Falling in love + o. t1 I }$ S' `% m- E5 k 4 Y; E/ L5 G' O* jI fell in love with you 1 H! g q% n0 h- y" n
At the first week we met+ l. y K4 z1 J2 _' w/ a* u
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You have charm, you have looks 6 h' u7 X) E& i* |6 r. pwith full of pimples in face/ M/ H+ X) o; O2 n
As spotting sky at a summer night / A2 ?; H [) LThey are shining stars0 e! e6 m0 ]5 R
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Your lip is so big! i" _! p! z% u) A" T; j0 |6 l
And that’s good for a kiss $ p9 t; b0 t) ^" z9 S- x: AYour body is chubby- |" X9 t# ]6 Q: b, y
And that is good for sex& u1 P# N; r' p9 T! I4 v' |! c
B- H( {1 ~( K5 A4 v0 fI was deeply in love( O! V$ f8 P$ ^
Everything from you is positive. p* e3 `4 W* n
You blame me everything and everyday2 [: o+ G$ Y% @
And I think all girls sound like % a- y j3 C& K 3 A3 O$ Z! V3 x/ y. FYou could not stand my eating0 Y. n% C" ] C% e0 q/ H) c, ~
Saying no good for making funny sound 5 G4 ?* l# A& R/ e$ u7 W1 V& BI think you are perfectly right/ N2 Q& z' ]" l0 W9 C
Eating with sound is a pig( P8 \$ g5 O8 s. x3 m1 G
8 p @& P( B- W% AI fell in love with you % |0 A$ h' ~! N$ z) ]$ LBecome a fool to think% y! C! V2 f1 @' T
All trouble things you did+ M; { E9 y2 R
And that is the price for love5 J { j2 o8 }
$ o* G. S/ W3 O& W, R! Syou are deeply in love* \6 H: Z2 |4 R* j+ w) n) V
Everything from me is negative 8 n" P9 |4 y" o"My man should be like this,4 q: S a" c/ I. G
and I am helping you to improve'% E6 ^- }& g9 D6 p; T
, J# A% e0 Q- y; t( a; ~4 L, |! H! h: ~You are loving me 2 A' ^9 b T6 z3 s) l+ lor that one in your mind? 0 M# H8 A! N8 t# S( o2 }; F* sMy mind is like a mud 3 c" K$ l- l" N) J1 M4 e7 a3 Lcan be shaped whatever you want 7 C+ W9 e# ]9 G* y( _" d8 Q8 G. ?6 N
unfortunalety not my heart. k% U7 z! J* r5 y0 S% ]" z( d C
It is slashed by you 5 o8 P R& ?( Z) R9 p1 P. ] F N6 Kand I am seriously hurt0 j# J* }7 e, r7 b, C8 x
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I will never love another ) K$ P) Y4 N. B! o4 h; aIf my heart can be fixed
sweeite, " [' K! W: y9 v' V+ {6 W+ E, s) G; ?
i am sorry to say that ur poem sucks." ^3 v3 |0 F. ]0 ]1 A
And this is something I change. Whatever left r too sucky to be changed 1 f0 s" }- l" ~+ j; ]2 i( Q: p- h# i a( b: N! ~9 Nwith the charm, 0 I: `1 F- s0 b" g4 ]with the simles.1 I' F8 o9 k' \* s
I fell in love with you % _$ v6 p' ~- m9 U4 T
In the first sign. 4 b; ]& t+ n1 k, q, \7 ZAs spotting sky at a summer 1 A) B% ]" S7 r* L4 ^
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Your lip is so soft 5 v2 j% ^; x2 mthere is not honey can sweeter than ur kiss% U& l' a% x0 s% L; q
Your body is so sexy 7 a# {' z, M5 z3 ?8 lAnd I cannt image the moment I touch u.* ~5 W/ h- b$ d/ R% ^
9 M0 G' k3 L4 o3 W3 M+ V- R& U5 qI am deeply in love - T7 G% O% o' e) o% I. oEverything from you is so charming% {$ f! ^: J" s2 d0 h
although You r so picky for me 8 L r8 z Y T7 b' ~+ b# P; r
And I take them as ur buttefly feelings.
THis is the poem in SNTC S2 and it is not a good one 2.. F* I. e+ H: Z6 n5 G; k- H
But u can copy the way how she ranges the poem2 z' F8 h) _: u; k
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; [5 n$ N7 |8 P6 rHis hello is the end of her endings, L/ _% q I- u, r4 @% b- |
Her laugh is their first step down the aisle6 G) I2 E6 a+ ~8 s4 R% Z
His hand would be hers to hold forever( G! Z2 A8 I' \* Y, P
His forever is simply as her smile & A+ y$ o3 Q- Q& ` _He said she was what was missing 0 \2 O$ d. u {5 @She said instantly she knew 0 U. G8 y2 D# q3 k9 @She was a question to be answered3 O2 n0 K- R9 R) N0 w
And his answer is 9 i1 f* l, V, \
I do
Rain bow, you are so right. You improved it , and now it is much better. Seems you also like poems. that is good and wish to keep in touch with each other. Merry Xmas8 ]1 L7 P, @- `! K' R7 r) f
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Below is my new one, any comment?
It’s amazing how I felt 5 l' |2 v: F- K q+ l4 }# A5 F0 B% m: Y, {
It's amazing how I felt x0 F, J. d. B4 q3 s! A3 c$ U
when I was with you 5 ?$ o( H+ g ], |% gMy heart beat so fast. {& l( r2 A! ?% }
I looked at you and thought) e; F9 i Y) t8 v7 C
Holy Jesus, you were so cute $ ~3 d5 V7 x) e7 d s1 ?6 y, c0 b" V0 n8 j. \6 t
You left me without a word- _% t! a7 `: V& @& U0 f; z
I have nothing except my emptiness( m' c0 O' Z7 _, w9 \
My mood is like a cloud + f# S6 o5 q+ l" M; B! ~How could it be dispersed? & W4 z' c8 B) Y3 r2 d: U+ X$ X" T$ u + n' [+ N0 b9 K# y3 [. y% AFeelings bite my heart . `6 D, S2 g) W! c. {0 m
You are the right one I wait 2 R( V4 w2 u+ _) U4 aIn the depth of my soul1 _; i' K4 R" F& S# Y& }: }
I will love you till I'm dead