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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, # }8 w* ~( i4 \4 T( l+ L
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
) h5 w3 n+ Y: m* Z0 ^2 YDreamers
+ B, c: E2 a' Q; X) xSavages
; k3 B  \% j1 Q& uPoets# M' B6 z' Q' V  l) p
Builders of canoes,8 }4 J  F2 n# L- O1 g2 O
Black smiths
7 W1 W2 W# a  s; D* UMurderers,
" E/ \9 n  K: z- i% f9 ]& H; jRisk takers,
* I; T" K) T* I& J# c4 MMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder
  i' S) G1 q1 p+ P8 @+ {As I think of what could be.
( f2 v8 J# q$ @/ e, ?$ d0 qThe world is so big to me 2 e8 B2 d$ m$ n& q" g$ Y9 W
I wonder what it means to be
1 s8 D7 e8 A. bI looked up at the star and smiled " J% U: `3 ]6 k7 d4 c* `
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。9 o7 D& _) k2 y# V0 _9 [9 {
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
9 R, z5 ?0 L! Y, u0 e- b顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
  e$ a. n8 k; o2 F0 ~. @, HA poor old Guy;  i1 }' o( n! g4 X2 E- v& g, b
Legs in a bonfire,
) k" ]  {) _; [' R7 Y" v6 i/ i! `Head in the sky( S. @& j( M% V) z2 H. [
Lonely, with the feel of betray
' a( h9 o+ N' S, Q' \Heart empty and hollow
1 g! H9 `: N+ s+ R8 FAlone I stand8 k5 O( H) @- }+ V8 \/ n
I am useless to all # N1 l5 `7 l0 s0 |
But I wish I were a dove   Z3 X& p" d4 v- R
Giving myself to the world, to the fire# H1 i' ^# k8 A' A0 _' I8 g
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind6 Y; {! B! c$ `, ]$ a3 ?( }  e
I sent prayers to my god9 A! n' \+ p. L- o4 y# d1 d* z
Though he does not answer
8 Q, f6 g  n; HHe bless me with the gift of hope / d# _/ M0 b" d# P5 l  e* }* h

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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
& ^7 ^; @4 S, u( G. ^% D加油加油,经常写写!
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