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翁美女写给老杨的情书,翻译惊人 ZT

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鲜花(1) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-7 10:25 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
你是老杨的话,你会怎么回?翁不愧为才女,英文情书写的如此煽情,就是钟馗看了也能变小生了.不知道是哪位大仙翻译的,把英文翻译成如此水平也是不容易了。赞
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; O5 G, }; B) XCold here, icy cold there. You belong to neither, leaves have
- y6 Z  K. @9 u% _# ^: Z7 Nwithered.Your face is pale and blue, a tearful smile. Something in your1 K  c3 d* x* z$ `% H1 s
eyes,whispers words of last good-bye. My heart sinks down, tears surge5 Q0 Q; d8 `$ B8 v  n4 [9 h. z+ z
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* O) U; g1 D6 W! n' N6 C此处冷,彼处更冷。枯叶凋零,君属何人。君面惨淡忧郁,含泪而笑。君热泪盈1 q! `% Y9 ^9 m6 ]% p- j7 l
眶,喃喃自语,难言再见。妾心沉落,泪涌似涛。
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; O4 S  \0 V5 YHot summer. Cheerful Cocktail. You took my hand. We fled into another3 N3 L1 q7 g- A' X
world. You sat by my side, long hair tied behind, cool and killing.
/ S1 A$ x' }- ~# C" aSmile floating on the lemonade, soft and smooth. How I was? amazed. Your" [$ V8 ^& Q  y1 R- I( _$ |9 y6 V
face looked like the cover of the magazine. My head spin. Youled my$ Q; q, q0 q9 d1 J6 K( k
hand, danced along the crazy theme.
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0 M/ e* ^( Q; B# J8 I% F酷夏。仍忆鸡尾酒会。君执妾手,共享二人世界。君坐妾之侧,长发束于脑后,英
2 X6 [+ a( X) j* U( z姿勃发。笑容荡漾。妾讶君面尤类杂志封面。旋转,君执妾手,疯狂舞曲。; r) f5 {- L0 v8 m- n0 |, e! w1 l
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Light vied with wine, elegance mixed with fragrance, laughing covered by
  o: G/ H8 Y: b1 a) ?( e2 K) W9 Ugreetings, the crowed was busy at handshaking. You stood there, eyes on
% e) X/ }3 L/ {0 b9 Cme. I trembled at the sparkles, brighter than the light. A masterpiece0 y. u9 u5 N- x8 H3 K' Q' N" s# k/ m
from God, I felt dizzy. We were not near, yet we were together.
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灯酒相辉,芳雅相应,祝辞笑声此起彼伏,芸芸皆劳碌于握手。君站立一旁,美目. s4 P  e- ?" e2 q2 [
探妾。妾莹灯下颤颤而立。此必上帝之杰作,使晕眩。虽妾与君相隔甚远,然心相/ H8 |5 h1 b$ J  L- {8 z
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Days ended. You said, you would wait for me at th e Alps side. We would1 o( p6 Q' ?0 @7 H$ h4 I2 {' c
ski against snowflakes dancing in the sky. I gave no answer but a
3 J' Z* e, D- L+ i) s3 _  Egood-bye to accompany your flight. Gone was the plane, I suddenly tasted
& |9 E7 u: g/ b& Emy pain. I knew I had been silly and stupid, you were in my heart, I% I  d% O, a) H) w5 D& h
shouldn’t have hidden in the dark. I tried to forget your& a. T  ]. V1 r9 i( J1 {* e
disappointment. I made believe sometime someday, I would tell you, I
7 g, [6 C( E8 R1 w# E3 yfeel all the same.4 y$ Z) u( }9 `( L

+ H# \" @* e7 b往日已去。君云君将于阿尔卑斯山畔待妾,滑雪于雪花飞舞之天空下。妾欲说还1 P0 U4 g2 q) Q; w; i
休,但嘱祝福。飞机渐逝,妾心将苦。妾深知妾之愚蠹,君已窃妾心,妾当不可漠9 X6 N4 e- M2 d  Z; h+ s' n) W1 t

/ c7 r( `. L2 `于暗中彷徨。妾尝试忘君之失,然无可善终。妾信某日某时,妾将告君妾心永驻。
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My thought struggled at confessing, somehow hesitation ended in
2 I$ X1 z# C, e- W. Wflinching. I continued my role of a fool, clinched to my maiden pride,2 ?: b8 |0 j7 {+ L# m$ e4 D) k
yet secretly indulged in your promise of the white land -- snow# G5 V( o  N/ s3 _
measuring down to us, in your arms I am lifted up. The chiming of0 \, b6 I$ o0 W
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妾于忏悔中挣扎,不时退缩,犹豫。妾愚于处子之婚,然潜纵于君之诺。白雪皑5 ?/ G% c. |+ d# ~
皑,君挽妾身,妾意甚欢,共听圣诞钟声。
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7 H3 p; Z" Q, F4 ]+ V4 i6 U6 j2 IThe bell died in the patter of rain, from hell came the laughing of( |: x5 L5 C7 \/ T& s2 p
Satan at my brain. Tearful smile, swallowed by the darkness. How could I" Y0 h% ?/ P' Y6 \
trace your hair to wipe your tears? My hands reached out, catching
/ W( n" y2 u' S; i) O0 ~+ O; anothing but a raindrop, on a leaf that had withered.
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钟声忽止于急雨,乃听撒旦之笑声。含泪微笑,黑暗相伴。妾欲寻君之发擦君之泪" L$ v$ z3 m2 w' R/ F- N4 |8 x
而不可。妾伸手欲触,无他,但枯叶一雨滴耳。, Z, N3 E0 c+ t& Y9 D5 x9 m# N

% G% i& [# g  v) ~9 cSnowflakes have melted into water, we are no more together.
0 c$ Y2 C$ A8 H: r雪花渐融,妾与君仍天各一方
鲜花(634) 鸡蛋(5)
发表于 2007-5-7 10:32 | 显示全部楼层
有人问过洋人吗?这段英文咋样?
理袁律师事务所
鲜花(1535) 鸡蛋(28)
发表于 2007-5-7 10:46 | 显示全部楼层
刚问过俺同事,说翻译得甚好。long hair tied behind, cool and killing,但老外惟一不理解这句,他问俺80多岁的中国人都有那么长的头发吗?俺无言以对~
鲜花(634) 鸡蛋(5)
发表于 2007-5-7 10:49 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-7 11:46 发表 ) G* B( m+ U- \: [
刚问过俺同事,说翻译得甚好。long hair tied behind, cool and killing,但老外惟一不理解这句,他问俺80多岁的中国人都有那么长的头发吗?俺无言以对~

9 g. R2 W/ \* O# f" I7 ]; D3 p你们同事怎么能看出翻译好坏来?
鲜花(7) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-7 11:02 | 显示全部楼层
翁氏果然不凡。译者更是大材小用,即使胡适再生也不过如此。建议老杨娶(请)来当版主正合适。
鲜花(1535) 鸡蛋(28)
发表于 2007-5-7 12:02 | 显示全部楼层
原帖由 三思 于 2007-5-7 11:49 发表
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你们同事怎么能看出翻译好坏来?

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4 i4 [# B9 [9 b) w' j7 _6 W/ B俺直接把英文提炼,打印出来给老外,她们一见就挑大拇指~
鲜花(10) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-7 14:26 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
你又知道是人家的情书!
鲜花(28) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-8 20:13 | 显示全部楼层
为什么要翻译成妾啊,那么别扭。
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鲜花(129) 鸡蛋(1)
发表于 2007-5-8 20:27 | 显示全部楼层
看了这篇情书,偶忍不住的想到了老杨脸上的老年斑。
鲜花(0) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-8 20:37 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
此老杨非彼老杨也!
鲜花(1) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2007-5-8 21:33 | 显示全部楼层
原帖由 bigwood 于 2007-5-8 21:37 发表 3 h" E4 A* F* V
此老杨非彼老杨也!

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. w5 j, w' G- i; K7 ]+ ^相信地球人都知道吧~~
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其实原文标题里写的是“杨振宁”,俺故意改滴~~
鲜花(634) 鸡蛋(5)
发表于 2007-5-8 22:07 | 显示全部楼层
原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-7 13:02 发表 - m  N: F+ [/ P7 Y
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俺直接把英文提炼,打印出来给老外,她们一见就挑大拇指~
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是不是她们以为你写的情书呢,就算文字晦涩也不在意,挑大拇指,意思是:今天晚上没问题!
鲜花(1535) 鸡蛋(28)
发表于 2007-5-8 22:23 | 显示全部楼层
同言同羽 置业良晨
原帖由 三思 于 2007-5-8 23:07 发表
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是不是她们以为你写的情书呢,就算文字晦涩也不在意,挑大拇指,意思是:今天晚上没问题!
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1 @7 z5 q. Q& m2 p& N我们公司有俩女的,那叫一个胖,一个人能占一条机动车道,如果俩人并排走路出门,门口的50st就该塞车了。
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 楼主| 发表于 2007-5-8 22:32 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-8 23:23 发表
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9 A: h" X6 J9 E6 l我们公司有俩女的,那叫一个胖,一个人能占一条机动车道,如果俩人并排走路出门,门口的50st就该塞车了。
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猪兄可怜,严重慰问ing~~
鲜花(21) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-9 19:08 | 显示全部楼层
偶就不明白,不过就那么一个糟老头子,这女人怎么会搞得这么煽情.
鲜花(21) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-9 19:09 | 显示全部楼层
翻译得也让人起鸡皮疙瘩,什么君啊妾的,奴性十足.
鲜花(21) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-9 19:10 | 显示全部楼层
同言同羽 置业良晨
怎么着也得男的给女的写情书吧,合着芳龄女子给糟老头子写情书?3 ~7 p1 @, l& Q8 Y. `
晕.
鲜花(1535) 鸡蛋(28)
发表于 2007-5-9 21:00 | 显示全部楼层
原帖由 听雪安妮 于 2007-5-9 20:10 发表
* W- e9 Z0 {% C1 |9 e  O怎么着也得男的给女的写情书吧,合着芳龄女子给糟老头子写情书?
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不看年纪,看地位~
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-9 21:01 | 显示全部楼层
初看标题,我还以为翁美女是嗡嗡呢
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