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1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level. , ~) @3 `8 {$ g! c/ G# m
9 y6 r, _% r' ? E: ^ j 改进:Artists' work upgrades our civilization. # `8 o1 R0 K) A6 A* G
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2. For example, you work in a big factory. 6 K4 M) j6 [6 s1 J7 u
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改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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4 `2 b1 q1 z! m& ?, ]8 _ 改进:You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career. - i& A1 y* X+ ] a. \& B, ]* Q
2 J4 t. T; j- P/ z8 S# D 4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck. 9 l. f+ ~; b7 v) @7 m9 W/ m. R& v1 b
* l3 S+ G3 K m, B0 [ 改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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) X% Z1 ?( G' x 5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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3 l" a* U- n( l" R 改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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6. Their brain is still very young. 5 A3 f( f; ~+ B+ \' }9 L \
) `/ l8 k9 w% } 改进: They are still immature.
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2 A! s: t. P, V3 S+ D- m% } 7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things. ) y* l" j# J2 ]1 m5 ~
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改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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) L4 U2 {" K7 p5 q8 x 8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong. 7 e9 R8 K, ?2 c R1 w& _
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改进: They cannot tell right from wrong. ' y, r! N4 C2 P9 C
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9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time. 4 c( I& J" d8 e9 M9 t
% z) P7 O0 I6 H9 ^. a8 W 改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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7 j$ V' b1 H# w! T 11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development. ! ?3 _3 c; e2 g4 a( F4 p
% l: m5 Q, P% |9 Y3 B& k+ k 改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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! u' S+ {5 w2 r& i 12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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; L0 V5 h- J" Q3 h# r: m 改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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, Q; I$ h6 E5 ~, N9 Z" v 13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one. 9 U* N# h8 r3 V
$ K0 K O/ |( @6 W 14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money. , C+ S! B3 f1 U& i+ } J, W
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改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more. ; E* O: h6 P/ }7 v9 T* e. N
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15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products. & e4 p$ j- M8 J2 E3 l! H
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改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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, p8 H6 m+ A) {: x7 `! G- i 16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills. 0 C( a$ G" J7 u/ v5 I' w
) X& U1 c" n- U# F 改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills. ' G9 f8 Q& c8 T: H: ~' D% W
/ \7 Q7 x, _, S( F, z 17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians. 3 V% x1 m0 s. h, i9 F! d
0 ^4 h: v( V6 W+ U) b 改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand. 4 D* ~7 [- z- l: \4 N( z
) I% }5 F, O+ b8 I9 t; I1 o 18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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改进: This knowledge will become part of you. 3 z+ {7 Z2 |4 X# r! D+ A! O
; b u& S1 K8 l5 ^2 _6 o 19. They cannot think clearly.
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改进: They cannot think straight.
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20. Money can improve their living standard. 4 o# P, @- ] w* W; k
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改进: Money can improve their life. 3 Z( E; E( h8 @9 i* @
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21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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[& U7 T$ H0 e U& _% _ 改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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, w+ s- ?" q& I; @% x, O 22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life. ) {/ T: k8 [/ |9 L
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改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life. 2 p E: m {+ S" n6 f$ p, z
W. S6 `" m3 _4 [2 O 23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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0 o+ P0 B- `0 t1 J* Z 24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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+ c+ }% I1 w! V. @$ X- d( j, g 改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes. 9 B' p# s9 D% G& H
) @1 s: m# X7 w3 T; c4 i 25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
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! d+ _. Z$ a- _7 s1 l 26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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" f3 g! \( `3 `: W* z 改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal. 5 A5 H4 V* p3 D/ w8 k& E# u
! _2 n. w' s/ }8 I 27. Smoking can help you relax your mind. " Y4 c* ~$ ]5 ]5 A- _
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改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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' C+ S) G5 a, r" g/ C" H" F 28. What's about nonsmokers? 3 A+ l3 e: L# n) h4 o0 o
" d' E' e6 j+ s) X6 s2 Z' r% Y1 w' i 改进: What about nonsmokers?
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29. Why not to be a non-smoker? Z, ^4 o6 A: D% z ^) u/ f
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) [' a; T, ?& R2 d6 @# h! m 30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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改进: Everyone has friends in his life. 4 G4 J- ]* F( X0 ?0 v! i9 l$ R) C
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31. I am not good at maths, but English L& G& @/ ~: x
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) q. `$ }0 `" s( f! Z, P 32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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8 `, t1 A; M# r) ]! Z' N% S 改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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% V" ~; j1 Y2 L, K 33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests. " O* d, `1 w' E- ~# p1 S
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34. I agree the latter idea.
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改进: I agree with the latter idea. 9 T4 }4 F g X* ]" v
# ]% }. s8 K; y 35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo. 9 z5 d' \9 _* e7 h0 B8 l! q
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改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now. 3 k0 i% Z& E( b/ l+ z! o
5 Q* L- j# s0 `9 P 改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe. 1 x- m- _0 ]% Y+ E1 ]4 n
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37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are. 3 B4 f" K% D* b0 P' u
( |: ~: F* m" Y; Y1 \ 改进:People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn. ' [9 ?: Q9 U! c3 m) y9 c `+ J
( O% M; m. B4 `' W7 C f 38. No one knows all the things. - I. y5 L+ S+ \7 E& }3 Z
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$ a% I6 d, D0 q! S 39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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40. Each form of having friends has its advantages " m) {6 l+ ^0 S* \
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改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages. 7 J1 i5 a4 {" V. v
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41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up. ( A$ @4 W% q- ?+ Q- \! O" n
: l3 i6 x' D7 b) o6 C# _ 改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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5 B# r1 m+ m6 w! C, B( s2 O7 h% n 42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor. ' o3 V, {$ e3 Q: V4 }( S+ Q% E
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改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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43. They will learn the bad habits. 8 V4 W0 y, | R# _/ E' W
! x" v7 c& M( ]& C' j 改进: They will develop bad habits.
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44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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改进: In this cycle, people make progress. 0 ^2 A9 @% x( F
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45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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* h0 v1 O, K7 @7 t4 P, D 改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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0 s' \/ ^; e* {3 l, b) W/ r) R 47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact. ( [" Z5 N0 T3 \& G+ v4 r# X
0 U& Y+ p) o0 O( S g* N h 改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream. & ?0 g3 f- z f- m9 q, f! _
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49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost. 3 u- N. R+ Y/ R3 F
8 d' Q6 O0 K2 G 改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss. ; b! U/ D# R0 u$ c# C2 g' `
- ~1 K7 ` z) X8 b ?- H 50. I felt alone. ! J9 n9 H5 P# N" Y" L3 X2 L# j
1 \' `( x ?9 q8 z0 a8 T" E0 y 改进: I felt lonely. |
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