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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
/ i7 A; ^; \3 @6 fI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  4 l( K" P5 G3 u
Dreamers
+ M) |3 z. Z1 XSavages
! ~* d6 y! ~; `; l( D' ZPoets% p, I1 c6 u8 A/ A1 n/ l4 O9 w3 H
Builders of canoes,
7 K$ w6 z" a$ _; ZBlack smiths
' q8 l: @; Y2 TMurderers,# P/ p" N( T' w  b" y! W4 ^) x8 _
Risk takers,
4 K) g. u7 J# ]- k1 P1 mMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder
( j6 X& N& @; SAs I think of what could be.
) i2 M) Q+ t1 s+ s: ]" BThe world is so big to me
+ `. m! F. x! k1 L, _2 rI wonder what it means to be
% [3 d2 ]7 H0 i% w  ]# R3 j5 L/ C9 FI looked up at the star and smiled " q$ U5 V# G3 J& X- m( y
They flashed as they have heard all I have read. 4 `, R6 Z; g" J' B- p0 X
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。% d  H. X' Z; p, K4 N0 {
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
" t/ x! H- g& c" F" P顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,; G* H4 p0 {* ~% q( n
A poor old Guy;) l4 k8 X( L- P
Legs in a bonfire,3 u0 j( i: f" O
Head in the sky6 g0 D7 k1 y( ^
Lonely, with the feel of betray1 {0 I9 C! H4 O5 N1 U; ~
Heart empty and hollow' E) J( d+ u- R! o. m  f8 i( {
Alone I stand1 W3 k9 y6 _% L+ ^. F1 p6 R
I am useless to all
" [  @3 |/ n% S3 n. u7 XBut I wish I were a dove
- _5 E4 _& J5 c/ `2 sGiving myself to the world, to the fire
7 [1 H. }/ x' C' H" HI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
& C3 H/ I  }7 U/ V, jI sent prayers to my god
! p, l! ~  \7 l5 w8 dThough he does not answer( T) Z  e  h+ i2 o/ Y
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。0 a& B& N. t/ ^+ o
加油加油,经常写写!
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