SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
Automatic transmission
Silver
. H5 l8 _- Q, Y/ WRemote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
7 [) K4 P" S7 d! g& L7 y* g' d1 bFour additional tires with rims
/ z( _7 ]- i/ l0 t8 WAir Conditioning
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) V( J( B, F8 W. @Tire pressure monitor system
. }# V" b# @2 I0 U1 b3 a3 l: rInformation system
' J. a0 ]3 t; l" p0 y6 cCentral control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
4 m0 n5 A2 y, d* ^Power mirrors
Power doors
. Z1 h, I$ O' J- Q6 u- JPower windows
7 @" t" u, M' E6 h, RChild safety locks
Rear window defroster
$ w3 ~) _2 J7 \4 X3 M) w2 v8 WBluetooth hands-free operation
7 Q7 a2 |2 Q/ a0 ?Radio
' Y  o/ y9 H, I/ i" d+ nAirbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
6 a, B4 }9 o& c, R7 pAirbag: side
" |* O9 u0 x. K% zAlarm
) ~* _; B  Z: s# i4 W" sFog lights

**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
8 A: ?# j1 T' `4 mIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)

兰君子

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8 S  x( \* {6 O* ODue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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+ x( c# B, B+ ?8 x6 F7 W1 V! \$ KIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
4 r0 J; [/ L* c$ _* k0 L) f/ ]这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

/ V7 C) a# D1 ?哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

( n/ g; |, a. K  C# fFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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- |; \% r4 U* |9 t0 a5 c5 ?. t, }Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
) p/ t3 R8 h/ e$ t' g3 C; O7 k) N! dYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.

: J% W( j' {  w. cLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

. \- D- K' l# ^- W  l8 U1 @"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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1 O6 m2 g# E; L* ySorry to give you "HARSH" again.