锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

9 y6 r, _% r' ?  E: ^  j　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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4 `2 b1 q1 z! m& ?, ]8 _　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

2 J4 t. T; j- P/ z8 S# D　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

* l3 S+ G3 K  m, B0 [　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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) X% Z1 ?( G' x　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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3 l" a* U- n( l" R　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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　　6. Their brain is still very young.

) `/ l8 k9 w% }　　改进: They are still immature.
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2 A! s: t. P, V3 S+ D- m% }　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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) L4 U2 {" K7 p5 q8 x　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

% z) P7 O0 I6 H9 ^. a8 W　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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7 j$ V' b1 H# w! T　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

% l: m5 Q, P% |9 Y3 B& k+ k　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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! u' S+ {5 w2 r& i　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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; L0 V5 h- J" Q3 h# r: m　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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, Q; I$ h6 E5 ~, N9 Z" v　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

$ K0 K  O/ |( @6 W　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.

　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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, p8 H6 m+ A) {: x7 `! G- i　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.

) X& U1 c" n- U# F　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

/ \7 Q7 x, _, S( F, z　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.

0 ^4 h: v( V6 W+ U) b　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.

) I% }5 F, O+ b8 I9 t; I1 o　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.

; b  u& S1 K8 l5 ^2 _6 o　　19. They cannot think clearly.
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　　改进: They cannot think straight.
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　　20. Money can improve their living standard.

　　改进: Money can improve their life.

　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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  [& U7 T$ H0 e  U& _% _　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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, w+ s- ?" q& I; @% x, O　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.

　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.

  W. S6 `" m3 _4 [2 O　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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+ C1 ~3 Q" C. q　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.

0 o+ P0 B- `0 t1 J* Z　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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+ c+ }% I1 w! V. @$ X- d( j, g　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.

) @1 s: m# X7 w3 T; c4 i　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
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! d+ _. Z$ a- _7 s1 l　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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" f3 g! \( `3 `: W* z　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

! _2 n. w' s/ }8 I　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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' C+ S) G5 a, r" g/ C" H" F　　28. What's about nonsmokers?

" d' E' e6 j+ s) X6 s2 Z' r% Y1 w' i　　改进: What about nonsmokers?
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　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?

- r, L: Z5 n% w8 K/ N% i2 r: m2 J$ r　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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) [' a; T, ?& R2 d6 @# h! m　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

　　31. I am not good at maths, but English

! x" `: ]" L; c4 e- m　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

) q. `$ }0 `" s( f! Z, P　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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8 `, t1 A; M# r) ]! Z' N% S　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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% V" ~; j1 Y2 L, K　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

# ]% }. s8 K; y　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

5 Q* L- j# s0 `9 P　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

( |: ~: F* m" Y; Y1 \　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

( O% M; m. B4 `' W7 C  f　　38. No one knows all the things.

　　改进: No one knows everything.

$ a% I6 d, D0 q! S　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

: l3 i6 x' D7 b) o6 C# _　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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5 B# r1 m+ m6 w! C, B( s2 O7 h% n　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

! x" v7 c& M( ]& C' j　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
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　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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* h0 v1 O, K7 @7 t4 P, D　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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0 s' \/ ^; e* {3 l, b) W/ r) R　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

0 U& Y+ p) o0 O( S  g* N  h　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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2 ~% s" F' i. O! a2 R, h: N7 Q　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.

8 d' Q6 O0 K2 G　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.

- ~1 K7 `  z) X8 b  ?- H　　50. I felt alone.

1 \' `( x  ?9 q8 z0 a8 T" E0 y　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka