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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)* M2 m4 v0 y) w- c! U* C0 G. D* E

/ \" t% B; F2 }     One day I always remember
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4 c  ^# d0 ~9 z' D0 V4 ~% n7 u  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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# l0 S4 w& C- ?& u2 Fexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to: J: Q# D" ~7 M, u3 C
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my  w2 n9 [( P( M3 x, ^6 }

  F" G( c7 L! ?$ \& Q; _% w little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely + [/ h! J9 z9 P6 g
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since ; x& s0 Q; T/ R+ s9 S, G4 E; g

5 X' n9 T; \7 d/ V# ?that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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; k, e+ V% p! n# V on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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$ h; l" c% g+ o2 o4 V! C5 i9 F0 D) pfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.4 Y  i( F( L8 k& s0 \

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+ ?2 Q$ v$ O6 o& R/ AAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will# X) {' ^* S. `  c6 S# L% Z
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.  x- S- ^5 a" K$ G
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
. Q6 d1 N1 p' s0 O+ e( W: Z1 P" Q1 N' Dwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
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