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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架; i) M2 I3 ~8 m9 C1 e- d
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(一) 对立观点式
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5 L4 Q1 W& l, p% V7 l" Z8 u(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
) g; y* u4 @8 n9 y* UThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
9 C! I* {/ R: w! w5 _6 V, iWhat is also worth noticing fact is that…… * A7 }# Y; _, I( O! d
A is superior in another way, this is…
: o8 K4 p6 P6 V# CIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
( h( ?, X5 C" ~- GFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... , d  |' Y- d  E" |, H4 H& _( H
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' R& B3 Q, M( h' M2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B. ! U3 N5 V( y3 c& H( c6 @; O% [" B( d
For A, A 的一个优势 8 e- N4 ^/ e' g( Y& p
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance, ) p# m9 Y: x" O
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
! @" I8 f: ?  V& ron the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
% }4 T" D. ~0 L- L) [moreover, B的优点2,for example…
3 S0 Z2 Z$ K  Q& o0 a$ I/ F/ ~From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2. 8 X" z2 ?5 ^3 J* d
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  Y8 z1 o& k) O' p5 q* A) e5 N(二)单一观点式 8 p* C6 N; |" Y0 J
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型) 7 Q5 i. @# U# x4 M  C
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
2 y" g4 `! M# [- D# X# z7 \After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below. : m: R' I4 f" t! n0 C) q' O
There is no denying that…
) Y# U4 p5 v0 P9 M: k+ l2 ^  K' IAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that… 0 s% L5 l3 {8 C) V% `" b
Finally,… 2 B7 ]# A' Y# J4 f) _$ ~/ M
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型) & U2 Q! B5 J1 o! S' z2 d
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
( e: H9 G* k0 lThe main reason for my propensity for A is that…… * J4 l4 a2 @& V9 G% \( Y, ~  `" w: H
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… 1 E, \. \0 E+ ^, A
A is superior in another way, this is… " a/ a" Z: |; J* X1 Z$ u$ @0 O
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
5 `) f, n2 {2 t, R# VFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
0 T" d) G4 _3 n/ L& R. wWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
5 D1 J9 |5 P$ c9 ^) S/ B: Z+ _The main reason for my propensity for C is that…… " l  c  i" f4 x1 R  A
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
7 a0 g7 i9 v: ~# J" K6 CC is superior in another way, this is… 8 N/ {1 d$ V: o7 J) c. T8 z8 q
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C # y2 ~6 z7 q# E6 D
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
% `, k5 Z) q4 K# D, d(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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3 h. u. `$ u  H1 j1 G/ o(四)原因解释型
( ^8 X) h6 L8 ~8 y3 V1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.   Z2 S' w+ _% ^8 `" Y, O# A
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陈述这个事实 2 x; q# |6 I. a. g) U8 N6 d# f
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
2 L0 Q: r7 W' }! |# kOne of the primary causes is that… 7 z( V$ _' J. @
XXX also results from…
  @6 y; F5 I6 W2 Z, v; H… is responsible for xxx, as well.
3 p# y. q2 n! dTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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  K1 F% o$ G1 C4 q0 S, S# U; s2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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背景描述
8 z8 v( h2 R3 t6 dThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that… % T+ D' R: b5 K9 P
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that… , |5 j9 Q1 j7 \( b% {
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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1 M& X. V! U' pa more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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9 ?7 O6 t+ T  [0 w8 g  hIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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5 @7 ^7 C3 U2 o  f再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.9 i) y+ T! z$ U6 A1 y8 R/ P
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