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  1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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" D) @  L0 S' q* G; F3 ]7 x  改进:Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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5 L3 G& P  R: i  N- t8 q  2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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& S' x( ~* U1 U: C7 S9 ]3 t. X0 K  改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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; @- Q0 s5 Y+ j1 `6 _5 V  3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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  改进:You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career. 8 U& e9 j: m4 v
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  4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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  改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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  5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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. V( ^, A( f4 U6 L* k- s& f  改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life. $ J) p% U8 K" u9 C! w( B5 Z

) c) i8 a3 u' N  6. Their brain is still very young. ; K2 x$ [$ e! |) Y  S+ X0 `# m
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  改进: They are still immature. ! S- _% `8 f/ o0 C* ~) s
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  7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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  改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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, q% A! [! Y" |$ K  8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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3 X' M4 ^* K( n  改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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8 R- p, y' N  x6 G# f  9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time. 0 q9 Z7 M" X: K( V

0 u3 p  h6 D* Q! k6 G  改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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  10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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  改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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  11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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: {% l; Y6 Z4 }  改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development. 9 ~) l& d* }7 }: m7 A5 N
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  12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money. & i. w9 M8 e$ U; @7 Y
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  改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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8 p. {5 b, i( `8 @0 o! r  13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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  改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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  14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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/ x/ a. b1 l9 V  15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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5 W' O- j# b1 u1 M* U3 ^  改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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  16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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  改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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  17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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' H' ?: ]9 I' X  改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand. , z% R5 p5 {. P3 ]+ U+ p

4 k: x+ Z: @* Y8 \  18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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  改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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  19. They cannot think clearly.
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  改进: They cannot think straight.
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' y9 W9 J6 y" N" y. B  20. Money can improve their living standard. ) M" L2 V1 X. z0 S
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  改进: Money can improve their life.
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  r  @2 a/ X# `/ R2 b4 f  21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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  改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money. : ^" R! s: M, X6 C  E

6 X2 t/ v: d' k+ I8 F  22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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  改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life. & X3 g* [9 J0 b- E3 q9 F1 ^
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  23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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  改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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  24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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1 P' w1 ~% _; f8 H" l/ E& d: _) v% c  改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes. , D  L3 j, P2 X; f0 T6 e+ y9 q  T5 A

, ^5 x7 }( }1 Y* u( s  25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others. , y$ M* t- C5 H

7 m2 T9 U$ X3 t, W  改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others. & h0 x; y+ U1 U5 m" n2 ]
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  26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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  改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal. , Q) Y* ~+ z/ J4 r. W8 h

/ h$ k+ I. C5 H$ ^5 F6 k: I5 y  27. Smoking can help you relax your mind. % D( L' y8 H7 z
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  改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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2 J) H( I. y/ s: L. i+ y1 }0 q  28. What's about nonsmokers? 7 F# I) P9 G# I. |) [  M
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: F& ^. ~' Z6 ~* ]: x3 F5 }/ C2 ^  29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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- u/ U) b( J7 |& z, |+ `$ Y  30. Everyone will have many friends in his life. : ]: V; b, f& R7 f! N  Z
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  改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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  31. I am not good at maths, but English 8 F# X# I1 }) z) r1 i$ ?

7 Z. S) M( R- `+ G/ f  改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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  32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time? $ d8 X( @2 ?& _, c1 T$ j

. L8 Z3 P7 l4 A5 K6 I# C1 `" x' l  改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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  33.It is children who clear about their interests. 5 v; c) Y0 B8 A2 a
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  改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests. 3 l8 I3 s) F. c, j
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  34. I agree the latter idea.
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  改进: I agree with the latter idea.
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  35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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  改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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  36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now. 0 s7 i5 h3 T" Q% u6 p: Y
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  改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe. $ t1 B( M3 M: t+ ?& _0 S  v+ d

, C. M( h5 c2 j* d  37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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  改进:People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn. % V$ K  e" L- C. ]. ?
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  38. No one knows all the things.   }% y3 T* l8 l: V5 K, z
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  改进: No one knows everything.
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  39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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  改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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  40. Each form of having friends has its advantages # a) g4 h6 D8 n3 m" n
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  改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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  41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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  改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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  42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor. * l3 T, n% S+ C% g

# W" v; w# A' x$ M* k5 n4 `+ Z  改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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4 L! v9 x4 J7 D9 [1 \2 ?3 g: n  43. They will learn the bad habits. * s7 D3 t% k+ r  R3 B5 P; X
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  改进: They will develop bad habits. 0 ]" A' V* Z6 M. k  M$ h$ S9 s
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  44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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; `, [, T/ O$ l' ~" k. \  45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary. 7 M' {9 q; u8 f5 O4 J

$ C, Y  |8 o0 x" Q  改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary. - z" S, ~0 J% V7 r( K

$ e. Y4 t1 S- Q' M  46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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  47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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  改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result. 7 Y" ]1 Y/ ~. ~4 Z! ^) g

/ C. j. Y5 t0 I7 a- l1 T% t4 `; i; d  48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing. 0 H" c1 x9 H* ~3 J8 q
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  改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream. 7 k' {# U! @9 c, t% c# ?

6 H+ H: i; }+ F8 s4 H  49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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  改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss. % s" i' E+ O& K# y3 `2 Q$ d3 H

7 `+ P. S7 h4 N8 f. a) B  50. I felt alone.
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  改进: I felt lonely.
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发表于 2005-2-24 08:39 | 显示全部楼层
wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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Thanks
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发表于 2005-2-24 09:08 | 显示全部楼层

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 楼主| 发表于 2005-2-26 07:02 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
平时的积累,呵呵!
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发表于 2005-2-26 14:03 | 显示全部楼层

顶!

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发表于 2005-3-1 08:25 | 显示全部楼层

很好。

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。
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发表于 2005-3-1 08:37 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
是现状的意思
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发表于 2005-4-9 18:26 | 显示全部楼层
:lol::lol::lol:
理袁律师事务所
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发表于 2005-4-9 20:42 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵
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发表于 2005-4-9 21:09 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
有些改进似乎意思有些改变...
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发表于 2005-8-24 02:47 | 显示全部楼层
好哦.xiexie
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发表于 2005-8-24 19:48 | 显示全部楼层
thanks
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发表于 2005-8-24 21:11 | 显示全部楼层
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