我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
# D6 f- {% E! P$ R/ }是十多年前的作品了——
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Faster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
8 R1 H1 F  \3 Z; T( P: vTo my life and dream.

Following the summer's step,
6 X' I4 T" B  H( }" t4 k' l7 M- DLet myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
3 j( j2 Y0 _+ h, I0 O/ K: rWashing my heart and soul.
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7 \1 L3 u& \) E4 O" dGood-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
* A% L! z0 w" }  H, S: ~7 KMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
( q* t% Y9 z6 S9 V9 N9 xIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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0 Z8 m6 }( s! \$ E. w2 Q" ^8 S[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
& ~  b4 O& [# W; F& b4 o# i" M夏天来了