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译文欣赏——沁园春·雪

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发表于 2004-10-8 01:25 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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译文欣赏——沁园春·雪6 j. I( x$ R  D' n! M, U3 O
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SNOW: S& t' Q+ x3 J- d& m$ A

! ^: K2 O- k+ M/ e% o; u! h                                           --to the tune of Chin Yuan Chun
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                                       February 1936
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  North country scene:
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# \4 |$ H& ]) t  A hundred leagues locked in ice,
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& ]5 a+ m9 B' ^0 |7 ~, y  A thousand leagues of whirling snow.
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, k# f/ D7 P- z# e) ]2 D: f; S) s  Both sides of the Great Wall
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/ r. Q1 t* ?  {1 G  O  One single white immensity.4 f6 c9 z+ K$ Y9 u, v+ Q

) U9 l; F( m" G6 }  The Yellow River"s swift current( X1 H7 P" ?) ~/ L

+ c5 a- U5 H8 k& T4 I! \# m4 L  Is stilled from end to end.
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6 H% \$ ?6 W, s# A- C% W0 S( ?  The mountains dance like silver snakes
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: V& w3 t5 s3 ]- q8 S2 T  And the highlands* charge like wax-hued elephants,
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1 f" c7 m, A# d& D2 d$ _4 @  Vying with heaven in stature.' U' D5 j7 I6 f8 `8 ]9 Q

. G, u# d$ s' y/ s/ i  On a fine day, the land,4 ?! M- o5 e  c+ {8 ]7 V9 p; l

4 {9 t2 [2 l9 q8 r  Clad in white, adorned in red,
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- T) K8 ]/ U, z2 }* y4 ?. T  Grows more enchanting.
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% L# z1 F+ T* t6 W' @) H  This land so rich in beauty
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  Has made countless heroes bow in homage.
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. h; B# d" I. J" r3 B# v  But alas! Chin Shih-huang and Han Wu-ti3 r7 R& v- c" M: E, ^3 u
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  Were lacking in literary grace,* M. e0 D9 Z. _
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  And Tang Tai-tsung and Sung Tai-tsu
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1 s; t' o  Z- I& V  Had little poetry in their souls;
: h4 q/ @( O4 P: f  And Genghis Khan,6 ?5 e8 T3 G2 `  K* O! B( [
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  Proud Son of Heaven for a day,
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  Knew only shooting eagles, bow outstretched
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3 O( ~/ _* z4 C  All are past and gone!
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  For truly great men
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4 g. _6 l0 ?! X) q  ^6 C" U* J: w  Look to this age alone.
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' n: }( {" _2 d& X  *AUTHOR"S NOTE:
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; k) L: ]3 q5 x7 g6 C  The highlands are those of Shensi and Shansi.
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0 g% U; W! u; D8 V3 p8 J  一九三六年二月) @$ @% f" [! J/ S

1 f- \% e1 X* \, s, w   北国风光千里冰封 万里雪飘 望长城内外 惟余莽莽
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( ^6 _# V$ M# v: \& u( ~1 G. X  大河上下 顿失滔滔 山舞银蛇 原驰蜡象 欲与天公试比高$ A: |' \: T2 W; p
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  须晴日 看红装素裹 分外妖娆1 D* S! o- Y: u; r1 F

3 }9 w7 D, t5 U7 K8 w$ \, X  江山如此多妖 引无数英雄竞折腰 惜秦皇汉武 略输文采
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  唐宗宋祖 稍逊风骚 一代天骄 成吉思汗 只识弯弓射大雕( J8 E  H9 n0 m/ H: Q/ N
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  俱往矣 数风流人物 还看今朝
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[ Last edited by connie on 2004-10-8 at 02:30 AM ]
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发表于 2004-10-8 09:47 | 显示全部楼层
The Chinese is better than English!
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 楼主| 发表于 2004-10-8 21:39 | 显示全部楼层
Yes, absolutely!!!
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发表于 2004-10-10 12:48 | 显示全部楼层

YES, I LIKE CHINESE VERSION MORE

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发表于 2004-10-10 23:49 | 显示全部楼层
the English version like a shit.
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