I am translating for the songs of 枫叶情--重建灾区小学募捐义演

celina

I need help after my second draft.

billzhao

what is it? There are so many friends here who are willing to give you a hand.

寒月

post your draft here, a lot will help

celina

万水千山总是情
词:邓伟雄曲:顾嘉辉
1 I3 o* v: C' C! `莫说青山多障碍
风也急风也劲
白云过山峰也可传情
2 r# L- J. @0 R3 t' `# \; G莫说水中多变幻
4 z0 l- H/ K) T7 E  l/ s" _水也清水也静
柔情似水爱共永
6 I: ^: A: [9 U/ J5 Q9 b+ u未怕罡风吹散了热爱
万水千山总是情
聚散也有天注定
不怨天不怨命
, x2 p, s. Z1 \. s但求有山水共作证
6 T+ O. M6 u7 Z# hThere is love everywhere
Option1
8 B6 u  K: S" x7 DLook at the green mountain; however, you can not know it also can be a obstruction.
: {. ~# S9 P! rThe wind blow rapidly and strong in order to pass the obstruction and meet the beautiful cloud.
/ v; W1 e+ M, g$ z! a2 S& }0 mLook at the peaceful lake; however, you can not know whether there is danger inside.
However, our love will help us to overcome every difficult to dive and find the treasure.
Maybe some failure will disappoint us.
However, there is love everywhere
# h4 Y8 d( |  ?! G7 Y' j1 e: L9 T2 hOur love will help us to overcome every difficulty.
- W8 Y9 S' g, d8 l- l0 `) G/ a# {4 h9 _It is unpredictable that whether we can get together or not.
We do not worry about too much future.
Let’s just enjoy this moment.

celina

阳光总在风雨后
. p0 ~6 `) ]/ u人生路上甜苦和喜忧
愿与你分担所有
$ \5 P, r1 f$ o+ W/ F; n难免曾经跌倒和等候
# D7 z* m  t+ T2 R- E要勇敢的抬头
) x7 F( X& {! H( L谁愿常躲在避风的港口
宁有波涛汹涌的自由
9 ^! ~. E9 v; B2 g6 B, E$ [愿是你心中灯塔的守候
在迷雾中让你看透
5 t# X- [) q& _) }. y" Y阳光总在风雨后
乌云上有睛空
珍惜所有的感动
每一份希望在你手中
阳光总在风雨后
请相信有彩虹
- O: ^+ m: H7 Z9 ]# n风风雨雨都接受
我一直会在你的左右
2 J2 O( C$ F7 S2 H. {There is always sunshine after raining
There are happiness and sadness in life.
I will share with you everything.
It is hard to avoid failure and the process of waiting for success.
  ^0 n" Y  l) h  W/ IWe get together and bravely face them.
/ t5 i- a6 x9 S7 F) V9 M* kEveryone does not want to have a common life,
% f; C7 @) I; _5 a2 ]We prefer to have a challenge like a small boat travels in the sea.
I am willing to be pharos for you to show the right direction in the fog.
* x" U' o" L' o3 j1 x0 x* TThere is always sunshine after raining.
8 M+ p* v8 U6 ?) }/ mThere is sun above the black cloud.
' d2 k" Q2 l. B2 s( F7 Z+ k0 {! QPlease cherish every moment you are moved.
$ `' [! z- K* `6 a- S: A& @Take chance on every hope.
There is always sunshine after raining.
We can just believe that there is rainbow after raining.
. H! D7 j  W- [; E3 U2 tWe will bravely accept every situation and deal with them.
  H  w% p& f$ [% q- U/ ~+ a( PI will always accomplish you in your life.

celina

让世界充满爱

3 ~9 T/ y3 C4 n6 d5 j$ m6 l8 s轻轻地捧着你的脸
为你把眼泪擦干
这颗心永远属于你
告诉我你不再孤单
6 B! o0 ]0 _' W$ G深深地凝望着你的眼
2 y7 C. }% c4 r, L5 b- o不需要更多的语言
紧紧地握着你的手
这温暖依旧未改变
) ^4 D' i/ E5 T( v9 _我们同欢乐我们同忍受
- y$ C# O' r2 v/ W) Z1 I  ~0 L2 l( ]我们怀着同样的期待
# K* M! v+ j% O! u6 r我们同风雨我们共追求
我们珍存同一样的爱
0 O) h* w4 d" V% F9 y/ M) L4 B/ u' s无论你我可曾相识
0 N: S6 G0 t- c7 z: z1 C/ m5 n无论在眼前在天边
真心地为你祝愿
; v1 A5 d8 l; u( a% l/ D- ]0 n) ~祝愿你事事平安

" h5 C  a1 n7 W) O2 Z+ ELet the world full of love
; B$ g$ o/ Y! q' H- pGently holding your face, I wiped away your tears for you.
/ V" w, ^8 O# D  w" V, T& eMy heart always belongs to you; please tell me you do not feel alone anymore.
Staring at your eyes, you have already known my meaning without saying a word.
Tightly holding your hands, the warm of your hands still did not change.
! F+ g# {- e- @, Z) P7 a/ E$ U/ ~We share our joy with our stand with the same expectations. (?)
1 T' H) P% P- S3 QWe have been face difficulties together and pursing with the same purpose.
% L  V+ u8 I+ f+ r6 BWe treasure the same love for both you and me.
* f4 A! l! o" L& ]9 I% L/ CWhether we know each other or not, whether we have been in the same immediate horizon,
I sincerely wish you are peace .

celina

明天会更好
轻轻敲醒沉睡的心灵
慢慢张开你的眼睛
看看忙碌的世界
是否依然孤独的转个不停
4 f: N* Q/ t; p6 ^8 \春风不解风情
吹动少年的心
1 X+ U: p4 [8 l0 i# C让昨日脸上的泪痕
随记忆风干了
5 A+ X" J$ |- o/ Y4 V7 J$ \. Z" S抬头寻找天空的翅膀
候鸟出现它的影迹
% w4 a( ]3 w: w. p1 ]带来远处的饥荒
无情的战火依然存在的消息
玉山白雪飘零
燃烧少年的心
% T2 k, D3 k& e" o0 X使真情溶化成音符
倾诉遥远的祝福
  w+ ^6 n, R( ^6 y唱出你的热情
伸出你的双手
/ M! Y3 P" I  G  m; B6 J让我拥抱着你的梦
5 k  c% J  H% k- f, j. R  l让我拥有你真心的面孔
让我们的笑容
充满着青春的骄傲
为明天献出虔诚的祈祷
# @. y: t  ], M谁能不顾自己的家园
抛开记忆中的童年
谁能忍心看那昨日的忧愁
$ n$ w, r1 K8 ?7 }8 S( d带走我们的笑容
- [. t- T* ~6 g6 M! L青春不解红尘
胭脂沾染了灰
让久违不见的泪水
# H6 d$ [) g) o+ \3 H7 x滋润了你的面容
0 \* E, ~" m; P& @唱出你的热情
伸出你的双手
让我拥抱着你的梦
+ l( \$ A) Q' S0 o8 q+ M让我拥有你真心的面孔
& N; C5 T( V  z: V让我们的笑容
( h7 c. k8 w* e* W& U, e9 P% v充满着青春的骄傲
) W( X$ r# @) s3 d7 u9 V. G为明天献出虔诚的祈祷
轻轻敲醒沉睡的心灵
慢慢张开你的眼睛
) f. O; F! Z2 ~3 r3 q- |0 \" x看看忙碌的世界
是否依然孤独的转个不停
$ C2 u( }0 X. Y7 \6 ?5 S4 J1 I日出唤醒清晨
" Q% m# e" t: b' Y& ~大地光彩重生
让和风拂出的音响
谱成生命的乐章
$ @* V: b$ l* M: Q: t唱出你的热情
伸出你双手
让我拥抱着你的梦
& d" C# z5 M8 y9 s# k让我拥有你真心的面孔
5 }' J* H% y  d$ L9 t1 E5 X, }* h让我们的笑容
充满着青春的骄傲
, a" c8 V% E2 M& r8 H让我们期待明天会更好
Future will be better
8 G5 ]* N" C, M% @8 Q2 _I woke up in the morning and open my eyes,
And see the busy world whether the same as before.
9 Y& {, k( J1 V; R5 s' r4 lI cried because the earthquake destroyed our hometown.
I looked at the sky and saw the bird flying from my hometown.
9 j( g% s' S/ r, {9 t, dIt told me the news of the hungry and disaster of Sichuan.
9 Y. V' k' D8 {5 s, A+ FI live in Canada far away; however, I bless my hometown using my songs.
" I# q2 K4 G9 O/ a* F" YLet’s sing with burning passions.
- f8 G9 J8 }7 i8 n! BLet’s shakes our hands with each other. (Let’s get together to overcome the difficulties)
, |$ x- K- S2 j9 p) RLet’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
8 ]+ I; E' r) M! U& p3 r7 ]Everyone loves their hometown with memory of their childhood.
4 K# K- N- }2 eNobody wants to see the disaster take away our happiness.
We got together bravely to overcome every difficulties.
8 D# o0 u8 q! K7 cLet’s sing with burning passions,
3 k, z# ?9 A- X! h. o# T3 eLet’s shakes our hands with each other.
Let’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
Let’s have the same dream
) s7 S- K) P4 V& l; q" wLet’s sincerely bless people who suffered in this earthquake.
I woke up in the morning and open my eyes,
And see the busy world whether the same as before.
; g) t" M0 l% B4 J/ |5 C; {% _I am crying because the news of Sichuan earthquake destroyed my hometown,
, g9 x- @& d- E3 r3 m8 r8 @However, I know that the sunrise will come finally.
And the mother earth will also renascence after the disaster.
: N9 l0 K' D! R5 gEverything will pass and have its new life. (Everything will recovery after the disater)
" c( r6 P1 I$ `/ @1 w: h& U2 y  }7 JLet’s sing with burning passions.       
; o7 \( J( w6 s1 i+ T( ?) jLet’s shakes our hands with each other.
! v  X6 Y* \7 Y2 iLet’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
! Y, k! i; i+ U0 ULet’s hope future will better.

celina

Please give advice as soon as possible because they need be done before June16.