SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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. y5 J& e4 h0 }VEICHLE OPTIONS:
4 e& q/ P8 [7 A4 E$ t% a) bAutomatic transmission
Silver
5 x/ \& h) g/ v. k" W; D0 b2 nRemote starter and heat blocker
/ m( v' Q& C0 c( g' P( C5 R7 HTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
ABS Operation
3 D4 x8 e& g: p4 D0 \Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
Central control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
Power mirrors
- \; J! G( y' A' O! |Power doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
4 \# v. K# I" _: Q# t% c0 KBluetooth hands-free operation
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Airbag: driver
; E, c: F7 v) d( v# QAirbag: passenger
9 V  _/ b3 t- _6 IAirbag: side
$ a  k( m3 o) K+ LAlarm
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**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
/ p2 l' U# I5 k. p% O  n5 nPick up on March 18-22.
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兰君子

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# \1 m, v; M* u/ ISALE A CAR
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8 @* N# R/ F# X! I- sDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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" @. j  e$ G% ?& rIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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* ~, Z/ ]; [6 ?5 VIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
! b& N# p3 E+ X3 m7 ]1 z$ z+ m IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

* J& E/ b/ \" b: d& A3 ]Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

5 j1 X" v& H- \( t. W0 s这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

$ f0 u$ H' v5 QBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
5 a( e: h( I# a" `4 U2 wSALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

( |  m2 b& ?) S  bFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
4 B) c% z' Q- T3 T/ pThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
. Q0 a! x7 i4 p" H4 [You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

4 Y: i$ Q% K7 I, F"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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- P" ]2 i+ _: _; t( P$ zSorry to give you "HARSH" again.