TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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* w* p1 g- c  h2 N, N2 g4 X' J: n! n(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)




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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
" ^. b$ F. Q% [& }+ r! Q5 rIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
( W% D/ i  H+ p* j' |6 _For A, A 的一个优势
- Z$ Z1 Y& e& S( M; oWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
  s& K8 r# P# Omoreover, B的优点2,for example…
4 r. e' K; |% G9 p$ k8 b* |& mFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.

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" c9 w, Z+ b! O. s$ q- d7 P, X(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)

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After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…

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: [8 F$ r2 m2 {6 k２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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: P; B, _: I# h% S- p7 p(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
2 ~  {( q# u0 ~The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
( J* k; x; l+ S; }/ o' X, {What is also worth noticing fact is that……
! l- c' G3 W: yA is superior in another way, this is…
" K* R0 n) |- C( T7 j8 D3 mIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
3 d, K3 x8 L# a7 J0 L  l4 ^From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...



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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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* C2 W+ i* b! h5 g5 A1 {There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
9 F; C+ D4 [9 Z9 x5 I2 ?/ O9 KWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
2 Z& y' R, s; y% ~6 t6 G3 Z+ uFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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; U/ V" D& d. f# n4 l7 }陈述这个事实
8 X. g/ Z- y' x, fAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
9 r4 d- }( |4 `XXX also results from…
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$ y  B+ T: g" L, Y. ]; v1 `2 s- ATo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX



5 _+ ~0 l( |# U6 C& w& X/ t2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.

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背景描述
* ?( A7 G* z2 L0 b$ u+ }There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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3 A2 v, W. i% F& _& `8 V# k  R4 ~One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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2 U' n9 V% F" q# a% S) }a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In addition/ furthermore

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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

1 S; I1 k1 H. ]再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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2 a, G7 K. t' H! b$ x[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]