I am translating for the songs of 枫叶情--重建灾区小学募捐义演

celina

I need help after my second draft.

billzhao

what is it? There are so many friends here who are willing to give you a hand.

寒月

post your draft here, a lot will help

celina

万水千山总是情
词:邓伟雄曲:顾嘉辉
- Q3 o# n# X3 |) K0 ?) g% c3 N莫说青山多障碍
  }* y5 Y& g& p% ^# x) _6 t风也急风也劲
白云过山峰也可传情
9 k4 G' T( s4 _/ t莫说水中多变幻
水也清水也静
4 i0 u9 L) S2 A, x6 l柔情似水爱共永
! @+ H. F2 c2 h+ T6 N# t" G未怕罡风吹散了热爱
万水千山总是情
聚散也有天注定
不怨天不怨命
& [$ {( S# S( T* k* a* }但求有山水共作证
+ B5 n/ K  u6 [  p- [There is love everywhere
( q0 {, P: q5 _$ S! l$ W! f8 b. wOption1
Look at the green mountain; however, you can not know it also can be a obstruction.
! U. C% k' |# @6 l% gThe wind blow rapidly and strong in order to pass the obstruction and meet the beautiful cloud.
Look at the peaceful lake; however, you can not know whether there is danger inside.
% j$ r. Y9 S. _; {" _. p+ kHowever, our love will help us to overcome every difficult to dive and find the treasure.
, t6 u7 \! R) }. V- \Maybe some failure will disappoint us.
5 \% F! ?- k" L0 q/ C2 O8 ~However, there is love everywhere
Our love will help us to overcome every difficulty.
It is unpredictable that whether we can get together or not.
3 Y$ S3 }- w) R1 H2 x* u- vWe do not worry about too much future.
/ H. t0 i3 B7 h' y3 O" {Let’s just enjoy this moment.

celina

阳光总在风雨后
人生路上甜苦和喜忧
愿与你分担所有
2 s( P: t8 D& \7 Q难免曾经跌倒和等候
要勇敢的抬头
谁愿常躲在避风的港口
5 Q6 m) Y, O  P  v2 ?- s' H宁有波涛汹涌的自由
  a8 E0 o6 ^* B; Z/ |3 Q愿是你心中灯塔的守候
7 n7 z  e! ~( N' ^% f8 D9 W& f在迷雾中让你看透
  `+ Y8 p, C  U& Q7 z0 {阳光总在风雨后
乌云上有睛空
5 }* v  R- t) q  _" p) {珍惜所有的感动
每一份希望在你手中
9 ~1 W- p! `2 `1 C8 Z" j/ T2 M) N阳光总在风雨后
! A1 b" w/ d1 J* [% @2 }请相信有彩虹
7 f9 A4 Q% h" m3 j: u0 D  w风风雨雨都接受
我一直会在你的左右
# P! I2 s7 o1 Z) GThere is always sunshine after raining
1 P$ z8 H0 e( N1 U( ]4 cThere are happiness and sadness in life.
5 C! I7 P5 C5 S3 ^0 YI will share with you everything.
2 G9 W, U* W8 d3 U" m4 C- C6 `It is hard to avoid failure and the process of waiting for success.
+ E6 h* {# z. h: O( G* K& a: lWe get together and bravely face them.
. E3 z& @& W. N+ o0 J: kEveryone does not want to have a common life,
We prefer to have a challenge like a small boat travels in the sea.
I am willing to be pharos for you to show the right direction in the fog.
; [2 t* e# m  i2 X4 O1 VThere is always sunshine after raining.
# Q) U. V( d- i* _$ t; A9 M: FThere is sun above the black cloud.
& B, j. M* Y1 b' [$ Z: jPlease cherish every moment you are moved.
% n. |' H* v1 D, x  G6 bTake chance on every hope.
) I. C- w' i; p# ]There is always sunshine after raining.
We can just believe that there is rainbow after raining.
We will bravely accept every situation and deal with them.
8 R% z& c- z# y3 K" J/ |I will always accomplish you in your life.

celina

让世界充满爱

轻轻地捧着你的脸
* i2 m& R) [- e; H/ C为你把眼泪擦干
这颗心永远属于你
告诉我你不再孤单
$ L1 b) n4 D/ |. S$ M" k深深地凝望着你的眼
不需要更多的语言
紧紧地握着你的手
这温暖依旧未改变
9 T4 P& }: E3 l9 i# s我们同欢乐我们同忍受
1 p4 i; i0 ?$ g/ N$ j我们怀着同样的期待
我们同风雨我们共追求
6 m- J5 z# k$ t8 v- l. D我们珍存同一样的爱
无论你我可曾相识
7 y9 B; |- P' ?无论在眼前在天边
真心地为你祝愿
祝愿你事事平安
- P% E. a$ v7 \$ c2 w6 K& l
Let the world full of love
Gently holding your face, I wiped away your tears for you.
' p* A! S; d5 H2 WMy heart always belongs to you; please tell me you do not feel alone anymore.
& l: J( N5 s' S1 |9 T' O" hStaring at your eyes, you have already known my meaning without saying a word.
Tightly holding your hands, the warm of your hands still did not change.
We share our joy with our stand with the same expectations. (?)
  h/ x/ K" ]2 o) \# lWe have been face difficulties together and pursing with the same purpose.
! ~: p5 D5 n0 D% Q& ^We treasure the same love for both you and me.
Whether we know each other or not, whether we have been in the same immediate horizon,
I sincerely wish you are peace .

celina

明天会更好
2 \9 d: ]- f1 t/ M; G% L轻轻敲醒沉睡的心灵
慢慢张开你的眼睛
9 M1 p2 ~+ V1 [% }9 H$ D$ S看看忙碌的世界
  }& v5 R7 E/ S. y7 _! \* ~, N是否依然孤独的转个不停
春风不解风情
$ e* q& s: o4 w  ]1 u吹动少年的心
让昨日脸上的泪痕
随记忆风干了
- _. B) f% J! h  a' C抬头寻找天空的翅膀
: b( e  `$ \+ R& s; {候鸟出现它的影迹
- O3 T  l% K& s! M) U4 o带来远处的饥荒
% W! C% Y& m7 Y* x无情的战火依然存在的消息
% N# c6 x7 D6 _7 @玉山白雪飘零
- `1 B+ l( b# K! i/ \3 M3 @; z8 J6 `燃烧少年的心
使真情溶化成音符
倾诉遥远的祝福
; ]) {% m* d5 Z. f, |唱出你的热情
+ q0 q+ d( w/ _9 Z9 F伸出你的双手
; o0 {% S/ w- p, V, ^7 R9 K让我拥抱着你的梦
4 G& X( ^+ V% Q让我拥有你真心的面孔
& \: x% B8 }  d. f2 [- v" L) h让我们的笑容
充满着青春的骄傲
; U1 e* L% E& A& u$ F+ k! J/ H为明天献出虔诚的祈祷
谁能不顾自己的家园
. |4 Z1 V2 p! ?8 V7 c0 m抛开记忆中的童年
) @( u* G& U/ R9 M4 {谁能忍心看那昨日的忧愁
) f% l6 f. z( p4 p% l/ x, L带走我们的笑容
" c6 q/ p8 f" |0 D青春不解红尘
  W% L+ Q( I" v; _2 A* h, i# p胭脂沾染了灰
" D& Q! A$ S% Q$ g+ b' ?, @让久违不见的泪水
) ?- H5 j5 k! L6 N- `1 Z滋润了你的面容
唱出你的热情
( U6 u+ [0 f2 V: s! A伸出你的双手
5 m+ S' c2 h- l8 S3 B3 d( s让我拥抱着你的梦
4 Q* K) }  w% j* O# ^1 r让我拥有你真心的面孔
让我们的笑容
充满着青春的骄傲
+ A% V- I- D" E8 t' p, s6 }' Z6 o为明天献出虔诚的祈祷
3 [9 g/ L) i$ H/ p* i轻轻敲醒沉睡的心灵
, l3 |6 }1 _  O" o. z慢慢张开你的眼睛
# ^5 J- ~& {6 x看看忙碌的世界
是否依然孤独的转个不停
4 x. X; |9 m% R! u( @日出唤醒清晨
  {; R1 E' w* q3 V大地光彩重生
; {" I7 g1 T2 @3 b& v0 K! d让和风拂出的音响
8 @1 N3 c. M# N谱成生命的乐章
4 N* s$ `( ]0 {6 I' f* Q, c9 @. ]唱出你的热情
伸出你双手
让我拥抱着你的梦
让我拥有你真心的面孔
* x6 q0 }- P' I1 {* }让我们的笑容
充满着青春的骄傲
8 j6 \+ e, |% o) a让我们期待明天会更好
) S/ t! Z: f' Z. ]3 k% ]  ~0 b7 xFuture will be better
" ?' M" b4 _) [, }) H; lI woke up in the morning and open my eyes,
And see the busy world whether the same as before.
! r; C9 l, M! C/ {2 u$ L# {8 lI cried because the earthquake destroyed our hometown.
& j. D( B! r2 D* ?% V- q; QI looked at the sky and saw the bird flying from my hometown.
It told me the news of the hungry and disaster of Sichuan.
! x6 \  m( \% \4 XI live in Canada far away; however, I bless my hometown using my songs.
- h+ [( m3 u) tLet’s sing with burning passions.
Let’s shakes our hands with each other. (Let’s get together to overcome the difficulties)
( |9 ~+ d. ^3 W+ P7 }; |$ QLet’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
6 y+ ~# ~5 G4 d/ }: a# V; SEveryone loves their hometown with memory of their childhood.
Nobody wants to see the disaster take away our happiness.
3 c3 w2 n; c" ^" T' K; O2 g- hWe got together bravely to overcome every difficulties.
Let’s sing with burning passions,
, o7 {8 Q% n' vLet’s shakes our hands with each other.
Let’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
" u# M4 [$ J4 LLet’s have the same dream
Let’s sincerely bless people who suffered in this earthquake.
I woke up in the morning and open my eyes,
And see the busy world whether the same as before.
% J9 s5 I: }. H- j4 iI am crying because the news of Sichuan earthquake destroyed my hometown,
2 t9 x  q- r# n6 ?However, I know that the sunrise will come finally.
And the mother earth will also renascence after the disaster.
) x8 D( c0 T0 p: KEverything will pass and have its new life. (Everything will recovery after the disater)
6 o+ \) P# W: L2 b$ NLet’s sing with burning passions.       
$ h; m6 _4 q6 U6 T* P' CLet’s shakes our hands with each other.
Let’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
Let’s hope future will better.

celina

Please give advice as soon as possible because they need be done before June16.