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发表于 2005-2-24 07:24 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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  1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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  改进:Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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  2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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  改进: Suppose you work in a big factory. 9 \" I0 c* E1 |- s: i; [
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  3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job. ! h2 _& C6 B% E4 k. A
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  改进:You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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  4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck. , p# O! z/ b% g: h, p2 i/ i4 m

$ ^3 o& @9 @+ q/ [2 I* s5 N* P  改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck. % @8 u' s2 u$ h% t6 ], `+ i* T, Z
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  5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level. 4 j% e) y) f; |
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  改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life. 0 c5 Y; `/ [1 h2 h& M6 ~

7 m' X& m' ], Q0 a8 s  6. Their brain is still very young. , [5 W. G5 u6 D( v; f  o
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  改进: They are still immature.   ]$ |1 C1 `/ M- l  ]6 W6 V

8 p1 U5 O" V$ g3 Q* g+ c: E  7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things. 6 m( R  v1 j% M8 C4 k# K
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  改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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  8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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* ]1 i6 ~1 [& H  改进: They cannot tell right from wrong. 5 j5 K, H. O5 O/ J) n1 |
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  9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time. 1 Y) k7 |  {4 B- F& M) i

0 h# b+ @. k: }( s- E$ u( w  改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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% @# [- S" _( J- @( L/ d$ q  10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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9 l. J) g+ {0 W) U5 Q: J7 t  改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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4 H" F6 M  {. W5 y) p% S  11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development. ; M6 t! i( I2 W& ^7 o4 |# P$ k! @

0 }, q" ?$ \1 H3 n+ r  w5 ~  改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development. ) o+ L& m5 ~4 P
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  12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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  改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money. " Z0 L$ Y* L( H/ y$ ?
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  13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life. 4 C5 l9 r% {+ n) j

$ V7 c$ a7 J4 s8 T3 k1 r* M  改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one. 7 V7 Z; ~% E, E& L+ _: M* T
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  14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money. ( @* {5 P' f1 J: r1 k- U
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  改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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  15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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  改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products. ; p" Y) l/ }9 O! g4 x3 g9 q; f/ Z' V. m
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  16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills. : g) |1 K  {9 w7 J1 ^) t& h
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  改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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  17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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  改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand. 6 x8 o0 ?! Z5 a6 {$ ?- _& j
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  18. This knowledge will become a part of your body. 2 Q, A: Q7 c$ r$ ?. u2 z$ B3 S  l
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  改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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  19. They cannot think clearly. 6 D" M7 ~. r# U1 w1 ]
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  改进: They cannot think straight. / D' c3 r3 i/ U/ N9 b- z" l# D" R
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  20. Money can improve their living standard. ; M2 [+ R( C1 _2 q; b3 v& u

% t9 g0 D6 o! W  改进: Money can improve their life. 2 e+ p% F- c* f3 n
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  21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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  22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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  改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life. 6 ]1 F2 ~# j! b/ A, w; d: H5 z7 u- v1 x
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  23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later. , E7 k+ S( S9 m4 e5 G- ]/ p
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  改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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  24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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  改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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# p+ c4 f$ A0 }/ y9 I+ D  25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others. 8 V' D: I1 I7 D% A3 P# p3 U0 s

7 j% {, D, K! n) w8 K: k. X  改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
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  26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing. 5 @1 k! l, ?3 W& W0 k

. e" t9 ?4 o; |$ p% |. V9 _# r: b+ {  改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal. $ {5 g3 [( p( W2 W. K

7 _4 \9 ]) a' w! `. \/ A$ o- u  27. Smoking can help you relax your mind. 0 q) Q% V* b/ D8 H3 d& ]
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  改进: Cigarettes can help you relax. ! `7 ]3 {( ]! J

# `8 p- J5 d" D( H  28. What's about nonsmokers?
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  改进: What about nonsmokers? 5 b1 u' m1 h. o1 V) Y/ d3 P5 H
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  29. Why not to be a non-smoker? 7 e9 O9 _) `1 |' V, b6 J

3 O1 \+ T/ r9 _) O  改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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  30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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  改进: Everyone has friends in his life. 5 p$ {- H. }6 x  k
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  31. I am not good at maths, but English
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  改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English. / Z% W9 Z1 M1 [" e1 t/ n! _0 I
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  32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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  改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time? ! |1 K3 k6 j4 A5 Q
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  33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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6 ]6 S8 Q# W0 \  改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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$ b2 k# k; S, ]% \( N; x3 i+ p  34. I agree the latter idea. ( j$ g2 B# }% S" n: N9 z

0 H' m$ d! q3 Z, Y  改进: I agree with the latter idea. ( D& C" e( K! c  I4 N# m2 }8 Z7 v, ^
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  35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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  改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo. : m; ]9 i% Z3 s& G8 ]" }" }
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  36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now. 3 ~( ~. x- @* e

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- q" H5 l& T9 f  37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are. # f( z; o; L, |
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  改进:People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn. 6 a# u* `3 @4 k. I5 J. v0 [
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  38. No one knows all the things. 7 t  c4 p5 F6 s
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  改进: No one knows everything. 2 D! h4 `4 f9 w# w/ X

& ?& k8 s7 h0 ?( L, n  39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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  改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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  40. Each form of having friends has its advantages " E) O; Q1 L3 \. x% K
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  改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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  41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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1 F  `3 T/ g* ~* h, {! C5 c  改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply + B) T8 D, s2 `7 }* b
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  42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor. . N* [: W2 N( J
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  改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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5 f9 T7 N3 H, g6 k9 A% f  43. They will learn the bad habits. & ?: U4 Z5 c& F- H3 C' R% _

9 N1 @- E) ]) i1 M; r& a& V  改进: They will develop bad habits. 0 [5 A4 l2 a1 \

: |! x# s. @9 {/ a3 |# N  44. In this continued process, people make progress. 7 G, z4 Q* j; J
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  改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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  45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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  改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary. & s0 p3 o+ l' G) ^+ U+ _
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  46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency. 3 i/ D9 b) J$ t% a7 G- M, m
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  改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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  47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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  改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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  48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing. 5 ^+ ]: _0 z! i
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  改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream. & Y- M  U- ?  v: B/ P# H4 A
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  49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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  改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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发表于 2005-2-24 08:39 | 显示全部楼层
wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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Thanks
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 楼主| 发表于 2005-2-26 07:02 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
平时的积累,呵呵!
大型搬家
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发表于 2005-2-26 14:03 | 显示全部楼层

顶!

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发表于 2005-3-1 08:25 | 显示全部楼层

很好。

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。
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发表于 2005-3-1 08:37 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
是现状的意思
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发表于 2005-4-9 18:26 | 显示全部楼层
:lol::lol::lol:
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发表于 2005-4-9 20:42 | 显示全部楼层
Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵
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发表于 2005-4-9 21:09 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
有些改进似乎意思有些改变...
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发表于 2005-8-24 02:47 | 显示全部楼层
好哦.xiexie
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发表于 2005-8-24 19:48 | 显示全部楼层
thanks
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