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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
' I/ r2 a4 g+ j5 f7 J4 jI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  1 v; G6 G7 {1 Z8 X  J2 M
Dreamers( r4 p9 r/ k: t% B
Savages
9 n$ q1 p1 M$ W3 g4 l; qPoets
/ `* G. P! @/ p1 h8 y$ S' UBuilders of canoes,
* i4 t7 ~1 ~. a9 A; WBlack smiths
2 {% K9 e& u+ [2 hMurderers," C7 f1 `' t/ N& {
Risk takers,
  Q6 ~0 @9 h4 s( |$ XMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder
. E  p" g! m* n5 O$ DAs I think of what could be.
) I. S% N! |- J! [0 j- C2 r+ fThe world is so big to me 1 G5 S1 Y- S! x; m# U
I wonder what it means to be
1 |! T. D! R2 d# n+ KI looked up at the star and smiled
3 p6 ~( T1 o0 xThey flashed as they have heard all I have read. " k9 _; |. e' k
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
" p5 X: k& ~) L8 p评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
2 u; \# Q7 o+ Y顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
8 W0 K; s' m0 r# uA poor old Guy;
5 A& |$ r9 l  r  k. G4 mLegs in a bonfire,; }" _1 Z6 {: Y' D+ `( I5 h% q
Head in the sky& N. _9 J+ ]4 g! [9 F- b
Lonely, with the feel of betray' S0 w* O8 e5 m% C- {) l
Heart empty and hollow, R5 _+ T( F6 V" K% O% u( B9 x
Alone I stand$ n0 f& H6 A& ~# ?) q+ ~/ t. }
I am useless to all 5 o1 ~/ C7 N* o3 ~: O' s3 c+ n  O1 D
But I wish I were a dove - Q6 M4 l5 y  Y- T4 U0 j) v
Giving myself to the world, to the fire  x* }$ X( t4 M  E- Q9 y
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind! n! R$ t8 w7 O# h1 ^8 b( k1 u( v' B
I sent prayers to my god
" U2 y0 Z8 e: O, l- |- OThough he does not answer" ]) _8 O* g& O0 P
He bless me with the gift of hope 1 O: T5 n$ g. |, I. J0 B# X: ]

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大型搬家
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。. Q' W% {7 Z: N& j" o* P& R, j
加油加油,经常写写!
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