我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
7 F  ]* P( v, W. a3 Z- |8 O$ fSummer's Coming
1 Y: M  I0 ?+ c8 ^; {& G+ f5 G
Faster, hotter and sweater,
) d+ v2 a- S( b. K. ESummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
( a5 W! ^# l3 n  S+ K7 DTo my life and dream.
6 r, A! {0 V* e" V, O
) d  M6 g0 b7 g2 I, sFollowing the summer's step,
8 W4 o" L2 I' w. ^+ l; h, ULet myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
- Y% f3 n, l5 f* a4 m6 V; UWashing my heart and soul.
$ ^8 K5 P' w& t
Good-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
& o9 _! s, K' f4 d" i0 j& I# V" G& `I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

+ O# @' V8 B" U& I: z6 V% j一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
7 X1 B  j3 T: y# [4 bIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了