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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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发表于 2005-1-5 03:05 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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(一) 对立观点式 / H* `7 N! o5 x+ ^
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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8 V3 J0 b; n8 |- y+ g(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
0 Y3 |7 L  w" }1 G2 b0 E% y; kThe main reason for my propensity for A is that…… 9 `) ~+ x2 v6 `  z1 o! f1 o$ Q# L) l) K9 Q
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
8 ~- u: I* ^# r1 q1 [" J- _: `A is superior in another way, this is… 6 x! b9 E2 {- C0 N3 a
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… ) W# z" t2 f5 n$ E
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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8 |5 `  |. C* c: i0 X* NTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B. 2 S. p& ]( E; Y0 Q$ s7 [0 [
For A, A 的一个优势 " n) Q$ X$ k* Y5 d. Q
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
  W  d, v. i" \; R+ \: L  n9 a+ `Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
: g' _/ `8 g+ Eon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is… 2 _$ b' f3 G/ X
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
" K# U6 C2 {+ f6 gFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2. . R: [" O3 |. C( H4 u- q5 _# }
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7 U/ h. j  Y- P) J+ Y(二)单一观点式
3 B. a/ C4 i; Y3 h1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase. * _! V) n, T/ B5 Y+ C  {7 T
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
4 |) y0 Y5 K% R7 X5 c( Y- ~, x' MThere is no denying that… 2 P- M8 @, L3 p% t
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that… 4 j. d4 \* U! B) r1 x" c% F; z& G1 Z
Finally,… , y: V: ^  ~6 d, m' D' V
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that… ' N3 ]$ a, p/ M. W5 J* ?
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, h) W8 t! V  J/ F2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型) 1 @8 A- S5 j% z7 a& T  ^
(本类型只agree)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C. + q3 ?: V/ z% ]2 n0 ~
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
( X$ r/ Y$ r' N5 uWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
9 N% D: [# O6 D) [6 E8 M+ AA is superior in another way, this is…
5 W' v+ |. n2 G# P8 q9 WIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
$ ~3 g6 n1 A& b; e9 w2 L$ L0 I$ KFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... 2 }% w# s* i$ A7 |
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3 V( b5 Z  N3 a+ i  {(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
" C. \4 p) G& j2 ^& U* VWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
& f6 q" H9 P) S8 H* m8 wThe main reason for my propensity for C is that…… " D" X2 Y1 K4 J. b3 p: L; h2 F* l
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
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: q5 _0 n  s8 _1 F1 v& L4 c- JFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C # ^7 o, J' b. X  N0 h
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
9 A) @+ G4 o7 t# }% k' k, u2 z) J(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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陈述这个事实
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, M: ?& u0 n  p, P9 N8 TOne of the primary causes is that… % Z7 f% P9 [# K- o5 x
XXX also results from…
* q( G: S$ M' g! t* S3 U$ o  S… is responsible for xxx, as well.
- v! l8 y- y4 H# @$ d* l9 a: WTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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- B9 c, P; Y8 I3 L3 c2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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背景描述
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
$ _% f3 U6 h5 K' n/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that… - D% \1 @% Y# Y- M
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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6 t# r) ~2 V& A9 q) z! f% I8 qa more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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2 d( B) a5 \" \3 f; w' FIn addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?* ^" Z" O: S6 B; P/ O1 r3 k9 m- C* m

* C! c9 ]8 o1 @5 o) n$ E再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.0 H: @$ F, P2 M4 p
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