TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架


TWE作文模板汇粹
2 w! d2 k& h# z1 s9 R+ Q(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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7 e* b; X; ?2 ~7 k(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
9 _( h1 ^) b8 w, h/ y/ ]9 }9 fWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
6 q9 J3 r2 Z2 lA is superior in another way, this is…
5 c0 K" j3 N( {: D& `; ]3 |It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)

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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
$ ?9 @9 S% s4 B$ G# pmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.



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(二)单一观点式
' A( m" c' D" J7 Q+ E8 R1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
5 q; x$ l: K: m' ]! aAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
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Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
" c6 D4 K7 |( L/ iBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…


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" b0 d# P1 f3 u( I$ i# H; J3 n２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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/ E. h( D/ K) B' X. O7 P- v/ p(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
1 p/ l: s- ?; }) `$ G2 `What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
, f$ \5 O. U& JIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
6 E$ y' z6 _( ?5 R/ s+ E9 S5 }From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型



There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
2 x' i" }# l# f, v" l7 u$ r3 I/ [The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
) B( z! {5 m7 e6 }! c( X- f% BFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
7 g$ `# s- l) i, b8 N: |6 kFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
9 j) g6 f/ m0 k(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)

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" P6 }2 T; |0 l  Y- `: h(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.



陈述这个事实
, @' d9 j( b8 }9 J! [* cAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
) O9 c" D: v4 M# j" lXXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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$ V5 }0 [6 ]" ~' c4 O6 E! Z, }- _2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.

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4 i0 y) o  _3 |& \- MThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.


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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
" X3 ]$ F* j$ ?# }7 t/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…



9 S$ }% I) H) ^  X7 Ta more subtle point which we must consider is that…



In addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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. W2 u% E5 I0 i[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]