I am translating for the songs of 枫叶情--重建灾区小学募捐义演

celina

I need help after my second draft.

billzhao

what is it? There are so many friends here who are willing to give you a hand.

寒月

post your draft here, a lot will help

celina

万水千山总是情
" t( e1 N" R, O  t1 ^5 y4 z词:邓伟雄曲:顾嘉辉
2 O# K% _7 }8 H8 Y6 F7 ~- D- ~! ~" E莫说青山多障碍
风也急风也劲
5 N- B% G$ n+ m) w. ^2 ^$ x5 h) i6 _白云过山峰也可传情
莫说水中多变幻
+ G7 w) L% {% l+ p& j5 z% V3 y6 ~水也清水也静
' x1 Z' [5 z# T柔情似水爱共永
4 u* t+ Z! N% C) ?# J( I未怕罡风吹散了热爱
4 F6 Z2 g# {7 {& x- G: P+ I. H  X万水千山总是情
聚散也有天注定
不怨天不怨命
/ K1 T, T2 a9 g9 B但求有山水共作证
" r$ D( l* \8 y3 S0 b* {There is love everywhere
Option1
; Y1 E3 n$ L3 Y+ T' s) yLook at the green mountain; however, you can not know it also can be a obstruction.
The wind blow rapidly and strong in order to pass the obstruction and meet the beautiful cloud.
. P: A( T# E: H; dLook at the peaceful lake; however, you can not know whether there is danger inside.
However, our love will help us to overcome every difficult to dive and find the treasure.
( y  k: i. l9 j' X2 D; zMaybe some failure will disappoint us.
4 K4 z( T- h( Q4 ^5 F& z! \; DHowever, there is love everywhere
" @) \6 I! l; \' h: |Our love will help us to overcome every difficulty.
It is unpredictable that whether we can get together or not.
! m# E; T5 v; {2 U/ m: h) x0 k, sWe do not worry about too much future.
Let’s just enjoy this moment.

celina

阳光总在风雨后
# V8 j7 H3 i, C4 n. d  G8 G9 y人生路上甜苦和喜忧
/ ^% D* L* W5 ?# U* R% ~, }愿与你分担所有
难免曾经跌倒和等候
要勇敢的抬头
, g# s' k3 B% _$ P# ]4 s# ]谁愿常躲在避风的港口
宁有波涛汹涌的自由
愿是你心中灯塔的守候
0 u  W9 Q. ~! `% M- x/ r( d在迷雾中让你看透
/ N( W/ \& _3 P- E7 @5 _阳光总在风雨后
乌云上有睛空
珍惜所有的感动
每一份希望在你手中
阳光总在风雨后
" z9 }: p# s2 l( X请相信有彩虹
风风雨雨都接受
我一直会在你的左右
$ y6 H* j% V# @There is always sunshine after raining
3 Y- b: H& X) W# eThere are happiness and sadness in life.
+ e3 ^: s+ t/ u/ w  v: Y! G# uI will share with you everything.
/ Y" S9 @! Q" N) {7 s" BIt is hard to avoid failure and the process of waiting for success.
We get together and bravely face them.
Everyone does not want to have a common life,
* F, C  @0 b; u$ X' cWe prefer to have a challenge like a small boat travels in the sea.
I am willing to be pharos for you to show the right direction in the fog.
There is always sunshine after raining.
* c2 c5 y" u1 j% p- TThere is sun above the black cloud.
Please cherish every moment you are moved.
+ D6 @! v3 r! ^4 d4 iTake chance on every hope.
, q# M" @, b: p( f/ RThere is always sunshine after raining.
We can just believe that there is rainbow after raining.
8 P3 T5 Z1 K  _- LWe will bravely accept every situation and deal with them.
2 h3 x1 m* q! ?+ q. o) r& Q& FI will always accomplish you in your life.

celina

让世界充满爱
7 H, G" S" `; v5 ~& b5 C
轻轻地捧着你的脸
为你把眼泪擦干
这颗心永远属于你
8 E. P3 p7 W- V# B  I7 p告诉我你不再孤单
深深地凝望着你的眼
不需要更多的语言
紧紧地握着你的手
2 B+ x# G+ u) j; b这温暖依旧未改变
, n9 I" l/ Y) L% [$ S$ ^8 g我们同欢乐我们同忍受
# v$ E# Z/ z7 k+ w$ ^' ^我们怀着同样的期待
# J/ g5 x3 j; A4 k* b我们同风雨我们共追求
我们珍存同一样的爱
无论你我可曾相识
无论在眼前在天边
真心地为你祝愿
祝愿你事事平安
( l7 s5 a* h0 b& j: O
3 n) [0 T9 J0 M8 [) y: \Let the world full of love
Gently holding your face, I wiped away your tears for you.
My heart always belongs to you; please tell me you do not feel alone anymore.
. n9 G7 H7 L$ }- vStaring at your eyes, you have already known my meaning without saying a word.
Tightly holding your hands, the warm of your hands still did not change.
We share our joy with our stand with the same expectations. (?)
3 |+ D. t5 }3 W0 r+ i- T" k# `( }We have been face difficulties together and pursing with the same purpose.
% U- K, I. j6 ?" @: HWe treasure the same love for both you and me.
Whether we know each other or not, whether we have been in the same immediate horizon,
1 ~, c4 O! z6 V3 L' Z2 _/ o! YI sincerely wish you are peace .

celina

明天会更好
- k) h( h$ r6 S- l轻轻敲醒沉睡的心灵
慢慢张开你的眼睛
看看忙碌的世界
" D2 L  o: W4 ]- G4 W8 Q+ x是否依然孤独的转个不停
春风不解风情
吹动少年的心
& V& \7 l, T* @% |9 w1 U4 j2 o& S让昨日脸上的泪痕
随记忆风干了
抬头寻找天空的翅膀
( Q9 P- t- E3 s候鸟出现它的影迹
" H3 {# M1 U% O5 w* T' l带来远处的饥荒
无情的战火依然存在的消息
" d$ q; J) Q& [0 _, X: n玉山白雪飘零
燃烧少年的心
使真情溶化成音符
! b9 m5 `% {) o倾诉遥远的祝福
4 w6 E* P% b8 e4 \* F: v; _0 l唱出你的热情
伸出你的双手
& D1 N3 ^0 I& X% z- N让我拥抱着你的梦
让我拥有你真心的面孔
让我们的笑容
" q: Z3 l0 D# Z* Q1 Y) [充满着青春的骄傲
为明天献出虔诚的祈祷
谁能不顾自己的家园
抛开记忆中的童年
" ?5 @# F" u6 F1 q' y) p+ @谁能忍心看那昨日的忧愁
2 ~. ?$ k6 n( U带走我们的笑容
( w" p6 e' x; g8 _, X青春不解红尘
胭脂沾染了灰
  E2 p6 X; Z6 n& m让久违不见的泪水
. p- X, D  y/ G. m3 K/ J3 A滋润了你的面容
9 _. G% c; Q& S唱出你的热情
6 _3 S( A& c/ V& _7 E伸出你的双手
  k- _, g, ^/ l" s( c7 d让我拥抱着你的梦
让我拥有你真心的面孔
让我们的笑容
' [1 s; u8 I( e! @充满着青春的骄傲
9 v. T  J! B3 Q; L2 _" J+ D) e5 ^为明天献出虔诚的祈祷
/ r- x7 h! t# C6 [' R1 z轻轻敲醒沉睡的心灵
慢慢张开你的眼睛
看看忙碌的世界
1 b2 U+ B' ^; r  D+ d6 n是否依然孤独的转个不停
日出唤醒清晨
大地光彩重生
; f$ D7 ?  g; v3 ^' Q7 }+ [0 Z& R让和风拂出的音响
谱成生命的乐章
* o+ }5 a% s3 }( }# q唱出你的热情
伸出你双手
让我拥抱着你的梦
: Q* l4 ^+ E7 W) L( ~: Y2 s' }/ [, v让我拥有你真心的面孔
4 I- m- W& z9 e1 M" {& R: n让我们的笑容
充满着青春的骄傲
. j& \7 J2 Y& p5 A3 J& s  F3 w+ O让我们期待明天会更好
8 V# c4 g* o: b; y) f! gFuture will be better
I woke up in the morning and open my eyes,
. ?. p0 @, g3 |! hAnd see the busy world whether the same as before.
: p$ Q$ o- u3 G& ~- K8 z$ I! m/ YI cried because the earthquake destroyed our hometown.
I looked at the sky and saw the bird flying from my hometown.
It told me the news of the hungry and disaster of Sichuan.
I live in Canada far away; however, I bless my hometown using my songs.
Let’s sing with burning passions.
Let’s shakes our hands with each other. (Let’s get together to overcome the difficulties)
3 z  T# Z4 o& N5 ~1 {- L0 ]Let’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
Everyone loves their hometown with memory of their childhood.
! h; E! _9 i! b8 J& D. ENobody wants to see the disaster take away our happiness.
We got together bravely to overcome every difficulties.
+ [# {* F3 F& E& A& ]5 T! ^' Y, KLet’s sing with burning passions,
9 _: J: X% |8 g4 LLet’s shakes our hands with each other.
Let’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
Let’s have the same dream
Let’s sincerely bless people who suffered in this earthquake.
9 @2 [, u# z" u2 l+ b4 ?9 F$ X, uI woke up in the morning and open my eyes,
6 T0 G* J' k4 U4 eAnd see the busy world whether the same as before.
, ?- ?0 ]* C/ i% }  N  N' `I am crying because the news of Sichuan earthquake destroyed my hometown,
  B  P- }  r- [" NHowever, I know that the sunrise will come finally.
And the mother earth will also renascence after the disaster.
' {$ s/ p* z& C  nEverything will pass and have its new life. (Everything will recovery after the disater)
- P, v  O* d* y2 L! }0 S1 ^Let’s sing with burning passions.       
Let’s shakes our hands with each other.
. D6 k7 g1 Q) i( U* Q5 Z5 JLet’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
Let’s hope future will better.

celina

Please give advice as soon as possible because they need be done before June16.