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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, ; |1 k; t0 o7 B2 S5 x5 x2 C
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  , R9 @3 u+ }7 V  N. |1 O
Dreamers8 ]+ g8 D9 B! t" H* T
Savages
% b& s' j( U- |; ]% ~7 rPoets
# @% D: h- ]- B# ~: i* DBuilders of canoes,
9 t0 D* g4 e8 Q  y* R0 gBlack smiths# b1 f4 n, o' o# P# c
Murderers,% L* R, g! m3 S, p5 ~% w% {7 a/ S
Risk takers,
  b# o) p; q: Q: Z) P9 d& JMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder
$ N3 o* a6 X! U2 g3 K3 AAs I think of what could be. $ P: ~- q  i0 w: l0 W- `$ d8 s" U
The world is so big to me
. Y4 j! j6 s8 @) g4 }I wonder what it means to be
* h! F' o! W/ @/ Y* {4 @I looked up at the star and smiled
+ n4 @4 F# T9 ^# iThey flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
% w  i6 H7 q9 a2 |评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
% s! r! E9 ^- x& c2 w顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,( X* Z$ ^, h4 q( Q2 e
A poor old Guy;9 a' L6 x; L5 M7 a9 d
Legs in a bonfire,7 z% v4 _& j& o# j: f
Head in the sky0 d$ X% r- \3 e3 @8 u- [& e7 e
Lonely, with the feel of betray( d$ N4 @. Y, Q- g, s3 B
Heart empty and hollow
( O2 K4 j: A, @8 kAlone I stand  n+ \; Z# V! s
I am useless to all - q* m: z& d& L/ w$ C5 H
But I wish I were a dove
4 J- A) s( C( y  W- iGiving myself to the world, to the fire
4 M7 W0 h$ d! w, V9 W; CI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
- B& f8 e8 q  s6 d: y" s9 T0 OI sent prayers to my god
$ u" f& B$ T/ i" |; _' KThough he does not answer
& q$ O% i2 Q- p# }7 E; Q, ^* ZHe bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。. B6 u: z: O8 Z% z
加油加油,经常写写!
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