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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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发表于 2005-1-5 03:05 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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TOEFL 5分 作文框架+ u3 e6 ~8 N0 X2 w# k
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  D) L9 w4 F' O9 T6 e: `3 v5 }(一) 对立观点式 " c1 K. T6 B3 ]% N/ u2 F
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons. 3 ?* |5 L  `; ^; r* }; M9 q' Y
The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… - c2 L2 G6 W' G& M8 B4 }7 d
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
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It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
4 T( H& ~7 s# R1 _4 s" v0 cFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... 8 R6 ]8 x3 r3 j3 |
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast) , \( G/ b: Q0 p$ G, k
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" j' X6 S' o& o0 X- p9 }, uTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B. 4 }0 d/ @& O/ X! J& o$ x
For A, A 的一个优势
1 K& V7 v6 _2 G2 |Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance, 4 Y3 H: t; [/ V
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
' e% H* J5 |- M4 c' P; eon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is… 2 T/ T2 M+ V7 g! H
moreover, B的优点2,for example… 2 z* _% S% E* ~
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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9 L% X. `1 E5 Y0 i(二)单一观点式 ! }, g# B( ?- P. d( X5 n8 V
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型) 1 E3 w" W& B; Y  X  f

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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase. " f4 M% N7 _: n7 z* ?: G* i+ [6 m
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below. 1 C: t- t* h9 P0 x+ d/ ~7 `5 o% V
There is no denying that… % T$ m/ ]3 c+ l$ |5 q& v
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
, j& L" L4 y6 L! eFinally,…   O9 X" ^2 \$ D) b
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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  i6 T9 ~6 G0 r7 G(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
' |, n5 M8 C. b7 G( L0 R3 DThe main reason for my propensity for A is that…… , t1 f" D8 \3 y: Y
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… # A# i$ M+ z; t6 K* P' f  `6 A
A is superior in another way, this is…
& j- M+ n5 N; y! X& U) ?It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
, a1 X/ x6 j- E& OFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
, A3 n4 Z9 k2 N8 n8 ^' h" A; WWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons. 4 V' i4 ~3 T- h8 E/ Z
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
1 e. k7 u' r: d" J$ OWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
4 l- C) ]2 f0 c8 h' H. c7 ^1 f5 OC is superior in another way, this is…
5 P2 F- h5 b  jFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
6 y4 f4 ^, z2 t( @: J/ RFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
$ s$ A& D# w  I. E/ ?" u(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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陈述这个事实
4 A' `3 C# D$ y% s, d% a: IAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
! P- q% ?# S- i. Y4 `6 E: B6 }: z; rOne of the primary causes is that…
7 m/ J, p2 j7 v& l( t8 fXXX also results from…
  G( t6 Z! b9 Z+ P, p  N; f… is responsible for xxx, as well. ! ~) ]' v- u3 F3 u# }
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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) H( h$ o* x4 x( ~2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that… ) K% ]' H; B" L& Y: ~
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/ t3 T/ m+ ^# w9 c/ x3 Y3 i/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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0 d$ }9 Z) V5 n7 p' p5 o, [a more subtle point which we must consider is that… 6 z6 t; u  h' e1 G. f

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9 O/ F1 ~  Y! V( p/ aIn addition/ furthermore % ^/ Y7 M2 U0 B1 D  k, O
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& I0 R& M4 o: w" ]5 DIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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& V$ R9 v# l1 z1 j9 z再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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