天啊，这个版的英文描述能改改吗

SheJing

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
& @6 G" u2 E5 H4 Y  r' j5 _4 dTouching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.

5 W  N' _8 S+ X- ~4 s鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？？what the fuck

竹帘儿

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
0 }% @$ i( d& u1 E3 A6 ^2 a' WTouching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.
: w( V. U, M4 i2 K% u" g5 _
" f1 W( K8 \8 }# I' p% q, i鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？ ...
9 o/ e' s: n$ g9 O; x% T5 }$ eSheJing 发表于 2011-3-26 05:48

+ G) ^, L: o  e0 J哈哈哈哈

珠圆玉润

你指的是我儿子写的那几句话吗。是有很多错误，但我觉的我改了就不真实了。

arbo

We would like to share, not we would like share.
I think it is better to have sth more appropriate.