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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
- w% [% v, ~ z2 A,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry. " e- @" O8 t) R8 h! u
零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running . # F; t% T! l D1 G; X3 F# p
现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.
5 I+ y" F F, V, ], `梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.
; m6 D1 d' ]( g眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.% P) q% _' U# O+ k3 d
夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night., a9 T- J5 m8 d3 R0 W" B2 j: C
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
& d, S7 K' [8 x' W% {3 L9 v+ D就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.
# U0 V9 V$ H& Q* Y5 D7 ?我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及0 `3 G8 D4 j5 g3 Y3 g2 W% e
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
5 p4 [! C& p4 ], Z: u8 y世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
; a+ w: N; \, }8 n昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
: T' ?. o4 s+ _, d# {8 p* K; ]3 M7 V想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up. O' Q; i# Y( B* y. g
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild. + e0 O9 c0 y, J$ P
寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?- U+ ^6 X! X3 u# }9 o- t
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.2 l# A& O* P% Z5 {5 m( M. q
迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
* i- [$ @+ L; U( ~! u2 d最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.8 C# k( ^$ c0 q( _: q8 u4 a
多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?; C! i; P) _; I
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….0 E8 a! p0 s' v
多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
) S& z$ B9 F) \. v/ T不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
4 {4 T, m2 t$ a' g2 T3 z; P多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, : G. V' p; \# ^, A
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
& H3 [! z' Y. Y4 @3 ~' @6 J. P* {# B多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!3 n! i8 p2 r5 `' R6 R! y
永难平息的泪
* I- ]+ ?2 ?# H, [5 }& c: ~每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes
9 j2 {# a# R5 w7 k+ K# t~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes./ D! A+ z/ f% c
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
$ Y% g* h3 Q7 A让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
4 U) p; W, B6 g你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul * g4 x, t b+ p, h g5 c* L) N
一抹微笑;
7 r4 _3 q5 Y: B5 J; N一个手势;, b& O6 |. j# L8 f9 h- ?8 y
一片话语,7 s0 P% H: A L( ?5 A7 i
愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、
% W8 {# F @+ w" l明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner
. R% _* ]" c/ z$ `7 G/ { H心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.
& b, V6 j3 Z( ~7 a. D这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
: i* ^( J( s; f6 V! f也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..# _5 y; V& ^5 r6 {' z: J
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,. a6 w3 B8 s7 T; f
我并不以为然。
" m+ e) ? {; y可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed
- a8 G4 h) s5 s; b1 T; I) n) c慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .: o9 k. x4 R# O* m' I8 \; W, D
被一种情绪所左右,
6 b; k# N& F1 }8 I$ ^9 E% @总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
8 W, ?1 a$ W1 T6 k O即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you( {; D( Q6 |! D, Q y
也不问我是否喜欢你,
7 j/ O; `$ P3 d/ ]; k y. W对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
% V# I- Y6 Y- N) ]6 j/ L& U- N3 j" f只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you8 p+ J& t3 X: @ Y2 |
3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you
$ P5 K; n" F4 e/ k心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil8 A- h) D% E5 }$ ? c4 f8 R
然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere - s, w: Y2 G2 l+ H& ~+ y
你的身影已化成一种氛围,: f0 t8 u9 V0 P( R7 D Q
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.
: S: s5 ^3 j% h% r! t1 `8 s5 y9 a" U你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! ' _9 ?& _/ X2 z- @
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字& N# |% b; j+ h9 m' ]6 S
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,8 g8 ]" o$ X2 U' Z; L# X7 u
一种声音,and your voice
" ]# q1 z% p6 P' v也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.* I4 ]6 _3 N2 c# E1 q& [
掺杂著幸福的感觉。- m6 ]1 X" n! b; `* p7 y" m
与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
. ?; x$ J; n4 A; j1 x象雪花般撒落在我的心田,
: L0 J0 P* f- \9 x倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.+ o; j* z$ H! M' r0 o6 |6 W* r. ?
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。
@( c% ~! L& L0 N& M你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss. N+ D9 ?$ D+ z' C
有一个能够让思念的人,
0 N, b4 L1 t! `" O2 E其实也是一种幸福。
2 D5 z2 r6 I) }; p6 N, d; ^8 |% k尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer. 6 ^) B: t O9 k' v
柔柔的海风,
7 P% \& s9 o( a& R; i6 b1 q% z甜甜的夏天。7 k7 s4 O, Y+ E" I$ W1 I( E3 G/ {
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy : b) A K( K9 L2 h7 K
只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.
1 I( E4 x" I- `* |$ z; I) t仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.4 ~( K' X4 ?4 Y/ ~9 `$ T3 j
想和你有共同的情结,
4 a; s' X7 E' r/ \0 e/ X共同的心愿。2 w! V7 C, g! S% W8 Y
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
s' V3 Z2 V3 z) n2 T% v一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together* [" S9 O9 v* N9 G8 V( B; U+ L2 e
或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film
8 C' x3 g' B0 b4 B或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.
9 U4 m/ }0 z8 x; ~$ L' X『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
; [! {) d( @: A% b3 ]我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
. e; J6 h# _* R8 \8 d- i浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
8 ^+ q( T& o1 E7 i& {7 m! ]' Y2 O或是轻轻的一吻,
( \% D, |2 I0 K1 H6 C再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』# @1 V7 U& B; K+ \- |+ D) w8 `
就足够了. That is enough.( F( g& |/ {# v$ l: b
这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago!
% W8 p+ c# d7 t终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
7 B& u# U7 W) |* P8 U# t( V萌出了芽,! M' y. |2 H( h" w) H; C
一如对你的思念,the same as my missing4 a- l( N |4 l
浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.) t' B$ a2 `0 R9 V- K0 @& ^) p6 Q
如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand
j6 o/ z1 w; z8 k. Y% K0 R' i能够牵著你的手,
; Q- o# d. G- V) M# F5 p- O5 U4 p$ C4 n那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.. w6 J. e" V9 p9 s+ B
让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. `( j$ P e& C7 b6 K
慢慢地细读,
$ F: d, M% [, z- B: u我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. . z: t9 C: K( ]0 b& u+ k) O
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me
* j# I0 y* K% M" D* {% d) @8 L我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor
8 O! J; K& l: P5 h. s) Y9 p9 q T0 c就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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