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应该是 I have been tutoring IELTS and SAT since 2011
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既然选择了用 help sb. to do 的形式 应该保持一致。help you to pass, to achieve, and to advance (advance your career 这个用法貌似没听说过)
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所以这里应该用:if you could not achieve the score that we had an agreement on, it will be free of charge. 后面那句话就不用写了 已经free of charge 了。而且一句话里一会用would 一会用will... ]# N& z( a" z. u
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