TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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TWE作文模板汇粹
- |/ [+ Q& n( }1 u; S! m' A0 k' y(一) 对立观点式
1 ?, S+ i0 z; P7 y9 X: F) j9 d1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)

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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
2 I9 J5 J! _3 ?% f9 MThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
+ w% ?6 p/ X! }3 X1 bWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
) i3 Q) b$ ^" U1 T7 j: c3 V: j8 n% ^A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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/ P( K4 i) ~2 }2 ?1 K; ~2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)


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4 ]+ ]2 E. m$ r, T6 M2 m" C7 I3 _To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
& B4 y3 [! D: V; [. rFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
4 T% b/ f2 k- [9 G8 A- V8 wFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.

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(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
" W8 N" s& @' i4 _. W/ s! j5 KAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
, @$ X  f4 d) V" l( WBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…


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. W- r  M# ?2 O２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
  \1 l9 P! F, d5 x2 c4 h. YA is superior in another way, this is…
( A, [! B6 D  ^It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
/ j9 `( w  Y' l: C8 W% m: o, nFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型

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" B* C9 g! l( I: w1 q. N% A0 f$ FThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
/ J& C: j4 m* p$ x# s# M. V: f, AWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
5 |2 S' B2 l4 b1 LC is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
  k' |5 U' z& C$ i) |( XFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.


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陈述这个事实
' n# A( q  q! i; Z9 ~# xAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
6 R. _/ C2 }5 }- T1 l9 r/ [One of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX



9 B3 B' T; a( s! s7 Z# E3 b2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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% _9 \8 e" M4 B+ N" WThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
  T. c, w$ Q9 H/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
) y6 y9 ~) M" W4 h7 ?7 h/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…



a more subtle point which we must consider is that…



7 t. S8 j: @8 C. g) [, oIn addition/ furthermore
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- K8 Q7 a: E7 tIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]