Falling in love # a. O: d, m" p6 [8 q1 u! ^6 z2 \2 v0 Z; @' q- Y# q* i6 F. y
I fell in love with you 0 [) Z: [ d9 I
At the first week we met : R% u* c% |; I4 g" b$ Q. {! s' o2 G" J; ?2 C8 l* q1 N
You have charm, you have looks) f5 x. ^2 W! M5 |3 N8 S1 j5 G
with full of pimples in face ; D3 ~4 ~1 Z7 C) F0 uAs spotting sky at a summer night & R/ m3 B0 O/ A ?) d" Q! `; f. NThey are shining stars 4 u6 Q* q0 u( u9 F4 {4 N* @8 p& f7 e7 m. J
Your lip is so big 8 S' e2 u; n0 G d( ^And that’s good for a kiss/ t6 z0 x( G# W* O
Your body is chubby # C% c; ]+ D( m+ a( y' Z UAnd that is good for sex. x( }0 i- l5 w8 U2 F
. _) r/ r h' ^" F II was deeply in love 3 k7 q9 f5 B; }: P" P! E( yEverything from you is positive ! L$ Y; q1 ]( T) p% LYou blame me everything and everyday 3 U) Z) |6 q7 oAnd I think all girls sound like' |; [* ^4 U+ A0 X' y
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You could not stand my eating 3 o& ~+ z: r/ ]# A1 a& h8 q5 USaying no good for making funny sound 0 _# T! R+ [, m- c( ZI think you are perfectly right* G$ F6 p$ `5 m3 Z U
Eating with sound is a pig + Q* S0 p2 o! V& K1 g2 w ) W: g2 l- y& I& {, \) Q& II fell in love with you - W# F& C! N8 N4 i6 |0 A$ `& ?
Become a fool to think) f1 p! t* C9 b4 T$ u! {9 ]
All trouble things you did/ _4 _3 n! o8 m1 A7 j
And that is the price for love + q5 i0 X% Z' i) D! Q 3 s8 s9 N1 I8 A/ K- g, Zyou are deeply in love# o" H* j; Z% j9 F) ]$ c# O
Everything from me is negative( S+ C/ q) q. c: |% s% g2 `
"My man should be like this, ; b; U' \$ H' `' I% H/ Cand I am helping you to improve'5 W. \1 o0 P( P7 w0 r8 F
; p: o" D; P3 H0 B* CYou are loving me ' _- k8 J4 Q$ i, t% I0 ^- y
or that one in your mind?0 U R2 ^4 w. L# o e6 `
My mind is like a mud @& \1 U4 C V" f$ P
can be shaped whatever you want; z3 t: d, Z6 J& v- f
# f' Y2 S: ?! u+ ~$ V8 vunfortunalety not my heart! r2 y& C/ M% \0 t
It is slashed by you ) T. |2 G% {6 s
and I am seriously hurt4 q2 G# z! i' W9 r! U" u
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I will never love another 2 q* F* S6 P) f0 Y3 S
If my heart can be fixed
sweeite, 0 q2 z9 @* c1 R- wi am sorry to say that ur poem sucks. ; m: P% C, ]& Y5 T1 {And this is something I change. Whatever left r too sucky to be changed 7 D' N% G' L; ^9 E2 \ ! m; I: S; v. q Dwith the charm,3 x6 s, m' z- A" F
with the simles. & j- v, n5 w) n8 J0 bI fell in love with you / s$ E8 R- o& I; H5 r/ Y) pIn the first sign. 8 B0 Z4 }" o; g8 d' V3 z* HAs spotting sky at a summer 3 D; K* R5 Z8 m: E# [/ E
1 f* l! y& K" T) R( vYour lip is so soft , }9 e5 N* a% R
there is not honey can sweeter than ur kiss( b# z9 D3 _" o, J
Your body is so sexy ( e& s5 I& }6 Q% v' I- b" ]* m0 MAnd I cannt image the moment I touch u. & P* G: |/ ?& N 6 m: ^: M$ ?6 T% y- xI am deeply in love $ a# U, W, w- g- a+ q5 NEverything from you is so charming % t2 N9 s c0 \although You r so picky for me * j# \: T; v* O1 U& Z- E5 MAnd I take them as ur buttefly feelings.
THis is the poem in SNTC S2 and it is not a good one 2." V8 r7 i4 w2 d# F
But u can copy the way how she ranges the poem E1 g! R9 s& `! G: C 0 w, w4 C& {3 H0 |$ Y: H( s; q# p$ Z0 ?
His hello is the end of her endings / u0 `( r* n8 O9 @. UHer laugh is their first step down the aisle) j+ `) ~1 g( W/ o1 ^
His hand would be hers to hold forever9 K- Y5 h; }3 U: ]
His forever is simply as her smile # D8 ^, I# y& q6 M$ wHe said she was what was missing ! H4 {6 {+ z& P* X2 ] |% {She said instantly she knew + M7 D4 V7 X( t* gShe was a question to be answered: }3 c! o C4 c* F8 [; j
And his answer is 6 ?' O) E3 p/ J* B& g& f% S
I do
Rain bow, you are so right. You improved it , and now it is much better. Seems you also like poems. that is good and wish to keep in touch with each other. Merry Xmas # F, ]! [2 \' z2 E- Y ) @' {5 w/ {& V& `- s+ x( vBelow is my new one, any comment?
It’s amazing how I felt, n" y6 W; `% \# N( j1 S) ?4 L: C
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It's amazing how I felt % ]# [. r6 P7 L" d7 d; u
when I was with you ) ~- x! y/ H0 n' L( ]5 |My heart beat so fast4 T$ y" z ^. ]
I looked at you and thought * m0 K+ N( e9 O& W- Z' h! t4 yHoly Jesus, you were so cute * I& O$ T4 B2 H C& Z ! A G7 C7 H9 J) k: F/ KYou left me without a word 4 R3 I# ?; M& V( QI have nothing except my emptiness # j9 ?4 G0 f# FMy mood is like a cloud: h, ]4 [2 N9 ^8 x7 _8 \6 x
How could it be dispersed?6 y/ V) ]6 Z" j: ~
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Feelings bite my heart / b2 U9 `8 o* Y' @1 b+ IYou are the right one I wait3 J7 Y1 p% _, C- j6 _. p. `& }
In the depth of my soul ( k) p3 e v8 T8 ~ k. |% Y% VI will love you till I'm dead