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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, 1 y6 E' _" F, C" z, H: q
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
, T$ G# B% D; U6 [Dreamers
8 o* v; G* `: g7 H* w  a( R% gSavages  Y8 S. e, ^: c! _. W5 H$ t
Poets
3 v9 @0 O' ^  j* nBuilders of canoes,
8 q) F- i5 J3 M/ p- X+ ^Black smiths" F& ], f. P; `4 J! s7 {: E
Murderers,* p. I( T) z! B# X
Risk takers,9 p3 T" l1 F+ a9 \
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder . r! H2 g6 k, s: s2 X! M
As I think of what could be. 9 H9 M# O) I% W( x# z2 t" I; ~
The world is so big to me 3 _3 @- }$ y: `& \# X8 i: X9 _
I wonder what it means to be
) c% B. y. F: A" b5 c; b0 g, BI looked up at the star and smiled 4 o8 s1 x5 E' p# R* X9 {7 C- _
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
8 |& ]0 ?# Q% }% j6 `* D评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
6 r5 L$ O" R  j4 r顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,* u9 d# o% ?2 E. {1 g1 |0 f4 R
A poor old Guy;/ m3 k1 E+ z$ B0 l9 d6 b5 ?
Legs in a bonfire,
3 R0 g' V+ S$ L. D  IHead in the sky1 _* n9 Y# n% {1 ~. J2 P
Lonely, with the feel of betray
. a' \; T* g+ F; J* w/ U- g" |Heart empty and hollow( K/ {5 i& |$ ~8 G
Alone I stand
/ F/ D7 x! D( y1 K- ^I am useless to all
. d+ Q% x  G- h/ k0 u- }, XBut I wish I were a dove 0 P& i$ u7 W5 |- ~' e
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
3 u, e+ {9 [9 V1 {I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
4 \% H0 B$ S) |( m& V  UI sent prayers to my god
8 L* u  e' a1 _0 q& T( qThough he does not answer3 J6 }* ~; x0 z+ P
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
4 u3 G! S, x+ q3 P8 q/ @8 r  B# |加油加油,经常写写!
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