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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember
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) ]9 j0 U9 J# D/ a& c  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was4 S  i5 B/ }+ D% [% J
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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3 x8 J9 `% C2 }  q+ P every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely ! V  S5 P5 g0 S& D2 C' p) s' S0 q
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing5 E' V  w: o% H# \

/ o. z) a2 N" j  R9 V+ c/ t on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my 1 ?, v% K+ l) T4 K
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deaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will! }, l) N) N$ J- ]
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.6 Q8 i- H' B- s. O- w( Z: s
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!' I6 t! x, ~, M2 b7 F6 O6 c
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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