翁美女写给老杨的情书,翻译惊人 ZT

海鸥飞处

你是老杨的话，你会怎么回？翁不愧为才女，英文情书写的如此煽情，就是钟馗看了也能变小生了.不知道是哪位大仙翻译的，把英文翻译成如此水平也是不容易了。赞

Cold here, icy cold there. You belong to neither, leaves have
withered.Your face is pale and blue, a tearful smile. Something in your
eyes,whispers words of last good-bye. My heart sinks down, tears surge
out.
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' J' D0 }8 l& V! m此处冷，彼处更冷。枯叶凋零，君属何人。君面惨淡忧郁，含泪而笑。君热泪盈
6 y- F' x& b% [3 `3 e- y眶，喃喃自语，难言再见。妾心沉落，泪涌似涛。

Hot summer. Cheerful Cocktail. You took my hand. We fled into another
world. You sat by my side, long hair tied behind, cool and killing.
  a0 V  ~' O) |5 }Smile floating on the lemonade, soft and smooth. How I was? amazed. Your
  L2 p  x5 d4 F. T7 gface looked like the cover of the magazine. My head spin. Youled my
! w& t. P) e- {hand, danced along the crazy theme.
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酷夏。仍忆鸡尾酒会。君执妾手，共享二人世界。君坐妾之侧，长发束于脑后，英
姿勃发。笑容荡漾。妾讶君面尤类杂志封面。旋转，君执妾手，疯狂舞曲。
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' J. ?- a: c4 h" o- \3 m4 `8 dLight vied with wine, elegance mixed with fragrance, laughing covered by
: q& @; @1 M3 q7 v* Jgreetings, the crowed was busy at handshaking. You stood there, eyes on
me. I trembled at the sparkles, brighter than the light. A　masterpiece
from God, I felt dizzy. We were not near, yet we were together.

. r1 z3 y7 `4 f! W) k$ E( k2 @4 j. F灯酒相辉，芳雅相应，祝辞笑声此起彼伏，芸芸皆劳碌于握手。君站立一旁，美目
3 s0 b% ?- _( m6 |( n探妾。妾莹灯下颤颤而立。此必上帝之杰作，使晕眩。虽妾与君相隔甚远,然心相
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! r( n& ~& Q# b$ d; G' DDays ended. You said, you would wait for me at th e Alps side. We would
ski against snowflakes dancing in the sky. I gave no answer but a
good-bye to accompany your flight. Gone was the plane, I suddenly tasted
my pain. I knew I had been silly and stupid, you were in my heart, I
shouldn’t have hidden in the dark. I tried to forget your
5 b  Y, j& a  O1 Gdisappointment. I made believe sometime someday, I would tell you, I
feel all the same.
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& w# h0 G6 t. O2 F! N% K往日已去。君云君将于阿尔卑斯山畔待妾，滑雪于雪花飞舞之天空下。妾欲说还
+ Q" V% h. j% d4 ]' P* b休，但嘱祝福。飞机渐逝，妾心将苦。妾深知妾之愚蠹，君已窃妾心，妾当不可漠
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于暗中彷徨。妾尝试忘君之失，然无可善终。妾信某日某时，妾将告君妾心永驻。

My thought struggled at confessing, somehow hesitation ended in
5 {4 z- Y( F2 G/ f3 _, _flinching. I continued my role of a fool, clinched to my maiden pride,
/ l% G$ X/ T, ?1 z- G" J! B$ tyet secretly indulged in your promise of the white land -- snow
# e/ j  B3 @; b$ @1 [measuring down to us, in your arms I am lifted up. The chiming of
2 [0 T0 R5 s1 c* y2 r+ B2 V) hChristmas bell!
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' F& O6 D* _; Y) g( b; T. u( V, I妾于忏悔中挣扎，不时退缩，犹豫。妾愚于处子之婚，然潜纵于君之诺。白雪皑
皑，君挽妾身，妾意甚欢，共听圣诞钟声。

The bell died in the patter of rain, from hell came the laughing of
Satan at my brain. Tearful smile, swallowed by the darkness. How could I
( p6 S9 ^* x9 X6 ktrace your hair to wipe your tears? My hands reached out, catching
1 z% |/ t7 X1 G; T  {; M  ?nothing but a raindrop, on a leaf that had withered.

钟声忽止于急雨，乃听撒旦之笑声。含泪微笑，黑暗相伴。妾欲寻君之发擦君之泪
而不可。妾伸手欲触，无他，但枯叶一雨滴耳。

Snowflakes have melted into water, we are no more together.
雪花渐融，妾与君仍天各一方

三思

有人问过洋人吗？这段英文咋样？

猪刀小试

刚问过俺同事，说翻译得甚好。long hair tied behind, cool and killing，但老外惟一不理解这句，他问俺80多岁的中国人都有那么长的头发吗？俺无言以对～

三思

原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-7 11:46 发表
) |& ?3 H$ S( S0 ?& O刚问过俺同事，说翻译得甚好。long hair tied behind, cool and killing，但老外惟一不理解这句，他问俺80多岁的中国人都有那么长的头发吗？俺无言以对～

% s# `% H* E* K你们同事怎么能看出翻译好坏来？

jeremy

翁氏果然不凡。译者更是大材小用，即使胡适再生也不过如此。建议老杨娶(请)来当版主正合适。

猪刀小试

原帖由 三思 于 2007-5-7 11:49 发表
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你们同事怎么能看出翻译好坏来？

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  G/ V* q! m0 @4 I/ m6 y俺直接把英文提炼，打印出来给老外，她们一见就挑大拇指～

辣椒

你又知道是人家的情书！

APPLE66

为什么要翻译成妾啊，那么别扭。
( e( [0 D5 u$ ]3 M) ~不过比奴强点。

无心呢喃

看了这篇情书，偶忍不住的想到了老杨脸上的老年斑。

bigwood

此老杨非彼老杨也！

海鸥飞处

原帖由 bigwood 于 2007-5-8 21:37 发表
: a2 D* Y& K6 F- K' e2 O+ l$ ]此老杨非彼老杨也！

( X% E8 r/ h' g+ g0 z) ]相信地球人都知道吧~~

其实原文标题里写的是“杨振宁”，俺故意改滴~~

三思

原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-7 13:02 发表
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俺直接把英文提炼，打印出来给老外，她们一见就挑大拇指～

. _; j* E" E7 t4 i是不是她们以为你写的情书呢，就算文字晦涩也不在意，挑大拇指，意思是：今天晚上没问题！

猪刀小试

原帖由 三思 于 2007-5-8 23:07 发表

1 \# L" [8 A' o  N+ X是不是她们以为你写的情书呢，就算文字晦涩也不在意，挑大拇指，意思是：今天晚上没问题！

我们公司有俩女的，那叫一个胖，一个人能占一条机动车道，如果俩人并排走路出门，门口的50st就该塞车了。

海鸥飞处

原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-8 23:23 发表


" D: U% n! k! u8 q- D# Y& p" B我们公司有俩女的，那叫一个胖，一个人能占一条机动车道，如果俩人并排走路出门，门口的50st就该塞车了。

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猪兄可怜，严重慰问ing~~

听雪安妮

偶就不明白,不过就那么一个糟老头子,这女人怎么会搞得这么煽情.

听雪安妮

翻译得也让人起鸡皮疙瘩,什么君啊妾的,奴性十足.

听雪安妮

怎么着也得男的给女的写情书吧,合着芳龄女子给糟老头子写情书?
晕.

猪刀小试

原帖由 听雪安妮 于 2007-5-9 20:10 发表
- b" h+ B) M- |. P* O怎么着也得男的给女的写情书吧,合着芳龄女子给糟老头子写情书?
晕.

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不看年纪，看地位～

Justing

初看标题，我还以为翁美女是嗡嗡呢