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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
' l/ a- ]# S) X  E  o$ XI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  3 ~7 U* L" R' f9 R8 A/ g8 \; z
Dreamers
. M: |; x; D5 q4 E' r* kSavages
. P% \$ }" |' e7 V* \$ C; ^$ w( pPoets
2 N: {, Y7 P: Z* Y- o- yBuilders of canoes,
  w# x4 q. Q$ A9 uBlack smiths2 |$ W  W! b! z, F4 N, Y
Murderers,. o* ~. k. q. L' O0 v) Z
Risk takers,9 I9 u0 k9 X% \7 }9 P- F* T5 T7 a
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder 5 X- v) g4 n0 r
As I think of what could be.
+ I& O* }2 L, r4 j. l! [: Y. G) AThe world is so big to me * x( A, ]8 o5 H0 F7 h' Z
I wonder what it means to be6 D! F# ^( C* k7 U# z2 y
I looked up at the star and smiled ( U/ `7 \4 g  n' D6 J% S! n; [
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。, L# C9 o$ n! i3 |# _( ?
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。1 T. p# O1 p, B: i- P
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,5 }* L/ q  D- L/ O( P
A poor old Guy;
& M# y2 o$ J3 R9 s9 \7 y8 ~% zLegs in a bonfire,6 |- P' r" k, f/ H% m$ J
Head in the sky4 t! K, ^, Y0 k: w4 M  l: C
Lonely, with the feel of betray
2 \+ R- [$ y, b2 m2 _8 gHeart empty and hollow$ \; l7 a% p$ a& Y2 [6 e$ z
Alone I stand8 q* [$ w. x" r+ P* ?
I am useless to all # g1 ~8 l  Z! Y' K
But I wish I were a dove
, o! E& \0 H$ I+ c, B* |Giving myself to the world, to the fire
/ z. m$ x; k" K4 |% II feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
5 i- w8 W+ z) A( i2 c6 W$ j8 \I sent prayers to my god0 k8 H3 q4 R* J/ T
Though he does not answer: ^  T3 K( A' x
He bless me with the gift of hope 8 }$ X, }9 [# X, A6 F4 @' M8 p# p
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
; ~3 k, B8 {, A* a/ l加油加油,经常写写!
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