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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一); z% A2 i* s9 h# x( V2 p! D
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     One day I always remember" T/ U" k6 o, E  |% |

' n2 q1 K) W2 C* |) S3 X  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was. a6 Z5 ^% f& O& k, C0 w
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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2 R( L( `! P1 I! P  _: S- yput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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% q, k" M. R+ K+ t- }# _ little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,7 A( L9 ~4 l8 U& I( R- `
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid& @4 b# }; i' Y' p. X& ]9 T2 e

/ a8 A+ V! i* Z- h4 ] was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely ' l8 @. r9 ~* {! l
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing; y+ ^" M& K& z

5 u' t2 S4 Q4 @: K$ C# K on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard 1 X/ o* m- F; h% H

/ u& ~5 \; O7 L' |0 V* y. ]for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.
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% w8 b! B  b+ Q5 S# ]After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will7 d4 I, F; k2 H9 H4 C
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
: p; e% b( i5 _5 L3 Qwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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