我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming
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+ ]( q% O) P" f5 v/ q- z3 u( k. e" M) l% eFaster, hotter and sweater,
! _; Z* z2 s4 q( ]4 K& ^; H5 ZSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
4 \5 E, @* A1 [To my life and dream.
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! P% S5 x. F' Y, |Following the summer's step,
8 U$ y/ V5 n# `Let myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.

2 M7 G) C  m& ]; B9 h& l$ GGood-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
4 b; y0 A& U" T2 LMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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简约

thank you, i can see it now.
/ a* D% n" x& Wbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
2 f( R( H' c! Y% V夏天来了