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茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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( \" B; @! o3 B　　　　　One day I always remember
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　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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% u+ r& w) s( r: ]exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to

1 T2 B6 l- [& q3 Tput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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/ i( ]8 i  ?/ D9 K" z9 q( f every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely

trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since

that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing

on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my

- v0 H9 p: O6 h% H  adeaest daughter.


After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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) |: R# Z; ?' `8 u3 A& z[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
) N, i* ~) s4 c; J6 Cwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！