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【五周年征文】The layer

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发表于 2009-3-31 12:04 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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【五周年征文】诗歌一首,根据Stanley Kunitz的诗歌 The layer 改编。
8 g: a5 {- {8 `6 h/ d9 q写这个东西就是觉得好玩,现在没法征得Stanley Kunitz他老人家同意了,在此谢谢Stanley Kunitz
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    The layers) l6 q/ k+ a1 E+ v4 |2 |
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I have walked through many websites,
; [: u0 w# i& @. R% z4 csome of them I like,/ M3 T. J) X8 T# _" G3 V
and some of them I do not like.
" Z& H) U" |* ^) J9 t0 POh, Lao Yang have made a tribe( d. X+ |4 b  I' o7 z
out of his true affections.* K8 [" ~+ Q. Q8 u# o3 n
I go, I go
" H3 i: N! a! I2 d! pexulting somewhat,
% n5 q2 ], i6 `# B& R4 l8 E, kwith my will intact to go( y0 g8 Y- ]! @: |7 Y
wherever I need to go,
  m% v6 g/ G( N; n! M. `, E) Jand every post on the Edmontonchina Community 8 t1 y4 Z9 N! q) ?: S1 p. t. Y! B
Precious to me.2 r0 ]7 I, A" z1 W# x
In my darkest night, * q% z6 [+ ~5 J- s: e
when the moon was covered
, f/ l8 Z( p' G  E% A( Qand I roamed through websites,2 m) W5 u0 Z( T( r% I
a nimbus-clouded Lao Yang’ voice
4 {$ b" D$ ~( X1 `6 z" p0 i2 k2 Edirected me:6 R+ T: i8 Y% v- T$ i- L4 z
Live in the layers  M; y4 I* e  x% \  h
not on the litter.! \* i9 g( v1 g% \$ h& U- R; R
Though I lack the art
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6 T7 b$ Q4 B# h; ]. |# P6 t- ono doubt the next chaper
( x" T. _0 N) R3 Pin my book of transformations  H' x& J4 s7 e- R) \
is already written.0 t' m9 [" P9 d# M4 B, ?) M
I love to live with Edmontonchina Community.
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原文在此:
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The Layers1 Q5 R; Q% [3 q/ p8 w' C; r
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I have walked through many lives,
4 ~2 ?& H) J( Z! Dsome of them my own,
+ _: Y) W1 J- [! n  O: o" k* Xand I am not who I was, 1 [8 g5 W% j4 x+ m& Z9 F
though some principle of being ) y$ c- y3 v6 h5 U' T) k
abides, from which I struggle
% A, ~( i$ W4 h7 Tnot to stray.
, j! D4 T5 Y- W1 L# UWhen I look behind,
1 M2 Q6 u0 U0 u6 G* u  A( Z! L4 F" _as I am compelled to look
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to proceed on my journey, 4 O' t3 v9 h7 J0 x
I see the milestones dwindling
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over which scavenger angels
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, B' F( [' y9 |Oh, I have made myself a tribe
# S" {3 t3 i& E) @0 eout of my true affections,
  ]' C: ]$ y, a% G$ h0 |, ~and my tribe is scattered!
- n3 G( ~4 Y9 qHow shall the heart be reconciled 0 ]& `3 v1 z: X3 o3 s7 c2 k; n
to its feast of losses? $ i( y1 g  i+ W2 {/ p. q8 ^6 B4 y
In a rising wind 5 C, z; R. E& U2 ~
the manic dust of my friends, % _6 Z9 |" b6 E, A
those who fell along the way, ! F: \# o! u6 _* s% \
bitterly stings my face.
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exulting somewhat,
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and every stone on the road
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- _0 q) R$ K: l: b( S. t0 E) ^+ dIn my darkest night, , X0 y" |" ~% v) V7 ^
when the moon was covered
& P& s' E4 C! L' S* ^1 xand I roamed through wreckage, ' c1 S/ k! F/ b$ ^( C7 \
a nimbus-clouded voice
4 g! i% u; S( {$ Fdirected me: , O+ B+ T+ X  X) x% a
"Live in the layers, / q; R& ]  j* f  w6 ^
not on the litter."
) s) u. j# [" D/ ~5 v, u( ]2 p! j6 yThough I lack the art : e  V& J- _) X* E
to decipher it, ; u0 p# Y; U3 f, s( f
no doubt the next chapter . f6 o/ L/ U9 Q9 o
in my book of transformations
$ {) ?; D5 W7 \7 `4 |+ y9 R( a! His already written.
4 a. U* k5 `3 s8 s4 FI am not done with my changes.
! X  u1 w" }% \5 @—Stanley Kunitz- x2 X4 y7 s* O5 P
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[ 本帖最后由 betterbest 于 2009-3-31 13:31 编辑 ]
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-3-31 18:24 | 显示全部楼层
谢谢版主,能给点花鼓励鼓励吗
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发表于 2009-3-31 18:38 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
你如果用杨氏英语写成,估计老杨就能看懂了,呵呵
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发表于 2009-3-31 19:34 | 显示全部楼层
这篇征文好强.
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发表于 2009-3-31 21:58 | 显示全部楼层
好诗,送花—— 一句也不认识,只知道有老杨,还有他的中文网~~~~~~~
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发表于 2009-4-1 10:14 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
原帖由 小熊之家 于 2009-3-31 19:38 发表 $ g2 Q2 U  T# t8 e# o
你如果用杨氏英语写成,估计老杨就能看懂了,呵呵

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老杨已经精通除了杨氏英语的英语了。
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发表于 2009-4-1 20:47 | 显示全部楼层
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原帖由 betterbest 于 2009-3-31 19:24 发表 ( b" F! a) b8 `: e; a2 ~
谢谢版主,能给点花鼓励鼓励吗
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没问题,送花~~~要常来哟~~支持原创~~~
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-4-1 23:34 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
谢谢斑竹,我一直想把它译成中文,但觉得自己的能力翻译不好
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