儿子写给老妈的'控诉'信

用心去过每一天

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儿子13,正在学习写作. 恰逢范文是一封信,他挥笔就来,成就了下面的'控诉'状.

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1)多少是他妈该改变的?
2)多少是TEENAGER该收敛的?

Hi, Mum, aka. Isabel
- P2 j) k$ o% Y0 x4 uI have written you this message because:

I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.
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I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.
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You should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.

I would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.
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I wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.
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You should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home.
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I would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.

1 i; f# u; q3 o# N% [+ rThe last thing is that I should do less chores.
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1 E) x0 L5 A: x) LYour sincerely:( I didn't like writing this)
Eric
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老杨

I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.不同意，小孩子的大脑容量是巨大的。
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I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.不作评论。
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; D6 V5 N1 g1 f  ]6 i# xYou should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.同意。
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I would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.同意。
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I wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.每天1~2小时。
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You should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home. 同意。
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I would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.不同意。

4 T8 R8 x! H( q5 \: v% I4 |The last thing is that I should do less chores.应该多做家务事。

Your sincerely:( I didn't like writing this) 括号里面的话不好。