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haha i am writing my stroy in to a book and i already finished the first two part come and see
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no one know how the universe started. and no one will know how it end……….
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in the beginning of the time, there is a big land mass in the middle of the Earth. The out side of the land mass is a huge sea. In the middle of the land mass there is a lake that contain magic power that can even create life and take life away. There is a giant that asked to protect this lake, he called Sageran the titan. The lake had created some of the magical creature called elf. the elf are divided in to two groups, the high born elf and the night elf, the high born elf worship the titan Sageran, and the night elf warship the moon goddess Elunne. The two group live in peace. But at the time that elf are created the demons are also created. and the titan sagerans are tolded to kill the demons. but every times the titan kill a demon his heart goes darker and finally he became one of them and there leaders, the burning legions were created.

but their goal is to take over the nether world and there power will be stronger to bring down the whole universe. the high born elf are blinded by their worship to the titan and they even will to help him go through to the nether world. the night elf live on the holy mountain hyjal with the demi-god of the forest Cenarius. His two son Furion and Illidan are great wise elf that they sense a great dark work is going to destroy the world. they told the princess and the priestess of the moon Tyrande about it. and they all go ask the great demi-god. “I sensed it too, that the high bron elf are going to help the titan to destroy the world.” and the two son of his are asked to go help nigh-elf to stop them.
at the same time the leader of the high born elf Azashara are plan on go through this world to the nether by create a magical portal on the great lake. The brother Illidan were evil and he also want to take over the world and he warned Azashara about night elf.
5 f5 a7 a$ [# u6 w1 H/ T# Ethat day the high borns gather at the great lake and start their process and the night elf start their strike. Illiden warned the high born. and they were prepared to battle the night elf. the process was almost done sagaran is ready to go through the portal but because the magic of the lake are resisting the magic of the elf the vortex are created above the lake. sagaran still want to go through the lake and as soon as he touched the lake the votex exploded.
the earth were separated apart and the titan died most of the lives were vanished during the explode but some of the elf survived. the big land break apart in to four big lands, northern land, kilimdor, lordarn, and Azroth. That’s how the world of the warcraft started.

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the next part
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3 C# B4 u6 f% c“they are coming the orcs every body run.”
“no I can’t leave here I rather die here with my home”
. `" M, r2 H2 `, Z) H9 x  every body was running away and screaming except one child, his name is Alexander and he lost his family during the orcs massacre but he won’t run away cause he have nothing to lose not his family or his home, the orcs is coming. one orc with a huge axe is coming, Alex can see his ugly face and he is waving his axe at him, suddenly a sword blocked orcs attack and a tall and handsome young man standing beside him “I will defend my village and people.” but his face suddenly turn grey and his eyes looks evil his sword turned in to a icey old sword and he waved the sword at Alex…….
" L9 P6 n4 R: k) Q8 V& c  Alex awaked and get up “what a bad dream!”, he get up and put on his tiny coat “but who is the person in that dream?”
  he go outside but he heard people crying “it’s orcs.”
  and a orc came with a big axe a waved it at Alex. just like the dream a handsome sword man black that attack and killed the orc. the rest of the orc ran away. another sword man came “prince Arthas there is no body left in the village.” “ok, take his child to his parents and …..”
Alex yelled out “I don’t have any parent left they were killed by the orcs!” “then what do you want to be.” “I want to be a great sword man like you and kill all the orcs that is my dream.” “hahaha, you want…”
“I am serious about this.” “but it’s hard to became a real sword man.”
“but I have nothing left to do for the rest of my life I rather kill some orcs before I die than just live like a normal man with nothing.”
“what about you come with me to a capital and I will train you.”
* Y/ O! n' U& }0 E( Z+ d“that is great.”
- z# ~/ s7 X5 c8 w8 E, _: y“Capitan I will take this child back to capital with me, you go to Qeilin tor and warn the elf that the orc is on the attack.” he told the other man
6 d; `+ S' i* M7 Band he take Alex on his horse and head back to the central.
  
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1 f0 ^4 F& H7 m) {8 z. Ychapter two
two days after Arthas have left the village with Alex they stopped at a other village and there is also a battle happed there “Alex wait here till I get back ok?” “k”, and Arthas left.
; m3 }( ^; r" z1 Q0 U5 V9 xafter a hour of boring waiting with Arthas’ horse Arthas camed back with some troops. “you know I really want to talk to your horse.” “I know it’s boring that you waited for me but I have to go safe my village, even one small battle takes more than half of an hour and…” “Arthas my old friend.” a strong old man camed, he dress just like Arthas but the only things is that he use a huge hammer. “don’t you my old friend me I am only 24.”Arsas said and laughed, and every else laughed except Alex, Arthas know what is he thinking “Alex this is Uther the light bringer my old friend and teacher.” “well Bronzebeard teached you most of the skills not me.” Uther said “ya but he is far at iron forge so I’ll just say you are my teacher.” “so who is the Bronzebread you are talking about now?” “it’s a lots of story I will have to take some time to tell you.” Arthas said “ so Uther why are you here again?” “general Proudmoore have been captured by the orc I am here to fine him.”
“No, Jaina’s father, then we have to go saft him, I heard that the war song clan of orcs lived just in the forest two mile east.” Arthas said “ so do you need my help this time?” “maybe I heard that the warrsong clan is strong and wise, they have a lot of blademasters and espically the leader Grom is the greatest fighter in the whole lordron, it’s going to be hard to defied him.” “Alex I have some work with Uther to do, so I can go to the central with you but you can go with the captain and go the the central and wait me back there.” “ok”,Alex said, “then lets go Uther there is no time to lose.”………   on the way back to the central Alex asked “captain, who is Jaina that Arthas is talking about?” “oh, Jaina Proudmoore is general Proudmoore’s daughter and she is a only student of the great archmage Antonidas.” “ well is seems like Arsas cared about her a lot.” “ya Arsas is Jaina’s boyfriend they have been good friend seens childhood but after Jaina became a witch she can’t see Arthas more but every one knows she likes him, and by the way you have to address Arthas, Prince Arthas.” “ Arthas is a prince! this is going to be great.” That night Alex had that dream again.

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chapter 2
a orc and a footman is fighting. it was a tough fight and they are keep blocking others attack, the fight took a lot of time. They are tired. stoped and having deep breath. the weather is cold. and suddenly it gets hot, and human like thing is standing just mile a way, and he is doing some thing, some thing like a cast of spell, and a millions of fire ball falling from sky, the fire ball turned in to a demon with green fire around them, the two warriors died and the demon is coming, coming and……..
“AHhhhhhhhhh,” Thall wake up, “what a bad dream.” he got up and go out from his barrow, a man is standing just out side, “hello, Thall, son of the Doomhammer, we finally met.” “why do you want to see me.” “just to warn you, the evil is near, you have to geather all your troops and move to the land to Kailimdor in the west, that way you will survive. trust me my friend, you have no time to lose go find your friend Grom of the warsong clan, and now I have to leave to do some thing important.” “but what do I do after that, how do I know if you are lying.” “if you think I am lying then you can leave all you friend here and die, and I will tell you after you go to the coast.”, then the stranger turned in to a bird and fly away. “he doesn’t sound like lying, and I had that dream of my people dying, no time to lose, I have to go fine Grom, now.
- a0 M7 r/ ^: [* S" x8 Ythis is Thall, a kind hearted with great power and he is the leader of the rest of the orcs and he is the son of Grim Doomhamer the great far ser in the whole Azroth. Half of the orcs where died in the second with the human Alliances and he had stoped fighting with humans, he is still young and his good friend Grom Hellscream helped him with all those works, the warsong clan are different with the rest of the orcs they don’t believe the warlock magic nether the shamans they only believe the power and strength, the warsong clan draw long and fast blade and they find their joy when they are killing, but he is still loyal friend and he listened to Thall and stoped fighting and the clan was always in peace after the second war, but the humans are marching and this time they are in trouble cause Arthas and Uther are on their way……..

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“We finally found their base, now it’s the time to strike and save Jaina’s father.” Arthas said “you are right, but we must beware cause the warsong blade master can strike you on the back any time.” they start to walk along the path, and there is a quillbeast there, “greetings, human what are you doing here, it’s orc’s base just on the hill, you are not safe here, their blade will slash all, but I can give you a help, only if you bring me the heart of the black dragon in the south forest outside the orc’s base, I will use it to make you a good weapon, what about a hammer?” “ok, I will bring you the heart, it’s not so hard to kill a dragon.” they run to the forest and along the way there are lot of dead people or skeleton, they are warriors, cause they are drawing weapons on their hand and they are killed by dragon fire. They heard a roar and a huge dragon I front of them, the dragon breath a fire at them, Arthas block with his sword, so this is the dragon he is talking about, it’s not so big after all, compare of the red dragon in the fire peek and..” “don’t get too confident, it’s a black dragon and he can devour you in to his stomach like foods, use the light to creat a divine shield that will protect you.” and the dragon died after he throw his huge sword at him and the sword dispread with the dragon and Arthas was complain on the way back “oh, that sword was my 20th birthday from my dad and that is smith by the best blacksmith in the whole Lordron, and” “I told you not to throw you weapon, a sword is a life of a sword man.” “Nah it’s all right the qillbeast will make me another one.” and the quilbeast made him a hammer with a orb of fire that is crafted with black dragon’s heart and it’s all right for Arthas but a little bit heaver. but it work better than before and they rescued General Proudmoore but Grom got away cause they don’t know why but the “peacemaker” Thall came and helped the rest of the warsong clan and got away.
% X1 ~/ s& a! M7 _Arthas didn’t chase cause they know they are leaving in peace, and the whole thing is General Proudmoore’s fault cause he is planning to wipe the rest of the orcs away, even if they are already in peace.
this is Arthas a young, wise and powerful man and he is the prince of the Lordron and he is well trained by the greatest warrior Uther and Great fighter, brother if the king of dworf in ironforge and Meridian Bronzebeard and after his 20th birthday he already go fight orcs and he had been a lot of battles but he is still young and young eyed couldn’t understand the whole meaning of war and he don’t want to kill them, that is why put him with Uther, To train him to face the bloody world and who knows how will he be but every body know that he love the village and the villagers so every body trust him, but his fate wouldn’t be that peaceful but evil and his heart will be cold like ice that is what the stranger that talked to Thall(the bird far ser) sence. that is why he is coming to the palace in Lordron and have a good talk with the king and one more thing is he have to talk Alex, his fate is misty and he don’t know he is going to be, but he know he is important for the human race to survive.

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i am keep writing it
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some good people come and give me a idea of the title plz
thanks

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你怎么学棍棍？ 发两边干吗？
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- Q* l) o& U& |  i- ]7 _要名字？ 不好起呀！ 到现在都不是很明白你的故事在讲些什么。。。而且要是起名字的话呢，你需要一个中心思想！知道我在说什么吗？没有中心思想，就不好起名字！ 你说你写的故事你自己都不知道起什么，我们跟本不知道这故事讲什么的怎么可能帮你呢！你说对不对呀！

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“the orc are all went back to Azroth and some of them are gone to the sea and go to the west land kailimdor, this is a good for us, what do you think we should do next my king?” one man said “the black rock clan of orcs in the south we will kill them all and then bring the peace to our race.” and a bird fly in to the palace and it turned in to a prophet “greetings my king.” he bow to the king “I think you know that the orcs are marching to the west land.” “yes and what do you what stranger?” “the evil are near and you humans have to move to the west land of kailimdor there you and the orcs will help you defend the evil.”
“and what evil are you talking about here.” “we do not say his name but I believe that you warship him cause you are formed by elf after all.” “do you mean the titan?” “it’s the demon that he created, and the burning legion as well, believe or not you human are in trouble.” “we will not leave our home, we born here and we will die here, if the burning legion will come here, we will still defend our land even if the last one of us die.” the king said “ then I have nothing more to say.” and the prophet left “do you think what he said is real my king?” “I don’t know it said that the burning legion was defeat by the night elf 10thonsend years ago, how can they come back?” “who knows but now we will clear the orc and rule the whole land.” “yes, my king I will bring this massage to General. and there is some plague happen on the northern village, what shall we do my king?” “go tell Arthsas to find out the reason of this plague.” “yes my king I will go right now.”
the man said and went out the hall.

★棍辊☆ホひ

.....good job

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dingdingdingdingding!!!!!!!

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。。。。这还

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原帖由 ★棍辊☆ホひ 于 2006-11-17 18:37 发表
。。。。这还

我特崇拜那些写什么东西不半途而废的。。。。。。 像他这么一直坚持着，当然要崇拜了！！

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hehe

★棍辊☆ホひ

为什么

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没有为什么！

★棍辊☆ホひ

。。。。开心就好。。

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就是！！

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但是，我不

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why？？

★棍辊☆ホひ

你不需要知道。。。。（想知道问鱼鱼）

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不问了，不想告诉我就算了

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★棍辊☆ホひ

不要这么开新。。。。

紫色辣椒

干的好！请写中文！

★棍辊☆ホひ

你不会读？？？？OMG

紫色辣椒

用英文太长,我的电脑太慢

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紫色辣椒

而且这个地方叫做艾德蒙顿华人社区是让大家说中文!!

大忽悠必胜客

说 的 对 ,这 是 华 人 的 地 方 ,就 应 该 说 中 文 !