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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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" Q3 p& z2 P; i  W(一) 对立观点式 * ^* S5 U* r, Z/ I: B) J2 F+ P% y1 E
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型) $ a+ I) e$ X4 \$ P

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% K7 C7 @0 f  D(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
& Z3 H9 D; R: `# F4 b, N4 cThe main reason for my propensity for A is that…… 0 X9 q- x4 W, i8 B5 V: w, h' t! Z. k
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… , z- @, s6 y2 q# b7 ?
A is superior in another way, this is… " H' o6 z$ i7 H" E+ Z
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… , X1 _; W& b4 D4 r$ h' u
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... . x; z7 J! D' N" X

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. F0 O: E4 g! m( h2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B. 5 A$ j# A& t& ^, u: y! t
For A, A 的一个优势 * {$ @" W8 G* T
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance, 9 ?" l( w! P0 l+ E  o
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
, d" `7 A8 Z  [# Y. d7 b* O0 n% bon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is… / w; }! e! \# h# ]1 i! M8 B  Q$ z3 Y7 v
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
) L3 G3 E  \' T* l- [: XFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2. ) [  s; _5 h5 e# |6 V6 a
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9 F/ b8 z1 _: K4 ?( x# x* W(二)单一观点式
( S+ C% x5 X+ l  N1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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4 v2 m1 L: t( I9 e7 L; h首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase. / J- G: ~7 ]7 Z; ]6 ~$ e( ?. ^
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
0 g5 c+ _2 f' z: }2 D% k6 MThere is no denying that… 2 M8 }5 v9 v2 ]- l
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
) }) F, q! U! {- B& J  fFinally,…
& ], X5 X# u( @+ ^' A* nBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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+ {* V- ?! h! ?2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
$ y7 t4 L  T7 \0 t(本类型只agree) / i# a, k* J' j- e( y

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1 n8 ]9 }' e' M' H1 O+ e(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C. & v3 |' _& C3 Q- G, ]
The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… 4 S2 f7 S6 w, q' H% O, h
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
6 t! ^7 \" _+ z! C0 v: ?* {A is superior in another way, this is…
$ N7 \8 |3 |. D0 iIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… ; N) b5 T  @% @
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...   U) g: ^" i) y$ s" ~5 S% x, d0 I4 u

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* k  {: j5 w( h$ j(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型 " L! S: i5 |, L1 |

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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
6 {+ P( }8 J+ }7 w" BWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
8 ?8 z7 a2 [+ f- Q, h3 sThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
0 e" V  r8 W+ |  G; f+ B  \3 f/ oWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
3 c  W6 ~, g9 w% j7 y/ _C is superior in another way, this is…
. ?4 @( k6 D( \From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C 9 ?6 T* @& j6 J, q
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
& R  J* @. h) b  g) w* \9 z/ S* C(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.) - m6 u" c, k5 u0 D4 P% n

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9 ^8 T. I, p/ _) o- s% C(四)原因解释型
$ O, M3 s+ M& R; `9 Q1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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) ~" k' ~8 X/ I. {. S- N% _Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows. ) q* B2 \2 `9 j. I8 F  T2 g# s
One of the primary causes is that… & G( j0 h8 X2 R1 w8 Z0 {
XXX also results from…
% U0 i, L% t; u) s& M" x… is responsible for xxx, as well.
, Y, _/ D4 d5 W7 _- i. {To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX : \  V; \) W/ L! n( v

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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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背景描述
* d; L* [' e8 K9 w2 [There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that… 7 e7 V1 ?1 V. U) s5 f
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…   P4 L) o7 S" Z) h2 ?' n& @4 R2 y
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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8 v; ^) E7 W; t( B7 m) P$ ga more subtle point which we must consider is that…   W6 N& l; L0 m. H% v# s/ o

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In addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?3 v# Y5 M) V& b; e

# p2 O$ G( \1 Q3 F8 T6 D再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.' h- h& l' o6 i
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