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【五周年征文】The layer

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【五周年征文】诗歌一首,根据Stanley Kunitz的诗歌 The layer 改编。
) [+ b) I% P% m( g写这个东西就是觉得好玩,现在没法征得Stanley Kunitz他老人家同意了,在此谢谢Stanley Kunitz- W  D; N" C: l9 ]/ Y, [1 Q+ X

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5 n. I" l. D- h! @    The layers  u/ Q# S- j/ G* E+ }# `" ~$ B
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I have walked through many websites,. j0 G! O" h1 G  z4 x  z) B
some of them I like,
7 W4 X; N! W' ?and some of them I do not like." H! J8 K2 V" Z6 S4 b* Z; m- a
Oh, Lao Yang have made a tribe
# V6 d; e& E( L) A, u! iout of his true affections.* |! k( g/ {# s7 A
I go, I go/ K% y/ a  }& c  N7 {/ x' G+ p
exulting somewhat,
- [: i( E, r6 J/ b# M1 [- x: Twith my will intact to go
5 j7 A" Z7 {/ D! g$ f. Hwherever I need to go,
4 k( t% l* [: r  p( Pand every post on the Edmontonchina Community ) |. X" p7 k, ^8 ~' ^4 V- |0 d
Precious to me.) m* j; Y2 ~' V8 [9 T+ D
In my darkest night,
  }" S2 Q3 M* ^' J* l5 L4 Vwhen the moon was covered# _9 O) [% u% F* Q) `- A) o
and I roamed through websites,# A  _6 y, r0 L$ u) [+ Y! G
a nimbus-clouded Lao Yang’ voice
. l* p1 t6 C$ zdirected me:; J9 p. R2 ^; u+ I( R4 R$ C
Live in the layers
3 W1 q% U6 A% P& X/ }not on the litter.! D! l+ G# q+ F! o3 S
Though I lack the art
2 v/ u+ H' k& l6 F6 J. N0 rto decipher it,. V) I. Q8 p, M& g% t' n- z
no doubt the next chaper3 `3 h. Z0 M. y2 u* [- h
in my book of transformations
" c! _, L1 Y/ t6 O: Zis already written.
& |  ]4 D! [, ~. Q! z- mI love to live with Edmontonchina Community.

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$ D3 x, p9 F3 w8 u! W原文在此:$ T/ t4 f$ g$ H5 M' C. w, M
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The Layers% P' A3 w1 g( j0 X1 Y
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I have walked through many lives,
+ w. O, {3 F& ~' ?3 O) H) e, esome of them my own, 1 F- z9 {  [! p5 D5 i7 f* D
and I am not who I was,
1 y1 t, ^+ L. X2 X2 l  P+ Fthough some principle of being
7 z2 Z' _3 t6 H/ h. |abides, from which I struggle 5 y6 G6 S) U/ e  [
not to stray.
6 c# `( R# b6 \) ZWhen I look behind,
7 N( l3 Q! b' yas I am compelled to look
3 `1 R; L) [# ^0 \" F3 \4 Wbefore I can gather strength
5 n1 @3 `2 T' }: m0 P% B( Wto proceed on my journey,
# [, J- q' c3 i  t. {I see the milestones dwindling + I) J$ L5 t. Q6 X0 L4 j5 p7 O0 g
toward the horizon / G5 e& u9 ~, V
and the slow fires trailing
, b1 {% \/ E. H, X9 Xfrom the abandoned camp-sites, ' s9 g+ o9 k- b
over which scavenger angels
  ?+ i1 u' Z8 Y/ f4 _8 mwheel on heavy wings.
5 w4 K# m& K' M6 U1 ?8 DOh, I have made myself a tribe
4 q/ V# d' T; q6 {4 Uout of my true affections, . \8 r/ A2 p$ O9 H' U8 c& C
and my tribe is scattered!
8 t) \/ `8 H# R$ n" ZHow shall the heart be reconciled
. a0 E, d  b# hto its feast of losses? 4 A8 {' e( [  W1 a6 J
In a rising wind
$ z8 f; w* M! `& K( ~3 kthe manic dust of my friends,
( x1 Q+ L, w0 othose who fell along the way, # K. O7 u. f9 n& u5 n* N
bitterly stings my face.
& R( Y7 o) ~- X! rYet I turn, I turn,
" _+ u- l) `$ }& _exulting somewhat, # B3 H( ?* l5 f/ z3 i9 q
with my will intact to go 7 s6 \' j0 A: f( `& _0 X& `, f& N3 R
whereever I need to go, 2 N& c5 K7 w4 B& c, M/ u6 N2 _! M2 Q/ L
and every stone on the road
( X% Y* _; H; w, X  @1 aprecious to me. 7 U1 S! Q' c' }
In my darkest night, 3 m7 C8 }; v( D' I
when the moon was covered
: v" C+ U! q1 l9 [5 p) hand I roamed through wreckage, + n! B/ Y# g) q( R; y/ K
a nimbus-clouded voice + u: L: h$ S' G* E
directed me: + k4 s3 r, s' p; g$ Q
"Live in the layers, 0 C7 Y: D2 H6 i. s, |0 e; z3 J7 k
not on the litter."
* A( d* i  G1 K! s  ?Though I lack the art - p% J/ t9 g+ v" Z2 R
to decipher it, 8 G# J& A7 ]2 u* s4 p& c& X
no doubt the next chapter
; a$ `3 e' G- O3 A" m/ }; J2 Xin my book of transformations
6 U# g0 D- |+ V# |! _3 h- a/ His already written.
# S8 d5 F/ i. B* TI am not done with my changes.! `+ p) `+ w. a, a6 c( f; B% v
—Stanley Kunitz. e" k3 a: k! G' v  }6 D$ k. W" _

9 @; h1 K% G$ ]- ~4 B* Q' \7 Y7 {[ 本帖最后由 betterbest 于 2009-3-31 13:31 编辑 ]
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-3-31 18:24 | 显示全部楼层
谢谢版主,能给点花鼓励鼓励吗
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发表于 2009-3-31 18:38 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
你如果用杨氏英语写成,估计老杨就能看懂了,呵呵
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发表于 2009-3-31 19:34 | 显示全部楼层
这篇征文好强.
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发表于 2009-3-31 21:58 | 显示全部楼层
好诗,送花—— 一句也不认识,只知道有老杨,还有他的中文网~~~~~~~
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发表于 2009-4-1 10:14 | 显示全部楼层
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原帖由 小熊之家 于 2009-3-31 19:38 发表 * q# k  I, r, l9 u- m& Z
你如果用杨氏英语写成,估计老杨就能看懂了,呵呵

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& `7 i% t" Q- `. n% m. i3 @) F3 b老杨已经精通除了杨氏英语的英语了。
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原帖由 betterbest 于 2009-3-31 19:24 发表 / `0 B% A, M/ e% J
谢谢版主,能给点花鼓励鼓励吗
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没问题,送花~~~要常来哟~~支持原创~~~
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-4-1 23:34 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
谢谢斑竹,我一直想把它译成中文,但觉得自己的能力翻译不好
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