我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
( c9 E7 T: I2 z. V( CSummer's Coming
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# Y4 f7 \. @1 |9 I+ U9 k6 \Faster, hotter and sweater,
4 W/ `1 m( B/ }6 K( h, G0 Z2 jSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
To my life and dream.
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. [) w% \# n. k& LFollowing the summer's step,
3 b! f; V( ?* I3 a$ a) TLet myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
' i! A4 J! |( ], \* E2 FWashing my heart and soul.

, |3 v& g: \* q0 H! e$ l! J) z* r3 zGood-bye, my happy spring;
8 H: y2 a$ W4 V& u2 K! n6 {Good-bye, my childish dream.
6 Z( \$ J- S$ V5 l; ~* v. {' J4 LI can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

, [" ]4 f% y: u  z+ a6 f一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
. {- ?( D& ?! t4 C9 M3 e& I* H  CIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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2 Z4 ?# K4 W5 R# n[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
5 x( f5 G  Y& W% u( J: sbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
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