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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)! e# A2 ~9 \* r. t) l# y- a: g/ {

3 F$ g" V( r$ }8 {% C6 @     One day I always remember
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was3 }& ]& i2 n8 e0 X

! k/ p8 [% _  t8 q. Cexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to3 s4 J; M: _2 O' K0 Q
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my9 K# _' N' V& G1 [

3 J0 B2 n  z4 X: b# S/ T3 D" V) o little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid, w1 C0 R; @, m) v
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely , g$ ]7 _/ U" Y" ]! o  V4 i3 B
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since + c' z, T+ n) C" s" h, |1 D
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard ( g. J( Y6 w8 p; l; a5 h: M, T
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my : X9 s( O% c" ]" K; T1 D( q

' p. u2 |) ~1 m' C% ^deaest daughter.: l/ @' F8 Y/ Q3 N7 _! q7 I, _
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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$ A0 \, f# S* W$ _: q[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!% j& n3 P: X! w0 b5 S
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
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GREAT!
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