Falling in love 6 |% n u9 B$ s8 X. T) H2 c ; a1 I- C# A) H9 _9 s6 [I fell in love with you 0 A- N: y7 v) b, R' eAt the first week we met5 ~) I$ Y$ G; A" s! C$ x; W5 ]+ u; {
0 `3 r+ Q3 J* Q/ p. J! Y# TYou have charm, you have looks 3 \. T5 m8 i0 }with full of pimples in face $ S# \/ E2 E8 \) x9 SAs spotting sky at a summer night / C z' K( V/ [# S2 I) A! H0 V( EThey are shining stars; h- Q! e. |% U' j' w
. d9 g7 I7 K, \9 ~1 u2 X' A: aYour lip is so big) R& N; A2 }4 q6 _: s0 O( P# l
And that’s good for a kiss& v. V; n, U& H! T* H X/ q
Your body is chubby5 p" [4 v( S" m# M; X; J/ p3 i8 Q1 G
And that is good for sex/ |$ L- f4 c1 t- k( Q/ W
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I was deeply in love ' D* K8 |( b/ Y# v! u3 BEverything from you is positive + t2 y9 G3 |9 o' k* CYou blame me everything and everyday6 m# C% A# P, {6 o; C2 C" n
And I think all girls sound like + ^" b* |( K" b/ O1 P3 j* y2 O6 [! U& s7 N
You could not stand my eating2 D9 }9 y% X9 P6 ^" U4 C; M9 n8 K: c
Saying no good for making funny sound/ R+ o+ b& J) D& R4 `) F. z
I think you are perfectly right7 }3 W6 ~8 o# t
Eating with sound is a pig * o; _% y9 `3 g# _ [, G. O; L* w7 M4 Z9 j; k# B* a0 d9 p
I fell in love with you " J) z8 S, Q8 a- T% ]7 ?. MBecome a fool to think * ^# [# j r- j4 HAll trouble things you did " x: h5 D# X/ F- B* w% ]And that is the price for love) j5 c* a. @" ? H8 H
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you are deeply in love ) o* F; a" C5 c9 Z& nEverything from me is negative ' F, S$ C; a5 I' [, @"My man should be like this,& `( ^3 G/ g7 S; d6 S
and I am helping you to improve' ( T- d/ ~7 l- \" u5 P u - B/ y4 S& w: J# s ]You are loving me ) g7 @- t; C8 R7 J; i8 o4 u1 ]0 j
or that one in your mind? ' v" E) U; w/ k0 XMy mind is like a mud ! ]* |: v6 w0 ?7 A8 H: r0 y% @can be shaped whatever you want4 z& f. Y! [% J( x
$ Z. ]/ Z* b5 _) v- W+ d& Junfortunalety not my heart 5 U' h7 s; g# L, l! u% G" gIt is slashed by you 6 }4 `+ j" J* Y' @) ^5 L" s( \: \and I am seriously hurt ( h& l! i1 |6 S% i4 R9 `9 i- _; S q: r+ h& g# `7 I3 y
I will never love another 5 I" q4 J; O/ kIf my heart can be fixed
sweeite, , G) h" j, t$ }- hi am sorry to say that ur poem sucks.. x( _0 f$ [9 z. S2 C7 x+ U6 F$ Z
And this is something I change. Whatever left r too sucky to be changed7 Y% @8 `7 z! d' T
E" X" B0 G3 i0 Gwith the charm,% L& i" ?+ r' G% a/ i8 I
with the simles.0 v* ~! e$ a2 g& }( E
I fell in love with you ' l, E* l. a& R' Z' U' G) H
In the first sign. $ Z' t/ t( g5 T! q4 u+ L' e+ ?7 FAs spotting sky at a summer $ _7 [9 C/ q! m5 V5 y9 u/ e, t! m& P' C. i/ e7 _2 J
Your lip is so soft ! }: ~: M9 r; t: ythere is not honey can sweeter than ur kiss2 T% ^/ R2 ]: n, X$ T; F( O
Your body is so sexy 8 D7 ^3 p$ _5 J& W3 q. LAnd I cannt image the moment I touch u.5 d1 I! z J' z! z) e( \) b0 p
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I am deeply in love : \, G1 `/ }. v9 q# fEverything from you is so charming ) F* G- l1 ?1 T" G: r9 p K& |, qalthough You r so picky for me 7 g, R9 d( h' t: Y
And I take them as ur buttefly feelings.
THis is the poem in SNTC S2 and it is not a good one 2.0 w) N1 n. @3 t1 G* [4 I, b
But u can copy the way how she ranges the poem ) b8 ~" ~1 Z1 v6 P5 u! @6 L+ _ 7 j& y U: H) p2 ` / C) r1 @' m; e' A6 _5 ^/ CHis hello is the end of her endings2 e1 j+ h- s H6 T9 v# g+ P1 b% G' i
Her laugh is their first step down the aisle & |' d4 r$ r' \" mHis hand would be hers to hold forever& p: L" D4 i* ~0 q+ c. B
His forever is simply as her smile . O. R% i: y' w7 f1 h- _% _He said she was what was missing2 V1 A* d0 M& L. n6 \- y
She said instantly she knew # y, k- z# b; b `- o1 LShe was a question to be answered7 X$ F8 U3 k% [& U
And his answer is - U; @" k: W- f+ w4 k ?; Y
I do
Rain bow, you are so right. You improved it , and now it is much better. Seems you also like poems. that is good and wish to keep in touch with each other. Merry Xmas7 p! T& q. o% Q" r8 R9 I* i
( ^9 |6 c- c& j+ G# M& ~Below is my new one, any comment?
It’s amazing how I felt 0 V$ z9 W7 ^1 p [. s/ [0 u. E3 D0 @$ ?
It's amazing how I felt 8 o. P0 W( j$ Lwhen I was with you1 g5 m' v- N" V6 l; Z
My heart beat so fast + [- X" g8 V6 x0 TI looked at you and thought 1 y! e5 F' q ]) e6 j, dHoly Jesus, you were so cute, c" z8 ?$ g4 Z* A! O+ t: ^
* r3 Q1 v1 U5 k2 PYou left me without a word$ [1 z$ H' k! m/ Z1 D
I have nothing except my emptiness9 I* w: R4 ]3 @* Z4 b
My mood is like a cloud 4 T/ z, M+ l3 t* k9 ~7 @) w6 MHow could it be dispersed? 7 d9 o/ m4 t2 E I' y; M: l$ L' W: f, M5 ]( a
Feelings bite my heart 9 y, H0 A6 F6 N: r
You are the right one I wait% S2 v" m7 N* }$ S# V6 s( I9 a( l& u
In the depth of my soul 4 R, F& Y# `3 O0 CI will love you till I'm dead