Falling in love " j% Q- z: ]" `5 s! k6 Z 3 d0 u4 c! L/ Q( u: Y3 WI fell in love with you , Y( t! `5 ]3 Z3 i4 U4 EAt the first week we met }* n6 S6 R$ {9 z* \
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You have charm, you have looks/ p( O( U* b3 r# X4 Y& C" q% F
with full of pimples in face . z$ M$ v. b7 T) LAs spotting sky at a summer night ! a. n6 x( I; x* iThey are shining stars ' D; ~1 w1 n3 I: @- J * _9 O2 M$ Y/ Q; dYour lip is so big! F4 R6 c6 b) I+ s
And that’s good for a kiss 9 \4 J/ Y( Z3 c- e) Q9 ZYour body is chubby* N2 G T6 h9 G& q' q
And that is good for sex 2 N3 P# o( i6 G. o; }: d( j4 M& o; b* s' B+ H | K$ b& g
I was deeply in love) i r& w! s2 l T/ j" y
Everything from you is positive / P. Y# u) V9 m' IYou blame me everything and everyday $ \* E, a( i3 @8 ]/ GAnd I think all girls sound like X- @/ f# \! d; Y5 E
; n; ?3 h/ O: o2 f7 cYou could not stand my eating8 k4 y; F. Z8 S
Saying no good for making funny sound " P$ d9 ~9 t5 p- x# vI think you are perfectly right ; X8 M' h5 y" M4 d4 KEating with sound is a pig " V! G+ m8 l' M3 Y5 O' B S: Q$ J- O$ J) S$ Q* \8 e
I fell in love with you ' s. z6 k! a" b
Become a fool to think) N: d* a/ E8 S+ c# w
All trouble things you did5 s( `" ~0 G6 M$ L) l5 ~
And that is the price for love; c" K# w$ q& N e
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you are deeply in love 4 i. T0 n3 m+ c' b1 K8 [) LEverything from me is negative 3 ~) B7 u3 n4 a: l: u"My man should be like this, 4 T( H/ v q" d4 X- Gand I am helping you to improve'* X2 |6 q; A( f+ \5 o; p' }
. c* a" P4 Q! yYou are loving me " \, }* V/ q _) r v* f5 ?( ~5 H( mor that one in your mind?1 e8 Q* l( ~6 D* j
My mind is like a mud, k* s# `7 R: l6 U' C
can be shaped whatever you want+ W, n9 ]6 H, ?
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unfortunalety not my heart 7 \- A+ k3 W2 c9 p) [2 e/ ^% ?It is slashed by you 7 n1 r6 }8 l/ m5 H, V' k
and I am seriously hurt " b+ K$ n' {. o8 s5 X0 i/ _5 o. n9 k( X
I will never love another Y% _/ C% O( |+ \. Y Q/ X1 {
If my heart can be fixed
sweeite, - t& k0 C. M' w A8 |; `; z# Gi am sorry to say that ur poem sucks. & [" l0 ~4 j( [8 V0 V' dAnd this is something I change. Whatever left r too sucky to be changed- C; K* h: N$ u% ?. @0 h
: ~; O. Y! x& q2 g }) L* twith the charm, $ n# K, J3 L: Mwith the simles. ( e$ F2 ^; V" P aI fell in love with you - Q$ m' _2 D* e$ zIn the first sign. B* h, d+ E6 w7 \, u5 A1 Y$ j
As spotting sky at a summer 4 \/ j3 \* M4 L z& ~, c( m% k3 w0 b- d) \2 u2 R3 b
Your lip is so soft ) e% [1 _. \& S' C ^6 sthere is not honey can sweeter than ur kiss' i8 e2 I* d9 ~) |4 R5 y/ \. e
Your body is so sexy5 s4 X1 N( t! Z& {: k: n; q# V
And I cannt image the moment I touch u. ' I/ s, [2 h" e6 c+ Y ' L1 u# K& ?2 p) V0 C) {. ^. q( T" G5 uI am deeply in love 4 m5 d0 m# H0 |Everything from you is so charming & j$ [/ \& F! T" o8 I* nalthough You r so picky for me 5 \ D- ~. Z! a5 b' t% L" W/ h
And I take them as ur buttefly feelings.
THis is the poem in SNTC S2 and it is not a good one 2. " |) K6 p H& z: g$ r& g1 ]& d1 ZBut u can copy the way how she ranges the poem. x+ z& p) G" ~5 e% l) H$ {
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His hello is the end of her endings ; y3 Q& v% A \8 D, I0 `Her laugh is their first step down the aisle : J. |( j- K" Z" W \" ?9 a3 MHis hand would be hers to hold forever . X7 ?& p, `; {$ I3 E) [. rHis forever is simply as her smile ! l1 x; U* k5 r/ G, f) B B2 a$ `2 _He said she was what was missing |" J2 f. v4 t, @, t) o1 }# wShe said instantly she knew+ [3 _2 |6 `3 v9 I! O/ _$ J1 t
She was a question to be answered$ h6 }" T5 }: P3 r8 l: r: I+ D& v
And his answer is / y' W9 p. ]7 h
I do
Rain bow, you are so right. You improved it , and now it is much better. Seems you also like poems. that is good and wish to keep in touch with each other. Merry Xmas - ~ \' }: ?+ U' q1 E# u d7 A; n- w1 c' p4 D6 h9 v, S: g
Below is my new one, any comment?
It’s amazing how I felt5 ~0 a4 w: C. K- R' M! W
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It's amazing how I felt # N1 B8 b M9 g/ c
when I was with you ( g' e9 J; o8 i7 C g) rMy heart beat so fast $ K# c8 {& }7 o# SI looked at you and thought& t# m0 H. N3 {% p; {
Holy Jesus, you were so cute) a+ H4 o; c$ K6 b2 k! \' A
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You left me without a word, ~, k. L& l9 F) a/ D0 b' W
I have nothing except my emptiness4 t+ M; L4 j+ h4 @6 \
My mood is like a cloud! M4 @9 N) |6 i( n, \
How could it be dispersed? " g+ N# U& b, l5 N* [6 M2 F' T: @: z" W! J# t$ O3 p- m
Feelings bite my heart 9 Z0 T" D5 l( q! A- C& Y* F
You are the right one I wait , j, N6 l1 h* n2 F# \In the depth of my soul; V' ?0 S0 V9 v9 U- ^. j/ j
I will love you till I'm dead