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1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level. 9 `4 R# g( V" o$ w# w- q2 B
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改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization. ' i" y5 t" \3 _/ D) o& }
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2. For example, you work in a big factory. : \8 c3 t6 P+ J
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改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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5 g8 {" L/ ^+ u/ J 3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career. 1 ]7 A4 i5 ]( a7 T
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4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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: N, G8 d' A5 k2 |2 Z; G 5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level. , R+ B- v; F7 L8 N
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改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life. % O. m y5 V+ t6 {
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6. Their brain is still very young. ( I: J1 B5 ]* D9 s' q: u: w
$ ^6 d% [0 }3 k7 h: T2 o. {* d3 v1 @ 改进: They are still immature.
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7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things. $ b) O1 A4 g" j3 n/ P5 @" V. J% _
+ F/ f0 M) N+ h: K2 s 改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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, m& d! X8 S! v 8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong. $ g0 B3 S# t% f8 ^7 M1 L
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改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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) U( W) P0 t9 S5 D; J9 e 9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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- v# z, i! | x8 B" w 10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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4 V( ]( _5 v' A. Z. |: K4 T 改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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- e+ n @9 {0 B( O2 V+ ^, [ 11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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) ~+ d' L1 Q2 y# H 改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money. 1 G, S& Y9 W$ |. x% w
0 I' w, K: P2 b- [4 T 改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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4 J9 O1 R9 o, V, _7 y6 ~. v 改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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! Y7 u# v/ } ]2 q% i( k" i# R 14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more. ; f( r/ r% Y3 p j2 ^
; e6 v; j1 W3 B2 J4 E" k; U- T 15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products. . P% ^8 X9 V7 _
+ u, b* n+ j/ }) { 改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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' [5 Y- v6 J' u/ `5 F* P3 w- m- w+ _ 改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand. 8 ~6 e; R0 W& b% i1 }' O
& k/ k7 |8 Q" G# _7 x, ^7 \6 t. l, D 18. This knowledge will become a part of your body. ( K$ b7 t9 g# _. e# H- U
- w: ~) x: l( z9 @ 改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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19. They cannot think clearly. 7 `- U3 `# f0 y9 R+ A3 k3 i2 U
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; X; j# Y' ], \( Y$ y9 z# m 20. Money can improve their living standard.
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! |4 a$ ]- A6 c& N, ^ 改进: Money can improve their life. $ @' z# y6 ]" ]2 R* J
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21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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5 ]' t: c# j7 G$ f- Y K 改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life. : ?- H4 b9 g5 ]2 l& ~4 |; _) C
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23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later. ; h3 m& Y4 J/ i! L
+ v( ~7 ?; U$ O 改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn. 3 L7 O* e$ L) V; T7 D/ Y
! u4 N& g3 r$ M2 A: ` 24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano. / V0 n4 ~. D' @! w) U* x5 E# \
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改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes. " k% m' e& k! f+ r4 K- |
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25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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- i) E9 c: I; {) e# {0 j" m9 l 改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
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c7 S. Z0 V' W4 M9 F. T 26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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" I( ?" ^7 ~( j! l' u5 H+ _+ N# r 改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal. 0 U3 @( w a- D+ t, A, T
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27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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+ ?- x" k3 ^' G3 y 28. What's about nonsmokers? 4 e" U6 B1 }' X' R- j! e
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6 Z. q) u0 v8 f9 I6 V, ?( k6 q& a- } 29. Why not to be a non-smoker? " y: [+ G5 v: ?) {' J
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改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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3 ?" t8 D) p' S( @ } 30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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4 F, g" t7 f& `% ~8 A. ]3 U 31. I am not good at maths, but English 1 d- I& Z) F) [: g( j( E
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, d/ J9 u! S4 N/ H3 b" y% \ t 32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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33.It is children who clear about their interests. + o7 w# C) x9 c' a
* R( h$ u/ s5 C. s 改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests. 1 ^+ v5 I8 P# r, O. y+ @
! w, |5 W4 y7 p1 S) q% y 34. I agree the latter idea. : i2 b1 @! O. x8 J; \1 Z! W
( T+ s! h" f) X% x' a& I% }: x- N; U 改进: I agree with the latter idea.
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35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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9 p4 g2 t+ L" p. a3 ]9 E$ l) j6 p, u% G 改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo. , e+ {2 a# V9 w7 O8 }
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36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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! t7 \' j o! c 改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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9 i% {/ d3 E% N9 h7 A3 _ 37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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4 F z' V$ i. I- u: `: i 38. No one knows all the things.
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39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life. + u8 j) j* u& e: x$ w% v2 _
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改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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% @$ u8 H3 C' v6 t( Q: ? 40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up. . v9 K! F# W& p5 y. T x
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改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
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改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor. $ ]- u2 {6 Z) ^9 o& Q' I
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43. They will learn the bad habits.
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改进: They will develop bad habits. & e5 m2 z+ E( |8 G+ N. e
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44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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5 o" k8 Q' y `( Q9 P 改进: In this cycle, people make progress. 6 U; c7 Z, S9 o- D
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45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary. * h. A1 S6 ]5 _$ A% N6 H, z) D
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改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary. & X( q" }; O$ W' B1 L
! t- ?5 T! `" { F3 s3 A/ U 46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency. * r7 r3 T3 B$ B, p9 W/ k5 X
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改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact. * d; G6 S, d$ ~( f }: h% S
# y: u/ D* k1 S 改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result. : p! r$ G* P6 v/ h
7 A# s& n# M1 o0 M 48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss. 1 }( R' `: _6 _
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50. I felt alone.
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