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I just wrote a poem$ Z4 z. V6 p! h2 q( b" F# h
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog. C+ L* c9 U+ |# P0 O) O
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
$ ?4 t/ O& z U1 HThanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
8 |+ K: E, L. e% p Somehow I'd found something wrong with us ' g. Y4 {3 X) d/ i1 E
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
: D. P: i6 S9 K Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me : ^8 A. ~* A1 l2 ]3 {& i
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind ! @# n" T2 T \
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness # b6 ?3 j! h! @- F8 U [
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
6 ~0 |8 ?1 F# H! I somehow I realized you were still in my heart ; a' ?. |- r& s9 h: o* R& A4 r
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
( R6 T1 k4 E) i+ x8 J. k/ v. O$ e somehow I lost myself inside again * L, P6 _+ X5 k- w" S
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
, `0 ?* T9 i# I* J7 O somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
3 s7 f9 m( A% J9 G/ ?8 n8 {Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................- w4 b- ^6 g* O6 t. k8 Z
Basically, I almost finish this poem
' Y' ^- G: r* B2 L" k$ E! q I am 一个人de精彩
/ e3 U4 {4 ]( |8 l% \ I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
7 A, X' s" q3 r- {& DBut........ - q4 j! ]% p: I$ q
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
