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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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发表于 2005-1-5 03:05 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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6 r+ |, V# Z- n1 o+ G" v( L2 C(一) 对立观点式
7 n6 b  ~  a$ D- J$ \6 I1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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9 C6 r  d/ ^! [$ `0 ^. u' s(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons. ; L3 l6 K7 N. h4 H$ ]9 w1 O" c9 H! `( ~
The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… 7 _; h  U0 J  }- c) `7 ~  d) g
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
$ l; l3 Z* r' {! G- K* g% xA is superior in another way, this is… % X! n  I% T3 X: E
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
" M) J' v) a$ p( sFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast) 5 N+ t5 y1 b. v6 G
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# x. U1 ^1 T3 i" [$ J$ k" z# jTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
* L$ Y6 d) k1 {$ _. \5 zFor A, A 的一个优势 % L7 C5 y2 V1 a! x$ m$ M/ Q
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance, * G8 R) T/ `' Q4 m. r& [
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
: f) j- G: u$ a3 A1 _) d1 k% Aon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
% k' l3 v- h7 U/ t, Lmoreover, B的优点2,for example… & T# R9 C2 c( N, ^3 `$ B
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2. 2 {" H0 n3 n, ^. A) X  C4 z5 A
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( z0 D  S& H" e1 Q7 G(二)单一观点式
/ d% n0 R% N1 q5 U& L1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型) 3 ~$ k( ~$ A1 ?% f% q- F# J" R

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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
+ l/ a( [( k6 H/ N# F& k2 {8 oAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below. : z5 r! f# X+ Y
There is no denying that… 8 \5 b1 z$ [4 \" m. q& i& z
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
1 \# D- s0 H  zFinally,… $ \) L$ w* l4 Y6 f
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that… 4 B" P# [8 f1 o2 B- g
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: H, B' G. L2 ]. |- t& N2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型) 1 \. c# ]) r3 F6 M
(本类型只agree) $ ~! g' w7 N/ G
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
: J+ t6 |; E4 dThe main reason for my propensity for A is that…… ' {7 D3 G" a2 @) |7 q
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… 0 W7 P, _5 l( s4 }2 q. G6 b
A is superior in another way, this is…
& T  n& P$ A* \- o+ rIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… % R3 `1 D- T3 g4 Q% n8 K* \- x
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... # ~1 v4 W, ?3 ~
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$ B( |2 ]2 O1 y(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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6 r& {; o* C, w1 Q& dThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D. 4 U! S/ w/ H3 c8 n2 h* ^' V
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
+ @1 V+ E4 T# L3 [  a% ]! n- h6 wThe main reason for my propensity for C is that…… 2 T& _$ S' q& N7 G# `( G1 Q  I) I
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
1 x* E9 {" [' c1 H( Z, m8 ]C is superior in another way, this is…
% z: j3 g. d* N$ J9 _2 oFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C   z3 ~7 T/ l" z
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
# V; o' }9 x- G! x(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.) ! k; O  z' R" U% F( z# t

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1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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8 z- ]- d/ x' @. @8 W陈述这个事实 4 ~  y' l* w+ c
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
, x# f+ b0 s' m2 K7 ZOne of the primary causes is that… ' P7 t, B8 W& L, A/ f
XXX also results from… 9 i4 {7 n3 L/ _
… is responsible for xxx, as well. 7 B& D8 j1 X1 v" ]9 u; k
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX - X  n* Q1 y9 b6 f0 M* @
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2 r$ a1 b; U2 x: FThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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. z  R& D, G! _  \  a' [One of the primary method, to my mind, is that… ( }) u, G8 a* J3 ]0 m
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that… ( q4 x+ `5 ?' u3 L5 q5 N8 K
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that… % \' S" M4 {4 d: G# n: V

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4 `( c. g2 X$ p% s8 k/ @In addition/ furthermore 7 v! |: K9 C/ a9 {6 V
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.7 d  n7 R. I( H# s
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