锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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, s8 ^6 X8 d1 W5 Z( p7 ^( c　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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2 p1 k$ |1 w8 \　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

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* Y( g# R4 ~9 O　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

: `; f5 t# Y* ]7 D5 `7 L8 P- J* O　　6. Their brain is still very young.

- b. z! m. E; V) c' P- v. H　　改进: They are still immature.

　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

5 W$ l( x4 k0 N* D- E1 F　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

$ |2 q9 W2 P4 x" q, a/ Y　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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/ O1 q0 z0 N9 x  y# i1 F3 X　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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/ D& D" s9 M6 [, g1 C/ R, H　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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* z. ^! v; ?1 P$ K4 W　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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) y2 k4 M/ O* W+ r5 z  S0 P, t　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

; |, v2 u" `/ w  x" x0 F( T　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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) l% [4 F  C3 t: q　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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; n1 J6 D  K1 |( W) s: O. u　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

" X+ |( a$ w& }/ I: O2 t: A3 U" a( O　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.

　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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* V( h+ p( T, s  b9 R　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.

. u4 k/ c3 Y( z- ?! _5 \　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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2 |' ~( i' D8 b8 K0 c( h　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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　　19. They cannot think clearly.

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　　20. Money can improve their living standard.

　　改进: Money can improve their life.
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　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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6 h+ ?  u. Y! \1 x　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.

% G( A+ u' a. |  O　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.

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　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.

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0 W% e; W; C  R0 ?　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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! Q# h- k  K& V　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

' \" B1 G, @# Y2 T1 x+ z　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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　　28. What's about nonsmokers?

- h2 h9 [/ Y: G7 B& B- u: y, ^3 e　　改进: What about nonsmokers?
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: x+ A. a( I" e* t! q' L5 `　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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% S, g8 W! x. |7 g. F　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

　　31. I am not good at maths, but English

　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

! Z5 o# ^1 ]3 j3 i+ c　　34. I agree the latter idea.

  l, W: d- F9 @　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

7 i8 N* @. @( X( g" ]6 o　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

: ]# G' _" _% n8 d( L0 Z　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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! y2 N5 X: u5 F' H* L9 f　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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　　38. No one knows all the things.

　　改进: No one knows everything.

　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

" `  s7 n7 v" r3 J　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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, d5 [" R7 ^& |* C4 c4 w  [　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

; @: Y# Z+ _# ^: U& M0 c- X　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
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/ o# G9 ^7 n$ A- q8 c　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.

　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

. r7 a& k0 P# `6 E, Q  X　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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3 f- z6 M- g& Y# j8 C: U　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

/ v) M5 R2 ]. z; `　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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5 O; i( n/ T# F* g- C8 I+ U  t　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.

　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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　　50. I felt alone.

　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.

Thanks

sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka