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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, ; D5 M" T, C6 V, t: X! i8 E
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  : z7 S- j! P) ?% c( s7 S( e
Dreamers$ F5 ]- j, v  {6 N+ A& V
Savages
- I& s! S! Z# f: ZPoets( }: Z( ^7 X7 ~& v  W2 l3 e
Builders of canoes,
: Q. C; T! \1 m% x5 t- J1 s, a6 |Black smiths4 i" A/ E# U, t6 J6 y
Murderers,
) l5 [% r+ B; o  }Risk takers,
7 f2 G/ q+ K* Z" YMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder
6 D7 g6 i3 _# r  n2 v# I; _$ iAs I think of what could be.
# `9 z' s( A3 r. l2 xThe world is so big to me ( I  h! l. X6 \, k0 n+ Q
I wonder what it means to be
% _8 m' X( f) KI looked up at the star and smiled ; W  _+ |' s) H+ @+ B. X; q
They flashed as they have heard all I have read. ' g- ^+ t( x) D$ F0 R! Y

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
: O- U4 N  K! b1 b$ Q' i评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
( a: q3 I  J3 z& b9 _" d- o' t/ s4 x顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
& }7 W8 U) ^: \& |A poor old Guy;
! v* s9 b& m- P& s' V5 mLegs in a bonfire,
! X/ E5 X  X2 l1 nHead in the sky3 q% n1 ^3 I' p5 T- o
Lonely, with the feel of betray
/ f/ L' h9 o" N! N# s' ~Heart empty and hollow
, N8 e- A- N4 ?Alone I stand4 A  F; u- i: ~! j2 C- r7 z
I am useless to all
6 F4 m, _7 L+ c% @! p4 mBut I wish I were a dove 7 H6 o7 F' i* Z  c' j
Giving myself to the world, to the fire3 Z2 c% W7 {4 E2 Z5 {: z/ M
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
7 v! m6 |0 x  o9 `I sent prayers to my god
9 Z7 p& l+ [7 i4 z7 k7 t% VThough he does not answer
  }( M, f# i3 W' eHe bless me with the gift of hope , p4 V8 z* B7 y* T  H
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
, P, d" t7 s9 h# n" B" R3 R加油加油,经常写写!
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