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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)& Q: u6 @& t" m) S  x( d

) n2 k; A$ |+ x% ^7 v' P     One day I always remember( O5 E- L& C" e4 N/ N. P; |. b; ~

( x8 n" I: I, k  |$ ]  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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9 U- k- ?1 \' m3 A, hexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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. C& t$ {; y1 H/ ~1 i4 g0 Jput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid& n3 Z" T- ^9 S' J4 l* i3 q

3 X! |5 }# V5 e/ J: q' N0 _ was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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5 H/ A$ t8 z% A  z. ttrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing' R7 C. |: M6 G$ I: C

- Y/ z& f6 v! o1 H: `3 K" ^8 W on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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" o4 W$ a! S/ G0 ^# {5 q4 Zfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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. O8 b8 \/ R: E, o$ hdeaest daughter.3 Q; o! x% n  `0 e

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( T- e8 p3 A0 D5 ?After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will2 R* J% z% ^# _* e+ {' M

5 k8 u$ Y6 R; S2 d' {8 w% G5 U never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!6 [% ~3 l. k. V% m  @
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
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