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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, 1 f. I3 n4 Q( j
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  " C; X8 N0 w6 c5 O, d3 [
Dreamers; P4 @4 H! Q: ^* J, h% y; @4 D
Savages. N$ X/ D6 f& E) E
Poets
1 E7 d: t6 t' }) PBuilders of canoes,
) S' @' b+ J1 l  L2 p* y& N0 T' r& ?Black smiths' C: \7 ?4 {4 [: y. D6 Q
Murderers,' Z5 `6 h% P2 ]; \* Y
Risk takers,: o* z2 O6 Z; b9 Z: @
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
7 o2 U/ A  Q9 G: k0 n( [) iAs I think of what could be. ; C3 X6 P* b3 j. x3 v
The world is so big to me
. J, G: ~# e8 @" N: F7 r* [' N, BI wonder what it means to be) N* o+ H1 E9 ]- H0 y1 `8 c% E
I looked up at the star and smiled ( z- y6 l% b0 e% u6 Y
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。4 r: u. {) i/ W" |5 _+ B# K. ?9 T
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
6 h  k5 M0 {  o( w! M1 T' T. s7 e顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,1 T0 [5 N  z4 d9 T; O) X' o4 c
A poor old Guy;7 s. R3 \0 ~, u1 d2 E4 {! N% x
Legs in a bonfire,
( @5 i: ~" C) u. x2 YHead in the sky
; w4 f% A4 r8 ^4 ^Lonely, with the feel of betray
* U3 S$ |" J3 z' a* |* \Heart empty and hollow
( u$ F3 B( F+ M9 l7 V) QAlone I stand
) W5 J! T* O5 B. H# c! m7 NI am useless to all + m/ W" U2 D6 ^  U7 I: n
But I wish I were a dove
0 J3 u! r4 z3 t0 a8 CGiving myself to the world, to the fire( Z) N2 G0 e: _* T; t5 C
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind/ z1 ?+ e. J, i* G0 Z8 z
I sent prayers to my god$ V5 m7 d* B" T8 }
Though he does not answer" x+ P6 `8 z# E+ B  r, z2 @  I/ m2 |+ C! I: @
He bless me with the gift of hope ; T* e0 B; u5 C: |
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
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