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1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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' A% ]; _; j, v9 @+ L5 V" M( H, M 改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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, S9 E& G1 N+ G4 i# o) o 改进: Suppose you work in a big factory. - i F" V* h+ x9 b; u2 \0 @
- u; E% T0 j* s( P 3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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0 }2 J9 G" f( |" a9 S! x 改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck. 8 ~ I! N$ ^( w, R% e
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5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life. " I& Y8 X! L& t. J2 t
* ^9 r& o+ k* t) x7 F0 b; s 6. Their brain is still very young.
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" g! U2 h1 g& d( i) [9 G 改进: They are still immature.
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1 X8 g+ A' m1 \! w, f 7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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& t* Y$ B2 l8 W% q* Y& o- m/ o 改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong. ( M n2 }: J* [% d/ Y( p
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改进: They cannot tell right from wrong. ; E( `3 N; u7 R4 W& b7 m- F$ |# g
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9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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+ M4 G; x+ a7 h7 c J 改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time. $ R' L) `5 c {7 U1 }) |- K4 l" P) M# a
9 Q1 |0 ~& u* b1 _1 q 10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life. # d# l" T8 ]$ V. `$ N( S
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改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it. 8 r; y! M/ {, J0 C+ L
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11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development. / f; a& Y1 i, Q
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改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money. 1 e* V* K b3 _ {( g3 k5 p, Y
6 l; u; e: w, _+ C; g$ [5 Z2 D4 P 改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money. 9 B# k2 R; R Y6 ^) p
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13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life. ; |' y% b/ n% A; @, F, V" u! X
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改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money. - A$ z. L6 A" n$ u7 R/ T, j
6 q6 x8 f# ]3 U" @2 J1 L 改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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9 _0 a! r) X& W! s 15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products. 5 {" t- _" b2 n" D; ^+ t9 }
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16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills. ; x4 x" ? y0 ]) w+ m
9 y$ u p; C- D( p$ V* g; c 改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills. 6 X, ] z; U2 d$ g4 G
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17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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1 r6 n0 A7 b6 {# l 18. This knowledge will become a part of your body. % F; d) I* r- ~0 v4 h7 ~
9 a# t0 f7 |0 A& _' X 改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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19. They cannot think clearly. ) O" y1 W3 V5 L* e' {5 ?/ h# t
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9 T2 f$ b/ I: J! k1 c& H 20. Money can improve their living standard. ( t4 d2 j. i; t# `/ L: @
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改进: Money can improve their life. 4 G1 U3 V# y* _9 W# K
- O0 H, u* z) T: c; S4 Y 21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money. ; z+ e, L6 ^) Q* ~( E: \
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改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life. + p3 N& L+ Z( e. A) ?1 V9 a- ?
6 S; q: `$ p/ E 改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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! r+ S7 V! _( J5 M. N 23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later. , q: y8 {% _; f6 I/ f- C5 m( Q
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改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes. ' _; q) N8 ]( s" a5 o; P4 J
9 l4 `9 H: e- {) L 25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others. 5 ?9 ^0 v; o; A, I
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改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others. : }$ X9 z+ k g. ^. w! ?8 S7 _
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26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing. ) b2 \( O4 l! r. U
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改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal. 5 G8 d+ X$ \- _$ K1 t
; [) p& k/ ~1 h7 v! b 27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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改进: Cigarettes can help you relax. 0 I/ j3 S, l) S0 b0 g
/ ^% Z) W( y! Q( n 28. What's about nonsmokers?
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改进: What about nonsmokers?
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$ h: s+ o$ U D. o) E3 O; q& y" T 29. Why not to be a non-smoker? 5 m* v$ u' g. g0 ]/ z+ c
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改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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7 f$ z) D; n4 F! X% w* E& X 30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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, D* o$ r5 ]/ f& G9 A; j. m 改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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9 _5 Y7 J) x2 E0 i/ G. Z$ B4 [" b 31. I am not good at maths, but English + l7 X- F4 |* Z: k
# \" F3 r. [4 m 改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English. 7 j: N" ]+ {8 i- W9 @0 Z$ H
- _9 R& W! J0 D+ W8 O 32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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34. I agree the latter idea.
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6 U7 l% T; h: i. i 改进: I agree with the latter idea.
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+ A9 f6 R. Y* ^ 35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo. 1 c, S: U. e8 \: O' A* d4 \
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36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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3 ^( Z+ [$ z4 I) z 改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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+ Q' P5 _% p3 ?7 [% f5 F5 {: f% ~ 37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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. M* Y b3 A7 t4 ? 改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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4 e, X- c" h$ R1 r( K' I 39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life. ) b4 R' Z: w8 p8 u( U; ?
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40. Each form of having friends has its advantages ' ^% v v. S% R8 y- Y9 P: f
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改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages. , V. B M$ Z) \1 b$ N: I: _
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41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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, f' f$ o/ M9 H7 Q- |/ n 42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor. 3 u8 b. l8 Q- u
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改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor. * D" {* q# f) ~- i5 v0 e! v
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43. They will learn the bad habits. 7 I J# {' n8 V$ f$ _1 V
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改进: They will develop bad habits. ! [# ^0 T, c: `" I# l! k* l
7 l W3 V: A+ w8 e 44. In this continued process, people make progress. # Y6 H! v5 ^# U: b$ u" }
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改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary. % C6 M1 S! }/ _$ ~) N
8 O6 }0 c8 _6 V" d& {. F 改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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4 b& s! I3 y' U# \! m; M% T: i 改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings. 7 Y4 y0 j2 M5 a+ K/ \# {
. L3 m [$ @$ r9 P! q2 z: n 47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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& W/ P6 b8 S/ M% |: F: v4 A& o+ E 改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing. 9 V+ B( ?4 X+ F" G. ^5 N/ d
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1 a& J2 q% {1 B4 a 49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost. ) L5 ~$ Y+ @5 w' |/ G i* F
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改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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0 d+ V+ Z# |: @8 B8 ?/ d8 ^ 50. I felt alone. ; P0 f& F: z8 r; g' c5 S2 y1 w
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