TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架

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TWE作文模板汇粹
1 y6 Y8 N) C1 ~0 Y. N/ X7 f(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)

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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
' d( v% \0 T$ iWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
; Z! u- _: K  T. ^% b) ^It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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4 i2 D+ W0 a6 I8 v6 p; {9 d2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
3 Z( B2 D, |7 C" h& rFor A, A 的一个优势
. X' N" s. Z1 G# L( L4 S% ?Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
" O* j* |% ~! AFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
! H2 h/ r6 r* w, C# LAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
- b9 [& z7 o8 m( ^3 \1 [There is no denying that…
. [: ?$ W7 J) W4 t$ ~8 {. E  i8 M# J* AAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
* \+ N1 d. Q0 e0 X' X* S) O, DBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…

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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)
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/ a" E+ {' P" Y/ y(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
1 @3 g, V' a% u8 ~, v0 wWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
; i" d, v$ F( j2 \A is superior in another way, this is…
& d0 i7 @% L; F+ V$ q$ v6 m4 r$ wIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
# W7 k" V2 z* z" W' iFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
+ l! n$ F! D0 l! ^7 x) fWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
1 Z& M) M* M7 H0 {0 y1 \The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
8 m, O( V( Q; b4 e7 d(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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% D+ g) J; u' |* M% Z4 N# m' M(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.



陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
5 K& k! w( o; I5 ?5 Q… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX

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+ Q' O  h+ U' @% k( U% s8 ?2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.



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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.

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) t& L8 p& Z, g" g7 \, S- C! MOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
+ o2 Z# ]% ^: F) w0 x2 e/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…


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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…


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! K) Z  w% y3 F; N3 oIn addition/ furthermore
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- {7 W$ l8 L) C, w' M: B  IIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]