我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
- J6 I) f! k: ~3 E# z' {5 x是十多年前的作品了——
" i8 q0 ~/ q  J  G) M5 o1 E3 MSummer's Coming

Faster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
4 M6 F% N8 U9 E- @8 v9 RFrom the colorful nature
To my life and dream.
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Following the summer's step,
; O1 s' S9 n' ^9 d" A% {- }0 ALet myself go ---
/ R- L  N  X, E) N) f7 V) R" tGo to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.
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2 X2 f& F, {$ q2 _Good-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
) h# R3 C1 r* p# w% IMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

! {5 n+ y5 L. A3 K) `一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
: w4 g# r9 Q/ G. t; K' b1 s. Q( MIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了