我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming
' C  E( C1 g0 i; T  g
3 g1 w. H+ Q% z$ p$ b, {& D) ^Faster, hotter and sweater,
  C% o7 n# o& O% l. G4 W* ESummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
To my life and dream.
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Following the summer's step,
- P; ~, _. w- H3 ^& W" ~4 n7 l5 J0 B( k, JLet myself go ---
0 A. h, A. B. z( L' @# @! A! ^0 O( V  QGo to the wild rain
: l+ ^, P9 I- q* F8 _! O$ pWashing my heart and soul.

% g+ n0 [' H- Q# U, H5 AGood-bye, my happy spring;
3 c  @2 ?0 k& X: ?' f: Y* mGood-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
* T/ p" F: [+ sMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

5 b" V/ z7 B: X$ G" k' K, K# w一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
" F/ n' |+ G: p+ s/ RIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

# J1 P+ v/ U% Y2 k5 |  i[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
& m  l9 f, F: q: Z, Obut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
3 [  k1 F' ~9 [! l夏天来了