埃德蒙顿华人社区-Edmonton China

 找回密码
 注册
查看: 1647|回复: 3

作文竞赛第一贴!!

[复制链接]
鲜花(5) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
4 p1 r- {6 U/ ~6 u$ w! W
5 ~6 R0 u, S8 M" J     One day I always remember
6 M" k: g8 s3 I; B4 ~
& A& b$ o/ {7 H, X  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
: D& V* h- o2 r3 w1 I0 B/ C1 J1 ^ ! b2 P- n0 r1 T
exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to0 q$ u- _. n1 o& [: Y0 p

% h. N! {% H& Fput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my0 g* y. n4 e, Y  O

: `( Q  K2 y; |. s6 Y& v! c6 f  n little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,. V* k) ?' Q, q' ?- w$ w$ f5 C
- f. g& [- t- ^& [9 g) H/ a' H
every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid" E& [% d- _6 C

2 V+ ]/ M% J2 E# X: [: F& W was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely 8 |" O( ~9 j6 G% k
( d, {8 L+ v" [1 E# s' J6 R3 ?# }
trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since & e# U% d  W$ n4 n4 w1 L% }
, c" W2 K, V; _" C- Z2 w
that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing: A6 y' t" p' Q8 _: `3 C1 Q

- q5 F$ Q7 M+ B5 ] on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard 1 S5 \0 V2 r8 u" _  l9 d8 D2 L9 `

" U" c7 ?1 j  ~3 s: Gfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my 9 ?' a8 N' J) j* Y0 s; U8 Z6 l! x! t

6 Z# V, F7 f  x7 I6 Udeaest daughter.5 L5 l7 @5 g4 W; ^( q

  W+ z- M. K$ K3 N
* }, X2 W, ]9 F) yAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
( f- W% E# C& l$ O0 H  @' W, i! V% |
never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.$ k1 s- |- O4 _. o( D

2 }8 g9 U. ~$ R# e# z8 e1 j[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
鲜花(0) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!" D( T" {6 A) h7 ]0 L$ j8 }( l7 V
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
鲜花(0) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
鲜花(0) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
您需要登录后才可以回帖 登录 | 注册

本版积分规则

联系我们|小黑屋|手机版|Archiver|埃德蒙顿中文网

GMT-7, 2025-11-2 20:22 , Processed in 0.104121 second(s), 16 queries , Gzip On, APC On.

Powered by Discuz! X3.4

Copyright © 2001-2021, Tencent Cloud.

快速回复 返回顶部 返回列表