儿子写给老妈的'控诉'信

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儿子13,正在学习写作. 恰逢范文是一封信,他挥笔就来,成就了下面的'控诉'状.

好心的读者帮帮忙:
( j: E  S/ F$ L1)多少是他妈该改变的?
3 B( R* R0 ]: c, t/ {- w: s& b+ D9 X2)多少是TEENAGER该收敛的?
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( e/ Q7 L4 t; C8 p" mHi, Mum, aka. Isabel
I have written you this message because:

I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.
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5 |: v; y+ {8 p9 {I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.

1 g0 P4 E* ~& g& d! oYou should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.
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I would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.

' k; m3 E$ ^3 QI wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.

- m1 Z6 V8 C  P( N# O- nYou should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home.

  _7 E1 I& _6 r% C6 H! c8 H; U: yI would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.
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The last thing is that I should do less chores.
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Your sincerely:( I didn't like writing this)
Eric
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老杨

I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.不同意，小孩子的大脑容量是巨大的。
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I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.不作评论。

- x* u7 s- [. c% bYou should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.同意。

I would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.同意。

I wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.每天1~2小时。

7 A( g! S5 k6 ~+ \9 i! m0 O- iYou should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home. 同意。

' q$ r. [1 Q: d( r' j* Z/ c) }  }- g: lI would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.不同意。

* P7 s; ?0 _/ T& T1 P* @3 W: ?  jThe last thing is that I should do less chores.应该多做家务事。
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Your sincerely:( I didn't like writing this) 括号里面的话不好。