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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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发表于 2005-1-5 03:05 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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TWE作文模板汇粹
& q# ^3 u% r  |* o! v7 r(一) 对立观点式 ; d! J. {6 V$ f! r" x+ x9 L( @. M
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型) & w( @9 A" X$ F3 X3 S% P

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% h1 j5 k4 Q3 a(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
( A! G& C$ I$ S; g8 l6 JThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
0 E1 o, o- w3 c6 c6 VWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
& w. c+ c+ v0 n5 m: ~A is superior in another way, this is… ) v0 Q+ f! g3 K+ I* K5 \
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
3 m5 [- ]4 U' C; FFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... + ?/ J6 a$ C) V" A' @

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7 X  C0 O2 n/ ~# e3 Q2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B. 8 o1 Y& @1 y0 M8 {
For A, A 的一个优势
% E4 ~' v/ d3 o+ E1 |6 \$ VWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
& F. T* J' ]/ R* Z4 |: [Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
& ]5 n6 \. d6 S; s5 p* P6 {4 von the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
1 F5 X$ m) y* lmoreover, B的优点2,for example… 9 E; [: B. o1 Y
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2. $ [& w0 ]3 _& L9 n2 ^& x, N* m0 P
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' {. [/ W7 t( ^2 d/ n1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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) ~/ E+ J( E2 w6 c首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
, H% \; l% T" a( vAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below. / [6 Y  e( E2 y* o$ x
There is no denying that…
/ r4 C7 A) V# a3 H3 hAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
+ a0 Y! P. q- |" eFinally,… 7 K7 V. k7 F; K. s7 E
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that… ; N) D% X3 u% U! m

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0 ^# r, U$ b- r4 V1 U2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
( w: n6 ?7 C# ]/ [! Z(本类型只agree)
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6 e# p6 S: i* N. L9 F, Y; |(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C. , S1 ^: i6 e% _" _
The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… 8 p* v  D$ Q' t# O* H8 u. ~. Z
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
: ~$ P# D# S8 z4 NA is superior in another way, this is…
2 n# @1 |  E8 wIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… ( ]- C& `4 W: A& I" K
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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! V9 g  D5 m, T( N% M9 |) ~) x(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型 0 @( W! J; t, _/ T
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: z4 @3 U+ d1 H; S, |There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D. 2 }& z- p; t0 g
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons. / a1 F$ [/ c/ W) w6 K* [
The main reason for my propensity for C is that…… ; h. j$ m- F# q* f+ Y4 E  P
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… / n) v4 ]* ^( p0 Z
C is superior in another way, this is… 4 x; Z5 a; J6 S8 V1 m# a
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C 9 T. G+ p9 K4 X9 W+ Y$ `
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
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$ z/ C. n1 F: W- t$ }(四)原因解释型 ' ?# }; ]" q' X6 L8 @: P, n
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Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
' s9 a6 P1 o: N! J9 W" w$ DOne of the primary causes is that… 7 _: ~' z' }' ?# p7 V
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… is responsible for xxx, as well.
3 c' q4 f& f6 }To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX . O, v/ @8 j: q* h, U; E& w3 x, x
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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there. ; H7 h  R1 w0 Z) d, S9 _1 p
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/ K3 w: v$ }: p5 rOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
( G: f/ j1 k; }4 i5 x1 [2 ?3 z/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that… , Z$ w, f0 j4 K9 s
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In addition/ furthermore
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% S) \* h; {3 T6 [& f% y. AIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]
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