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I just wrote a poem. \; Y2 }; Z' P' f
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
& U) R/ W m9 k. f7 s. T8 _However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem$ s% ]# W8 R- J" A/ n* e. a, J
Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
$ o8 ?& y8 _( w" l& u/ K Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
. p$ m& m9 X0 m# ~4 s/ k/ T Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
0 G; `9 U& R# K Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 0 e: \7 S5 }2 E$ z+ V- I# V5 j
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
+ w$ _+ k8 q6 u3 f8 o Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness & `( u2 ~/ X4 ?+ e. A' [
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
# I8 f% |3 w. d somehow I realized you were still in my heart ; H/ G& P) O6 n6 L; u4 m: p
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
) o4 K( v3 P& s. x* N" A2 g somehow I lost myself inside again 4 u' |: C' r6 ?. F& H4 I# R
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
. E& e$ g" J4 P2 G% s1 D somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
" Y8 e% H2 ]( {! qFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you...................................... ^1 P' E% t2 g6 q+ v6 e
Basically, I almost finish this poem
$ Y! \ M. \$ n# ] K" G I am 一个人de精彩
5 X0 @9 Z3 F1 ?0 y7 @3 ?* J7 ? I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.' A+ ^' D) }# K
But........ 0 A& \' }4 P, ]
Ironically? Isn't it? |
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