A positive change

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A positive change

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大家首先要注意，时态上一定要用过去时，然后想一想什么样的chang是positive change呢？比如一次basketball game队友们让你意识到自己技术上的问题，从此球技突飞猛进；比如一次家人生病了，有生以来第一次照顾父母；比如你学开车考驾照的经历；比如你第一次离开家到外地求学。。。只要不紧张，认准了话题往下讲其实不会太难说。不过有一些套话是描述change的时候可以用的，比如：
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2 [7 W; x8 c% M9 q1 j% L7 a0 MThis experience altered the course of my life---这次经历改变了我的人生道路；
2 \- C* `' [/ D( n! a3 q; M% O# CAt first,I was really bewildered and frustrated.刚开始我感到很沮丧也很困惑;
My teammates encouraging words really cheered me up.队友们的鼓励话语让我振作起来；
. M  i5 z( o0 oMy driving instructor's sound advice made quite a change in my performance.驾车教练的好建议让我的表现提高了很多；
) n1 S% L+ v+ K8 A* _7 bIt not only improved my skills,it also solved my attitude problem.这不仅仅提高了我的技术，也让我改变了自己态度上的问题；
& c) O% i. \5 `9 N5 h: _For the first time in my time,I found my father so vulnerable and so helpless.有生以来第一次，我感到父亲这么弱小这么无助；
3 H; B8 E. u2 B0 r9 K0 wThis episode had profound influence on my later life.这段经历对我后来的人生有深远的影响；
* L: C+ l4 N6 X$ YI became a more caring and loving son/daughter after that incident.这件事情以后我变成了一个更关心家长的孩子；
It prompted me to start working on my agility and team spirit.这促使我改进我的灵活性和团队精神；
This experience was pretty much a milestone in my life.这段经历可以说是我人生道路上一个新的里程碑；
It made me tougher and more tenacious.这让我变得更坚强，更有毅力。