翁美女写给老杨的情书,翻译惊人 ZT

海鸥飞处

你是老杨的话，你会怎么回？翁不愧为才女，英文情书写的如此煽情，就是钟馗看了也能变小生了.不知道是哪位大仙翻译的，把英文翻译成如此水平也是不容易了。赞

Cold here, icy cold there. You belong to neither, leaves have
4 ~% b* q4 @( x% iwithered.Your face is pale and blue, a tearful smile. Something in your
4 S! [, ?- V8 ]! M% leyes,whispers words of last good-bye. My heart sinks down, tears surge
out.
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此处冷，彼处更冷。枯叶凋零，君属何人。君面惨淡忧郁，含泪而笑。君热泪盈
, M5 T5 \* B5 ^1 D- O- m眶，喃喃自语，难言再见。妾心沉落，泪涌似涛。
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Hot summer. Cheerful Cocktail. You took my hand. We fled into another
% X2 j/ m5 B' l& L4 Yworld. You sat by my side, long hair tied behind, cool and killing.
# d- V( r' c. kSmile floating on the lemonade, soft and smooth. How I was? amazed. Your
* W$ W) O' V% u5 Oface looked like the cover of the magazine. My head spin. Youled my
hand, danced along the crazy theme.
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酷夏。仍忆鸡尾酒会。君执妾手，共享二人世界。君坐妾之侧，长发束于脑后，英
姿勃发。笑容荡漾。妾讶君面尤类杂志封面。旋转，君执妾手，疯狂舞曲。
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. w. j# Q  Z; Q% MLight vied with wine, elegance mixed with fragrance, laughing covered by
+ d/ O) p2 x$ W' C; N: Wgreetings, the crowed was busy at handshaking. You stood there, eyes on
me. I trembled at the sparkles, brighter than the light. A　masterpiece
from God, I felt dizzy. We were not near, yet we were together.
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灯酒相辉，芳雅相应，祝辞笑声此起彼伏，芸芸皆劳碌于握手。君站立一旁，美目
探妾。妾莹灯下颤颤而立。此必上帝之杰作，使晕眩。虽妾与君相隔甚远,然心相
近。

# _4 ~7 ~* n& A1 k, gDays ended. You said, you would wait for me at th e Alps side. We would
ski against snowflakes dancing in the sky. I gave no answer but a
8 Y% B2 o! D- F& Ugood-bye to accompany your flight. Gone was the plane, I suddenly tasted
: E8 m% a$ k7 wmy pain. I knew I had been silly and stupid, you were in my heart, I
shouldn’t have hidden in the dark. I tried to forget your
disappointment. I made believe sometime someday, I would tell you, I
feel all the same.
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3 C9 c0 J5 }5 d4 Q# k) L  v往日已去。君云君将于阿尔卑斯山畔待妾，滑雪于雪花飞舞之天空下。妾欲说还
9 M' F+ J  P+ r' I7 l9 ^8 Q5 g休，但嘱祝福。飞机渐逝，妾心将苦。妾深知妾之愚蠹，君已窃妾心，妾当不可漠
然
于暗中彷徨。妾尝试忘君之失，然无可善终。妾信某日某时，妾将告君妾心永驻。
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% K( T9 t' V1 w+ k+ iMy thought struggled at confessing, somehow hesitation ended in
flinching. I continued my role of a fool, clinched to my maiden pride,
, l. E9 }2 [% P5 U  F0 ]( u1 xyet secretly indulged in your promise of the white land -- snow
0 N  g7 R# |7 w9 Rmeasuring down to us, in your arms I am lifted up. The chiming of
9 T( T1 T3 T& y3 K$ P0 q& H& DChristmas bell!

5 S5 m( `# D- Y" k$ q妾于忏悔中挣扎，不时退缩，犹豫。妾愚于处子之婚，然潜纵于君之诺。白雪皑
皑，君挽妾身，妾意甚欢，共听圣诞钟声。

The bell died in the patter of rain, from hell came the laughing of
7 L% C( A8 j! Y+ v# qSatan at my brain. Tearful smile, swallowed by the darkness. How could I
, p1 p8 V2 m5 V5 U& g& o( Ptrace your hair to wipe your tears? My hands reached out, catching
/ ?6 b+ [2 W6 K0 g4 Knothing but a raindrop, on a leaf that had withered.
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, U: t5 g' J* s  M钟声忽止于急雨，乃听撒旦之笑声。含泪微笑，黑暗相伴。妾欲寻君之发擦君之泪
而不可。妾伸手欲触，无他，但枯叶一雨滴耳。

; D& s) N' `; G6 K3 L5 m" n+ dSnowflakes have melted into water, we are no more together.
雪花渐融，妾与君仍天各一方

三思

有人问过洋人吗？这段英文咋样？

猪刀小试

刚问过俺同事，说翻译得甚好。long hair tied behind, cool and killing，但老外惟一不理解这句，他问俺80多岁的中国人都有那么长的头发吗？俺无言以对～

三思

原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-7 11:46 发表
刚问过俺同事，说翻译得甚好。long hair tied behind, cool and killing，但老外惟一不理解这句，他问俺80多岁的中国人都有那么长的头发吗？俺无言以对～

5 j% k) {# _  \0 @你们同事怎么能看出翻译好坏来？

jeremy

翁氏果然不凡。译者更是大材小用，即使胡适再生也不过如此。建议老杨娶(请)来当版主正合适。

猪刀小试

原帖由 三思 于 2007-5-7 11:49 发表
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3 \2 b% G6 g: j你们同事怎么能看出翻译好坏来？

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9 ]* e5 h: b+ a$ k6 T3 ~- `俺直接把英文提炼，打印出来给老外，她们一见就挑大拇指～

辣椒

你又知道是人家的情书！

APPLE66

为什么要翻译成妾啊，那么别扭。
$ Z7 P, w" P8 E不过比奴强点。

无心呢喃

看了这篇情书，偶忍不住的想到了老杨脸上的老年斑。

bigwood

此老杨非彼老杨也！

海鸥飞处

原帖由 bigwood 于 2007-5-8 21:37 发表
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7 O* F$ r0 q( L5 d相信地球人都知道吧~~

. i4 O4 ?8 [3 s# h# l其实原文标题里写的是“杨振宁”，俺故意改滴~~

三思

原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-7 13:02 发表

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6 K% b# _* J0 M% a俺直接把英文提炼，打印出来给老外，她们一见就挑大拇指～

是不是她们以为你写的情书呢，就算文字晦涩也不在意，挑大拇指，意思是：今天晚上没问题！

猪刀小试

原帖由 三思 于 2007-5-8 23:07 发表
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# @& _: [& a9 h& C' s4 P" d是不是她们以为你写的情书呢，就算文字晦涩也不在意，挑大拇指，意思是：今天晚上没问题！

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我们公司有俩女的，那叫一个胖，一个人能占一条机动车道，如果俩人并排走路出门，门口的50st就该塞车了。

海鸥飞处

原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-8 23:23 发表

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" ~/ X! s! `& K: H) Y: s# m+ o我们公司有俩女的，那叫一个胖，一个人能占一条机动车道，如果俩人并排走路出门，门口的50st就该塞车了。

$ G/ o8 e. K: @0 Y猪兄可怜，严重慰问ing~~

听雪安妮

偶就不明白,不过就那么一个糟老头子,这女人怎么会搞得这么煽情.

听雪安妮

翻译得也让人起鸡皮疙瘩,什么君啊妾的,奴性十足.

听雪安妮

怎么着也得男的给女的写情书吧,合着芳龄女子给糟老头子写情书?
晕.

猪刀小试

原帖由 听雪安妮 于 2007-5-9 20:10 发表
2 N; n! P1 z3 K/ r$ X怎么着也得男的给女的写情书吧,合着芳龄女子给糟老头子写情书?
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6 r6 x1 o6 u$ F) U) j% N不看年纪，看地位～

Justing

初看标题，我还以为翁美女是嗡嗡呢