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【五周年征文】The layer

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发表于 2009-3-31 12:04 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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【五周年征文】诗歌一首,根据Stanley Kunitz的诗歌 The layer 改编。9 Q, g# q% r$ c  o% i
写这个东西就是觉得好玩,现在没法征得Stanley Kunitz他老人家同意了,在此谢谢Stanley Kunitz
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    The layers
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& t, s3 N* r, L8 P8 R0 o* q3 Q5 wI have walked through many websites,
. k9 @$ G( w5 E7 I& V$ ^+ @6 ysome of them I like,
8 N% `+ v1 U7 A# s/ Y. G2 {3 c. H/ Sand some of them I do not like.
& h  O" g  y/ _9 W9 BOh, Lao Yang have made a tribe0 p9 ~8 B; n0 s- x3 Z3 C
out of his true affections.# }$ _& Z- I& x" V1 K6 r5 Q
I go, I go
8 p" |6 ~& K, Dexulting somewhat,
' D& V, X/ B% j% ?+ w3 f" awith my will intact to go
, Y" F) g  N2 h2 Jwherever I need to go,4 U2 x, b$ ~& u7 k, o1 `
and every post on the Edmontonchina Community ' z/ e# K/ C0 ~, p
Precious to me.1 h9 I3 O8 ^! j8 K5 s
In my darkest night,
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and I roamed through websites,
8 W3 b2 v- ^* O5 ~! [! |7 {8 `+ pa nimbus-clouded Lao Yang’ voice
6 {0 ?. D& r6 i& t3 b/ E  edirected me:! M4 {0 \2 ^7 V5 |; |
Live in the layers$ _8 ]9 t) w. c8 o9 g
not on the litter.4 I- H5 i% t4 }2 X% g
Though I lack the art
: |8 L" n3 f0 zto decipher it,6 s/ O) p" m  ^( _
no doubt the next chaper
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is already written.; k; K, ?8 T0 p  L1 |" p2 C0 t% N
I love to live with Edmontonchina Community.
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原文在此:3 W# g" I3 l6 G& i; b6 @; l

* D- @4 r& Q3 wThe Layers) O( p5 y9 w/ U" I6 o& J) S
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I have walked through many lives,
( h4 a0 |0 s" W; Tsome of them my own, . w3 t, q; p: ^9 ~; z! D  s' Q
and I am not who I was, 2 @8 i$ z4 B2 G. f" {! \8 c0 Z$ a
though some principle of being
! R9 E$ b5 O$ w7 H  y7 labides, from which I struggle
! Z- n  C* C& P, |, F! Gnot to stray. " D/ k8 g) |8 A3 T
When I look behind,
+ E& {7 j1 [) l8 Kas I am compelled to look # ]7 R7 Q' T, A4 ~6 F8 D2 L
before I can gather strength
2 x6 v. X5 N- S6 D0 F& Q9 Xto proceed on my journey, & A1 J6 |7 o7 n( K& v
I see the milestones dwindling 5 N4 l* e* i2 A$ R4 s) X, d8 `' [
toward the horizon ' {( i2 s& l; ?2 H6 Q7 i- @0 z# I
and the slow fires trailing " p. _4 d. U( a& [
from the abandoned camp-sites, + z& T0 b+ }  O; Y% v
over which scavenger angels 7 ]) C. S$ W+ c
wheel on heavy wings. + @' |, F( J5 o
Oh, I have made myself a tribe
3 X9 S  C! @& S; r  M# d3 J; kout of my true affections, - w6 T) ~' t# T9 o1 o9 {& r
and my tribe is scattered! . Q1 Y0 q0 c% X! o/ Y* Z' B
How shall the heart be reconciled ) u# e6 P) C7 k- f" e( [
to its feast of losses?
$ \1 s2 i4 Y/ @In a rising wind
* }1 o$ @0 k3 cthe manic dust of my friends, 6 l6 o4 X" e0 v6 w/ v
those who fell along the way, 1 s0 k+ R% F3 J5 S/ f+ u
bitterly stings my face.
  E! v' I6 A: p0 u4 l) @Yet I turn, I turn, . c1 |8 i0 [+ T; ]
exulting somewhat, 7 R4 x/ z: R6 ~' O6 t7 k. N
with my will intact to go
3 M+ t+ M& ^3 h9 |! X, X$ Jwhereever I need to go, 9 _5 E1 c: F' L8 B, s5 `" |
and every stone on the road
9 Z  n; _% c2 {9 X! L2 i0 H7 _! b! Dprecious to me. 8 t# q/ d8 F) S6 O
In my darkest night, - F; W9 @  m  y3 m3 _, c* ~9 d' ?
when the moon was covered 5 ~- M* l, S; ]% m
and I roamed through wreckage, ' S% u7 J9 N  W0 i7 P% [
a nimbus-clouded voice
. Q4 I  @% {& S0 G6 a2 Kdirected me:
9 ~6 ]! b# Y) J* A& O' \. R; s"Live in the layers,
% u# X% M. @& f/ ^# ^& D6 ?not on the litter." ) A5 C4 {3 A3 K1 J+ m  n& ?& z
Though I lack the art
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6 z; ]1 x$ K; F- C; B4 G. e2 X: ~no doubt the next chapter
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is already written.
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—Stanley Kunitz
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[ 本帖最后由 betterbest 于 2009-3-31 13:31 编辑 ]
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-3-31 18:24 | 显示全部楼层
谢谢版主,能给点花鼓励鼓励吗
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发表于 2009-3-31 18:38 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
你如果用杨氏英语写成,估计老杨就能看懂了,呵呵
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发表于 2009-3-31 19:34 | 显示全部楼层
这篇征文好强.
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发表于 2009-3-31 21:58 | 显示全部楼层
好诗,送花—— 一句也不认识,只知道有老杨,还有他的中文网~~~~~~~
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发表于 2009-4-1 10:14 | 显示全部楼层
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原帖由 小熊之家 于 2009-3-31 19:38 发表
; t& o% V+ c- r; G你如果用杨氏英语写成,估计老杨就能看懂了,呵呵
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" Y2 K8 k# m! e6 e% c/ Q老杨已经精通除了杨氏英语的英语了。
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发表于 2009-4-1 10:27 | 显示全部楼层
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原帖由 betterbest 于 2009-3-31 19:24 发表
( C0 L2 s" Z+ g" h- W! g谢谢版主,能给点花鼓励鼓励吗

; K, t' D  d# U没问题,送花~~~要常来哟~~支持原创~~~
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-4-1 23:34 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
谢谢斑竹,我一直想把它译成中文,但觉得自己的能力翻译不好
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