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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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6 o9 r7 Q! b5 ?# |3 L     One day I always remember& E! i3 k5 N3 e1 A: ?. X- b) s  q

. K2 {" ]! ~) l  y7 T0 B  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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7 y  p5 m; ?3 b& {9 U* ]exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to( h& e, l& r4 P" O+ @. m

. ?" M! ^% a4 l5 zput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my2 W& x' P7 _1 I) _8 I

0 y8 K1 E' L! s5 c+ @/ B little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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5 |) X2 f0 w1 c2 T every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid( x/ V4 x9 `9 s% ?, X" J, o3 M
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since 9 X0 ^9 I# M" [" J9 [

" y0 h4 D& B" ~; pthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing7 s$ c: b6 @  w/ ]% ?* a' ^

+ L7 c: s+ k  ?& |# D- B: l on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard 5 S* \; f1 h$ z5 ]
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my 1 I" @; B' b$ T! `' M
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deaest daughter.* z4 U, \5 P; [( W4 C: v  p

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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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- F$ Q7 N" Z/ }7 n* `% i) C never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!1 F! X5 ~$ g, _; b+ t. U- _4 n
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
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