I am translating for the songs of 枫叶情--重建灾区小学募捐义演

celina

I need help after my second draft.

billzhao

what is it? There are so many friends here who are willing to give you a hand.

寒月

post your draft here, a lot will help

celina

万水千山总是情
词:邓伟雄曲:顾嘉辉
莫说青山多障碍
风也急风也劲
9 E$ M/ ^" Y3 X. w3 J; n6 E白云过山峰也可传情
9 s9 d5 i4 N. C; p$ D/ |7 r) ^莫说水中多变幻
水也清水也静
柔情似水爱共永
未怕罡风吹散了热爱
万水千山总是情
% @7 M- _  F* L# q聚散也有天注定
不怨天不怨命
但求有山水共作证
There is love everywhere
Option1
Look at the green mountain; however, you can not know it also can be a obstruction.
The wind blow rapidly and strong in order to pass the obstruction and meet the beautiful cloud.
/ i: E! q! Z! k1 _! U2 n6 ILook at the peaceful lake; however, you can not know whether there is danger inside.
* X. H) p, [; K; D+ o# K: yHowever, our love will help us to overcome every difficult to dive and find the treasure.
Maybe some failure will disappoint us.
* S8 D9 v" G- z8 f5 A" x; ^  R4 kHowever, there is love everywhere
  j; e4 c5 A; J' P* |3 y& c0 `Our love will help us to overcome every difficulty.
$ \" M" g: q# W  f: L4 P; IIt is unpredictable that whether we can get together or not.
1 \1 T' ?3 v9 s6 M6 o; mWe do not worry about too much future.
% A: G+ `8 f' y1 X" b3 H+ u& uLet’s just enjoy this moment.

celina

阳光总在风雨后
9 @1 U; Z/ @$ [* I& Z- D0 I人生路上甜苦和喜忧
愿与你分担所有
难免曾经跌倒和等候
要勇敢的抬头
3 ^- B+ ^$ z( D$ E$ i6 S谁愿常躲在避风的港口
宁有波涛汹涌的自由
愿是你心中灯塔的守候
8 x: ^. ?5 |6 h9 k" ^在迷雾中让你看透
4 o9 R9 W4 P4 x阳光总在风雨后
$ d  h& N9 j; s/ W! ~乌云上有睛空
2 ]" x" }( ^8 J! Y2 b3 Z( o7 b珍惜所有的感动
每一份希望在你手中
阳光总在风雨后
请相信有彩虹
风风雨雨都接受
) A* m  V1 C5 G) G7 A8 `: X我一直会在你的左右
There is always sunshine after raining
9 g% E- _- A4 \% n0 V0 K  Y$ iThere are happiness and sadness in life.
I will share with you everything.
7 g3 g- L. t: o) P. lIt is hard to avoid failure and the process of waiting for success.
. ?. Y" k' M& A, V: C: eWe get together and bravely face them.
7 P- A  _* E& l, Y7 f. X! P3 M  oEveryone does not want to have a common life,
We prefer to have a challenge like a small boat travels in the sea.
1 I4 g+ w/ D4 |; c/ i* wI am willing to be pharos for you to show the right direction in the fog.
2 \8 r& a) `: t- nThere is always sunshine after raining.
There is sun above the black cloud.
Please cherish every moment you are moved.
Take chance on every hope.
2 t, l: w' x+ _; sThere is always sunshine after raining.
We can just believe that there is rainbow after raining.
We will bravely accept every situation and deal with them.
! O3 {5 h$ a! w+ N- q) cI will always accomplish you in your life.

celina

让世界充满爱

轻轻地捧着你的脸
8 |, l; X& U" ?: x; v为你把眼泪擦干
这颗心永远属于你
告诉我你不再孤单
& D6 l! l# _- G0 E8 f3 H. O+ }深深地凝望着你的眼
不需要更多的语言
0 Z% P& e! _- Q/ F. H0 p3 a" K紧紧地握着你的手
这温暖依旧未改变
我们同欢乐我们同忍受
我们怀着同样的期待
4 E& W; d: I" t4 B/ j我们同风雨我们共追求
我们珍存同一样的爱
无论你我可曾相识
无论在眼前在天边
3 G, V. |9 c/ a$ d' F4 F' k真心地为你祝愿
祝愿你事事平安
! Z" L+ l% C  y- l. n8 ]
Let the world full of love
Gently holding your face, I wiped away your tears for you.
My heart always belongs to you; please tell me you do not feel alone anymore.
Staring at your eyes, you have already known my meaning without saying a word.
7 J& B3 h0 C. WTightly holding your hands, the warm of your hands still did not change.
We share our joy with our stand with the same expectations. (?)
' Q; g; p# c" v; O0 @We have been face difficulties together and pursing with the same purpose.
6 X. v- J, H+ r9 s& m4 y+ IWe treasure the same love for both you and me.
6 ~- S, g+ o2 u8 i6 gWhether we know each other or not, whether we have been in the same immediate horizon,
I sincerely wish you are peace .

celina

明天会更好
! F; U9 [4 _: {0 f) n0 ^6 f) h轻轻敲醒沉睡的心灵
慢慢张开你的眼睛
看看忙碌的世界
3 W/ v! a4 C4 A1 n7 x是否依然孤独的转个不停
春风不解风情
: v$ D5 d2 \0 E) q6 A. F9 p( w吹动少年的心
+ ]+ K% ?: B# h* {: w; g' I让昨日脸上的泪痕
随记忆风干了
抬头寻找天空的翅膀
  e/ x1 j' a$ G2 l: ^1 k候鸟出现它的影迹
带来远处的饥荒
无情的战火依然存在的消息
玉山白雪飘零
% D! [) Q+ \2 \4 x6 P) `: c7 d5 o" ]( X燃烧少年的心
使真情溶化成音符
1 q2 W  Q! o. g# M) d倾诉遥远的祝福
唱出你的热情
伸出你的双手
让我拥抱着你的梦
让我拥有你真心的面孔
- }: q% i2 C' j让我们的笑容
充满着青春的骄傲
为明天献出虔诚的祈祷
谁能不顾自己的家园
) J$ ?. w/ }5 E; n; r: C4 Z2 J9 _抛开记忆中的童年
; f& i9 P4 \2 \1 p/ s8 ~谁能忍心看那昨日的忧愁
带走我们的笑容
" p) a: H! v) E& u, |8 a青春不解红尘
" D! M; ?) q4 Q' I( [8 L. ?胭脂沾染了灰
# X1 u6 r" V* ~! f0 M8 z' L让久违不见的泪水
% K2 ?! h4 B! x* j* k, b" `  H滋润了你的面容
唱出你的热情
伸出你的双手
; w4 A  u4 I9 d, g# Z5 x4 P让我拥抱着你的梦
7 k8 G; C3 _; |# j让我拥有你真心的面孔
9 }/ h: m* X# j# t% i  h& N让我们的笑容
: G, |; z! v& \: ^9 A5 A充满着青春的骄傲
为明天献出虔诚的祈祷
, V( ^" i% ^2 y) q: K- U轻轻敲醒沉睡的心灵
* Q+ u1 u0 v' J慢慢张开你的眼睛
% k% g* _2 I( {! n* x5 U6 n5 ~  H/ K: j看看忙碌的世界
是否依然孤独的转个不停
* K" v( K- }- F$ O日出唤醒清晨
! }4 I6 G! H4 V0 s3 V  p) e- K大地光彩重生
让和风拂出的音响
& L6 ?, Q* W, z" \谱成生命的乐章
唱出你的热情
伸出你双手
让我拥抱着你的梦
让我拥有你真心的面孔
; n  d1 z0 P8 L. q让我们的笑容
充满着青春的骄傲
让我们期待明天会更好
# ~6 _' r* L, _Future will be better
5 U8 [1 A- z9 ]) u: n" B7 e2 j0 m9 pI woke up in the morning and open my eyes,
And see the busy world whether the same as before.
I cried because the earthquake destroyed our hometown.
I looked at the sky and saw the bird flying from my hometown.
, D: D( q; ^- K0 KIt told me the news of the hungry and disaster of Sichuan.
I live in Canada far away; however, I bless my hometown using my songs.
8 K2 O& @+ F% @! L& NLet’s sing with burning passions.
4 D/ n' G# e( F/ M5 WLet’s shakes our hands with each other. (Let’s get together to overcome the difficulties)
, z: s' G  L3 rLet’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
Everyone loves their hometown with memory of their childhood.
. }- @  ~  ]3 }0 u9 T. sNobody wants to see the disaster take away our happiness.
" ~& k- _, @$ k  M( J4 _# xWe got together bravely to overcome every difficulties.
# x: v0 v* Q4 {Let’s sing with burning passions,
) ]/ X9 U8 h. J4 @# h1 c% A; z: @Let’s shakes our hands with each other.
Let’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
( ?- @+ s9 ^) ~+ V+ N- s8 CLet’s have the same dream
. ^6 }+ r; H( Y; B0 RLet’s sincerely bless people who suffered in this earthquake.
I woke up in the morning and open my eyes,
And see the busy world whether the same as before.
- V6 F. e* j+ z3 r+ iI am crying because the news of Sichuan earthquake destroyed my hometown,
However, I know that the sunrise will come finally.
5 R7 a' ~$ j+ D0 Q# f" Z And the mother earth will also renascence after the disaster.
7 ?! c) C% _% l& wEverything will pass and have its new life. (Everything will recovery after the disater)
Let’s sing with burning passions.       
" f0 m( h1 I2 h( C0 j  b$ Y5 ]Let’s shakes our hands with each other.
Let’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
, q3 K4 K. D* Q: C3 uLet’s hope future will better.

celina

Please give advice as soon as possible because they need be done before June16.