　　改进: Money can improve their life.

　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.

　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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9 a# k# N$ Q# K9 [) F% Z4 ^　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.

, i- c6 D7 s+ h5 |　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.

　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.

　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
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　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

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　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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. B1 w9 u5 E1 [$ s; z　　28. What's about nonsmokers?

　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?

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8 _( b; p: L8 g8 }1 o8 t　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

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! P/ w7 s; a& ?4 Z( S& b8 w2 H　　31. I am not good at maths, but English

7 A0 }) E; O% I　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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& E2 B9 E, ]5 h0 A9 Y4 q　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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& z' m0 [& U& Y0 l9 k) X　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

　　34. I agree the latter idea.

　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

7 `  S" s; V( E% r　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

8 Q. ]: G3 k& Y　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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4 ?: E' K, i% _　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

# J; h/ F! F, D4 C1 B　　38. No one knows all the things.

　　改进: No one knows everything.

. M$ t, c6 c$ ^7 |8 X, E' A" e　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

0 b9 a9 ~& e. I# s5 p+ q# l9 a　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

0 S! a9 e3 W5 o" m$ R( L　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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5 E4 p3 d' d; U5 d　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply

3 `) y' M- `/ ~) g　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
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7 W- ^6 G' ~0 N' s$ D3 y　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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　　43. They will learn the bad habits.
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　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
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　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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3 T, e& X* P& U　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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1 I0 K9 O3 ^, M: e* G　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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; n; d, e) X4 C; o" J' w8 ?　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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3 s; r& E# B! d8 \* b5 K　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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' F6 Y$ `! W% n" ^( g　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.

( {1 r' _) x5 Q2 x: B: m　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.

　　50. I felt alone.

　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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sindowa

随便

平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka