! o/ H' T3 I: ?% ~, s; j; ?! HI fell in love with you 3 u" u9 B# Q6 I% p. \" R6 dAt the first week we met ' L7 e+ h8 g+ V8 Y, q9 w- ]: F 8 n1 w9 i6 M% C8 l; YYou have charm, you have looks 4 \0 \: Q G, J# | twith full of pimples in face & n% b4 x, U. G9 eAs spotting sky at a summer night # j# a P9 d9 r9 u% YThey are shining stars + t6 e: H6 n, d: {! @( ` \7 l2 q, u; m$ F
Your lip is so big 2 Q: f" g/ `: _; _/ H U7 Z) \7 p; xAnd that’s good for a kiss* v3 W0 H* j6 X* X( z
Your body is chubby " T: }( K, C1 `! q _/ J- T6 [And that is good for sex : Y! B$ h2 w8 a; K 2 q1 J) z O" p) q" SI was deeply in love }3 B) O0 F8 b( I2 C, C1 U8 E
Everything from you is positive * g1 X% D- b/ p2 E) uYou blame me everything and everyday 0 d; Y: a; u8 C7 {% jAnd I think all girls sound like. t- ]1 [; G0 v( U- y0 W
$ H& c' F: w# `7 [$ U6 vYou could not stand my eating) P0 e$ R7 x3 n
Saying no good for making funny sound 8 d' V" }0 c# a7 Z- P# X! WI think you are perfectly right : [9 j2 U- J# ^& jEating with sound is a pig1 Y% E+ S' {' Y' S2 j2 b) r
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I fell in love with you 2 M+ U+ V, L* H( B2 i" u7 j; c' E) {/ vBecome a fool to think$ L8 n2 r. ^) \ O3 P/ }" P
All trouble things you did+ X; C& `5 o3 `, e& \" |5 a
And that is the price for love ) P2 I: _- C5 q 1 W2 _& E" K6 I' b( G* }you are deeply in love 9 m) b6 w: h FEverything from me is negative; z% |# j8 U" Z5 g
"My man should be like this,7 C1 ^8 l2 q# D( q; L& t5 Z
and I am helping you to improve' 5 U7 D1 H: H$ h2 \' n. ]# S( \* z/ A p* m/ ?
You are loving me ( V4 \( }" p% B8 ?$ l& c
or that one in your mind?; Q) l M2 L* R3 \. o; _: l( C
My mind is like a mud5 M* T! k# z. E
can be shaped whatever you want1 k& D6 B: p* R' v: ^' k& {; ?
& Q' i' h* Q+ {. Hunfortunalety not my heart& k' M% H6 _9 G* W
It is slashed by you ; ?" J0 A; b! s0 A
and I am seriously hurt* ?6 q9 N8 S( D- \1 B, K
N/ h5 k* b% c5 \5 W. u. AI will never love another ) z: B& P |. \: n8 O4 C
If my heart can be fixed
sweeite, : E9 t7 \: z0 c+ c* Yi am sorry to say that ur poem sucks.1 q* a% n% C& W/ u# X
And this is something I change. Whatever left r too sucky to be changed/ ^7 E! Z3 b2 I! e6 F, o8 {( G/ ~
/ q3 p, i7 S2 s2 O& J( f0 Xwith the charm, * I. W0 h, o Owith the simles. 2 E1 N! a; A$ H! h$ ^I fell in love with you 1 R) a- F8 s+ W- s6 R& y4 P3 nIn the first sign. @2 v m7 {% s9 q' ~As spotting sky at a summer 4 i* C+ p9 D% \) \7 {% i
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Your lip is so soft ) M, _8 v* a* [9 T) w* V6 qthere is not honey can sweeter than ur kiss: [) K! J& ?- N- i! k; O1 X
Your body is so sexy $ v9 q% o+ L; {, b8 o9 PAnd I cannt image the moment I touch u. : V* F! ~% [0 T, O3 {8 U% o) T; u7 ~+ @. w' u& W4 ^% R. _
I am deeply in love- _8 S; [2 j; A" l# h. q, K
Everything from you is so charming1 G" y( W: l; ?" x2 V6 g( Y
although You r so picky for me , E; M5 v7 B, _: [& z
And I take them as ur buttefly feelings.
THis is the poem in SNTC S2 and it is not a good one 2. ! d" h: k$ a" e- X) s+ JBut u can copy the way how she ranges the poem- {: z w2 S$ O7 T: \1 R
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His hello is the end of her endings" X/ U G5 }+ \
Her laugh is their first step down the aisle $ n( Z! a6 w' R* _) A9 O5 o& fHis hand would be hers to hold forever 2 Q7 Y! M0 z0 u4 U% a6 X# NHis forever is simply as her smile 7 N% V& n- H7 f2 K5 j+ u
He said she was what was missing# A9 l+ X w( ] D2 E
She said instantly she knew X% u2 B( o9 Q, U( NShe was a question to be answered9 O1 t9 {% a% s& i6 A
And his answer is 0 D; ?- o9 w* \$ Z6 H, @' V, v$ g1 vI do
Rain bow, you are so right. You improved it , and now it is much better. Seems you also like poems. that is good and wish to keep in touch with each other. Merry Xmas ; d6 l$ T z- `# R( ^! o6 l" U& e' a/ E4 l( P
Below is my new one, any comment?
It’s amazing how I felt 2 y" `# O2 \7 |# O 4 l9 V) u: Q# s5 w' Z+ L6 n, c* B9 hIt's amazing how I felt ( m7 t8 O4 ^: `& Awhen I was with you5 ^- r& z* F9 y5 Q6 p/ |& H
My heart beat so fast5 v$ B/ z' g6 J
I looked at you and thought * Y8 b6 S. a/ H: g6 Y% G- p( j0 ?Holy Jesus, you were so cute1 Q7 b* F; l2 l5 Z
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You left me without a word 8 Q# u+ V5 b+ d; K6 bI have nothing except my emptiness : G$ m$ i& k5 c* s) z0 GMy mood is like a cloud N* T- f8 U1 j& ~3 e1 I' }How could it be dispersed? ]7 n* |- z, Q/ b; K4 ?/ }
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Feelings bite my heart / ?; Y: q' J- i2 T8 v. M
You are the right one I wait+ |5 |& Y8 T% \: p8 N8 a) K7 Y
In the depth of my soul' v# h, T7 K F7 r4 s5 Z
I will love you till I'm dead