我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
1 m# t+ z7 X. B3 \/ {; q是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming

Faster, hotter and sweater,
/ X& A& G2 h0 ^% [5 F* B# f8 \Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
. s/ U* ~! n% W5 LFrom the colorful nature
- o1 A1 i# g' o3 W1 ETo my life and dream.
0 o7 g3 w8 L# y  ~6 P
Following the summer's step,
/ L# `% w( M% E2 t+ |  pLet myself go ---
: z6 ?/ v2 k& e6 J% ZGo to the wild rain
9 X  P9 l) C9 K8 _, P1 aWashing my heart and soul.

Good-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
8 @. I7 T5 G( u9 _& z" i6 g- e4 c6 BI can prepare nothing;
, h7 D8 h, I" b% r+ r" S: {! JMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

' c% _5 F6 e7 {/ H一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

7 e7 W& j9 d, ?& h7 ^, R[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
8 a) U0 l, c- X+ G0 v2 Jbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了