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1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level. ! }. m* S0 y4 J+ k
) K4 v4 ~0 h9 ^' [7 T7 A& A7 J 改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization. 1 H3 y i* Y% f
; ~/ V' o) e0 {- h* b; w 2. For example, you work in a big factory. ) m* g) M1 B% B) d, _( i0 S
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改进: Suppose you work in a big factory. - n" d* a( R& p3 b3 o% p' F
: F- W) x6 Y7 a& g" l2 r3 e 3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job. % k- G& K- m# v# n8 S1 X
3 H* v: i8 M4 e, j q$ m 改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career. & F3 C. `! j, H
) m$ t7 J* G& p k4 p* x) B: c% J) ? 4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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$ w$ X1 Q8 i2 F- J 改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck. 1 }8 F/ L: Q, v9 L1 L
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5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life. 1 v, s4 x2 ?+ F Z" E
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6. Their brain is still very young. 1 X1 W7 Z( m l" i" }5 t7 _
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改进: They are still immature. / O$ m& k* k1 w" ]! |
& T5 d; [8 l8 N) U: K1 @# H 7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things. : x# i6 x: m4 F# z9 t
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改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better. 9 d1 p# l# Q& Q- l6 O; b S( A
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8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong. * I4 ] z; i1 ^0 d w
. t: j# A5 `" p( `2 v/ l8 M% A+ G 改进: They cannot tell right from wrong. - A7 n, n; e6 |, w0 y! o
9 D& z1 P6 H3 H 9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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4 F" [( k+ Q' W 改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time. * k, [' Q4 s6 ]( q5 \
% x* X" }: m8 F2 k& }! H; L' [ 10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life. 1 }# @ q& b" r( m8 Z, W; c
1 }6 c/ f! y- T& t3 K9 z$ h 改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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; T+ N# L; p% R3 h4 @& G 11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development. / C% L- m# G" ~4 v2 w; Z
$ h6 i0 ?+ L: q2 r# | 改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development. 2 L5 v8 Z' s6 f; x# W, n
) b) i X0 m) }! c7 b6 B 12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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) r7 Y1 D* x" K2 r! Q 改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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. R4 s2 P3 W- _ 13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life. ' X7 E' { U* Y/ @
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改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one. ; f' V* ]& k! _7 y3 d
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14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money. 8 c6 ~+ G1 B# J* M, A; X
/ P7 N/ I, I9 S; c# f# d4 V5 \ 改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more. 9 K8 G: ?: a3 Y0 F' h. L+ Z
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15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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, e+ J1 T# i0 M2 k( t: X0 F 改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products. + B' I$ Q# q7 p, @) t5 h0 ~+ q6 }
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16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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* c' F; t5 E7 F% o1 I, h 改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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0 k1 R6 \" W. D7 ^ 18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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改进: This knowledge will become part of you. 1 u+ ^0 y% N. n/ Q* m' `% E1 B. ?* ?
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19. They cannot think clearly.
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2 S4 ?5 f8 O: s2 f: g2 m 改进: They cannot think straight.
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" v; P4 A# Z6 p, ~9 P/ y+ w% } 20. Money can improve their living standard. 4 ?& [. F! A: G" Y
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改进: Money can improve their life. ( `# s6 t: [- @9 W. E& @3 D, p V, [8 F5 ]
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21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life. , W# o& H( }1 A9 h: ]' J
3 [6 m" l# }! F3 ^( V 23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later. # S8 A. d2 Z/ V9 `- z* y. n0 R
* o5 A# L' Z& E 改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn. / V! g% Y/ p0 j2 @6 t
6 L# K& R) T! R: O9 k* n9 ` 24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano. # q; F6 c: O5 `
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改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes. - S$ q, P' d; z8 k0 ?; x) G D
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25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others. * s1 a) d2 Q8 i0 \
4 a4 u* v* ]% q- ~ 26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
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- H5 R4 t( A& Q5 c 27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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/ b8 y4 E6 @2 o, r, S 改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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28. What's about nonsmokers?
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. ?# f6 e' g/ x3 ?% Q 改进: What about nonsmokers?
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29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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8 L1 ^, U! Q3 R, Q6 Z 30. Everyone will have many friends in his life. ( w- P; T7 q2 l' s
% B, G; u, s) o2 y* {1 Y 改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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31. I am not good at maths, but English * d3 Q8 e9 O3 ~' _: e3 \
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改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English. - J7 J" h! J0 H* @% d- s
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32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time? ! _ N' {8 E2 B! d& t6 Y6 q
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改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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& o+ @7 W- x9 d, x7 _ 33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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2 B/ e( W( W' F3 w" x 34. I agree the latter idea.
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改进: I agree with the latter idea. , o$ }( Z- c8 ^* Q4 y( w
$ X1 W3 j6 |' q& j 35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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' X3 E* t& W' E% Y 改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo. % y9 T: w1 @1 O3 B- K7 }
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36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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, p+ ~5 J2 q, e0 ] 37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are. 7 Y) ]: j) h9 c1 S3 w4 U" d7 K6 Y
2 l# W7 N$ w+ G/ L1 _- @$ j 改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn. 6 V7 \0 r! t( U, U2 j/ _1 S3 P
4 g( n8 e: s: u5 ^# u. G! ] 38. No one knows all the things. 8 P; D- v1 o0 Y/ `
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改进: No one knows everything.
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4 r6 P) Y" g+ W6 F3 E. g A 39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life. & e v8 K4 x' w! p
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40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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S m: i. A, k2 t( ` 改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply 1 w& h- D0 m1 K
+ d' I/ \5 K9 x" q1 I; B( o2 Y, V 42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
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+ o' c5 W) h: O% X# v: Q 改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor. 3 K3 \& d5 D! S7 u$ u
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43. They will learn the bad habits. + O0 b! L8 [( `& [/ `8 J
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改进: They will develop bad habits. # e* K1 T5 n: U4 P
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44. In this continued process, people make progress. " d' f2 Y1 b' x) H( Q) Q- ^) S- E7 A
+ p6 o+ e5 g1 [5 R8 c- t8 ^ 改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary. + U2 u/ H! U) C3 p$ M7 y9 L
! R# n8 q7 f) j6 I- C7 \3 A 46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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8 b2 ]( M' n, ^. _* ~* l 改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings. ; y, K! w& a% p% O
- V( t2 \* d2 M. b 47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result. , F' O; d) U, u0 ~5 i
$ ?% x; [ n2 m) f9 y- I6 G 48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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0 ~, m* r5 j V# ?. e9 I 49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost. - b& w W$ ^/ a% g7 P1 ?; A% a
/ A8 c4 u- \8 c5 M% K' z s4 R 改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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50. I felt alone. " j$ N$ p7 x* G1 u
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