Falling in love 1 A# k& E( y; K! X( N7 F: Y, F ! p0 c _. z" i6 I% a. dI fell in love with you ; k7 r4 S8 Y4 m2 ]1 U2 d* `
At the first week we met 6 C, h3 a M9 A2 V" l0 b- L& I) T 4 U. w% _7 b' h& R1 kYou have charm, you have looks . N" z6 Z2 h, m# L1 f( Mwith full of pimples in face4 M. o2 n* B9 @/ c- D
As spotting sky at a summer night* C$ o6 w' E. ]1 ~
They are shining stars u5 X1 N* K1 y% W2 u 6 L* F' h; a1 |$ e$ q# D' lYour lip is so big : n3 f6 c* ~9 Q S/ [: k: QAnd that’s good for a kiss 1 C3 K" S) f. F7 I9 q1 ] S, d3 C$ rYour body is chubby# m" v* W/ b; n4 m- _$ w' ]
And that is good for sex `% E& v) t4 u5 n) f5 x* X- F) q8 k9 l' P3 s& J
I was deeply in love $ S5 n6 f5 w. N9 P t4 ^3 B* sEverything from you is positive9 O2 K1 v: T7 r: d3 e9 }
You blame me everything and everyday # J1 N" {2 E. x, F& U/ G$ ]9 _, tAnd I think all girls sound like 7 A/ H0 O2 l U4 l- F: A8 \( b% N }# Y3 R1 Q8 g) y
You could not stand my eating4 e9 K% w4 i. C$ z# r
Saying no good for making funny sound 2 \0 X2 x3 u8 g( v0 A: H6 ^& Z0 V0 a' SI think you are perfectly right. P/ m! G% E4 F$ t# t+ D
Eating with sound is a pig ( _0 K$ B* {' u; j 9 z2 F3 w8 I2 _4 B/ x; UI fell in love with you $ E) L" a) M- t5 }0 W, N% c, Z
Become a fool to think 1 A! o w% [2 Z" F6 }All trouble things you did4 w5 n( f- R2 w8 v4 i% M
And that is the price for love ; Q2 T; Q# z- F4 ~0 z6 J n% Y
you are deeply in love ; ]3 J) g) ?; f+ O# G7 m: `Everything from me is negative" b- G6 Z) q0 W
"My man should be like this,: M- E5 d W; d- K4 H) N8 N7 u ]* q
and I am helping you to improve' 7 z0 v% y: V% b " Q$ e2 a2 t1 Z9 t/ yYou are loving me 4 c5 O6 b, l/ T! S( @
or that one in your mind? 1 p9 R% } h+ YMy mind is like a mud% o( U8 g- L. w+ w4 b
can be shaped whatever you want 4 }6 B8 X! g, s% S% z $ P$ E, E% F* r* a$ S) Lunfortunalety not my heart * e8 I8 c$ X& q8 A# aIt is slashed by you 7 f* `; ]# ^5 \- qand I am seriously hurt 0 l/ }) B8 C' o6 }: o j# x% \4 e/ E. z7 H9 c$ _. W: ?- F
I will never love another - k2 o( h6 f d9 w( L
If my heart can be fixed
sweeite, ( q. ]& [" N9 r" w2 j# ^
i am sorry to say that ur poem sucks. . B) u$ s E+ x8 F6 f( m7 YAnd this is something I change. Whatever left r too sucky to be changed* F: _1 Z, A7 ~, p* k
7 S' ]2 `7 R" G- `# Kwith the charm, ! v5 p) w" J' q# Fwith the simles.( C0 N% @% o8 \; l% ]7 k( I
I fell in love with you ]. u' U P: z" e7 Q: t$ w7 _In the first sign. 5 n; G: w# w$ O; E! A( F o; }" uAs spotting sky at a summer + W. g4 D2 ]! ~% M8 p* x6 W: l9 r4 }
Your lip is so soft $ f3 \+ g9 c7 d
there is not honey can sweeter than ur kiss) _; v/ _/ c. ^" [0 C
Your body is so sexy, _" Z, ^9 K- l# J( o* u# {
And I cannt image the moment I touch u. 3 H: W U0 i& w" g; `& e) y* D# e$ l6 P/ w+ R: e4 }, Y
I am deeply in love & A$ Q' \/ {5 s9 `. X% z/ H& GEverything from you is so charming8 F6 C& {# ^& {7 j2 C, ]
although You r so picky for me 7 w6 o. ]* a& [+ r4 E, K: ?& qAnd I take them as ur buttefly feelings.
THis is the poem in SNTC S2 and it is not a good one 2. 5 d! A% T, W5 d* \9 C3 S. z2 dBut u can copy the way how she ranges the poem; c) F: Z$ }% i! K
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His hello is the end of her endings4 ^) @1 y; x3 @3 L h' h" T3 n
Her laugh is their first step down the aisle$ L5 c- B, j! }: Z6 \ @# h% V
His hand would be hers to hold forever 5 d1 ~& y1 p. P: R' F! _His forever is simply as her smile + A5 R2 Z# j* _- P. ^
He said she was what was missing" C' O6 `; B# ^( e
She said instantly she knew8 c! G P% p: C/ z+ I# |8 ^ p- f2 ] V
She was a question to be answered ! A5 A9 i, w5 NAnd his answer is $ j& X% p8 l$ E, L
I do
Rain bow, you are so right. You improved it , and now it is much better. Seems you also like poems. that is good and wish to keep in touch with each other. Merry Xmas+ x. s- o3 b; D' b- q. i: T2 F
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Below is my new one, any comment?
It’s amazing how I felt3 V2 r+ a5 v8 B# Z5 F: x
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It's amazing how I felt 2 M: l7 D. i: `% y% }2 n& Swhen I was with you/ t" e( |- E, s# _+ f& F% e
My heart beat so fast 6 V9 T, o# _5 [% G- t5 f/ u5 KI looked at you and thought9 d; m3 \3 y0 R3 Z7 Z' H5 u
Holy Jesus, you were so cute T! V! k3 c5 k ( E+ S( }0 s' sYou left me without a word + Z" [4 y; Q! U0 OI have nothing except my emptiness - k* m ~6 U9 YMy mood is like a cloud! m$ n# Z& ?7 y f2 e$ q7 _
How could it be dispersed? ' r3 S+ f) Z3 @% P/ R" @: ~3 c' S; N# r2 B
Feelings bite my heart 4 d$ Q2 J; n1 RYou are the right one I wait* _ v/ V7 j* B; {9 z
In the depth of my soul 6 Z K2 r. [2 }$ U+ m0 ?I will love you till I'm dead