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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,- T- H+ G8 {2 m* K% b/ d
,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
8 ?) @9 g# }* y/ W! b& D6 _零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
$ Q, [" c3 i2 i! c6 t1 U- A现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.* O; w# f1 V" P1 H5 o3 }
梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.
: k y6 `# B' s; \1 M9 @1 W眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.- m- _5 Q' \: X3 t8 h( v
夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.& r+ D: d# U- O6 g, [
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool./ {6 y* X' A. z
就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.
: |" M, P) E# f; p$ L K我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及
4 ^* |9 s. M7 S- ?. d \* e那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。) _ J( y! {! B7 d1 U. q& S
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
4 {% ?5 o, j, `* k6 p- ]" w$ s昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.* t5 E6 `. }* V# D3 [6 S; r
想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
$ v' T/ w/ W- n* i; g# Y1 c2 [最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild. % {; G6 M9 Z2 C$ q
寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?: X- \7 k1 j% M+ k5 F. K J
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.+ ^# F$ j/ ?5 }: Q* u8 | J
迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.; C; y# l4 L$ i6 H
最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.- P, q1 N9 S5 \
多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?2 ^% I7 e% b$ r/ [
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….& V ^! D; I9 p# b" d" L3 y- F
多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously+ p4 k1 n4 ~+ H
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.) e3 L1 N% ?0 |' L
多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation,
0 _* j- L4 T3 q* ]6 m* [为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?4 _5 e! l Q, d
多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!$ A/ K8 N! o. v7 B: x' d% W
永难平息的泪* `5 S/ ^, N) ?1 f+ @6 p/ K
每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes
( B8 G0 W- M3 U" Z ]7 h~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
* P+ ~4 ]6 M" L; ^8 p# V当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
) {6 t$ O. N" U让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
9 i* L; V( k+ U8 }+ E) y你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul 2 U+ [0 e" A( o1 A
一抹微笑;) J0 U+ T* y( t) h& W
一个手势;
* C9 v } {( t I* v一片话语,4 h; n9 z1 b: d, K
愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、
( V% S, L- ?1 W* T% o明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner# x8 m/ L% C" l4 T2 W: z
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.
3 A. }: d+ P& W这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
+ Q: k, v$ D) v3 ~- p" y& j2 ~也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..& p! v4 H$ f9 C/ g
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,: V( X$ H, o1 l) c5 q0 G/ W
我并不以为然。% ~ \ J" G; \: Q7 I% Q
可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed
0 K! a; J4 M( c/ X. ]& N慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .
1 ?3 J& w! w" F3 f9 O被一种情绪所左右,
5 w9 C/ D W t! F" t总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
, j6 f; X. u, t5 z7 y即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you+ I, f7 q+ i h5 h' ~8 @4 _4 Z
也不问我是否喜欢你,
4 a9 e+ H, g+ z6 R6 i; ^对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
* u/ S% A) }, U, X, e" \3 {只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
7 q0 @& U( a7 l1 w* Q3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you
7 |" S2 R2 C6 i' X5 j( j心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil
) {" e& S0 R' {1 c然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere 9 w% _% p+ K+ W5 L
你的身影已化成一种氛围,4 o5 g+ j* E7 k! u5 {' U
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.
$ |; ~+ L# [2 _你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! 8 k8 \& m% o6 r* n1 k8 g
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字( B( I) g D, V% m; t
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,
2 _% {, t3 S4 }) s `, R; _一种声音,and your voice
$ x& ^$ U) n2 l8 Q# s# j" Q1 I也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.. U* X" h3 W' j# S. h
掺杂著幸福的感觉。
9 g" {8 Y! r. g$ A0 T0 s与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land* { |% U0 ~/ p9 y3 J
象雪花般撒落在我的心田,* `1 u0 I( ]5 F8 q( ~4 n; |
倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
; u% O) x. n. N纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。0 W5 \1 n6 M6 C5 I. U1 F1 `2 M
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss
6 I" b; Y. g% D# d4 N, }- s有一个能够让思念的人,
6 Q! u: v0 R4 K8 ^9 D2 {其实也是一种幸福。
+ k2 X1 m' r a$ d尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
! y; q) D1 Q% G% r" |柔柔的海风,
! q% t7 e. U W; B# o甜甜的夏天。% F& N" i) z0 X8 l1 r( q
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy : K! s# z3 a# w! {( N6 M
只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.0 a7 C+ V0 s3 G
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
; K2 M3 N L% ?2 J0 d1 u想和你有共同的情结,. Z% X& m x0 n5 C D9 P2 N
共同的心愿。% `9 s) M2 J. b- f) {
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you8 r+ D& b* \7 }/ E. A
一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together
1 L: m! A8 J) W, J$ f或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film
2 F4 _$ A4 I6 F- I; C或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.3 [" @% _8 u) \
『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
: N6 Z! b3 K& K! O! J' U我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
2 [6 X# C$ H3 k3 d* r# T浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”: [7 H7 k0 v' D! }0 V/ O. l% |
或是轻轻的一吻,9 \/ [) l/ X8 C- `- |
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』" ]6 `3 g8 j- \' f9 m8 }' a C
就足够了. That is enough.
4 T- l3 e; A/ Z: ]. G2 k+ O* m1 u这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago!
: ^( o9 \. E* b9 R终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
3 Q" k* b- @ x' i* Q! I/ E) @" Q萌出了芽,
) n& X x/ V# c7 n) H1 [一如对你的思念,the same as my missing
1 r. @, u3 [( P N浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.4 T5 {- `% x ^2 [9 m- ]9 R
如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand
; n, J2 Z4 z! ]能够牵著你的手,: p+ M. Q' I; `" i4 ~3 ?0 V3 Q
那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
: X5 ~# G/ d/ U# D/ e让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. * S! G' V5 u9 D/ C( g
慢慢地细读,, Z% A- Y( H5 B0 b- y
我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
8 I" q( R- _, h" h6 ]$ H( r在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me 8 t' B* H' t( C
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor 5 r+ E% x! b: w" i! l
就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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