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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, ) a) r7 Z" l  y+ n9 Z
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  2 `: S: l/ ^$ K/ D/ d' u$ @& b" C8 i
Dreamers
  g; y  j6 |* R4 iSavages0 H( R) C# C7 d/ K, m$ `9 B
Poets4 D: ]9 _9 d# n, t( u
Builders of canoes,: w2 O# G/ Q$ ?; {; n$ A2 \; ?
Black smiths8 h; z- `* c1 u$ r4 ^0 ]$ C
Murderers,* p: u2 _# U" u/ x
Risk takers,
' q% F/ E/ r. g) K! a7 O  Y0 B& U' pMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder
! ^# T( `" \& M% wAs I think of what could be. & s6 ]* L/ ~8 B( z0 V
The world is so big to me
% ?! `' P5 k# Z3 j' `9 AI wonder what it means to be
! O( x- N8 J3 e$ ^2 K$ HI looked up at the star and smiled
1 h: |' Y/ O1 E6 sThey flashed as they have heard all I have read. + u3 _" V* L. Z

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。/ [. f" f6 m' a& B' I5 D
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
2 r+ `, a9 Y& j; J* j顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
* q0 e4 ~1 h, R  ?( h& E* ?4 dA poor old Guy;3 L" Y4 p2 }$ k8 x, y' x# k7 ^5 F
Legs in a bonfire,& b& Z3 Q! H1 |% ]1 X; ]3 J
Head in the sky% B2 Z+ y+ \* P& k- E4 J
Lonely, with the feel of betray
' ?2 g1 d" Z" k3 l, @7 }Heart empty and hollow+ d+ c0 b; K( A
Alone I stand
; i& |; o$ i6 Z! kI am useless to all : l1 ?2 ]! `* G! P% K
But I wish I were a dove ' f  P! x; M; f/ p* M
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
9 \1 X: k; j( m5 F7 x7 UI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind+ m8 e' a  d4 J" q. [0 G% c8 s
I sent prayers to my god& j+ j- Y0 s2 m* L  x, S/ w
Though he does not answer
: ?9 [) z7 D; k, f" PHe bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
  ~% q+ o; F0 m加油加油,经常写写!
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