我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
4 Q& f( c9 f$ U3 t' B是十多年前的作品了——
, ~" c0 D, u' F& t! b: _: V6 U% _Summer's Coming

1 P0 _1 F4 ^! p, VFaster, hotter and sweater,
" Y( B' N  B) tSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
2 N5 i0 V. ~% L3 u0 s+ cTo my life and dream.
/ O) R. c+ ]& ?# X
  d% |% X2 M, |9 s3 YFollowing the summer's step,
- h  c" e: X8 o, VLet myself go ---
8 y, x* P. {. \1 yGo to the wild rain
) o5 `* ~# r) pWashing my heart and soul.
. p1 ?6 r3 J& n/ v; F# Q
Good-bye, my happy spring;
) Y7 I7 A: T8 l1 m2 E! ~Good-bye, my childish dream.
# |7 z0 a* Q2 rI can prepare nothing;
3 w9 ]$ L) R# s! i/ a6 N# TMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

! S% O9 ~/ m6 [# M% v3 o一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
, T" @3 E; h2 jIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
4 b! z7 k/ ]: y; \" G7 \. x. M/ o: P夏天来了