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【五周年征文】The layer

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【五周年征文】诗歌一首,根据Stanley Kunitz的诗歌 The layer 改编。
. [2 X( O7 E! h1 u. D写这个东西就是觉得好玩,现在没法征得Stanley Kunitz他老人家同意了,在此谢谢Stanley Kunitz; r, s" h8 y9 S: V: m1 w! U
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1 r+ i" o; P' q! @# T  f( [* ~    The layers& u9 H8 S* x: D4 H9 j
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I have walked through many websites,; [& J: W4 t( v6 N& w6 o- @# d
some of them I like,
, K' U/ f/ \" w( Land some of them I do not like.+ P( I7 V5 _# e% s, X- L" O# h7 T
Oh, Lao Yang have made a tribe
/ E- C. `/ a6 D9 x, u. @out of his true affections.
5 t' g- Z3 V3 |/ J0 I8 DI go, I go
( q& l! n0 I3 ~) Gexulting somewhat, 3 L! R3 h( v( e! \; K1 y
with my will intact to go
; C6 K# S( z' X3 R5 fwherever I need to go,5 j, z$ x1 i! Z9 \% h, @5 c2 d9 a/ L
and every post on the Edmontonchina Community ( v( P+ t1 z( |
Precious to me.
# j' ]" L' f. X& d1 JIn my darkest night, ' g+ N1 ]% Y% K4 e! c2 v
when the moon was covered' n* J3 O: z8 r
and I roamed through websites,& n9 Q0 C, l  m8 `* n3 V
a nimbus-clouded Lao Yang’ voice
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Live in the layers
( L5 t8 b2 a: s1 lnot on the litter.$ `: C. J( v, |8 A2 h, C
Though I lack the art
; _  f( j, ~! a: Pto decipher it,# L$ J* L& d6 E4 m  d6 ?8 L& K
no doubt the next chaper
' k  {8 B& E- ]% H: zin my book of transformations* k: ^6 A4 `& }7 ^. R
is already written.
) N* B" E# z2 \+ _' C+ t& M& YI love to live with Edmontonchina Community.
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原文在此:- \$ U. E& l, A3 Z3 V
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The Layers
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I have walked through many lives,
2 {! Z; L7 Z. m9 ]) D: g* ~some of them my own,
- a) y2 j* u: yand I am not who I was, , f. P* A+ h: ]5 c3 K0 q  E) w
though some principle of being , A1 k# L# ~, v4 t
abides, from which I struggle ) _5 r1 R- S* c' a5 V
not to stray.
+ E. C% h8 o8 C. qWhen I look behind, * h- _7 h( N; J; `1 f5 G* W# C
as I am compelled to look   G% w; S  X& a+ ]6 z( l5 u
before I can gather strength
6 Q& ^! p( u, yto proceed on my journey,
- ]( l$ _- F: g5 f8 x* K* lI see the milestones dwindling   |  P( O1 `/ z" [
toward the horizon 6 R9 h3 u% Y4 k! }6 n" E
and the slow fires trailing
+ R7 N0 h0 |- C( M8 T' m+ Q7 x2 gfrom the abandoned camp-sites,
' e+ Z: ~) T$ f" sover which scavenger angels 6 @( g1 _% g& o2 y. m- A  Y2 \/ ]! n$ g
wheel on heavy wings.
, O6 G2 ~6 ?* @- p1 p5 v3 Q# kOh, I have made myself a tribe
/ n, ?4 E! v. i* Sout of my true affections, 4 e, p- F$ D' G3 r2 S8 J7 k
and my tribe is scattered!
0 t& A  H* f0 k, `  t' c5 jHow shall the heart be reconciled ) a; N( y, z  ^! `' f/ y
to its feast of losses? 1 A) @' U/ n' \* \1 I  h. t
In a rising wind 7 r% l- j& X$ ~$ ~7 E  d
the manic dust of my friends, ! D# O7 p) t0 y0 p: }' h8 K3 O; a
those who fell along the way, " v7 X( R) H& Z) @# L* ]; R# b' i- {
bitterly stings my face.
5 B( ^% Q$ a  dYet I turn, I turn,
% H1 _- ], ^% f: o0 L! o- d3 Oexulting somewhat,   I/ {" B5 s6 |& V, b/ w  z
with my will intact to go
" J" |& B8 G% q+ j3 `/ B  wwhereever I need to go,
, w6 `  c- o; {3 B* U5 u0 V* Cand every stone on the road * T# ]0 b" x+ ]0 z7 C8 N# m' M
precious to me. 2 ^# G% r, Y/ R% E
In my darkest night,
" o- v  n7 K5 R  ?+ `3 |when the moon was covered 5 J  F6 v7 q$ N8 q* W' d( g' R
and I roamed through wreckage,
; @6 w+ Q# j, V( a5 ia nimbus-clouded voice 9 {9 w. ?7 d/ t. k
directed me: 8 s" ~! l( q0 q8 c
"Live in the layers,
" L9 n- L- G$ G; ^not on the litter."
! `1 V( y) G6 V6 ^4 B9 SThough I lack the art 5 |4 @$ H" j- h* |/ o, x
to decipher it,
9 Z& N. @$ w# {+ o/ N$ N% Cno doubt the next chapter
+ v# m, A! z9 R) D/ S7 uin my book of transformations " N. ?8 t' T3 _3 J
is already written.
% t2 L: P- L, ~" |# ~I am not done with my changes.
( t/ K' u. c, ]2 B4 ~$ |" }2 n—Stanley Kunitz/ K9 R) ?( O: [( x3 l- w

3 ~; l& z: y! Y$ S4 c[ 本帖最后由 betterbest 于 2009-3-31 13:31 编辑 ]
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-3-31 18:24 | 显示全部楼层
谢谢版主,能给点花鼓励鼓励吗
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发表于 2009-3-31 18:38 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
你如果用杨氏英语写成,估计老杨就能看懂了,呵呵
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发表于 2009-3-31 19:34 | 显示全部楼层
这篇征文好强.
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发表于 2009-3-31 21:58 | 显示全部楼层
好诗,送花—— 一句也不认识,只知道有老杨,还有他的中文网~~~~~~~
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发表于 2009-4-1 10:14 | 显示全部楼层
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原帖由 小熊之家 于 2009-3-31 19:38 发表 + k% ?' `5 }( `: T* _
你如果用杨氏英语写成,估计老杨就能看懂了,呵呵

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老杨已经精通除了杨氏英语的英语了。
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原帖由 betterbest 于 2009-3-31 19:24 发表 4 p* z# ^1 Y0 Y/ j$ D/ p* ]
谢谢版主,能给点花鼓励鼓励吗

$ \0 U) a  g2 \/ t4 V没问题,送花~~~要常来哟~~支持原创~~~
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-4-1 23:34 | 显示全部楼层
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谢谢斑竹,我一直想把它译成中文,但觉得自己的能力翻译不好
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