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本帖最后由 suvescape 于 2012-3-17 11:22 编辑
4 t2 s" o8 L* |- \9 g, ojsw 发表于 2012-3-16 23:37 
( y: N W4 K) b J, Y3 L音频上传了。没稿子,就那网站上顺口读的,是第二遍。帮忙听听。1 h. E- E: o6 b, a
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英文写的有些怪? 1 k9 L* s" \, u! C* m) a
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音频听不到。( }1 n5 b! j9 A0 r! Q2 t
Hehe. SUV has a point there.2 H+ c0 r! Y. j
either part is needed.
" g+ }" N1 a4 y( B& S, sI will try to upload my reading very soon...4 J. S3 H( Q8 a5 |& r8 |0 `
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我建议修改为:
* @5 t$ T+ J) @ k: U$ p* lHehe,SUV gets/got the point.5 [! l- F, i. v
Either part is necessary.
* {. p) _. {2 P) ^I will upload my reading soon. (不需要try,very)/ m6 S" a& ?. u
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