SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
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6 z" {. d6 \* eRemote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
  o: I' L# q8 f/ {/ mABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
4 x8 h3 O) J" k4 TInformation system
Central control locks,doors,windows
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Power mirrors
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Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
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Radio
/ a' I- ]3 O% q3 R9 _" qAirbag: driver
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Airbag: side
Alarm
Fog lights

**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
  m* [' h% m* f7 W+ mIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)

兰君子

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SALE A CAR
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9 Y5 b6 A1 b! c) ~# JDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

  Y3 {- v  z9 ?If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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# R  c: k) o8 f+ E. s/ k% l8 gIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
! s  |# {# N5 b1 z! T; b IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

# V/ [* F; O. a/ U# W- X! @Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

: C. h7 @+ ~6 @+ t5 Z0 F) |这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

( M4 V3 M5 s; d2 G5 @0 \& WBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
1 T- E9 C% Y% W0 L/ g4 M  I这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

# T  G% {3 R4 ?( x哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

! H! l: P) x7 U: e* fSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
0 r! G) @4 i- S4 Z. k" Y0 QYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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% M9 S+ ]: g' F" PThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.

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