TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架

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(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)


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0 i+ W( `1 K* I/ ^0 p(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
# K3 r) S7 I$ T- I  `The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
8 r! h$ ]0 g2 S7 J8 S+ b6 V& S7 k. g* RA is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...




2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)

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$ u7 v1 Y7 f9 w' l& aTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
* P: w7 d% g: ^1 PWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
/ V- A* C3 o1 H7 Y' z( D- kFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
( {) S# G) o/ i2 F! Z7 ~4 pon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
9 W1 M3 a. K- v: _. b& i% l2 k( W( _From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式
3 w1 n% l) c7 |6 Z! P1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
0 }, q9 p5 \# q+ t* D7 aThere is no denying that…
& o# `) X( ?: I( d& J8 Q5 nAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
1 m: Y" a! i5 ~2 \1 G  m7 {2 EFinally,…
" q+ c2 z( d- K7 r0 WBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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3 N% O$ r: [7 T' s3 o6 w２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)
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) `! T; x" y& `9 u7 t6 K6 P, ](Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
% q& R/ c2 E! t9 I" v" ZWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
) Z. R: u, i0 @9 yFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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) y5 ?8 ?: U' {! k; O8 r0 ~There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
" ~& E: D9 q* V7 n, K" j! j, GWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
* V# Y, ?6 E0 yC is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)



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(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.



4 a  S4 Y+ M- a; w3 {陈述这个事实
% ~" Z% ^9 a/ l0 v5 OAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
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… is responsible for xxx, as well.
# x! |8 C5 Q! Q& s) _To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX

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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.

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8 b9 t- o0 R" N7 t. dThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.


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+ y) O, d& W+ W# k3 h, J* R7 ^2 t& vOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
: h: N6 o+ g6 i8 P& o/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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  Y0 N8 j: o. m) xa more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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3 `, }% L- T8 Y) {0 P0 q' HIn addition/ furthermore


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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

- R' d& {# U' R再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

6 i2 u+ e% _% B0 h[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]