天啊，这个版的英文描述能改改吗

SheJing

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
3 k) U2 Z% G6 W2 l$ W" r2 vTouching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.
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/ x1 E2 G) I- g: g鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？？what the fuck

竹帘儿

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
2 M, X0 p8 _# ?4 g. |5 z7 Y  iTouching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.
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+ k0 h$ ]3 d1 w) l9 D鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？ ...
SheJing 发表于 2011-3-26 05:48

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哈哈哈哈

珠圆玉润

你指的是我儿子写的那几句话吗。是有很多错误，但我觉的我改了就不真实了。

arbo

We would like to share, not we would like share.
( H7 @$ I+ F# }2 }2 ~I think it is better to have sth more appropriate.