Falling in love% Z. ^/ f( c# f) C
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I fell in love with you + x. F1 r5 K& J+ T) Y) b. SAt the first week we met, X9 P( }+ M( Z5 P
# ^" ~1 H) J# K4 R& EYou have charm, you have looks# D$ g2 t7 v9 m
with full of pimples in face " o- k* ], W/ JAs spotting sky at a summer night " X/ y* I% L. p- H5 f2 i0 mThey are shining stars* D% V3 ]* Z% ~6 s7 {/ Q6 D' o2 r4 n
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Your lip is so big* \( G( ]8 N" q- v. z) \1 m
And that’s good for a kiss / t, V+ d; H) M! ]- d- NYour body is chubby/ q5 T+ v. _9 z
And that is good for sex ( E, E" k, i7 S' Q8 T) h5 o" u1 q& L7 ^# d- g# A9 \$ D
I was deeply in love( ?" E3 t0 U4 b) s
Everything from you is positive # V8 }( C1 r9 G0 k4 AYou blame me everything and everyday/ |- G) D" r) d; x7 E
And I think all girls sound like+ V/ |( [8 ^& N5 G9 n
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You could not stand my eating v9 ?6 z( J" I5 Z v* O7 }
Saying no good for making funny sound3 k# I! {0 o6 w8 E) P$ M
I think you are perfectly right+ j& `( o0 o4 Z6 E1 `, L
Eating with sound is a pig5 y) B5 {2 H" p. z1 z% f
5 q* Z; d5 t& W1 Y! JI fell in love with you & W# S8 { z4 `Become a fool to think ) h# G5 _8 j/ X% y! }0 tAll trouble things you did $ E) [0 C6 J% R9 @, V7 V7 uAnd that is the price for love . a" k7 s j p7 w: M8 H7 O$ o * I9 {& k1 B6 f7 Gyou are deeply in love3 S8 J$ M/ C+ M6 ^" q; Y7 d- V
Everything from me is negative5 K. y% ?1 F0 s; R# P' H; S
"My man should be like this,) J( \. {4 v- R
and I am helping you to improve' ; H( B8 ]* l3 I! C3 Q% O 4 t s- [2 b/ j$ A2 hYou are loving me " e% h! {5 `8 w- Ror that one in your mind? 5 \$ W; n! J: q. `/ V VMy mind is like a mud 3 y5 `" ~3 t* l& N/ K* ~can be shaped whatever you want @" T. V8 G" s6 Z J4 \7 |
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unfortunalety not my heart1 V) w9 Y3 A I0 ^6 Q
It is slashed by you % b! `* B+ O- |) C1 v6 U) jand I am seriously hurt, V5 j" T/ w8 `* I% K
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I will never love another " |5 |; |! K( d9 j/ h
If my heart can be fixed
sweeite, 3 @9 u, I6 f$ K5 _6 Z& ~/ z; q
i am sorry to say that ur poem sucks. 4 t& ^7 c o/ F4 b6 HAnd this is something I change. Whatever left r too sucky to be changed( j, K, ]" J$ W; d9 V, _
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with the charm,1 K8 N- `6 R$ O6 ~
with the simles.1 D# Y8 x4 r* I( R
I fell in love with you # w( d4 u: t, k; |' z1 L9 wIn the first sign. 0 R# } _2 R7 r5 X, I1 T' \ P4 gAs spotting sky at a summer - L& g' y+ h& j+ u1 T3 ^
, s# C/ |) ]. I- c/ _& ~Your lip is so soft 9 m4 _! f2 {" ]* G$ [0 K
there is not honey can sweeter than ur kiss / l2 N+ J4 Y1 A3 F. J3 V3 F, |Your body is so sexy $ W/ {( `9 F$ d3 I4 RAnd I cannt image the moment I touch u. 2 h( T7 R5 ?' x* y " L$ u5 u5 K2 F& Z- l+ E* ]I am deeply in love 7 f! M9 h( _- D; T( `3 T0 G; d: N& DEverything from you is so charming1 Z; ~+ `9 |8 w9 Z, A
although You r so picky for me 5 J8 O2 y7 C4 P) KAnd I take them as ur buttefly feelings.
THis is the poem in SNTC S2 and it is not a good one 2.1 P3 H& X' K) q- [# Z
But u can copy the way how she ranges the poem . a+ H, Y/ [1 W( ?$ Y& |5 M% Y2 F$ J2 z' T! T
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His hello is the end of her endings 0 D1 I' t Z0 N+ l1 v/ v+ yHer laugh is their first step down the aisle% t$ i& y- ~' W! h* q0 L! W2 G
His hand would be hers to hold forever3 Q7 e# n+ Z" G8 ^/ B2 z
His forever is simply as her smile ! b/ V4 _! p$ G1 D( ^; j
He said she was what was missing* B" ]1 m2 x- x. M9 `; e! G
She said instantly she knew , w8 {/ P9 E1 k3 R3 m) RShe was a question to be answered. p% @5 M: U' u
And his answer is ; B' O$ c8 ^# \* r' T* @$ O
I do
Rain bow, you are so right. You improved it , and now it is much better. Seems you also like poems. that is good and wish to keep in touch with each other. Merry Xmas % x! U( h0 A' ]- [$ c- _& {3 \2 y y; S& O# {2 i3 J: C; L* C
Below is my new one, any comment?
9 u; W- k7 s0 O/ O5 C% G( XIt's amazing how I felt % a. n0 k7 g7 ~! m4 v
when I was with you2 z' j8 d) f' A
My heart beat so fast - B* N; w, O( Q6 aI looked at you and thought 9 S, O1 }9 q; ~+ @8 F# eHoly Jesus, you were so cute . o$ U+ K' M b! I4 `# l $ ~/ e6 ]2 P5 L+ H9 EYou left me without a word( d' [7 h& c% o1 a
I have nothing except my emptiness / m' L! t# @( T7 r* K+ n8 q, L* }- NMy mood is like a cloud 1 B/ U# V9 O% U9 ?+ RHow could it be dispersed? & ^% b d& N! G5 k5 ]; P # ~7 a! C# v: f% hFeelings bite my heart ; r+ _, x3 \" ZYou are the right one I wait + e9 M6 W6 x" S7 Y H2 V) TIn the depth of my soul s( ]" ~% S3 W& O- W e3 K
I will love you till I'm dead