SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
Automatic transmission
Silver
' a: n9 K6 v# z9 TRemote starter and heat blocker
  W: [# L2 E6 ~# MTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
8 x7 c& l% q& N& a- sFour additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
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Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
" z; h; O; E" ^; N- J$ F# kCentral control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
' u9 U4 L6 Z) @# ]/ Z* Y3 ?0 JPower mirrors
Power doors
Power windows
' E3 B# z+ Z8 f$ p* eChild safety locks
7 T4 b" U+ t4 D% @$ y0 A! N! HRear window defroster
0 m* X; O) J4 `- g9 PBluetooth hands-free operation
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Airbag: driver
& k$ A: J- G2 |' D& F! w! OAirbag: passenger
Airbag: side
Alarm
" P( B9 [" t0 z% e: cFog lights

**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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/ z! j" ]2 S1 a$ F5 i, E3 k1 A' @Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)
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兰君子

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SALE A CAR
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0 H6 `. c: k5 V& x5 b7 dDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

9 a' U6 r- w$ ]- n: i) zIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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0 P; F+ T3 e/ c* OIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
% G" T  L/ \% d+ r& _) A; c IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

1 F5 ]8 j0 C( z, z# f/ u' s这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

/ w0 h5 p# P" g  l! P3 H哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

1 o9 D( H! V# R5 t3 E4 H9 ]2 WSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

5 s+ I2 A# L; T7 {* e( ?! _4 SThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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; B  T7 l6 ]. U, n8 K5 ?( Y* c" xSorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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