我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
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Summer's Coming

4 T  f# C) W5 W: L) R" vFaster, hotter and sweater,
* `0 ]; r$ x9 ~- i/ XSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
To my life and dream.

5 c; a/ u7 G2 Z6 M8 Q$ W0 mFollowing the summer's step,
  r# _  @1 K( z+ [) ULet myself go ---
5 I, ?' K) W6 U0 J8 r- I6 c4 `! Z2 w- AGo to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.
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Good-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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8 e& o8 Q0 B+ [3 M: T9 D3 L一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
5 G; ^. l2 d# p- o! ^, ?7 \It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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简约

thank you, i can see it now.
1 o6 d, R2 K9 i2 n  pbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了