TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架

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6 t1 @( j' Q/ |( E7 t" |* j(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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" e) |3 S% Q" a% O+ t) H7 T4 u  r(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
" N9 t" K% m; F! |It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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9 e6 h4 I* g# m, F2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
1 G4 d. \1 \% C! dFor A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
3 H* `3 |  v2 ~3 c! T# Q5 Y: fFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
6 k: @/ M, @3 {moreover, B的优点2,for example…
+ e9 h7 N, P- k, N7 ?$ j$ P% {7 K( CFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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8 ?$ Q* i- z' f$ V* X(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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4 |" t4 x! K( _3 ~* x8 p- w首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
8 z& K2 a' P1 `( _  o* v" t* IThere is no denying that…
& O7 o, e6 `+ D7 q* cAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
* G9 E- [+ b4 `! IFinally,…
# S0 Z) ?6 i" d! f' b; zBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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; ?! s. ~3 O+ Q% q(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
1 d, l' i# z# D2 Q( f8 ?What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
$ S& R$ J" n5 R- aFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...



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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
- U0 Z% w4 D; r, ?When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
7 c$ F5 q( \$ K5 uThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
7 y4 {3 v3 l8 i+ b+ dWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
! L$ b9 S0 l: D# L% E4 YFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
" a, [! r3 ?' [7 ^- W% `! B; F(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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陈述这个事实
4 ~0 c3 p' W9 o3 z# }: JAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
- _5 P  O. K% c; T" qXXX also results from…
% |& p4 }/ ^) \! p8 {2 c( s/ s0 E… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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背景描述
% W: A9 s- O% S: n' G- N; ]- gThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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5 B2 _  R, ]! x- V1 @- YOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
3 Z* U3 ?2 S3 J" u4 {/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
  e+ J, e& ^$ l. o3 l! r- n/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…

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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In addition/ furthermore

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; n7 `+ [1 C; I' K  A+ LIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

) c& Q7 H' Y6 k[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]