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I just wrote a poem- [4 u! `/ s7 L/ h
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
; _0 J0 X0 R4 j+ Q. N* d2 nHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem* \# ^# E9 U9 j- s9 w( G) a3 t9 T
Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
; ?* i( z: ?' c! E$ F8 a1 ?9 F Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
+ ?" e+ H' i. F0 u0 {0 q Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world 0 `8 J! `8 i9 a4 P$ t( ?
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me / D! x" J# r9 k' _
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
. S" h% V. g' N* @6 r0 r8 ]+ C Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
! c% q3 e; o: r( O7 L! w9 gHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
; B8 G5 l: I: L( l* F somehow I realized you were still in my heart % r2 S0 y% {1 U- Z2 k7 w5 Q* M
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
* |' Y! V7 @! P3 e* ~( r somehow I lost myself inside again
1 T/ w2 r- I( XNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
) W _- { y1 ?9 `: h; j4 |9 R$ A somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
& I$ h, I" Z1 z B$ MFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
9 d. Y( a' X8 m, EBasically, I almost finish this poem4 E. A1 R; U6 P, ~6 n* ?+ o8 S
I am 一个人de精彩
" L+ R2 ~; c' O: y I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.- w4 g& J% a# [+ `- ~2 [
But........
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