我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
1 m# @8 Z5 [% R; v3 `Summer's Coming

Faster, hotter and sweater,
5 ~6 E: O; ?6 a& I# n8 ^Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
0 l; R: K- X  W( }+ @! y0 zFrom the colorful nature
To my life and dream.

, I8 T0 }" v  ]6 _* kFollowing the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
1 ^4 h1 b1 H4 P) P# SGo to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.

6 q) \5 A2 _. M; c0 vGood-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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" _: p4 \# G! K& N% k一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
7 k6 @) E8 t' p, J- rbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了