Falling in love ( Z$ l2 l; }5 _# L7 E & E6 e5 ]5 v+ N, D) O/ LI fell in love with you ' I0 h" N- V0 S0 ~" O
At the first week we met ! v9 s( k' ^( t+ q1 T2 \/ y( F 3 {# v9 l6 e. {0 |1 x0 B; aYou have charm, you have looks ; `% g9 j' J& [! ]7 zwith full of pimples in face 6 A, J& d( I8 r& B* jAs spotting sky at a summer night1 |9 S' T! t5 Q3 j- @) U2 \- c8 ?: K
They are shining stars p5 y9 b& C2 ?' l6 [4 f" ^ + x/ Q/ E8 n4 K# yYour lip is so big ' b: Z- E: ^( u/ j4 o4 IAnd that’s good for a kiss 1 S n+ }7 f. e* @+ t. j4 d4 I; cYour body is chubby( V v# F' R. F3 w. a7 u
And that is good for sex# ~2 e. ]; d' o3 m I
8 }2 S( r1 d1 D T& q/ p+ JI was deeply in love 7 D( ?" ]4 D5 b, M& ^Everything from you is positive ' y# A# n' f6 H8 |You blame me everything and everyday- z$ g! ?. y0 I- {1 R2 H
And I think all girls sound like0 |# N, X; C A% e+ _* |
7 e1 y# n. J2 D4 L+ u# v5 H b2 e4 EYou could not stand my eating1 U$ c3 Y$ X7 O
Saying no good for making funny sound 5 L+ Y$ l. M0 ~$ I3 F( PI think you are perfectly right& A& I, G) n; A! b
Eating with sound is a pig0 ?$ g- k) M1 U* N r% |
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I fell in love with you 2 @9 K4 I' t- D0 P7 u% U) QBecome a fool to think; p% J- Y7 u" M8 s! p- e
All trouble things you did 6 r- n y$ h" [' J# m! AAnd that is the price for love" k' {2 R; k9 B9 q' e, k# [# Y
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you are deeply in love7 U, X' i: G# d3 C4 d9 T" o" v
Everything from me is negative / g0 \8 p8 l) U* U"My man should be like this,) q3 H$ K# [* x" F
and I am helping you to improve'3 ~+ W% G, |: j1 F! F
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You are loving me ! D! Y: d" k. Y* z2 Xor that one in your mind? / g, S# n0 O2 {% w5 MMy mind is like a mud# C" W% M+ p0 v) Z
can be shaped whatever you want V9 P9 g) e* R. w5 h2 M5 b- {6 w, V. R
unfortunalety not my heart4 s) z3 f5 {/ w0 ] m
It is slashed by you & L% y3 ~- p- s" t% c; T
and I am seriously hurt) j% ?0 |$ Q* x2 G+ l# Q( M( U
; i+ [- D1 Q1 Z) E- s9 `2 I3 j6 RI will never love another - R6 v+ j3 p1 a5 A. s7 `If my heart can be fixed
sweeite, % H7 H2 l, W/ Q5 \/ g9 ui am sorry to say that ur poem sucks.7 D+ i' v/ J! s/ \+ X
And this is something I change. Whatever left r too sucky to be changed6 J& E8 J1 F) w( u9 s* \% |* c
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with the charm, # R, i7 c9 N: owith the simles. 2 T4 L) e( n, I3 oI fell in love with you ' A) D9 {- ~8 L! v: [& K
In the first sign. 6 l: {) i; }$ C& PAs spotting sky at a summer $ d' U* v. L o+ I# y# P
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Your lip is so soft 8 ^9 Q5 \; ?. x( P( e+ bthere is not honey can sweeter than ur kiss ) e( h4 q2 y5 CYour body is so sexy4 @2 |! r0 G8 Y1 T |4 J2 ]. x
And I cannt image the moment I touch u.2 W' X( ^& C6 Q
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I am deeply in love $ _4 Z$ `7 z# X f, UEverything from you is so charming 5 m5 c; C; f8 oalthough You r so picky for me * U% s" H: `& I
And I take them as ur buttefly feelings.
THis is the poem in SNTC S2 and it is not a good one 2. " ~& w- h/ q( @: M: G; H: j6 ?But u can copy the way how she ranges the poem 1 a# Z, `0 {2 A+ K$ E) P$ S% ]* U0 I( X+ u
+ T r* W/ r+ `4 j& x7 sHis hello is the end of her endings2 p# N* H4 @6 C
Her laugh is their first step down the aisle; P/ R- e( O6 Y A" P; R
His hand would be hers to hold forever1 P$ U- x C7 T( _! @" c5 L
His forever is simply as her smile 0 I; D" H B1 Z8 C) ~4 U
He said she was what was missing: G4 K: u$ Z5 ~3 C/ N( p
She said instantly she knew ) Q R$ V3 I, ^$ g+ G7 U( ^She was a question to be answered- d) ?* q% M& f: b. z
And his answer is " n: k2 e$ y5 d6 F2 F
I do
Rain bow, you are so right. You improved it , and now it is much better. Seems you also like poems. that is good and wish to keep in touch with each other. Merry Xmas 5 O3 J7 Y' r8 _ ' ~2 D+ ~3 l9 S) r% v8 ~% VBelow is my new one, any comment?
It’s amazing how I felt . m0 W/ e2 H# |" g6 | " Z* N! C7 u" H! m t8 W5 U2 cIt's amazing how I felt ' T0 V; B0 s$ \5 V ?" E7 g7 Z
when I was with you 0 g5 V5 P8 w7 M& r/ d0 j9 LMy heart beat so fast ) r) G7 w! v& b2 }3 F$ s6 iI looked at you and thought & ]4 y" A( Y# I, XHoly Jesus, you were so cute * g0 C; i1 L' `! r4 O X+ A9 S' V3 D/ LYou left me without a word) W) s4 v' w8 D: |6 L+ d: _1 O2 w
I have nothing except my emptiness / ]9 s* G# o) |7 o5 JMy mood is like a cloud % h, a7 v3 J1 Y0 m( o7 }! iHow could it be dispersed? : @6 ]3 t& {% q7 n & r" |0 @- r+ g9 x( ?, X6 n2 SFeelings bite my heart 2 n7 [5 b# S1 Y, d2 F2 N
You are the right one I wait- V( @" Q+ e& d: `& L" `6 a0 Y
In the depth of my soul/ \' k3 _, @! [- q; v6 k
I will love you till I'm dead