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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, 5 F- r6 V5 [" i" R
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves    w9 c" M7 v, m
Dreamers- p. J$ i6 E6 d4 T
Savages
1 o6 K& e9 u9 h: r& DPoets, g3 Q: d: I# t
Builders of canoes,
4 b/ p2 I3 S9 t' I  a! QBlack smiths0 B5 g# E7 g: n$ l0 S. |" [
Murderers,
, s2 \, Y3 K+ h6 _9 J, q/ {) PRisk takers,) B4 n4 v( P& v0 S, e9 n, M2 M
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder ' v$ e; e8 x8 x# l" I" N. P
As I think of what could be.
% C5 f- p* t+ WThe world is so big to me ) X5 `/ u/ K* R
I wonder what it means to be; @& v! B  I; q2 Y, _$ c6 e2 u9 u! E
I looked up at the star and smiled
$ s& b& s$ G) v/ S/ c: ^They flashed as they have heard all I have read. 6 Q3 X1 G( D% g

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
4 ~, X1 h" g0 L/ K9 Z) x评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。5 w  z; q) U8 ^  H4 e* N( c3 X
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,5 Q7 t- n1 W, d8 }  F1 Y( q% [
A poor old Guy;
* H8 d5 t& E. F, V, U( I3 WLegs in a bonfire,0 u& Q: I5 F7 V* `5 t2 @9 i, [
Head in the sky
* T1 `) o8 e3 HLonely, with the feel of betray9 f* ^5 [) Z  L/ `1 P
Heart empty and hollow
7 q9 u- k; v# m+ w, tAlone I stand5 |' G# k9 J  |0 J
I am useless to all
5 t6 m- _; u$ n+ tBut I wish I were a dove - w3 P0 N) B3 U# d
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
9 h; h0 W8 \8 W4 e* U  D: k- XI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
- {& K9 ~& _! \6 FI sent prayers to my god
) f9 Q# W+ O. q+ g) T' b* YThough he does not answer7 f$ v2 `9 a/ {# O- V2 G
He bless me with the gift of hope 8 N- R+ v& R8 c- q7 K7 ]
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。( ?, F2 ^" u& [( |6 P. G
加油加油,经常写写!
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