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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)2 v7 r$ l* z- ]: H3 z
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     One day I always remember
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to" z! J) O+ G; Z8 D/ c6 e9 m$ ]

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  `8 R* M0 z# G% j( G  T little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid1 B$ U6 U3 D* Y+ E7 }
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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! H" y, X6 V% f8 ^) _trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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! o, p7 c& {/ J2 P& c) x6 Vthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing$ o9 q; r+ r% \8 l) f
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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3 p& o) C" f$ E! m! \for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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/ U# v' p' b# p" E" H9 C6 cdeaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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) O$ a- \1 b! I# }# G[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!0 E1 Q7 u! ?. D3 `& D9 Y# ^6 x
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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