Falling in love $ F" M% e/ e. x7 @/ I % ?# ~8 Q8 F7 X5 L' k0 W8 P7 FI fell in love with you 3 a+ t+ h$ `- b4 L/ M$ J6 B
At the first week we met . v+ J8 B4 ^& B! B( W ( a( s% p x/ d2 o/ K7 ?You have charm, you have looks , V6 b/ i8 W# }; ]9 y& awith full of pimples in face" s {, m% P5 y/ I
As spotting sky at a summer night- T" r6 |" D0 W9 b- I; V
They are shining stars 3 H: ~# q6 M. K8 U( k # |6 G" r ~) H+ mYour lip is so big1 B# a* a+ V$ x
And that’s good for a kiss 0 r t2 F7 v" C7 _! E. j' MYour body is chubby ( C2 k5 |- ?8 DAnd that is good for sex: J" \8 u# }5 k9 K& e
7 Q& d9 e& r% n" M0 JI was deeply in love # h) ]$ m2 Z4 f0 L, g+ wEverything from you is positive5 L; T5 a! V0 r P' ~; f& s) t8 Z
You blame me everything and everyday * ^$ P% @1 A" u( L( n+ lAnd I think all girls sound like 4 y4 B) k( b$ K% g' x& |5 ?- } / W. @# P. a- Z% u4 Z" i+ _You could not stand my eating ) H) p) B4 q: L# V }4 P$ w) bSaying no good for making funny sound3 P- g& A: P: G# _% M# b& b- i
I think you are perfectly right - q1 @. G3 F+ O! g/ uEating with sound is a pig + ^0 H5 A/ ~3 v D! Y+ z% G2 P' P" f1 ?. H. }1 K3 d) }* G8 U6 L
I fell in love with you ! ~' }! J5 H5 }/ A5 H$ oBecome a fool to think ' m$ b2 Q1 K$ t( gAll trouble things you did 5 c' L n0 t) l! y I5 B4 dAnd that is the price for love" R% w2 @/ H3 Z' v+ e
* x! U+ q( g8 G) n# C5 iyou are deeply in love / h& ^# l4 T O5 ]- C9 UEverything from me is negative6 T+ J8 a7 g' H! |' E
"My man should be like this,' l, t) P4 o- g6 M2 l8 C
and I am helping you to improve'9 |* d$ m) A: F- _4 n2 o
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You are loving me / K& x! ?% Q/ `- \
or that one in your mind?. I# Q3 M0 A& m( s& r) A# k
My mind is like a mud+ U/ Y8 |9 i% N! g/ }$ E
can be shaped whatever you want3 j" U4 N! O' ~: I6 O4 t
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unfortunalety not my heart" v! X. C* M# A. i! x; ~! K' w7 f
It is slashed by you ; C* O) ^" r1 u( ]0 p6 Oand I am seriously hurt ' k9 L+ ~/ I- U" t% f' A8 X, ^7 d& T# e% I9 ?5 f# Q
I will never love another 0 _- P' ?* u4 m( ~If my heart can be fixed
sweeite, 6 K, l7 K$ T2 K3 q9 c+ c
i am sorry to say that ur poem sucks. D! M% [; A2 R* G
And this is something I change. Whatever left r too sucky to be changed* Z7 r. \' t0 F9 h0 J
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with the charm, 9 A5 o8 Q) C9 fwith the simles.1 C) v6 G/ Q" S% ?% b1 h2 R" t8 d6 }
I fell in love with you 4 h2 j/ O) F6 }0 j! [9 j
In the first sign. 7 @" u- f h' i' E9 t* ~, V+ o& \) qAs spotting sky at a summer " F. F4 ]2 o; v f1 E$ o0 O E ; \" M# ]- I7 VYour lip is so soft ; c: k- G3 W5 M* U3 S. J6 athere is not honey can sweeter than ur kiss 7 B- R, L1 q, ~$ l( nYour body is so sexy/ b2 h. S; M9 w9 c
And I cannt image the moment I touch u. # C. }0 H% z+ n, c* Y1 K2 O; }) f. C+ g6 g; N
I am deeply in love+ E7 s4 g1 s9 H
Everything from you is so charming 5 f3 h1 n5 f1 w$ h: Dalthough You r so picky for me / Z) A# v7 N3 r
And I take them as ur buttefly feelings.
THis is the poem in SNTC S2 and it is not a good one 2.4 y9 M, G# k8 G) j$ T) L
But u can copy the way how she ranges the poem2 l3 o: i0 h' R$ k/ t4 d2 [
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, f) j! T$ x7 U% @2 K6 m2 XHis hello is the end of her endings. n2 Z# A$ h0 m/ d2 L( Z. G
Her laugh is their first step down the aisle" c0 _/ S- X4 _" Q, W4 n/ o5 R
His hand would be hers to hold forever : V2 W$ Z: O" L, p+ HHis forever is simply as her smile * G2 y. \% o# K d, z3 }3 p
He said she was what was missing , R C# v- b! D5 g: i5 [She said instantly she knew + a0 O+ u, v! O" TShe was a question to be answered % e( ^# U5 d" }And his answer is , K& l4 K' O, | S1 ?- n R
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Rain bow, you are so right. You improved it , and now it is much better. Seems you also like poems. that is good and wish to keep in touch with each other. Merry Xmas ) X8 K8 o4 p0 Z: y- w9 v% `$ ? }+ h& P7 `, z
Below is my new one, any comment?
It’s amazing how I felt" [( L+ I9 M2 w, C7 J
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It's amazing how I felt , ~* _+ ]# f3 w
when I was with you/ x- u. D, F3 }1 z" v# t. Z
My heart beat so fast $ a" \. Y. x! k2 Y# w/ DI looked at you and thought # a, n) l$ Z' F9 D- ~" D/ ^Holy Jesus, you were so cute7 C& Q8 j2 Z2 t" ~, l$ p
2 s, A0 k7 j8 I2 K/ j2 W, { AYou left me without a word ) n" P0 {# q$ ^9 r1 Y' pI have nothing except my emptiness2 S4 b- h) Q( e, I# ?
My mood is like a cloud 1 L( d' q. {1 g! r3 j0 Q5 t" u( CHow could it be dispersed? , C; H5 g- ^1 m: Z, D4 L, E 6 p) _+ o) e9 t, o0 ~# z% L0 ZFeelings bite my heart 5 }* a9 a: q: L5 ]- E% UYou are the right one I wait 8 Q2 U0 I w6 i& dIn the depth of my soul * u6 l+ r! c# f, s6 l* |I will love you till I'm dead