TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架

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(一) 对立观点式
! i! P: B; z+ w8 w  ?) H1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)

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1 P6 Z& [# ]5 |1 {(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
9 Y, Y+ Y# A" K  b5 CThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
3 c: j+ z' A1 a  Y+ L# o' vA is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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7 O2 [6 O4 r' h( V# J# C) H2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)

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$ \% i% x2 H* m1 Q8 \% Z) ?, B6 E' L9 MTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
: r7 M, c; @' E; @. d: l' D& OFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
: `4 }' a, H9 c( G) z/ k  g4 [moreover, B的优点2,for example…
6 d8 d: D! z6 o. Q# g. FFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式
6 S. s% I" h! W1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
0 `1 U) y  h" R& m1 O" }; g8 sThere is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
0 Z9 T4 l! f: Y7 R" TBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
) N" S4 m! p, R! F; W" m5 q; E+ qThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
" a2 W4 l2 N( X: [: \+ j' @5 U  Q4 qWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
& ^! v' U8 G+ b& o# NA is superior in another way, this is…
, o3 U$ d  f3 S/ K' K( Z" z$ H7 TIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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  n3 m+ Q* X4 F. ^+ K$ w' MThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
6 J) l0 M) Q; [. [  Y" [When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
* @4 e& a! V& y0 u# @6 y9 CThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
; O* y- d' X+ f8 ^) \8 b; OFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)


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(四)原因解释型
& m6 P1 r1 ~8 U* i1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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9 ]' y/ K* p9 U5 pAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
" K3 O+ T/ f. m# N, xOne of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
! t/ I8 N" j  [, I4 p3 T… is responsible for xxx, as well.
- ?5 X: p* ~. @6 q9 [4 TTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX

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5 u. s% z: r: U- f2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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背景描述
6 N8 Q& b* w6 WThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.



One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
2 l  @/ i3 x- a. b/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…

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5 U* s3 Z( z1 z1 Z; D$ X9 r; d7 ea more subtle point which we must consider is that…



- |1 c+ Q" _6 \; Q2 G& uIn addition/ furthermore
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$ Q/ n* s  G. L4 bIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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