锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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2 z7 x5 S" z! W% S+ t6 ~　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

6 {' W; v& E8 A. U, ]; t5 G　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

6 V% X0 J9 Q5 F) P0 Z4 t　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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5 t0 z' }) F' x& E" Y. [+ d　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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& ?+ j0 C  _3 S4 J* A6 A/ B8 u　　6. Their brain is still very young.

　　改进: They are still immature.
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　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

6 O7 G$ u6 o% L; l) E" @8 Y　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

1 x8 f9 j" ]! F- n7 a& a! F* o　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

) o9 y: T0 @" ?3 `8 X. d2 {) \+ S5 i　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

+ y* `9 i: M1 ~  R　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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8 D1 p1 W% t: t7 Y5 d7 [1 l　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.

　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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2 \: k1 ?# N) C4 ~  s　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

3 a& I/ Q3 v0 c5 c$ l6 b% a$ e" N　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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　　19. They cannot think clearly.

　　改进: They cannot think straight.

　　20. Money can improve their living standard.

3 K  t/ Z* P( g& s8 v/ ~　　改进: Money can improve their life.

　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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1 O  @: M  s( T2 A9 N& _5 \　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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, f7 W  X. m% r1 y4 I　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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  A/ ?) r8 Y' T: n4 C) k+ q; E# a　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

1 }) j4 C5 K" d, d1 @: @　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
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　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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; J8 M: }$ R* p( }　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

　　28. What's about nonsmokers?

  X0 s1 Q9 `" }  F7 b　　改进: What about nonsmokers?
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+ `# [8 B. @. j6 p/ L2 y　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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& i5 I* e, N0 l& E+ L, V8 Y　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

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& S( }4 b0 ^4 J6 X' K+ e　　31. I am not good at maths, but English

; E% j1 J! d( O3 d$ j　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

: b0 R  l" S1 a; Y4 R! W　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?

　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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% Y' G- P( g: ]- a  G9 L3 z　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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' J% g" q3 [' y: P. K　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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' o+ ~% M+ u+ @( m& D　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

% T. ^9 S5 W1 f8 I　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

2 D- k: e5 B. k9 ]. @　　38. No one knows all the things.

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　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

$ K6 X, v" J$ l+ I# L　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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% L) J% J9 @2 a* Y　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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2 X# m2 R4 M7 a　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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2 ]3 K0 p; E& P7 h　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply

8 [. @2 S+ v: `/ I8 p' H　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
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　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.

　　43. They will learn the bad habits.
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　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
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& _- f& y+ Q; X" G: Z2 d　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.

4 c6 ^! k- i0 _) q% P) D0 L: Y, V1 t3 {　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

7 [. @5 h3 a5 ^& R* e　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

4 d- e6 M* Q: W' ~9 @" N  n! Z　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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6 \0 x' G$ P$ m7 C　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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$ ]9 J, u' V; L7 j" n, j　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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4 k% x, N3 }# j% u　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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　　50. I felt alone.
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　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.

Thanks

sindowa

随便

平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka