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发表于 2005-1-5 03:05 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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TOEFL 5分 作文框架% i# X2 D# |9 S2 V) z2 C! \& t5 S

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(一) 对立观点式
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
1 ~0 s# k0 x+ A- P# }The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… 6 y( I# l' C% Z" i) z, F/ i" _! L
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
. E9 }5 z7 G! K: f$ w+ p) \A is superior in another way, this is… $ O1 q) _9 U/ D. V3 ^
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… 1 f* z0 ?4 X4 \/ B/ R
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... ' M' {" x1 w0 w  B# O* Q4 y" b
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
6 f0 y  c# A) p( t. P! O8 K- Q3 e+ `7 vFor A, A 的一个优势
6 g' v3 [" P, H% B/ NWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
5 h. w4 |. g( ?8 t" oFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is... 1 N! T+ y: f, k$ J& S
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
* b+ ~: D7 k- g+ d/ Q1 Mmoreover, B的优点2,for example… ' _3 c' J, {, {" U+ f7 N! x& q. c
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式 4 d0 \) w; B' o1 [) h7 V; S
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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! z% T' P0 o' C: p/ \: o首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
8 Q' B' I' M$ Y5 ?After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
( o) f, z9 a2 M( E0 qThere is no denying that…
, P, g6 ^* r& `  I9 sAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that… % x1 p. H6 C& ?5 b5 `7 S
Finally,…   @# k( b5 v; z5 S+ A( L% u
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that… + N2 f$ l9 k! a+ h
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( m. D# Q) r1 F: \2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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4 H  H( U& {" j(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C. * L1 H5 Z5 c  h; i/ V" y
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
9 f& `, N3 D# U, K" YWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
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It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
" o6 x: \. [0 pFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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5 G% S4 M  q( f7 Y# xThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
$ z0 \/ u$ ^  T+ g: [When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons. 5 L# ]2 G/ R1 q+ T. g' w% o
The main reason for my propensity for C is that…… 5 {, U* R% c  U0 b* T) {
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
. ?) ?1 B, g% Y! SC is superior in another way, this is… 0 x8 o1 @- S( g
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C 2 C) n& K" P; ?- d7 r5 o+ O  ]; _
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us. . L) M3 K, }- V7 N$ m
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.) $ N: o) Z( h- Y1 O6 t9 @+ G: L

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(四)原因解释型 / z$ @. v2 z2 J4 [& m: o
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Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows. 9 h  ^: R" A( R! w9 ?% u& v
One of the primary causes is that…
) L+ T7 ]2 T( L( b. J) zXXX also results from…
8 h/ b0 I6 k8 n) k" {0 E2 R/ ?… is responsible for xxx, as well. 1 E* V. j# C2 M( K3 A2 N5 M
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something. 3 e1 a  Y, R4 ~# }
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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there. 6 |9 ~3 _+ w0 X* B, v
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that… 0 {' k1 q6 |8 Q0 |0 {% T. W
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that… - H3 d# V& v* w
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that… * o" n  D" d0 Y! i8 l6 w

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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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  Y. L9 _( u& d' c% i3 E2 q2 O6 n! SIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]
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