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1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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3 U! r6 z) B' H2 i1 I E 改进:Artists' work upgrades our civilization. 4 |2 X) B8 {0 j \# i+ _% [
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2. For example, you work in a big factory. 4 n8 u4 \, `! @8 u% ^8 b
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改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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( m, U7 Y8 ^% U! |. ], e 3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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改进:You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career. * c4 R8 H+ W& d3 `* T, x
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4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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' p- h, a6 ~8 Q9 k 5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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9 @' ~3 \$ j' t+ z+ U 6. Their brain is still very young.
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改进: They are still immature. # [8 p' b- \. n; b
V" _( B. l* V3 ~9 D 7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better. 9 g% _. q1 v" n4 p# X
+ c' X% R/ S3 G+ p' A8 I8 R' |+ I 8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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h8 D1 |" P# J 改进: They cannot tell right from wrong. ' i+ ~' p( G( N, f; z5 d
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9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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7 [) [; x4 e# e. ]0 c; w1 k, s 改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time. 2 a+ ^- u( G1 h( C; C7 R4 u3 u9 T5 m
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10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it. ; G+ ]: w8 }6 J" A( u) i# x
- j S' C# V& {7 I" U- e: [ 11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development. + P' u# P, T5 h2 Z1 Y
( B1 v* [& I$ l$ H& L& M 12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money. & P* W# {8 [7 _% A& C6 m0 v X
5 J s) E3 s" J" ` 13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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. c5 O: H; x0 ?- _3 \ 改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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: L, u, h( N# x3 W2 N 14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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C7 V8 s6 l* o! q, M 改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more. $ ]. D: U f; v J z- U4 U6 [
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15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products. 1 X* r( V- O# @" N+ f3 Y! ]
9 J6 x* b9 U/ [5 L) w2 O5 f9 ?' v 改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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: e, X, A$ a: G1 A d7 J 改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills. ; i7 Q# X" ~/ Y0 u* R b2 ^
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17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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* l: y! r' ^( h) R% I* T1 U5 B& D 改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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4 m' K# q# j M8 e" C; h 改进: This knowledge will become part of you. 9 ` k8 P; N! B4 f, ]( N/ v: `
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19. They cannot think clearly. # {0 z- _5 F" _% R
7 K9 e1 X0 G# E4 A8 E6 S# K8 m, D 改进: They cannot think straight. 5 s# V8 E/ C2 h2 B0 u
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20. Money can improve their living standard.
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7 \' P5 r8 b* V- f- V 改进: Money can improve their life.
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8 A: _) k4 X7 u, \* _0 I. Q 21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money. 6 _( y& S1 b; {7 o2 Y9 J
% j% [1 s% d3 x$ ~3 d/ ^; ? 22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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# ~! s1 b" i0 v- f/ W" g 改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later. - ]% Y" z5 F, X8 x! t
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改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn. , I/ W) E( B$ B) z, x
4 U6 w7 l) E/ ~7 L- a, {: z" S2 G 24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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8 e, Q% a" ?. l, Z, _$ f2 V! J 改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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) U+ ^1 H9 {' B' ~7 f2 [, ]; p 25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others. 2 V7 G5 C+ d0 m
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26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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! U9 K0 J/ q7 Z6 h) ?6 ? 改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal. * B8 F/ u; O8 G
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27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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改进: Cigarettes can help you relax. 3 J G" p4 Z0 x9 _/ f
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28. What's about nonsmokers?
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/ r6 a0 @+ h8 }3 C- A2 v5 ~: } 改进: What about nonsmokers?
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29. Why not to be a non-smoker? 9 v# f3 R/ d, t9 k' U6 r
$ V6 s3 ^* D' X% i @' o) O& B 改进: Why not be a non-smoker? : Q( F, I( ~( R) t1 T
2 D4 A* z/ s+ B, b7 B 30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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0 i3 @9 D c, w3 Q( | 改进: Everyone has friends in his life. . B; s3 c1 m' r5 ^) M( Y# v, f; t i
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31. I am not good at maths, but English 6 e/ o( P& D; O% i4 I% N
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改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English. . `- v( k0 J9 T4 s( i2 Y" F
3 D, d) P% I9 U$ }) ^ 32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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0 Y2 d3 K. x3 W. P 33.It is children who clear about their interests. $ j0 x& E7 \! {5 u; k7 c& W% B
$ f/ f! e2 v# ?0 o y 改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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$ `( v7 f1 p9 N# P: p 34. I agree the latter idea. 8 b4 |1 [4 _8 n- |. U
4 m5 o4 k" e+ O: s* s 改进: I agree with the latter idea. ) `& N* D# |+ i$ B' u! v' G9 I8 H
( l) L1 B; G: ?1 U, X: x( B* V 35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now. 7 E3 I) N. y7 A) h' y9 `
3 B+ @& a" I y0 e: E8 R$ r8 Z9 N 改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe. 0 W& `' |6 b6 I
" F5 M5 U; P; c1 a8 b8 A 37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are. 8 D* ~" G i$ ?& ]; Y" {; w3 e
1 @7 b7 Y8 Z/ G0 T$ O6 e& t! Q- E 改进:People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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38. No one knows all the things.
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, ?$ o7 `/ r u5 m! A" U7 j" V% E 39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life. 1 H' I6 m9 @8 k: ~" ^' M& M
" z' |0 t' q' I: \% s; W4 F- h, q/ V 40. Each form of having friends has its advantages 6 B' z. G9 W" ~0 |4 |, J
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改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages. , W- y9 w% L$ G( W- b, n
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41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up. 5 J" d$ c$ F/ ]3 L8 J
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改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
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改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor. B/ m; Z, z, o/ o2 a2 p* Q6 H
( f; Y3 M) X' c2 u5 J1 h 43. They will learn the bad habits. ( e8 b, o: g% _/ Q# O
) G6 n, }2 t N) M 改进: They will develop bad habits. ) N* m0 E$ N; ~. |; a) t
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44. In this continued process, people make progress. ' h) M8 Q$ u$ w( l
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改进: In this cycle, people make progress. # D* ~# S% G# V6 e, ^5 u9 s
9 N% L1 e5 G% l, W8 V 45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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& t7 n/ a- w2 e7 \6 F 改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency. 9 ^ }; g; d: ^) L9 c" h3 _
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改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings. # X- Y @, v6 k5 p1 S. a# k$ N
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47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact. , g; B: D: D9 T5 J/ P& c5 n9 a4 j
7 T. i" e! v3 r! w9 }" @/ G 改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result. 1 G8 g5 Z; Z$ {! ^# K
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48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing. ( r7 D, E, T$ D) P3 b5 y- ]
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改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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# \" X) o) b, c: m6 E6 s 49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost. . A# V! k0 q- {" @8 U
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改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss. 2 Q2 ~; |3 \5 ?! r5 Z
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50. I felt alone. 0 C) K& a% z, A4 Y
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