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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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  t5 b5 d) s6 @) g     One day I always remember
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9 j$ i7 z2 V2 E7 K0 K) N2 w5 f  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to- h* ]' H+ t6 x8 r+ q' b

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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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& Z! D3 c& m9 B' E$ S9 E every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid) S7 d& g# d% K1 u1 d( |% J/ B! [3 J
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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- Y' I0 a+ ?* J0 q. x, Y0 ctrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing! B" e% S' q8 ~# W

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deaest daughter.# n9 I& X- H+ U' n3 G0 A2 _

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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will& m3 U: ?/ j/ X# D
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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$ R- j0 Q- I+ h, i& |: K[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!6 R# X; M3 v0 O. C' V
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
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