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每当说一句汉语的时候,我总在心里想英语是怎么说的.尤其看到汉语诗歌的时候,我突然想,翻译成英语还能保留原来的意思吗?所以试着译一译.
$ N. p1 |, O* C' B前边发了译文以后才发现有些大小写和语法错误.一点一点地改,很乱.所以再重新发一便:
) V/ W- f4 d$ l: F( nEarly morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
) N$ @( D" o& k# |Partial leaves fall down everywhere,squirrels are busily running. ^2 D |+ e9 t* N6 ~- Z4 I
Current I, the same as one tear ago, the same given name, and the same family name.
% q7 b. v/ {: w8 t) s$ L5 mThe same hairstyle,the same bag,reserved laughing and talking., z& |/ c! Z! W, E' e9 A* m
Seemly added something in my eyes,or lacked something.
f z R9 R8 t8 E) VSummer went so fast that I almost forgot those sweating night:9 z, Y; {4 B+ @3 K( t2 ?. _5 {
Cats often played at the whole hot night outside windows to get cool # e3 T! }7 A. d: ]1 I
like us many years ago,mindless self indulgence.
' D5 x$ [( @; d$ w' qI often cherish the memory happened in summer and those people that make me raint even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming.
3 R/ M0 L1 S4 UThe emotion and the carma only is a dream.
& G* g' Y/ M1 n) w% \; x ~* PThat shoudn`t happen to meet each other last tenderlt night.4 T w" o6 B4 f( o; L( _) S
I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
, H: q- O+ u* B7 ]I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
; V& w& L1 M+ E- SIn this lonely world whom I can step inside love to?- B0 n+ X, X8 Q' x: c0 r9 b/ @/ I
Intoxicated then feel cold,5 d. c9 Z4 I, q
the labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.; a1 j4 y, M1 A3 e& u
I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
* N0 p& |0 H: O+ l! ^( cThe amorous man to whom you gave your soul?. `1 h d' X0 P3 `
Why I am always hoodwinked!
& G5 z" F; d+ v5 F* hI have told myself many times cautiously
% o9 c! \+ h* v9 y& g; l& \don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
- k5 f' ^2 g3 F* |2 |# xThe amorous women always get drunk by desolation.
2 q% U3 j6 N) k+ }& Y+ jWhy can`t I take it easy?; F& q* i) p2 [' H
How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
* r+ T% } z2 RWhen the quiet night comes
% {, |! k: }7 ~2 pyour figure usually appears in front of my eyes.& D3 G2 {9 x' b6 s; F' k, Q
The greeting when you met me made my heart in touched unaccountably.4 C) e$ F! `" Z9 m4 ]
Yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul,
m" u8 ~6 y' z. ^% F5 \light the dark corner in my mind.6 i* L- K6 E! t2 R( l7 y- V- Y
I feel a bit of cozy.
# Z6 ~& U0 b8 f) {. Z: CThe deep attached to you in a twinkling+ V4 W# i8 b6 r, q9 {) }) g
maybe is the most light spot in my whole life.* L) N! A% K t$ N9 G2 L6 R
I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
8 s. \2 w: B' A, Jbut accompanying with the time passed
; c" o5 L7 j/ O* y7 @' TI am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion,
, _% ?. G& a" E7 z, S: W1 G8 ?% palways feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly.' S4 t& o9 ]2 W: T& F% W* M
Without asking if you like me or if I like you) k6 ^% ~- u# A: ~1 V
only feel gracious for your existing,- O/ b5 K/ Y& w& u: [% K
onlt want to do something for you.
4 Z4 q2 g, V7 ` ?9 K7 nEvery time when you meet me
9 z7 x/ C' H. I% E( D; E2 |the sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil,
. e2 b8 k9 K l3 G; k4 U7 A1 Tbut I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
/ E9 L/ H& s. v) ]6 OThat live in my heart.
+ k' O" B/ a0 |5 Y8 dDo you know your name can suddenly come into mu mind at anytime?' E4 l# t1 x5 @% R' M, `! b M
Even only your flying clothes` corner when you turn around, and your voice
k7 j0 V* j0 A7 |' S8 [make me gently distraught with happy feeling.4 L' Q) q( c& `! C3 C
The scene that met you prinkle in my heart like snow on the land: H1 g% u- v: a
suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.+ h: v N) P9 Q; B2 t4 O
Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss,, F3 x2 G: O& F# s1 @
especially on the day, the gentle sea breeze and the sweet summer.( a3 M! _. E0 t! R
Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy $ H8 W) u' B) U1 |' p3 E
only waiting for you quietly7 v6 e, J/ w+ B: |% j5 p
just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
- Y `9 l. N4 @6 U+ }) U5 W4 sI really want to ramble in the small rain with you
) Y: F# |& p/ m" F+ rand enjoy the rain washing together
- b0 H7 u/ r8 [8 x) For rush to a film
2 M: ` K' U( L1 L9 p2 o* C, gor listen to a music quietly.
8 R; F/ s" N$ W |6 n4 H9 d- I+ a; PWhom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?6 N2 d9 h- ~/ d8 O3 i7 y
If we embrace ,dance,and gaze to each other,
& O+ G! Y& c" B; ?( n" v: ~% u3 msmile or gently kiss then say: I really love you"., G$ Z7 ^' A4 [! z4 U, ^
That is enough., W1 W0 A8 L9 B2 |* E9 `( d, A1 Z
Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago,
; [' m& P* |& F7 {3 j" Afinely it deeply rooted into the earth in the season and sprout,. r3 `1 H( f2 `* l
the same as my missing./ {( I+ _2 w! J; B2 Y
It comes a little bit of verdure.
6 U: ^( N" K! @. j) S# W0 xIf, If some day I can touch your hand,
1 L8 K+ ]4 e# e4 ^& @+ ethen I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.- D7 W4 e& I/ J4 O- s0 ^2 ^
Let you touch me gently and read me carefully., i+ r& y7 Z7 K9 ?* P+ \) e5 \; x
I will enjoy your mild emotion through your hands with my heart and soul.9 x' n! x0 J* ~& y" o9 ?+ Q
At the moment you reach out your hands to me ,
: E) ?' ^. `' U5 Gthen I will have all care and ardor.. f, G6 S" I' K0 {1 u; L- p
Shall we walk arm in arm?; i2 y- y! n) O& ^9 _3 O. C
呵,太晚了,连检查都不想检查一下,有没有打字错误了. |
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