我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
1 S1 c( M; z3 s/ p0 G  X) l7 ^Summer's Coming
2 O) y$ x. V/ N! g
Faster, hotter and sweater,
. E# L) `5 Z& Z! ]% iSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
- [, r4 r8 ]% J2 LFrom the colorful nature
To my life and dream.
$ @/ \. `, ?- @; E3 ]
Following the summer's step,
6 R6 w* f3 ]9 o2 A1 H5 tLet myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
& ]- V+ D5 ?+ A3 L3 j+ l6 s% D. SWashing my heart and soul.
% u5 D# B$ G% |$ b/ j) {9 M
Good-bye, my happy spring;
0 v8 n& }6 m8 c! M5 m$ ]Good-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了