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茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）

　　　　　One day I always remember

3 ]! G, K! O, Q+ n0 A  A　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was

! f$ d9 X0 y. E- D9 a# W' k+ V/ Uexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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$ F' U# n9 \; _. E$ k little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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$ C( _; R" I4 h  l was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely

# u# ^" I: V/ O3 R6 q: P/ P3 Btrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing

4 q! R  s; e, f# c* ~0 K. n9 U on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard

for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will

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% |; Z+ U% ]( O$ @3 ], ]: K4 ^[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
3 M2 F, r9 Z3 Jwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！