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I just wrote a poem
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- `/ X1 b* N+ J0 ?" m8 G$ S) I" dHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem0 r, }4 Q! Y4 L' j0 T2 S0 \
Thanks a lot!!!
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, J5 p( d5 G) Z O5 x3 W* a+ D& R/ TFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you ]$ { ^7 D; @" N K4 H1 q
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 1 ]% M5 f z" R0 u. Y0 D! H7 }# I
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
/ @+ q& f: X3 d. g- H! F. H! f u Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
& E2 j$ z5 X2 ~, c7 I H Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
1 Q T; F+ ^2 T- N# N3 f Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness " @( w6 I( \9 t% I6 M; {- E
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday . Y) `) a4 e+ H+ X) X2 R! e
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
" J3 y7 S- Z* m& g; i somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness! C/ E, r! o/ K3 K# {
somehow I lost myself inside again
: b0 M9 t2 q" U1 ?Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 7 B; q! I0 x# H! K
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
/ A! q; @( P8 N) w' Y) U. N% QFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you...................................... N% A1 P' P% B% c2 r. X8 U! ]
Basically, I almost finish this poem, z( P h! o+ G2 r, ?) x r: f- [
I am 一个人de精彩
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
