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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, 7 J) U: L, d6 U0 `3 c
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  / O; y# v" s" ?9 `/ `# ?
Dreamers5 V7 ]6 f, Q2 J: y- C0 S* c/ y6 X: M* C; @  J
Savages
& K1 m0 Z( N5 k- ?# |( m' RPoets
7 z& n8 m0 a0 }. F" ^2 WBuilders of canoes,
2 w& w: f9 \. |3 B& zBlack smiths
  @0 Q7 O  U0 d- NMurderers,
, W# k3 G. ^0 p9 s, bRisk takers,( S; n8 Y9 L- i& i/ v* b! G
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
% K; _1 p6 h) E; J% WAs I think of what could be. # E; Q/ b: D% P) E" N. r# B4 h5 q
The world is so big to me & j: v) R: ?! O, m$ {
I wonder what it means to be: c" Y) E) d+ f/ Q; R
I looked up at the star and smiled 3 j+ Z: t: {; c0 ^; q
They flashed as they have heard all I have read. ) n* s( X; @& [# N

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
8 [$ e  H+ S; {. r% l, P评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。# _6 _* N- u( Z. O: Y5 c! {; y
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
# |0 Z; T) T! A% a- M5 _1 R9 lA poor old Guy;
1 b9 v) Q# k, b, s- P+ O% LLegs in a bonfire,7 `9 ^8 [2 L% n7 |9 _
Head in the sky+ t% C* s: C+ g9 D+ \
Lonely, with the feel of betray
3 L- o& [' U  ]& Z. j/ r* cHeart empty and hollow
* j" p) \1 k# x0 Z2 V1 P; [Alone I stand
/ h& B" z; B9 [I am useless to all ' v% `# q  j8 D& r, K
But I wish I were a dove 2 Q+ _. W0 @! [6 c% z
Giving myself to the world, to the fire1 d1 z& c. D- j% X
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
* k' L' [7 ]4 r" iI sent prayers to my god- n8 S; T$ M6 F' a
Though he does not answer2 T  ?& t5 y2 \" f. A, q+ a2 o6 H
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
4 _9 Z; h% e7 r$ Y6 k加油加油,经常写写!
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