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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)6 ~( H0 J; \- [% m( ~
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     One day I always remember4 R$ G( q9 A' \7 m4 K+ E8 F
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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2 F, y1 z; b& Z) B little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,! \) C6 E# j" A  M; F4 v

0 J+ j3 V+ d, ~$ ^5 p every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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+ X* m7 }$ h, W6 _ was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely 8 Z3 t5 L! d& c
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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6 p1 Z" }3 V" x1 D  @- A5 j on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard ; j8 b1 W" b% o& b
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my % R9 j* C+ @0 U
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deaest daughter.
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( p4 n' [' ~" u& o# p$ sAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will5 j$ ]) V- E* Y9 y  o8 u

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+ _6 V/ i6 G3 q[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!! K% @* H" j$ X
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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