我尊贵的邻居(11)

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我尊贵的邻居
5 |7 L* o4 r2 I' S0 s是我们小区  几十户
* i* {8 ~+ N0 m' y# L- p唯一的元老
) E2 z! F3 M, t3 }: f6 W& S$ `" b一住三十多年

邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
白发红颜  不见皱纹
1 k& ]+ `1 b" l开车铲雪  挖土栽花
似不识  岁月为何物

8 H: P  [5 m! K* b2 A- R6 o# S头顶英国文学硕士的光环
5 ^( v1 d2 k9 O  z6 p邻居气宇轩昂
如同女面朱熔基
% y2 S. P8 h# B% ]0 ?邻居的字
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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9 g! x: B1 i$ D+ m3 I" T邻居酷喜中国文化
) o+ s* ~0 Y1 C1 _: q2 q6 ~" o& l说她属土龙
- ]5 \0 u: D$ b/ m" i其笛声也悠扬
) ~& E* c/ q' ]0 t9 I5 p. w那是从隔壁传来的
" O# F# x3 G" C唯一的声响
7 z+ t2 B0 W  z5 n: e那不知名的曲调
2 w9 i1 P! G( f. i1 x2 `反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂

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这首哪天有空好好翻译一下，写张贺卡送过去，顺便取取经。回帖备忘。

张玉

老人是宝啊

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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换

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2 B: h* n0 d4 x+ o9 s英文版，欢迎指正：
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/ f3 [! c* j4 ~5 H9 T( PLiving here for more than thirty years,
my prestigous neighbour
is the only first owner of the unit properties
! A, p" _4 z8 k4 C$ X' G8 i! Din our community ---
2 b& q# x+ ^" F) P+ [0 C  ~3 itens of townhouse condos.
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! }9 n, Q/ ]7 n  b$ B5 {( j- ]1 {0 _5 UNeighbour is more than eighty years old,
% @- f7 f& s# z  |3 h$ D! r; h/ jmagically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
She has white hairs and red faces.
( J& [2 _# g; B' cHer light-footed movement
4 [$ D+ e" b$ O2 `% ris just like a flying swallow.

' y5 G6 t- k4 X( M& QShe shovels the snow on her door lane
! s1 r1 b7 I1 N  ]; R9 p/ O" jbefore driving her own car;
she digs her back yard
- C* [4 \' b# P- v7 _  ito plant flowers ---
as if she did not know what years mean.
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- Q. {8 c9 [. O0 E' d+ W+ c6 iWith the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
7 P! S# b+ \+ A4 cneighbour has a dignified appearance ---
as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
2 B* }+ O" e" V# k& ^* e/ ?Neighbour's handwriting
is so vigorous as to be the old trees
interwined by dry vines.

. g8 z  f3 i. H. P  m# u1 aNeighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---
that is the sole sound going into my ears
* g" c6 _2 x% X" ~  Y$ {from the next side of my wall;
the unknown tune is extolling
# ^" \7 t: _! g/ D. M0 C4 lthe magnificence and brilliance of the life,
! `* d- G- p2 p9 B. c. t  vagain and again.

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土龙，1928年，与朱熔基同年，具体到月份，邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。

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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

* w# y8 N3 `# U9 T从音韵角度考虑，还是不换为宜。我写新诗，仿照古诗平仄的要求，比较注意语句缓（相当于平声）急（相当于仄声）的交错搭配，这是我的独到之处。
* G( D. S. L) `+ f6 B% R# j另外，翻译改动一处：
9 R/ J0 F4 u% j6 L7 ^( T# T, @% y1 ^  xHer light-footed movement
is just like a flying swallow.
: Z* W: d) Z4 {2 b7 K9 f7 n# j" W6 L修改为：
Her light-footed movement
1 e1 A! E. I8 |1 mis just like a swallow flying.

hm86888

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真的是太像朱镕基了！

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: p' d0 V9 r) j9 G真的是太像朱镕基了！
" ]# e' g; h$ G' E' `0 M2 Lhm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

我贴的就是朱熔基啊，邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。