/ G1 `. W* B3 u& {I fell in love with you # N. K- Y2 T. L; S/ h9 ]6 p! _$ U
At the first week we met # ^2 `" a9 n; |1 a) f: T/ E 6 v; f. @' h/ ~" ]& |( RYou have charm, you have looks2 K( ^! _+ X" E! f4 s
with full of pimples in face ! w, n% _8 [4 z2 _3 F( l* A, h( y. m+ ZAs spotting sky at a summer night4 u4 I% X3 Y' \/ X* l
They are shining stars 5 B- \& T9 h9 K- l8 c 7 r7 x0 n3 M# `Your lip is so big+ T n" u2 f. Q: ?
And that’s good for a kiss- b: s$ \- `6 k4 ~) f0 @
Your body is chubby 0 j" @/ j. q3 H$ ?0 u. U* U$ U- QAnd that is good for sex- }$ c9 C: `& Z# L0 B+ O
7 v. X1 A/ ]4 F1 mI was deeply in love ) ?8 Z+ _4 n& E6 pEverything from you is positive" D( x3 _# q' e3 F- G' V6 r* w
You blame me everything and everyday& |* J Y, E9 }: q5 L8 [" z: ~
And I think all girls sound like% W4 F2 w1 }% ~# ?
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You could not stand my eating 4 N# N" W/ r! K# g0 ?6 D0 wSaying no good for making funny sound" @2 h; S% L! R7 r! M6 H) P
I think you are perfectly right 1 o* ^& N2 s" ~3 B7 @: EEating with sound is a pig* \$ D6 h% u; W- v9 T( a
$ Y; ?4 t8 y( HI fell in love with you % m" r9 T+ A" j" [) c# LBecome a fool to think% ~1 A/ J( a Y
All trouble things you did ( Q, R1 b9 Q! n/ s; C9 {And that is the price for love1 J9 C% y# {! G6 g, {7 `
. d( R# B' n1 I: L8 P9 p Fyou are deeply in love( y- W; N5 G7 v" S9 s
Everything from me is negative: v- e" A5 b2 E0 }0 D
"My man should be like this,$ z/ A6 u4 Q+ K: _: @& S
and I am helping you to improve'& Q# E( G: c' I6 @ ?0 z! c
& s% K: P; E6 r/ F+ [9 D( I5 sYou are loving me - l) i% i3 n* ^8 T4 g6 cor that one in your mind?/ G% U# p' s% g& I
My mind is like a mud6 M+ M- w; G) @3 K1 [# s
can be shaped whatever you want2 K* n, ^) X% K2 ~0 q2 t* O
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unfortunalety not my heart5 {5 t6 v* c' V7 z+ M- H$ |2 B
It is slashed by you * ~( R G6 \8 c4 G) |and I am seriously hurt ' V8 Y9 J- F, d u* d/ Q 3 @ F( D; _8 \5 t; ZI will never love another : `3 q2 K0 e3 O
If my heart can be fixed
sweeite, ' ]0 ^2 B4 I+ B+ K* N1 F2 b5 zi am sorry to say that ur poem sucks.' K! T2 B v- N/ U7 L2 V
And this is something I change. Whatever left r too sucky to be changed7 g( i8 K E+ B9 o$ _2 v
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with the charm, # I3 \4 y8 z8 s0 Q% _with the simles.8 ?0 @* V5 F6 }, u
I fell in love with you , Z" r- w2 ]/ t+ eIn the first sign. " [1 z% w+ k6 h5 }9 dAs spotting sky at a summer 6 |* i8 {$ }8 u6 b$ @/ \% O " A+ d& ~0 E: H3 W0 z2 {; z3 ?Your lip is so soft 5 N: A8 e/ x0 S- U! e# |' p% ithere is not honey can sweeter than ur kiss 2 Q& `/ z; b" I$ kYour body is so sexy + h0 b3 \) l/ C9 D7 h3 UAnd I cannt image the moment I touch u.% n* t, B9 x6 u' O2 J% B y- ^: ?
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I am deeply in love+ F$ y5 {) ^$ d7 c
Everything from you is so charming2 h$ W; b5 a; A% z. n5 g! n
although You r so picky for me ) o+ e( ^4 x7 }* A8 [
And I take them as ur buttefly feelings.
THis is the poem in SNTC S2 and it is not a good one 2. ' i4 [. X* q( b4 mBut u can copy the way how she ranges the poem ( `3 z8 \$ M+ F& w: \# l* s 6 N1 ^( u, t4 V2 [" s; J7 L* h1 {% O6 {3 l: n+ \5 W
His hello is the end of her endings - r3 M: g" f, n8 o8 x6 j0 h7 o; s4 HHer laugh is their first step down the aisle5 h! c6 l6 o) X; r/ ]( F
His hand would be hers to hold forever 5 q! h- W7 l9 S# N3 }% ZHis forever is simply as her smile 4 R; h9 a8 b' N# f$ FHe said she was what was missing2 ^9 E2 x3 y" P) c0 P
She said instantly she knew3 c. O. {! X: ~. }6 }9 ~+ z
She was a question to be answered 6 U8 O& T2 ?# T2 DAnd his answer is . h/ r) u% U: ]% _* P: \$ `I do
Rain bow, you are so right. You improved it , and now it is much better. Seems you also like poems. that is good and wish to keep in touch with each other. Merry Xmas3 P2 n9 h( v- r- r& ~
5 B) C3 f( Y) g' B: ^: _Below is my new one, any comment?
It’s amazing how I felt 8 @5 o6 E. [4 h( p- w4 r2 R/ k U% [( Q0 b) b
It's amazing how I felt , X% v9 b% {6 N {, rwhen I was with you* S' t+ d3 g. M" s! T* r+ C
My heart beat so fast) g0 w# n, U0 h. S- z5 |& x
I looked at you and thought3 q: p5 ]' e; f- {3 L: _
Holy Jesus, you were so cute + D; Y) ^8 K7 l: h/ z( q$ \5 G" Z& [! R
You left me without a word ; J7 G2 e) k, x! B. WI have nothing except my emptiness % t: D( R) o" U! K) Q8 N d; q- YMy mood is like a cloud 9 Q8 i- |1 u5 Y, K: N; `( QHow could it be dispersed? 9 W0 m0 A, v) z4 ] & d' c' }( ~# j' q/ A4 |* RFeelings bite my heart 5 G& G4 A9 ^; F$ |! U/ W- z9 |You are the right one I wait5 I L* D: l/ o( T8 D+ P# h" |
In the depth of my soul / L% k. j/ `% Q; ~I will love you till I'm dead