我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
% m9 e2 ]9 l+ [+ R8 j" \/ CSummer's Coming
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; I# G) t+ X9 GFaster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
2 b) x% H2 q% \From the colorful nature
0 D7 K( K# E, k/ Z, m% D$ [; nTo my life and dream.
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' |- V" X4 D: Q9 |4 {, e9 cFollowing the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
8 ?" G# [/ J+ ]1 L- mGo to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.
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Good-bye, my happy spring;
5 g2 q/ }6 i. L+ x9 H% {/ ?; \Good-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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& v* x4 M( P4 G. A一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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; o3 j% a1 a3 }* z6 Z$ Z/ {! N[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
" f! Z2 ?" e; g/ [but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
- U. s- p2 A' j( f夏天来了