SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

VEICHLE OPTIONS:
5 L! `% ~7 p% c( d* G% NAutomatic transmission
: ~* N: I! B) `+ r" i9 `, QSilver
Remote starter and heat blocker
. `* A/ @; Y% v% L! nTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
! Q3 _. d. Y; k$ w6 UAir Conditioning
ABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
Central control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
Power mirrors
Power doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
- O2 a$ p' K8 v4 b: i' a$ NRear window defroster
; Z& S' ]7 _( k' b* Y; LBluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
8 |8 s% R' E2 m. M' mAirbag: driver
; |$ o  n1 @: U+ Q& b7 l, @- [, nAirbag: passenger
Airbag: side
5 Q. z8 K6 w0 V- o) q2 bAlarm
/ m0 `7 l* h0 g" W( V# w" \: ~Fog lights

0 F  ]* f1 r) ]+ ~; [**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
3 J. s0 u0 v! P; @) JPick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)

兰君子

SALE A CAR

+ d6 ?- r! x) ^7 [Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

! C$ z1 C) h. ~$ sIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
. S' p8 x- @& P IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

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zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
4 x+ G3 D% Y8 \9 f7 R; [, [, i# s5 Y$ JThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

8 {! n3 J3 \1 ~" A  KSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
0 m( o. N' m* iYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

7 H; }' d% X$ s" O% w1 ], g0 E% E$ p"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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/ {( x; G2 v( }2 j# s; [4 {There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

; g+ @8 f% \" @' x$ G4 p3 v, x; sSorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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