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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, % U  {7 {0 o, J7 y& `
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  ) Y# L" B# E$ |: g1 G. Y
Dreamers
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6 I' \# q8 Y7 S  A' f/ YPoets2 W8 f- e2 l) q" W5 b0 i- d# @
Builders of canoes,
4 V- g8 ]. Y& Y+ j" o1 Y2 T/ y  lBlack smiths& i$ Q  Q8 K+ s5 g! n# E
Murderers,6 ^& p" x2 x& d6 V
Risk takers,6 s6 n4 m( W; f+ U0 i$ S7 w4 j( V2 x
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder 6 o/ E! r& q( L3 k% |( l4 b& j* f
As I think of what could be. " `( B1 }0 [# N
The world is so big to me / i# `3 \9 `3 \  i2 v9 [& @
I wonder what it means to be- _( e; {& V7 |: |
I looked up at the star and smiled ; v/ B, p9 K1 m" X8 v
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
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顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,  C+ H$ ^* B5 N/ g( @
A poor old Guy;; l& w( V9 k& `5 @8 r
Legs in a bonfire,0 v" R6 w% W( v* U+ H
Head in the sky
8 Q9 W* |: b( F3 ALonely, with the feel of betray, Z7 Y3 \$ j; L0 ^& k& R- B
Heart empty and hollow
6 R; ~$ K" J9 W$ `% K$ p- X9 bAlone I stand; o$ P' Z! {& r3 l3 y. W( R
I am useless to all
5 N* b( K) b8 O) ?9 E# ^" P4 \But I wish I were a dove 8 u5 ]0 S3 t5 a" g, k
Giving myself to the world, to the fire, e6 _" W/ J2 X
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind0 f1 f; `- ~0 `# O( F
I sent prayers to my god
$ i* Y: d, \: Q3 M, C1 H2 ~Though he does not answer
% h$ U; z" F4 c' a& a) z$ kHe bless me with the gift of hope . C5 b! `" A* W! ]* h
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
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