Falling in love & Z- b( K5 N$ R" t& a" D+ ^* M0 s6 H2 p9 {& M0 C
I fell in love with you K8 Q+ i0 d- i
At the first week we met& C- W) x! w; ~; L: V' f' ^; r" [
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You have charm, you have looks' ?! k6 D' N' b9 M
with full of pimples in face : M) U& I; Z, r: KAs spotting sky at a summer night 1 { p, I% e7 z$ G# v" {4 B; zThey are shining stars* A8 g; K! N* L4 }/ _% E
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Your lip is so big# @& D$ H" [& E# Q
And that’s good for a kiss [5 V9 O1 l0 J$ j. y9 s" J: ^# zYour body is chubby # l0 o! R$ T) Q9 U: GAnd that is good for sex 2 s4 V4 f( [8 z8 q% e% E0 ^; L1 B& E2 @; e
I was deeply in love : i0 s" `0 X/ ]Everything from you is positive # o0 B L7 N% j* A$ BYou blame me everything and everyday2 C: D- A# Q) m2 ^) }7 x
And I think all girls sound like5 [( T( A2 [) K7 o) g
; J. D h6 l) t& e' S S2 nYou could not stand my eating + }, |' B. a/ D* P+ D0 KSaying no good for making funny sound ( E* _( e$ ~$ ^ K* c MI think you are perfectly right + n) ~6 z& r3 k8 v7 R! OEating with sound is a pig& r' m ^3 R: i9 Z& r: C, s$ F
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I fell in love with you . j) v& y6 e% a2 x. \/ y( l8 b* b
Become a fool to think& ~# ?" |! C% K' Y( U4 S
All trouble things you did/ ]2 B! c- z% r" V4 H( ^* X
And that is the price for love ) X; [' P+ s& x4 i $ o* N& Z- K& ayou are deeply in love' h( d; |) \0 u: y1 s% |
Everything from me is negative3 @2 p/ J- }8 K) p$ M
"My man should be like this, 7 v4 c% q- Y. Cand I am helping you to improve' 3 H! ~8 h) C! P7 z5 Z 2 S5 ~- h; }* ]You are loving me & i. ]5 E8 X) s! M* G2 N! xor that one in your mind? : K' P; G- m$ o7 jMy mind is like a mud + s) b; R6 t: n Z; c: lcan be shaped whatever you want7 ] J8 Y9 \: N
4 F! D3 }& c, E. \0 G: D/ P9 @# bunfortunalety not my heart C" f) ~6 Q ?
It is slashed by you 8 A* T! v& B' a, ~: g" M3 Wand I am seriously hurt9 L* s0 u' ` U% d3 v
' x! A) s. y h- D% }I will never love another / _% U. A- d+ A& ~9 z8 Q3 W
If my heart can be fixed
sweeite, , j& ?/ Y9 {7 ?# I' Mi am sorry to say that ur poem sucks.' f4 p- o/ b `# R* t" t/ ?3 V
And this is something I change. Whatever left r too sucky to be changed / a; l1 S3 _5 K4 H 5 p" `+ z# }7 ~8 M" Ywith the charm,; f: C- H3 b/ D! z. b8 r5 j& C- P
with the simles. ! {$ b; W4 @' ~- q( T ~I fell in love with you 8 C/ f, s- F, ~2 V1 r: f- R9 mIn the first sign. 8 N- q, @4 p5 e+ d7 \As spotting sky at a summer 4 F0 n7 g; I. Y6 k% U5 ~6 h# Y2 v1 X$ x/ E$ j2 L7 V& X" A
Your lip is so soft 3 V! i0 q B) K4 N0 hthere is not honey can sweeter than ur kiss % M) { D5 K* [5 eYour body is so sexy " V; M, Y+ a6 B4 ?1 h1 ^) z: VAnd I cannt image the moment I touch u.0 ~- g, `& i& {5 ~0 N
* K& E ~9 t+ I% PI am deeply in love # _' \5 b8 K. w; N% P3 ~+ ]+ R7 iEverything from you is so charming 2 M( M3 W. O. Y4 W& `although You r so picky for me z1 z& e, f; W. o; m3 n5 `# o
And I take them as ur buttefly feelings.
THis is the poem in SNTC S2 and it is not a good one 2.4 L; R1 I y& P+ G
But u can copy the way how she ranges the poem9 j) e+ E' J) i7 m& I
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His hello is the end of her endings' L4 f' Q: Z& r1 u' s2 Y# e
Her laugh is their first step down the aisle , [0 x" }+ I: I$ P$ x' KHis hand would be hers to hold forever ( D$ N, \- h/ R$ oHis forever is simply as her smile # {- y7 h) G. t& W2 B& o+ IHe said she was what was missing T+ [* S! J1 E, k3 M* f+ z3 N2 f
She said instantly she knew# h+ ]& {! B- U: i" T. e) M6 T
She was a question to be answered * z. {: u( O9 P8 R+ P7 K, ]+ W3 _And his answer is % z# O7 C8 E) o# u' Z( b7 ZI do
Rain bow, you are so right. You improved it , and now it is much better. Seems you also like poems. that is good and wish to keep in touch with each other. Merry Xmas& p' A: X- a$ z" n V* p
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Below is my new one, any comment?
It’s amazing how I felt4 V5 i# ]9 l& o- I7 [
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It's amazing how I felt . M s% F% u# ^* K+ w
when I was with you ' @: g' {* }0 XMy heart beat so fast * w6 @! g7 p% p3 z( FI looked at you and thought d3 z$ e/ V% [1 N: _Holy Jesus, you were so cute " R- e. d. X/ f' p. }5 Y8 w( t0 a : z- Q, L7 A4 L5 x$ S3 MYou left me without a word8 t" H4 k. E: `0 I( \4 }, u
I have nothing except my emptiness 4 b4 h/ u7 B* _My mood is like a cloud % ` n5 r4 @6 d0 v7 |How could it be dispersed? # S; x2 ^/ `% c4 n& Z2 x8 ]6 q & {+ d, m3 D. p* a m3 oFeelings bite my heart 3 [7 \* F( r) X! l; D0 d
You are the right one I wait9 {( T1 c1 P+ j. {9 O
In the depth of my soul6 y7 o# N3 L% `& N- e
I will love you till I'm dead