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【五周年征文】The layer

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发表于 2009-3-31 12:04 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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【五周年征文】诗歌一首,根据Stanley Kunitz的诗歌 The layer 改编。) ]+ q. `8 s( G5 Z: ~# @
写这个东西就是觉得好玩,现在没法征得Stanley Kunitz他老人家同意了,在此谢谢Stanley Kunitz- J$ C( h( g+ y- o' d5 }2 V
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, n; k2 X  ]- q( X' m$ n% u) U    The layers
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I have walked through many websites,, F8 _) f2 o5 n/ O7 y% ~
some of them I like,) |4 P" J4 _7 |
and some of them I do not like.' M8 a1 x/ G; B' U& A& Q
Oh, Lao Yang have made a tribe5 }: y* Q* V; ~+ N$ g. z
out of his true affections.. Y* U0 c( G# V" r! A2 T8 m
I go, I go" s1 i% t( o! x
exulting somewhat,
) r$ }; Z; C  H7 j& V. ^% R7 p% jwith my will intact to go' M& j8 Z6 M; ?# o  ^6 D8 ^" X
wherever I need to go,8 e/ m9 Y7 S/ T
and every post on the Edmontonchina Community 9 k- ]& e; R$ o- Z; K2 N
Precious to me.% A# _" E& B7 u) b* I9 `
In my darkest night, # Q. V7 v! C5 {, \7 ?" a
when the moon was covered: B2 m5 a# q4 d4 a( y/ J
and I roamed through websites,0 @, f" y% i/ X/ J- f8 M5 j
a nimbus-clouded Lao Yang’ voice
( \; b% R5 q+ y! P9 o; n, K2 fdirected me:
% N) s6 d+ G! x( ?# H, t9 ~Live in the layers
! ^+ Z* {5 Y' R  G. enot on the litter.
* L1 [+ A$ Z/ V+ `& n+ EThough I lack the art 6 K$ m& Q- o8 a- A8 v. m% M8 }; w
to decipher it,, s. \& V  Y" g: `
no doubt the next chaper! M: Q* F7 f; r. A1 M
in my book of transformations
/ r9 s, X4 O. ~; D3 c1 r* Pis already written.
6 R/ |; \. i& L, w; z. w& CI love to live with Edmontonchina Community.

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. r. [5 P3 R; Q+ j  Q3 [4 W1 V原文在此:
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The Layers
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I have walked through many lives, 5 a: o7 I) R3 k9 f
some of them my own,
3 g4 [- {/ i8 F, U$ w/ sand I am not who I was,
6 d1 k0 |! O. u5 E0 S6 r" r1 @6 qthough some principle of being
0 A6 n' f0 `5 f; D, G* M+ |. Wabides, from which I struggle " I% Z3 g1 U3 ~( \6 L2 E, h
not to stray.
, m. \; m5 ^1 |* E9 d/ M2 m+ dWhen I look behind, 9 d% \6 V: R4 c
as I am compelled to look ' O% m) `0 `3 P& S& B" J
before I can gather strength * E5 y# u3 x9 w" }7 \+ N
to proceed on my journey, / k$ `) y1 r& c8 V
I see the milestones dwindling
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. y% I, _5 P7 D3 _6 r+ k) ?# s3 ]! n* X6 tand the slow fires trailing 9 y* I" C# a9 l7 `6 y, X% F
from the abandoned camp-sites, 3 d" ]: p8 V, N- K. x; @5 P
over which scavenger angels 8 Y9 K. S- D3 \  T5 W  b
wheel on heavy wings.
; E) _2 T; v9 r" WOh, I have made myself a tribe
$ Q! y4 P; N/ g$ y; Oout of my true affections,
6 e; N5 E8 s  |) g' }: wand my tribe is scattered!
, k- K1 U1 Q0 |' t& P" HHow shall the heart be reconciled 6 E' ~( p5 o' J0 C) Z2 O" g$ l3 P6 S& e
to its feast of losses? 0 Y6 _; w* L% G
In a rising wind % O- y% `* v* o5 E2 w
the manic dust of my friends,
  o6 b0 p9 x9 @+ l6 e. \, I; m! qthose who fell along the way,
/ n# `* w2 }0 Y" z2 Nbitterly stings my face. + D. e4 m8 z  X7 A  j) `) J
Yet I turn, I turn, 5 ?  k* v4 n, [1 `% ?+ ]# p: G
exulting somewhat, " @1 ~  ]" a7 V7 h
with my will intact to go ' |: h  P+ a, P: D
whereever I need to go, 5 V' t0 d5 ?7 P% d5 q. v
and every stone on the road
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In my darkest night,
, G0 p7 r! Q  Y" Y1 U$ dwhen the moon was covered 1 a& n( b$ _9 a" a9 B, k9 w
and I roamed through wreckage, ' D. x1 m2 ?/ Q  Y5 n
a nimbus-clouded voice 5 v( v- t8 z# Q
directed me: ( \# z5 g: _  n6 h$ A4 k! {# D
"Live in the layers,
% x3 O- ^9 ^# w/ O$ lnot on the litter."
1 s5 R7 i, P# M: @3 [Though I lack the art
% e1 W, G! k1 R" b6 J1 O' R/ Fto decipher it, - l- @  U4 T, x
no doubt the next chapter . e/ i, s9 M% B% a6 N3 y% h
in my book of transformations 9 Y7 j( k7 z1 l9 n  K; @* s3 c
is already written.
9 w  R* H( J. Z# q2 m+ s7 s4 ZI am not done with my changes.  |3 e( u: p# ^! h
—Stanley Kunitz, ?! @5 E4 D' W

! T8 n( Q+ ?$ m# J4 L# t[ 本帖最后由 betterbest 于 2009-3-31 13:31 编辑 ]
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发表于 2009-3-31 16:26 | 显示全部楼层
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-3-31 18:24 | 显示全部楼层
谢谢版主,能给点花鼓励鼓励吗
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发表于 2009-3-31 18:38 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
你如果用杨氏英语写成,估计老杨就能看懂了,呵呵
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发表于 2009-3-31 19:34 | 显示全部楼层
这篇征文好强.
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发表于 2009-3-31 21:58 | 显示全部楼层
好诗,送花—— 一句也不认识,只知道有老杨,还有他的中文网~~~~~~~
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发表于 2009-4-1 10:14 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
原帖由 小熊之家 于 2009-3-31 19:38 发表
8 k9 ^' H, [1 k7 e你如果用杨氏英语写成,估计老杨就能看懂了,呵呵
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老杨已经精通除了杨氏英语的英语了。
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发表于 2009-4-1 20:47 | 显示全部楼层
原帖由 betterbest 于 2009-3-31 19:24 发表 % g) U6 T, I; h. `4 M/ _; r
谢谢版主,能给点花鼓励鼓励吗

- n- b0 X6 n# I. n/ v! {4 T' A没问题,送花~~~要常来哟~~支持原创~~~
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-4-1 23:34 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
谢谢斑竹,我一直想把它译成中文,但觉得自己的能力翻译不好
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