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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
* ~  m2 M; e4 o5 }I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  ! v0 O, U, _8 a+ C+ n5 t; B$ A- v* a4 w5 t
Dreamers
$ `7 }0 M) @+ T4 HSavages
/ h( u+ t, e2 ^! ~; e& O: J/ m' @Poets5 W# Z6 a9 k2 ~, i2 U( g
Builders of canoes,8 K3 a; l3 A9 P' {) Q2 _; m* n
Black smiths# }3 T' t/ v5 K
Murderers,
! _$ f' O; x% l9 pRisk takers,
6 H! L) V" h/ e- xMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder 2 W* {+ T/ D9 A4 W7 O: d( m6 A
As I think of what could be.
1 F( ]& S8 f7 h/ f6 C# q# t5 K" M* f: NThe world is so big to me * x* Y! R+ y' C% k/ n; m3 h
I wonder what it means to be
4 Q) k' V" V6 M( LI looked up at the star and smiled
$ m  s% T3 R; c5 y8 J* QThey flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
* o- F; t5 _! g  y% T" G6 Y评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。8 k% e! G( H. Z/ N
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
8 G% z! z8 y% C$ P0 |A poor old Guy;
) M3 t7 U1 |; q. K+ OLegs in a bonfire,
" f$ N2 ~6 |1 t  E; p, JHead in the sky
4 r3 r" ]  g( `8 O- {Lonely, with the feel of betray
4 X% V" @8 ?8 [; ^Heart empty and hollow
" U$ m4 b" `6 f/ OAlone I stand# x/ t6 L. E: G- {
I am useless to all
/ x0 {( G5 [+ q+ M/ W6 @* n5 j! XBut I wish I were a dove
5 `1 k2 N# [! F3 iGiving myself to the world, to the fire
6 M  E/ |% O+ }; ^  y% T% x) uI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind1 F4 y# @* {: c+ R# d
I sent prayers to my god
$ H" F+ D7 s+ h/ {3 vThough he does not answer
+ [5 N& ?  T# i* t( H8 K& vHe bless me with the gift of hope ' h* ~9 Y. h9 m2 C% B9 o6 i

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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。' P4 G, x! q$ _! F% D* E9 V
加油加油,经常写写!
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