SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
% b6 J+ b9 v3 _: \$ |Automatic transmission
. ~4 G  j% v. U) sSilver
% w$ }! s$ T' S, _' ?2 I3 QRemote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
# @& a/ _& x. d3 r# _1 MFour additional tires with rims
% L( x$ S! t' D" nAir Conditioning
ABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
. @: g) m" R0 w; v- G# V6 I" e9 SCentral control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
0 h0 M# h) `* Y- z8 \; O0 V/ TPower mirrors
Power doors
6 i, Q4 R* U$ ]# _Power windows
( e+ v: w0 Q, v2 PChild safety locks
Rear window defroster
# O& R2 J( W6 e# c+ uBluetooth hands-free operation
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Airbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
0 t5 y3 k; G! lAirbag: side
Alarm
: T8 E! _  E- j- o6 `# hFog lights

**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
% j9 L1 n8 ~' P: x1 Z9 ?If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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( F# t& ^; j$ WPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
+ l7 R3 |4 r, k' m9 X. R& hPick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)
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兰君子

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! i: [9 C" G  w6 t( @- b1 jDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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5 m( d- m: Q* t! r! i  u+ HIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
4 K9 O# D( I4 f# ~6 b' P3 n# W9 v" b IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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7 B  a: K3 ^3 Q0 \; c8 MDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

. @% ~% R4 ?, e# P. q6 u0 S% M: _哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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) m% X* r4 ]) |3 }. u' O5 KDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

+ M" B- q* V. S6 S, yFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
* W5 r4 k: L6 V" F" e8 ~Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

0 h- R) t$ ]6 k& bSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
' _$ W( M4 w9 S7 bYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.