TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架


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+ u: u, g  f4 d# K6 o: ?(一) 对立观点式
/ n# d( b2 o. n; D1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)

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! n( I3 o1 v- G! J(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
3 D* H# l4 E6 J# ^0 X% ]From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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: l+ g( E! l1 S  Q5 u+ @2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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' M5 a* x) r5 j9 M* z) H* W+ YTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
5 N2 j0 Q1 y0 }8 n" H& fFor A, A 的一个优势
! y* W5 y  @4 I* b" k/ ?4 c' i* iWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
3 y6 G; e4 _  j% \* ?2 C7 k9 oFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
# R) F% q. E  j& n# k' Von the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
! D; U4 d# f6 W' @" Tmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
# p* e; N" F0 |; s( R1 Z6 S. }From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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* B6 R$ g. |. G1 x(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)



首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
  @2 Q' U$ E1 _* j1 hThere is no denying that…
8 N5 y( [2 Q9 f# n' bAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…


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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)

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2 u# y; J# S1 a2 s# ?( U. T& b(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
1 k$ Z' O  ]* M% b' qA is superior in another way, this is…
+ s, k, o. }9 d4 c# X) L, eIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
' l. Z$ y( Q2 o& @& m5 B$ s  SFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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8 m. b; |& N- o4 N& D; C(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
; @/ I6 c; Z1 @/ fWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
  Y4 }0 s6 t6 e+ ]1 lThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
: B6 L3 h% K& U! r4 l  \* UWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
$ ~. K& d: [5 G9 pC is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
/ u3 }- Z) X  l5 I(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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" @7 E& w& a8 N# [4 [(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
- _) O4 k- w, r7 ^/ M3 hTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX



2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.


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0 Z1 J, ]" X. H, vThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In addition/ furthermore
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% v0 g. J  X( M. s4 ~In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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$ w* c7 h' F5 N, N6 }再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

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