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译文欣赏——沁园春·雪

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发表于 2004-10-8 01:25 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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译文欣赏——沁园春·雪( z0 V: y7 p  `. Q

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5 G- a# @$ I8 Y1 a" J                                           --to the tune of Chin Yuan Chun
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; d( K" M& v4 Y                                       February 1936
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  North country scene:; l0 f' g) ?0 h  ?/ \
                                                                                               
: \, K* O' A2 j# U* Q/ M! h  A hundred leagues locked in ice,
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  A thousand leagues of whirling snow.# `$ m  s3 u" y
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  Both sides of the Great Wall
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  One single white immensity.  G0 j" x& ^; U  S' D4 C& P
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  The Yellow River"s swift current0 k; f& R( |. L% T( G9 Y( Y" |
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  Is stilled from end to end.) X' ?) ]; t3 l( L! O
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  The mountains dance like silver snakes
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  And the highlands* charge like wax-hued elephants,9 `8 E2 Q0 i" |

1 A! n: p7 `5 O/ H5 J! A( s. V8 h" c  Vying with heaven in stature.
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  On a fine day, the land,& Z  }( P& b- S  f% B

9 I3 K+ w5 N4 k8 J  Clad in white, adorned in red,
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, h$ U8 A4 m, P# \* \  Grows more enchanting.$ e% f4 `* W- {: j6 N
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  This land so rich in beauty& u8 n0 {5 z! H
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  Has made countless heroes bow in homage., O/ i. ~! @4 d' r5 ^% b/ l

4 N, P3 J9 s# t6 Y  But alas! Chin Shih-huang and Han Wu-ti
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  Were lacking in literary grace,8 t; d( Z" a* {( a9 y; ?7 T* B/ U

3 B, a; U" {6 R* v) _  E, F  And Tang Tai-tsung and Sung Tai-tsu
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  Had little poetry in their souls;, O2 a  C$ r' Z% ~4 ]* q  a% k
  And Genghis Khan,7 m5 e* Z: H( b, ^6 K6 L3 J

! W2 o1 E/ N5 Z  l# f0 c5 @' g  Proud Son of Heaven for a day,
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  Knew only shooting eagles, bow outstretched
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. I8 i9 I2 l3 G  o  All are past and gone!
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7 p/ t: t! s1 `4 U  For truly great men
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/ F5 D& ^- V7 A' N+ `4 d  Look to this age alone.
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$ ~1 C7 O% G! I, D  *AUTHOR"S NOTE:
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  The highlands are those of Shensi and Shansi.
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  一九三六年二月
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   北国风光千里冰封 万里雪飘 望长城内外 惟余莽莽, X  @1 c2 o" o# X1 J' [2 l" e
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  大河上下 顿失滔滔 山舞银蛇 原驰蜡象 欲与天公试比高; S4 a$ @! B' D4 H3 U

& v) B3 t, f# i, k) d3 H  须晴日 看红装素裹 分外妖娆, _7 c) T, I, c! i' |7 ^4 {

8 s/ e$ U- b& r& _1 ]+ T; }+ m# H  江山如此多妖 引无数英雄竞折腰 惜秦皇汉武 略输文采* Y+ T- {& O! @# F7 Y

) A/ ^3 S: Y2 m4 g  f  唐宗宋祖 稍逊风骚 一代天骄 成吉思汗 只识弯弓射大雕
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  俱往矣 数风流人物 还看今朝
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; w: M1 x- S8 y: w/ M[ Last edited by connie on 2004-10-8 at 02:30 AM ]
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发表于 2004-10-8 09:47 | 显示全部楼层
The Chinese is better than English!
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 楼主| 发表于 2004-10-8 21:39 | 显示全部楼层
Yes, absolutely!!!
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发表于 2004-10-10 12:48 | 显示全部楼层

YES, I LIKE CHINESE VERSION MORE

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发表于 2004-10-10 23:49 | 显示全部楼层
the English version like a shit.
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