Falling in love 0 ~4 M8 v/ Q/ }! M* M- L5 {8 K7 T, L' u+ d+ C7 Z
I fell in love with you 1 ~/ o; D0 y2 {6 s, T3 u5 t7 V
At the first week we met - P- q% N4 m+ W# G) i4 Z I& Z 8 u# S& Q9 @( yYou have charm, you have looks . Q$ g- q9 q0 G ]with full of pimples in face % ?- N7 @/ d, AAs spotting sky at a summer night" a% u% n w2 a3 R5 F B
They are shining stars1 f# M; {) m5 P
0 k4 @! d: G0 c2 tYour lip is so big" N) }7 p3 B% x2 G% X6 ]3 c# B
And that’s good for a kiss : P A: B0 I' ^& R1 G- f2 cYour body is chubby9 q4 D! J6 f& u+ b" H
And that is good for sex : z3 R5 r ~7 D8 c V ; w1 B9 @/ [" A2 U) xI was deeply in love+ Y) X5 T' f. t, B! o8 W
Everything from you is positive ^- B* Y/ m* E/ H! G; ~) _
You blame me everything and everyday 1 N- t6 ^- D- j7 \8 ]And I think all girls sound like 0 G6 E: s+ O' D' I% j3 S! ~& H$ \' S: |
You could not stand my eating ) n9 H$ e* s4 ]2 v b3 O& ^4 |' i5 C" `Saying no good for making funny sound ! j, x; X% Y" [/ tI think you are perfectly right# ~( H4 |$ k0 W" c/ Z- q9 N5 i, i
Eating with sound is a pig 3 I/ h5 I$ W F* q9 _ O+ d& ]) l- M% _4 d6 t) P
I fell in love with you 3 K3 \0 o9 q* T. k1 n
Become a fool to think 5 N7 {$ V) N! U7 G5 mAll trouble things you did" G) \" X# L, L8 [* g5 y# `9 O
And that is the price for love2 `2 o1 b! t5 R
3 O2 J. h+ t- t/ Y' j* ayou are deeply in love* T2 |! l% l( u9 N
Everything from me is negative 9 f2 L- J" g5 Z- A7 e"My man should be like this, . M/ D: i3 s" g+ H x9 `and I am helping you to improve'8 Q% G7 c/ [9 O6 z$ d2 J2 T- x G
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You are loving me " p, i u6 a) r2 Z6 @6 @or that one in your mind?; n8 p @2 c' Z# \7 A G
My mind is like a mud. o3 Z+ M- d1 A, y0 ^
can be shaped whatever you want 7 h$ }9 i% s6 y" P5 @ * u4 B k3 J" o$ ^) _unfortunalety not my heart . y' k3 ^% |/ Y+ \0 y/ M) t& SIt is slashed by you . Z% w L3 b: c g$ }6 Land I am seriously hurt- n3 } u( l3 o; X) h* q; k# D- m
0 o6 R$ S* A1 R$ h1 MI will never love another + T7 S( W4 C' h( m$ L# t) d1 VIf my heart can be fixed
sweeite, 4 N* w, I- \3 O+ |4 L4 m+ I1 c- Yi am sorry to say that ur poem sucks. 7 h. b! |1 ^$ r w. x+ o) \) J/ ^And this is something I change. Whatever left r too sucky to be changed3 ^8 M7 b+ b! l+ n1 I1 Y! K& {
: t* d/ |( Q: u' gwith the charm, " [5 x2 b, D; e4 L1 wwith the simles.+ Q e: }7 q, K$ Y7 k
I fell in love with you . y2 o5 B# h; ?+ U! E
In the first sign. , b. c! O* P& k1 K5 x* vAs spotting sky at a summer / a4 T* H. l' W/ T; e! y3 |# i/ C! J+ ^* _- }! x) }
Your lip is so soft 7 h2 T7 b2 U# x$ o
there is not honey can sweeter than ur kiss0 g5 o6 H o/ ^$ q$ [5 W. g
Your body is so sexy ' s. V( n! V4 R" C/ kAnd I cannt image the moment I touch u.- }/ c2 u) p) l/ x
4 O4 T9 ?6 \% J0 oI am deeply in love 1 p% ]0 U+ L& Z2 G, G" tEverything from you is so charming- c% n! w1 x' V, K1 q! u
although You r so picky for me & M5 \" g7 ^: p( C
And I take them as ur buttefly feelings.
THis is the poem in SNTC S2 and it is not a good one 2. 3 z3 ~4 Z3 g* T' n- a1 ]! k e) ?3 ~2 eBut u can copy the way how she ranges the poem " p- Y8 I- D4 {# h' f' @; t6 M' O/ _( N2 S: x1 H% o
$ o# E2 b' ~# F: w6 `. [3 ]5 FHis hello is the end of her endings 2 ?; s$ A! T% X1 O/ gHer laugh is their first step down the aisle 6 z. B/ Q8 t! x+ _8 y) y5 P# THis hand would be hers to hold forever+ s( n7 E5 k1 l4 ^% L
His forever is simply as her smile ) I& S* D# W% d: k
He said she was what was missing * e7 s5 Z& r# P0 Q. N% A6 i# _$ gShe said instantly she knew. ~6 u6 A& f0 {, C1 Y8 ]) ?
She was a question to be answered( s: b* {/ [5 Z/ x/ F; Y
And his answer is 5 L9 @( i1 ]+ x8 e6 }6 g
I do
Rain bow, you are so right. You improved it , and now it is much better. Seems you also like poems. that is good and wish to keep in touch with each other. Merry Xmas ) h0 A3 U$ H0 `9 [/ C . B; U' V2 d% x1 cBelow is my new one, any comment?
It’s amazing how I felt . H- @, K0 y. S6 B) m/ R . f7 ^+ @' u. |It's amazing how I felt # I4 k7 L2 }% M# ?% {& h! J, X
when I was with you* s" p0 `+ |$ ]" S6 [% \7 w
My heart beat so fast % O; S- @# ?* D) EI looked at you and thought - Z$ {- q' B! z( }; O- c4 Y. {Holy Jesus, you were so cute 7 a) p& _5 w" W# X" Q$ u0 R0 U% K7 K: F) ?' y- A d. N
You left me without a word! q9 D8 d3 S. M, ^
I have nothing except my emptiness 9 |4 ]; f' i8 V9 D QMy mood is like a cloud 3 X; h7 h X) u! I! Y, u) w9 e" T/ bHow could it be dispersed?5 Q+ A- k2 J& e( [, t
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Feelings bite my heart ! O1 H6 {$ \. ~8 E c1 `/ c! L/ n
You are the right one I wait5 x' E5 V9 Y0 Z! _7 V( f
In the depth of my soul 9 [7 ]1 Y+ G0 Z. W% d1 L( f$ KI will love you till I'm dead