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【五周年征文】The layer

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【五周年征文】诗歌一首,根据Stanley Kunitz的诗歌 The layer 改编。7 u9 X5 ^! B8 K' D* E. _6 V4 \
写这个东西就是觉得好玩,现在没法征得Stanley Kunitz他老人家同意了,在此谢谢Stanley Kunitz0 i- \" U) R5 @# i$ a$ d4 I
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    The layers
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' N; ]( z+ J9 k  W  A$ f' i7 iI have walked through many websites,
! A; W% Q' q: C3 @some of them I like,
4 @) Q" a9 r$ }1 J1 tand some of them I do not like.& G; c- R4 g7 j. }( }4 O
Oh, Lao Yang have made a tribe
! C+ I; H5 f7 w6 W/ o" C* Kout of his true affections.5 v4 M* _& G0 J2 N
I go, I go. N! A1 B- G! e& R# ~
exulting somewhat,
4 }1 A& N9 z& G1 Swith my will intact to go
, W1 Q7 K8 h9 Q) v/ Qwherever I need to go,7 V9 m- K" C, ^7 I
and every post on the Edmontonchina Community ( Z3 S+ C; c. `) ?
Precious to me./ ], h& {4 b' h3 c8 W% q3 O
In my darkest night, ; `9 T5 u) D) c' h, Z7 G
when the moon was covered
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a nimbus-clouded Lao Yang’ voice   {3 ^; d" J7 z/ Z4 R3 ~: F
directed me:" A3 Q, O4 i4 n7 N
Live in the layers
1 s8 m7 r' _% V: C+ g+ Enot on the litter.
( }5 a1 Y1 ?3 n+ g1 d9 xThough I lack the art 7 C2 N  T, e# f  }' b
to decipher it,8 B% b  H- S' Y$ I
no doubt the next chaper
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is already written.) u: t# x" t1 U% ?, K! V
I love to live with Edmontonchina Community.

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  o. ^2 @' y4 r( `) Y原文在此:
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$ C: F( \5 }. ^# t8 U1 Y0 UThe Layers4 ^9 W% O8 ?7 y7 V) v' S

/ |" c- t  Y- Q, Y; J" d3 S8 VI have walked through many lives, # N' Z2 w" g( {9 K# I
some of them my own,
6 Y# n' p) b- R! D, s& B& R" Gand I am not who I was, 4 ~3 t: H1 p( q# a' z7 p9 D% C; j9 I
though some principle of being + ]! Q# h, a' @8 U% s$ y2 K
abides, from which I struggle
# o- p; z1 C& ^% O( anot to stray.
! W+ _; H% H6 z5 M' U) SWhen I look behind,
8 [6 S2 m" U& v4 N0 r8 N6 {1 |as I am compelled to look & w  b9 o. F) b3 h: H
before I can gather strength
  N3 O+ ]: V- Kto proceed on my journey, $ z5 v+ M8 j1 n4 j9 h
I see the milestones dwindling % O/ l# `* K  g$ d0 n7 c+ G
toward the horizon
- i- O- [" e' P! _( h9 w% Uand the slow fires trailing
2 |) Y3 N$ {% M: W3 q% Z7 z) gfrom the abandoned camp-sites, / E5 e# ~: q7 H3 {" f' K; E  B
over which scavenger angels
$ Q7 n* ~& n: @7 Swheel on heavy wings.
' ]) z& c9 r7 \2 L- L; U7 ?Oh, I have made myself a tribe ! d$ `) K* l4 F2 f2 n7 M2 q
out of my true affections, 1 X9 s5 j" J; d1 M% t
and my tribe is scattered! / T/ O3 G8 P# u* L% W" N4 J
How shall the heart be reconciled
( V4 n1 S( z& C6 z: l' bto its feast of losses?
1 y+ g' f' r3 a' |4 d( Z6 y& xIn a rising wind
5 C' E" v3 l1 l. \. o6 nthe manic dust of my friends,
3 ?4 N7 {# G* r4 {& y% G7 g( f) q# Bthose who fell along the way,
( K- E) ?: x1 I( W2 cbitterly stings my face.
! H4 L1 O# }4 s1 \4 j) ~6 [Yet I turn, I turn,
8 M5 m8 f; t; A( y0 Wexulting somewhat, 4 X, j0 O. J+ M& _5 ~" V; z
with my will intact to go 7 W- R7 a& }, _, a8 P, D
whereever I need to go, + O: y, Z: w7 c" G2 X# x: Z
and every stone on the road
& T  L' R! ]2 i" w  Iprecious to me. " Z# z* r  {* A: h! F; I: |/ r
In my darkest night,
% [% T( \* A: \& r) N# S6 u* A# f6 ^when the moon was covered / D. c5 m' Z" d+ [
and I roamed through wreckage, - g: i) t+ k/ r2 a
a nimbus-clouded voice 6 z/ D0 [8 \' ]9 \5 M" p
directed me: ! C: O# B9 m& i, `- A- s* M! Y
"Live in the layers, , W' E! u5 `* d' p( O9 U
not on the litter."
' [. z; d% z! p6 j" X9 t( RThough I lack the art
( q9 A3 D" k# O# g0 P6 T% p! A+ Eto decipher it, ! l7 n6 n. r$ e5 }+ Y
no doubt the next chapter 3 m6 y6 q7 l% @* I! O
in my book of transformations # \0 ?- Z+ y# ?; z  r& q
is already written. / E) a, P8 P- A% r- y
I am not done with my changes.8 I7 V4 q6 F* ~0 l
—Stanley Kunitz
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[ 本帖最后由 betterbest 于 2009-3-31 13:31 编辑 ]
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-3-31 18:24 | 显示全部楼层
谢谢版主,能给点花鼓励鼓励吗
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发表于 2009-3-31 18:38 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
你如果用杨氏英语写成,估计老杨就能看懂了,呵呵
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发表于 2009-3-31 19:34 | 显示全部楼层
这篇征文好强.
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发表于 2009-3-31 21:58 | 显示全部楼层
好诗,送花—— 一句也不认识,只知道有老杨,还有他的中文网~~~~~~~
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发表于 2009-4-1 10:14 | 显示全部楼层
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原帖由 小熊之家 于 2009-3-31 19:38 发表
" P+ O4 U: P; A  X2 n9 n. D你如果用杨氏英语写成,估计老杨就能看懂了,呵呵

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1 D9 ^; t- I! r& O2 T9 i* x) {老杨已经精通除了杨氏英语的英语了。
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原帖由 betterbest 于 2009-3-31 19:24 发表 6 q/ s7 I& c, F3 Z! z
谢谢版主,能给点花鼓励鼓励吗

$ C5 S+ C0 n2 a没问题,送花~~~要常来哟~~支持原创~~~
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-4-1 23:34 | 显示全部楼层
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谢谢斑竹,我一直想把它译成中文,但觉得自己的能力翻译不好
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