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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, ) R( L+ V% p; f" k' S
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  % S& A! q! n; E
Dreamers
% H+ u* S& P1 rSavages% T7 o! y) R3 E0 \
Poets
  C5 h: U( G3 w5 ^Builders of canoes,
$ o, p6 Y! N- u7 U2 }* o1 XBlack smiths3 z' |/ e5 {/ q% L$ ^
Murderers,7 S! T0 ~& i- s9 K
Risk takers,+ T7 |; Q$ F* ?# ]( c) e. G0 V
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder 3 a% f/ [9 p* k9 F* ]. h% q2 r0 o
As I think of what could be.
5 B1 ]3 `+ X2 a5 mThe world is so big to me
1 i/ g% z2 d/ C' J4 XI wonder what it means to be& S/ t% x8 u; {6 ]
I looked up at the star and smiled ( u+ _# s9 l1 ]4 L
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
: k& f, D: Z9 g评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
' S5 b7 \  j" n# K) J0 N; U顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
! a9 q% o: P( F! |1 I2 x9 [A poor old Guy;
: k9 x3 y8 F) N& @9 {Legs in a bonfire,4 I4 m" r0 H, Z5 H8 O2 ^; h
Head in the sky
6 ^6 g" S8 h+ Q) U% [Lonely, with the feel of betray2 F' V( v1 I& [
Heart empty and hollow
: O: E" p7 I' T5 uAlone I stand; q+ I( B0 k' L/ b0 u, I6 u
I am useless to all
2 s' L- z& W- t: {* JBut I wish I were a dove   z% G0 M8 @  q6 r1 R7 U0 k
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
! x# s& c% w4 W& Y7 N* nI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
9 r2 K, I+ L0 v: p! C, OI sent prayers to my god* ]& @/ K! L2 ?. p; O; V- T! ^
Though he does not answer
; S* W7 Z0 w8 b% W, J6 ^6 }He bless me with the gift of hope * ?- Y; P5 v, A

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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
& x$ x+ W' @$ Q( g2 a加油加油,经常写写!
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