锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

# h3 Y0 J2 }& y% a3 n. m/ x　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

8 d# \# u8 U9 o. G% B/ w" \　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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$ ^; O( j- c" s+ {* r　　6. Their brain is still very young.
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　　改进: They are still immature.
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( D( ]/ x* U- w7 H　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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  S( K2 g+ j! f　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

( i/ u( M" Q0 L3 r　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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. M3 B# p: J/ q1 h3 A　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

  V) l; r! k% R. `* a( m　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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6 S% Q% P' S  ~* D+ O7 G* Y& o* a2 \5 @　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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$ S+ d. l1 ~( [. Z* p5 V　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

* Y7 ?9 D6 T5 w- \/ w　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

; T$ s% R; a" p/ E, \! N! x* J　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.

5 F+ U2 C  S4 L3 n3 k4 A2 E& L" s　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

" R, r& l) }! W' ^: ~& J) W　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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/ V  i! P' B  J* d2 j6 J; W　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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  @9 @9 W( T2 y, d　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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　　19. They cannot think clearly.

: W, Q# b' Z3 G6 e- E; j　　改进: They cannot think straight.

　　20. Money can improve their living standard.

9 p  B8 f; [$ }4 z( n4 |  }4 h$ b　　改进: Money can improve their life.
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　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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. D2 o( U6 D( G- Y　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.

/ I8 i. X8 Z- m0 A9 e5 b7 P　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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, p% X: i- Y# ?6 k# Z5 N% c  i　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.

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* }7 b" \) g: l* ?6 [# I$ F! S　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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3 M2 I# I/ Z5 |　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

+ M: p8 _: K! G　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
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　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

' u& w& p3 c! a9 ^$ ]　　28. What's about nonsmokers?

　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

7 K: O  C  H, q5 V$ I' B! R　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?

% l, z7 y! W: G4 B7 D- C2 e　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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5 w* x0 W+ g" ?, C　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

- B( H8 i+ V# b( A　　31. I am not good at maths, but English

　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

$ z: Y: P# O  z( |# J/ v; R; m　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

( ?2 ~. ^- M/ S$ V/ A# P2 _: v　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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/ r2 G8 c2 B7 N. G/ @9 [; |% H　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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6 v0 K  z4 m  |9 R. k- M9 `/ A　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

( r  S* Y$ }  t( z# f" j　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

8 G- P& H8 r; ]& ^　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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5 ^+ Z. X  b% O7 }　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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* j4 q: L: E% T; L/ t- G% ]　　38. No one knows all the things.

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6 @6 g" ~4 _1 O: k　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

2 i; U1 E3 a  b1 V. n　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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1 v, ]' L# E) F+ Y　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
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( _( l+ |: {$ Q1 x  C- W- @　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
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　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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: C, q- h. b* o# [+ ]. \* u　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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. I, _: l: m6 G( m+ ]; H　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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9 s8 R( F+ n+ v9 U* `4 L　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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; y* k- @" i3 f# o1 E3 [　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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- A' \& c9 C- u, f6 |  E3 x　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.

4 f3 c( N* E( j( g　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.

% ~" ~! O0 a9 U: I　　50. I felt alone.
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孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka