我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
4 U7 v  t# k, w/ i0 V' z8 G是十多年前的作品了——
" G, U/ T4 H/ Y# ^' w' Q/ NSummer's Coming

- m% p+ Y$ e7 [9 o/ L' jFaster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
To my life and dream.
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4 _+ [. k! B, p  N2 o0 O1 ^Following the summer's step,
8 R- X) _3 p2 s1 l. r$ r6 }Let myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
" A) A& B4 K5 E$ KWashing my heart and soul.
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Good-bye, my happy spring;
' E* c- M3 }% w' f! n: LGood-bye, my childish dream.
2 S2 m9 G6 y, u4 _( r, ^1 d" UI can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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- p) s5 R7 ?& Z" n一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
8 a+ h# D8 t. F8 G, AIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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& h1 l+ R! J: |# J/ A4 U( A[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
5 V, n8 ^$ Y. G; U+ e. B/ [夏天来了