天啊，这个版的英文描述能改改吗

SheJing

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
3 R- N0 N3 [; X) x7 e& R1 pTouching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.

. M. s% H/ K% [5 P鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？？what the fuck

竹帘儿

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
& m6 w. Q5 b7 V/ hTouching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.
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鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？ ...
- e8 w: T6 H1 v9 f3 P9 C% U! `; }SheJing 发表于 2011-3-26 05:48

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珠圆玉润

你指的是我儿子写的那几句话吗。是有很多错误，但我觉的我改了就不真实了。

arbo

We would like to share, not we would like share.
I think it is better to have sth more appropriate.