Falling in love : o6 P7 z; f& M; o% J: q' O4 Z
I fell in love with you % \! `" I, Y/ X) b2 g
At the first week we met 3 G. k8 A) }& W+ E- L/ W4 ]4 o3 q; J4 D/ S
You have charm, you have looks+ T3 m9 |; T" `2 n) ~
with full of pimples in face+ P& t, \ n: M' W3 Y* E
As spotting sky at a summer night* c3 h. A% ^* x& ~ o* R
They are shining stars/ B* ~+ B0 t$ y! ?+ V$ r
3 k6 V4 b2 z2 ~% T* g3 {% ~Your lip is so big m5 H( Y3 Z2 l# k i) L3 B. P* W
And that’s good for a kiss 7 v$ {4 U& q& [2 e' r8 I( }" oYour body is chubby4 Z; v( N# o2 w }2 d8 i
And that is good for sex 2 s. }% C1 q7 e) d* n; t$ ^ " d3 S5 x) x, w: `I was deeply in love& Y+ H, o: z" L# ]# C! ?6 H2 `( V' ^
Everything from you is positive ! e7 U) i6 `+ ?9 ?% sYou blame me everything and everyday9 c3 B' Y- b9 ?) ~9 M8 R+ T0 d$ f* p
And I think all girls sound like1 b8 ^" z2 r0 k. S8 t
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You could not stand my eating 7 C: R3 e- y# j5 Y4 {Saying no good for making funny sound; g3 C5 x) p1 d' B7 |# `" _8 b
I think you are perfectly right / j! p i& n2 X8 h$ c R' ^ AEating with sound is a pig ) A: K: r9 G' q2 |% P+ b* p D" a* Q {* j1 j$ c* K" D1 OI fell in love with you # @; C, z W9 {2 p; z0 ?
Become a fool to think 5 K n; b0 S# p) DAll trouble things you did2 v5 `" n2 V6 {
And that is the price for love* L N# N- X' b8 z+ i) n
5 b1 S! N8 Z2 z7 j2 Z/ ~you are deeply in love3 G+ `$ v+ R. T2 O
Everything from me is negative2 L* \" o; u! [% M# }
"My man should be like this,1 A; N) p: u0 |8 W) g' o
and I am helping you to improve', P6 N3 _$ Z# g5 q$ X* F( \; x
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You are loving me ; d) L' g7 P3 r. d/ i& E8 G# I. K
or that one in your mind? 1 F* Y& ^" t4 p( j% `0 HMy mind is like a mud : a( }& D7 W1 B2 V4 B, Zcan be shaped whatever you want 6 j1 V G5 B5 S( G 8 Q6 d" F/ ?# p7 C: e- ?/ p- dunfortunalety not my heart 9 D# p+ x! D4 ]' v, qIt is slashed by you - N: b; v* n2 T/ `9 g T
and I am seriously hurt ' g. _* ^# E: L' n$ a. h4 T! R5 v2 R5 ^8 q
I will never love another # F; z& h/ j$ m' j2 pIf my heart can be fixed
sweeite, # g9 S2 @# s* {. `9 x1 E+ [7 mi am sorry to say that ur poem sucks.! ?2 K4 B7 i9 S
And this is something I change. Whatever left r too sucky to be changed: d7 Z5 v8 c; [# v3 f" S
. x; N) W" Z% v; Twith the charm, # E7 Y$ ~! M7 `9 m* gwith the simles.. f/ _+ g7 W: c" \, w, ~
I fell in love with you 3 N5 R9 U9 d! _) q/ x% l0 a
In the first sign. # P# s6 {8 @8 |6 L3 D" W# I) RAs spotting sky at a summer / b7 i4 M$ T0 M$ o
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Your lip is so soft 9 B- S8 B0 }: Y! h& D: L1 Z$ ?there is not honey can sweeter than ur kiss7 s# I; z5 p' X: v& J- M$ O
Your body is so sexy . X" M+ M( z' P( |And I cannt image the moment I touch u. ' W9 n1 i1 J D5 ~: d7 { { : M( V& Z O" s8 G) |I am deeply in love+ U! d9 j% x0 F" a% ~+ S
Everything from you is so charming+ N- {9 J3 |" ?* M8 @0 {- }
although You r so picky for me ' y% A; q& g) ?' d! p, p
And I take them as ur buttefly feelings.
THis is the poem in SNTC S2 and it is not a good one 2.) Z' ~5 o$ ^$ L! a0 u: `7 A) I
But u can copy the way how she ranges the poem 9 y5 C G A4 l ~* ^. X( X( L# s 0 u6 g, F" F: w% g0 N; w; W/ V: t & |+ A3 w/ Q+ dHis hello is the end of her endings, F% |0 h, ]- W% Z# b8 V0 c
Her laugh is their first step down the aisle ! P( N" n: J8 a5 M" hHis hand would be hers to hold forever! o. I- H' f8 r0 K1 n$ q1 f
His forever is simply as her smile 7 H: o! y( i# z' Y5 _
He said she was what was missing + U( Z$ h5 C) g2 X+ W* k& Q% nShe said instantly she knew & x1 ^8 o- `: L( s! _She was a question to be answered % m4 k5 L! {& m, j0 A0 `! E* eAnd his answer is 1 X6 @! w2 g* X$ D8 NI do
Rain bow, you are so right. You improved it , and now it is much better. Seems you also like poems. that is good and wish to keep in touch with each other. Merry Xmas ( Y- b( \0 Q7 q& Y' |9 o) M! [4 ~1 {- n; [! [3 k: g/ h
Below is my new one, any comment?
It’s amazing how I felt/ b3 i+ x4 Z$ i- M& K2 {: J
7 Q- u, X2 N9 V. PIt's amazing how I felt * s T( h8 Y8 ?
when I was with you 1 b3 f9 d0 q% P1 |* y6 M) |4 EMy heart beat so fast) @' M g+ G8 y, ?$ P
I looked at you and thought) O* ^ Q1 w0 ?2 X, |
Holy Jesus, you were so cute9 D& g" V' Y1 p9 g# x; Q* v' j
; w3 D9 Z+ `9 T0 ]You left me without a word, B) Z( M, d; X; \! A
I have nothing except my emptiness . F, ~# i4 T: e: Y% b1 {My mood is like a cloud 2 k2 ?: S; w- [+ z' |2 k4 c' ZHow could it be dispersed? 1 |4 G9 X( e- f1 a( B: W ' D6 ]- t; t9 @Feelings bite my heart ' `5 x; j: z5 }/ n$ ZYou are the right one I wait; V$ a1 P( `8 i/ W
In the depth of my soul5 ~; J. X4 e% y- l' [" p" ^$ g- F) X
I will love you till I'm dead