Falling in love% z# M7 o) i3 k4 Z) n. ` T
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I fell in love with you a% g h5 r& D' S$ L
At the first week we met 2 T6 j7 B/ w" s- N2 f1 ^! O / F7 t, O& B7 V# _0 tYou have charm, you have looks5 B- u1 E4 A; y" |! f {
with full of pimples in face8 [& j6 @, Y" t& a
As spotting sky at a summer night( ^6 J& v4 @: v- } c$ O
They are shining stars2 J3 a! O8 L, `& R
2 r2 k# S+ T. I8 v/ Q0 F: }- Q3 ~7 vYour lip is so big( G. D3 X+ a) t3 s% @5 t
And that’s good for a kiss+ q) b! z6 G. A( D
Your body is chubby& k; V& W5 U$ U5 s: B4 T
And that is good for sex8 f: g2 X7 P+ @7 V# `% ~4 I
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I was deeply in love # j6 L8 P8 b9 [Everything from you is positive % z" ~8 o/ t7 P7 x* p, KYou blame me everything and everyday ' I+ a) q# A# f: o4 OAnd I think all girls sound like3 R4 P! Q* `5 X7 e: ?
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You could not stand my eating 7 C ]3 ^+ A! h& H. `Saying no good for making funny sound - p7 V& Y3 C' s/ ?& z- J3 H+ z/ gI think you are perfectly right/ r* K# B1 u8 ^* v' D& G% c
Eating with sound is a pig1 {7 F; d% G1 T0 E
: O) p, v' b3 Q1 E3 nI fell in love with you $ }5 j2 \* u' G9 ~Become a fool to think6 B$ J% L. L; u. I; g1 p
All trouble things you did , F5 V9 V8 S: _$ X5 A/ Z% M" JAnd that is the price for love* G0 R$ Z+ L j# r3 V7 P
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you are deeply in love 2 v! y( }% A3 g# REverything from me is negative : `+ y5 N# M; I* j"My man should be like this,% x3 {8 T* D: ?9 f& `% A: ~
and I am helping you to improve'3 c1 [& O) y/ T) l1 I
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You are loving me * u0 J# o" A: e, V4 N
or that one in your mind? 4 m/ n5 }7 E% W5 I& D9 d3 mMy mind is like a mud + Q9 w0 _: r. j0 X4 G, }2 \8 x1 ^can be shaped whatever you want* w( U0 P9 v" _) T1 Q; z
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unfortunalety not my heart( |, y% I8 _4 I! q$ |
It is slashed by you ' V V/ s' l& U. l2 C
and I am seriously hurt ! o- |* P- Z; T. q! _+ K- n, [# r: Y% T0 ^( h' o
I will never love another ! W/ n* s7 w5 m# y
If my heart can be fixed
sweeite, $ ~- J3 j8 Y1 e. ki am sorry to say that ur poem sucks. 8 Z, C, }$ `$ E4 GAnd this is something I change. Whatever left r too sucky to be changed * ?, P2 v) S& x& M# x% R, ]8 H9 t
with the charm,0 W! D! W( X) h
with the simles." K( v/ ~2 e1 S* T7 W% d7 `
I fell in love with you 5 V* U$ \- L4 D' z
In the first sign. / W- |7 T" a; YAs spotting sky at a summer 0 n5 l+ d4 ~/ y- \% B7 Z# y
Y# h1 F" A0 u4 G. gYour lip is so soft : v( v8 S2 }9 b2 i. xthere is not honey can sweeter than ur kiss ; f& S T1 ]8 q1 }, N5 U! {% H/ kYour body is so sexy * V: w R6 u5 \0 qAnd I cannt image the moment I touch u. ' V. q: o1 f% n( [0 V% p! b9 p9 k1 x" G+ ?& r9 |1 J0 C
I am deeply in love4 T- ?2 W4 L: q2 B
Everything from you is so charming. O7 [1 U& D! N( z
although You r so picky for me & s5 g( r7 j' \; m7 S/ LAnd I take them as ur buttefly feelings.
THis is the poem in SNTC S2 and it is not a good one 2.2 j0 I# F8 Y( O6 S0 |* X: S
But u can copy the way how she ranges the poem % O) j# a9 B: X X % G% }- M M& h+ A& X1 n. W5 { H0 l
His hello is the end of her endings 3 s$ `7 y! p0 U0 W! p Z. ?Her laugh is their first step down the aisle . ]( A0 h9 d* o3 ?6 }/ R# \9 t# aHis hand would be hers to hold forever) ?5 k( w* I% T6 T3 h
His forever is simply as her smile ' ?" V2 e u( ^3 |2 S4 ~9 o% q
He said she was what was missing : Y, d! d1 R, r% g9 n; DShe said instantly she knew 3 K/ @; Z& R) N, o& t% Z4 Y8 ~* LShe was a question to be answered % b7 x( J! u( O& OAnd his answer is 0 x3 _3 i* v1 c, Q* GI do
Rain bow, you are so right. You improved it , and now it is much better. Seems you also like poems. that is good and wish to keep in touch with each other. Merry Xmas8 P1 o& y& D' s0 s i* S/ j5 J
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Below is my new one, any comment?
It’s amazing how I felt8 O) S. v8 j9 ?' R; M3 H
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It's amazing how I felt $ j9 b7 R3 z% z# h. u/ Dwhen I was with you8 G: m- z: c1 x0 V) t, g! S" G$ a! A
My heart beat so fast : \, s7 }# a7 |9 WI looked at you and thought , p$ t' J$ D; @# ~, OHoly Jesus, you were so cute. O, R! q* g {3 u& W
: d( C: @0 K% [! YYou left me without a word# m5 l# g& ~- v6 x
I have nothing except my emptiness8 ?0 w3 _, `0 b1 e d$ l
My mood is like a cloud $ k2 T9 v8 g( r7 ` M: B- tHow could it be dispersed? 2 p# }( K1 K9 p* {6 n/ w # u" L( g8 y7 _4 y- l5 f4 vFeelings bite my heart ! j7 n% N0 X1 J/ s3 Q+ G
You are the right one I wait! K) X! F& z7 s! }0 I7 r
In the depth of my soul4 c; G- P" k1 }
I will love you till I'm dead