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茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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　　　　　One day I always remember

　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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- M; Y; a( ?' Y' ^exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my

$ `6 B1 o0 Q# M$ D/ h- a/ i( d little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,

every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid

was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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( Y6 b' Z" H6 @( D4 y0 ttrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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! p4 G% v$ E6 s: ^that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing

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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my

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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！