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【五周年征文】The layer

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【五周年征文】诗歌一首,根据Stanley Kunitz的诗歌 The layer 改编。- u* O$ K/ Z/ ~7 K" L& M) a; `
写这个东西就是觉得好玩,现在没法征得Stanley Kunitz他老人家同意了,在此谢谢Stanley Kunitz
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/ Z0 ?. a) D! R7 ?5 J    The layers
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; p5 P! d- K! I7 S/ l- j, _; WI have walked through many websites,2 s1 }$ `( ?' ^1 \* W
some of them I like,
9 R; J' b) w; F1 Gand some of them I do not like.$ D( s* [0 Q2 c3 j; t0 d9 l) ]
Oh, Lao Yang have made a tribe' `4 s2 N/ p% U3 C) ?7 S: j* r  E- m
out of his true affections.
  z' c' n( J* O! D0 MI go, I go
+ }+ ~9 o# T' M( q, e- x3 Iexulting somewhat,
( }2 E: c/ P4 h! ~! |; Nwith my will intact to go+ b# A' K" u7 s% d+ n% d% C
wherever I need to go,
! J  P2 D2 n9 T, k2 e7 Fand every post on the Edmontonchina Community ( ?- j5 n' u' `
Precious to me.
* w) {/ T* Q. j& z! \/ r/ ^In my darkest night, 3 N% e" Y3 N" x- m# E
when the moon was covered
; o& D  X$ o+ B9 g+ [1 n1 vand I roamed through websites,# Q& q: X1 ~# m# L4 E# |
a nimbus-clouded Lao Yang’ voice - \1 `' s% L0 j* J) v0 D
directed me:7 J, j* B% u/ `5 {' A" o
Live in the layers
8 z: q* F1 S7 f  b* |, unot on the litter.
4 h/ c- y( \7 r1 n- J( BThough I lack the art
5 s1 ~( x0 f4 g' G7 T5 h: K( m1 dto decipher it,$ V: I4 Y3 H, w" k' H( ^
no doubt the next chaper$ o9 u& ^8 o6 {6 _  k! D# P6 ^% ]
in my book of transformations
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1 e  W3 ^  r- P7 q1 d3 pI love to live with Edmontonchina Community.
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( j" a5 G% d. o% K$ |原文在此:  S+ T$ ^9 A* q/ J) K) K

5 _, Y4 v8 c2 r' [+ {, BThe Layers: X0 c" P5 x0 E, f$ H. f# X( F
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I have walked through many lives, 6 E: ]+ H+ o( [" V5 p* [
some of them my own, 3 z: D6 Y! U. C, W* t# n, g: C" x
and I am not who I was, ; p& g) U- h. i8 i2 p- ]: }
though some principle of being , ^7 ]' h1 c) C0 y/ S6 E
abides, from which I struggle
2 P( ?$ s! @$ l# S1 Knot to stray. 9 t3 ], T$ u8 p# ?3 x! w9 v1 h" ^
When I look behind, : b) N7 m( \$ g4 \3 U' z
as I am compelled to look
* i% W6 D$ B, E$ S; U) E* K. ybefore I can gather strength 8 G: j* |% R# i- ~, j
to proceed on my journey, / J6 ^: x0 P* C7 C: ?
I see the milestones dwindling $ s/ C0 A" ~4 M# e2 Y% k5 L
toward the horizon 1 Q5 R. y) Y# n) s  @
and the slow fires trailing 6 G  l" f) {) e" C
from the abandoned camp-sites,
( n4 [7 b' B- v2 P0 Y9 S/ g' W0 Xover which scavenger angels
1 e& X' p3 M) n  p& ?/ Uwheel on heavy wings.
, N8 @0 ~- ]& |2 h) m" b1 {  H% `Oh, I have made myself a tribe
" r$ K! y: D4 a% Cout of my true affections,
" }& M% ?# W7 t9 r' E; F; j2 Uand my tribe is scattered! 6 f: u- {; q3 B$ h
How shall the heart be reconciled   G& K: {# F) i
to its feast of losses?
, p8 V6 t6 y: w# _5 `In a rising wind 0 Q* v' ]( A( }5 A8 r
the manic dust of my friends, * }: i: n0 n) Z: T4 h5 c
those who fell along the way,
8 E* u) z6 q- R3 x, L8 h! xbitterly stings my face. * L" J  G3 q' L1 z; f6 S
Yet I turn, I turn,
/ ]6 B" t7 f, g' L% I5 r' `! ~exulting somewhat, , }9 _, y( x7 ~, z
with my will intact to go
) \: Z! j) Z. G% E  _( dwhereever I need to go, : D- g7 m% ]: Y* a
and every stone on the road
& V8 g$ `: z% q2 fprecious to me.
, R7 h# _# ~5 F2 c: _In my darkest night, 2 p3 Z4 `& u* P3 y* Q
when the moon was covered
+ `! o0 p4 O# n2 o( N* Q/ Oand I roamed through wreckage,
$ S; U/ o2 ~$ N$ N0 Aa nimbus-clouded voice $ G' O" X. S, D4 {! z
directed me:
7 _4 X: C9 B. J' p% p3 p"Live in the layers,
$ M9 W  x( z% inot on the litter." ' A6 J0 N! @$ T' M0 p& K
Though I lack the art
7 B. H6 ^. T6 ?- ^, }! Nto decipher it, 9 |+ V& |: u; [7 v
no doubt the next chapter
; `) K- F6 g: F0 R; vin my book of transformations & s& f* G1 ^3 Z- S) b* N' Q
is already written.
2 h( K6 U) X/ }% AI am not done with my changes.
5 B( j/ p# e- x3 E1 y2 B—Stanley Kunitz
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' m# X) B$ m3 C) q, f6 f[ 本帖最后由 betterbest 于 2009-3-31 13:31 编辑 ]
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-3-31 18:24 | 显示全部楼层
谢谢版主,能给点花鼓励鼓励吗
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发表于 2009-3-31 18:38 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
你如果用杨氏英语写成,估计老杨就能看懂了,呵呵
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发表于 2009-3-31 19:34 | 显示全部楼层
这篇征文好强.
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发表于 2009-3-31 21:58 | 显示全部楼层
好诗,送花—— 一句也不认识,只知道有老杨,还有他的中文网~~~~~~~
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发表于 2009-4-1 10:14 | 显示全部楼层
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原帖由 小熊之家 于 2009-3-31 19:38 发表
# i7 i# t4 S2 h0 Z0 }" N( d你如果用杨氏英语写成,估计老杨就能看懂了,呵呵
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0 }. b, l8 h- N8 K/ X9 H老杨已经精通除了杨氏英语的英语了。
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发表于 2009-4-1 20:47 | 显示全部楼层
原帖由 betterbest 于 2009-3-31 19:24 发表 8 B) Z" {4 {& K5 W. M
谢谢版主,能给点花鼓励鼓励吗

! L/ N+ ^/ p* y: x% [5 E/ F1 a没问题,送花~~~要常来哟~~支持原创~~~
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-4-1 23:34 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
谢谢斑竹,我一直想把它译成中文,但觉得自己的能力翻译不好
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