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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, ' r7 F: i: J; a& L& R7 a0 ^
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  9 c" ~- M1 e# w$ z( p9 m1 W/ Y* ]
Dreamers
9 _) c$ G/ Y) vSavages
. m5 j6 @& b& b+ d$ j. V+ \( fPoets9 F- H( {! Y; x
Builders of canoes,$ e) \. L2 P; y4 x4 |
Black smiths4 o; t! ]$ C( P6 ]& T* u8 V' Q: n
Murderers,
% h9 P) V: N! L9 u) ^% FRisk takers,# _7 E+ r% i( d# ~: g$ O
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder 8 Y0 P3 G0 F( V* g: f4 v
As I think of what could be.
9 J; d! R7 `- R  rThe world is so big to me ! d: \( K* L- K
I wonder what it means to be( _0 X" E$ [* b: |5 [: B
I looked up at the star and smiled
8 d+ V0 m8 O1 a6 XThey flashed as they have heard all I have read. - h9 i8 a5 J) b3 h+ c6 C5 t4 v
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。* R) J& Z: c# y* C( H
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
& k- i- k! ^4 y- x顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,% M, @$ D, c7 \8 j. _
A poor old Guy;
+ D, J3 J: M0 N+ |Legs in a bonfire,* q- Q) A7 O4 Y8 P0 a" ^! Z7 i3 @
Head in the sky2 h, B5 P3 @  v" z& Z
Lonely, with the feel of betray
+ P& t! @! T$ D" vHeart empty and hollow( ~% d' u$ ~, M! Q! ]. W
Alone I stand
& c" S  x8 I1 g$ {# h% X  q; zI am useless to all
, _5 R0 k" T- A' Q9 L4 I3 [But I wish I were a dove
5 o4 O. i5 X7 e* I  P7 T/ NGiving myself to the world, to the fire6 a+ U4 ^, p2 K/ Y! t2 m7 n
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind& {0 R9 i: _& w/ J) A/ j
I sent prayers to my god
8 V+ [+ q4 |  }Though he does not answer
5 ^* Z: A* J. w4 rHe bless me with the gift of hope , x7 J. }( P" U+ F9 f

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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。4 Q' V0 {/ L$ S( y
加油加油,经常写写!
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