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茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）

. |$ x' A: O3 n4 b1 {　　　　　One day I always remember

4 _0 p" b! h2 G  Q　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was

% B. p0 \( e: texactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my

little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,

every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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5 l3 n. j# h0 \ was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely

trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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0 w& i) N  W8 W/ D" @that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard

for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my

deaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will

% c2 _' q" V, R# r never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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% S( L8 _4 X$ m: r# L5 h[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
+ o7 h2 p6 g8 S* Kwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！