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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, ; B1 k- b& b, `2 J
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
+ n, i* D- @3 X3 gDreamers
. g& j4 F* b' {) pSavages
' r7 p  I, N) fPoets
/ J' ?! t/ d  JBuilders of canoes,. z( B, |0 b; E( L6 s1 r, M: t  k
Black smiths( T' ~, B+ L2 d+ E' S0 R
Murderers,
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My mind is full of curiosity and wonder + }) G9 A  Z8 `3 a" Q1 R$ F
As I think of what could be. ' v  J) z! ]/ c9 ^0 ?" X+ O) x
The world is so big to me ; @% Z% H9 f& G1 w9 a
I wonder what it means to be! _+ w, a' U: u( Q# A/ O
I looked up at the star and smiled
3 ^3 C/ r( [' }/ w) e3 xThey flashed as they have heard all I have read.   \' ^+ k5 z. s# d8 ?+ R  J% B* O

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
/ r* w  {2 B/ l: W评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
8 V, f4 C+ e  H7 \顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I," {. N' F; S2 {2 L# M! d
A poor old Guy;
, i  ~/ @5 ?% d. v5 F. b! Z" N( fLegs in a bonfire,
7 j4 m; Y- E. ?" R1 u" RHead in the sky
4 @6 V6 x/ ]8 |: qLonely, with the feel of betray0 S" f! T" D3 ^/ b3 B
Heart empty and hollow( S: S( o- d6 w
Alone I stand
% p% H6 t) z2 P0 l& m2 f8 s$ X  sI am useless to all   |: h9 q3 N! o: r5 A$ F9 y/ H
But I wish I were a dove ! s- g# s+ \9 H. S2 v7 ?4 Y
Giving myself to the world, to the fire, j2 N( w9 f. g( k0 Z6 Z
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
1 s: q3 D; P' w4 I3 Y; K8 a, `I sent prayers to my god
* H7 i9 i8 A- C  `) W+ g0 YThough he does not answer
: x" L; m! `' h9 B, hHe bless me with the gift of hope 9 X) V% q% m1 D$ t# d
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。3 b/ y! S2 m/ ^
加油加油,经常写写!
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