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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember7 i  j9 ^5 d( q3 e; x" s
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was1 C9 t" @" W# j$ Y4 e
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to, V2 Z7 O/ q7 y, k( t: M1 l
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my, \" S: q: B: ?2 y7 I* |* P) ?$ ^
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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7 T" \" v% D" M0 Z9 I1 _ was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely , _& H$ I5 R$ l: o6 |1 c( G) A

3 M; k2 B, M9 m" e9 e, E3 g1 M: @4 Dtrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since - t1 ^# D7 n( l/ B% E

4 ]$ \9 u# u  |  \. sthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing7 X% H0 O  R3 s3 {
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard 5 o$ Y- @8 G) Y3 B* [! }

  \" i- N* N+ N7 W: I) afor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my * I; U2 {) e# z0 S
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deaest daughter.
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+ a+ h+ i& f, r+ O2 n3 |5 X/ q0 yAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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/ O# l) @  L$ L/ q. f5 l7 I never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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2 x' X- `7 Z" ?& m# Z2 z[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
- e( o4 @( a( \* f# K  ]we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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