Falling in love / t( e" J/ J0 s V ) x7 J- E2 B+ b* _+ T# s2 h2 o, N. u* KI fell in love with you ' ^, c8 d6 E4 D d$ J" V& S
At the first week we met 8 O$ T/ I( P( S0 t! S+ S5 E4 _ $ U+ f2 j5 T& B1 o# K/ \You have charm, you have looks. a! i) ?$ ]$ w
with full of pimples in face ( Q0 m. S' F' u" j4 NAs spotting sky at a summer night 1 g8 D% W* I/ }: [/ i$ v+ w9 ?+ s+ ~They are shining stars5 L0 {2 p' Q7 }# k$ e: p& N
6 q& ]1 E5 L) K) ?6 N& J; X6 }Your lip is so big 7 u# h4 V0 b% O" kAnd that’s good for a kiss $ T7 O# a$ ]- [& f8 {Your body is chubby% m' W, b8 Z- h+ [
And that is good for sex8 ] ~6 L3 ?# W/ ]7 K: f# j1 p( E
0 y q/ f) }. ?I was deeply in love0 _ z2 j; @/ |7 `
Everything from you is positive ) n7 c' i/ i8 A7 p" c7 v0 I$ @/ kYou blame me everything and everyday1 I' R1 c* _1 O/ R, q1 Y5 `
And I think all girls sound like 3 C% K6 I3 }3 J0 q9 I. I ; w" S! K9 R* n3 U0 @- t5 BYou could not stand my eating ( Q' L- Q# t; D( ]/ ]2 O4 \Saying no good for making funny sound" z( r1 C9 U2 ^7 _
I think you are perfectly right$ _$ w \5 m8 F& F
Eating with sound is a pig g4 L3 d. Q2 e+ l, ?2 p) ]3 Y8 T1 ?. q( I1 k8 K0 M* `7 f
I fell in love with you 9 D( ?0 I: T# D( C" B) M
Become a fool to think 2 V3 ^& ~* W# G2 o( d4 E9 |# O7 ^$ YAll trouble things you did * r% A, B) M8 u+ C3 cAnd that is the price for love * b. |' C0 \: ?1 \* |/ K , Q( V; T ?- R, ^- qyou are deeply in love 5 |3 l+ M! d- E9 s6 r uEverything from me is negative * H0 z2 d5 [+ e o: N8 j"My man should be like this, ! c* ~& {" v! Q$ ~- X2 |and I am helping you to improve'7 e: N- Z6 L. T
$ g, @) B' U/ x. s% l1 NYou are loving me 2 B. \; @) ~- h1 X( N2 S% Z
or that one in your mind?# G( z8 R5 p2 s+ Q2 Y7 ~5 l
My mind is like a mud; G O8 ?$ o! N- p7 e3 J0 F; z
can be shaped whatever you want% A: S' U6 k' ]' j. N" D
& V% t6 V) r' q1 i3 n" @unfortunalety not my heart( C: W Y+ Q9 [7 {' T$ U
It is slashed by you 8 q- a! L$ D4 D- ~# E! ^7 Uand I am seriously hurt/ N1 _, D# v- u
0 [$ i* w2 h) Q, aI will never love another 2 c! ]9 z: ~9 _; B
If my heart can be fixed
sweeite, - m6 ^- U* z1 mi am sorry to say that ur poem sucks.) [9 E: `! _# D5 x7 s1 d% |
And this is something I change. Whatever left r too sucky to be changed & I" C" o. C) S: f& k+ T; _$ [( b# G3 \- W
with the charm,) l$ g# W# R$ F- P: H- G6 [
with the simles.: P g$ E# M" }' h6 ~) v
I fell in love with you $ M' w$ \( l8 r! {In the first sign. B* a2 v& N; d3 [+ K
As spotting sky at a summer - {& E* D1 {5 O8 o0 K A; H% N, A( O2 I+ A1 l
Your lip is so soft : R* R3 m; s' u S1 y1 L
there is not honey can sweeter than ur kiss" @7 v( N( E" k4 R1 n# C& z
Your body is so sexy: I2 e V2 W$ c
And I cannt image the moment I touch u.3 o# h. g/ g- p* j `: u, \
$ p9 n T, _, y! O/ S* ZI am deeply in love% m; _! }0 Y5 `5 A$ A! x& y B! v
Everything from you is so charming$ N9 [ W: H3 w5 I' e( I
although You r so picky for me F3 L# l% ?8 }: \
And I take them as ur buttefly feelings.
THis is the poem in SNTC S2 and it is not a good one 2./ H! ?# c& J( O: ?, t* Q; P, [
But u can copy the way how she ranges the poem7 C }+ t0 w) Y3 N& X: V4 r
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His hello is the end of her endings! v6 p4 o! g" I3 n6 ~; v9 Z2 F
Her laugh is their first step down the aisle( ^1 t4 m; L/ H* A5 Y, m! ~% F
His hand would be hers to hold forever5 s# I# k3 R) I
His forever is simply as her smile ! b" Q0 X4 K8 l/ j
He said she was what was missing3 X6 Y/ B5 C+ J5 t4 o- Y! t
She said instantly she knew + X; w; e E* s7 L, SShe was a question to be answered# g$ G. s9 \" x" Z
And his answer is 5 E" T: _8 l, d# f/ x5 X+ S3 a
I do
Rain bow, you are so right. You improved it , and now it is much better. Seems you also like poems. that is good and wish to keep in touch with each other. Merry Xmas/ x! F& n' ]! ]+ o- o
1 i# M/ p) y. e+ v" k) V. hBelow is my new one, any comment?
It’s amazing how I felt, G3 A! `- Q) H5 g% @' r
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It's amazing how I felt ( U% N% \2 P% t0 E1 O, f
when I was with you 6 D% t5 `" H( e' l- [6 rMy heart beat so fast- _( ^5 K! X0 V: k' H9 v1 Z$ b
I looked at you and thought # g9 h# H3 p* C: D# {0 p+ a5 w8 p* oHoly Jesus, you were so cute , ]. e1 b8 M9 o : e. S5 ^+ E; U1 O+ g8 |1 kYou left me without a word6 T4 k6 c2 O1 U" ~" Y
I have nothing except my emptiness 2 S( l7 q$ P# C9 UMy mood is like a cloud / g+ q5 U5 Z G4 m/ zHow could it be dispersed? 7 `3 B! u p% G. [' t2 ^0 d Q* q* L; M7 B d
Feelings bite my heart 1 p; A: _" m9 p0 f1 H
You are the right one I wait" c; M. L3 I+ C& N2 F3 Q0 z6 F
In the depth of my soul 0 Y: {# p1 l8 _+ f, B! NI will love you till I'm dead