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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
( [; g3 N6 }" k; ~. D" t,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry. $ K$ C3 l% [# _( M/ D
零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running . 5 M# ^4 c2 C+ [& Q R" q
现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.
3 W8 [& w8 ~5 \# g' {梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.: n2 Z+ |8 ~6 Y* V8 J7 f
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
; m' v5 c. X8 T! _* h, v- B夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.6 R8 ~& l: X2 P/ f5 }% x9 C
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
, j" ~0 @% M6 @就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.( M: @/ s: t/ {. z6 I
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及
U# O0 l% {7 ~0 ~) q$ c( G6 p1 M1 Y那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。" c7 b5 y0 `" O: t9 x z
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.$ F8 b' V2 F* }1 U3 G% P3 z
昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.& \2 y4 W! C/ Z& e$ s% X
想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.2 J: S/ o# V! o0 j- e |, q9 M+ `
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
" U5 v5 L* o7 ]9 k9 E寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?+ G+ X8 O3 b! r6 H0 ?, Z* @9 x* p
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold., L. _$ o( }0 c. N
迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
/ |7 |8 V# A, T4 `: d最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
; O* C+ ]! Z, q) l- ~4 d多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
7 b: c/ T5 ^& o1 I" ZWhy I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
6 R- C1 v9 K- G多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
8 }# J2 x/ A0 ? B4 ]0 _; s不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
U& V( u4 F0 B' X$ I5 O多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation,
6 y# C1 q( i) [为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
; t' i# F* C, c! ]0 O2 }1 N多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!: ^" ^' r8 U E1 R( J& c7 u
永难平息的泪
9 i# P) \% \& Q. M7 ]每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes
& v$ S: ?2 ?4 X4 }, \5 E& q% r~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.$ a( G+ M @5 M! e
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
/ }3 t/ `( O( A8 {让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
: l2 H0 s: W8 N* R+ ~' L你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul r' f6 W1 b' Z, y
一抹微笑;1 b9 S0 C3 D* o# J
一个手势;: [$ t- b( _( L- `, i* y! L0 c# h
一片话语,
: C3 K, G3 W+ s+ a" Y% ?愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、7 @. d1 c1 o6 j! y3 e0 o
明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner" c+ s: F' w: @' |8 d9 [
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.. E0 R/ L; I! S% t2 c
这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling, U2 N: K3 ] Y9 x7 i* x7 _, k* z" x& f
也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..' H, z' \: `) m& U
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,+ D+ t% K W. k+ _
我并不以为然。7 p/ ?: T/ X: u3 W/ o* [
可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed
9 y) h* Z+ h$ d慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .
% Z% A/ M: T ]被一种情绪所左右,' ^9 `! J5 [# I* c
总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
3 N4 I( W2 ~4 t; f' z即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you) [( E# [; X6 `) j7 k
也不问我是否喜欢你,
7 Z; @* Q; J7 i+ q3 R对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.$ F& R$ H* O- h% M! R4 l
只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you5 A- c @6 p# w% @+ h
3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you( I; N$ m% G' h
心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil+ a6 p0 J" h4 K5 f5 p
然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere 9 D/ Q7 G; ]4 h$ W6 e0 d
你的身影已化成一种氛围,+ p0 x; ?, p( i
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.8 Q5 o# K! s5 f* i$ y' G- S3 _3 |
你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
$ W& b2 u7 `* M3 K: M随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字# b1 @4 g3 ^; E5 I4 O
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,' U( k- f; ?0 x" N( y
一种声音,and your voice
; D9 t7 R; j U9 c+ b也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.8 K$ ]5 v6 q3 o$ q' U
掺杂著幸福的感觉。
3 H7 [8 v/ ^- h- Z9 u4 I与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
6 `. V6 y3 j! k6 D7 R2 r象雪花般撒落在我的心田,
" C: {% K0 m0 |8 F# o8 ?: e) U+ K倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.' v* ]& f" V( H1 O; X
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。1 u2 J% n5 P9 h5 z- t" T6 c9 @
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss: d2 |& M4 }* N$ Y0 U
有一个能够让思念的人,! ~( Q k. r/ e
其实也是一种幸福。3 x, L. @5 p( f8 ~9 q: p: C
尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
* y3 [, l" T$ \* \- \* {' v2 v% D柔柔的海风,
; R/ \4 e+ e, w9 W3 Z" c甜甜的夏天。) F8 g5 ? S1 \6 d k
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy ( D5 ^* t: `9 D) ^; ]% }
只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.' v3 p* |2 t! Q2 g
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
) I! {* ~3 \3 i+ w+ @: z: h想和你有共同的情结,7 L, e( W) l/ R+ n4 L
共同的心愿。
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you2 T0 M# `8 Q% D- c. c
一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together
4 V. J( E4 ?0 b1 m或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film * i# _8 ~4 b( B2 L3 J
或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.
& N* w% J- t0 b2 \『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
. z7 w# P! t* M9 p j我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, ; Z8 s6 F- x1 `, Z/ u- g) s( t
浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”1 R: X. l& G5 }
或是轻轻的一吻,! e2 m" v2 D% {
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』! r7 \% r+ Q/ X5 q! f6 B
就足够了. That is enough.) m3 @* v: j( R0 e
这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! 7 \$ h. x2 U" K, m
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.: I6 F, X( s# T. @, N
萌出了芽,: G0 j9 X# w* P0 b7 ?
一如对你的思念,the same as my missing. J$ }, \ @# M. ]# \
浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
, I6 b7 X- [2 j7 p6 \$ f0 P; x如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand
6 W4 v5 @ X; M: q5 [% q能够牵著你的手,( {* M, [8 ^8 d/ f w C2 T
那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
4 h4 c K& N9 G! v# [& I让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully.
5 X% {6 r) H% p慢慢地细读,
' T/ a7 ~; W W) R, z0 G' ~我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
% @7 [; s! J" M ^! ]7 L% l在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me
5 v! u" X! f) }; q# S我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor
4 f. N% g5 e0 M( u- c4 m- O8 S就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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