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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)* N# e: k( r5 ?4 V; L4 K6 ?

+ T1 C, v( C4 v4 X- `" N/ x     One day I always remember
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was! h& u5 V6 v/ }) b4 t" s8 y4 _
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to7 a' b7 B% \, R3 I
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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, J/ d; f9 O" N little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,9 b5 N: P% U5 R7 x
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid9 I9 H) i) C/ S2 V5 l+ Z& w

) S5 g' Z% v$ ^  q1 a was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely : `( M7 R! X+ T; K

+ j4 U" b5 V4 g! d4 G( F1 itrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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9 c8 y6 Z; o" x( X0 l, S' Ethat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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& r- H3 ]5 T: ?: x% w on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard - f1 X; _0 H" _  v
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will2 c+ N# T# S: n% H' w/ `8 b" ~

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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
; d2 i1 d- u8 Z$ ~+ i/ Hwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
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