TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架


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(一) 对立观点式
- }. G5 [1 W: c/ s; y1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)

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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
1 v$ r0 x# c' h" Q* qThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
( Q1 L0 Z2 B% ^6 v! }& q, tIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
6 v$ ~2 I3 F3 n' R) eFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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* \, Z- d) B& G2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)

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1 e* i5 H1 ~& O- t. A9 l+ N" f4 ?To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
: b* c" @; J. z. }* t( OFor A, A 的一个优势
. J" X2 Q3 `/ E/ t" vWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
! P  Q7 j2 u" R2 i2 E' _Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
+ R: e$ q3 _# g# o. l  f. \moreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.

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2 N+ m6 y7 ~+ Z9 y(二)单一观点式
0 @4 ?4 R: b$ i; X: D0 w+ C: B1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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3 r, j) b; r) e2 m& g7 U首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
2 x, d; A  ~+ f0 gFinally,…
, L0 p) X2 Y; Y+ p  T3 H) r* GBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…

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- D+ _; r3 w+ [２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)

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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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8 b+ I! b: \/ I5 I: z6 R" I(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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( d5 t8 n; I% I+ X. w" {6 oThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
8 W. ]" V/ x; N/ {( hWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
" C$ Y7 @! I2 }What is also worth noticing fact is that……
( |/ M, C- e' K% [% Q; ^C is superior in another way, this is…
$ n/ P( o! v" Y2 b0 P  U; jFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
; V5 n$ y" o) |. ^) R2 KFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
% t; L- ~& y/ Q- nXXX also results from…
. m+ X. ^1 C- g7 x… is responsible for xxx, as well.
+ }, @0 y4 N1 j6 k+ y8 xTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX


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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.


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背景描述
7 p( x3 a' t8 Y& r  V" EThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
% a5 O( W4 f$ {5 s' ?/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…

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4 Y+ @) g; [) J, N  i$ Ua more subtle point which we must consider is that…


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In addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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/ \; L- Z: u/ }再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

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