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  1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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  改进:Artists' work upgrades our civilization. % G3 [" L9 X3 T5 F) F

% l2 W. o$ Y. T  2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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  改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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5 M* z! u, w$ G( C3 I  3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job. 1 b" K9 H+ x9 d; M! {

3 {+ H: L: r  C+ C6 A8 q9 ^1 N# {  ~  改进:You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career. 5 B. b# H# j% c, q

  o5 @" m9 ]( n1 a, u  4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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! q" l- j/ o& `% w  改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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( r: C  Z% E3 ^# f; d0 g# C' A  5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level. ' D' Z9 ]0 ?, i1 s4 C

$ e, A, R( \7 \7 G+ S0 d  改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life. ( u( T$ K! b+ {& l5 L3 ^
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  6. Their brain is still very young.
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  改进: They are still immature. : L/ ]: E  p  ~
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  7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things. ; _$ ^9 |4 Z& e3 ~2 V
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  改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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/ E5 _1 c6 [) z" d  8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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: ?& S: R2 m, T$ d  改进: They cannot tell right from wrong. % u2 Y# \1 B% K; B0 n
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  9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time. : D7 n. D0 D  K! q- ^
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  改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time. 9 N! S4 U4 z4 P) E4 z
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  10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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  改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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  11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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  改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development. 7 K5 Y2 W" i( q3 b( T, {  X2 z

1 s  T& Z! Z1 D) h" ?  12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money. + [0 Q9 _! b% U! |

2 X- f% c: m+ R) z6 W& I  改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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3 b, V1 B9 \3 J" [" i) u+ }5 r  13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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  改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one. * b8 C( i' }# x

7 n* K# [& Y9 D. C' I/ K  14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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  改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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9 p; k: {! d8 F# _& A8 c  15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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  改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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  16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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  改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills. 0 S3 V+ }4 |' a$ Q4 l* |

) ?0 \) U+ l( |- f5 W  17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians. 6 r3 C3 m2 {% W6 b- n% Z! n; ]
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  改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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9 _, T+ K& y0 S9 h& r8 k% v0 F) l  18. This knowledge will become a part of your body. 2 q- n5 i% M9 ~  t, q- z% a% \7 E
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  改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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  19. They cannot think clearly. " l2 ~4 l7 A( @

4 z" a2 l* G. j  改进: They cannot think straight. 4 y% _- O, \) W/ R, [
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  20. Money can improve their living standard. 9 i8 r3 B8 U$ j" C& j: S+ g
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  改进: Money can improve their life.
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  21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money. ( _3 L, g# x+ p3 z

5 C5 Y& Q" r% l7 J  改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money. * Q. a! J8 F7 p) k3 a+ @
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  22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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( B/ M" z  r, G, G$ _! w  改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life. # G- P* o( g2 R( t
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  23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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# L* x5 _" O- M4 M, k2 a5 U3 m  改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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% B, H* O( b& L' `6 o  24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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8 P$ y1 \! u4 j2 w+ _  改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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( S4 h! U9 [" q8 X  25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others. , m* a1 G; k; x( w) d2 E

5 C  K8 k0 A' F# X  改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
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  26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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  改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal. % `9 X4 Y4 r( Y$ P* @

# s6 w) F4 t, J( b4 m4 z  27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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/ T& L) f6 o) J  \  改进: Cigarettes can help you relax. - Y5 J$ r2 s) O6 P* O. ~# e7 ]. E

9 z7 k" [, `- B: c7 K+ `* v  28. What's about nonsmokers?
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- _4 E( X8 S# Q  29. Why not to be a non-smoker? 8 @  r5 b1 _5 L6 V' y( O; x
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  改进: Why not be a non-smoker? , Z: F5 J4 I8 e6 M# ~  i/ V
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  30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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  改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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3 l( M" z8 L2 p  F) H  31. I am not good at maths, but English * H9 T# q# t: {
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  改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English. - d& h1 v* ?, S$ x8 h7 n. Z! g2 ^

% k* H8 @8 ~. n1 P, ^1 \  32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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  改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time? 2 q# u* g+ I% a& M4 }& X

. O# M0 ?# g( v  33.It is children who clear about their interests. * |0 U; C. u) i- }' h7 P

2 B1 n9 z- l- u7 @  改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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7 d$ [1 a6 k- J; W) D1 c7 P% B  34. I agree the latter idea.
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  35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo. " {7 `0 q) W% }! ?4 n

8 x: m" |; Z2 [. W  改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo. 9 t4 q* L" X7 o' ^& ]+ N
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  36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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  改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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  37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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2 i; z) f" r+ g) f  38. No one knows all the things.
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0 _% A- E9 O4 Q  o! G) Y! l7 H  39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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  改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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  40. Each form of having friends has its advantages 5 Z$ M& m/ k! j6 N, T4 c% }0 ^

0 F3 f* g  }; Y  d* e  改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages. + w% |, t8 V2 E0 z0 e9 J  s
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  41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up. 5 \2 [- s; y$ S6 F8 |' d8 s4 F
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  改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply & T# E, d4 t* R. b" K; p8 H6 ~
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  42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor. 3 V7 `: z1 X' b, J4 C! S8 S

5 M. O/ x8 n' U* `  改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor. 6 H% n7 e3 k9 |
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  43. They will learn the bad habits.
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, X) u3 z  M& q* W! R$ ~, n  改进: They will develop bad habits.
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  44. In this continued process, people make progress. 7 {8 K; p+ x. `# t. F6 i: S3 F
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  改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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  45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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. T3 C* Q4 m5 ?, {  改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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  46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency. 5 W$ N8 t& M1 G4 l' U8 N8 }. K" {

# s- b) w. b+ d# E% f  改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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8 [5 \2 T& d2 K  x5 D7 Z' F  改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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  48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing. . s* T4 x7 a. U: M

- U+ O) i4 v: @, E% E  改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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  49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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  改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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) {- c3 a: g$ _* R% g1 \! r  50. I felt alone.
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  改进: I felt lonely.
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发表于 2005-2-24 08:39 | 显示全部楼层
wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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Thanks
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发表于 2005-2-24 09:08 | 显示全部楼层

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 楼主| 发表于 2005-2-26 07:02 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
平时的积累,呵呵!
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发表于 2005-2-26 14:03 | 显示全部楼层

顶!

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发表于 2005-3-1 08:25 | 显示全部楼层

很好。

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。
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发表于 2005-3-1 08:37 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
是现状的意思
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发表于 2005-4-9 18:26 | 显示全部楼层
:lol::lol::lol:
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发表于 2005-4-9 20:42 | 显示全部楼层
Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵
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发表于 2005-4-9 21:09 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
有些改进似乎意思有些改变...
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发表于 2005-8-24 02:47 | 显示全部楼层
好哦.xiexie
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发表于 2005-8-24 19:48 | 显示全部楼层
thanks
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发表于 2005-8-24 21:11 | 显示全部楼层
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