我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
1 f. M) Y8 N& |是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming

Faster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
To my life and dream.

Following the summer's step,
4 ~: G1 V& m( `0 l* c. O+ [Let myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
0 v* `3 A5 z* d' O+ w( Z+ _) rWashing my heart and soul.
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7 @8 ?; A; K+ dGood-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
4 o: v% a7 _0 H2 |& p, v0 _" O) A0 fI can prepare nothing;
. L7 O) U9 ~3 q+ a, {3 U0 ^2 I+ ~4 FMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
- d9 H- [8 a/ R0 G  ~# E7 M
[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
6 ~& N' w" h" t, Fbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了