I am translating for the songs of 枫叶情--重建灾区小学募捐义演

celina

I need help after my second draft.

billzhao

what is it? There are so many friends here who are willing to give you a hand.

寒月

post your draft here, a lot will help

celina

万水千山总是情
! s: Z6 b0 x0 j5 Y0 ~- o9 z词:邓伟雄曲:顾嘉辉
/ H7 ]; k1 S$ y" v9 J/ [7 W莫说青山多障碍
2 |& [) D0 V) C. [风也急风也劲
7 ~; i$ V3 t) q# V- b0 g1 J) ^' v* X白云过山峰也可传情
莫说水中多变幻
水也清水也静
柔情似水爱共永
, f$ S0 M) \: K" V7 w未怕罡风吹散了热爱
万水千山总是情
聚散也有天注定
不怨天不怨命
但求有山水共作证
# Y* q1 Z: m" |; N: @There is love everywhere
Option1
8 M% s+ b! q: I8 Y- w% tLook at the green mountain; however, you can not know it also can be a obstruction.
The wind blow rapidly and strong in order to pass the obstruction and meet the beautiful cloud.
Look at the peaceful lake; however, you can not know whether there is danger inside.
0 A4 E% m4 H4 R- u9 u( dHowever, our love will help us to overcome every difficult to dive and find the treasure.
Maybe some failure will disappoint us.
! c3 g& X8 x1 M4 t- FHowever, there is love everywhere
2 V1 _# n2 g: f, n  D1 f# _Our love will help us to overcome every difficulty.
0 b( F2 l3 M, }6 ~It is unpredictable that whether we can get together or not.
% Q9 p! W1 G$ }3 t" ~4 y8 }We do not worry about too much future.
Let’s just enjoy this moment.

celina

阳光总在风雨后
人生路上甜苦和喜忧
1 o. o, T' }7 `3 }8 R; A: n1 w' i% |! Q愿与你分担所有
6 K+ {) j8 E2 E难免曾经跌倒和等候
5 E- q, a/ f3 C# d% a  c! q* h' k& W要勇敢的抬头
谁愿常躲在避风的港口
* ^) T6 d& _% ?0 O) n) _宁有波涛汹涌的自由
愿是你心中灯塔的守候
在迷雾中让你看透
" R; i, p) e, G阳光总在风雨后
+ h6 f. u2 q6 [* z; [乌云上有睛空
  h+ p5 p7 I" A( E珍惜所有的感动
+ Q9 C2 h# N6 K# P" P0 b' b7 L每一份希望在你手中
阳光总在风雨后
请相信有彩虹
风风雨雨都接受
6 W9 A* h+ V1 K1 p8 W" ]" ^# B我一直会在你的左右
, C6 k$ K: s" y* R/ NThere is always sunshine after raining
3 ~. [; [" B' u1 c8 gThere are happiness and sadness in life.
3 h4 x" i4 Y  v' d# DI will share with you everything.
' {: |$ o  W/ w* a1 r+ O5 VIt is hard to avoid failure and the process of waiting for success.
We get together and bravely face them.
Everyone does not want to have a common life,
We prefer to have a challenge like a small boat travels in the sea.
I am willing to be pharos for you to show the right direction in the fog.
- V8 O$ D- @8 \: A8 g5 ZThere is always sunshine after raining.
There is sun above the black cloud.
5 k8 y) Y# P/ s: L: T) `1 m& LPlease cherish every moment you are moved.
Take chance on every hope.
There is always sunshine after raining.
$ l8 u# u/ k* u1 c. CWe can just believe that there is rainbow after raining.
8 v; p+ E: l4 E8 GWe will bravely accept every situation and deal with them.
I will always accomplish you in your life.

celina

让世界充满爱
6 B0 S3 j) b' P5 |. D
轻轻地捧着你的脸
( f1 J6 z" ]4 q* h$ I为你把眼泪擦干
这颗心永远属于你
* C2 h. s, k, }( s告诉我你不再孤单
深深地凝望着你的眼
不需要更多的语言
紧紧地握着你的手
这温暖依旧未改变
我们同欢乐我们同忍受
我们怀着同样的期待
3 \. a  g1 R% t) \我们同风雨我们共追求
我们珍存同一样的爱
无论你我可曾相识
无论在眼前在天边
* d( a1 e/ c5 W) V3 R& g真心地为你祝愿
祝愿你事事平安
' Z! j, Q. F$ I. o( _
Let the world full of love
Gently holding your face, I wiped away your tears for you.
! o: K, N$ I3 _% }7 nMy heart always belongs to you; please tell me you do not feel alone anymore.
Staring at your eyes, you have already known my meaning without saying a word.
+ I0 }3 I. T/ y1 p$ Z- Z, g2 lTightly holding your hands, the warm of your hands still did not change.
1 b6 C5 I5 i1 K" bWe share our joy with our stand with the same expectations. (?)
8 N# K5 E; x9 [$ v4 |7 E$ [We have been face difficulties together and pursing with the same purpose.
& H* H2 N9 W* {+ O$ yWe treasure the same love for both you and me.
7 n1 i$ Q- J  n! YWhether we know each other or not, whether we have been in the same immediate horizon,
I sincerely wish you are peace .

celina

明天会更好
轻轻敲醒沉睡的心灵
3 d' [# W+ f1 l5 x慢慢张开你的眼睛
+ M1 s( v, E6 Y. J/ L8 K看看忙碌的世界
是否依然孤独的转个不停
春风不解风情
0 A# l1 P2 h+ c5 m4 v吹动少年的心
6 q. L& p; N1 b& i让昨日脸上的泪痕
随记忆风干了
/ ^3 \6 t* i, ~" ?% G( |: }& d抬头寻找天空的翅膀
候鸟出现它的影迹
带来远处的饥荒
% h8 S4 |0 H% k3 v* u2 ]9 n" l无情的战火依然存在的消息
玉山白雪飘零
0 J/ [$ i/ {0 b: _: n4 z燃烧少年的心
使真情溶化成音符
倾诉遥远的祝福
1 B# g! L" {" y; `9 i! a唱出你的热情
伸出你的双手
让我拥抱着你的梦
3 Q! u5 G% b% Y) N让我拥有你真心的面孔
2 d5 h5 `; V0 L5 h' s让我们的笑容
. z/ \! B4 R8 O( j5 ~. Y充满着青春的骄傲
' n' b% X. Q# T为明天献出虔诚的祈祷
谁能不顾自己的家园
7 c7 A2 o" v- w' C% t1 c抛开记忆中的童年
谁能忍心看那昨日的忧愁
带走我们的笑容
: u; g( Q5 P4 N5 R. R/ W6 B青春不解红尘
) ~4 n( ]4 _4 t9 e+ E; v胭脂沾染了灰
  i, ^9 p2 I! O3 y/ N让久违不见的泪水
& n) y+ i7 W7 f" m; D% v% n滋润了你的面容
唱出你的热情
伸出你的双手
  y1 b/ Y* |& K+ Y' {让我拥抱着你的梦
- w2 Q( R2 y- ]- Q# a/ b让我拥有你真心的面孔
让我们的笑容
充满着青春的骄傲
为明天献出虔诚的祈祷
4 X8 l, y  \- O  L8 @轻轻敲醒沉睡的心灵
慢慢张开你的眼睛
+ c% N$ e/ |) H' F1 Z看看忙碌的世界
) |2 }) {% C9 s- j是否依然孤独的转个不停
2 z  o5 \6 ?5 l/ @日出唤醒清晨
! @; f% ^- `! v! B- O  y大地光彩重生
( ^; Q: g" Z8 Y1 U3 G( e, B$ {8 h' V让和风拂出的音响
- L( v4 V3 O, I2 s* Y谱成生命的乐章
& f: s) u; K: d9 M/ \3 Q, M  f3 l3 X唱出你的热情
5 ]9 Y* y% t5 }! p伸出你双手
让我拥抱着你的梦
% T3 q6 r! b4 R% ~让我拥有你真心的面孔
, T4 Y; m4 W6 d5 T$ J& x3 q4 O; c: V# R让我们的笑容
充满着青春的骄傲
  o1 z0 ?3 v' v/ J0 i让我们期待明天会更好
Future will be better
I woke up in the morning and open my eyes,
. y9 h" @7 Q3 B4 NAnd see the busy world whether the same as before.
* v5 a+ V8 I! ~- [! v/ i* HI cried because the earthquake destroyed our hometown.
I looked at the sky and saw the bird flying from my hometown.
It told me the news of the hungry and disaster of Sichuan.
I live in Canada far away; however, I bless my hometown using my songs.
/ C/ `( ?) F, V' Z3 y, v9 A9 E1 S5 z+ bLet’s sing with burning passions.
0 i/ R: r  K# _+ c9 ^Let’s shakes our hands with each other. (Let’s get together to overcome the difficulties)
+ ^2 ?" s  V. k+ i9 YLet’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
' K+ I$ j( q+ JEveryone loves their hometown with memory of their childhood.
: ]7 W8 Q6 r1 f6 ONobody wants to see the disaster take away our happiness.
We got together bravely to overcome every difficulties.
Let’s sing with burning passions,
6 e1 g% O# ~  V- ?9 H& \Let’s shakes our hands with each other.
: G: m7 ?1 u! e3 z  SLet’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
" m( \+ R9 x, O, n- e" oLet’s have the same dream
Let’s sincerely bless people who suffered in this earthquake.
5 {! N6 Z! z" D; uI woke up in the morning and open my eyes,
And see the busy world whether the same as before.
& J9 d& X9 ~0 y: x) HI am crying because the news of Sichuan earthquake destroyed my hometown,
However, I know that the sunrise will come finally.
And the mother earth will also renascence after the disaster.
! s- a7 s6 t$ I$ tEverything will pass and have its new life. (Everything will recovery after the disater)
# ?/ T7 [3 m5 W0 {Let’s sing with burning passions.       
. Z4 {3 j& }6 p  YLet’s shakes our hands with each other.
  s! k$ c! p3 P+ G' T8 ^% uLet’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
Let’s hope future will better.

celina

Please give advice as soon as possible because they need be done before June16.