Falling in love # s# x8 V4 l( g" \/ `3 j; ` \. I# V9 Q& J9 U M/ D( ^I fell in love with you 2 t- i/ r5 c" H1 K- e. Z! L( N8 V
At the first week we met ; N* I1 T! ~0 d' t , d4 U8 D7 s: B0 n [& w6 l# |7 i; yYou have charm, you have looks ) q' ^$ i* c' gwith full of pimples in face, E: U# y; o) ~
As spotting sky at a summer night # o) w" A( \" C3 t. p+ |* KThey are shining stars) n8 B F1 w: D o' |
' `+ `# d B0 Y% e) l( [Your lip is so big $ b0 s. `7 Y J+ J) `5 RAnd that’s good for a kiss+ W% v1 l5 ]- h& U$ ^( }6 L
Your body is chubby% [& W! P- p3 n1 t& h1 F. o
And that is good for sex( e4 i" \, G& R. W' k% }
- {7 R& F* G2 s6 p8 Z2 R2 TI was deeply in love ; M) L6 y# y/ V9 U! \Everything from you is positive 8 G4 f6 w" G/ T6 L0 u7 ^5 q bYou blame me everything and everyday7 Y- A* [9 c1 H9 }
And I think all girls sound like . P5 y. s* @+ v4 d( ~, K" M4 B9 V6 g0 a9 w5 j2 |/ ]
You could not stand my eating* \ D1 Y4 ?, t1 u4 x* S
Saying no good for making funny sound 9 b$ B. X2 m7 z# n( VI think you are perfectly right% [9 L: R7 b+ C4 ^
Eating with sound is a pig! r; C5 Y0 m# ?. m" e# n
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I fell in love with you ; N* c- |, e0 }2 i& S# r; o* g
Become a fool to think : f( R6 }0 { l4 w. fAll trouble things you did 0 o/ [1 W6 D% b* C; d8 ^/ kAnd that is the price for love, S8 g* N+ h G( y# j. V# E* R
; G( Q" c5 E. J- D. O5 D* i% Ryou are deeply in love7 E& A& |+ q6 N7 i5 e
Everything from me is negative ; k& V# d3 B: `* k' \"My man should be like this,. i) |' _& Y2 H: x7 r0 {. G! ^
and I am helping you to improve'$ a* }$ G) G$ n3 d/ S* _" e
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You are loving me & p8 r+ y, W1 K: b* J* \
or that one in your mind? ( l/ Y/ [1 U/ w5 r! X" K Z! N/ cMy mind is like a mud% O5 J3 v2 V1 Y6 k T" X
can be shaped whatever you want( t1 m: J* ?) i- G, J6 t9 @
. G( l! o3 V& T$ punfortunalety not my heart8 S0 o- J: }# e/ k/ {
It is slashed by you 8 Q! q7 u/ z5 O+ H) R; J7 X
and I am seriously hurt, b" J% C2 @" {% M" t
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I will never love another ; k! G& N) O/ v. {
If my heart can be fixed
sweeite, 5 \. S/ X7 G/ b0 F% c- P5 I. {
i am sorry to say that ur poem sucks.# @7 e- `0 j& I# x
And this is something I change. Whatever left r too sucky to be changed " y6 N7 e1 K! h. H) K4 W; v4 @' F" U' Y4 ^* L: R
with the charm, 7 e5 E* W0 J9 ^7 H) h# }with the simles. 2 o G5 ?+ @( p, v6 @# u! ^I fell in love with you 2 _ E ]1 N. J. _/ Z6 j. i
In the first sign. / D$ X+ j: q8 ]2 P7 M2 YAs spotting sky at a summer ) C( \: j$ P2 M# c % G+ g6 v3 c! c. r- m: t) J* WYour lip is so soft 9 E% K9 J1 x$ |1 Y" o
there is not honey can sweeter than ur kiss$ ^4 s* K0 [! z( P; E4 z9 U3 w
Your body is so sexy - w2 {* @2 d1 ZAnd I cannt image the moment I touch u.) r1 ^& b+ @( ~5 p; v0 b
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I am deeply in love$ g4 \2 T& h5 G3 V! h
Everything from you is so charming' X# j% Y" S( T$ S& S6 {
although You r so picky for me 5 \0 |, b2 S' {% F. YAnd I take them as ur buttefly feelings.
THis is the poem in SNTC S2 and it is not a good one 2. 9 s& b$ \9 s. l( }9 I2 C9 iBut u can copy the way how she ranges the poem$ D- I& e* I( B3 P* k+ S$ Y" H
* R) f/ C/ G$ m+ f 8 K( c' w7 N/ P& c) S; n& FHis hello is the end of her endings ) \+ `- |1 r$ u7 F5 R0 a7 |Her laugh is their first step down the aisle 5 y& X+ G" t J% S1 Y7 ^His hand would be hers to hold forever: u9 s( C) \: L# u( m6 L
His forever is simply as her smile 1 g* f$ S3 G; C* T. Q9 j
He said she was what was missing V/ A' M5 ]0 K& o, b
She said instantly she knew + {- B% j* g/ J1 DShe was a question to be answered* [( |- h; m2 \5 \$ _" B( z5 l
And his answer is ( e! d& m! H* G
I do
Rain bow, you are so right. You improved it , and now it is much better. Seems you also like poems. that is good and wish to keep in touch with each other. Merry Xmas ( t8 x8 x+ V3 T' {. b! p) k5 U1 R& a8 W- H# N& x& c# [
Below is my new one, any comment?
It’s amazing how I felt 4 F( v" J \: E/ Z- g3 v9 S1 @ G1 M3 Z5 A7 v8 x4 H
It's amazing how I felt " s: p: a8 J$ L2 [$ m5 W7 g( _when I was with you 3 C& I8 v5 R- Z1 \# C! I" P' _My heart beat so fast 7 A9 m/ {9 U" j ?" dI looked at you and thought$ [! [ e ~/ Q/ U# d
Holy Jesus, you were so cute8 L3 o. _) X r% B# h- k
* n1 z4 L) S" m8 sYou left me without a word4 a! D7 t, G$ i0 R/ ^- t
I have nothing except my emptiness7 U! X( v" b3 x( ]5 {- ]
My mood is like a cloud 6 |& ?4 Y" Z6 j* AHow could it be dispersed? ( G1 q; `! x) | ~* K2 i 1 y' F6 q! x) P, ?Feelings bite my heart 9 {& `, } k( e, w. t
You are the right one I wait6 U, g: H; u/ L! J
In the depth of my soul" H- a4 |& p5 j& @& z
I will love you till I'm dead