Falling in love: E* v; _ v3 }4 Y" o
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I fell in love with you ) |) I5 J3 L$ iAt the first week we met ' U4 n6 Y$ v0 k! C5 p4 ^- ?4 a4 k4 T" D/ J; @
You have charm, you have looks + x V$ w( S0 n4 b+ Iwith full of pimples in face- v$ q) W* W3 @. [( n; I2 a
As spotting sky at a summer night6 k y* ]4 Y/ {' t: Q
They are shining stars# b! F& Y( g4 y) T; e$ g! y" Q
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Your lip is so big- S+ a1 Q. l1 L4 `! L* ^5 u
And that’s good for a kiss + Y: v7 @1 w* b( nYour body is chubby , o+ }7 f, H6 o6 [2 s$ C! u1 yAnd that is good for sex 1 t1 q* K5 L- r / E' q F2 C8 j& [) W( [1 II was deeply in love5 U* L' p% g" Z1 ?. W
Everything from you is positive * ?2 q x3 Y- k* [% ZYou blame me everything and everyday, |! }' J3 j) S7 s$ {% _
And I think all girls sound like) n d4 k" K7 N4 r% u- P: a
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You could not stand my eating* C+ F0 a7 F! o6 ?8 [- n
Saying no good for making funny sound . w- {& E/ u3 B) II think you are perfectly right: b! m# C* G* E8 H
Eating with sound is a pig 3 a1 L% ^: ~( Q+ V" y 3 ~; r% M! @2 x9 JI fell in love with you ) h6 Z% R. }7 w. L1 VBecome a fool to think 5 B( ]9 n) M5 E! D7 k, x. n+ kAll trouble things you did , p/ A. Z# Z; }. ^ ^! L6 UAnd that is the price for love ; Z) G8 i) D4 K8 j7 \& s Q( _% l. G- ], X: m0 H( J
you are deeply in love @' K, D% ?* z& Q G9 Q: m% ~
Everything from me is negative 4 r6 m4 [' B4 W" D, G' J: n"My man should be like this, ' [' H E9 W D i& g/ s4 dand I am helping you to improve') M8 r0 `& e& j' a
4 H; s! R$ v; [! OYou are loving me % z' u1 s" Z- w& r( g" k
or that one in your mind?/ v) n. a# \- d$ K" }( `2 m; A
My mind is like a mud. F" u! Z3 e+ Q) }
can be shaped whatever you want 2 m( }% C9 \! ?* g1 f0 v/ o& Q7 q( T' _, {% D; Z
unfortunalety not my heart0 x9 h$ R1 h: r1 J2 [: ~. m
It is slashed by you $ ?7 B0 s# e" g9 e0 s6 l
and I am seriously hurt & s4 S( q9 u8 }& @. V3 n8 I$ v9 a) d% Q' ?
I will never love another - l% ?+ [) p, M$ g" h1 n: P
If my heart can be fixed
sweeite, / Z0 ]! A$ V3 ]- E. D
i am sorry to say that ur poem sucks. ' @0 ^3 Z: v7 V4 v- N5 F: G! [And this is something I change. Whatever left r too sucky to be changed " B! w. f3 r5 W# l+ P5 a* u' q9 J! l& r* i
with the charm, 3 F* k" P" Y; W' Vwith the simles.0 k @; Z6 E! _) \! V2 x" q
I fell in love with you 3 \/ q1 P* Z0 m3 b7 ]; n% j sIn the first sign. " n/ m# s! k; Q% y, X/ L2 lAs spotting sky at a summer , e9 U! f. L" W& c! m& D 2 `: u/ e1 J/ p7 Y7 jYour lip is so soft : h9 z# W! n s
there is not honey can sweeter than ur kiss0 w' _) ]1 `2 K' x8 V
Your body is so sexy- {' f/ W& F: P3 R9 z5 ~2 h, H
And I cannt image the moment I touch u. 5 u6 i F# [- E& f* ]3 U" d4 ] 8 w3 [6 W- ~0 D( h& ]/ v$ XI am deeply in love' L' A0 z. n2 e. ?! t
Everything from you is so charming 3 @+ d+ B K% N( W+ palthough You r so picky for me ! V4 |( _# i+ u8 z6 y. y& [/ B A# Y* [7 ^And I take them as ur buttefly feelings.
THis is the poem in SNTC S2 and it is not a good one 2. ' K( M+ ]# a* J: u2 n. r6 f5 UBut u can copy the way how she ranges the poem ' J4 ?0 c N2 }0 G l! \ x$ M7 Z/ `% z# j5 s
- O& T c$ W: w$ WHis hello is the end of her endings 7 U+ H) P# \4 s- I$ D5 w9 aHer laugh is their first step down the aisle+ h3 ?1 P% n' B; l2 K7 v5 ]
His hand would be hers to hold forever; f4 v8 P3 R5 x9 p9 D; g2 ~ K
His forever is simply as her smile $ I" y- Z" n& m M8 r+ X
He said she was what was missing0 I& u# D* G0 M& R
She said instantly she knew ; G# B) `9 ]. {4 yShe was a question to be answered 2 J5 }7 O* s& ]' @. L: X+ JAnd his answer is 4 R2 L2 K O/ _3 f, I1 C( i( e+ lI do
Rain bow, you are so right. You improved it , and now it is much better. Seems you also like poems. that is good and wish to keep in touch with each other. Merry Xmas * J8 M% C- V! i4 D1 i& ~6 S- Q$ [( x' h) I3 t- F0 L, y
Below is my new one, any comment?
It’s amazing how I felt % x4 [- V+ O3 w5 P& Q. U4 j" s! F! J' r: p5 g& a
It's amazing how I felt 3 h" s) ]. Q. x* Ywhen I was with you, s: N7 v8 X U" W6 t% J
My heart beat so fast8 f- U: ^- P2 i; s
I looked at you and thought3 `% L# M& D8 [
Holy Jesus, you were so cute 1 X6 [' v8 \9 |3 j! _9 r% g ( `, R% G2 t1 y% p" y/ q- iYou left me without a word; L0 s! D) w' V
I have nothing except my emptiness % {1 K6 B/ l7 {My mood is like a cloud ' j2 d5 h' w; K5 I% sHow could it be dispersed? 6 m' {+ M* \' K/ v2 z6 S ( s& H/ l8 P6 V4 }0 Q1 VFeelings bite my heart 3 }# `" w8 s8 C! [5 F
You are the right one I wait c/ F# \' P: q$ i
In the depth of my soul4 P/ P3 n8 F5 M2 x1 K
I will love you till I'm dead