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I just wrote a poem
" y k, ^3 ?( HBesides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
) a! C( |2 x: b! FHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem8 \& h# i6 j) R# U& E
Thanks a lot!!!. A8 q; p- S% ~8 v; h+ `; |
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" a) O2 _% ~8 h& AFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
, b' C6 Q7 X3 d3 y# S7 ^ Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
5 t! H( z4 R8 t" H4 F s- `; F Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world / D% z" Y+ d1 w7 ?3 a
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me ) c3 J) v, ^7 ~( Z! {, J- W
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind , M$ P! m6 e0 J' ]3 P" x" x
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness ' }8 `6 m8 [) {& _, M1 b( D
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday - @3 y+ s( ~7 ?+ W$ U1 K, l- U
somehow I realized you were still in my heart # o+ E- {( E) G, I {
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
% v# r9 x6 _- I6 R; W" X+ p" Z somehow I lost myself inside again 4 P9 E, K. S _; N& Z8 ]2 D7 Z7 }
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 9 _! R% G7 v/ t# y9 R( S3 l
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion/ y! c$ g! {$ j$ e1 L; F8 r. V
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
3 L2 C1 v" S W( kBasically, I almost finish this poem
" |8 i8 V: f0 Q4 I+ D* X+ ~ I am 一个人de精彩
1 P6 l6 L0 Q7 M" W c$ r! F0 M I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.( C3 R4 A C9 F8 [" v* ~+ N3 n
But........
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
