I am translating for the songs of 枫叶情--重建灾区小学募捐义演

celina

I need help after my second draft.

billzhao

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寒月

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celina

万水千山总是情
- Q- c1 A5 z9 K$ g9 V& {1 R6 [0 }8 @词:邓伟雄曲:顾嘉辉
莫说青山多障碍
风也急风也劲
白云过山峰也可传情
5 `4 y5 c9 M/ Z" O/ T/ ?( x莫说水中多变幻
水也清水也静
& s  O/ M9 B2 J. H' ]1 f柔情似水爱共永
未怕罡风吹散了热爱
5 P: R; c0 B1 ^3 D万水千山总是情
聚散也有天注定
) K* h% S% [2 a+ [& G不怨天不怨命
但求有山水共作证
There is love everywhere
Option1
Look at the green mountain; however, you can not know it also can be a obstruction.
$ H% S: N# D5 |% s0 s+ EThe wind blow rapidly and strong in order to pass the obstruction and meet the beautiful cloud.
Look at the peaceful lake; however, you can not know whether there is danger inside.
However, our love will help us to overcome every difficult to dive and find the treasure.
" T8 y! _3 Q, O; Z- \% KMaybe some failure will disappoint us.
However, there is love everywhere
1 T! o7 }* h0 EOur love will help us to overcome every difficulty.
! N" Y8 s1 t$ a) |* M. \( NIt is unpredictable that whether we can get together or not.
We do not worry about too much future.
Let’s just enjoy this moment.

celina

阳光总在风雨后
人生路上甜苦和喜忧
9 k- s4 n! R7 N' a愿与你分担所有
4 c; q0 L7 o& r难免曾经跌倒和等候
要勇敢的抬头
+ o3 e, C$ p3 M0 W谁愿常躲在避风的港口
宁有波涛汹涌的自由
愿是你心中灯塔的守候
9 E4 g( F) V* S6 t9 [在迷雾中让你看透
阳光总在风雨后
3 N" i4 ?4 z8 x1 [乌云上有睛空
, {, i4 ]5 c1 W1 ]! i% e" j( j珍惜所有的感动
每一份希望在你手中
阳光总在风雨后
. f' j$ m, h! b+ {5 v8 U" x$ U( T请相信有彩虹
: }% ~9 T- W/ g) ]( ]+ y+ }风风雨雨都接受
! Q# @% C% |: U' R我一直会在你的左右
# i: A1 i8 y# j% E# g. |3 Z) v4 I) NThere is always sunshine after raining
There are happiness and sadness in life.
& k- R! l7 J) W3 Q4 m  [! h( v& aI will share with you everything.
3 j1 [+ T+ [9 k) m! P4 N' g$ sIt is hard to avoid failure and the process of waiting for success.
, q; ]  P/ X& t: [7 j+ @We get together and bravely face them.
Everyone does not want to have a common life,
) j6 t. H- g$ \" s- Q' UWe prefer to have a challenge like a small boat travels in the sea.
I am willing to be pharos for you to show the right direction in the fog.
7 j# n& M; g/ A. Y3 gThere is always sunshine after raining.
" }: n) ^- }5 k  E2 }( X! R' Z7 HThere is sun above the black cloud.
* ?* r* j+ ~9 e4 ZPlease cherish every moment you are moved.
Take chance on every hope.
There is always sunshine after raining.
# W, g7 ]/ w% V" N( @: l& z0 l9 F" x" [We can just believe that there is rainbow after raining.
We will bravely accept every situation and deal with them.
9 e1 z+ L3 N4 a- Q3 v& `$ eI will always accomplish you in your life.

celina

让世界充满爱

轻轻地捧着你的脸
为你把眼泪擦干
6 {' I. z4 [6 Q: Z, V* p2 Q. X这颗心永远属于你
告诉我你不再孤单
' X7 c" M0 U' X- {! r; W深深地凝望着你的眼
% @! C- k. u$ U, w; Z不需要更多的语言
0 |1 d* n3 T- z$ R9 O紧紧地握着你的手
这温暖依旧未改变
7 k: f0 d& l! E1 [4 _4 b我们同欢乐我们同忍受
我们怀着同样的期待
我们同风雨我们共追求
$ ]5 }. Y, L( y( j* k+ F+ h我们珍存同一样的爱
0 w$ H* s1 U: v4 y$ [% [) f2 q  M无论你我可曾相识
无论在眼前在天边
4 U. q7 Z$ C, l' G/ _- h真心地为你祝愿
( Z$ Z& A( m0 J祝愿你事事平安
! t' e! F) t5 o- B$ r% g" a
& n; z2 u0 _2 U8 k' bLet the world full of love
5 X1 S; u8 ~$ C$ ^" M. ?8 M/ H6 hGently holding your face, I wiped away your tears for you.
4 d: _$ ]) ?8 {  \- EMy heart always belongs to you; please tell me you do not feel alone anymore.
Staring at your eyes, you have already known my meaning without saying a word.
3 Y$ e+ g) [2 A; ETightly holding your hands, the warm of your hands still did not change.
/ ]2 t, w, g( {5 V# fWe share our joy with our stand with the same expectations. (?)
We have been face difficulties together and pursing with the same purpose.
5 n9 T; \8 w/ K$ f: V6 BWe treasure the same love for both you and me.
% A9 c4 o* L) d+ l! Z& x- IWhether we know each other or not, whether we have been in the same immediate horizon,
I sincerely wish you are peace .

celina

明天会更好
' I6 ?6 o. d& t/ }6 l轻轻敲醒沉睡的心灵
9 T8 g6 Z4 E( P8 t! P慢慢张开你的眼睛
& V7 U0 w) y' N9 Q' [  L( [看看忙碌的世界
是否依然孤独的转个不停
! p/ T4 V/ d2 v# u+ g. O8 z春风不解风情
吹动少年的心
让昨日脸上的泪痕
; i  \+ Q( ~3 C. ]+ m; l+ p随记忆风干了
抬头寻找天空的翅膀
候鸟出现它的影迹
带来远处的饥荒
无情的战火依然存在的消息
( n7 X4 j2 ?' v玉山白雪飘零
3 l8 y! M! I! _) z- k7 k1 c9 M燃烧少年的心
& g8 j' z" z  z) e# L使真情溶化成音符
% A5 A; B. N4 O; N0 J6 _倾诉遥远的祝福
7 `$ c. p5 l7 |, \5 y* d  q6 h唱出你的热情
# Z* L6 b/ w& H5 l) F0 K% |6 ?; `伸出你的双手
让我拥抱着你的梦
' ?2 m: h/ ^3 G让我拥有你真心的面孔
让我们的笑容
' J+ v, o4 P" Q  F7 m) A充满着青春的骄傲
' ^8 C) h" J+ ?& U为明天献出虔诚的祈祷
5 g. N2 y" Q& z0 h  j7 j+ r3 m谁能不顾自己的家园
: B2 V: m$ F5 O; Q抛开记忆中的童年
谁能忍心看那昨日的忧愁
/ |7 ^& y1 p& {' S带走我们的笑容
青春不解红尘
胭脂沾染了灰
9 r9 D% s- R% Z1 g* _7 q, `8 r让久违不见的泪水
5 `  R4 y/ m$ Q( B; @滋润了你的面容
唱出你的热情
2 M6 W1 f/ n0 w, ~; G4 e4 D' {伸出你的双手
让我拥抱着你的梦
* c" ^! }) v* ]' R1 U+ }让我拥有你真心的面孔
让我们的笑容
充满着青春的骄傲
- h3 c8 @/ t, t! L为明天献出虔诚的祈祷
轻轻敲醒沉睡的心灵
: u8 b( {0 D2 _" A8 ?3 m1 x慢慢张开你的眼睛
看看忙碌的世界
是否依然孤独的转个不停
日出唤醒清晨
' ?2 t/ a/ [& c  p大地光彩重生
( X/ A, Y- @: H( U. {7 K' Q让和风拂出的音响
  F: b9 K/ M5 e9 n' l6 e1 w7 a, V谱成生命的乐章
唱出你的热情
伸出你双手
3 C+ n% Z, o3 K/ D& O' l% _, y让我拥抱着你的梦
/ J( L9 A+ V! k" B让我拥有你真心的面孔
让我们的笑容
充满着青春的骄傲
让我们期待明天会更好
Future will be better
I woke up in the morning and open my eyes,
$ P- u: P2 `. c3 G. ]And see the busy world whether the same as before.
8 G! a0 r# b. E& P" lI cried because the earthquake destroyed our hometown.
I looked at the sky and saw the bird flying from my hometown.
% O$ J  a* X8 U6 L1 N/ H! e, zIt told me the news of the hungry and disaster of Sichuan.
I live in Canada far away; however, I bless my hometown using my songs.
8 B) I2 {% p4 z$ E/ }5 bLet’s sing with burning passions.
Let’s shakes our hands with each other. (Let’s get together to overcome the difficulties)
5 W2 m4 ~/ R  [9 Z" i. ~# M% uLet’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
4 [  Z3 \) K2 f" _Everyone loves their hometown with memory of their childhood.
Nobody wants to see the disaster take away our happiness.
' x4 J% c4 K  @' Y1 l. HWe got together bravely to overcome every difficulties.
Let’s sing with burning passions,
Let’s shakes our hands with each other.
2 d- y6 J7 {  w. bLet’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
Let’s have the same dream
5 x. v# o/ H7 F5 XLet’s sincerely bless people who suffered in this earthquake.
+ B: C# h, \6 \3 ]- A4 s, `& b# \( H# oI woke up in the morning and open my eyes,
2 e8 I6 y; T& c4 y% z) p1 cAnd see the busy world whether the same as before.
I am crying because the news of Sichuan earthquake destroyed my hometown,
1 e$ @5 }) u+ YHowever, I know that the sunrise will come finally.
& T, `" L) H6 c  A5 h8 s; r8 j And the mother earth will also renascence after the disaster.
1 Z# c3 Z" r2 k" p% C; eEverything will pass and have its new life. (Everything will recovery after the disater)
Let’s sing with burning passions.       
# u+ x- ^1 _4 JLet’s shakes our hands with each other.
Let’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
8 E4 Q  Y% _, \2 KLet’s hope future will better.

celina

Please give advice as soon as possible because they need be done before June16.