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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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( V: @9 ]* o) S     One day I always remember1 w, v: h: j% p8 R. s2 e
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was5 m5 @" A" @0 P, D+ g
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to  ?4 z+ i8 {; F2 B0 J
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my7 D4 H3 n% D' ^3 H

( \2 T% J& \# h4 Y' Z# P4 p1 ^- s little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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# g  K- Q$ K7 F3 n# `. q every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid5 Q" e3 f$ S- R8 G
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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- A1 p! v' W1 {1 S1 R5 B$ htrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since 9 m$ l2 r, e0 z, a' _! w7 ~
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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+ m% i: P5 }" R0 t  w# R on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.0 D8 g* W, I! {3 D. A& D, X
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!& y7 I7 M7 o9 q) Y' `
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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