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I just wrote a poem2 H! K. g f1 x* }: A: O# {
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog., j5 c$ ^% S$ M! X& y0 E& c' j
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem/ ~, \" g) y1 v+ r% d. g/ E% y( f
Thanks a lot!!!% u5 L) `. F8 h x
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! s9 y7 }1 P2 M; cFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 2 z% ^1 [% E9 g4 v2 \3 e
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
0 {# b# {% s% l# Z- x$ a Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
' V% u+ c) F6 z" f( R$ F Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
' w; G* G6 y0 a1 a; D- ]4 c Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind - j6 a8 O R# B5 d2 X; N
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness , P/ `; |8 L* l, @
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
- j0 W& }; f$ \; y/ | somehow I realized you were still in my heart 5 @' m* r# w# Y% ` t4 ~
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness5 s' F! N# D5 H: ?8 Y0 b# P! m; T
somehow I lost myself inside again
' p+ ^& `- T8 R3 y# }8 _Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 4 q' f, K2 x5 ]% z
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
_: J1 W, s0 m j: v! vFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................5 n. n7 A8 r5 [( l, k
Basically, I almost finish this poem3 P* T8 l' ^, S
I am 一个人de精彩7 Z/ e2 U3 g6 H# C* ?! q
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
