锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

5 K: I! k1 w9 j9 n0 {　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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　　6. Their brain is still very young.
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5 `" n, ?" z& K3 x0 \5 V7 c. h) E　　改进: They are still immature.
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　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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( ~6 T5 w% ^9 l. o  X! z　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

; T2 v* p! C4 `1 @/ A　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

& n! |: a% v5 o2 t9 B" V: U　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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' E8 o* {6 Q- n, q' l. t　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

5 S: Q6 u/ m. t5 t　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

# S! c# D- G+ A3 s& H: U) y$ K　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

4 I* m( ]/ F# c  U　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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! {& |5 W" U$ N0 O　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.

　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.

　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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/ D! |- |1 z+ x- E　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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6 y. P! ?: F  F0 H) I& A. A, T2 j* F　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.

　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

) I) m* W  H2 F: @　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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: x+ x/ y" f6 i9 E/ n0 N$ d- R　　19. They cannot think clearly.
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' S* a" l# ?5 m4 G　　改进: They cannot think straight.
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& l2 W+ v$ l9 p' X　　20. Money can improve their living standard.
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* r- K8 b! [6 @/ J　　改进: Money can improve their life.
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$ @+ N3 Y  v" ^) E　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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  t( ?% T$ x4 L　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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" X8 t& ^4 I. [& v  W1 n1 ]0 h　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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3 W# o; V$ u6 S, j; X　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.

4 Y% d, d/ R: Y　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
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　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

/ @  z$ m' \  }! G9 {9 W; O　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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, @; ~- B* d4 M7 r- f: V6 ~& i　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
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　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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' x4 T/ T# A+ |8 u- N, s; L　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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; H0 q# ^; u3 t: }' A5 O　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

6 X8 i+ W5 A/ D4 F  ^% V1 }9 {　　31. I am not good at maths, but English
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/ o/ F4 j6 Z7 [. |　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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+ N& u1 d6 k) i7 C6 b& h5 H! A　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?

( e) W7 B: a+ V' h1 i　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

　　34. I agree the latter idea.

, h; f' j% p- D; N! x" V　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.
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* ]% ~7 }/ g" o" }6 z1 N8 I　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

( M" ]! s; h) |6 q　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

: C1 k% ?" \- h2 D: V　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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　　38. No one knows all the things.

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( Y* C4 c- Q  r5 [　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

' P9 ^8 y! t8 w$ e! M3 Z- p　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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% v: b' N5 M3 w1 _' N: H　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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& Z6 Y" s8 u* F) j# q6 h/ a　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

7 ~8 Z1 Y2 ~+ P" T2 y　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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/ _2 y, a8 S  s　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

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　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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( R0 J! U. T! _　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

3 j" C% [5 ]& O& h5 G- w　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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8 x8 ]* F7 K9 k1 d" F, r" ~1 Y5 v6 U; N　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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$ i+ _8 ?/ r/ ^) x6 x　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.

2 D0 |, @) r4 S; S! q/ {  I　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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　　50. I felt alone.

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孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.

Thanks

sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka