我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
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' |" G- b, j1 f; U* S# M  QSummer's Coming
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Faster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
+ k7 B5 M! s& n7 b; Z0 RFrom the colorful nature
To my life and dream.
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Following the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
! x0 U# B) p" w$ r: }! `; X, zWashing my heart and soul.
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Good-bye, my happy spring;
6 t( B- g9 o- W1 y. B' IGood-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
" S9 J6 ^" V) q( n; z' Z3 BMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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简约

thank you, i can see it now.
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Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了