我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
* b0 v/ u( O8 v( n+ n  nSummer's Coming

Faster, hotter and sweater,
+ A+ x% ?2 D4 BSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
8 U5 ^) w8 }) D& A! c+ zTo my life and dream.
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* \; j5 t7 ?4 ]2 J, u+ hFollowing the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.

& n8 o8 z% n: X5 B# l7 PGood-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
) J0 t+ ~( y% M) D0 Y' [8 pIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了