Falling in love 6 a0 b% T r6 v1 C- @ L# @% R/ g. K' v H G$ A
I fell in love with you 3 ^$ @9 Y* O" _) G, Q8 _' SAt the first week we met8 n* {+ h8 Z' |: R1 R2 C/ ]
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You have charm, you have looks - u7 P& }1 R5 W9 Y$ q% g# I* }5 x5 _with full of pimples in face 2 H8 `* P( F. yAs spotting sky at a summer night & F# Y6 M: S. X, [) n5 kThey are shining stars 7 S. v& v' S4 m( \6 x) V- u/ s: W4 ]8 I6 I' m1 w" f% [5 m2 S
Your lip is so big ' Z4 S0 S4 J' v ^And that’s good for a kiss% j+ L- W% ]4 j) }8 B- J1 A
Your body is chubby9 `: ~$ y& y! h7 P9 q* u: t
And that is good for sex5 N4 J! h; ~" |. j9 ?- x h0 L, b/ E
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I was deeply in love, k( [2 N' K6 F; V% e) x/ W
Everything from you is positive 4 \ D) n$ e/ T) h9 ^0 G$ EYou blame me everything and everyday ) M" ]7 P$ h1 g5 @And I think all girls sound like# q* e# `- R4 |8 s# P4 z% l
9 ?8 M( E2 G* Y9 X, nYou could not stand my eating) a. P( _2 m: V/ [( }5 E. ^) }
Saying no good for making funny sound # |6 g. r) e+ ~ [5 }7 H, oI think you are perfectly right i. t" P5 I! w DEating with sound is a pig, \. z7 }+ u [: z# s! E
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I fell in love with you 1 A1 |3 l V# aBecome a fool to think/ l6 C* N4 e. m" |7 {/ x2 B
All trouble things you did # w2 d: G/ w* n( a) JAnd that is the price for love $ i0 A3 P }+ f8 b {( R- z( K' H" a! g j- x
you are deeply in love* F! f' w. ?0 T7 g
Everything from me is negative0 ]: I1 L+ j) {7 C
"My man should be like this,6 ^4 w/ B9 R* k p7 Q; v9 ^
and I am helping you to improve'5 Q! P9 x$ t& `+ Z: V* `2 V
* C6 F% c8 y# s4 jYou are loving me + X. K( e9 _# d+ U& l& v" V# E
or that one in your mind?! J% ?+ v V! w; ]
My mind is like a mud * w: h- R- V: I B" Z$ {" A' Acan be shaped whatever you want1 b3 \. ?% Y; p" m
, |7 x" ~5 f& G2 R( T) _unfortunalety not my heart) _: w+ C3 `7 C+ B
It is slashed by you : M# v& S! b7 p6 u7 i
and I am seriously hurt8 u5 W* U- @: L- \" M; S9 ~
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I will never love another : ?% l6 H6 e& e7 UIf my heart can be fixed
sweeite, 4 I" T/ m8 H* ~! \
i am sorry to say that ur poem sucks.- q) Q+ u8 i, t' d
And this is something I change. Whatever left r too sucky to be changed8 ^$ `/ w2 ?. O2 z' z. d- H
: K' }) v( F) }8 z# G* gwith the charm,5 i: p1 L+ _$ G2 ~8 w9 ?7 I n
with the simles.0 L) Q" r: h- R* D
I fell in love with you ; E+ x0 A& k1 [# E6 u
In the first sign. 3 @) ]. [3 T5 T% n: m( jAs spotting sky at a summer ( w5 c) l5 z# Q! O 3 i4 x& Q& f4 @/ P5 \$ XYour lip is so soft ( y+ f! u( I8 _
there is not honey can sweeter than ur kiss/ y" E* I4 A. n/ Z; S
Your body is so sexy 0 K. i; m0 C6 p" P1 x% g# H. EAnd I cannt image the moment I touch u.' s7 }& _0 u! X2 }4 S* ?9 k
" x1 K1 [2 G% U7 R, UI am deeply in love : l: V8 u' h5 ^ E7 b. B* J! lEverything from you is so charming , e# _. }5 G& z1 w& palthough You r so picky for me j/ i4 a- A" s) A5 L5 PAnd I take them as ur buttefly feelings.
THis is the poem in SNTC S2 and it is not a good one 2.0 b8 |) n4 v* P8 P+ `7 m+ u
But u can copy the way how she ranges the poem 3 M, A5 N/ J0 ^ d+ H3 i, Q6 w! W6 ]1 [) B3 l4 j
, Z5 }% v, p7 r! w4 I8 _! N' _His hello is the end of her endings& U* l P8 p) d# N- }
Her laugh is their first step down the aisle s V* k& U0 z6 zHis hand would be hers to hold forever# A. l n4 A8 R9 }3 ^; G
His forever is simply as her smile . f( A" H# j0 O7 PHe said she was what was missing / H2 b& p: v6 Y" oShe said instantly she knew & {; y% K9 Z$ UShe was a question to be answered m/ y0 D! R$ i6 i: f5 m. J
And his answer is : \' x) E2 B7 W8 B- t# II do
Rain bow, you are so right. You improved it , and now it is much better. Seems you also like poems. that is good and wish to keep in touch with each other. Merry Xmas) y6 Y: r* \* c7 i6 @( ^& r& a2 ]
( }. \& q6 ^" V! UBelow is my new one, any comment?
3 n7 ]5 c+ \8 n, I I J% c! ~4 dIt's amazing how I felt 7 L: O: {1 M0 b0 ^" @
when I was with you. c) E3 J8 B; W$ I" s4 E
My heart beat so fast2 r. }* z" K' ~0 _$ S. x; \
I looked at you and thought & R! o6 \* T& Y- i6 P" M& p- v' vHoly Jesus, you were so cute 9 V$ h) {; l& b+ Y) O' Z 7 Z, Y4 e. E7 I; g6 `0 C8 }You left me without a word' d+ n1 X; `3 p p% ?" H$ _* l+ \
I have nothing except my emptiness 8 O0 [/ Y! Y% ^: ~, T+ jMy mood is like a cloud: N; D3 D; i+ h
How could it be dispersed? 6 Z( h- t/ k) b3 [* n* J% X* W6 u8 ^; \
Feelings bite my heart ; S- O& ?+ p, x. m) ~' o/ b$ f
You are the right one I wait- `7 U, \$ m5 f4 o1 h, ?( o* ]
In the depth of my soul. O4 D5 x* [ O
I will love you till I'm dead