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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
$ X: M1 h+ v. D; i& xI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  6 ?1 F* A: ]. S+ v& k  u
Dreamers
% D6 C! K6 |( S7 A! _Savages) k5 o) ~( E$ p7 f/ {* P+ ?
Poets
- K% L+ F+ f0 Z4 ?& qBuilders of canoes,1 o, z6 @. j: N/ y8 c4 E3 p
Black smiths' y' S" y1 c8 M/ q) t. [7 G
Murderers,( @+ C$ o* i3 G  }' }/ h3 J
Risk takers,3 `3 I% J9 `0 @2 z2 H
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
/ J" ]2 A2 m/ V8 f8 l/ n* Y- B' kAs I think of what could be.
- l  D3 j. x; }0 a& ]The world is so big to me 8 d+ X7 D- r5 [: F6 G$ F; ^& ?- b
I wonder what it means to be
$ {1 f# ~" R3 H; H0 V8 xI looked up at the star and smiled & J! V% Q* E3 ?- `# d  z
They flashed as they have heard all I have read. ; v' }+ ^" e6 }5 z: i
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
; z% \& I3 L* [' g9 b. c- Q评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。; O& w6 e$ v4 O* s% S# G
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,* S0 |# J# z- y: L+ ]" @
A poor old Guy;. P5 j. E1 N" G7 t
Legs in a bonfire,, X5 o5 L+ S. k# p
Head in the sky
* m1 A4 t7 r* ~3 D% f  ]Lonely, with the feel of betray
8 P1 K7 p& G7 i) j" M- ^8 CHeart empty and hollow
/ ?) a/ I: a/ W" v3 d  X5 }- aAlone I stand4 Z0 {( k5 J" m' i0 {
I am useless to all
: }( q$ y& j, l5 G. f$ h2 Q. GBut I wish I were a dove
1 S; g) d& Y! B0 v2 `! G3 {Giving myself to the world, to the fire
& V3 Z1 L0 r$ {& X2 cI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
! K9 k8 P* F7 g; L* ~5 B2 LI sent prayers to my god
3 N/ _: K% K9 _2 r* h' [7 H% x6 rThough he does not answer
+ i% q7 y9 X$ O! |5 Z" BHe bless me with the gift of hope 1 @( S: U7 x9 ~, E; _5 x& {- s

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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
$ n7 _; i1 V  i5 @加油加油,经常写写!
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