I am translating for the songs of 枫叶情--重建灾区小学募捐义演

celina

I need help after my second draft.

billzhao

what is it? There are so many friends here who are willing to give you a hand.

寒月

post your draft here, a lot will help

celina

万水千山总是情
6 J! u0 i* Y$ v% T: f# \" l! C, C词:邓伟雄曲:顾嘉辉
7 u2 {8 T  V" Z9 b5 t莫说青山多障碍
$ D8 A4 p7 c( m1 i' o+ O$ G+ i6 e风也急风也劲
白云过山峰也可传情
3 K9 K7 i( A2 w3 r( X莫说水中多变幻
水也清水也静
0 i8 J; H/ R; K# N柔情似水爱共永
3 y# m9 Q" P& {/ T$ x7 o未怕罡风吹散了热爱
万水千山总是情
聚散也有天注定
2 G, w- T; O+ j4 e不怨天不怨命
但求有山水共作证
There is love everywhere
Option1
3 m% H5 g9 p1 E% y1 z+ F: B( sLook at the green mountain; however, you can not know it also can be a obstruction.
The wind blow rapidly and strong in order to pass the obstruction and meet the beautiful cloud.
1 x& O4 I& H! _  u; G/ gLook at the peaceful lake; however, you can not know whether there is danger inside.
" P* @6 [3 {; F  g  e, a: P" ?However, our love will help us to overcome every difficult to dive and find the treasure.
) p% }* J$ G6 ~7 JMaybe some failure will disappoint us.
However, there is love everywhere
Our love will help us to overcome every difficulty.
6 T* }1 V& ?. C' o" oIt is unpredictable that whether we can get together or not.
' P) C5 m& ^( p, O& c6 P: M, NWe do not worry about too much future.
" }  k* F2 g) S1 g7 lLet’s just enjoy this moment.

celina

阳光总在风雨后
人生路上甜苦和喜忧
: B! L% k; G/ j愿与你分担所有
难免曾经跌倒和等候
要勇敢的抬头
谁愿常躲在避风的港口
宁有波涛汹涌的自由
2 b- |1 R3 c# p1 F愿是你心中灯塔的守候
在迷雾中让你看透
阳光总在风雨后
: ^' u0 v# d, ?9 I乌云上有睛空
$ K" y5 X$ {' ]8 c3 V" u4 ]珍惜所有的感动
每一份希望在你手中
/ T4 E/ p) f- j; W% l& I4 l& J阳光总在风雨后
请相信有彩虹
: ?+ r8 L$ U9 ?" h$ P; [2 M风风雨雨都接受
我一直会在你的左右
There is always sunshine after raining
" `) ?+ t* S, R) U/ wThere are happiness and sadness in life.
I will share with you everything.
It is hard to avoid failure and the process of waiting for success.
! F" r9 g* o+ R% pWe get together and bravely face them.
3 V) ~, F5 t/ E9 fEveryone does not want to have a common life,
; z! C5 ]9 s/ I; b- `6 TWe prefer to have a challenge like a small boat travels in the sea.
; n- ^8 _$ a% R/ YI am willing to be pharos for you to show the right direction in the fog.
There is always sunshine after raining.
There is sun above the black cloud.
6 ^' A0 O. s2 y% B: p# F5 H3 H+ S; RPlease cherish every moment you are moved.
Take chance on every hope.
9 P% S6 }- d/ UThere is always sunshine after raining.
We can just believe that there is rainbow after raining.
) {% R; Z, J# Z/ }( JWe will bravely accept every situation and deal with them.
I will always accomplish you in your life.

celina

让世界充满爱
) h9 n; f  {" `; U& p. m
轻轻地捧着你的脸
3 a& v3 D2 _. X3 R0 \/ i为你把眼泪擦干
这颗心永远属于你
# d7 T  R6 Z# u, _9 n告诉我你不再孤单
深深地凝望着你的眼
不需要更多的语言
紧紧地握着你的手
这温暖依旧未改变
我们同欢乐我们同忍受
我们怀着同样的期待
. E8 U) M' e, Z2 b$ U  Z' }我们同风雨我们共追求
我们珍存同一样的爱
4 `& J- `8 q. A无论你我可曾相识
无论在眼前在天边
4 \0 B& [/ U1 ^( h- [& k6 m5 k真心地为你祝愿
! D: M9 Z$ {8 S" y* Y4 w祝愿你事事平安
. W6 u2 g8 B& B( h# M+ w" U
8 z# ~4 l' r8 y, ULet the world full of love
5 @$ D, |4 n# N; C' v, KGently holding your face, I wiped away your tears for you.
! O4 V$ a4 U4 w6 k3 w2 \  {My heart always belongs to you; please tell me you do not feel alone anymore.
, q  o# X% W5 u) n! u4 u- L! B% F/ U1 CStaring at your eyes, you have already known my meaning without saying a word.
; ~& e/ P7 F' J/ i( jTightly holding your hands, the warm of your hands still did not change.
4 d$ I8 z& {: i2 }' o  j; t8 k$ Y; EWe share our joy with our stand with the same expectations. (?)
We have been face difficulties together and pursing with the same purpose.
' W; G1 S! O2 IWe treasure the same love for both you and me.
5 H+ V1 n8 Z8 q) Q# H8 G1 SWhether we know each other or not, whether we have been in the same immediate horizon,
I sincerely wish you are peace .

celina

明天会更好
轻轻敲醒沉睡的心灵
慢慢张开你的眼睛
2 ~6 k: b( n* R7 ?9 |看看忙碌的世界
8 r6 {+ J* k7 ?, w' G/ I是否依然孤独的转个不停
' D! R. ^" O! I- T, l  O春风不解风情
  ^  }, b" l3 z0 H* Z# X$ H% b吹动少年的心
, T, ^& B& L/ l让昨日脸上的泪痕
3 w9 n+ u2 v4 m9 T" d: K/ U6 K随记忆风干了
, O$ c% B0 K/ D- C7 y* ?* l+ \, {3 S2 y抬头寻找天空的翅膀
, ^) Z2 d& i* a" W3 U候鸟出现它的影迹
) n( r3 }" t2 B7 k  m! ?7 ?带来远处的饥荒
无情的战火依然存在的消息
+ J5 x3 a- y, K$ x玉山白雪飘零
燃烧少年的心
使真情溶化成音符
% M' o3 ]  |- Q' h! K倾诉遥远的祝福
唱出你的热情
伸出你的双手
让我拥抱着你的梦
让我拥有你真心的面孔
& O0 ~+ K1 Q: x9 U+ l. Q让我们的笑容
. s- o5 j+ q2 u, c充满着青春的骄傲
为明天献出虔诚的祈祷
/ s0 j7 K/ P9 j* w6 @3 i% k, J谁能不顾自己的家园
抛开记忆中的童年
8 P6 k/ r; P. j. F: L5 r# _谁能忍心看那昨日的忧愁
+ r: l! y- _. p8 T带走我们的笑容
, t& @: A  n/ B  ~' o( s3 O0 \青春不解红尘
胭脂沾染了灰
. l* Y+ C- F: x5 T* A让久违不见的泪水
滋润了你的面容
9 l$ ?5 Q. A1 J唱出你的热情
6 z3 ]& c) E, h9 e3 J5 @伸出你的双手
让我拥抱着你的梦
4 S4 m% j2 b6 [$ u让我拥有你真心的面孔
1 v$ N% x4 h& @. A1 M+ L+ v让我们的笑容
充满着青春的骄傲
, L+ V' V- t* f) O, C0 U+ O为明天献出虔诚的祈祷
# F, e# @& ?+ Y: O轻轻敲醒沉睡的心灵
慢慢张开你的眼睛
看看忙碌的世界
是否依然孤独的转个不停
日出唤醒清晨
大地光彩重生
让和风拂出的音响
. {8 p) D7 i, X" i) P1 N- |谱成生命的乐章
, E) A' U% y2 d- d+ u- \" P4 A7 R& y- E唱出你的热情
8 O- I5 m( P  I. R7 C伸出你双手
让我拥抱着你的梦
( a: h9 n6 [1 b  ~  H, A让我拥有你真心的面孔
让我们的笑容
充满着青春的骄傲
让我们期待明天会更好
Future will be better
! `  f' C* T" ~I woke up in the morning and open my eyes,
And see the busy world whether the same as before.
" V3 a+ G$ h4 E: C" s) |2 YI cried because the earthquake destroyed our hometown.
! O! s- R* Y- r" ~I looked at the sky and saw the bird flying from my hometown.
It told me the news of the hungry and disaster of Sichuan.
/ c& i3 w6 ?, y0 h9 y" D. @I live in Canada far away; however, I bless my hometown using my songs.
1 E5 M( M9 }8 w  F% {" o% TLet’s sing with burning passions.
Let’s shakes our hands with each other. (Let’s get together to overcome the difficulties)
8 f/ `- N" d4 `Let’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
Everyone loves their hometown with memory of their childhood.
& c0 ^1 H$ D8 H  DNobody wants to see the disaster take away our happiness.
! C- E9 Y' W# qWe got together bravely to overcome every difficulties.
Let’s sing with burning passions,
Let’s shakes our hands with each other.
1 ?2 ]+ w2 `( b6 I8 C' \* ELet’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
3 E2 D- t$ ^, b) u- DLet’s have the same dream
  V& |& H3 Z# k7 KLet’s sincerely bless people who suffered in this earthquake.
! T4 j! x% M. ~! U9 KI woke up in the morning and open my eyes,
' Q* H) R% `7 r; c4 W; S+ m. VAnd see the busy world whether the same as before.
  K$ D% h) ?1 Y/ W: \I am crying because the news of Sichuan earthquake destroyed my hometown,
However, I know that the sunrise will come finally.
And the mother earth will also renascence after the disaster.
$ f1 Q( ]! O" U& c. ]- Z( ?5 yEverything will pass and have its new life. (Everything will recovery after the disater)
" G4 a8 H& M+ E* lLet’s sing with burning passions.       
; O% ?+ [& L4 S/ H. l4 RLet’s shakes our hands with each other.
Let’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
( e6 h# ~3 n# J! {  N3 u; aLet’s hope future will better.

celina

Please give advice as soon as possible because they need be done before June16.