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I just wrote a poem2 m* I& F& {# u* p( q
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.1 _! O3 L3 m3 f$ }; S4 D
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem" x+ c9 A: L, Y( N. \/ _
Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you : O4 U1 i1 Q9 u
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
6 U6 E% q1 I6 Z* \0 N' ^' Y; d) u Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
* j H: ?$ X9 o& l: U* C, b2 D Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me ' x1 M- h& ~/ N- p
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
2 c7 N9 V% `8 J. D3 J1 d" j9 K Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness H) j6 \9 t* F, }5 A8 I
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday " q. n# ? [! L+ }; Q4 |5 G
somehow I realized you were still in my heart o q9 L3 M9 K" `/ ~( {: S: b
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
) ~8 g" W8 m. V3 `* ^2 V4 O3 ]2 C somehow I lost myself inside again
" C ^8 j i' k* p. G( I. A3 SNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog A' }. c i! L! Z. ^5 U8 _
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
# Z- t. T( |; q; VFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
. W1 \+ A0 _/ u7 ]! Y( D% qBasically, I almost finish this poem' H, p0 O' L" c2 N" |9 e
I am 一个人de精彩
; u, p% k& |. l" B I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
