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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, # Z$ J6 n9 L+ r. F; s
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
$ d/ t. Z5 w4 ADreamers& s  V4 q8 N" O4 M
Savages
1 L+ X2 e4 C. d7 o# xPoets3 |4 C! K" @2 U4 `- b
Builders of canoes,' `+ ~9 ~4 l- {# ]' [
Black smiths
- U- d6 w8 S- q% u4 h+ r+ zMurderers,
) y' X: ?2 F& t$ L; vRisk takers,
* ~% g- L! z- k# I0 w- KMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder
7 \( n: \. n$ r% M. gAs I think of what could be. / x" A* Z+ [5 c. q' Q7 {
The world is so big to me
* W  }. j. P5 X5 s  {- @& ?+ {: H6 ^I wonder what it means to be% V; T6 S1 i$ r3 J0 |
I looked up at the star and smiled
9 D$ a: e8 e% q4 A1 OThey flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
/ J0 Z% u: t' V评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
' z5 z4 z' k% d% J顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
) v, D9 E' T7 L9 I$ NA poor old Guy;
- c9 {" J. I1 P# E9 C0 Y' `Legs in a bonfire,
! W; W% j" T# r/ a' @Head in the sky+ f* |# C& n* ?
Lonely, with the feel of betray
; A2 _9 Y1 E4 o! V! W) r# J$ s9 S: ?* MHeart empty and hollow1 @( Q5 K4 \) Q+ y
Alone I stand+ y3 B% f. O6 V, d8 D! n
I am useless to all
& b& P+ v  L+ G) j! B. u$ vBut I wish I were a dove   F: _4 J% c! w" g, ~( r
Giving myself to the world, to the fire8 b# X7 M5 z; m1 \& o. u( f
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
, o$ q& k& [- J. N4 ^6 ~I sent prayers to my god
- [& `) c% S$ tThough he does not answer
. o' S, I, K( @% z4 y$ T# sHe bless me with the gift of hope 3 l, a: G9 V3 K! |4 [: I6 {

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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
9 t4 Y6 N/ [7 @$ ^$ L) `加油加油,经常写写!
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