I am translating for the songs of 枫叶情--重建灾区小学募捐义演

celina

I need help after my second draft.

billzhao

what is it? There are so many friends here who are willing to give you a hand.

寒月

post your draft here, a lot will help

celina

万水千山总是情
. u0 I( a. Y5 D! e" a  I6 }词:邓伟雄曲:顾嘉辉
$ w+ c$ }& J5 H% M# V+ U莫说青山多障碍
风也急风也劲
- |& G; w5 Z& `7 a, j" ^白云过山峰也可传情
莫说水中多变幻
) c& N' h( G* }* S4 Q水也清水也静
柔情似水爱共永
未怕罡风吹散了热爱
  L; Y9 ]9 _9 K+ G- W4 p' z万水千山总是情
' @2 U/ a) ?0 l  ]" Q聚散也有天注定
不怨天不怨命
) O. g! y- t# l9 w但求有山水共作证
" D8 Q' D) i1 y7 z: t  z0 UThere is love everywhere
Option1
0 t9 g$ _0 W5 A7 D1 BLook at the green mountain; however, you can not know it also can be a obstruction.
% r, Y5 u3 b; M, D0 ~! Z# E& H+ M8 [/ MThe wind blow rapidly and strong in order to pass the obstruction and meet the beautiful cloud.
2 u: D! K9 G( GLook at the peaceful lake; however, you can not know whether there is danger inside.
However, our love will help us to overcome every difficult to dive and find the treasure.
  A/ F' t% S* uMaybe some failure will disappoint us.
1 K# J7 `4 F. ?0 QHowever, there is love everywhere
( V2 S  s9 j% O: M: g2 j/ y1 @) AOur love will help us to overcome every difficulty.
( q4 S# }$ }" X' O7 k+ O* h( uIt is unpredictable that whether we can get together or not.
We do not worry about too much future.
Let’s just enjoy this moment.

celina

阳光总在风雨后
人生路上甜苦和喜忧
愿与你分担所有
难免曾经跌倒和等候
% z# B7 m/ F2 W6 h# i7 j要勇敢的抬头
0 ^1 d( a6 ~  @3 |- _4 n% H7 h谁愿常躲在避风的港口
+ Z% J$ K+ W7 Q宁有波涛汹涌的自由
愿是你心中灯塔的守候
在迷雾中让你看透
, F# U' e# C9 ]7 P& H8 E% B, F阳光总在风雨后
: o# p0 _' @: a, Y; {& x7 g4 j, e乌云上有睛空
珍惜所有的感动
每一份希望在你手中
阳光总在风雨后
请相信有彩虹
风风雨雨都接受
我一直会在你的左右
There is always sunshine after raining
There are happiness and sadness in life.
0 N- G: u. c* Z- N) G/ yI will share with you everything.
$ o; `; B$ n# i" c6 q- |0 uIt is hard to avoid failure and the process of waiting for success.
We get together and bravely face them.
Everyone does not want to have a common life,
- a6 l" v- t0 W5 s0 _' Z3 OWe prefer to have a challenge like a small boat travels in the sea.
( }. r/ W( h7 _# \' A6 D! wI am willing to be pharos for you to show the right direction in the fog.
2 u- x3 D; X; `. \4 ]There is always sunshine after raining.
There is sun above the black cloud.
Please cherish every moment you are moved.
# Q  h% P5 h/ i' B$ A4 \Take chance on every hope.
There is always sunshine after raining.
; G  {. s% X7 oWe can just believe that there is rainbow after raining.
9 u' n: {$ V9 {; L0 ?We will bravely accept every situation and deal with them.
* x7 O: j+ f" A5 K5 dI will always accomplish you in your life.

celina

让世界充满爱
- S) @9 a' T* `4 u! z1 Q
, ^$ _' v: g: y0 [2 l( W2 b轻轻地捧着你的脸
为你把眼泪擦干
这颗心永远属于你
0 z4 O" n2 [: l& B( ^* Y告诉我你不再孤单
8 h$ M) S& P& o深深地凝望着你的眼
不需要更多的语言
7 ]4 o  k  ]4 j; m! ~- ?( P紧紧地握着你的手
这温暖依旧未改变
我们同欢乐我们同忍受
" w7 K2 `& ~! ~3 d( m我们怀着同样的期待
我们同风雨我们共追求
我们珍存同一样的爱
8 W3 V' Z0 [* n. Z4 c无论你我可曾相识
+ a* K7 ~( w" ]5 }无论在眼前在天边
真心地为你祝愿
$ ~5 B9 w" b& \4 S# ~! k& c祝愿你事事平安

  @/ X! ~3 z1 j; F& l6 @1 sLet the world full of love
Gently holding your face, I wiped away your tears for you.
My heart always belongs to you; please tell me you do not feel alone anymore.
9 d3 {4 t8 ?/ U9 i3 gStaring at your eyes, you have already known my meaning without saying a word.
+ S* S, z6 }/ a5 ^3 y" H0 zTightly holding your hands, the warm of your hands still did not change.
We share our joy with our stand with the same expectations. (?)
1 Q* c, |' d& i' |* m# gWe have been face difficulties together and pursing with the same purpose.
We treasure the same love for both you and me.
% ?% M, |8 G5 B8 ~$ {1 K. QWhether we know each other or not, whether we have been in the same immediate horizon,
9 V( V3 Z& K+ o  X' dI sincerely wish you are peace .

celina

明天会更好
) ]- J: L( h5 N: A轻轻敲醒沉睡的心灵
慢慢张开你的眼睛
& y# H, q# H/ G) K" F% C1 s- E) u看看忙碌的世界
是否依然孤独的转个不停
春风不解风情
/ @7 B2 i6 S/ ~  C0 X  e5 c吹动少年的心
让昨日脸上的泪痕
$ J; m" i1 q8 x  K% [随记忆风干了
4 o. C6 H6 K' o抬头寻找天空的翅膀
+ {& S2 Z- S7 ^0 s' t' [  `候鸟出现它的影迹
带来远处的饥荒
无情的战火依然存在的消息
  ^0 q# e8 T) k0 A玉山白雪飘零
燃烧少年的心
2 X# Q0 z' ^. v' L使真情溶化成音符
倾诉遥远的祝福
/ A. b1 Y" K; G& j9 A( h5 e% y唱出你的热情
伸出你的双手
) K* n' |2 a$ |+ S' Q让我拥抱着你的梦
7 y; J1 j! x# _9 y8 P/ M. ?3 \让我拥有你真心的面孔
让我们的笑容
, \. l$ d4 A8 y: ]" l充满着青春的骄傲
* ~1 F1 b) j) z; M$ G为明天献出虔诚的祈祷
谁能不顾自己的家园
抛开记忆中的童年
谁能忍心看那昨日的忧愁
/ b" F+ B. `. ~" W' L+ a8 T) O带走我们的笑容
青春不解红尘
胭脂沾染了灰
让久违不见的泪水
$ d5 c& M. v9 _  ^5 A/ F$ Z滋润了你的面容
- K/ O9 j; a3 N; C唱出你的热情
9 W1 k2 P! x! M: g7 L9 d) H3 I伸出你的双手
让我拥抱着你的梦
让我拥有你真心的面孔
7 V; @2 c9 g) N0 w% p7 x8 F让我们的笑容
2 e4 F9 a+ e6 P' B+ o充满着青春的骄傲
/ k/ h* r* W# o6 J为明天献出虔诚的祈祷
' k& |% h* w1 Z: G( p轻轻敲醒沉睡的心灵
% y! _& n4 M" F5 q9 Z慢慢张开你的眼睛
看看忙碌的世界
( `1 Z; A8 w% m7 G1 \是否依然孤独的转个不停
7 |$ P' I5 O# r: k日出唤醒清晨
* ^& P: X( M4 N: {大地光彩重生
让和风拂出的音响
) m/ z4 B0 f- c" V谱成生命的乐章
唱出你的热情
* P( M' O0 X( o+ I% W' ]伸出你双手
. V" \3 j5 O1 f- ?让我拥抱着你的梦
让我拥有你真心的面孔
让我们的笑容
: i: k$ H& W, k& W/ g( f充满着青春的骄傲
让我们期待明天会更好
Future will be better
I woke up in the morning and open my eyes,
And see the busy world whether the same as before.
7 I% U+ H& [0 @) d6 W' HI cried because the earthquake destroyed our hometown.
5 s! E5 H2 w5 v) P4 |I looked at the sky and saw the bird flying from my hometown.
It told me the news of the hungry and disaster of Sichuan.
I live in Canada far away; however, I bless my hometown using my songs.
Let’s sing with burning passions.
) o6 m3 D9 z0 F4 KLet’s shakes our hands with each other. (Let’s get together to overcome the difficulties)
+ n3 v# x7 s& Q& ^Let’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
! z4 E3 M+ Y! j. I. K: lEveryone loves their hometown with memory of their childhood.
6 b2 z& x' n* c# C& cNobody wants to see the disaster take away our happiness.
We got together bravely to overcome every difficulties.
Let’s sing with burning passions,
Let’s shakes our hands with each other.
# u3 C; c% A2 t5 GLet’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
2 b' U1 @" V3 j9 q2 _' e# qLet’s have the same dream
6 s3 J3 s) C, e) [Let’s sincerely bless people who suffered in this earthquake.
I woke up in the morning and open my eyes,
And see the busy world whether the same as before.
I am crying because the news of Sichuan earthquake destroyed my hometown,
5 a; x7 J* \: iHowever, I know that the sunrise will come finally.
$ j0 F' Z, M6 X And the mother earth will also renascence after the disaster.
Everything will pass and have its new life. (Everything will recovery after the disater)
5 p0 f3 y9 a2 ~* r7 f. NLet’s sing with burning passions.       
9 u& @" f: Y0 C+ c8 yLet’s shakes our hands with each other.
Let’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
) x5 t& S, E' l( I8 p; c5 q+ gLet’s hope future will better.

celina

Please give advice as soon as possible because they need be done before June16.