I am translating for the songs of 枫叶情--重建灾区小学募捐义演

celina

I need help after my second draft.

billzhao

what is it? There are so many friends here who are willing to give you a hand.

寒月

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celina

万水千山总是情
词:邓伟雄曲:顾嘉辉
3 t) v' Z. W. e! \3 \莫说青山多障碍
) O8 ]3 @) b6 ^4 d! ~风也急风也劲
白云过山峰也可传情
莫说水中多变幻
水也清水也静
* n  [3 l9 E! I* u9 R! Z" }柔情似水爱共永
- ^2 I( c9 g1 |6 A  Y未怕罡风吹散了热爱
8 M5 c: }+ b1 _$ N, @万水千山总是情
) f- K" i4 I% b$ w, J# W8 _聚散也有天注定
! I7 A. i/ R/ b: G+ [! t8 y+ E% y+ b不怨天不怨命
% m9 F: b4 z# h! S0 b/ d, G8 ^4 H但求有山水共作证
There is love everywhere
Option1
/ f) P" Q# t1 r5 O7 fLook at the green mountain; however, you can not know it also can be a obstruction.
0 V5 ~0 b+ ]  [/ O6 Z/ s& Z/ K" HThe wind blow rapidly and strong in order to pass the obstruction and meet the beautiful cloud.
7 ~; ?0 a0 u2 FLook at the peaceful lake; however, you can not know whether there is danger inside.
' R2 F& M( b: v5 vHowever, our love will help us to overcome every difficult to dive and find the treasure.
8 f% S7 f) e: \1 |. `Maybe some failure will disappoint us.
% k& @9 {0 J3 q% p- k/ B4 hHowever, there is love everywhere
' U+ I$ ?/ j- \$ HOur love will help us to overcome every difficulty.
It is unpredictable that whether we can get together or not.
We do not worry about too much future.
$ Y! e; M4 F) l2 ALet’s just enjoy this moment.

celina

阳光总在风雨后
人生路上甜苦和喜忧
愿与你分担所有
难免曾经跌倒和等候
要勇敢的抬头
& ]9 A. U- @  i8 p! p& M谁愿常躲在避风的港口
宁有波涛汹涌的自由
愿是你心中灯塔的守候
在迷雾中让你看透
阳光总在风雨后
/ f% H+ c: n# p乌云上有睛空
9 @7 T! X1 k# }( _& w9 ]9 N珍惜所有的感动
5 ~9 W( P# h9 b- |/ e* K) |5 o! x每一份希望在你手中
  w2 C# j% L8 U9 C" {- F0 H" l阳光总在风雨后
- ]$ w- ?, a7 t( a8 A& B请相信有彩虹
& c& p% T2 P( [' q4 [% B4 @风风雨雨都接受
) e3 [- _8 j2 w& z! X( E; |9 e& q我一直会在你的左右
There is always sunshine after raining
There are happiness and sadness in life.
I will share with you everything.
+ z* }1 R1 Z! c" _5 F8 X( q* e" GIt is hard to avoid failure and the process of waiting for success.
( D* G! \# i) _( q) V+ LWe get together and bravely face them.
; M2 n. h* Q# V/ V/ t& U. ~3 CEveryone does not want to have a common life,
We prefer to have a challenge like a small boat travels in the sea.
1 h# B+ i2 F3 v5 q2 cI am willing to be pharos for you to show the right direction in the fog.
2 r' B3 F* \2 ~+ n) Y6 X! E  B* n5 NThere is always sunshine after raining.
There is sun above the black cloud.
% E: }7 j" `9 @" V/ HPlease cherish every moment you are moved.
Take chance on every hope.
. t! |: X2 v: \+ l$ K$ U2 \- ^+ X2 c2 PThere is always sunshine after raining.
$ \( @* q1 I( H3 K2 c6 J+ a; ]' ^) e8 YWe can just believe that there is rainbow after raining.
We will bravely accept every situation and deal with them.
I will always accomplish you in your life.

celina

让世界充满爱
1 f7 V: n5 ?7 Q- F7 k
1 g4 x5 G- N5 [, m* T1 x轻轻地捧着你的脸
为你把眼泪擦干
这颗心永远属于你
告诉我你不再孤单
深深地凝望着你的眼
不需要更多的语言
紧紧地握着你的手
7 C: |" r, S2 |7 K这温暖依旧未改变
我们同欢乐我们同忍受
我们怀着同样的期待
1 r- R$ @% w" Q. r+ s5 c! K& h: r我们同风雨我们共追求
- O8 _* D4 c3 U3 y我们珍存同一样的爱
( b* I1 B, n  N) k* ^0 M0 n无论你我可曾相识
无论在眼前在天边
7 p4 j# c' `: B! r4 a5 O8 x+ I: @真心地为你祝愿
. V0 g, r# O0 E5 ?) T祝愿你事事平安
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" Y5 H) M0 {8 W' `) X& kLet the world full of love
* i8 Q' e9 q! I- j- WGently holding your face, I wiped away your tears for you.
My heart always belongs to you; please tell me you do not feel alone anymore.
1 N) i, ?  a5 yStaring at your eyes, you have already known my meaning without saying a word.
  I5 j6 A4 h* U8 ]' NTightly holding your hands, the warm of your hands still did not change.
7 f5 e  u- v2 ?4 Q0 {) \We share our joy with our stand with the same expectations. (?)
We have been face difficulties together and pursing with the same purpose.
3 A8 s' @  [3 n5 FWe treasure the same love for both you and me.
8 W( r2 T: ^* t2 `/ ]6 M3 TWhether we know each other or not, whether we have been in the same immediate horizon,
. g% z$ f. J/ MI sincerely wish you are peace .

celina

明天会更好
轻轻敲醒沉睡的心灵
慢慢张开你的眼睛
  @* k. l% O6 x) b  @看看忙碌的世界
是否依然孤独的转个不停
春风不解风情
+ `3 ?. m, o6 _4 h: B吹动少年的心
) {: g, i* }8 \3 K( m/ l8 `让昨日脸上的泪痕
6 m, z4 Q7 y) a# \  A& t* ^随记忆风干了
抬头寻找天空的翅膀
候鸟出现它的影迹
% S# \1 C2 ]0 \' A带来远处的饥荒
$ W( i& D; k# @无情的战火依然存在的消息
+ E- |3 P+ ~( O* W- S玉山白雪飘零
% j4 E) E' l. P' }燃烧少年的心
使真情溶化成音符
2 H; \. w, _0 H6 _. }4 Z倾诉遥远的祝福
唱出你的热情
伸出你的双手
$ g- ]$ h$ y9 k+ z让我拥抱着你的梦
& s8 X) o, k6 i" b* {7 o" G" g让我拥有你真心的面孔
让我们的笑容
充满着青春的骄傲
) y: j" ?) G' p' A% k# Y为明天献出虔诚的祈祷
5 o6 x6 K# J# @' T  W/ i! S# u2 k谁能不顾自己的家园
. V: b; n0 x" O1 A. @, _$ B抛开记忆中的童年
$ _. Z  n8 f' @/ h3 L8 k谁能忍心看那昨日的忧愁
带走我们的笑容
1 g! h6 m& j/ E, H- a+ F青春不解红尘
" q" O4 p- ^7 E! h1 a7 `! K胭脂沾染了灰
让久违不见的泪水
0 _0 W. H! |: r滋润了你的面容
! I( R% W+ f) c4 m! u唱出你的热情
+ B9 T$ r6 d& J伸出你的双手
让我拥抱着你的梦
" z) C8 R/ C$ @* S  P让我拥有你真心的面孔
让我们的笑容
5 ^3 u" w$ N/ V4 [充满着青春的骄傲
为明天献出虔诚的祈祷
/ R8 \" E( g+ Z, O- s! ]' F轻轻敲醒沉睡的心灵
5 L3 q: `! b5 P& J慢慢张开你的眼睛
看看忙碌的世界
4 a- i4 K% {4 K/ j1 _是否依然孤独的转个不停
日出唤醒清晨
大地光彩重生
$ _6 v; J  F  S让和风拂出的音响
$ j0 ?& i6 P8 ?* }: g谱成生命的乐章
' o, Q& A  U3 f, }& {$ ?, e; U唱出你的热情
4 A4 I$ Q# W7 m& a2 d' Y伸出你双手
让我拥抱着你的梦
3 o7 T; E9 ?/ D! @% T* X" J让我拥有你真心的面孔
让我们的笑容
* G# p  E, ^9 g( ~# X9 P$ `9 O充满着青春的骄傲
! e( G0 H+ ~; {6 P让我们期待明天会更好
0 |% W1 k7 S" @/ Q( }8 s+ xFuture will be better
) M/ X8 Q+ _6 T4 e0 z% DI woke up in the morning and open my eyes,
% ^  ?! ~6 T1 k6 ~8 n9 H1 R# X$ p6 JAnd see the busy world whether the same as before.
& g& ^/ w' t7 q; B2 ~7 _) qI cried because the earthquake destroyed our hometown.
I looked at the sky and saw the bird flying from my hometown.
, y, _7 `, t( [% U$ BIt told me the news of the hungry and disaster of Sichuan.
I live in Canada far away; however, I bless my hometown using my songs.
3 w1 R7 T" T/ kLet’s sing with burning passions.
& v/ [  i  W2 }+ ]/ v0 sLet’s shakes our hands with each other. (Let’s get together to overcome the difficulties)
2 Y' U2 V8 C8 ~0 x% rLet’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
3 p+ _% l( ]! `3 y! W0 UEveryone loves their hometown with memory of their childhood.
Nobody wants to see the disaster take away our happiness.
We got together bravely to overcome every difficulties.
* _3 @! d/ l, l! ELet’s sing with burning passions,
Let’s shakes our hands with each other.
Let’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
Let’s have the same dream
Let’s sincerely bless people who suffered in this earthquake.
I woke up in the morning and open my eyes,
And see the busy world whether the same as before.
  y; `& d- O0 {  p3 UI am crying because the news of Sichuan earthquake destroyed my hometown,
However, I know that the sunrise will come finally.
- K8 ?; `- I  W# }# K And the mother earth will also renascence after the disaster.
& y$ x  Z7 t' T1 A. GEverything will pass and have its new life. (Everything will recovery after the disater)
Let’s sing with burning passions.       
  s! Q; P; O7 m7 y1 lLet’s shakes our hands with each other.
: \! c- |9 r- z, bLet’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
Let’s hope future will better.

celina

Please give advice as soon as possible because they need be done before June16.