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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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; F$ g: L& I5 t+ w     One day I always remember
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was! w) ~! S+ e. [+ h

2 Q' ^% N* w8 w. `0 Y. `( X# Gexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my4 h! E$ ^. x4 O: _
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,% R% C+ g! g  a/ B$ a3 ~- Y; h. c
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely 6 u: P. K6 c1 M0 J% _$ i  q# v6 c

4 t- p; @& w2 n( r  z  u+ G0 @trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since & I( t6 H, L1 T+ E! |6 T# v4 d

: B8 n! ~( U, v0 ]  c; m7 Pthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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( g+ V/ [' X9 S6 L, O) J on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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- m: @+ j+ _7 ifor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will: K# s' d, ~4 s* g: V) L
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.% j% l9 u# H9 I7 e$ Q: n0 k

1 O! h5 n9 s  T* S( S& S' g' @! P[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!: m9 o. R4 @( v3 x, m2 j6 i) h2 C
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
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