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【五周年征文】The layer

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发表于 2009-3-31 12:04 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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【五周年征文】诗歌一首,根据Stanley Kunitz的诗歌 The layer 改编。
# A' e- }6 W* `9 ]5 G4 z写这个东西就是觉得好玩,现在没法征得Stanley Kunitz他老人家同意了,在此谢谢Stanley Kunitz  E! R1 u1 S+ X' N- `- N
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    The layers
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I have walked through many websites,
7 T& |- o" P7 e# j1 ^7 Vsome of them I like,, ~2 y1 {' O2 \/ p% ?. u) X' o
and some of them I do not like.% w& a. u8 L3 G" o0 [' C" B* Z) U
Oh, Lao Yang have made a tribe
) K7 N" p, I: J' Tout of his true affections.2 Y7 q) G/ Y! [' P* A
I go, I go
* m* V3 x7 R- V: P0 rexulting somewhat, " v% z' h, @0 O/ {7 U0 \
with my will intact to go
3 F8 h' E! }5 ^- I8 ~3 p* G0 ?wherever I need to go,; z) ?* M+ F+ ^$ S/ a+ x. o- C
and every post on the Edmontonchina Community 5 `/ u7 t/ k  j- i2 Q  X$ o
Precious to me., {  e6 F1 I# b" N* Q3 z
In my darkest night,
* P' z4 v" n( f0 |* xwhen the moon was covered0 \( v2 q7 L" X; j& o% f9 R
and I roamed through websites,
  V+ j& J- Y. s* {; e6 D& na nimbus-clouded Lao Yang’ voice
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* ~* O8 x0 s$ ALive in the layers  _* W4 @# r9 B& `0 V6 A  x
not on the litter.  x! P1 w* j9 e# j
Though I lack the art
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3 d2 V5 r6 e9 C" W4 H; |no doubt the next chaper1 t3 w& S' F6 P! ]) C/ G% O
in my book of transformations
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I love to live with Edmontonchina Community.

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9 r1 J  E+ [+ o" x& h  q( A7 `原文在此:7 T! t# Z0 V* n/ b# o; z. {& i& C
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The Layers
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I have walked through many lives, : `# j" @1 V" s0 i; H6 {# q& l; D
some of them my own,
2 S4 E) b& w8 C! k1 E8 ]8 Q0 t9 U5 [and I am not who I was,
$ u% r1 a4 d3 }though some principle of being
: b7 @: p, i1 z: j0 B7 qabides, from which I struggle . ^6 z+ ^9 h. _
not to stray.
  m4 ]2 M! a9 _5 l7 b& U0 z1 K8 D, ZWhen I look behind,
! P, w: q, r$ l. b4 X- [as I am compelled to look 7 h8 c3 |, a* A; g( Y1 V2 u  o# y
before I can gather strength   w9 Y( l$ Z2 I6 N4 w5 M6 X0 o2 k
to proceed on my journey, 5 P+ G4 O! k% C- ]7 X7 N
I see the milestones dwindling & P! W( \, X3 w) X4 }" a6 x
toward the horizon
! A! Y! v" G# R" f% e, ]' _and the slow fires trailing
1 Q' c$ G& v4 D" i3 H7 Kfrom the abandoned camp-sites,
( r" G" I; w5 K9 Nover which scavenger angels 4 {0 C, B& {2 `* p! G
wheel on heavy wings. / ~5 l+ B, c. c: \; X' q
Oh, I have made myself a tribe $ M$ P: g7 y7 k& G9 ^4 P1 g. Y
out of my true affections,
5 H- e  X1 E) `1 U# d8 y4 b& eand my tribe is scattered! * v1 v3 @) |( n/ C9 X3 j: S
How shall the heart be reconciled $ A! U1 t: u8 O! Y
to its feast of losses? 9 m5 Q; D$ _" w( J1 _9 f' h
In a rising wind
; X9 v" C. _1 ithe manic dust of my friends, - p# Q2 s0 ^* M" w. k8 Q
those who fell along the way, 0 h% |. I6 A$ e, \+ n
bitterly stings my face.
6 K, b! Q7 `) w& tYet I turn, I turn,
" o1 Z9 m! N' i$ L* X% ]! x: v; Hexulting somewhat, 4 W9 A4 H9 ?" y$ l: ?
with my will intact to go : R/ ?* @$ x- o0 b/ G& ~) X! f
whereever I need to go, . p4 P3 g" l5 X
and every stone on the road & N  N( `  k9 Z5 E
precious to me. 4 V* t: x' O) f+ }& g5 k& s
In my darkest night,
1 k0 b9 z0 T2 `' L+ [0 s  P" Iwhen the moon was covered : R  U3 t- j4 ?2 M- C
and I roamed through wreckage,
! {1 A6 m8 [# h: y& Ra nimbus-clouded voice
- t$ O1 W8 v: d& Qdirected me:
/ m5 F3 \+ u% L- b1 ^  Q/ Z1 w"Live in the layers,
6 G& t. X' C& P. X9 |$ G$ i3 [# k- Z  Knot on the litter."
9 [1 C" L: ~* F2 n: q- \: pThough I lack the art # A6 s# M8 T+ _; m& G1 z
to decipher it,
8 h/ O9 ?( X, C( nno doubt the next chapter
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is already written. & y( x9 m& t+ b
I am not done with my changes.
  x& ^7 s" C: L5 S—Stanley Kunitz
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[ 本帖最后由 betterbest 于 2009-3-31 13:31 编辑 ]
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-3-31 18:24 | 显示全部楼层
谢谢版主,能给点花鼓励鼓励吗
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发表于 2009-3-31 18:38 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
你如果用杨氏英语写成,估计老杨就能看懂了,呵呵
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发表于 2009-3-31 19:34 | 显示全部楼层
这篇征文好强.
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发表于 2009-3-31 21:58 | 显示全部楼层
好诗,送花—— 一句也不认识,只知道有老杨,还有他的中文网~~~~~~~
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发表于 2009-4-1 10:14 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
原帖由 小熊之家 于 2009-3-31 19:38 发表
( Z8 k- g3 L: L6 u你如果用杨氏英语写成,估计老杨就能看懂了,呵呵

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7 X) [$ |4 u. a: B0 J6 L老杨已经精通除了杨氏英语的英语了。
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发表于 2009-4-1 10:27 | 显示全部楼层
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原帖由 betterbest 于 2009-3-31 19:24 发表 - }* j$ N7 ~0 |. p4 _) u: s
谢谢版主,能给点花鼓励鼓励吗
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没问题,送花~~~要常来哟~~支持原创~~~
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-4-1 23:34 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
谢谢斑竹,我一直想把它译成中文,但觉得自己的能力翻译不好
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