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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, 2 N/ d! G/ V& q7 m8 I0 |8 a- T* q
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
) e: \& c2 L* g& h2 ~Dreamers
, \/ a" ~% c" c1 jSavages( K' W8 L' m. {6 h" ?/ s' Q
Poets
$ ~& _; _0 C( P2 ^# C" F! Y: kBuilders of canoes,
5 K9 l- U  X7 z0 u7 F* [* GBlack smiths
, `" O# b8 y7 a& A$ sMurderers,
! B3 ], c) G% n5 s% ~3 ?2 D6 C! X+ SRisk takers,. D% l. d; X  p/ X
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
0 P8 H8 a* {- a$ G  _" xAs I think of what could be.   e6 P) E9 a7 U6 p: ?9 l
The world is so big to me
. ]' i$ D, k2 P/ NI wonder what it means to be' O$ ^% n& s$ G
I looked up at the star and smiled
" K# X' ^  f% A% L: \- k3 s( g# @They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
; I* G0 `: L$ w) n! q9 x, @评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。, n# y6 L+ d  u. k
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,+ d! O7 |, V# R- q
A poor old Guy;) i" z& R4 z$ n& V: |
Legs in a bonfire,
# }- B1 s3 A" U- r+ BHead in the sky
7 J% Q$ f5 w  Y! U+ k" pLonely, with the feel of betray) u3 M2 ]: b% u. D" p: i7 A& t
Heart empty and hollow7 O$ }; X. I4 ?4 M6 w
Alone I stand
+ N& B9 a: |" bI am useless to all
" Y8 Q% {% i: a! u' ~But I wish I were a dove
9 m( A* l: N, `" p' E7 z4 nGiving myself to the world, to the fire2 Y& ~! z6 l) M4 s- V5 Z
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
$ `% y+ s! s, o) g3 h' B% P  II sent prayers to my god
, l- I5 X) V& ?9 X3 IThough he does not answer/ o- F' Z" l* e- M( Q
He bless me with the gift of hope 6 ]2 Z0 L1 i% I6 N. T1 P% F
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。9 C7 G! ~, u; j- U/ ]1 w
加油加油,经常写写!
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