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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember6 Y. |8 d/ Y( |: V. l& j

* ]& _: e  Y9 T. b1 p, K) B  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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% M7 d& a/ o$ c7 |! uexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my' r; X! ^' o1 S2 T) I
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,3 h; y& R- t1 H3 R; p/ ?" S; ^2 r% M% ~
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid% s: g/ G( \  q6 \2 `7 R8 S: Y+ a
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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+ m: O9 A4 U7 Y8 A( k  K; C* Ytrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since 8 G5 v' [; H+ N; g
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing2 {) p' N% [3 j+ L' C' h3 ?

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+ m8 C4 \3 o/ i( \for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.
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0 g" I4 W: W' g* h# BAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will& n6 Y9 w/ j- p, f( D# s& n/ A
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!6 @0 d$ x( q/ x. [
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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