SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
Automatic transmission
Silver
& Y7 q* F% w  F: y3 T) P; p. nRemote starter and heat blocker
( H* A$ e6 a7 h5 \& hTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
' K8 ^+ x1 P/ F4 |  }Air Conditioning
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Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
: [2 o% G; m( D5 g. q( V2 z% u& M+ VCentral control locks,doors,windows
3 N# z8 X/ X0 |- b1 BPower locks
Power mirrors
Power doors
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2 Q6 M  x( a: {1 Q% C% p& yChild safety locks
Rear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
2 U! r# P: z# @6 U' N9 jAirbag: driver
  ?: C3 r' \2 f8 DAirbag: passenger
% s/ W4 H/ R, o3 U7 t; e. IAirbag: side
Alarm
Fog lights

**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
6 g7 e( u$ I, q* C7 e7 V1 kIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

- v& K: l: J, e+ `Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
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兰君子

SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
3 V# s, \/ R. z& q( { IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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/ u/ L  F. Z( H# y( Y+ ~) e9 ?, QDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

2 ^- s1 Z, I8 hBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

7 O* d) {6 }" m4 h$ R+ h1 R哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

$ a* X; G) C; a2 VDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

( ^7 ?  ]/ H2 a) h, l"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

2 u. ^, ?$ J5 K% v: w6 U: hThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

: D0 q, ]7 E$ {! P' ASorry to give you "HARSH" again.