我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
( N& h6 Z8 V" {5 ]4 a是十多年前的作品了——
" r  i; t6 d1 g0 K; T! ~6 V& XSummer's Coming

Faster, hotter and sweater,
, j1 B' [# a( w- ]3 BSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
! B4 f6 c2 b0 X! QFrom the colorful nature
To my life and dream.
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Following the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
# Q4 J. V2 b4 y2 h5 ?$ l8 |7 Q* FWashing my heart and soul.
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' o5 n) @' V7 z$ M# MGood-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
7 P- R5 w+ l+ E2 s: IIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了