SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
8 H: |- c* T+ v. y. D/ H5 E0 wAutomatic transmission
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: h! ]9 @" `5 B" h; y/ I0 h, gRemote starter and heat blocker
  X* V! `% T7 e" W- x% @Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
2 K" l) U3 O+ C- S* RFour additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
; q' ]7 |6 M( p& M1 nABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
9 }$ a6 h4 w7 e3 r# z8 n8 RInformation system
% n, M5 G6 M) a1 T6 M0 eCentral control locks,doors,windows
) K! O1 t) ~5 O! B6 CPower locks
Power mirrors
! i  f( l# s" F: O% N6 ]Power doors
Power windows
3 f2 a& l( W5 L, b9 M, `6 dChild safety locks
7 D' k1 o+ x+ O+ yRear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
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Airbag: driver
) w1 s3 m9 W7 q6 v. _6 @8 TAirbag: passenger
Airbag: side
Alarm
Fog lights
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3 [* `4 h# p  B/ x**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
4 [; \" }2 S; i* u5 _1 HPick up on March 18-22.
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兰君子

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3 ]7 h2 p* x9 x2 pDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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6 o6 j/ B9 ]: P& r3 K$ B5 cIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

5 Y' V( |$ e5 k- \' w& `; a: oIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
9 X8 y" p& A' d1 t0 d+ \ IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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: I& A, p5 G. s: sDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
/ K  G- [$ G& u% v% @3 ^, _这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

$ B( o" S1 T3 G' d$ `1 v. ~Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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: K0 f! C7 p5 d+ `Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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5 N5 |8 |/ Y# V8 B"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

9 S7 m5 I8 Y) R4 L) f: v4 U) JThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.