锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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3 U! r6 z) B' H2 i1 I  E　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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( m, U7 Y8 ^% U! |. ], e　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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' p- h, a6 ~8 Q9 k　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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9 @' ~3 \$ j' t+ z+ U　　6. Their brain is still very young.
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　　改进: They are still immature.

  V" _( B. l* V3 ~9 D　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

+ c' X% R/ S3 G+ p' A8 I8 R' |+ I　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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  h8 D1 |" P# J　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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7 [) [; x4 e# e. ]0 c; w1 k, s　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

- j  S' C# V& {7 I" U- e: [　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

( B1 v* [& I$ l$ H& L& M　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

5 J  s) E3 s" J" `　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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. c5 O: H; x0 ?- _3 \　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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: L, u, h( N# x3 W2 N　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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  C7 V8 s6 l* o! q, M　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.

　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

9 J6 x* b9 U/ [5 L) w2 O5 f9 ?' v　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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: e, X, A$ a: G1 A  d7 J　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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* l: y! r' ^( h) R% I* T1 U5 B& D　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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4 m' K# q# j  M8 e" C; h　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.

　　19. They cannot think clearly.

7 K9 e1 X0 G# E4 A8 E6 S# K8 m, D　　改进: They cannot think straight.

　　20. Money can improve their living standard.
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7 \' P5 r8 b* V- f- V　　改进: Money can improve their life.
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8 A: _) k4 X7 u, \* _0 I. Q　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.

% j% [1 s% d3 x$ ~3 d/ ^; ?　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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# ~! s1 b" i0 v- f/ W" g　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.

　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.

4 U6 w7 l) E/ ~7 L- a, {: z" S2 G　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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8 e, Q% a" ?. l, Z, _$ f2 V! J　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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) U+ ^1 H9 {' B' ~7 f2 [, ]; p　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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! U9 K0 J/ q7 Z6 h) ?6 ?　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
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/ r6 a0 @+ h8 }3 C- A2 v5 ~: }　　改进: What about nonsmokers?
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　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?

$ V6 s3 ^* D' X% i  @' o) O& B　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

2 D4 A* z/ s+ B, b7 B　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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0 i3 @9 D  c, w3 Q( |　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

　　31. I am not good at maths, but English

　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

3 D, d) P% I9 U$ }) ^　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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0 Y2 d3 K. x3 W. P　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.

$ f/ f! e2 v# ?0 o  y　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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$ `( v7 f1 p9 N# P: p　　34. I agree the latter idea.

4 m5 o4 k" e+ O: s* s　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

( l) L1 B; G: ?1 U, X: x( B* V　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

3 B+ @& a" I  y0 e: E8 R$ r8 Z9 N　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

" F5 M5 U; P; c1 a8 b8 A　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

1 @7 b7 Y8 Z/ G0 T$ O6 e& t! Q- E　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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　　38. No one knows all the things.
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, ?$ o7 `/ r  u5 m! A" U7 j" V% E　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

" z' |0 t' q' I: \% s; W4 F- h, q/ V　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
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　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.

( f; Y3 M) X' c2 u5 J1 h　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

) G6 n, }2 t  N) M　　改进: They will develop bad habits.

　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.

　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

9 N% L1 e5 G% l, W8 V　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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& t7 n/ a- w2 e7 \6 F　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

7 T. i" e! v3 r! w9 }" @/ G　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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# \" X) o) b, c: m6 E6 s　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.

　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.

　　50. I felt alone.

　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka