我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming
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8 V/ D3 {6 w7 l. {3 d" k/ p1 eFaster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
To my life and dream.

Following the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
- i1 z& s- n1 U, NGo to the wild rain
, I/ z$ G" V5 V% q& ?' g/ j! rWashing my heart and soul.
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" m1 ]5 b2 E5 r) cGood-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
0 a; e& A& J: j7 x9 ZI can prepare nothing;
  J7 b# s4 x' e8 yMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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0 T9 w% R4 Z9 k4 o  ?6 [4 l一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
- K( v9 C/ o: W" X# ]but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了